Liz Young's Blog, page 21
October 30, 2019
SHOPPING - a hundred word story
SHOPPING
Joan managed their pensions with an iron fist but, as she divided bargain mince into plastic boxes, Andrew ventured, “I’d love a steak sometimes.”“I’d love a Caribbean holiday,” Joan snapped, slamming the freezer door. “Now where’s my purse?”“How should I know? I’m not allowed to touch money.” Andrew sipped his coffee and watched her search her handbag and her pockets without success. “Did you open that window?” he asked.“Yes – it’s stuffy in here.”As the net curtains wafted in the breeze, Joan slumped into her chair – stolen! - even mince would be off the menu next week.
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I must admit that Joan has an element of me in her makeup, as I too buy food when it's on offer and freeze it in batches. So far - touch wood - I have not had my purse stolen!
This week has been a busy one so far, with various appointments already and more to come. As I have picked up a cold - I blame my granddaughter - I shall be driving to those under the influence of medication! The sore throat did not stop me from carving a pumpkin to display on my doorstep tomorrow. That's a home-grown Scotch bonnet chilli beside it :) Happy Hallowe'en!
The photo that prompted this week's rash of stories in Friday Fictioneers was taken by Fatima Deria and posted by Rochelle on https://rochellewisoff.com/
Published on October 30, 2019 14:27
October 23, 2019
FIFTY-ODD YEARS AGO - 100 words prompted by a photograph
FIFTY-ODD YEARS AGO Back then The Pill was only available to married women, and I wasn’t married, so my first visit to the ante-natal clinic was fraught with embarrassment. When the nurse said I would miscarry unless I had hormone injections, and suggested it might solve my problem, I was reduced to tears. My boyfriend and I wanted this baby, I told her.I was injected so often my backside resembled a pincushion, and despite the stress our baby flourished.We had four children in all, with injections each time, and they are worth every blunt needle.
.....................................................................................................................Fact this week instead of fiction - once I spotted that pincushion I couldn't think of a different story. Those children have given me five grandchildren now, and I consider myself very fortunate to have all of them.Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers and to Jean L Hays for the photograph.
Published on October 23, 2019 09:59
October 17, 2019
THE BIG MATCH - a 100 word story
THE BIG MATCH
“Tell me again how we got into this?” Michael said.“You know the Boss can never resist a challenge.”“But for Heaven’s sake – seven-a-side football?”“We’ll beat them,” Gabe said confidently and led his team onto the field.With such high stakes it was a hard-fought game but, despite the other team’s dirty tricks, Peter refereed impartially, and the scores were even until the final minute.Then Uriel fired a shot that flew into the corner of the opposition’s net, the whistle blew, and the crowd went wild, throwing their haloes in the air – righteousness had triumphed again.........................................................................................................Just a bit of fun this week - light relief from the final chapter of a rewrite of Rock Fall, Book 3 in my
Living Rock
series. Now would be a good time to read the first two books, A Volcanic Race and Wolf Pack, both of which are available on Amazon.
Thands to Rochelle for the above photo and for hosting Friday Fictioneers. You can read what other writers have been inspired to write by following the Blue Frog trail from her blog at https://rochellewisoff.com/
Published on October 17, 2019 04:03
October 10, 2019
RELATIVES - a hundred word story
RELATIVES
All the other kids in our neighbourhood had hordes of relatives. Christmas, weddings, christenings and even funerals were raucous affairs that often spilled into the street, sometimes ending in fisticuffs.
Once I asked Mum where our family was, but she yelled, “We have no-one but ourselves,” and then hugged me. She sounded so sad that I never asked again.
After her funeral I drank a large whiskey before I tackled her bedroom. One drawer was crammed with photographs – her parents, perhaps, uncles, aunties and cousins. My family.
I searched every face but not one was brown like me................................................................................................Families are strange creatures - a tower of strength for some, a pain in the butt for others. Some people, like me, have such a ream of cousins that they can't keep track, others can count their family members on one hand. And there are always secrets, some small, some so enormous that they remain hidden - until after the funeral.Thanks to Ted Strutz for this week's Friday Fictioneers photo prompt, and to Rochelle for hosting this bunch of diverse writers on her blog. https://rochellewisoff.com/
Published on October 10, 2019 02:15
October 3, 2019
TWO GIRLS TALKING - a story in exactly 100 words
This story has been simmering since yesterday but that was also my husband's birthday, so cake-making had to take precedence. It does seem that if I don't get my story out on Wednesday I don't receive nearly so many comments, but that's life, I guess.
Thanks to Dale for the photo and to Rochelle for running the entire Friday Fictioneers shebang on her blog https://rochellewisoff.com/
ps. I do hope this actually IS a baseball pitch - not being American or Canadian I can only surmise!
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TWO GIRLS TALKING
‘How’s the big romance going?’‘All he thinks about is baseball. Our dates consist of holding hands on a hard wooden bench – I’ve had so many splinters my behind looks like a pincushion.’‘So tell him you want to be taken out for a romantic meal.’‘Didn’t you see the photo? It was all over Facebook – I nearly died of embarrassment – a table smack bang in the middle of the pitch.’‘At least he’d made the effort to carry it out there – and getting the pizza delivered can’t have been easy.’‘Huh! There wasn’t even a candle on the table!’
Thanks to Dale for the photo and to Rochelle for running the entire Friday Fictioneers shebang on her blog https://rochellewisoff.com/
ps. I do hope this actually IS a baseball pitch - not being American or Canadian I can only surmise!
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TWO GIRLS TALKING
‘How’s the big romance going?’‘All he thinks about is baseball. Our dates consist of holding hands on a hard wooden bench – I’ve had so many splinters my behind looks like a pincushion.’‘So tell him you want to be taken out for a romantic meal.’‘Didn’t you see the photo? It was all over Facebook – I nearly died of embarrassment – a table smack bang in the middle of the pitch.’‘At least he’d made the effort to carry it out there – and getting the pizza delivered can’t have been easy.’‘Huh! There wasn’t even a candle on the table!’
Published on October 03, 2019 07:30
September 26, 2019
KEEPING UP APPEARANCES - a 100 word story
It's Thursday, so I'm only a day late on parade this week. My excuses are manifold - I am heavily involved in our local Arts Festival, we had a leaking pipe that almost brought down the kitchen ceiling, and the tail end of a hurricane has battered my garden. It's only a very small plot, so tidying up didn't take too long, but the sunflowers are definitely looking ragged in the petal area.Which leads me nicely into telling you about a bit of verse I wrote a long time ago, about a different garden, and linked this week to Twitter, where one of the vss365 prompt words was 'garden'. You are cordially invited to pop over to my 'VERSES' page and read it.
And finally, welcome to Carole Anne Carr, my 103rd 'follower' - thank you, Carole, for taking the trouble to read my stuff!
Meanwhile, here's this week's story, prompted by a photo on Rochelle's blog, https://rochellewisoff.com/
Photo taken by Na'ama Yehuda.
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KEEPING UP APPEARANCES
‘Take your umbrella, Sanji.’‘But Mother – it’s so old-fashioned.”‘A hundred other boys wanted that Government job but you won – carrying an umbrella is expected.’
So Sanji took the despised umbrella, with its curved handle worn smooth by his father and grandfather, and hung it beside his coat.When the flash flood hit town unexpectedly, the umbrella’s metal tip broke through the office ceiling, the handle hooked a rafter, enabling Sanji and his colleagues to climb to the roof, and its black silken circle sheltered them until rescue arrived.
Eventually Sanji passed the treasured umbrella down to his son.
.......................................................................................Do please leave a comment before you go - on this story and on my bit of verse!
Published on September 26, 2019 06:55
September 19, 2019
SKYLIGHT - a story in 100 words
SKYLIGHT Every day Martha slaved in the kitchen, the outside world only blue sky, scudding clouds, or rain clattering like pebbles. In winter, snow masked the light, reducing her prison to Stygian gloom.Her mother said she was lucky to be warm and fed, but Martha relished the weekly walk home, the crisp cold a blessed relief from the blast furnace of the kitchen range.But home was four miles away, and when she twisted her ankle on an icy puddle she was alone. They found her the next morning, her hands frozen around a hambone she had stolen for her mother......................................................................................................................
This week's story is another hurried one. I am heavily involved in our local village Arts Festival, and have to dash off in a minute to lock the church so nobody can walk off with one of the lovely paitings on display. Also my elderly mother has had a few falls in the past week and sitting for hours in A&E waiting for various tests is not conducuve to writing.
Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers and to J Hardy Carroll for the atmospheric photograph that is this week's prompt. You will find other stories by following the Blue Frog from Rochelle's blog https://rochellewisoff.com/
Published on September 19, 2019 07:26
September 12, 2019
BLUR - a story in one hundred words
BLUR Cataracts.Operation.No guarantees.The words drop like stones. She stumbles home in a blur of eye drops and fear.
The day arrives. More drops so no reading for distraction – nothing to do but wait and worry. Bright lights, a blur of movement, the nurse’s hand a lifeline squeezed bloodless.
She goes home wearing a pirate patch and a relieved smile. Gazes at her unfamiliar reflection, restyles her hair, and walks in the rain without the blur of raindrops on glasses.
Now she’s a veteran. Cataract operation? Nothing to it – a doddle – you’ll be fine!................................................................................................................'She' is of course me - I had both cataracts done last year and, after a lifetime of -9.5 myopia, I now only need glasses for reading. I could have written another story about having to dot several pairs around the house because I am unused to having to put glasses on for reading! I was AWOL last week due to various family matters, but I missed you all so here I am again. Thanks to CE Ayr for the photograph and to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers on her blog, from where you can follow the blue frog link to read other stories. https://rochellewisoff.com/
Published on September 12, 2019 02:24
August 29, 2019
MICHAEL'S GRANDSON
MICHAEL’S GRANDSON Michael was a familiar figure around town, racing along pavements at 8mph on his mobility scooter, stopping in the pub for a pint or two. So when he broke down outside Boots there were many willing hands to push him home.“This machine weighs a ton,” one friend said, “Forget to charge it up?”“My grandson’s fault,” Michael said, “Plugged his extension lead into my socket without asking – they’d cut his power off for growing pot in his loft.”“You should make him pay for the electric.”“Nah – I owe him for a month’s supply as it is.”
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A combination of photos prompted my story this week - one from Rochelle's blog and one which I took on Monday while shopping for a lawn edging tool with Mum.Thanks to Linda Kreger for the first one and to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers - Follow the Frog from her blog to read other stories and/or to join in! https://rochellewisoff.com/
Published on August 29, 2019 07:02
August 22, 2019
SHARK - a story in less than 100 words
SHARK “That shark’s head gives me the shivers,” Kirsten said, “Let’s go somewhere else.”“We only want a quick snack,” Rick said, “You can sit with your back to it.”He was lifting a toasted sandwich to his mouth when his hand froze and he turned a sickly shade of grey.“What’s wrong?” Kirsten asked, but he could only point. She turned round to see the glass wall bulging, and powering towards them at full speed was an enormous shark.There was no time even to scream.
Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers each week on her blog https://rochellewisoff.com/ and to Dale Rogerson for the photo that prompted this week's stream of consciousness! I am late on parade this week because last night I had the privilege of my granddaughter staying for a sleepover. She is four and a half - need I say more? <3
Published on August 22, 2019 06:52


