H.M. Holten's Blog, page 19
June 1, 2019
Prima Donnas
Moaning
like cats and crying like babes
High-strung
coloraturas and heart-wrenching bel canto,
Taut
necks and folded wings,
The
singers hold forth in the high street of fish town
Gulping
out sounds that stop the traffic on a weekday like all others.
Inscrutable
yellow eyes muster the audience
While
muscles support challenging lovelorn chants
The
prima donnas give encores and stretch their necks
Letting
the tone surge and rip. Cascading laughter ensues
Now a
lyrical intermezzo — now a slow dance to enhance the concert.
Flash
mobs or buskers hold nothing against such performers.
Talents
ripen through natural selection.
In the
night the chorus takes over and holds forth,
Accomplishing
Wagnerian chords with untold stamina,
Serenading
sleepers, drunkards and lovelorn stragglers
Into
the wee hours.
Summer
or winter matter little to the inexhaustible,
Those
high-strung performers driven by instinct
Deep
rooted in saltwater and pebbles
But
forced by the ever changing natural, unnatural world
To
nest on house tops as the beaches became playgrounds
For
other two legged but wingless creatures
© HMH, 2013
May 23, 2019
Untitled Aquarell
Watercolour on Paper
©
HMH, 1976
May 15, 2019
New Reviews from My Writing Desk
CW Hawes, A Festival of Deaths
A Piano Playing PI
Liked the setup. A female PI and her assistant (and brother), living in a thirty-room mansion. She’s ex-CIA and has connections with the local police. They do most of their work at home, contracting out the field work to other PI agencies. Her brother is a chess enthusiast: he loves food and cooking. He must convince his sister to work. Without money, they can’t get (good) food. The case is a seemingly simple missing person scenario, but it turns out to be far from simple. It doesn’t take too long to home in on a suspect, but the case grows as the brother and sister team tries to solve it. They’re up against a cult (Aztek revival). The twists and turns take them around the sewers and into natural caves located under the city. There is a couple of kidnappings thrown in for good measure, but the two siblings may not succeed, even with the help of several other PIs — and the police. Will they catch the arch villain? Is there a hook for another instalment? After all, this is the first in a series. It was an enjoyable read, but it was hard to swallow the Aztek idea. To me, it seemed too melodramatic. Still, it was an entertaining read.
Gemma Lawrence, The Bastard Princess
Meet Young Elizabeth The First.
Tudor times, Henry the eighth. The daily life of his daughters, as seen through Elizabeth’s eyes. She loves her father and tries to forget and forgive what happened to her mother. Lawrence gives the reader interesting insights into the coming Gloriana’s early life, told in her voice. The fear and the glory, the misery and the triumphs, combine in a colourful tapestry. The portraits of Mary and Edward are vivid and convincing. Above all, Elizabeth charms the reader with her candour and observations. Meticulously researched, Lawrence’s book has merit and is worth reading. Highly recommended.
Julia Schmeelk, Heron’s Bond
The Importance of being Natural
Fantasy. A world, NewEarth, a sentient planet, peopled by dragons and humans. They can talk and communicate telepathically, at least if they have bonded with another and the world. It’s necessary to be able to put up mental screens against ill-willed creatures, from miners to immature dragons. All the same, the world is in balance with the universe and itself. Schmeelk builds a world that has the potential of becoming a Utopia. Will it last? The narrative is charming and could be read by a young audience as well as by adults who like fantasy novels. A little romance, and some unlikely friendships between dragons and humans, combine to a pleasant read in Schmeelk’s easy flowing prose. The message is clear: care for the world you live in and it’ll care for you.
Terry Lynn Thomas, The Silent Woman
An Entertaining Read
The Second World War is about
to begin. The first fugitives arrive from Germany, among them, there may be spies. All this seems unreal
to Catherine (Cat), who has her own problems to deal with in a childless
marriage. Her husband maybe never loved her, and she suffers the pangs of
unreciprocated love. Her sister in law, Isobel, despises her and shows it. It’s
the old class pattern: Cat comes from a less privileged family, and Isobel
grabs every opportunity to show Cat that she doesn’t belong. What could
possibly be worse?
Enter Reginald, an old friend
of her father. They meet — accidentally — and he offers her an easy job as a courier. It gives Cat various advantages:
excitement, mystery, and a bit of cash. What she doesn’t know is that the
information she delivers is classified. She gets targeted by a spy ring. Then
her husband, the civil servant, who carried government secrets back and forth
between his home and work, gets murdered. Cat’s work gets increasingly
dangerous, but she grows with the danger.
Terry Lynn Thomas develops her spy, mystery, blackmail, and suspense novella with skill. All the same, to me, the suspense didn’t quite take off. In my opinion, everything went too smoothly. It wouldn’t be fair to describe exact scenes, but there were no moments when I believed the main protagonist in real danger. This is entirely my own opinion. Certainly, many readers of cosy mysteries may find the anxiety Cat goes through absorbing. There are convincing historical details in The Silent Woman. Maybe my problem with the story lies in the character development. For example, Isobel’s attitude towards Cat is predictable, so predictable that it’s hard to imagine she may have hidden depths. My four-star rating is a nod to Thomas’ skilful prose.
Bernard Jan, A World Without Colour
A Pet Lover’s Agony
Undoubtedly, Bernard Jan wrote A World Without Colour with his heart-blood. The question that remains, when reading his short opus, is if it would have been better to wait for a little longer before writing it. Sometimes, when one writes on open wounds, the danger looms that sentiment clouds the writer’s potential. That is a pity. Having said that, I must add my condolences. It is difficult to lose loved ones. Bernard Jan shows courage in sharing that agony, but the question remains what time and distance would have achieved in refining his writing.
Ellie Douglas, Death Oh Death, Horror Collection 2
Where Does True Horror Begin?
Does horror reside among monsters or human beings? In my humble opinion, humans are far worse than monsters. It is true that bone-crushing, bloodsucking ogres are part of our worst and subconscious fears. The question is, where do these nightmares origin, if not among humans? Blood-and-gore is all very well, but taken on its own, it may rate — merely — as disgusting. Why do we fear monsters? Is their worst crime that they are like humans? Do their random acts of violence signify more than their pure monstrosity? Is it true that, among horror authors, there are two varieties? Those who evoke the monsters outside, and those who reflect on the human subconscious and wake up true horror? Ellie Douglas is efficient, but in this collection, the tale that stood out was ‘Junkyard’. It caught my attention because the monsters are human beings. This allows Ms Douglas to play with the lowest instincts that we humans share. True to her style, there’s a large amount of blood and gore too, but the focus remains on men (and a single woman). My wish would be to see more of this and less of the grisly, and strangely innocent, bogeymen. After all, they merely feed even if they do so in a spectacular way.
CA Asbrey, Innocent Bystander
Are Bystanders always Innocent?
There’s much to like and admire in Asbrey’s book. Her heroine is well drawn and believable. Even her criminal love-interest and — assistant evokes sympathy. More than that, her writing and plot arch works, she keeps the readers on their toes. The Western setting, the female Pinkerton and heroine doesn’t go through the motions but investigates every option until she reaches the inevitable conclusion. The technical and forensic part of the book is clear and convincing. Ms Asbrey adds the love-story with little strokes that develops the picture throughout the book. Lifelike characters and no-nonsense actions combined with unexpected twists keep the readers’ interest captivated from start to finish. A well-researched and enjoyable read.
Eileen Thornton, Murder on Tyneside
Ms Thornton brings murder and jewel thievery under the same hat, adds a little spy spice and serves up an effective yarn. Her protagonist is a mature woman with a penchant for shopping and a brain to solve mysteries through sudden inspirations. As such, it is an enjoyable piece of escapism. My reservations lie in a few plot inconsistencies — a white van that plays a role is never secured — let alone searched for. Ms Thornton’s easy-going prose makes up for the inconsistencies, she is a skilled narrator. It’s easy to get lulled into the, perhaps Agatha Christie inspired, book. The characters are plausible and the setting characteristic.
Ilene Goff Kaufmann, Rhyme & Reason
Ms Kaufmann has a Message.
One woman’s life in a volume. Kaufmann is an ambitious author. What she takes on is showing a woman’s life – any woman’s life in poetry. That includes misery, loneliness, heartbreak, abuse, as well as love, trust, childbirth, faith, and loss. A difficult task, but Kaufmann writes fervently and with deep conviction.
Caleb Pirtle III, Lovely Night to Die
A Powerful Thriller
A parallel world where men are nameless and women – dispensable. An assassin who decides to go against the rules. A female attorney who finds herself up against more than she imagined. A tentative romance that blossoms in a hopeless environment. A helping hand that waits until the last second. A narrative style that touches the edge between poetry and prose. These are the elements that create a lovely night to die. A storm looms to underscore the brooding atmosphere of an unusual book from Caleb Pirtle’s hands. With a sense of style and his clipped prose, he holds his readers in suspense throughout. This book grips the reader from the beginning, and its author stays in control to the end. Masterful. Highly recommended.
Again, I’ve read and enjoyed a collection of books, spanning from light entertainment over horror to deep-felt declarations and literary fiction. It is rewarding and instructive to read, especially when one wants to give something back to the world at large. Writers can’t be writers without reading. Also, writers tend to form strong convictions about what makes the writing stand out. For me, the criterium is whether a book makes me think. Of course, an entertaining book can give reason to relax, which is a reward in itself. The be-all and end-all of the matter is that every book adds spice to life.
Remember that writers want to communicate. Therefore:
© HMH, 2019
May 10, 2019
The Sea, The Sea
Pewter
waves roll mercilessly
Seagulls
sing their mournful songs
And disappear.
Salt
sprays glint in the pale glare.
The
sun is cold and
The
horizon curves,
Keeping
the secrets
Of
impenetrable depths.
Clouds
amass,
Hiding
the sun
In their
wet embrace.
A
lightning bolt flashes.
The
water springs up to meet it
Halfway
The
wind keens,
Beating
the waves to frenzy.
The
storm mixes
Waves
and air
Until boundaries
are lost.
The heavens
and the sea,
Combined
In a
violent tryst,
Fight an
eternal battle
Which nobody
can win.
Tranquillity
descends
The
liquid surface
Mirrors
turquoise air.
Look
in deeply,
And
see your tortured soul
© HMH,
2019
May 2, 2019
Blossoming trees
© HMH, 2014
April 27, 2019
A New badge of Reviews
CW Hawes, A Festival of
Deaths
A
Piano Playing PI
Liked
the setup. A female PI and her assistant (and brother), living in a thirty-room
mansion. She’s ex-CIA and has connections with the local police. They do most
of their work at home, contracting out the field work to other PI agencies. Her
brother is a chess enthusiast: he loves food and cooking. He must convince his
sister to work. Without money, they can’t get (good) food. The case is a
seemingly simple missing person scenario, but it turns out to be far from
simple. It doesn’t take too long to home in on a suspect, but the case grows as
the brother and sister team tries to solve it. They’re up against a cult (Aztek
revival). The twists and turns take them around the sewers and into natural
caves located under the city. There is a couple of kidnappings thrown in for
good measure, but the two siblings may not succeed, even with the help of
several other PIs — and the police. Will they catch the arch villain? Is there
a hook for another instalment? After all, this is the first in a series. It was
an enjoyable read, but it was hard to swallow the Aztek idea. To me, it seemed too melodramatic. Still, it was
an entertaining read.
[image error]
Gemma Lawrence, The Bastard Princess
Meet
Young Elizabeth The First.
Tudor
times, Henry the eighth. The daily life of his daughters, as seen through
Elizabeth’s eyes. She loves her father and tries to forget and forgive what
happened to her mother. Lawrence gives the reader interesting insights into the coming Gloriana’s early life, told in
her voice. The fear and the glory, the misery and the triumphs, combine in a
colourful tapestry. The portraits of Mary and Edward are vivid and convincing.
Above all, Elizabeth charms the reader with her candour and observations.
Meticulously researched, Lawrence’s book has merit and is worth reading. Highly
recommended.
[image error]
Julia Schmeelk, Heron’s Bond
The
Importance of being Natural
Fantasy.
A world, NewEarth, a sentient planet, peopled by dragons and humans. They can
talk and communicate telepathically, at least if they have bonded with another
and the world. It’s necessary to be able to put up mental screens against ill-willed creatures, from miners to immature
dragons. All the same, the world is in
balance with the universe and itself. Schmeelk builds a world that has the
potential of becoming a Utopia. Will it last? The narrative is charming and
could be read by a young audience as well as by adults who like fantasy novels.
A little romance, and some unlikely
friendships between dragons and humans, combine to a pleasant read in Schmeelk’s easy
flowing prose. The message is clear: care for the world you live in and it’ll
care for you.
[image error]
Terry Lynn Thomas, The Silent Woman
An
Entertaining Read
The
Second World War is about to begin. The first fugitives arrive from Germany,
among them, there may be spies. All this
seems unreal to Catherine (Cat), who has her own problems to deal with in a
childless marriage. Her husband maybe never loved her, and she suffers the
pangs of unreciprocated love. Her sister in law, Isobel, despises her and shows
it. It’s the old class pattern: Cat comes from a less privileged family, and Isobel
grabs every opportunity to show Cat that she doesn’t belong. What could possibly
be worse?
Enter
Reginald, an old friend of her father. They meet — accidentally — and he offers
her an easy job as a courier. It gives
Cat various advantages: excitement, mystery, and a bit of cash. What she
doesn’t know is that the information she delivers is classified. She gets
targeted by a spy ring. Then her husband, the civil servant, who carried
government secrets back and forth between his home and work, gets murdered. Cat’s
work gets increasingly dangerous, but she grows with the danger.
Terry
Lynn Thomas develops her spy, mystery, blackmail, and suspense novella with
skill. All the same, to me, the suspense didn’t quite take off. In my opinion, everything went too smoothly. It
wouldn’t be fair to describe exact scenes, but there were no moments when I believed the main protagonist in
real danger. This is entirely my own opinion. Certainly, many readers of cosy
mysteries may find the anxiety Cat goes through absorbing. There are convincing
historical details in The Silent Woman.
Maybe my problem with the story lies in the character development. For example,
Isobel’s attitude towards Cat is predictable, so predictable that it’s hard to
imagine she may have hidden depths. My four-star rating is a nod to Thomas’ skilful
prose.
[image error]
Bernard Jan, A World Without Colour
A
Pet Lover’s Agony
Undoubtedly,
Bernard Jan wrote A World Without Colour
with his heart-blood. The question that remains, when reading his short opus,
is if it would have been better to wait for
a little longer before writing it. Sometimes, when one writes on open wounds,
the danger looms that sentiment clouds the writer’s potential. That is a pity. Having
said that, I must add my condolences. It is difficult to lose loved ones. Bernard
Jan shows courage in sharing that agony, but the question remains what time and
distance would have achieved in refining his writing.
[image error]
Ellie Douglas, Death Oh Death, Horror
Collection 2
Where
Does True Horror Begin?
Does
horror reside among monsters or human beings? In my humble opinion, humans are
far worse than monsters. It is true that bone crushing, bloodsucking ogres are
part of our worst and subconscious fears. The question is, where does these
nightmares origin, if not among humans? Blood and gore is all very well, but
taken on its own, it may rate — merely — as disgusting. Why do we fear
monsters? Is their worst crime that they are like humans? Do their random acts of violence signify more than their
pure monstrosity? Is it true that, among horror authors, there are two varieties?
Those who evoke the monsters outside, and those who reflect on the human
subconscious and wake up true horror? Ellie Douglas is efficient, but in this
collection the tale that stood out was ‘Junkyard’.
It caught my attention, because the monsters are human beings. This allows Ms Douglas to play with the lowest
instincts that we humans share. True to her style, there’s a large amount of
blood and gore too, but the focus remains on men (and a single woman). My wish
would be to see more of this and less of the grisly, and strangely innocent,
bogeymen. After all they merely feed even if they do so in a spectacular way.
[image error]
CA Asbrey, Innocent Bystander
Are
Bystanders always Innocent?
There’s
much to like and admire in Asbrey’s book. Her heroine is well drawn and
believable. Even her criminal love-interest and — assistant evokes sympathy.
More than that, her writing and plot arch works, she keeps the readers on their
toes. The Western setting, the female Pinkerton and heroine doesn’t go through
the motions but investigates every option until she reaches the inevitable
conclusion. The technical and forensic part of the book is clear and convincing.
Ms Asbrey adds the love-story with little strokes that develops the picture
throughout the book. Lifelike characters
and no-nonsense actions combined with unexpected twists keep the readers’
interest captivated from start to finish. A well-researched and enjoyable read.
[image error]
Eileen Thornton, Murder on Tyneside
A
Cosy Mystery
Ms Thornton brings murder and jewel
thievery under the same hat, adds a little spy spice and serves up an effective
yarn. Her protagonist is a mature woman with a penchant for shopping and a
brain to solve mysteries through sudden inspirations. As such, it is an
enjoyable piece of escapism. My reservations lie in a few plot inconsistencies
— a white van that plays a role is never secured — let alone searched for. Ms
Thornton’s easy-going prose makes up for the inconsistencies, she is a skilled
narrator. It’s easy to get lulled into the, perhaps Agatha Christie inspired,
book. The characters are plausible and the setting characteristic.
[image error]
Ilene Goff Kaufmann, Rhyme &
Reason
Ms
Kaufmann has a Message.
One
woman’s life in a volume. Kaufmann is an ambitious author. What she takes on is
showing a woman’s life – any woman’s life in poetry. That includes misery,
loneliness, heartbreak, abuse, as well as love, trust, childbirth, faith, and
loss. A difficult task, but Kaufmann writes fervently and with deep conviction.
[image error]
Caleb Pirtle III, Lovely Night to Die
A
Powerful Thriller
A parallel world where men are nameless and women – dispensable. An assassin who decides to go against the rules. A female attorney who finds herself up against more than she imagined. A tentative romance that blossoms in a hopeless environment. A helping hand that waits until the last second. A narrative style that touches the edge between poetry and prose. These are the elements that create a lovely night to die. A storm looms to underscore the brooding atmosphere of an unusual book from Caleb Pirtle’s hands. With a sense of style and his clipped prose, he holds his readers in suspense throughout. This book grips the reader from the beginning, and its author stays in control to the end. Masterful. Highly recommended
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I don’t have much to say for myself this time. Only this:
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© HMH, 2019
April 16, 2019
Fire
Red and
silver evoked images of fire,
Alarming
the heart.
Bloodshot and shiny, it cut a pathway through flesh and stone.
Lachrymose,
in shock, passers-by stopped in the streets.
Glowing
scaffolding couldn’t support the spire.
Humans
fought the inferno
To save
what could be saved
And
still the flames endured.
Lead
dripped into the wounds
As a
mirror cracked.
Were
we ever powerless
Against
an irate nature?
What turned
away the fates?
Was it
prayers or
Singing
in the streets?
Was it
the power of faith,
Pleading
and beseeching,
That
turned the tide?
Was it
one defiant cross?
Or the
shower from hosepipes?
Hundreds
took part in the fight
And
made humankind hold its breath.
Out of
flames and despair
A new
hope survived.
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© HMH, 2019
April 12, 2019
Misquote — Parrot & Pussycat
This is one of my first attempts with
acrylics. One can only say that it’s colourful. The reason I left out the kitten
is that it seems too flat to my eyes. It isn’t in my belongings nowadays so
there’s no way to improve the work. . .
©
HMH, 2000
April 4, 2019
Barking Abbey
Cloistered
walks rose towards the sky
The
cool refectory mirrored
Muted
voices
As
nuns bowed to
The
abbess.
Only
ruins are left
Of
walls welcoming
William,
victorious
From
Hastings…
Grey
shapes remain.
Sharing
their secrets with
Those
who listen:
The Curfew
Tower
And St
Margret
Still
hold out and guard those,
Dead
to the world
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© HMH, 2014
March 27, 2019
Flower Picture
© HMH, 1985
