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April 28, 2013
Motivational Objects
Often just the sight of some object can motivate writers to put butt to chair and fingers to keyboard, even when they feel like doing something else. Do you have such an object?
I do. A couple of decades ago, I put this framed picture of Jules Verne directly above the computer in my den. The text states, “Keep writing, Steve!” – Jules Verne. I’m not sure what prompted me to do that, and the whole thing may seem silly, but there’s just something about it…
After all, musicians have long placed a...
April 21, 2013
Describing Your Characters’ Feelings
How are your characters feeling? It’s important for your readers to know. I’ve written an earlier post about conveying a character’s thoughts, and another one about facial expressions, but it’s time to tackle emotions.
For this blog post I’m going to regard ‘feelings,’ ‘emotions,’ and ‘moods’ as being synonymous, even though neuroscientists draw distinctions between these terms.
Emotions are part of the human experience, and seem to result from how we’re hard-wired, what our individual backgrou...
April 14, 2013
Your Author Platform
Several years ago, the writing world buzzed about the concept of “author platform.” Here I’ll briefly define the term, state the purposes of these platforms, describe mine, and offer thoughts on yours.
There are many sites where you can get a good definition of author platforms, notably here, here, and here. Basically your platform consists of the ways you use to stand out in the crowd, the methods you use to attract a fan base of readers.
An author platform starts with your stories, your books...
April 7, 2013
A File Full of Ideas
If you’re a writer, do you keep an “Ideas File?” You might have a different name for it, but I’m speaking of a single place where you store ideas for future stories.
The philosopher Socrates opposed writing anything down, whether it was a good story idea or not. He had his reasons, but it occurs to me the world would never have heard of Socrates if his student Plato hadn’t written down much of what the great philosopher said. Similarly, you could trust your memory to retain all the story ideas...
March 31, 2013
Leave Yourself Wanting More
You’ve heard the show business adage, “Always leave them wanting more,” meaning an entertainer should exit the stage before the audience gets bored.
By the same principle, novelist and poet Helen Dunmore said you should “finish the day’s writing when you still want to continue.”
Why is that? There seems to be some important facet of human nature at work here. To cite another example of this phenomenon, I used to read to my children when they were quite young, but I tried to observe them as I r...
March 24, 2013
Is Your First Draft Terrible Enough?
That’s not a typo; I’m questioning whether the first draft of your story is horrible, trashy, and amateurish enough to qualify as a first draft. I’m not talking about cacography here, I’m talking about tripe, drivel, bunkum.
Yes, I know all writers are different and for some, their first draft is their publishable, final draft. Isaac Asimov said he didn’t re-write his stories. But I’m guessing that doesn’t work for most writers, especially beginning writers.
For most of you, here’s my advice: s...
March 21, 2013
A Review of “A Steampunk Carol”
How about that? My book, “A Steampunk Carol,” received a favorable review by the nice folks at Coffee Time Romance. Here’s that review, where my book earned 3 coffee cups on their rating scale.
I’ll raise my own coffee cup to Hollie, at Coffee Time Romance. Her review is much appreciated by—
Poseidon’s Scribe
March 17, 2013
A Path Not Taken
Want to be a published author? Curious about the best path to take? In this post, I’m going to suggest you not do what I did, and instead I’ll offer a short cut.
First let me retrace my steps for you. In the mid-1980s, I had a great idea for a story. Way too big for a short story, this had to be a novel. I’d never thought of being a writer, and the notion scared me a bit, but the idea wouldn’t let go. I studied writing—read books about writing, joined a writer’s group, went to writer’s confere...
March 10, 2013
Drunk and in Charge of a Bicycle
Years ago, while reading Zen in the Art of Writing by Ray Bradbury, I was struck by a memorable passage. He’d titled the fourth chapter “Drunk and in Charge of a Bicycle.”
After stating that he’d read how other authors found writing a difficult chore, Mr. Bradbury wrote:
But, you see, my stories have led me through my life. They shout, I follow. They run up and bite me on the leg—I respond by writing down everything that goes on during the bite. When I finish, the idea lets go, and runs off.
Th...
March 3, 2013
Suffering the Slings and Arrows
Think you can take criticism well? How about when people you trust denigrate something you worked very hard on, and are proud of? Aye, there’s the rub, don’t you think?
I’ve often discussed critique groups and how much I value them (here, here, and here), but today I thought I’d help you prepare for receiving criticism at your critique group meeting. Believe me, the first few meetings will be tough when they’re poking holes in your story. At such times, it’s difficult to remember that group me...


