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February 6, 2014
Hollow World Giveaway: Posters, ARCs, and Extended Previews, oh my
The general audience release of Hollow World is fast approaching (April 15, 2014) so it's time for another giveaway ! No purchase is necessary and you don't need to be a member of Goodreads, Facebook, Twitter, or any other site to enter. All you need is an email address. Here is what I'm giving away...
Posters - 5 winners

This incredible depiction of Hollow World was created by the incomparable Marc Simonetti. He's the amazing artist that has created works for:
The French edition copies of my own Riyria RevelationsThe French editions of Patrick Rothfuss's Kingkiller ChroniclesThe Mexican version of George R.R. Martin's Game of ThronesJust to name a few. This 36" x 24" (91 x 61 cm) poster was previously available only to those who contributed to the Hollow World Kickstarter campaign, and it is beautiful and suitable for framing. Five lucky winners will be chosen.

Advanced Reader Copies - 3 winners

Three lucky winners will receive a signed and dedicated advanced reader copy of Hollow World, and the best news is they'll receive it a full month before the official April 15th release date. I'm not sure of the exact size of the print run, but there will only be a few copies of these running around in the world and you could be one of them.
Someting Just For EnteringEveryone who enters will receive an extended preview copy of Hollow World so they can get a head start on reading. This contains the first four chapters (60 pages) of the book and will be sent in multiple electronic formats, including a print friendly version for those who prefer to read from paper.
Bonus Contest for Goodreads Members

So that's all the details...oh except for the link to enter at . Good luck and early congratulations to the winners.
Published on February 06, 2014 12:07
February 5, 2014
Hollow World lending a hand

From time to time I'm asked to contribute some writing to a collective work for a good cause. In the past I've provided...
My short story, Traditions, to an anthology to help victims of Hurricane SandyMy short story, Burning Alexandria, to an anthology (The End-Visions of Apocalypse) to highlight some new writing talent from the sffworld forumMy short story, The Jester, to help Shawn Speakman pay off his medical bills through sales of the Unfettered AnthologyThe other day I was asked by the fine folks at Sci-Fi Saturday night if I could provide something for a bundle they are doing to highlight some of their favorite authors. Since it has a very short duration (just 14 days) I agreed, and so Hollow World is being offered as part of StoryBundle's Sci-fi Saturday night group.
The way this works is pretty simple - you can decide your own contribution ($3 and up) Pay at least $3 and you'll receive DRM free copies of the first four booksPay at least $10 and you'll receive DRM free copies of all seven, including Hollow WorldThe really cool thing is you can decide how much of your contribution goes to:The authorsThe people who run StoryBundleOr to one of two worthy literary-based charitiesSince it is still 2 months until Hollow World comes out, this is a chance to get the book early - and hopefully find some other writes that you'll want to read more from. I'm hoping that adding Hollow World to the bundle will help boost the overall sales.
Speaking of sales, unlike the other projects I spoke of, where 100% of the money went to others, I will be receiving a bit of income from this. (Basically all the authors divvy up the income that is attributed to "the authors" (amount/3 for donations $9.99 or less and amount/7 for those contributing more than $10). I should note, however, that income wasn't my consideration for being included. In fact, I'll actually make much less per copy than un-bundled copies. As I mentioned, the whole point of being in a collective is to hopefully unite some authors and readers who might not otherwise get together.
While I'm happy to lend a hand for this, I don't want to inadvertently hurt Tachyon Publication's sales by having the ebook available for a short window earlier than their print version. So I'm going to make up for it by offering a pretty sweet deal on print.
If you were planning on buying the print book, but picked up the bundle to get Hollow World early, I'll sell you a copy of the print book at a price lower than you'll find anywhere else. Specifically, I'll sell you a copy "at cost." That's 50% off the list price! Since I buy my copies from Tachyon at the same price bookstores do, this means:Tachyon Publications will get their "full cut."Readers will get the print copy at a lower price than anywhere else (as all other venues will want to make SOME profit)Since the book will come from me, it can be signed and dedicated if you wish.I can't tell you the "exact" cost of the print book at this time as I have to wait until I get copies so I can calculate shipping costs...but as there is no profit going to me or a retailer it should be a deal that no one else can beat.
To get the discounted print book, send an email as follows:
To: michael.sullivan.dc@gmail.comSubject: Story Bundle Discounted Print Copy of Hollow WorldBody: Your shipping address - and any instructions regarding signatures - (signed only, dedicated, blank)Attachment :-Copy of your story bundle receipt
Once I have the books with me and know the shipping costs, we'll make payment arrangements, and I'll send them out. I'll be offering Paypal, Amazon Payments, Credit Cards, and echecks.
So there you go. For the next 13 1/2 days Hollow World is available early in a bundle with a bunch of other great books. I hope you take advantage of this amazing offer, and most importantly that you'll discover some new authors to enjoy!
Published on February 05, 2014 09:56
February 1, 2014
Hollow World Available Now Through NetGalley

Things are progressing nicely toward the April 15th release of Hollow World. I'm very excited. As mentioned in my last post, I was in New York the last few days overseeing the audio book recording. While I was there, I got a notice from Tachyon Publications that Hollow World is now available at NetGalley.
What is NetGalley? It's a site that publishers use to provide electronic ARC (Advanced Reading Copies) for soon to be released titles. Speaking of ARC's Tachyon is also producing these, and they are currently at the printer. I'm getting a few cases myself, so if you are a blogger and prefer physical copies, they should be here soon.
How does NetGalley work? Well it's 100% free for book reviewers and bloggers. All you need to do is create an account, then you can look for books that you might want to read and make a request. The publisher makes a determination and if they approve your request the book shows up in your library. From there you can either download it to your kindle, or to your computer to read via an adobe application.
So, if you are a blogger, and are interested in getting an advanced copy of Hollow World here is a link to take you right to the book. I hope some people take advantage of this, and I look forward to hearing your opinions on the book.
Published on February 01, 2014 04:29
January 27, 2014
Off to New York for Hollow World's Audio Recording

Robin and I will be off to New York tomorrow and Wednesday to meet the narrator and sit-in on the recording of Hollow World. I don't want to talk too much about it today because that is a big blog post and I don't have time to write it before setting off. I just wanted to let people know that I'll likely be behind on emails and the like and won't really be getting back into the swing again until late Thursday.
Published on January 27, 2014 13:22
January 26, 2014
I was only kidding...
when I mentioned my intention to dethrone George R.R. Martin from the #1 spot on Audible for bestselling Science Fiction and Fantasy. So, it was a great surprise when I looked this morning and found that it actually happened.

Somebody, it would appear, has a sense of humor. What does it take to reach number one? Well I'm not entirely sure, but this is the sales information I have so far.
950+ downloads on the first day1,750+ downloads for the first three daysI'm so grateful to Audible for joining with me to make The Jester available for free and that the incomparable Tim Gerard Reynolds added his talent for yet another Royce and Hadrian adventure.
For those that like The Jester, and haven't yet listened to The Rose and the Thorn, you can join Tim and I with another free audio in the form of The Viscount and the Witch. It's not yet on Audible but you can hear it from my own site.

Thanks to everyone for your show of support, and if you know someone who you've been telling about Riyria here are a few good free ways to get them to give it a try.
Published on January 26, 2014 04:42
January 25, 2014
Look out G.R..R Martin I'm #2 and gunning for you ;-)
What a surprise to wake up and discover The Jester is the #2 Bestseller for Sci-Fi and fantasy, sandwiched nicely between George R.R. Martin and Brandon Sanderson. Sure mine is free, and the other two require a credit or some cash, but I'm trying to ignore that apples to oranges aspect.

The Jester, as I previously posted, has been released to help promote The Unfettered Anthology which was also recently released and is doing well (current #12 of the bestseller list). In talking to Shawn about the success of two audio versions, he offered me a download code that I could use for a contest. And so I shall!!
If you would like to win a copy of the audio version of Unfettered you can Enter here . I'll also throw in one of my short stories just for entering. (Some of these have been (a) seeds that were later incorporated into my larger works, (b) previously included in an anthology (c) self-published as a stand alone, so please read the descriptions closely so you don't chose a story that you've already read elsewhere).
You can chose from:
The Thieves - A Riyria story in which Royce and Hadrian are set upon by highwaymen (also found in Theft of Swords)
The Viscount - A Riyria short story in which Royce and Hadrian meet the Viscount Albert Winslow (also found in The Rose and the Thorn)
The Jester - A Riyria short story in which Royce and Hadrian escort a candlemaker and pig farmer on a dangerous quest and learn that the choices we make affect our future (Originally published in Unfettered)
Traditions - A traditional fantasy wherein a brave girl dares to define her own future, even if it kills her (Originally published in Triumph Over Tragedy)
Burning Alexandria - A book hoarder ends up with the largest library in existence in this post-apocalyptic homage to Ray Bradbury (originally published in The End-Visions of ApocalypseAutumn Mists - A dying man seeks to remember the magic of childhood (not previously published)
Greener Grass - A man travels to the future and is shocked by the changes he finds there (previously self-published)
God Games - A programmer is a little too good at their job, and the results have far reaching implications (not previously published)
Published on January 25, 2014 05:09
January 22, 2014
Looking for more Riyria Adventures? Check this out.

I've been getting a lot of emails recently about people going through Royce and Hadrian withdraws now that they have devoured both Revelations and Chronicles. If you are one of them, then I just might have the cure.
The Jester, a Royce and Hadrian short story was released yesterday on Auible.com and the good news is it's FREE! Yep, it won't cost you a cent or a credit to listen to Tim Gerard Reynolds weave his magic as he performs this short story.
The piece was originally written for the Unfettered Anthology. For those that may not be aware, this was the anthology that I (and a bunch of other authors) volunteered stories for to help raise money to pay off a huge medical debt that Shawn Speakman amassed while fighting (and beating) cancer. The full anthology includes these works:
Imaginary Friends by Terry BrooksHow Old Holly Came to Be by Patrick RothfussThe Old Scale Game by Tad WilliamsGame of Chance by Carrie VaughnThe Martyr of the Roses by Jacqueline CareyMudboy by Peter V. BrettThe Sound of Broken Absolutes by Peter OrullianThe Coach with Big Teeth by R. A. SalvatoreKeeper of Memory by Todd LockwoodHeaven in a Wild Flower by Blake CharltonDogs by Daniel AbrahamThe Chapel Perilous by Kevin HearneSelect Mode by Mark LawrenceAll the Girls Love Michael Stein by David Anthony DurhamStrange Rain by Jennifer BosworthNocturne by Robert V. S. RedickUnbowed by Eldon ThompsonIn Favour with Their Stars by Naomi NovikRiver of Souls by Robert Jordan & Brandon SandersonThe Jester by Michael J. SullivanThe Duel by Lev GrossmanWalker and the Shade of Allanon by Terry BrooksThe Unfettered Knight by Shawn SpeakmanThe full version of Unfettered is also available on Audible. While it's not for free, the authors who weren't previously compensated will get a portion of it's earnings so buying it is a way of saying thanks to the people who so generously gave of their time in creating the anthology in the first place.

An ebook version of The Jester will be available soon. It was submitted to the various sites and I'm just waiting for them to go live. I'll update you when they are available.
Published on January 22, 2014 08:05
January 19, 2014
Blood of Thieves featured on SFBC.com and special pricing

Hey everyone, Robin here, once more taking over his blog because he's asleep and this is a time sensitive post. We are both in Michigan (our old stomping grounds) to attend Legendary Confusion. Michael was out at "Barcon" with his "Horn Brothers" (don't ask but I'm sure you'll be seeing a bit about it on the Interwebs in the next few days.
Anyway...he recently announced Blood of Thieves was available and so far it's doing really well. (Current #33 top seller on the site). I think part of that comes from it being one of their featured books. I think they did a nice job with it.
In any case, they have a $11.99 sale that ends tonight at midnight. That means you can get 2 great books for essentially $6 a piece in hardcover. (Blood of Thieves contains two full-length novels: The Crown Tower and The Rose and the Thorn. Michael and I will be heading back to Virginia soon, but out of contact for a bit, so if you are emailing him and haven't received a response, that is why.
Published on January 19, 2014 04:55
January 12, 2014
Independent evaluation - get your first five pages critiqued
Well the holidays are over and it's time to get back to work. Well truth be told I was working all through the holidays, but I was dedicating myself as much as possible to writing my current work in progress (which is in the home stretch). But now that others are getting back to their jobs I thought I needed to take a minute out of my writing to make a blog post. So here I am.
Whether you are submitting to an agent, publisher, or self-publishing, the first five pages of your work are essential. They can easily make or break any chance of a sale and I'm not the only one who feels this way. Famed agent Noah Lukeman felt so strongly about this that he wrote a book...called ...you guessed it, The First Five Pages.
If you've not had anyone but yourself (or a loved one) look at your writing, it's almost impossible to know whether it is ready for prime time or still needs more work. I'm really fortunate (in all kinds of ways) but also because I belong to a great writer's group, and I have fabulous beta readers to give me feedback. Others, may not be this fortunate. I also have some strong opinions...and a desire to help out other writers. So as part of my New Year's resolution I figured I would try to give back and one way I can do that is by offering some independent evaluation.
So here's the deal.
I'll review/critique the first five pages for 1 - 10 authors a month. I'm not saying that my opinions mean much in the grand scheme of things, but I have at least had a few books published and have a generally good idea of what publishers are looking for. What you do with the feedback is your own business...use it, throw it away, burn it and me in effigy, but at least I'm impartial and sometimes that is hard to find.
How do you get selected? The fickle finger of fate will decide. In other words, I'm going to use a random number generator. I'll likely not even read the body of the emails, so that won't effect the decision. Plus it saves you the time of writing something to compel me to pick yours, and me the time of reading and feeling bad because I didn't select the person who has six months to live and their bucket list includes getting feedback from me on something they wrote (not that I think anyone has such a thing on their bucket lists - but you get the point). How many will be selected is going to depend on how many come in, how long it takes me to review each one, and how much time I can devote to this.
So what should you send? I'm glad you asked. It would really help out if you follow these instructions (and if you don't I reserve the right to ignore your submission for not coloring within the lines). Here is what I would like:
* Microsoft Word document with 1" margins all around, double spaced, using 12 point Times New Roman font. Feel free to italic and bold as needed, but don't substitute underlines for such - I'd rather see the manuscript as it would appear in a book.
* You can send less than 5 pages but no more than 5 pages. Don't cut off a sentence midway. Also this must be your first pages.
* You can send me your prologue or chapter one, but please don't send me five pages from chapter 3 or your best five pages that are in the middle of your book.
* Email your manuscript to michael.sullivan.dc@gmail.com and in the subject put: FIRST FIVE PAGES (and yes use all caps - I need to find them)
* Don't "follow up" to see if I received it or to find out if you were picked. I'm going to try and keep the admin of this to be a minimum. If I look at it, I will respond. If I don't respond, I probably didn't see it.
* One entry per email address per month. Which means that you can send the same piece (or a different one) each month. But please wait till the start of the month. Don't send me 3 submissions in January and expect me to parse them out to the other months.
* Well that's all I can think of for right now. I might revise this as time goes on - but I think this is good enough to start the ball rolling.
Oh yeah, one last thing. Don't submit if you don't have a thick skin. If your work is great as is, I'll say so, but it will be more helpful to you if I look at it with a critical eye. The intention of this exercise is to learn and grow, not to have your ego stroked...and I'm not very good at "being nice." But if what you are looking for is honest...then I'm your man.
Published on January 12, 2014 05:52
Introducing Blood of Thieves

Don't get too excited. This isn't a new Royce and Hadrian book it is a new hardcover omnibus which contains the two books of the Riyria Chornicles: The Crown Tower and The Rose and the Thorn. It is only offered to members of the Science Fiction Book Club. But just as with the other hard covers, there will be people reselling them on Amazon's Marketplace so expect to see it popping up there soon.
It's really quite the steal as you can get both books as a hardcover for $17.99 + shipping and the trade paperbacks are $16.00 each. I have ordered a few copies myself and will sell a few signed copies via my website once the arrive. I ordered these well before Christmas and my order still says "Processing" so I don't think they are actually shipping yet, but they should be soon and since sfbc.com is featuring it, I'm assuming they expect to be able to fulfill those orders soon.
For those that are curious about the title. Well you can thank Robin for that. We wanted to keep it in line with the other Riyria books hence the three words with "of" in the middle and as Blood Song and Promise of Blood and Blood Dragon are so popular these days it just had to have that in there. Okay so that last part wasn't part of the equation...but it sounded good. It really has to do with the fact that blood of thieves plays a big role in both of these books. In the first one it is their own blood that is spilt and in the second it is the consequences of blood they spill - so it tied in nicely. As to reading order...I suggest the following:
Theft of Swords (contains The Crown Conspiracy & Avempartha)Rise of Empire (contains Nyphron Rising & The Emerald Storm)Heir of Novron (contains Wintertide & Percepliquis)Blood of Thieves (contains The Crown Tower & The Rose and the Thorn
When I have my copies for resell available I'll post here.
Published on January 12, 2014 05:05