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June 25, 2023
Across the Ocean: Writing Prompt
This week, we are using today's poem (Eurydice by Ocean Vuong) as our inspiration.
The trick to this type of prompt is to make your piece so wildly different than the source material that a reader, including (in this case) Vuong himself, would have no idea that you used his poem as your jumping off point. This makes it quite different from writing that is blatantly a reaction to/parody of/homage to/study of another piece (this would include everything from Romeo and Juliet/West Side Story; "Wha...
Eurydice by Ocean Vuong
Eurydice
by Ocean Vuong
published in The Nation (January 28, 2014)
It’s more like the sound a doe makes when the arrowhead replaces the day with an answer to the rib’s hollowed hum. We saw it coming but kept walking through the hole in the garden. Because the leaves were bright green & the fire only a pink brushstroke in the distance. It’s not about the light—but how dark it makes you depending on where you stand. Depending on where you stand his name can appear like moonlight...
June 21, 2023
Pride by Diana Goetsch
Pride
by Diana Goetsch
from In America (2017 Rattle Chapbook Prize Selection)
https://www.rattle.com/pride-by-diana-goetsch/
for Paula Schonauer
I’ll never forget the smell of mouthwash
on the breath of two old Choctaw women
who got picked up by a cop and taken to detox.
The cop was my friend, a six-foot-five
woman who joined the Oklahoma City
Police Department as a man
and transitioned on the job. Nobody
on the force would be Paula’s partner,
so she patrolled alone, occasionally
inv...
June 18, 2023
Wrong Turn: Writing Prompt
Although it is a common trope in many types of literature and movies, taking a wrong turn is something everyone of us has done, and without the horror movie or fantasy novel results.
This week, write about a wrong turn--your own, someone else's, an entirely fictional one, or a combination of these.
Feel free to use the well-known trope or subvert it or try something completely different.
If a literal wrong turn is not your style, that's fine. We often use that phrase to connote a bad decisi...
Untitled by Marilyn Hacker
Untitled
by Marilyn Hacker
page 121 of her book, Love, Death, and the Changing of the Seasons
W.W. Norton and Company, 1986
You did say, need me less and I’ll want you more.
I’m still shellshocked at needing anyone,
used to being used to it on my own.
It won’t be me out on the tiles till four-
thirty, while you’re in bed, willing the door
open with your need. You wanted her then,
more. Because you need to, I woke alone
in what’s not yet our room, strewn, though with your
guitar, shoes, not...
June 14, 2023
As Planned by Frank O'Hara
As Planned
by Frank O'Hara
published in The Collected Poems of Frank O'Hara
edited by Donald Allen
After the first glass of vodka
you can accept just about anything
of life even your own mysteriousness
you think it is nice that a box
of matches is purple and brown and is called
La Petite and comes from Sweden
for they are words that you know and that
is all you know words not their feelings
or what they mean and you write because
you know them not because you understand them
because y...
June 11, 2023
Work That House!: Writing Prompt
“Cleanliness is not next to godliness. It isn't even in the same neighborhood. No one has ever gotten a religious experience out of removing burned-on cheese from the grill of the toaster oven.”--Erma Bombeck
I loved reading Erma Bombeck's books when I was young, and I have--at my old age--the messy house to prove how influential she was in my life!
Today's blog poem, Rejected Embroidery Projects by Triny Finlay, is not quite about housework, but there was a time when such needlework--like vac...
Rejected Embroidery Projects by Triny Finlay
Rejected Embroidery Projects
by Triny Finlay
published in The/tEmz/Review, Issue 22
I stitch whimsy-careful scenes
for people who don’t love me back:
MSN logo, bi flag, Tetris blocks
for the 90s kid who left
on a work trip that winter
and chose not to return;
sun, moon, and rising
signs for the zodiac=led
trauma specialist who preferred
her subtle cats. Understood.
Whose hands will pick those finished
hoops from the nearby dumpster?
It’s all going to light up eventually.
Whose lungs will ...
June 7, 2023
Little Shields, in Starlight by Carl Phillips
Little Shields, in Starlight
by Carl Phillips
posted in Literary Hub, 2022
Maybe there’s no need for us to go anywhere more far than here, said the dogwood leaves, mistaking speech for song, to the catalpa leaves, imitating silence. It was like sex when, push the tenderness to either side of it, it’s just sex; hardly sex at all . . . Hardly worth mentioning, except forgetting seems so much a shame, lately, and why
shouldn’t there be records, however small, of our having felt somethin...
June 4, 2023
No Moon at All: Writing Prompt
Jackie Kay's incredible poem, "Margaret's Moon," mentions the moon just once in her short poem (line four: "a hammock moon"). Most of her poem is focused on Margaret, the speaker, and moon-adjacent description.
I love this, as everything else in the poem has the moon, unmentioned, in it, particularly the last line. Our imaginations have already engaged the moon from the title and that brief mention, and there it sits, high above us but there, as we continue to read.
This week's poem is going ...


