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July 9, 2020
Advance reader copies!!!! *_*
so yesterday evening my husband says to me “two boxes just arrived that say ‘Mask of Mirrors’ on the side”
and I zoom downstairs to snap a photo to send to Alyc
and they say “I may need to come over there this evening”
and I say “I may have been thinking of asking you to do that”
(because this is my first time co-authoring a book like this, but I knew without asking that I wouldn’t be allowed to open them without Alyc present)
(don’t worry; we’re in a social bubble together anyway)
and behold, m...
June 30, 2020
Rook and Rose Book 2, Chapter 16
Alyc and I still need to backtrack to fill in the additional chapter for Part Three, but that’s tied in enough with the need to plan out more stuff for Parts Four and Five that we haven’t tried to do that yet. While we work on that planning, though, we went ahead and did Chapter 16, because we knew what was going to happen there.
. . . or so we thought. The first two scenes were fine, but when we started the third one, various things about it weren’t working, and one of them was the placement. W...
June 23, 2020
Rook and Rose Book 2, Chapter . . . 15?
No, you didn’t miss a progress report in there. The last report was on Chapter 13.
What happened was not that Alyc and I skipped over 14 in favor of writing the one after it. Rather, we’re rearranging things. When we mapped out what Part Three of the book was going to look like, we knew a huge pile of stuff was all going to collide at the end of it, and we divvied that stuff up across three chapters, because we estimated we had that much material.
But really, it isn’t the big climactic stuff whe...
June 19, 2020
The Origins of a Scar
Yesterday I finally had the surgery for my hyperparathyroidism, which was diagnosed back in October, but then an ankle injury derailed me for the entire winter (and then, y’know… there was this pandemic thing that cropped up).
One of the nice things about this particular surgery is that you know almost immediately if it was effective. My PTH level pre-surgery was 260 pg/ml (normal range is 15-75). My intraoperative level (right after they took out that problem parathyroid gland) was 29 pg/ml. So...
June 18, 2020
Rook and Rose Book 2, Chapter 13
Lucky number 13!
. . . maybe not so lucky for our characters.
This is the start of an avalanche; it is too late for the pebbles to vote. I recently put together a “relative timeline” for the chapters so far, marking the few scenes that take place on set dates, and then positioning everything else on the basis of “these take place on the same day,” “this is a day or two later,” “this gap can be as long or as short as we need it to be,” and so forth. (This is important because a certain event in B...
June 15, 2020
Rook and Rose Book 2, Chapter 12
Philip Henslowe: Mr. Fennyman, allow me to explain about the theatre business. The natural condition is one of insurmountable obstacles on the road to imminent disaster.
Hugh Fennyman: So what do we do?
Philip Henslowe: Nothing. Strangely enough, it all turns out well.
Hugh Fennyman: How?
Philip Henslowe: I don’t know. It’s a mystery.
I wound up quoting the above at Alyc early last week, at the end of about an hour and a half of us beating our heads against the wall of a certain plot problem f...
June 5, 2020
Rook and Rose Book 2, Chapter 11
. . . what was that about a chapter in two days?
Admittedly, and as I mentioned before, we already had one scene more or less pre-written. More than that, if I count the portion of a later scene that got lifted more or less wholesale from its original version, and the tiny (
We’ll have to slow down before the next bit, though, because we haven’t fully planned it out. Chapter 12 is currently looking like a grab bag of “uhhh, we need some stuff that will do XYZ” without a lot of specifics or shape...
June 4, 2020
Rook and Rose Book 2, Chapter 10
You know what’s a good sign? Writing a chapter in two days. (That’s apparently what happens when it’s literally caper from one end to the other.)
With this, we’ve finished Part 2. In fact, we’ve even technically started Part 3 . . . or rather, we started it back in July of 2017. As some of you know, this book grew out of scenes Alyc and I wrote as side stories for the game they’re running. While the bulk of those are not actually going into the novels as anything more than loose concepts (if tha...
June 2, 2020
4thewords, Fan Art, and Pride!
For nearly two and a half years now, I’ve been using 4thewords, which is a writing gamification site. You queue up monsters and defeat them by writing — or, if you’re me, by copy-pasting the words I’ve written elsewhere — which gives you XP and various item drops, which you then use to complete quests and progress in the storyline.
I think I’ve mentioned this site here before, but I’m bringing it up again for three reasons:
1) I know a lot of people are having trouble writing right now, and if g...
May 30, 2020
Rook and Rose Book 2, Chapter 9
I mentioned in the last progress report that we’d done a fair bit of revision on earlier chapters before completing Chapter 8.
Swap out the number at the end of that sentence, and it’s still true.
There were a few scenes we’d skipped over in our earlier polishing because we didn’t feel like handling them yet, and because they didn’t impinge directly on what we were going to be writing next. This week . . . well, the latter stopped being true, so the former stopped being an excuse.