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July 19, 2012
A-C Writing & Self-publishing tips
Maria Savva has kindly supplied today’s brilliant post. She has an impressive list of published works, which I’ve added at the end. Now over to Maria:
Firstly, I would like to thank Kimm for inviting me to write a guest blog for this wonderful site. I’ve decided to write a list of tips for self-published writers. This blog post will be the first of many. I will continue with a series on my own blog in the coming months.
I started writing my first novel in 1997, and before that I wrote lots of short stories. Over the years I like to think that I have learnt a few things about writing and self-publishing that might be of some use to those writers who are starting out, or those who just need a few ideas to help navigate their way in the minefield that is modern day writing and publishing/promoting.
I’m going to list my tips in alphabetical order, to make it easier to use as a reference guide. In this first in the series, I will cover A-C. So here we go:
A
Apostrophes.
These little punctuation marks seem determined to appear in as much fiction — or non-fiction — as possible; they are the literary equivalent of people who try to get into the background when they see someone filming a news item for TV. Apostrophes have a tendency to appear in text where they are not needed, and even the most seasoned writers will admit to accidentally putting apostrophes where they don’t belong. It’s as if there is an apostrophe gremlin who is determined on world domination. It’s important to know when and when not to use these little upside-down commas… perhaps they are just drunk commas; they are often there when they shouldn’t be and missing when they should be there. One thing to note here, though, is that I started this section with the intention of making it clearer as to when apostrophes should be used, but discovered during my research that there are many grey areas, and there are many usages that are acceptable to some but not to others (now I hope you are getting an idea about how stressful the editing process can be for writers!)
In the English language apostrophes are used:
1. To indicate possession e.g. Rebecca’s toy (the toy belongs to Rebecca);
2. To replace something missing from the text e.g. didn’t — the apostrophe indicates that the o is missing from not; and,
3. Less commonly, they’re used to avoid a word being read as something else. For example, where you are writing a sentence such as ‘there are two i’s in limit’ to avoid i’s being read as is. Although I will explain later why I don’t necessarily agree with some of this type of usage.
Some common mistakes I have noticed:
I most commonly see apostrophes misused in dates. For example, I’ve seen: “Television programmes in the 1980′s”
That in my opinion, is wrong (although there are some that argue it is correct usage. There are many grey areas in regard to use of apostrophes, as I mentioned above). In my opinion, this should just say: 1980s i.e. plural of 1980. The reason I say this is because there is no chance of someone misreading 1980s as something else, so why use an apostrophe?
You do need the apostrophe if you don’t use the full year and condense it to ’80s. This is because the apostrophe is then being used to indicate that there is some number missing at the start. So, if you were abbreviating the word because to cause, you would put the apostrophe in front: ’cause — to indicate missing letters.
I’ve also seen misuse where people think it indicates the plural of something, like: I took some of my CD’s. Again, in my opinion, that is wrong. It should just be CDs.
There is one usage that can be quite confusing and stumps many new writers: It’s and its.
It’s indicates it is or it has
Its is used for possession, so ‘the cat stretched its paws’ (yes, grammar is confusing).
In general, I think you should remember that where you are indicating the plural of something you don’t need the apostrophe.
I’ve just realised I could probably write a book about the misuse of apostrophes and the arguments as to when they should be used… those little blighters would be happy with that, I’m sure.
Another common mistake is where there is more than one person possessing something. In that case the apostrophe goes at the end… for example parents are two people, so if you’re talking about your parents’ house, the apostrophe goes at the end.
Names that end with S can cause confusion e.g. James. The possessive is sometimes seen as James’s or James’
I would argue that the first usage is correct, because of the way the word is pronounced i.e. you pronounce an extra S, so should use one, however, it is not necessarily considered wrong to miss off the extra S.
I could go on for ever here, but I’ll just mention one more common misuse. They’re and their are often mixed up. They’re means they are (apostrophe is used to replace missing letter); their means something belonging to them… and when I say themI mean more than one person. That’s a whole other grammar lesson that I won’t get into here…
So, my advice is to check your usage of apostrophes carefully. There are many online resources you can use if in doubt. Just Google your query and you’ll find some answers on grammar websites or forums.
So, now I have thoroughly confused you about the use of apostrophes, I will go on to the next letter:
B
BestsellerBound.com is an indie writers’ forum. Suspense author, Darcia Helle, created the site in 2010, but before she launched it, she invited mystery author, Stacy Juba, and myself to join her on the site as resident authors. We launched the forum in the late summer of 2010 and it is a very successful forum where indie writers meet to chat and discuss writing projects. We also undertake group projects such as short story anthologies.
I would advise all writers to join a writers’ forum, even if it’s not BestsellerBound. The great thing about being part of a writers’ group is that you can bounce ideas off each other, you can support each other with promotion, and also you can just have somewhere you can go to rant about things like the unavoidable bad reviews.
Blogs:
I think it’s a good idea for a writer to have a blog. A blog helps your readers get to know you a bit better, but at the same time you are in control of what you post on the blog and so can reveal as much or as little about yourself as you feel comfortable with. On my blog, which is on my Goodreads.com Author Page, I interview other authors and host giveaways of their books; I use it to promote my own books and keep readers up to date with my new projects; I also use it as somewhere I can link to interviews I have done, and just as a general place to let people know about my latest news. You can set up your own blog on WordPress or Blogspot, both seem to be quite popular with authors.
Here are links to some of my favourite author blogs that will give you an idea as to what you can use a blog for:
Quiet Fury Books: http://quietfurybooks.com/blog/
The Tale is The Thing: http://thetaleisthething.blogspot.co.uk/
The Farthest Reaches: www.thefarthestreaches.com/
Of Cats and Magic: http://michaelradcliffe.wordpress.com/
Goodread’s Blog of author Quentin R. Bufogle: http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/...
C
Contests/Competitions/Challenges:
For most of my writing life I have entered short story competitions. I have found this a great way to keep my creativity and inspiration flowing. Many years ago I subscribed to a writers’ magazine and began to enter the monthly competitions. I haven’t entered them for a couple of years, but only because of lack of time. What I liked about entering the monthly competitions was that they were always a challenge. There would be either a theme given, a first line, last line, sometimes a photograph, or even a description of a character, and the challenge was to write a story based around this, and to keep to a certain word limit. I believe that by writing these stories regularly, I really developed my skills as a short story writer and these days I find it quite easy to write a short story without thinking too much or planning too much. I think any kind of writing contest is good for developing your writing skills and becoming a better writer. It’s not important to win the contest, but more important that you get something out of entering. I was short listed for many of the contests and I won one of them. Here’s a link to my winning story, The Game of Life, which is free to read on Freado.com: http://www.freado.com/book/9186/the-g...
As well as entering contests as a challenge, you should also challenge yourself in other ways with your writing. For example, I took part in an unplanned writing experiment on Bestsellerbound a couple of years ago, where I wrote an online novella with another author, Jason McIntyre. We wrote the story online, one chapter at a time. He wrote the first one, I wrote the next, etc., and we wrote the story without planning it or consulting each other about how it would progress. That was a fun challenge, and the interesting thing about it was that it gave me a bit of an insight as to how another writer, with quite a different style of writing, would approach a story. If you ever get the opportunity to write with another writer or group of writers, I think that can teach you quite a lot about your own writing. The novella I wrote with Jason McIntyre, Cutting The Fat, is available on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/Cutting-The-Fat...
Another challenge that other writers recommend is the NaNoWriMo – National Novel Writing Month: http://www.nanowrimo.org/ which takes place each November, when you can challenge yourself to write a novel in a month. I’ve never taken part, but have been told it’s a fun and useful thing to do. Even if you don’t finish a novel in that time, you will have a good start for your next project. It could be used as a way to kick-start your writing if you find yourself in a rut. There is a community feel about the event as many writers take part.
I hope you’ve enjoyed this blog post and if you have, you can follow more of my tips at my Goodreads blog in the coming months: http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/...
Thank you, Maria, for your informative post, lots of things to think about.
Maria’s published works:
Coincidences 2001
A Time to Tell 2006
The Game of Life a short story (Writers’ News magazine) 2008
Pieces of a Rainbow 2009
Love and Loyalty (and Other Tales) 2010
Second Chances 2010
Fusion 2011
Cutting The Fat 2011 (co-author Jason McIntyre)
Flames a short story (The BestsellerBound Short Story Anthology – Volume 1) 2011
The Dream 2011
Isolation a short story (The BestsellerBound Short Story Anthology – Volume 2) 2011
Winter Blues a short story (The BestsellerBound Short Story Anthology – Volume 3) 2011
Coincidences (second edition) 2012
Maria is currently preparing to publish her fifth novel.
She is a resident author at BestsellerBound where readers can meet and chat with indie authors.
Maria also writes book reviews for Bookpleasures.com
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July 17, 2012
Autobiography vs. Memoir
Autobiography vs. Memoir
A few years ago the BBC ran a My Story competition and in the submission information they stated, “What makes a story special is how you tell it”. Implying content may be less important than delivery. And delivery will depend on your audience. That shouldn’t be groundbreaking news; after all you might tell a young child a different version of the same story than you would tell your best friend, partner or granny. The same is true of written stories, even stories from your own life.
Your audience might be:
Personal. You may want to write about your life just for yourself or your nearest and dearest. When my mother-in-law did that, my brother-in-law word processed it and added photographs creating a real treasure for our family.
The short story market. There are competitions and magazines that offer good money for true-life stories. You will have to conform to the rules and guidelines of submission whilst also standing out above the competition.
Readers of full-length books. When I gave up teaching to write full time, my story poured out. In four months I’d written 80,000 words but it took five years of study, editing and re-writing to craft A Life Less Lost into a compelling read. Along the way I learned the difference between autobiography and memoir.
An autobiography is the story of 
a life and a memoir is a story from
a life.
Unless you are famous (and I am not) no one will be particularly interested in reading your life story ~ sad but true. However, if your book focuses on a specific event or experience there may be people interested in what you have to say.
My first drafts were autobiographical. I mistakenly thought people who didn’t know me would have to have everything spelled out in chronological order for it to make sense. Wrong. Readers make sense of what they read through the prism of their own experience.
Now, don’t worry, all that effort wasn’t wasted because I used it as a reference tool. But it bears no resemblance to the final draft.
Once I started writing a memoir, the book had more focus and pace. Several short anecdotes from other periods in my life were woven in to help the reader understand why I reacted or thought the way I did but only when they moved the main story along.
Blurb for A Life Less Lost:
‘You should consider carefully how you wish to spend what time you might have left with James.’
When a mother faces the ultimate threat – the suffering and potential loss of her child – every possible human resource kicks in, including her faith. A Life Less Lost charts the author’s journey through white coats, misdiagnoses, endless appointments and more.
KB Walker connects stories from her American childhood to the traumas that face her very English family to explain the hope that helps her hold her life together.
July 16, 2012
Radio opportunity
Thought I’d share this letter from Peter at ELFM radio, for anyone who fancies contributing or would like to listen:
Just a brief update on what’s happening here with Writing On Air over the next few months.
East Leeds FM
There’s no Side Salad tomorrow night as we’re broadcasting all evening from the Centre Stage finals: http://www.elfm.co.uk/news/centre-stage-final-2012/
So the next ‘words’ broadcast will be The Word Salad, part of the Sunday Joint on August 5th. The theme for this Salad is…
The Gift: a moment given, advice not taken. What is the gift? What do we hope to pass on? What is the best we can receive?
Do send in poems, stories, memories, dialogues to me at this address; deadline: Monday 30th July.
Salads after August will take a different form, though that’s all up for grabs at the moment. If you have your own ideas,
please get in touch. The Word Salad on Sept 2nd will be a programme about lyrics: what’s the perfect lyric?
And the Side Salad on Sept 18th will premiere new scripts from Snowgoose. More on that later.
In the meantime, ‘let the sun show begin’. Now that was a lyric.
Peter. Director of Words East Leeds FM www.elfm.co.uk
47 Ramshead Hill, Leeds LS14 1BT Tel: 07590 028327
Quicky
Here’s a follow-up to two previous posts:
My friend, David, has done it ~ written a novel in a week, 60,078 words to be exact. If you’d like to know some of the surprising things he discovered along the way, pop over to his blog: http://novelinaweek.blogspot.co.uk/
Finally, a reminder that this is the last day to enter the giveaway for a copy of Once Removed. 
I received these brilliant words of praise this morning:
Have just finished your book. Congratulations! I think its a terrific read and a great achievement. You have developed a very individual writing style. I particularly liked your descriptions of the countryside and your ability to maintain the mystery and forward progression. The clues were all there but the final revelation burst on me unawares! Your italicised passages were masterly. Very well done!
Look out tomorrow for a post on autobiography vs memoir.
July 14, 2012
Giveaway reminder
Just a quick reminder that there are three days left to win a copy of Once Removed. 
Just click on this link and follow the instructions: a Rafflecopter giveaway
I’d appreciate any feedback on using Rafflecopter in this way (thank you Cathie and Nancy for your feedback earlier).
July 11, 2012
Giveaway!
Two new 5* reviews for Once Removed
July 9, 2012
Brand new blog
