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See yourself series 30

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Choosing words for poetry

Poetry Tips

Choosing words for poetry

Poets need to understand words, letters and sounds in ways more intimate than the reader or the writer of prose.

I want to take you on a journey and show you had you should think of words when writing your poetry.

I was given the words PEACH, PAISLEY, PACHABEL, PERIDOT for a challenge.

To me these words fitted into a romance a seduction scene with two players and some music.

So my thinking was Pachabels Cannon in D I don’t know if you have heard it, its a beautiful piece of music and its made up of repeating refrains so I wanted to replicate that in the poetry music.

I needed repetition within the poem and repeats and I also wanted repetition of p and s sounds.

I used alliteration but I also wanted to use euphony letters beginning with p are associated with masculine , power and pride ..s words are associated with secrets, sensuousness so accentuating these sounds will help set the mood of the piece.

I choose words with p and s with the connotations that I wanted and I choose words with p and s in the centre to keep the sounds progressing.

My peacock is a metaphor

Then my word choice

preens gives me the p and s sound …it means devoting time to making oneself look attractive fitting my lover who is a peacock

prances again gives the p and s sounds …it is also making exaggerated movements ..that will get noticed

Then those words are repeated but reversed like the steps of a dance.

He poses and exudes power …and the narrator is interested excited

In the second stanza romance is building so those s sounds come to the fore.

Combined with t which adds a trembling sound.entwined, trailing, atmosphere.

Plus the slithering s tones of slow, sound, speeding, shudder, unison, softly

We continue in stanza 3 with the repetitions but we add he sound of l which can be a sound of lightness and clarity.

So the mood of the poem is built, the emotion heightened.

I formulated a list of potential words, I checked meaning and connotation and picked the words with care.

I tried to continue using my sounds and refrains to echo the refrains in the music.

This poem is also is an extended metaphor.

Now you might not like this poem it may not appeal to you.

But read it aloud feel how the words flow together hear the sounds and try to emulate good word choice in your poems.

Cannon in D

The peridot peacock preens and prances

prances and preens

the feeling of power positively exuding

from the pose

his display raises my pulse

pulse beating in my neck above

the

peach

Paisley

of my shawl.

The slow sound of bass notes entwined

with the trailing notes of violins

start to create the atmosphere

for sharing secrets

touching

inner

chords

slow sounds – speeding -twining

like rising pheromones

I shudder as my peach paisley slips

across

my skin

The peridot peacock

preens and prances

Pachabel adding life and lustre

subtle refrains building building

I smile and power transfers

as I stand and pose and preen

the suspense peaks

we move in unison softly touching

speeding – twining.

peridot

peacock

rocks

peach

Paisley

with Pachabel.

Samantha Beardon©

How do you choose words for your poetry!

Samantha Beardon

You

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See yourself series 23

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Loves direction?

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Learning…

Learning to be,

Can be hard you see,

Life teaches us early who we are,

Can make us doubt ourselves, makes lasting scars.

If we focus on others judgements,

The negatives, can stunt our circumference,

Told you are no good at that,

Are ugly, stupid that’s a trap.

Learning to be the person, that fulfills their own potential,

Can be hard, if we believe we can’t be successful,

We are duff at sums, we have no charm,

We can’t attract a mate, communication causes alarm.

Living with the mantra of negativity,

Becomes a self fulfilling prophecy,

Yet each of us in unique,

Why do we have to follow the herd,or be the freak?

Learning to be, can be hard,

Some never manage, they keep their marked card,

Others start to realise, they like their self,

Gain confidence, count their strengths, grab life itself.

Learning to be, is easy for some,

They have self love and confidence from day one,

Get positive feedback, grab the day,

Breeze through life, like through a holiday.

From where ever we start,

It’s important to be, all you want to be,

Start with caring for you, seeing the good,

Celebrate your achievements, search out the dead wood.

Each of us is unique, and deserves to live life to the full, before they die,

Aware of who they are, shining brightly

The fragrance of poetry

The fragrance of poetry

I walk past Dahl, Byron and Jeckyll

all scenting my world to inspiration,

as a sea of sage surges adding

a heady aroma to the mix – clarity – memory

whilst wisteria whispers her fragrance

a trail to follow to source

Flower’s songs permeating the air

Choirs calling

for the vibration of the bee

is this poetry enough –

Or should I wait for

the burgeoning buds

ready to burst

the seeds of poetry.

Samantha Beardon.

Pherenomes in D

The peridot peacock preens and prances

prances and preens

the feeling of power positively exuding

from the pose

his display raises my pulse

pulse

beating in my neck above

the

peach

Paisley

of my shawl.

The slow sound of bass notes entwined

with the trailing notes of violins

start to create the atmosphere

for sharing secrets

touching

inner

chords

slow sounds – speeding -twining

like rising pheromones

I shudder as my peach paisley slips

across

my

skin

The peridot peacock

preens and prances

Pachabel adding life and lustre

subtle refrains building

building

I smile and power

transfers

as I stand and pose and preen

suspense peaks

we move in unison softly touching

speeding – twining

peridot

peacock

rocks

peach

Paisley

with Pachabel.

Samantha Beardon©

See yourself series 21

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