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February 16, 2017

Northern Lights

Book Review: Northern Lights

Lyra is a wild child amongst a family of scholars. She has no known parents, but when her mysterious uncle comes to the university, her mischievousness saves his life. And her eyes are opened. A deep yearning to follow her uncle and follow him north stirs, but no. She must stay where she is. That is until the fabulously cosmopolitan Mrs Coulter offers her the same opportunity. She leaves, but not before she is given a strange golden compass. But her friend has bee...

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Published on February 16, 2017 13:00

February 2, 2017

Book Review: The Wise Man’s Fear

Book Two of Kingkiller Chronicles By Patrick Rothfuss

Kvothe has survived his first terms at the University, but not without building a bit of a reputation. Is it a good reputation? Maybe not, but it is a reputation. And with reputation comes those who want to break that reputation, and Kvothe is no exception. Perhaps it’s time to take a break? His tutors agree, and he sets foot into the wide world.

And although he has lost his most tangible link to his childhood obsession, he gains in other...

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Published on February 02, 2017 13:00

The Wise Man’s Fear

Book Review: The Wise Man’s Fear

Kvothe has survived his first terms at the University, but not without building a bit of a reputation. Is it a good reputation? Maybe not, but it is a reputation. And with reputation comes those who want to break that reputation, and Kvothe is no exception. Perhaps it’s time to take a break? His tutors agree, and he sets foot into the wide world. And although he has lost his most tangible link to his childhood obsession, he gains in other areas. His adventures...

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Published on February 02, 2017 13:00

January 17, 2017

The Deep POV Effect

In last month’s blog we looked back at the results of running a series [image error]of tests as specified in Marcy Kennedy’s cracking little book: “A busy writer’s guide to deep POV”. Most of the work I’ve done into deep POV has been with Mandestroy, and I thought that was pretty tight. But what did Marcy’s recommendations suggest? Well…

23% of the sentences had deep POV errors in them; and 31% of the word count was “infected”. Some sentences had three separate errors in them! And there were some pretty...
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Published on January 17, 2017 12:30

January 12, 2017

The Name of the Wind

Book Review: The Name of the Wind

Kote is a simple innkeeper, man who hankers after the simple things. But Kvothe is a legend. And Kvothe is Kote's past. Born into a travelling family, Kvothe loses everything he knows. And he loses it to a fairy-tale. But where others would lose there mind, Kvothe finds a purpose. He finds it in vengeance. A reckless but gifted student of the University, Kvothe gains access to some of the most incredible experiences in the world. And his skills gather notorie...

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Published on January 12, 2017 13:00

Book Review: The Name of the Wind

Book One of Kingkiller Chronicles By Patrick Rothfuss

Kote is a simple innkeeper, man who hankers after the simple things. But Kvothe is a legend. And Kvothe is Kote’s past.

Born into a travelling family, Kvothe loses everything he knows. And he loses it to a fairy-tale. But where others would lose there mind, Kvothe finds a purpose. He finds it in vengeance.

A reckless but gifted student of the University, Kvothe gains access to some of the most incredible experiences in the world. And his...

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Published on January 12, 2017 13:00

January 3, 2017

Author Newsletter: 2016 Review

It’s the end of my first year as an actual author. A time for celebration perhaps, but certainly a time for reflection. So, how is this self-publishing gig working out?

Was it everything I dreamed of? Of course not. Was it everything I expected? Err, no. Not by a long shot. Was it successful? Perhaps on a moderate level, but not really. But did I learn a shit load? Yes. So was it a success? Definitely. And did I enjoy myself? Absolutely.

But let’s look at this a bit closer. What did I reall...

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Published on January 03, 2017 12:00

January 2, 2017

Beagle’s Blot 12 | Leaving Mandaria

It turns out that escaping Mallis was nowhere near as troublesome as I had feared. I needn’t have stayed so long. Then again, without my stay, my pockets would not have rattled with so much coinage, and so I’m not disappointed. It is good to feel flush.

I now have several golds in my pocket, interspersed amongst a host of silver and iron. Lots of sizes and weights, good for honest cash transactions. But I am no fool any longer. Most of my golds and all of my steels are stashed in private plac...

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Published on January 02, 2017 13:00

December 20, 2016

How Bad Can it Be?

Implementing Deep POV

I had a month off with respect my writing experience blogs. Then again, it was NaNoWriMo, so it was onlydeeppovcover fair wasn’t it? Well now NaNoWriMo is over, and it’s time to dig back in.

Here I will be picking up where I left off – following and applying the principles of this little beauty of a book. And this month I start to get stuck in with a series of recommended actions and applying tests to the live version of Mandestroy. Now, I thought Mandestroy was pretty tight (see my...

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Published on December 20, 2016 12:30

December 15, 2016

Book Review: A Wizard of Earthsea

Book One of the Earthsea Cycle By Ursula Le Guin

“Ged has talent, and he knows it. And he is keen to play to that talent. He gathers what tutorage he can, but soon he must follow his own ambitions. He is going to train as a wizard.

But though he has ability, he is still young. Very young. With great power comes great responsibility, and this is not something that is easily taught. And so it is that when Ged is goaded into showing off his talents, he finds himself playing with powers that he...

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Published on December 15, 2016 13:00