Mr. Bohemian's Blog: Dr. 2's Indie Office, page 3

Dr. 2 with patient Juggling With Mr. Fields by Jennifer O'Grady

Patient: Juggling with Mr. Fields
Legal Guardian: Jennifer O'Grady
Rating: ★★★
Insurance: PagePay Plus
Symptoms: saggy cigars, couch potato, goin'-nowhere-fast
Diagnosis: retro showbizickus




Patient Description:

Dr.2: I was an alien to the patient's preferred celebrity. They kept talking about W.C. Fields. Who's W.C. Fields? I was informed that he was a good juggler. I was reluctant to research their idol because the rising action was not very stimulating. The story was charming. Mr. Fields owned the stage, but an Rx of drama injections would prevent the plot from simply boiling along. As a director's note, the context contained too much particular instruction. Before the patient leaves my office, have them come to my desk. I want to see the ol' boy juggle.

Nurse 911 with patient Vietnam Zippos by J. Weintraub

Patient: Vietnam Zippos
Legal Guardian: J. Weintraub
Rating: ★★
Insurance: Bookmarx Medical
Symptoms: inflammation of the factoids, signature stage style
Diagnosis: narrated nihilism




Patient Description:

Nurse911: I asked the patient politely to stop flaring their butane lighter in the examination room. They kept flaring their butane lighter in the examination room. Their story were a hit, miss, and flop. The "badass soldier with a lighter" shtick lost its charm quickly. The ending was confusing. I asked the patient to describe it better, but they kept flicking their lighter. They just kept flicking, Doctor. I dissected the ending myself. The history and intricacies of Zippo brand lighters did not transition well to an ending that suggested that "World Peace is the answer." Perhaps they were trying to create some contrast and surprise, but Zippo history and world peace did not synthesis well.

Dr. 2 with patient P.S. I Love Your Daughter by Gary Cobin

Patient: P.S. I Love Your Daughter
Legal Guardian: Gary Cobin
Rating: ★★★
Insurance: PagePay Plus
Symptoms: Jenny-Was-A-Friend-Of-Mine
Diagnosis: daddy's girl



Patient Description:

Dr.2: The patient's protagonist had me hooked by first beer, cheers. The comedic character's really hit the spot. I was giggling like a tickled babe. Unfortunately, when the patient reached their plot's revelations, it really handicapped itself with a flat delivery. The writing did not reach a believable standard when it needed it most. Rx of 1000mg Chortles will be prescribed. The story survives until the end, but I was surprised by the shift in dialogue quality. In addition, Paul's character was way too dude, especially to his daughter. I understand he was a poor father, but he's still someone's father. Wasn't he head of the company as well? Is a sargeant's behavior on the same level as his cadets? The story gets its zingers and all the boys figure out what to do. P.S. Derek's an idiot.