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Developing Thematic Ideas in Your Fiction

Guest Post by Jack Smith

I tend to like fiction that can be read on several different levels.  It’s not just a good story; it also points to abstract ideas of various kinds—to themes beyond the literal level of character and plot.  Perhaps it suggests something about the nature of evil, about personal identity, or about the nature of freedom.   How heavy should the machinery of idea be?  Naturally, this depends on what your purpose is and who your audience is.  I won’t take that question on here, but I will say that there are several thematic techniques that can work seamlessly with story.  You don’t have to trowel on ideas like icing on the cake.

What are these techniques?  I’ll deal with three.

Repetition.  When a given word, thing or place, or action is repeated several times, it can begin to mean more than what it would mean if it occurred just once.  For instance, if the story has to do with freedom from different types of oppressive situations or environments, and if the word “cramped” is used in several different contexts, the reader may get an existential sense for the various ways humans can be cramped.  Perhaps your character feels cramped in her small house; perhaps her menial job cramps her; perhaps she feels cramped in her marriage.  And then perhaps synonyms of the word cramped can be introduced: “hampered,” “hindered,” “impeded.”  The cluster of words centered around this idea of being cramped can help illuminate the various kinds of threats to human freedom—and the nature of freedom itself.  It’s possible to find ways to thread your story or novel with the ideas suggested by a given key word.

If a particular thing, or place, is mentioned repeatedly, it can also take on meanings beyond its literal existence.  For instance, if your protagonist’s house has a view of the mountains, and your protagonist is often at her window looking out at it, this might suggest a desire to break free from life’s ordinary, mundane restraints and embrace the wildness and freedom of nature.  What are the various properties of nature that suggest this freedom?  The mountain could become symbolic of all the qualities of freedom she seeks, whether she can obtain this kind of freedom or not.

An incident, if it is repeated several times, can also take on larger meanings beyond the literal.  If the protagonist’s husband is always leaving the house to go to his high- powered job, and the protagonist feels stuck there with little future ahead of her, then this constant exiting of the husband can take on larger meanings.  It might suggest different societal spheres for men and women: the opening of opportunities for men in career fields (as the husband steps outside) and the closing off of opportunities for women (as the door shuts each time on the wife).

Development of key events with suggestive imagery.  Imagine that your protagonist undergoes a sudden illness.  If you provide enough suggestive details, you can point to an idea at a more abstract level—perhaps the fragile nature of human existence.  Your story isn’t just about this one sick person with this sudden illness; it’s also about human vulnerability period, the tenuous nature of human existence—or rather it can be.  Through apt metaphors—comparing the illness to falling in a manhole, having a plane crash on one’s house, being hit by a stray bullet—the reader will begin to see your story at a more general level: how humans can suddenly be struck down with no apparent defense.


Key passage.  Sometimes character thought or reflection can suggest a larger frame of reference, especially if the language is metaphorical.  Imagine that your protagonist is a vulture capitalist—already a metaphor.  He thinks to himself: “I’m the spider and they’re the fly.  It’s a matter of sucking them dry.”  With this image and others, one might get at the very essence of vulture capitalism—beyond the surface-level story of the machinations of a particular vulture capitalist.

A work of fiction that takes on multiple meanings is, to me, more interesting than one that has only a character and a storyline.  I want to think beyond these to larger implications.  A story has to work as a story first, though, with a strong character and an interesting character arc.  But look for ways to raise your short story or novel to levels beyond the literal.  Don’t force it, but when you see opportunities, take advantage.

Jack Smith is author of the novel Hog to Hog, which won the George Garrett FictionPrize (Texas Review Press. 2008), and is also the author of Write and Revise for Publication: A 6-Month Plan for Crafting an Exceptional Novel and Other Works of Fiction, published earlier this year by Writer’s Digest. His novel ICON will be published in June by Serving House Books.

Over the years, Smith’s short stories have appeared in North American Review, Night Train, Texas Review, and Southern Review, to name a few. He has also written some 20 articles for Novel & Short Story Writer’s Market, as well as a dozen or so pieces for The Writer. He has published reviews in numerous literary journals, including Ploughshares, Georgia Review, Missouri Review, Prairie Schooner, American Review, Mid-American Review, and the Iowa Review.

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Twitterific Writing Links

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Twitterific links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 23,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.

Write Down Your Dreams to Release Creative Blocks:  http://ow.ly/wIm5r @losapala

How Stress Assassinates Creativity:  http://ow.ly/wIma5 @_RobbieBlair_

An Author’s Perspective on the Hachette-Amazon Battle:  http://ow.ly/wXLIh @author_sullivan

Could The Term “Women’s Fiction” Be Bad For Authors?  http://ow.ly/wXUYx @randysusanmeyer @Porter_Anderson

Do Big Publishers Make Sense Anymore?  http://ow.ly/wIl9C @ShariJStauch

A YouTube channel focused on topics for writers: http://ow.ly/wU1O9

How to write an author bio that sells books:  http://ow.ly/wWHUn @zackheim

Different ways to end scenes:  http://ow.ly/wKrw5

Why a Writing Routine Matters and How to Start One:  http://ow.ly/wKrqo @stacyennis

Putting yourself into your writing (techniques for memoir, non-fic, and more):  http://ow.ly/wKrWW @Belinda_Pollard

How to be sure you’ve got a compelling plot:  http://ow.ly/wKtOI

Screenwriting: 6 Reasons Dialogue Is Your Enemy:  http://ow.ly/wKsYh @bang2write

5 Tips for Writing Historical Fiction:  http://ow.ly/wKrCn @writersdigest

A refresher: how to use quotation marks with punctuation:  http://ow.ly/wKsRh @writers_write

Character Skills and Talents: Survival Skills:  http://ow.ly/wKt92 @angelaackerman

7 Book Marketing Strategies Guaranteed Not to Lead to Sales:  http://ow.ly/wKtmJ @NathanielTower

Can a Small Press Book Get a New Life with a Big Publisher? http://ow.ly/wImdo @Dear_Editor

Historical Fiction: 3 Tips for Leaving the Slush Pile Behind: http://ow.ly/wIlnm @tweetonsisters

Characters Under Stress:  http://ow.ly/wIl60 @hayleymckenzie1

All about ‘high concept’:  http://ow.ly/wIlVl @beccaquibbles

The New Golden Age of Short Fiction: 12 Reasons to Write a Short Story This Month: http://ow.ly/wQSzo  @Anne R. Allen

Getting Our Work Out There (A Look at Wattpad):  http://ow.ly/wXHx6

Email List Building: Create a Sign Up Incentive:  http://ow.ly/wIm7E @writerplatform

For Those Considering Self-Publishing:  http://ow.ly/wImgJ @RateYourStory @koryshrum

The Art of the Done List: Harnessing the Power of Progress:  http://ow.ly/wIl27 @99u

What Makes a Media Release Effective?  http://ow.ly/wIlka @LisaHallWilson

Killing the Top 10 Sacred Cows of Indie Publishing: No One Buys New Writers: http://ow.ly/wImsP  @deanwesleysmith

The Importance of Letting ‘Em See You Sweat http://ow.ly/wIjqw @LisaCron

What Poets Know That Most Writers Don’t:  http://ow.ly/wImnn @schwamb

The 5 Biggest Risks 1 Author has Taken:  http://ow.ly/wIm31 @BadRedheadMedia

Digital first publishing and the troubled fortunes of digital first publishers: http://ow.ly/wT7WU @dearauthor

10 Tips for Writing Children and a Descriptive List: http://ow.ly/wHCaL @SharlaWrites

3 Reasons Why We Can’t Afford Not to Go to Writing Conferences: http://ow.ly/wHCdV @magdalenaball

Why You Need an Editor (And How to Save Money Finding One):  http://ow.ly/wHBTq @sabsk

Choose the best genre for your book on Amazon:  http://ow.ly/wWHuA @zackheim

How clichés and jargon can ruin your writing: http://ow.ly/wHC0d @AnthonyEhlers

New Author? Simple Steps to Success:  http://ow.ly/wHBUA @christinenolfi

Straying from the Party Line: The Bourne Identity:  http://ow.ly/wHBYH @cockeyedcaravan

How Much Time Book-to-TV Adaptations Get Out of a Page: http://ow.ly/wHBSo @galleycat

Showing through Point of View:  http://ow.ly/wHC8F @fictorians

Writing For Good:  http://ow.ly/wHC6h @randysusanmeyer @btmargins

Why Your First Draft Isn’t Crap: http://ow.ly/wHBWO @Adderworld

Positive and Negative Goals for Protagonists:  http://ow.ly/wHC3S @jennycrusie

3 Tips for a Happy Author-Publisher Relationship:  http://ow.ly/wF6xj @marygkeeley

The Absolutely True Diary of a Socially Challenged Author: http://ow.ly/wF5oQ @gripemaster

Hemingway’s 7 Fiction Writing Tips:  http://ow.ly/wF6al @Danesh

When an agent relationship isn’t working:  http://ow.ly/wF629 @janelebak

Why Writers Should be on Twitter and How to Get There: http://ow.ly/wF5x6 @gretaboris @LitCentralOC

When Should We Skip a Scene in Our Story? http://ow.ly/wF6Gg @jamigold

How to Value your Writing: http://ow.ly/wF6CY

Twitter Mute is a Savior from Spamming Indie Authors:  http://ow.ly/wShzl @Goodereader

Making it as a writer–safe accountability– http://ow.ly/wF7L8 @jennaavery

A writer’s thoughts on NA: http://ow.ly/wF9Ea @MissDahlELama

5 Ways to Create Conflict in Your Story:  http://ow.ly/wO0dI  (from ScreenCraft):

How to promote your book on Amazon:  http://ow.ly/wF8Np @wileyexchanges

Fictional Reality:  http://ow.ly/wF9NB @biljanalikic

Will printed books outlast printed money, or football?  http://ow.ly/wT8a0 @MikeShatzkin

Executing story turning points:  http://ow.ly/wF9Y7 @medkno

I Finished My Novel……Now What?  http://ow.ly/wF77w @growwithstacy

The Editorial Process:  http://ow.ly/wF80I @rachellegardner

Keeping it simple: On plain language:  http://ow.ly/wF700 @niemanstory

How to Write a Stupid Character: http://ow.ly/wF8Dp @KMWeiland

A recap of @Janefriedman ‘s keynote address from the PubSmart Con: http://ow.ly/wF8qG @K8Tilton @MartinaABoone

Carpe Diem–Create Something: http://ow.ly/wF7lH @ChuckWendig  {lang}

Stock photos that don’t suck:  http://ow.ly/wSzz3 @dustin

What Happened to the Harlequin Romance? http://ow.ly/wFae4 @newyorker @AdrienneRaphel

Novel Writing and Themes:  http://ow.ly/wF9ql @EMCastellan

Poets and Poems: Robert Frost, Wendell Berry, and the Woods:  http://ow.ly/wSg5q @gyoung9751

Series: Keeping Things Fresh Without Alarming Readers: http://ow.ly/wQA34

Plotting, Pacing, and Crossing Over:  http://ow.ly/wzF7R  @AnneGBrown  @writerunboxed

A Synopsis Checklist:  http://ow.ly/wCdDB

How to Write Your Story in 6 Steps:  http://ow.ly/wCefM @ClaireJDeBoer

3 Steps to Choosing The Perfect Freelance Editor:  http://ow.ly/wzGAO @ebooksandkids

What is writer’s block secretly telling you? Wit and wisdom from bestselling author @JamieFord:  http://ow.ly/wRacA @JulieMusil

Self-Publishing #Fails : http://ow.ly/wChlt @JFBookman

How to Boost Creativity with an Idea Log:  http://ow.ly/wzFFE @CherylRWrites

Isaac Asimov on Lifelong Learning, Science vs. Religion, and the Role of SF in Advancing Society:  http://ow.ly/wzHnl @brainpicker

Promo and Marketing Materials that Work: http://ow.ly/wCdve @erin_bowman

Skimming: Never a Good Thing:  http://ow.ly/wCfFt @FaeRowen

Writing a book using 15 minute increments: http://ow.ly/wzFyR @BookEmDonna

Amazon and Hachette Go to War:  http://ow.ly/wPF0Y @HughHowey

Story and the Dimensions of Character:  http://ow.ly/wzFdI @shalvatzis

Publisher-retailer conflicts are affecting readers. Chat on #EtherIssue at 11 ET,  4 p.m. BST (Now) with @Porter_Anderson

Tips for creating a fictional American town:  http://ow.ly/wzGrf

Be Specific When Writing Reviews:  http://ow.ly/wCgAE @JeriWB

Will publishers still be around in 10 years time? Actions to embrace:  http://ow.ly/wPuYG @Porter_Anderson @fakebaldur @brianoleary

Your Character’’s Flaw is His Greatest Strength:  http://ow.ly/wzIjM @monicamclark

What Type of Editor Does My Manuscript Need?  http://ow.ly/wChpp @WriterlyTweets

Why We Should Read Poetry: http://ow.ly/wCdqT @AnnieNeugebauer

Realistic vs. Logic:  http://ow.ly/wzH5V @CharleeVale

Money, Writing And Life:  http://ow.ly/wQMBo from @JaneFriedman and @TheCreativePenn

Money, Writing And Life:  http://ow.ly/wQMBo from @JaneFriedman and @TheCreativePenn

Traditional Publishing or Indie Publishing?  http://ow.ly/wCeqH @LynnetteLabelle

How To Spot A Fake Amazon Review:  http://ow.ly/wCdXO

Writing in more than one genre: http://ow.ly/wzGf6 @scottthewriter

Writing Romantic Suspense that Sizzles:  http://ow.ly/wzFRe

Writing Around The Day Job:  http://ow.ly/wChct @rosieclaverton

The Secret Sauce for Indie Publishers: Attitude: http://ow.ly/wCeaQ @ninaamir

Themes to Explore in Your Writing: Strength:  http://ow.ly/wChfd @birgitte_rasine

5 Tips for Running a Writers’ Circle:  http://ow.ly/wzFiL @standoutbooks @btmargins

When Retailers & Publishers Collide: Who Gets Hurt?  http://ow.ly/wNyue @Porter_Anderson @victoriastrauss

Simple techniques to survive in the screenwriting trenches:  | My Blank Page http://ow.ly/wzEXp

Should You Read About Writing? http://ow.ly/wzHvl @jaelmchenry @writerunboxed

Killing off favorite characters… can we do it? Should we?? http://ow.ly/wzItx @JungleReds

Finish that Draft of Your Story Now:  http://ow.ly/wCgoK @plotwhisperer

Stephen King: How I wrote Carrie:  http://ow.ly/wCdie @guardianbooks

Why Write fiction? The Page versus the Screen:  http://ow.ly/wzHel @CSLakin

Review: PDF to InDesign Conversion Software for Book Layout:  http://ow.ly/wzGiF @JFBookman

Publishers and Games Developers Face Culture Clash: http://ow.ly/wL8vr @MarkPiesing

Publishing’s Metamorphoses: Recap of Berlin Forum: http://ow.ly/wL0j5 @Porter_Anderson @HughHowey

The Ultimate Story Checklist using The Bourne Identity:  http://ow.ly/wxPXd @cockeyedcaravan

10 Great Authors Who Disowned Their Own Books:  http://ow.ly/wxQvH @io9

A writer reports in on his first Kickstarter effort:  http://ow.ly/wxNPI

4 Pieces of Facebook Advice You Can Ignore:  http://ow.ly/wxRHi @lisahallwilson

Targeting Your Readers One Headshot at a Time:  http://ow.ly/wl71m  @givemeyourteeth

3 surprising facts about self-publishing:  http://ow.ly/wl7iA   @Belinda_Pollard

Sometimes – It’s Who You Know:  http://ow.ly/wmHyw  @rachellegardner

The Unsung Benefits of an English Degree: http://ow.ly/wl8WE  @bookriot

Confessions of a Failed Writer:  http://ow.ly/wmGO2  @0jnolan

Choosing Your Screenplay Genre:  http://ow.ly/wmGQ3  @screencrafting

What is the Future of Bookstores?  13 Divergent Views from Publishing Insiders:  http://ow.ly/wmGYk  @CarmenConnects

7 Tips for Making Stories Into Roleplaying Campaigns:  http://ow.ly/wxPho

Paranormal or literary? Which age group is the book for? How to categorise your novel:  http://ow.ly/wxOAY  @roz_morris

Turn Your Main Character’s World Upside Down: http://ow.ly/wxOK7  @joanyedwards

The police procedural subgenre: http://ow.ly/wJOxO  @mkinberg

Is Honesty the Most Important Trait in a Likable Character?  http://ow.ly/wxQ9I  @KMWeiland

11 Inspiring Quotes from the World’s Best Writers:  http://ow.ly/wxQoC  @LauraPepWu

The importance of a professional email address: http://ow.ly/wxRmy

Do You Write by Heart or Head? Technique Overload:  http://ow.ly/wxNLs  @cateartios

Transitioning from Fiction to Nonfiction: 4 Easy Steps: http://ow.ly/wK1Uj  @NinaAmir

An easy way to make your plot plausible : control your novel’s timeline: http://ow.ly/wxOoV  @roz_morris

3 Ways Creative Writing Shakes Your Complacency:  http://ow.ly/wxQH3  @vgrefer

Words describing tastes of foods:  http://ow.ly/wxLlb

News of and reaction to a publishing hackathon: http://ow.ly/wKRsk  @philipdsjones  @Porter_Anderson

30 Ways to Promote Blog Posts:  http://ow.ly/wxP7C  @writers_write

45 ways to avoid using the word ‘very’:  http://ow.ly/wxPTV  @writers_write

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Getting Our Work Out There (A Look at Wattpad)

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Visibility and discoverability are words that I encounter time and time again on the industry blogs I follow.  There are a lot of books in the marketplace right now.  How can you make your book stand out…and find readers?

The best approach for obtaining visibility (in the current climate…things change rapidly) is to compose a lot of well-written books.

I’ve been pretty happy about my visibility on retail sites (90% Amazon, really), but I keep wondering how to reach more readers.  I’ve got avid readers who  I’m determined to keep  happy.  But how do I reach out to other demographics?  Can I reach other demographics?

One publishing platform I’ve been hearing a lot about for the last year or so is Wattpad.  There are authors I respect over there: Joanna Penn and Lindsay Buroker among them.  They wrote glowing recommendations of the platform. As Joanna put it in her January post “How to Use Wattpad as an Author” : “How does Wattpad sell books? It’s about building a fan-base for your writing, as opposed to your tweets or blog posts.”

You’d think I’d have gotten on Wattpad much quicker than I did.  I was even, for heaven’s sake, on a virtual panel with the Head of Content of Wattpad, Ashleigh Gardner, back in November for Dan Blank’s Get Read online conference. I was fascinated hearing her talk about the readers there: 25 million readers and growing.  And another big number: 85% mobile (across all devices).  In addition, it’s supposed to be a good way to gain international readers.

Wattpad is free to upload to and to read from. So this is for writers who maybe already have a perma-free book published or who want to hook readers with one.

I did have reservations about using Wattpad, which is why it has taken me so long to get on there:

1)      It’s where the young people are.  I have an older readership and my youngest protagonist is in her sixties.  My oldest is in her mid-eighties.  Wattpad has a lot of fan fiction and YA and I was worried I wouldn’t fit in.

2)      I don’t want to write serials.  I love the idea of writing serials, I love the way readers respond to serials…but I didn’t want to be on the hook for a serial while I’m under contract to Penguin-Random.

So…this was me basically just not understanding the platform.

Because you don’t have to upload the book as a serial…in the sense that you’re writing it as you go along.  You can take your already published book and stick it up there, chapter by chapter.  So…no pressure.

And…yes, that’s where the young people are.  But it’s growing every day.  And…don’t I need to find some young readers, too?

Also I saw…an open niche.  Okay, 25 million readers.  How many cozy mysteries could I find on the site?  I found one.  Exactly one.  And two chapters of another.

It sounded like there would be very little competition.  And that, honestly, is how I got a toehold at Amazon—I was one of the earliest self-published cozy mystery authors to show up there.

If you’re interested in Wattpad, it’s very easy to get published there.  Of course, I did kill most of my Thursday there because I had to read everything about it that I possibly could and figure out best practices and site etiquette.  I’ll share what I learned, below.

Getting started on Wattpad:

First I set up a user name and profile (since we’re authors, it’s a good idea to use our real name or the name we write under as our user name).  I put a picture of myself up there and stated that I was from North Carolina, USA.  They had other basic info on there for Wattpad’s benefit, but not to be shared on the site.

Then I clicked “create.”

I put in the title.

I copy-pasted from the book’s Word document into the box on the screen.  But I wasn’t wild about the way it looked, format-wise. So I copy-pasted the first chapter into Notepad and saved it as a .txt and then hit ‘upload a file.’ It looked better to me.

Just like Amazon, I chose categories for the book.

I added tags for the book (cozy mystery, mystery, amateur sleuth, etc.)

I rated the book’s content…we can choose G, PG, etc.

I linked to the book’s Amazon page. (Advanced tab: External Link).

After we ‘save and publish,’ we have the opportunity to click on the square where our cover would be and upload a cover file.

We can also then add a book description.  You click “My Works” below your profile name and picture and then select “Manage” next to your book’s title.

That was about it.  It looks like this.

As for the best practices, this is what I was able to find out:

Like all sites, begging for people to read your content is considered in poor taste, although apparently they do have a special club (forums are called ‘clubs’ there)  set up for writers to do so. I didn’t look for that club.  :)

Upload regularly.  There were complaints from readers about getting hooked on stories and the writer neglected to upload a chapter for weeks.  Wattpad recommends updating your profile to explain the delay, if you encounter some sort of unexpected issue you’re dealing with.

But only upload a chapter at a time. Apparently, to game the system over there, you want each chapter to get votes and comments, which increases visibility and readers.  As each chapter uploads, you get fresh opportunities to hook more readers.  So if you put all the chapters in at once, you lose out on chances to get in front of more readers.

Don’t blackmail readers (!) Apparently, there are some writers on the site who have withheld the next chapter until they reached a certain number of ‘votes’ (which are sort of like ‘likes’).

If your book is part of a series, you may want to put the series title in with the book title.

Replying to comments is considered a best practice. So, this isn’t like Amazon where nothing on earth would compel me to respond to a review there.

Comments can be deleted…but I have a hard time imagining a time when this would be appropriate.

When you upload another chapter, an email or notification goes out to your followers on Wattpad.

It’s considered all right to put a short call-to-action at the end of each uploaded chapter.  There’s no way to hyperlink, though.   So, write something like:

“Progressive Dinner Deadly” and other Myrtle Clover mysteries are available in ebook, audio, and print formats from Amazon, Nook, Kobo, and other retailers. Follow me on Twitter (elizabethscraig), sign up for my newsletter, or visit my website at Elizabethspanncraig.com for more information.  Hope you’ll enjoy the book. 

At the bottom of our profile page, there is a message board.  We can broadcast messages to our followers there and readers can contact us there.

Many writers will post a couple of chapters from their sequel on Wattpad as a teaser…without putting the entire book up.  This is considered fine as long as you put {Excerpt} in the title somewhere so readers understand no other chapters are forthcoming.

There are several extras and social media options there.  You can cast your characters with movie stars (for fun, obviously, and to give readers an idea what your characters might look like). You can dedicate chapters to particularly loyal fans/commenters on the site.  You can upload pictures and YouTube videos that correspond to various chapters.  In other words…you can add some multimedia aspects to your story or multimedia aspects that complement it.  I’m not quite there yet, but I think it’s very cool.

Wattpad’s help center is here.

That’s all I’ve got so far since I’ve only been on it for a few hours and have no followers or readers yet. I was willing to give it a go.   Basically, It seemed like a good way to get my work in front of more and different readers.

Have you had any experience on Wattpad?  How have you tried any other new ways to put your book in front of readers?

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Series—Keeping Things Fresh Without Alarming Readers

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

I’m an avid reader of mystery writer M.C. Beaton’s (pen name for Marion Chesney’s) books and have been for many years.  I keep track of her releases and order them when they become available.  She writes a few series under different names, but the Hamish MacBeth series is my favorite and has had a huge influence on me.  Beaton’s books are the reason I’m writing cozy mysteries.

One of the reasons I track her books, apart from my own enjoyment, is because she’s successfully kept this particular series going for 30 books.  (My series with the most books is only at 6 books…working on the 7th now).  And Beaton has not only retained her readers, she’s increased her readership.  She’s recently become active on social media (years ago I couldn’t even find a photo or contact info for her online…when I was already all over the place online) and that seems to have also helped gain her readers.

I remembered the other day that she had a fairly recent Hamish release and I hopped on Amazon to order the book.  Usually her books are highly rated by readers who are just as avid as I am. This time I was surprised to see some bad reviews and scrolled down out of curiosity…interested to see what readers were saying.  This isn’t my usual approach, since readers are terrible about giving spoilers on Amazon, but I wanted to see what they were saying this time.

Readers who gave negative reviews mentioned an increase in the number of bodies, a darker feel to the (previously cozy) series…a couple even saying it read like noir, complaints about out-of-character behavior by the beloved sleuth, and even readers claiming they thought the book had been ghost-written (!).

Of course, this made me want to read the book even more, to see if I’d get the same impression, myself.

So…this is a very long-running, very successful series.  Maybe Beaton wanted to make some changes to keep the stories fresh or to keep her interest in the series from waning.  Some readers may have been more responsive to her changes than others.  Maybe the changes happened too swiftly for the series?   This all made me ask:

What do you do when you’re wanting to keep a long-running series fresh?

It’s probably more difficult to…

Change the protagonist’s personality.  Readers were saying that Hamish’s personality seemed different—that his response to stressful situations was inappropriate.  Personality changes can be pulled off, but there needs to be good reasons for the changes that readers can believe.

Change the tone of the books.  Tricky.  Readers were saying that this book had a “noir” feel to it…and it’s a cozy.  If the whole rest of the series is light and you introduce a dark book or vice versa—there may be some pushback.

Other ideas that might be easier to try:

Introducing new and possibly recurring characters into a series. Obviously, these would present different opportunities for interaction with the protagonist—conflict, friendship, love interest, antagonist.

Adding an ongoing conflict/trial/challenge for the protagonist to address. This could come in the form of another character or a health, job, or emotional challenge.

Adding a continuing storyline. If we haven’t had a continuing storyline from book to book, we could consider adding one to offer the opportunity for character growth.

Showing a different side to the main character (but one that fits in with his or her overall personality).

Taking the characters on a road trip (be careful here).

Providing opportunities for character growth (particularly with a continuing storyline, as mentioned above).

Of course, if all else fails and we really feel boxed in by our series and are longing to do something very different, the very safest course might be…to start another series.

Have you got a long series of books?  How have you managed series change?  As a reader, have you noticed instances where an author has pulled it off…and where they’ve struggled?

 

 

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Transitioning from Fiction to Nonfiction: 4 Easy Steps

by Nina Amir, @NinaAmir

There are many reasons for novelists to enter the realm of nonfiction. However, moving into this unknown territory can feel hard and scary, especially for those who like to write fiction by the seat of their pants. For planners, it’s not quite so difficult.

Even though by nature I’m a seatser, I’m a huge advocate of planning. The reason why is simple: Planning helps a book succeed—no matter the genre. It provides a writing guide for a marketable book.

Here are four steps to take to plan out your nonfiction book and end up with a guide to take you from start to finish.

Step 1: Decide why you want to write your nonfiction book. It’s always important to be clear about your goals. You want your book to help you accomplish them. Will your book help you sell your fiction? Do you just want to write something different? Do you want to build a business around your book? I suggest you write nonfiction that dovetails with your fiction in some way to help you create a successful writing career. In this way you can create a brand that works for all the books you write. Also, be sure the book you write fulfills your purpose, whatever that may be.

Step 2: Create a business plan for your book. This is where the planning comes in. A business plan for a book follows the format of a book proposal. It’s only a proposal if you propose the plan to a publisher, and even a publisher considers a proposal a business plan. If you self-publish, this is your business plan.

Going through the process of accumulating the information for a business plan will help you:

Determine if your idea has a high likelihood of selling.
Craft your idea into a marketable book.
Hone your idea into one that is unique in its category.
Polish your idea into one that is necessary in the marketplace and in the category.

Accomplish all of this by conducting a market and competitive analysis and then retooling your idea based upon this information. (I suggest that you accumulate all the information necessary for a business plan at some point. You can learn more about this process in my book, The Author Training Manual: Develop Marketable Ideas, Craft Books That Sell, Become the Author Publishers Want, and Self-Publish Effectively.)

When you have finished these two sections of your business plan, complete three more sections:

The Overview: This is a brief summary of your book (a paragraph or two) that reads like back-of-the-book copy. It also includes a pitch for your book, a 75-word (or so) elevator speech. Mention just after this the length of your final manuscript, any backmatter, illustrations, special features, etc., you plan to include. Also compile a list of benefits—the value you will provide to readers.

Now you have a clear picture of what you plan to write. You really know what you are writing about.

The List of Chapters: This is your table of contents. When you are done with the overview, do a mind mapping exercise or simply brainstorm all the ideas you might have about content for your book. Throw it all out there on a white board, poster board or computer mind mapping program. Don’t stop until you run out of ideas.

Then organize this information into chapters. You likely will end up with major subjects, those that are obviously chapters, and minor ones that go with the major ones. The minor topics can become subheadings in your chapters.

Type this up into a table of contents for your book.


The Chapter Summaries: It’s now time to flesh out your idea with a chapter-by-chapter synopsis. For each one of your chapters, write a paragraph or two describing the content. This will help you remember exactly what you plan to write.

Review all your material and evaluate if the book you have planned accomplishes your Step 1 goals. Also evaluate if it is unique in its category as well as necessary in its category and market based on the information you accumulated in Step 2.

Step 3: Create a Writing Guide

Create a two-step writing guide based on the work you have done previously. Use it to write a marketable book and one that fulfills your goals—the reason you want to write nonfiction.

Create a computer folder called “[Your Book Title] Writing Guide.” Place within it:

The Overview of your book (from your book’s business plan).
The List of Chapters.
The Chapter Summaries.




Create individual chapter documents for all the chapters in your book and place them in the “[Your Book Title] Writing Guide” folder. Open a document for each chapter. Copy and paste that chapter’s summary into the document twice. Leave the first summary intact. Break the second duplicate summary into bullet points or subheadings with spaces in between. Each sentence might become a bullet point or subheading, for example. (If you find it easier, determine what questions you need to answer, what benefits you need to provide, or what solutions your need to provide to address the topics about which you need to write.)

Step 4: Write Your Book

To write your book, open the writing guide and review the first three documents.This reminds you of the book you want to create and helps you stay focused on your idea and the promises you want to keep to readers. In particular, read the pitch to stay focused on your book’s topic and on the unique and necessary angle. Refer to this anytime you feel lost, stuck, or off track. Refer back to the list of benefits to remind yourself of the value readers expect from your book and to be sure you deliver it.

Compose your manuscript using the bulleted chapter summaries. Open a chapter document. Review the complete summary at the top to remind yourself of that particular chapter’s content. Then, write your chapter by moving from bullet point to bullet point, section to section, subhead to subhead, until you get to the end of your chapter. Write in the space underneath each bullet point.

Although the planning process takes some time, you will find that you can write your nonfiction books easily and efficiently using this process. Apply it to fiction and you’ll have the same results.

About the Author

Nina Amir, author of How to Blog a Book: Write, Publish, and Promote Your Work One Post at a Time and The Author Training Manual: Develop Marketable Ideas, Craft Books That Sell, Become the Author Publishers Want, and Self-Publish Effectively, transforms writers into inspired, successful authors, authorpreneurs and blogpreneurs. Known as the Inspiration to Creation Coach, she moves her clients from ideas to finished books as well as to careers as authors by helping them combine their passion and purpose so they create products that positively and meaningfully impact the world. A sought-after author, book, blog-to-book, and results coach, some of Nina’s clients have sold 300,000+ copies of their books, landed deals with major publishing houses and created thriving businesses around their books. She writes four blogs, self-published 12 books and founded National Nonfiction Writing Month, aka the Write Nonfiction in November Challenge.

To learn more about Nina, visit www.ninaamir.com. Get a FREE 5-Day Become a Published Author Series from her when you click here.

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Twitterific Writing Links

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Twitterific links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 23,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.

Thanks to Prashant C. Trikannad for the generous review of Body in the Backyard and interview with me on his blog,  Chess, Comics, Crosswords, Music, Cinema.   We discussed why I chose an octogenarian sleuth for the Myrtle Clover series, small town murder, and my writing process, among other things. 

And it’s Mother’s Day in the States.   :)  A happy day to all the moms out there…including mine, Beth Spann.

26 Types Of English Majors:  http://ow.ly/wsByJ @buzzfeedbooks

Best Method for Handling Rejections (and getting published):  http://ow.ly/wsBFD @EricaVerrillo

Google Plus Tips and Tools:  http://ow.ly/wsC7N @steverayson

How to share your content more than once without being spammy: http://ow.ly/wsC5r @kissmetrics

Writing Craft–5 Great Ways to Learn It:  http://ow.ly/wsBCL @lesliemillernow

The Routine of Farming and Writing:  http://ow.ly/wsBrV @andilit

The Difference Between Symbol and Motif:  http://ow.ly/wsBQ6 @epbure

Story Themes: What’s Your Worldview? http://ow.ly/wsBO2 @jamigold

Writing and the Creative Life: The Mundane and the Marvelous: http://ow.ly/wsBuk @gointothestory

8 Tips for Writing Back Cover Copy: http://ow.ly/wsCiI @RuthHarrisBooks

5 Common Web Mistakes:  http://ow.ly/wvEcX @loriculwell

Tips for writing intoxicated characters: http://ow.ly/wvF7v

5 Ways To Improve A Perfect Story:  http://ow.ly/wvEFs @yeomanis

Generating Suspense Through Conflict: http://ow.ly/wvESx @woodwardkaren

Why Series are Becoming Hot:  http://ow.ly/wvEis @kristenlambTX

Talents and Skills Thesaurus Entry: Mechanically Minded:  http://ow.ly/wvFhl @beccapuglisi

How To Measure Success: http://ow.ly/wvEzL @kristinerusch

25 Quotes That Will Inspire You To Be A Fearless Writer:  http://ow.ly/wvELm @buzzfeed @jaypugz

How to do a time jump http://ow.ly/wvEVL @glencstrathy

What Do Your Rejection Letters Really Mean?  http://ow.ly/wvFAm @wherewriterswin

Creating Religions & Belief Systems http://ow.ly/wvFdU @mythcreants

Writing nonverbal cues to enrich your characters’ lives: http://ow.ly/wvEnS @onewildword

11 Beloved Books With Shockingly Bad Reviews:  http://ow.ly/wvEuM @chrisritter16

A Script Reader’s Checklist:  http://ow.ly/wvEZj @screencrafting

How to Write the Dreaded Query Letter:  http://ow.ly/wvM8k @write_practice

See Your Book Idea Through the Lens of a Publishing Professional: http://ow.ly/wvF3H @ninaamir @thecreativepenn

7 Traits of the Social Writer:  http://ow.ly/wmHku @LPOBryan

10 Screenwriting Tips from One Flew Over The Cuckoo’s Nest: http://ow.ly/wl9Uj @scriptshadow

Three Tips for Monetizing Your Back-List:  http://ow.ly/wmHoE @digibookworld

5 Steps Toward Your Truest Contribution:  http://ow.ly/wmHrC @kcraftwriter

Guerrilla marketing for books: http://ow.ly/wmH6b @CNNMoney  @JenAlsever

Are Your Characters Fighting Obstacles or Each Other? http://ow.ly/wmHcG @janice_hardy

5 Practical Ways To Kill Your Characters http://ow.ly/wmHFx @stuartaken

3 Common Writing Fears & How We Can Overcome Them: http://ow.ly/wmHuB @elephantjournal

Top 10 diary books:  http://ow.ly/wsBBa @guardianbooks

Avoiding Police Stereotypes in Novels:  http://ow.ly/wENTZ @JJHensleyauthor

Foreign Rights Agents: Everything You Need To Know (& Why You May Want One):  http://ow.ly/wsC8X  @2seasagency

Caveat editor: beware the e-plagiarist:  http://ow.ly/wsBN1 @ArlenePrunkl

5 Ways To Improve A Perfect Story (by John Yeoman):  http://ow.ly/wznNf

Perils of the Writer: Knowing When to Deviate from the Outline: http://ow.ly/wsBvU @marshallmaresca

The Pomodoro Technique for getting work done: http://ow.ly/wsBsW @joelrunyon

19 Writing Tips From Writers And Editors For The New Yorker: http://ow.ly/wsBRI @grace_land

Writer Fuel: Of Pasta, Gifs, and a Balanced Writer’s Life: http://ow.ly/wsBKR

I discuss my writing process, why I chose an octogenarian protagonist, and small town murder in this new interview: http://ow.ly/wFyeC

Marketing books in the Christian Marketplace: http://ow.ly/wrB6D @SarahBolme

Script elements one consultant looks for:  http://ow.ly/wrCty @scriptmag

Embrace Simple Writing Habits to Crush Writer’s Block:  http://ow.ly/wrCMX @nickbrodd

Classifying Your Book: How to Research & Target Literary Agents:  http://ow.ly/wrB9h @ChuckSambuchino

Advice on finding a writing or illustration mentor:  http://ow.ly/wDPCX @inkyelbows

Stuck: OCD and Writer’s Block:  http://ow.ly/wrAzY @Fletchathustra @psychtoday

5 Ways to Defend Your Writing Time:  http://ow.ly/wrA6a @LA_Screenwriter

Why it’s impossible to self-edit:  http://ow.ly/wrAMJ @novel_gazing @writersdigest

Let’s Do Away With Literary Snobbery:  http://ow.ly/wrCWX @Wendy_Tokunaga

6 Reasons To Be A Writer:  http://ow.ly/wrCD0 @LittlegatePubli

5 tools learned at #AuthorU:  http://ow.ly/wrBpm @PublicityHound

The 5 Best Things About a Backed Up Septic Tank (If You’re A #Writer): http://ow.ly/wrDfv @gaelynnwoods

Marketing for the Indie Writer–Getting Started:  http://ow.ly/wCg1e @SeeleyJamesAuth

A Writer’s Journey: Lessons Learned from 1000 Books:  http://ow.ly/wrB0Q @NatRusso

How to Have a First-Ever Writing Session:  http://ow.ly/wrAom @WriterAmyKierce @ParadeMagazine

Tips for handling a time jump from Glen C. Strathy:  http://ow.ly/wznIB

How to Organize Your Story Ideas:  http://ow.ly/wrzYb @writersdigest

Saving the Semi-colon: Should Writers Use or Avoid This Controversial Punctuation Mark? http://ow.ly/wrzMI

Children’s Books. Still an All-White World? http://ow.ly/wrAaO @Chicago_Creole  @SLJournal

The Top 5 Ways To Fail As A Screenwriter:  http://ow.ly/wrCTv @scriptcoverages

Idols and Peers for Writers: http://ow.ly/wqBHf @monicabyrne13

How Can Publishers and Translators Meet More Efficiently?  http://ow.ly/wqrMB @RossUfberg

Getting Started – Seven Tips from Famous Writers:  http://ow.ly/wqsqr @Writers_Write

The importance of silence to writers: http://ow.ly/wqsS6  @ADDerWORLD

‘We Need Diverse Books’ calls for more representative writing for children:  http://ow.ly/wqsfo @alisonflood

6 Tips To Get the Best From Your Writer’s Retreat:  http://ow.ly/wqsKn  @AineGreaney

Pricing eBook Collections:  http://ow.ly/wqs2G @JohnRPhythyonJr

5 things Indiana Jones taught 1 writer: http://ow.ly/wqs9O @danieljamespike

Tips for Cultivating Contacts at Conferences: http://ow.ly/wqCov  @bonniedoran @PattiShene

9 Ways Writing is like CrossFit:  http://ow.ly/wqBEm @LynnHBlackburn

How to Spot Your Writing Tic :  http://ow.ly/wzokT  (by Lauren Schmelz):

Using A Crowd To Create Tension In Your Story: http://ow.ly/wzofi (by writer Sharla Rae)

5 Common Problems 1 Writer Sees In Your Stories: http://ow.ly/wmHMG @ChuckWendig  {lang}

Journalist Porter Anderson on the sudden price hike of ISBNs: http://ow.ly/wznyO

Creating Stunning Character Arcs: The Second Half of the Second Act:  http://ow.ly/wmHKk @KMWeiland

What Are You Doing to Improve? http://ow.ly/wmIsC @MichalskiLiz @writerunboxed

Generation gaps featured in crime fiction: http://ow.ly/wzxxX @mkinberg

2 Tips for Finishing Screenplays:  http://ow.ly/wmHTR @jeannevb

5 Tips for Successfully Submitting Your Writing to a Publisher or Agent:  http://ow.ly/wmHRZ @CANArtsConnect

7 Things Your Fiction Fans Want to Hear You Say: http://ow.ly/wmIqv @storyrally

The slow, tragic death of the LGBT publishing industry:  http://ow.ly/wxR3y @thesteveberman @salon

5 tips for aspiring science fiction writers:  http://ow.ly/wmGAu @CharMcConaghy

11 Authors Who Became Famous After They Died:  http://ow.ly/wl9bo @endovert

Confessions of an ADD Writer: http://ow.ly/wmHHK @ediemelson

How Retailers, Publishers And Indies Can Fix The E-Book Industry http://ow.ly/wl89X @forbes @AmandaBabs1

Lit fic and digital publishing–a wrap-up of panelist views from The Muse’s Town Hall: http://ow.ly/wwNhm @Porter_Anderson

Crime fiction needs more clean-living cops, says police chief: http://ow.ly/wla30 @guardianbooks

Writer? Actor? What’s the Difference? http://ow.ly/wmHBQ @sanfranmag

How Different Are Books, Digitally?  http://ow.ly/wl7at @eoinpurcell

5 Ways to Fuel your Imagination:  http://ow.ly/wmH0E @M_Richmond21

It Just Got Even More Expensive To Make Your Book Visible: http://ow.ly/wwLKu @BeatBarblan @Porter_Anderson

4 Reasons Authors Shouldn’t Edit While they Write:  http://ow.ly/wl6Hf @vgrefer

Why Too Many Flashbacks Might Be a Warning of Deeper Story Problems:  http://ow.ly/wl7xU @kristenlambtx

My guest writing prompt for @StoryADayMay: http://ow.ly/wwLgo . Join the daily story challenge at http://storyaday.org/news/

What’s the Perfect Job for Our Characters? http://ow.ly/wl9Cn @jamigold

Authors’ New Amazon Headache:  http://ow.ly/wl8sL @SarahPinneo

Cheat Sheets for Writing Body Language:  http://ow.ly/wl9KR @writers_write

Getting it wrong – Writing disability in fiction:  http://ow.ly/wmGG7 @VisFic

3 Ways Writing Fiction Is An Adventure in the Fairy Tale Style:  http://ow.ly/wl7PP @vgrefer

What Does ‘Women’s  Fiction’ Mean? http://ow.ly/wjeiD @randysusanmeyer

8 Things Most People Don’t Know About Amazon’s Bestsellers Rank (Sales Rank) : http://ow.ly/wjdE4 @makeuseof

Diversity, Authenticity, and Literature:  http://ow.ly/wjepF @runwithskizzers

How to make an audiobook with ACX €“ more tips for narrators, producers and authors:  http://ow.ly/wvV63 @roz_morris

In defense of predictability:  http://ow.ly/wjeJG @bwilliamsbooks

How to Cheat to Find More Work Time http://ow.ly/wjek0 @jodyhedlund

Optimizing Your Google+ Circles:  http://ow.ly/wvFn5  @gpstberg

10 Incredible Things You Learn From Writing Every Day http://ow.ly/wje1K @tayyabbaber

On Crowdfunded Literature, And What It Means For The Future Of Publication:  http://ow.ly/wje7O @adamgomolin

A Rogue Academic on Fiction:  http://ow.ly/wjdSb @bschillace

Choosing a Point of View Character http://ow.ly/wjebU @janice_hardy

About ‘Marketing to Writers’:  http://ow.ly/wv0gI

How to Research Keywords to Help you Create the Perfect Book:  http://ow.ly/wjf8M @bookgal

The Magic of Expanded Dialogue Tags:  http://ow.ly/wjeS9 @indievisible4

Monetizing the Backlist (But Please, Don’t Call It That): http://ow.ly/wjdyq @pubperspectives

Scrivener: Series “Bible”:  http://ow.ly/wjex5

Which eBook Distributor is Right for You? Costs and Benefits of the 3 Biggest Distributors:  http://ow.ly/wu2OK @SpunkOnAStick

3 Trends Among Ebook Readers: http://ow.ly/wjdsd @digibookworld

Writing For Your Audience: http://ow.ly/wu1Yt @authorterryo

Naming Characters:  http://ow.ly/wjeDP @rsmollisonread

Why Quieter Stakes Are Easier to Plot With http://ow.ly/ @Janice_Hardy

What to do with an old ebook?  http://ow.ly/wfpKV @DinaEisenberg

How to Send a Kindle MOBI Review Copy Directly to a Kindle Device:  http://ow.ly/wfpS5 @trainingauthors

Can Exercise Make You A Better Writer?  http://ow.ly/wfnY9 @tinagabrielle

So You Need a Sales Funnel:  http://ow.ly/wfogv

Sell Sheets: A Guide For New Self-Publishers | http://ow.ly/wfpdq by Joseph Kunz

10 Of The Worst Screenplay & Novel “Fillers”:  http://ow.ly/wfqpC @bang2write

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Avoiding Police Stereotypes in Novels

by   J.J. Hensley, @JJHensleyauthor

As most of you, I’ve read hundreds of mysteries and thrillers.  And as most of you, I’ve recognized that many of them can be formulaic and use characters that are really cookie cutter stereotypes.  I think one of the most overused characters in the mystery/thriller/suspense genre is the police officer who is incompetent, apathetic, or outright corrupt.

Now in the interest of full disclosure, I spent a decade in local and Federal law enforcement, so I have no illusions at objectivity.  However, the fact of the matter is that 99% of the law enforcement community is hard-working, intelligent, and caring.  The problem is that many storylines benefit from having a detective who isn’t doing her job, or a patrol officer planting evidence, or an FBI agent taking a bribe.  It adds drama and there is a bit of shock value when someone in a position of authority fails to do his job.  But, perhaps our writing can improve and be more unpredictable if we avoid using these stereotypes.

Here are some benefits to keeping the cops competent and clean:

 The story is more realistic:

Yes, there are often headlines about law enforcement officials getting into trouble.  However, the media understandably latches on to these stories as police are (and should be) held to a higher standard.   Additionally, the law enforcement community is much like the intelligence community as successes are rarely advertised but failures are magnified.

It’s a “cop out” (pun intended)

Honestly, it’s kind of easy to toss in an apathetic city detective, or a Fed who insists on focusing on the wrong suspect.  If you protagonist isn’t in law enforcement, it gives the character a reason to pursue the truth.  But if you have the cops do their job well, you have to be more creative as to why your protagonist needs to be involved in a case. As a bonus – if your cops are better, you have to make your criminals smarter!

You’ll Be Different

Last year I wrote a blog post about some ways police are inaccurately portrayed in the world of entertainment .

Unrealistic portrayals have become the norm.  Be different.  Be refreshing.  Be accurate.  Just as juries have become subject the “CSI Effect” (where they think a DNA analysis can be done in an hour and every thread leads to a conviction) readers can start believing other inaccuracies we perpetuate.  Maybe the best way to improve our fiction is to get more real.

J.J. Hensley is the author of RESOLVE and other works of fiction.

RESOLVE has been named a finalist for Best First Novel by the International Thriller Writers organization.

RESOLVE was named one of the Best Books of 2013 by Suspense Magazine.

www.hensley-books.com

https://www.facebook.com/hensleybooks

https://www.goodreads.com/JJHensley

Twitter: @JJHensleyauthor

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Passages of Time and Transitions

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Transition issues are common problems in first drafts (later drafts, too).  I’ve been guilty of a couple of different transition fouls in past manuscripts.

Transitions that are too long and boring:

When I was writing my first book, I had a lot of trouble with getting characters where they needed to be. This resulted in a lot of really boring, pointless scenes where the narrative went something like this:  Jenny decided to head over to the restaurant to find out more about what Thomas was doing the night of the murder.  She found her keys and hurried out to her car.  On the trip to the Italian restaurant, she mulled over what she was going to ask Thomas.  Upon arrival at the restaurant…blah!  Dreck.

I think I believed it would be too choppy to suddenly pick up with the character at the Italian restaurant.  Or that it was cheating.  I’m not sure what was going through my head, but it took an editor to tell me to get rid of it all.

Transitions that are too choppy:  Now I have the ability to go too far in the opposite direction with transitions, causing editors to write “Elizabeth, can we soften this up a bit?” or “Elizabeth, this might seem a little abrupt…” in the margins.  I’m sure this is related to the way that I abruptly pick up and put down my manuscript when I have small pockets of time.  It’s great to be able to write at short notice, but it can mess with the general continuity.

Just right (?):

So, a couple of different ways to deal with short passages of time (or even longer ones, actually).  We can have a scene break or we can have a little transition lead-in.

With my mess of an example above, a better way of handling the car ride over would be something like this:

After hanging up the phone with Bruce, Jenny realized she was going to need to speak with Thomas again.  She looked at her watch.  If she hurried, she could get to the restaurant before it closed.

            Twenty minutes later, Jenny asked the hostess to tell Thomas she was there.

Or something like:

Jenny hung up the phone.  Clearly, she would need to speak with Thomas again.

(Scene break)

Unfortunately, Thomas wasn’t speaking.  He scowled belligerently at Jenny from across the booth at his Italian restaurant.

So either way, there’s a sort of natural segue.  It’s a bit of a fine-tuning thing.  We definitely want to make sure that the reader is able to follow along when we jump to the next scene.  They’ll want to know where the characters are and have a hint as to how much time has passed.

How do you handle transitions and time passages in your books?  Are you more apt to err on the side of  too-long transitions, or choppy ones?

Image: MorgueFile: priyanphoenix

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About ‘Marketing to Writers’

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

I read many posts online where writers worry over centering their platforms on writing and writers.  ‘Marketing to writers’ is the phase I read over and over.

This is because many writers (well, most of the writers I see, actually…me included) are blogging to writers, commenting on other writers’ blogs, and sharing writing tips with other writers.  We make friends through our blogs and those writing friends of ours follow us onto our other hangouts online (Facebook, Twitter, Pinterest, etc.).

I’ve read a lot of advice lately that we should avoid focusing our online efforts on writers.  That we should seek out readers online or blog with a reader focus.

I understand the advice and do agree…to an extent. Obviously, our online time in terms of marketing would be better spent in targeting our audience.

But I think it’s okay.  I have no intention of targeting my readers in any way and yet they’re searching me out and communicating with me. And buying my books.  I’m not losing out in the visibility department, either.

Why writers tend to focus their online efforts to other writers:

We want to connect with other writers online—for support, for resources, for encouragement.  Like anyone else, we want to hang out with those who relate to us.  We need writer friends, and our frequently introverted natures love the fact that we can so quickly connect and retreat online.  And reaching out to readers online can feel like a weird type of author intrusion.  Many of us are eager not to seem spammy.

What marketing experts recommend:

That we blog on issues relevant to our books or writing them in a way that resonates with readers.

What we could do if we wanted to reach more readers but not change our overall focus:

Guest blog on sites where our readers might hang out (book blogger sites, for instance).

Engage with our readers on one social media platform. Have that be the place where we avoid discussing the writing craft (maybe a picture-oriented venue like Instagram or Tumblr…particularly if we have younger readers).

Devote certain days of the week to readers and the others to writers.

Or…do nothing at all.

I doubt that I’ll be making any changes at all to my approach.  Because I don’t feel that I’m marketing to writers—I’m connecting with them. And this helps me connect to my readers by increasing online visibility, improving search results for my name or my books’ titles, and making it easy for readers to locate and connect with me online.  To find my email address and drop me a line.  My readers know where to find me.  And their favorite way to connect with me is email.

For me, my blogging and connecting online is incredibly important to keeping me motivated and informed as a writer.  I talk to my readers through my books.

As a writer, who are you blogging and connecting with online?  What are your thoughts on your approach?

Image: MorgueFile:  veggiegretz

 

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Twitterific Writing Links

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Twitterific links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 23,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.

Quick note of congratulations to a past guest blogger here, translator Julie Rose, on the release of a trade paperback version of The Greenland Breach (written by Bernard Besson).

Discover the Reason You Don’t Write:  http://ow.ly/wdsf3 @ninaamir

Write a thriller: Conceal to create suspense in writing:  http://ow.ly/wds1d @MattReesAuthor           

Going It Alone: Writing Without Community:  http://ow.ly/wdsKO @kimtriedman @BTMargins

Tips on Writing Humor:  http://ow.ly/wdsAs

Vicarious Love: The Greatest Advantage of Multiple POVs:  http://ow.ly/wdrYy @KMWeiland

4 Steps for Making Campaigns Into Written Stories:  http://ow.ly/wds2x @mythcreants

The Seasons – how to use them in your writing:  http://ow.ly/wdswr @AnthonyEhlers

5 Qualities of High-Concept Stories for Your Written Work: http://ow.ly/wds6D

Essential Things To Know When Writing Multicultural/Interracial PNR/SFR:  http://ow.ly/wdspY @PJDeanwriter

Author branding with your pen name:  http://ow.ly/wdsuh @SophiaKnightly

The Completely Backwards Way to  Self-Publishing Success:  http://ow.ly/wdshO @JFBookman

The Secret to Crafting High Stakes:  http://ow.ly/wdsan @CSLakin

The Intentional Writer: Finding the Time, Space, and Inspiration You Need to Write:  http://ow.ly/wdxpb @thecreativepenn

From One Book To Running A Business As An Author:  http://ow.ly/ @JohnnyBTruant @thecreativepenn

Buzzwords and terms for SF writers: http://ow.ly/wfnlT @Massim0Marin0

Will Self-Publishing Exist in 10 Years? http://ow.ly/wfr71 @EricaVerrillo

How to Make the Bestseller Lists: Why Categories and Keywords Matter: http://ow.ly/wfqzR @RuthHarrisBooks

15 Words Coined By Famous Writers:  http://ow.ly/wfs1d @huffpost

The Inside Scoop: Working with a Freelance Editor:  http://ow.ly/wfpqq @AlexZamorski @womenwriters

Owning a First Draft:  http://ow.ly/wfqiZ @Philip_Overby

Overview of Hyphens and Dashes:  http://ow.ly/wftGL @JamesJMurray1

Ernest Hemingway’s 1954 Nobel Acceptance Speech on Working Alone:  http://ow.ly/wfqTW @farnamstreet

7 Signs of a Vanity Publisher:  http://ow.ly/wfnNJ @eBookBuilders

5 Ways to Drive an Editor Crazy:  http://ow.ly/wdxtk @motherinferior2

How to Judge Books (Real or Imaginary) by Their Covers:  http://ow.ly/wdsmz @litreactor

What Is The Right Length For a Chapter? http://ow.ly/wbMp1 @NatRusso

10 Tips For Writing A Micro Budget Script:  http://ow.ly/wbLYN @ozzywood

Why Outlines Work for Some:  http://ow.ly/wbMqw @DJMacHale

How to Turn That Shiny New Idea Into a Novel:  http://ow.ly/wbL9K @janice_hardy

10 traits of a great script http://ow.ly/wbMob @thetakescom

Manual Transmissions and Self-Publishing: Learning the Details:  http://ow.ly/wbLnL @andilit

Agatha Christie’s Secret: Break The Rules:  http://ow.ly/wbLTb @woodwardkaren

Stupid Answers To Common Writing Questions: http://ow.ly/wbL6T @ChuckWendig {lang}

Audiobooks: Tips For Distribution With ACX And Marketing:  http://ow.ly/wqBRg @thecreativepenn

Why Are So Few Books From the 20th Century Available as Ebooks? http://ow.ly/wbLcj @theatlantic @passivevoiceblg

3 Myths About Hiring an Editor:  http://ow.ly/wbLws @write_hook

How Passion Can Make or Break Your Writing Career:  http://ow.ly/wbL93 @thewritelife

What Changes in Your Scenes? http://ow.ly/wbLbf @janice_hardy

Using foreign language in your story – the balancing act:  http://ow.ly/wbLog @juliettewade

Publicity Campaigns (Discoverability)  http://ow.ly/wbLV4 @kristinerusch

Ernest Hemingway’s Writing Habits http://ow.ly/wbMbn @tonyriches

What are the Basics of Writing Well? http://ow.ly/wbM8i @joe_bunting

3 Steps to Honestly Disturbed Characters:  http://ow.ly/wbLpX @WyattGBessing

The one word to watch out for as a screenwriter:  http://ow.ly/wbLhh @KenLevine

Issues with Sequels: http://ow.ly/waFb8 @beccapuglisi

Want to Become a Writer? How to Set Up Your Writing Area:  http://ow.ly/waygB @WriterAmyKierce

Writers, agents wrestle over issues on the conference circuit: http://ow.ly/wof2Z @Porter_Anderson @brandibowles

4 Levels of Editing Explained: Which Service Does Your Book Need?  http://ow.ly/waFgW @CKMacLeodwriter  @CarlaJDouglas

3 Tips for Finding Beta Readers:  http://ow.ly/waFqr @losapala

Reasons NOT to Sign with a Publisher:  http://ow.ly/waxV9 @AdamSilvera

Screenwriting: Find a Mentor:  http://ow.ly/waxqo @screenwritingu

Letter from a Literary Agent: http://ow.ly/wazRX @jakonrath

The 7 Core Competencies Vital to Writing Success: http://ow.ly/waEO4 @MattEEaton

The Beginner’s Guide to Self-Publishing Your Book Through Amazon:  http://ow.ly/wazgR @djworking @forbes

What Compels an Agent to Sign an Author? Q&A With Literary Agents: http://ow.ly/waF3c @HeatherHummel

Understanding “In Medias Res”:  http://ow.ly/waETZ @kristenlambtx

10 Ways to Inspire, Motivate, and Encourage Young Writers:  http://ow.ly/waxay @AnthonyDejolde

Are There Limits to Literary Citizenship?  http://ow.ly/wazut @Janefriedman

The Single Best Way to Sell Books (Or Lose a Sale):  http://ow.ly/wayr2 @kristenlambtx

5 Questions a Self-Publisher Must Ask:  http://ow.ly/waxz7

Are Print Books Necessary in the Digital Age? http://ow.ly/wax13 @juliemusil

Emotionally detached characters in crime fiction: http://ow.ly/wltxF @mkinberg

Quick Tips: Common Comma Errors:  http://ow.ly/w7F3X @Jen_328

Fix Showing vs. Telling with Macros & Word Lists: http://ow.ly/w7Bfs @jamigold

How to be a Writing Lifer:  http://ow.ly/w7BtI @JordanRosenfeld

The 12 Best Writing Fellowships & Retreats in the US: http://ow.ly/w7Q3J  @openroadmedia

Why it’s important for readers to see your cover numerous times:  http://ow.ly/w7xT5 @MSaintGermain

How to Treat Your Book Like a Business | Wise Ink’s Blog:  http://ow.ly/w7PIm

How to Make People Read Your Business Card:  http://ow.ly/w7yvZ @carolewyer

How to Build Buzz for Your Book with Social Media:  http://ow.ly/w7Bbg @PegFitzpatrick

Will Self-Pub Dwindle When There’s Less Backlist for Authors to Exploit?  http://ow.ly/w7PLk @Janefriedman

The Pros and Cons of Writing a Novel in Present Tense: http://ow.ly/w7ymh @writersdigest

What Does It Mean to “Win” at Writing?  http://ow.ly/w7F7X @DavidBCoe

Do writers care about lit fic’s future in digital publishing? Chat at #EtherIssue with @Porter_Anderson  11am ET, 4 p.m. BST (Now)

11 Twitter Tips for Writers:  http://ow.ly/w7Frb @rsquaredd

12 Tips to Develop a Powerful Personal Brand:  http://ow.ly/w7zah @FeldmanCreative

A screenwriter’s rookie mistakes: http://ow.ly/w7yYZ @KenLevine

Writing and the Creative Life: 18 Things Highly Creative People Do Differently:  http://ow.ly/w7Ffu @gointothestory

5 Books for Writers That Aren’t about Writing:  http://ow.ly/w7PWu @SandraPeoples

Writing About Personality Disorders: An Overview http://ow.ly/w4y8b @SkyeFairwin

A look at pulp hero genres:  http://ow.ly/w4ymI @thepulpnet

Paragraphing Dialogue:  http://ow.ly/w4xBf @WriteDivas @nickdaws

When A Hobby Becomes An Identity:  http://ow.ly/w4xJ1 @amazingstories0

Ethics in Fiction: Don’t Glamorize Murder:  http://ow.ly/w4yhU @DeborahJRoss

5 tips for finding the missing pieces of your memoir: http://ow.ly/w4z02 @onewildword

Why 1 popular blog is discontinuing comments: http://ow.ly/w4z5C @soniasimone

Thoughts on how to spend your time as a writer:  http://ow.ly/w4ytF @NathanielTower

Think Short to Reach Your Long Nonfiction Writing Goal:  http://ow.ly/w4y4x @ninaamir

Game On! 10 Word and Lit-Based Apps:  http://ow.ly/w4xXq @chris_shultz81

Looking for Literary in Digital Places:  http://ow.ly/wi7xh  @eve_grubstreet @Porter_Anderson

6 Steps to Becoming a More Energetic Public Speaker: http://ow.ly/w4yAv @RobBiesenbach

How to Spot Your Writing Tic:  http://ow.ly/w4xPC @larin20

4 Unrealistic Expectations You May Have About Being a Freelance Writer: http://ow.ly/w4yHb @francescaSN

Choosing Your Own Adventures:  http://ow.ly/w4yLq @ecmyers

Building Emotional Anticipation:  http://ow.ly/w4ySO @Kid_Lit

Writing survival secret: the feel-good file:  http://ow.ly/w4zjY @JordanMcCollum

Newsletters as Promo:  http://ow.ly/wgbIG

The London Book Fair: Many Tote Bags but Few Industry Solutions: http://ow.ly/w3yU4 @elizabethminkel @the_millions

10 Paradoxes of the Writing Life:  http://ow.ly/w3AiM @chipscan

Thoughts from the Submission Pile:  http://ow.ly/w3xTV @thejordache

How Not to Begin Your Novel:  http://ow.ly/w3zvS @jawlitagent @pubhub_blog

How Do You Know When You Need to Revise? http://ow.ly/w3yOb

3 Things 1 Writer Learned from Henry James:  http://ow.ly/w3zji @victoriamixon

How To Pick The Right Genre For Your Novel (And Why Your Sales Depend On It): http://ow.ly/w3yeO @writetodone

How to Get Your Book into More Categories on Amazon with Keywords: http://ow.ly/w3A6T @goblinwriter

How to Learn Scrivener the Fast Way–Free Webinar on Thursday:  http://ow.ly/wfukX @JFBookman

Becoming a full-time writer: http://ow.ly/w3yRx @ChuckWendig  {lang}

5 Essential Online Script Libraries For Wannabe Screenwriters:  http://ow.ly/w3zKY @makeuseo

Using Your ISBN on Your Author Website for Better Search Results:  http://ow.ly/w3Anm @pubsmartcon

The Mindset of Successful Self-Publishers:  http://ow.ly/w3xVT @jfbookman

Top 10 List of Truths for Self-publishers: http://ow.ly/w3yja @AP_Fuchs

Breaking Up With Your Novel: http://ow.ly/w3y7S @melissagmcphail

Why authors need headshots:  http://ow.ly/w3AcQ @JonathanAuxier

Thoughts from the Intern Slush Pile: Common Issues:  http://ow.ly/w3ynP @ava_jae

Books Every Writer Needs to Read:  http://ow.ly/w1yLC @imjasondiamond

A rallying cry for high standards in self-publishing:  http://ow.ly/w1zzf @DebbieYoungBN

10 Tips to Proofread Your Novel Like a Pro:  http://ow.ly/w1yzn @LitCentralOC

Writers – Have You Considered Sending Your Short Stories Overseas?  http://ow.ly/w1zRv @TheReviewReview

An agent answers writers’ questions:  http://ow.ly/w1zjg @MacGregorLit

Character Relationships: Til Death Does Them Part? http://ow.ly/w1zf3 @CantrellJason

Planning a Series:  http://ow.ly/w1z9V @stdennard

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