Riley Adams's Blog, page 179
March 28, 2012
Writing—Getting Rid of the Fear

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
I was at an event recently and heard one of the PR people for the corporation coming out of his office, sort of flustered. "Hectic day," he said.
I asked him what was wrong and he launched right into it (he knows I'm a writer): "I'm organizing another event," he said. "A retirement dinner with speakers. And none of the three people who are talking about the honoree at the dinner wants to write their own speech! So I'm writing three different speeches in three different voices. And they all know this person better than me!"
I said, "That's got to be frustrating, and a lot of extra work for you. I'm asked to write a lot of stuff for people, too. Resumes and cover letters, letters to principals, complaint letters, whatever. Maybe when people know you can write, they just want to hand it over."
"You know what it is?" he asked. "You're not afraid. You're not afraid of writing and they are."
It's true. The times that I've been asked to write things for other people, I got the distinct impression that they were afraid if they did it, they'd screw up. If they wrote their own material, it would mean opening themselves up to being misunderstood or having their mistakes on display. They were worried their letter wouldn't sound right and would present a poor impression of them.
But writers haven't totally shaken the fear, either. Ours just takes different forms—it goes to the next level:
We might be afraid:
That we can't finish a book.
That we can't successfully represent on paper the story that's in our heads.
That our book will be rejected by publishers or agents or readers. Or that we'll be rejected by our family for writing the thing to begin with.
That we'll fail at trying to write something new.
That our reviews will be bad.
That our book won't sell.
But there are ways to move past these fears:
Write frequently. Practice always means improvement.
Just keep moving forward on the draft. Poor writing can be fixed.
Be forgiving of first drafts.
Write quickly, edit thoughtfully.
When finishing one project, start right in on the next. Don't invest all your emotions into an "only-child" book.
How do you move past your insecurities and fears and keep writing? Do you do a lot of writing for your family and friends?
March 26, 2012
Keeping Challenged While Writing One Genre
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
Hi everyone! Today I'm over at writer Elysabeth Eldering's blog. In my interview with her there, I talk about juggling several series, my typical writing day, and why I write mysteries, among other things. Hope you'll pop by.
Today's post will be a short one here, since I'm deep in edits for one book and writing another. I thought I'd pose a question to you that nearly stumped me at a recent event.
It was after a talk I'd given and one of the writers in attendance asked me, "So you're only writing mysteries. Don't you want to try writing other things? How do you keep getting creative satisfaction from writing one genre? How do you stay challenged?"
I know that I am currently satisfied writing mysteries. I've written eight books in the same genre and haven't gotten bored with it a bit. But I'd never really thought about why. So it took me a while to answer his question…in fact, I had to tell him, "Hold on a second while I think about that."
For me, these are the reasons I'm sticking with my genre and staying satisfied (for at least the foreseeable future):
I love reading mysteries. I'm a fan.
I'm writing more than one series. So each book focuses on a different setting and different characters with different personalities.
I love the characters I'm writing. I enjoy spending time with them in the made-up worlds I've created.
It's a challenge to come up with different plots instead of recycling the same ones. That's creativity in action.
With each book, I'm introducing new characters as suspects and victims.
I'm curious to hear from you. Do you focus on a single genre? A single series? How do you keep feeling creatively satisfied and challenged?
March 24, 2012
Twitterific
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
Below are the writing-related links I tweeted last week.
The free Writer's Knowledge Base search engine, designed by software engineer and writer Mike Fleming, makes all these links (now over 14,000) searchable. The WKB recently celebrated its one-year anniversary.
Sign up for the free monthly WKB newsletter for the web's best links and interviews: http://bit.ly/gx7hg1
Tips for writing with vivid detail: http://bit.ly/FQanbP
Blog Commenting - Is It Going Extinct? http://bit.ly/zu9XCK @roniloren
3 Things You Must Have in Your Novel's First Paragraph: http://bit.ly/xCFjRt @LiveWriteThrive
Should Authors Design Their Own Books? http://bit.ly/zxzldQ @jfbookman
Story Setting: How to Make It Unique and Realistic: http://bit.ly/FPi2Jc
Using The 12 Stages of Physical Intimacy To Build Tension In Your Fiction: http://bit.ly/FPi442 @jhansenwrites
Ways to use em-dashes: http://bit.ly/FPi6sB @janice_hardy
Worldbuilding--religion in fantasy: http://bit.ly/wEd6dS
12 Writer Woes and the Books to Cure Them: http://bit.ly/FPihnH @roniloren
How to Identify Top Websites & Blogs in Your Category: http://bit.ly/FPiA1I @janefriedman
Are You Giving Readers the Tools to Understand Your Story? http://bit.ly/FPiJT0 @KMWeiland
Your Character's Language: http://bit.ly/wMH2ZR @janelebak
A New Breed of Writer for the Digital Age of Publishing: http://bit.ly/FPiOG7 @KristenLambTX
Characterizing Details: http://bit.ly/ytQrmu @Kid_Lit
An agent on pitching: http://bit.ly/y9wv46 @greyhausagency
How to Submit to Literary Magazines: http://bit.ly/yaHb6F @difmfa
5 Muse Abusers: How To Protect Your Creative Flow: http://bit.ly/x6D9X8 @roniloren
Agent Loses a Suit Against an Author for Commissions: http://bit.ly/xUWzQk @passivevoiceblg
6 aspects of writing YA that surprised 1 writer: http://bit.ly/AziwKq @carrieryan
Heroes Who Fail: http://bit.ly/zbrESl (with spoilers--as examples)
When Are You Finished with Your Revision? http://bit.ly/ym2q9k @fictionnotes
Tips for polishing your manuscript: http://bit.ly/xzuj60 @msheatherwebb
Understanding the "Show Don't Tell" Rule: http://bit.ly/yYkuoq
How to start a book project: http://bit.ly/yGF1sJ
The broken van (writers have options): http://bit.ly/yvBUGS @sarahahoyt
Promoting Your Blog With Twitter – 3 Underutilized Methods: http://bit.ly/FPhAvb @tomewer
Matching booze with bestsellers: http://bit.ly/w75sQl @ebooknewser
3 Lessons for the Traveling Writer: http://bit.ly/wnxo8a @Christi_Craig
Unusual creatures from myth & legend to use as inspiration: http://bit.ly/yn8nOS @GeneLempp
How to Win the War Against Grammar Trolls: http://bit.ly/wsOr7B @seanplatt
Your Book's Palette – Using Color in Your Fiction: http://bit.ly/yMw0ZS @SamanthaHunter for @Ravenrequiem13
Regency romance--the popularity of the highwayman: http://bit.ly/xJJT1W @bookemdonnna
Adverse vs. Averse: http://bit.ly/A8RK8A @writing_tips
How to network without being obnoxious: http://bit.ly/AAxhZT @writerashley
Endurance: whatever happens, just keep writing: http://bit.ly/FUsYUj
Marketing Fiction vs Non-Fiction: http://bit.ly/zC2KYV @thecreativepenn
How to Write Like You Can't Fail: http://bit.ly/y0qwAv @LyndaRYoung
5 things that really matter to search engines: http://bit.ly/z7LJXp @rule17
Reader to Writer: Write it Clearer: http://bit.ly/wZJ2jd
Why aren't you writing? http://bit.ly/y4rLDW @fantasyfaction
3 Ways to Find the Perfect Opening for Your Story: http://bit.ly/AyozbE @jodyhedlund
Not Just Another Writer's Writing Blog: http://bit.ly/AtRS7Y @writeitsideways
Why writers should care about indie bookstores: http://bit.ly/xqEvff @ThereseWalsh
What makes a character unique: http://bit.ly/zLm36U @JamiGold
Tips for heightening the suspense: http://bit.ly/yza6K4 @JodieRennerEd
How to Check Your Grammar Online: http://bit.ly/yCLir6 @galleycat
1 writer's Feb. sales report for epub: http://bit.ly/xn47Iq @DavidGaughran
Writing Stress for Freelancers: http://bit.ly/xZwCQD
Logic: Without It, Your Story May Have A Serious Neurological Disorder: http://bit.ly/xPKh7C
Book Design Case Study: Two Contemporary Novels: http://bit.ly/FQEkgl @JFBookman
Writing sentences with rhythm: http://bit.ly/wAK0J3
"Read What We Publish" - What editors really mean: http://bit.ly/FQElB0 @greyhausagency
Is There a Self-Publishing Bubble? http://bit.ly/ziUJpm @NathanBransford
4 Quick-Fix Ways to Improve Your Novel's Opening: http://bit.ly/wkt6IB @MuseInks
What 1 writer has learned from joining a book club: http://bit.ly/Arvqxg
Calculation of Royalty Fees In Publishing Contracts (& 2 things writers should remember): http://bit.ly/zI2gTl @SusanSpann
Your Homepage Isn't As Important As You Think: http://bit.ly/xvgwIm @WeGrowMedia for @janefriedman
What Makes Fiction Literary? http://bit.ly/FUPigl @KMWeiland
Getting Better vs Being Good: http://bit.ly/FUPmg2 @the99percent
Dialog Mistakes (Part 2 – Idle Chatter): http://bit.ly/FUPnAR @WritingChronicl
When a Writing Contest Has a Hidden Agenda: http://bit.ly/x6HTh4 @victoricastrauss
Facing the blank page: http://bit.ly/Aarq3Y
10 Essential Tools & Apps for Freelancers: http://bit.ly/wLMKnF
13 Stephen King Quotes on Writing: http://bit.ly/y3q1TM @writersdigest
Politics, Religion and Our Author Platform: http://bit.ly/AfSOD1 @kristenlambTX
Arsenic and Old Leaves: The Art of Poisoning Your Fantasy Characters: http://bit.ly/Agbu42 @fantasyfaction
Describing characters through POV: http://bit.ly/FPwEg0 @Janice_Hardy
Top 5 Tools for Writing the Setting of Your Story or Novel: http://bit.ly/AcJMyH
E-Book Smackdown: Who Should Control Pricing—Publishers Or Amazon? http://bit.ly/GID6VF @laurahazardowen
Tips for taking a vacation from technology: http://bit.ly/GIDjby
Deepening Your POV: http://bit.ly/GIDtje @Janice_Hardy
The Real World and the YA Novel: http://bit.ly/GIDCTz @zeitlingeist
Three or Four acts to your story's structure: http://bit.ly/GIDSCi
Story Structure: The First Act: http://bit.ly/GIE0S0 @KMWeiland
Getting Better vs Being Good: http://bit.ly/FUPmg2 @the99percent
Are the Big 6 Publishers Really Dying? http://bit.ly/GGmWuV @annerallen
How to Handle Criticism: http://bit.ly/GGn7X2 @LyndaRYoung
When Acting Impulsively Can Hurt Your Writing: http://bit.ly/GGnnoU @catewoods
Techniques for Building Suspense: http://bit.ly/GGnvF4 @JodieRennerE
The midpoint – where your story gets personal: http://bit.ly/GGnO2B @dirtywhitecandy
Clarifying What Your Characters Do: http://bit.ly/GK4WBe @Janice_Hardy
8 Key Elements For Capturing The Star Wars Feel In Your Story: http://bit.ly/GK5maY @BryanThomasS
4 Rewards from Creative Writing Immersion: http://bit.ly/GK5Aib @PatrickRwrites
4 cardinal rules for social media: http://bit.ly/GK5Mhs @victoriamixon
An agent says: "It's Not Just About 'Paying Your Dues'": http://bit.ly/GK73Ff @greyhausagency
Is A "Niche" Or "Non-Niche" Blog Right For You? http://bit.ly/GN1nqz @serbaughman @writeitsideways
Don't QWERTY, Be Happy? http://bit.ly/GN1vGK @vwishna
Blog Tours: The Good – The Bad – The Ugly: http://bit.ly/GN1QsI @CynthiaDAlba
11 of the greatest bromances in Southern Literature: http://bit.ly/GGR2l9 @HunterMurphyYea
Finding Value in Your "Mistakes" http://ow.ly/1IVFQ3 @jamieraintree
Libraries as publishers? http://bit.ly/GF7e1Q @Porter_Anderson
Authors: climbing the walls: http://bit.ly/GGbvpF @Porter_Anderson
Getting Better vs Being Good: http://bit.ly/FUPmg2
How to Get Your First 1,000 Blog Readers: http://bit.ly/GFqlbV @pushingsocial
How to be creative: http://on.wsj.com/GFqDQ9 @WSJ
Story Structure With a Hole In It: http://bit.ly/GFqL20 @write_practice
5 Uses for a Lull in Writing: http://bit.ly/GFrbW5 @fictionnotes
Building a Believable Author Brand through Blogging: http://bit.ly/GFrjFb @catseyewriter
Why Self-Publish When You Have a Chance to Go Traditional? http://bit.ly/GFrm3K @goblinwriter
The Problems with Strong Female Characters: http://bit.ly/GFsCnu @AnnieNeugebauer
What bestsellers have in common: http://bit.ly/GFsUeg @ava_jae
How publishing auctions work: http://bit.ly/GFtto8 @rachellegardner
How To Start A Story The Stephen King Way: http://bit.ly/GFtwk3 @mooderino
An argument in favor of outlining: http://bit.ly/GPbBbH
3 Ways to Keep Social Media from Taking Control of Writing Time: http://bit.ly/GPc5i0 @jodyhedlund
Is Your Favorite Author A Jerk? (Interesting discussion among readers in the comments): http://bit.ly/GLKq2U @deadwhiteguys
10 Types of Filler Content for Your Blog: http://bit.ly/GLL4gY @ProBlogger
The importance of writing likeable characters: http://bit.ly/GLLnIq
Writing lessons from "A Tree Grows in Brooklyn": http://bit.ly/GLLKCZ @juliemusil
Writing Action Sequences: a process of layering and research: http://bit.ly/GLMwjk @JulietteWade
Several processes for starting a book: http://bit.ly/GLRM6F
10+ Ways to Find Blog Post Ideas: http://bit.ly/GLRZXl @CherylRWrites
Your Story's Time Line: Cut It Up: http://bit.ly/GLSbWF @fictionnotes
Writing on the Ether by @Porter_Anderson features @naypinya @mikecane @philipdsjones @jonnygeller @ByRozMorris http://bit.ly/GOEUKL
How to Submit Short Stories: http://bit.ly/GQbTvn
A Quiz About Combining Sentences: http://bit.ly/GQbYPH @writing_tips
Why 1 writer dislikes outlines: http://bit.ly/GQcm0z @sarahahoyt
An explanation of author-agent agreement: http://bit.ly/GQcqNU @rachellegardner
How to Position Your Book To Go Viral: http://bit.ly/GQcv49 @storyfix
An Agent on Shopping Self-Published Titles: http://bit.ly/GQcAEV @SaraMegibow
Tips for Conference Planners--The Simple Guide to Caring for an Author: http://bit.ly/GQ9vK6 @nicolamorgan
Creating Cover Love: http://bit.ly/GQ9TIF @StinaLL
Comments — The Weakest Part of Blogs: http://bit.ly/GQada9 @scholarlykitchn
Hook 'Em on the First Cast: http://bit.ly/GQapq4 @LiveWriteThrive
Three Keys to Building Your Author Platform: http://bit.ly/GQaxG6 @JFBookman
Sometimes revision means rewriting: http://bit.ly/GQaXfv @TaliaVance
Are You Committing These E-mail Sins? http://bit.ly/GQb76G @janefriedman
Imagery and your story: http://bit.ly/GK8AKw @KarenCV
Does Publishing Support the Writer-Artist? http://bit.ly/GK8D9j @KristenLambTX
The Difference between Style and Voice: http://bit.ly/GK8Jxx
Hook Your Reader with Character: http://bit.ly/GK99nA @howtowriteshop
3 Myths of Guest Writing for Big Websites …and 6 Tactics for Doing it Well: http://bit.ly/GK9h6I @copyblogger
The Social Networks of Emily Dickinson, Paul Gauguin & Charlotte Bronte: http://bit.ly/GLy3G5
Self Publishing: Perils, Pitfalls, and Promise: http://bit.ly/GLyb8h @lisajanicecohen
The Contract Between Writer and Reader: http://bit.ly/GLyiB1 @MsAnnAguirre
What We Can Learn From The Poets: http://bit.ly/GLyksr @greyhausagency
Lessons 1 writer has learned about memoir writing: http://bit.ly/GLypMN @jhansenwrites for @nicolebasaraba
Illustrate a Character Through His Possessions: http://bit.ly/GLyrnO @kmweiland
Writers--the promised land is where you find it: http://bit.ly/GMQWYb @sarahahoyt
3 Helpful Tools For Writers Who Struggle With ADD: http://bit.ly/GWHoXq @lformichelli
March 23, 2012
Isn't it Ironic? by C.E. Lawrence
by C.E. Lawrence, @C_E_Lawrence
Life is nothing if not ironic. You spend all your time working for money or fame or adulation or whatever – only to find out that in getting what you thought you wanted, you don't get what you were after all along – happiness.
How ironic. Or you finally marry that fabulous blond bombshell you always thought was the idea woman, only to fall in love with that funny little neighbor next door with the short brown hair and lopsided smile. Ironies in life abound, even for the rich and famous: Republican Terminator Arnold Schwarzenegger marries Kennedy Babe Maria Shriver; Democratic policy wonk James Carville marries Republican Spokeschick Mary Matalin. How ironic. Super anal retentive Felix Unger's best friend is super slob Oscar Madison, and vice versa. Hmm . . . do I sense a pattern here?
Webster's first definition of irony is: "1. expression in which the intended meaning of the words is the direct opposite of their usual sense: as in irony she called the stupid plan 'very clever.'" (We'll talk about the second definition later.)
IT'S ALL GREEK TO ME
The word irony is derived from the Greek "eironeia," which means "simulated ignorance." The Wordsworth Dictionary of Phrase and Fable says irony is "the use of expressions having a meaning different from the ostensible one; a subtle form of sarcasm understood correctly by the initiated." In literature, this kind of irony can proceed from one character to another - or from the author to the reader. In "Everything That Rises Must Converge," Flannery O'Connor gives us an accurate portrait of Julian through the constant use of irony. What Julian thinks about himself is not at all what we are invited to think about him; the story fairly drips with irony.
And E.L. Doctorow, in writing about Mark Twain, has this to say:
"Huck, making the socially immoral choice to assist the escape of a slave - someone's rightful property, he thinks - creates in himself an ethically superior morality that he defines as outlaw, and appropriate to such a worthless tramp as he. And Twain can deal with the monstrous national catastrophe of slaveholding, not head on, in righteousness, in the manner of Harriet Beecher Stowe, but with the sharper stick, the deeper thrust, of irony."
In other words, the initiated reader "gets it" – Huck is not immoral at all, but is the product of a society whose values are so twisted that Huck actually believes that giving an enslaved fellow human being his freedom is wicked. How ironic. I might also point out that while Huckleberry Finn is still flying off the shelves, read by children and adults alike, few people other than English graduate students ever read Uncle Tom's Cabin. Of course, Twain is one of our national treasures – but it is his use of irony that makes his political writing so sharp, even today. (And also, he's a pretty funny guy – I have yet to see a really good comic writer who doesn't use irony. It literally comes with the territory.)
CLUB TALK
Using irony in your writing also makes your readers feel smart – they "get it," they're part of the "initiated." It's like belonging to a club. In "Everything That Rises," Flannery O'Connor invites us to sort of "gang up" on poor Julian; in seeing him for what he really is, we become her cronies, her cohorts, her co-conspirators, in a sense. This is fun for us; we feel like we're "in on something." Of course, the only person "left out" is a fictional character, but no matter. We still get the same naughty thrill we got as children when we formed the Glass Club and kept out those nasty boys across the road. After all, what's the point of a club if everyone can join?
IRONY IN COMEDY: THIS IS NOT YOUR PARENTS' TELEVISION
For those of you who watch The Daily Show, (and I hope that's everyone with cable), don't you get a little kick out of the fact that you're pretty sure your parents wouldn't get this kind of humor, and if they did, they wouldn't think it was funny anyway? Irony, like comedy to which it is so closely related, has a point, a cutting edge - it is an attitude born of anger. Like comedy, it also invariably involves a "twist" of some kind. It can be dry or wet, but not everyone "gets it." You have to be one of the "initiated." I have a kind of "irony meter" when I judge people's characters, and some people have little or no sense of the ironic. I have found, for example, that as you head west across the United States, the irony meter drops rapidly, until, some time after crossing the Delaware, you come to the Great Midwest, or, as I like to call, the Irony Free Zone. (To those of you who live there, my apology; every rule has its exceptions.)
IRISH CHILDREN – BAKED OR BOILED?
In the eighteenth century, Jonathan Swift, noted author, journalist, and wit, wrote a rather famous essay called "A Modest Proposal." In it he suggested dealing with the problem of famine in Ireland by eating Irish children. He felt this was an elegant solution because it would both reduce the population while providing a plentiful and cheap source of nutrition. Needless to say, his irony – wet as it was – completely escaped a certain percentage of the population. In fact, the editor of his newspaper received letters from outraged readers castigating Mr. Swift for his insensitive and wicked ideas. So much for political satire. Irony will always have its "initiated" audience, but, as they say, you can't please all of the people all of the time.
But go out there and have fun – be funny, be satirical, be ironic! After all, what can they do to you – shoot you?
Oh, right, I guess they can. I forgot this is America, where everyone owns guns. On second thought, maybe this is a good time to move to Canada. Long winters and moose meat. Oh, yeah.
Carole Bugge ( C.E. Lawrence)
has eight published novels, six novellas and a dozen or so short stories and poems. Her work has received glowing reviews from such publications as Kirkus, The Library Journal, Publisher's Weekly, Booklist, The Boston Herald, Ellery Queen, and others. Her short fiction has appeared in numerous anthologies and magazines. Winner of both the Euphoria Poetry Competition and the Eve of St. Agnes Poetry Award, she is also a Pushcart Prize nominee and First Prize winner of the Maxim Mazumdar Playwriting Competition, the Chronogram Literary Fiction Prize, Jerry Jazz Musician Short Fiction Award, and the Jean Paiva Memorial Fiction award, which included an NEA grant to read her fiction and poetry at Lincoln Center. A finalist in the McClaren, MSU and Henrico Playwriting Competitions, she has read her work at Barnes and Noble, The Knitting Factory, Mercy College, Merritt Books, the Colony Cafe and the Gryphon Bookstore. She has received grants from Poets and Writers, as well as the New York State Arts Council. Her story "A Day in the Life of Comrade Lenin" received an Honorable Mention in St. Martin's Best Fantasy and Horror Stories, and she was a winner in the Writer's Digest Competition in both the playwriting and essay categories.
March 20, 2012
Focusing on a Setting Detail
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
On Sunday, my daughter and I took advantage of the nice weather and went for a walk at the park.
It was like a hundred other walks at the park that we've taken over the years. Sunny and warm. There were lots of people and dogs walking. The birds were chirping loudly, since it's a protected habitat there. And my daughter wanted to play Poohsticks on the bridge for the eleventy-bazillionth time.
It was all very peaceful…and unremarkable. My daughter and I stood on the small bridge and waited to see which of the two sticks she threw into the fast-moving creek would come out quicker on the other side.
Then I saw him. A Mr. No-Shoulders, as my mother would call him. A snake, sunning himself on a rock.
Now, snakes in the Southern US are not remarkable. They're everywhere. And this winter they really didn't hibernate since it never really got cold. There are probably a ton of sleep-deprived, grumpy snakes around North Carolina right now.
But snakes usually wisely avoid Southerners. They don't want to see us and we don't particularly want to see them.
And this snake was watching my daughter and me closely, suspiciously. It was pretty in the sun, actually. Until it quickly leaped into the water to get away from us.
We continued on our walk…until we saw another snake sunning itself. I took a picture of one of the snakes (above) and didn't have a chance to ask my Scout son or outdoorsy husband what type it was. Water moccasin? Cottonmouth? Copperhead? Who knows?
I'm never a fan of writing setting. It's the kind of stuff that I skip over as a reader---unless there's a remarkable detail that makes me interested. If a snake intrudes on a normal, everyday walk at the park, I'm more interested. If the setting is atmospheric, if I feel the setting is setting a mood, if the setting is viewed through the eyes of a character and gives me more character insight….then I don't skip it.
How about you? How do you set apart your settings to make them pop and tie them into the story or indicate something interesting about your characters? Do you enjoy reading and writing setting?
March 18, 2012
The Exciting Future for Writers
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
Tonight I'm speaking with the creative writing students at my alma mater, Presbyterian College in SC. It's a great liberal arts school with a strong English department.
I'll be giving a reading (a short one, since I have little faith in my ability to be entertaining) and then talking a little about the writing business before taking questions.
And I'm planning on spreading the exciting news about being a 21st century writer—that it's the best time ever to be a writer.
I'm never sure if that message is getting out to writers, unless they're plugged into the online writing community. The talk of bankrupt book chains, struggling independent bookstores, and decreasing advances from traditional publishers might be eclipsing that message.
Ultimately, writers have got a new gateway—directly from us to our reader.
Why this is exciting:
We have choices. We can choose to follow the traditional publishing route of finding an agent and then a publisher. Or we can hone our work, get our manuscript professionally edited, formatted, and designed and self-publish our books. Or we can do both (I'm taking the hybrid approach, myself.)
We can develop a niche readership. Let's say that you are completely engulfed in working on projects that feature your favorite things—horror and marine biology. Before, if your idea wasn't commercial enough to get the strong sales needed for a slot on the bookstore shelves, then there was no hope for you. You could either publish the book yourself (with a great deal of expense and poor distribution) or else you could just share the story among your friends and family.
Now you can self-publish it…but for very little expense, compared to the old days. And your distribution is online—it has the potential of reaching millions, worldwide. In that group of millions is your niche reader…the ones who are also obsessed with horror and marine biology. The challenge for you is to get the word out to these readers, in an un-obnoxious way, that your book exists.
We can explore different genres. In the pre-ebook days, if you'd made a good name for yourself in one genre, it was pretty difficult to make the leap to another one. Some agents only represent one type of book. So, if you were a fantasy writer who wanted to write thrillers, your agent might not represent thrillers. You'd have to find another agent….by again going through the query process. And then you'd have to basically start from scratch to find a publisher.
Now, if you can write it, you can publish it. (It still might be wise to use a pen name if your name is particularly associated with a particular genre…that way you're not confusing your readers. You can still always give them the chance to read your other books by telling them you're writing another genre under a pseudonym.)
We can explore formats. Do we feel like experimenting with short stories or poetry? Previously, if we wanted to reach readers with those formats…well, it was going to be a long-shot. We'd be trying to get inclusion in anthologies, or literary magazines or publishers who put out chapbooks. There was a strong possibility that the stories or poetry would never find an audience, never get reviewed, never inspire, never receive feedback.
Now we can sell short stories or serials or poetry, ourselves. We can price them as a collection or price them as singles. We can even sell them at a low price as a loss leader to gain visibility for our other, full-priced work. We can experiment.
We can have complete creative control. Now, admittedly, this is a scary area sometimes. And I'm one who previously just wanted to write the stories and promote them and not have to think about formatting or covers or design.
Now, though, we can expand our thinking into other channels. We can envision what we'd like our cover to look like and the kinds of readers that we'd like to appeal to with them. We can set a tone. And, importantly, we can outsource these tasks to experts and have them complete our vision of our book. If that vision proves not to connect with the readers…well, we can change it. That's amazing, in itself.
We can put our books in readers' hands faster—keeping series continuity and making our connection with readers stronger. Traditional publishing takes a while. When I hand in a manuscript, it's a full 12 months before that book gets to the reader. Now, after I write a book and edit it, I send it to professional editors and cover designers and then to my reader. It takes about 1-2 months after I turn over my manuscript.
What do you look forward to most as a writer these days? How are you enjoying our new freedom? Does it still seem scary, or is it becoming exhilarating?
March 17, 2012
Twitterific
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
Below are the writing-related links I tweeted last week.
The free Writer's Knowledge Base search engine, designed by software engineer and writer Mike Fleming, makes all these links (now over 14,000) searchable. The WKB recently celebrated its one-year anniversary.
Sign up for the free monthly WKB newsletter for the web's best links and interviews: http://bit.ly/gx7hg1
Top Ten Pacing Tips: http://bit.ly/x3MR7a @aliciarasley
How to Resurrect a Stalled Manuscript: http://bit.ly/yBACsY
Getting the bookstores stocked for your signing: http://bit.ly/w81T2z @behlerpublish
Accenting passages: http://bit.ly/wCj6uH @LiteraryLab
Break down your story into a logline: http://bit.ly/AuxO0l @Gary_Fearon_
QR Code Fiction Series Seeks Stories: http://bit.ly/zOAd1T @ebooknewser
Sympathetic Characters: http://bit.ly/vZOf50
What 1 writer learned & the mistakes she made when epublishing: http://bit.ly/wepLtN @rachel_abbott
Science Fiction eBook Market Under the Microscope: http://bit.ly/w3D6S4 @KOMcLaughlin
Self-esteem & your online presence: http://bit.ly/zCPRrU @gripemaster
Top 5 Fake Bookish Twitter Feeds 1 Editor Wishes Existed: http://bit.ly/ztueMR @NewDorkReview
Article Writing 101: http://bit.ly/wQkE6G @juliemusil
An editor explains the different types of editing & how writers could improve their books: http://bit.ly/xWkXXR @TheresaStevens
The gift of music breathes life into stories: http://bit.ly/wtrkS2 @KMWeiland for @byRozMorris
Types of Numerical Terms: http://bit.ly/AAd5SH @writing_tips
Your Email Might Be Somebody's Last Straw: http://bit.ly/xbTOhW @rachellegardner
1 Writer Believes Amazon's KDP Select Is God's Gift to Authors: http://bit.ly/xiQBz4 @TweetTheBook for @thecreativepenn
Formatting your book with OpenOffice: http://bit.ly/ApcaZ9 @selfpubreview
How to Use Archetypes in Literature When Creating Characters for Your Novel: http://bit.ly/ztdU8X @writersdigest
A look at romance writing and romance subgenres: http://bit.ly/wT1svp @roniloren for @nicolebasaraba
7 Ways to Brainstorm the Best Title for Your Book: http://bit.ly/w8TRvO @beth_barany
Writers cons--editor and agent appointments: http://bit.ly/xz9oys @bob_mayer
The Tech-Empowered Writer (AWP Panel Resources): http://bit.ly/y7fuE4 @janefriedman
5 Steps to Write an Ending: http://bit.ly/w21Tl4
With KDP Select, Amazon Gains Authors' Exclusivity—Cheap: http://bit.ly/zG4PMb @laurahazardowen
Quick Mind Tricks for More Productivity: http://bit.ly/zdcyld @RealLifeE
Solidifying Scene Structure: http://bit.ly/zBPCWU @Mommy_Authors
How to Write an Effective Email Pitch: http://bit.ly/ySqpWp @alexisgrant
Script frenzy in April: http://bit.ly/xFhh63
How To Spot A Reader: http://bit.ly/xTtUCp @BookishWallace
Let go of the glass slipper dreams: http://bit.ly/xzcIYG @sarahahoyt
When Your Backstory Becomes Your Story: http://bit.ly/xpFLvw @KMWeiland
Dragging historical figures into the 21st century: http://bit.ly/yKHHUv @annerooney for @history_girls
Alliteration in picture books: http://bit.ly/yDgpPk @Kid_Lit
True Colors: Using Color Theory to Boost Your Writing: http://bit.ly/wKgUik @DiyMfa
7 tips for beginning a romance novel: http://bit.ly/wwhfxM @ruthieknox
Misadventures in publishing: http://bit.ly/x0fq9T
Brushing up on irony: http://bit.ly/zSPabF @readingape
Editing Tips–Tightening Scenes: http://bit.ly/xDS5EB @jamigold
Outline Failure: http://bit.ly/wRywfA @fantasyfaction
Tips for Inventing Names: http://bit.ly/yS5t4m @writing_tips
Do Writers Get Better the Longer They Write? http://bit.ly/xa4DNp @jodyhedlund
Writing Job Listing: Is It Legitimate or a Scam? http://bit.ly/xdnveX @luannschindler
Creativity Blocked? A Solution: http://bit.ly/AamTmh
Can Blogging Help Your Writing Process? http://bit.ly/A0C9Or @jhansenwrites
Powerful Dialog: Shorter Is Often Sweeter: http://bit.ly/yzCAIV
Target audience--what it means and tips for finding yours: http://bit.ly/xqRP33 @mjcache
Commonly Misused Words: http://bit.ly/ySm8kc @lynnettelabelle
Procrastination Tools for Writers #1: Recycling Your Old Manuscripts: http://bit.ly/yPZZU8 @JoWyton
An editor warns against arguing with a rejection letter: http://bit.ly/zoGpIg @behlerpublish
12 Dos and Don'ts of Blogging: http://bit.ly/ychuxj @writersdigest
How to Give a Character a Personality: http://bit.ly/yA6hM6
Structure for screenwriters: http://bit.ly/zEOvmL @jacobkrueger
Stay Independent or Sign on with a Publisher? http://bit.ly/xUMhZq @goblinwriter
Branding: Where Marketing and Writing Become Friends: http://bit.ly/ysiiO1 @JFBookman
Getting an agent - Mortal Kombat style: http://bit.ly/zQql2f @emlynchand
Tips for Turning Online Procrastination Time into Writing Research Time: http://bit.ly/zlRInS @lbgale
5 Tips for Publishing Ebooks: http://bit.ly/wLDhVR @FictionNotes
The Eightfold Way: The 8 Basic Don'ts for Novel Writers: http://bit.ly/ze5HYy @Bookgal
Digital Self-Publishing: Should Publishers Be Worried? http://bit.ly/yHXkPz @TheAtlantic
50 ways to get more people to like your Facebook page: http://bit.ly/AgQwuY @FacebookFlow
Rules vs. Practice—Prescriptive and Descriptive Grammar: http://bit.ly/wJMrNU @noveleditor
Creativity Is More Like Expertise Than Intelligence: http://bit.ly/z1FjtU
The Unexpected Ending: http://bit.ly/zu6nyi @dpeterfreund
An agent says that writers can't buy quality writing: http://bit.ly/wXRVPX @greyhausagency
When Nostalgia Gets in The Way of Your Writing Career: http://bit.ly/xWXD3A @Margo_L_Dill
Writers and Charlie Bucket Syndrome: http://bit.ly/zIC7s7 @BooksAreMyBFs
45 Synonyms for "Food": http://bit.ly/x9Te3B
Protecting our writing time: http://bit.ly/zNnzw4
The 7 Worst Mistakes Of Indie Authors And How To Fix Them: http://bit.ly/zvmOYL @thecreativepenn
A refresher on infinitives: http://bit.ly/wAuTD8 @heidiwriter
Transitions & Seeding – Essentials For Plausibility: http://bit.ly/zduYtx @BryanThomasS
Worldbuilding with horses--horses in space: http://bit.ly/A2glUu
7 Tips for Self-Editing Your Novel: http://bit.ly/zCvURw @MelissaKNorris
Establishing Style: http://bit.ly/wCFSba @Ravenrequiem13
Tips for writing a synopsis: http://bit.ly/wMPXky @writersherry
Writing multiple books a year--in less time than you think: http://bit.ly/yMFxwf
Can you get away with starting a book with a dream sequence? http://bit.ly/zAQ8sJ @Janice_Hardy
How to Think Like an Editor: http://bit.ly/zmJcer
Thoughts on writing evil characters: http://bit.ly/A7MvOV @sarahahoyt
A look at subplots: http://bit.ly/wqa7Ak @TheresaStevens
Anchor Scenes for Story Structure: http://bit.ly/yUXqlE @WriteAngleBlog
An agent on 13 things writers should know about Pinterest: http://bit.ly/z4nDeN @rachellegardner
Gradable words: http://bit.ly/wfhwOt @writing_tips
25 Inspiration Sources for the Discouraged Writer: http://bit.ly/yo7k8w @cherylrwrites
Author Blogging 101: The Power of Viewpoint: http://bit.ly/z9vcyH @jfbookman
5 things about traditional publishing that surprised 1 writer: http://bit.ly/xbyQxo
Turning your author website into a store: http://bit.ly/zGloxu @JenTalty
How reading fairy tales can help us with our writing: http://bit.ly/yMaFqA @rebeccaberto
On The Road: How To Produce Great Work While Traveling The World: http://bit.ly/yOe0Pa @jacobmcook
5 tips for building popularity--not just followers--on Twitter: http://bit.ly/xruil7
Eventually You'll Care Less (...and that's a good thing!): http://bit.ly/woot6I @SaundraMitchell
6 Reasons Authors Should Love Facebook's Timeline: http://bit.ly/yvkTBW @marcykennedy
Never Run Out of Blog Topics: http://bit.ly/z635es @MariaZannini
Flip the Script: Tell, Don't Show: http://bit.ly/ykWoKZ
Fire Your Muse: http://bit.ly/yyqwSY @jillkemerer
How 1 writer decides when to be part of an anthology: http://bit.ly/wHnDLD
If the coffeehouse is losing its appeal, remember your library: http://bit.ly/xrQbvj @fuelyourwriting
The Big 6 and Agency Pricing: http://bit.ly/xdx6bE @Porter_Anderson
The controversy over 4G human hotspots: http://bit.ly/yiUFfd @Porter_Anderson
Amazon singles--the sales figures: http://bit.ly/x1xa52 @Porter_Anderson
Tips for developing your short story into a novel: http://bit.ly/wHWLY3
5 eBook Publishing Experts To Watch: http://bit.ly/xrqnr2 @ebooknewser
Crafting Memorable Scenes in Fiction: http://bit.ly/zeEcjs @4kidlit
Why the Video Game Industry Needs Writers: http://bit.ly/w3AOcu @jasonboog
Failure–The Key Ingredient to the Successful Writing Career: http://bit.ly/AjYy3F @kristenlambTX
How to Climb Out Of Your Blogging Slump: http://bit.ly/z9crTS
How to speak publisher - D is for double-page spread: http://bit.ly/y7tsHL @annerooney
How to Pin Quotes on Pinterest: http://bit.ly/wXbJrL @galleycat
Entertainment vs. Truth: http://bit.ly/yIwrHM
Thoughts on writing strong female protagonists: http://bit.ly/zCsTxG @VioletteMalan
Meaningless motivations: http://bit.ly/xES6NM
A Quiz About Tactical Syntactical Revision: http://bit.ly/wzbsbq
8 things writers should know about Goodreads: http://bit.ly/FOacSQ @rachellegardner
Tips for writing historical fiction: http://bit.ly/xzmNlb @sanjidaoconnell
Are Your Promo Efforts Unique? Or Do You Blend In? http://bit.ly/z9BlOI @jodyhedlund
15 common grammar goofs: http://bit.ly/wTPgiB @copyblogger
Tips for moderating panels: http://bit.ly/FOarx6 @mistymassey
When Does Fan Fiction Cross an Ethical Line? http://bit.ly/zpYjmU @jamigold
Article Writing 101 (Part 2--Organization, Writing, & Markets): http://bit.ly/Ax9UuJ @juliemusil
Tips for creating interesting characters: http://bit.ly/zlqfYn
Are most agents qualified to negotiate contracts with publishers? : http://bit.ly/FObwoy @PassiveVoiceBlg
How to End a Novel With a Punch: http://bit.ly/xtqTSK
Diversity in writing: http://bit.ly/yPwAhW @YaHighway
10 Favorite Fictional Archers: http://bit.ly/FObVrc @tordotcom
Getting the ugly out: http://bit.ly/wFPzi6 @bookemdonna
3 ways your values can help you write your book: http://bit.ly/FOc2D9 @originalimpulse
The Average Book Has 64,500 Words: http://bit.ly/FQ92BI @PWxyz
Transitions - linking forward through the story: http://bit.ly/FQ9kIW @juliettewade
The secret of epub success: http://bit.ly/FQ9u2T @bob_mayer
How to Use Your Blog to Sell More Books: http://bit.ly/FQ9vnr @goblinwriter
Adding sensory details to our stories: http://bit.ly/FQ9U9q
Finding an Agent--Why You Can't Always Trust the Source: http://bit.ly/FQ9XSR @victoriastrauss
A guide to the Christian publishing market: http://bit.ly/FQafJp @rachellegardner
How Your Reading Material Can Influence Your Writing: http://bit.ly/FQaeFc
Tips for writing with vivid detail: http://bit.ly/FQanbP
March 15, 2012
One Writer's Editing Process
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
After my post Wednesday on writing multiple books a year, I got some questions on Twitter and via email about my editing approach. I thought I'd tackle that topic today.
First off, I want to stress that—like writing—not every editing method works out best for every writer.
This is my method and I'm probably fast at it because 1) I've practiced it a lot 2) I note all editorial feedback and use it for future books 3) I read quickly 4) I make quick decisions on my manuscript's changes.
I just finished a book on Wednesday and this is the process I'll use to edit the book:
I read the book from start to finish. As I'm reading, I put in chapter breaks (I don't put in chapter breaks as I draft the book.)
During my first read-through I fix easy errors like typos or poor word choice. I make sure there's variety in my sentence structure, I add strong verbs…I basically work to make the book better on a very basic level.
I also turn on Word's Track Changes and use their comment feature to make notes to myself. I make comments in the margins character description, setting details, character motivation, etc. That way I can go back and layer in those changes when I'm done reading through the book.
I make a pass for continuity errors, which are very frequent errors of mine, since I write in short chunks of time without looking at the previous day's writing. During this pass, I'll also make sure my scene transitions are smooth and that story elements are consistent.
This time I'm also going to make a special pass for echoes—unintentional word repetition. I always do a search for my favorite overused words/crutch words (just, nodded, sighed), but this will be a new pass for a related area since my last manuscript had a lot of echoes in it.
I'll make a pass for pace (this includes looking for conflict) and strong characterization. Is the story moving along at a fast enough clip? Are there boring parts? Do my characters pop? Are there weak characters who need additional fluffing up? I'll also eliminate some of my weak word choices (little, very, so, really, some, seem, maybe) and some filter words (to provide a deeper POV).
Because the timeline is so crucial to mysteries, I'll have a pass where I chart out suspect timelines and make sure my sleuth knew what she knew when she knew it. While I'm doing this, I make sure the solution makes sense and there were enough clues for the reader to reach the same conclusion my sleuth did. I also look for any potential plot holes during this timeline pass.
I go through and address the problems/issues that I found.
Then I read it through again to get the big picture view. And I make sure the subplots and main plot wrap up at the end. When I find more problems, I address those as I go.
Then usually I'll read it through again, quickly, and frequently aloud. And I make the corrections that my first reader (thanks, Mama) finds. And read it through again (yes, by this time I'm heartily sick of the book).
I can do this all in about a week. It's a different process than the creative process, so I can write at the same time and not feel any sense of burnout.
Then I immediately hand it all over to qualified professionals. :) In the case of my Memphis Barbeque mysteries and my Southern Quilting mysteries, the manuscript goes right to my managing editor. Then it goes to various copyeditors and proofreaders. In the case of my Myrtle Clover mysteries, I hire freelance editors to take a good, hard, critical look at my books. I've got a free directory of freelance editors here.
What's your editing process like? What types of things are you looking out for?
March 13, 2012
Writing Multiple Books a Year--It Doesn't Take as Much Time as You'd Think.
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
As a busy mom, I'm squeezing my writing time out every day. For you, you might be limited by a day job or an elderly parent, an illness, or other responsibilities.
I'm averaging writing between 3 1/2 and 4 books a year.
That might sound like I'm pouring an excessive amount of time each day on my writing.
I'm really not. I really can't.
I started, in January, to write the two books that I'm contracted under to finish by July. They are in two different series.
To do this, all I have to write is 3 1/2 pages a day until I hit 275 pages for each book. In one month, you end up with slightly over 100 pages.
I'll admit that I'm a pretty quick editor, but that's just from practice and a knowledge of the kinds of screw-ups I typically make. After each book goes through my publisher's editorial process, I have even more data on the types of errors I should watch out for the next time.
I wake up at 4:50 a.m. , an hour before I get my children up. I usually write nearly three pages in about 40 minutes. The rest of the time I check emails, respond to messages on social media, and plan blog posts.
I don't have a full outline for my stories. I do have an idea where I want to go. But I always know what I want to write the next day. I also have a note reminding me where I left off the day before. This helps me jump into my story when I open up the document on my computer.
The rest of each day's writing goal I finish outside my son's high school while I'm waiting in the carpool line for about 20 minutes.
On good days where the words are really flowing, I'll write more. Days when I have unexpected dead space, I'll write a little more.
It doesn't really take that much time. And most people won't want to write three or four books a year. One is enough for many.
For one book, you again just need to think about what makes a reasonable goal. I'm pretty fond of a page or a page and a half for writers who are just trying to establish a regular writing habit. Or maybe if you set yourself a weekly goal, instead of a daily one.
I think the problems crop up when you have a goal that's really big…like a chapter a day. I've only once set a chapter a day goal and and I was sitting right on top of a very scary deadline that had sneaked up on me.
Let's say your goal is 1.5 pages a day. That's 270 pages in just 180 days. That goal still leaves you half a year to edit, even if your first draft is a disaster and you're a slow editor. A page a day gets you 275 pages in a little over 9 months.
I found I could always hit a page a day or seven pages a week. This was when I had a toddler in the house and life was especially crazy. It might mean that I had to write two pages some days to play catch-up (sick baby, sick mama, travel, holidays), but I could definitely hit that goal on a weekly basis.
I also noticed that if I wrote regularly, I could hop right into my story again with very little trouble.
If I finish a book early, then I start right in with the next book.
The most important thing is not to get discouraged. Writing a book can seem like this tremendous challenge. If we break it down into achievable blocks, it keeps us motivated.
Another tip? Don't be critical of your first draft. It's fixable. :)
How do you set and hit your goals? Do you have page goals or time-related goals? Daily or weekly goals?
March 11, 2012
Protecting Our Writing Time
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
There's always going to be a million other things for us to do besides writing.
When we're not at our day job, our leisure time is limited by other demands on our time….housework, yard work, errands, and family responsibilities.
Recently, my friends have been very understanding about how much time I've got to take for writing and writing related promo. When they call me to see if I can talk on the phone or have coffee or meet for lunch, they'll ask me what my day looks like. Do I need to write more today? Am I on deadline?
This is because I've been honest with them in the past couple of years. "I'd love to go but I've still got a few pages to write today. Can we meet tomorrow, instead?"
Ultimately, I think the only way others will respect our writing time is if we take it seriously, ourselves.
Ways to get others to respect our writing time:
Tell people we're working on our writing. I think using the word work helps people to realize that we're taking it seriously.
Explain that we've got a goal to meet or a deadline to make (even if it's our own.)
Treat it seriously, especially if we're not yet published. That's the only way to finish a book and move on the path of publication—by devoting time to writing.
Remember that to keep friends and family on board with us for our writing, that we don't always need to say no. Saying no is one reason that they might grow jealous or resentful of our writing. If we have to turn down an invitation one day, it's probably good to try right then to plan for a better day or time to meet up.
Learn to say no. This is a tough one for me. But especially if we work at home, it's important to be able to tell people no. I've been a volunteering mom for years and years--but I've now gotten to the point where I have to pick and choose what I spend my time doing. It's not that the volunteering isn't worthwhile...it's just that that was all I ended up doing when I opened myself up to it. At this point, I'm able to politely say no via email and on the phone....and I'm working on being able to say no in person.
Other ways to get our goals knocked out so we're more available during our "free" time:
Write first. Or write last. Depending on your circadian schedule, either write first thing in the morning or last thing at night. Either way, try to knock out your goal for that day…and make it an easy goal. There's nothing like a tough goal for getting discouraged.
Then, whatever else we write that day is icing on the cake. And we do free up a little extra time for ourselves for whatever else we want to do…because we respected our writing time enough to address it right away.
How do you handle the family/friend/writing time balance? How do you get the rest of the world to respect your writing time?