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August 17, 2024
LitLinks
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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Business / MiscellaneousOn the Creative Self-Publishing Podcast, Orna Ross outlines the relationship between publishing and marketing models for indie authors: Turn Words Into Wealth With Aurora Winter: from Joanna Penn8 Simple Steps to Scale and Grow Your Freelance Writing Business: by Robyn RosteThe Editor or the Author: Who’s In Charge? by David Lombardino5 Steps to Running a Profitable Freelance Writing Business: by Robyn RosteCrafting Brilliance: A Guide to Working with Professional Editors: @TheLeighShulmanConferences and Events / MiscellaneousKenya: Nairobi’s Macondo Festival Plans for Its Fourth Iteration: by Porter AndersonUAE: Sharjah International Book Fair Opens Its Awards: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesPortugal’s Book 2.0: Lisbon Hosts a Second Edition: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesCanada’s $75,000 Cundill History Prize Names Its 2024 Longlist: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesIn Scotland: Trivedi Science Book Prize Names a 2024 Shortlist: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesVienna: The Austrian Crime Fiction Prize Goes to Eva Rossmann: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesThe Biennial Singapore Literature Prize: A 71-Book 2024 Shortlist: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesThe International Dayton Peace Prize: 2024 Shortlists: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesWainwright Nature Writing Book Prizes: Three 2024 Shortlists: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesCreativity and Inspiration / First Novels5 Tips For New Writers: by S.T. SanchezCreativity and Inspiration / InspirationWhat Fuels Your Writing? by James Scott BellCreativity and Inspiration / Inspiration / Reading as Writers9 Experimental Books That Break Narrative Norms: by Alana Saab @electricliteratureCrime Fiction: In The Spotlight: Gregory C. Randall’s Chicago Swing: by Margot KinbergCrime Fiction: In The Spotlight: Candice Fox’s Crimson Lake: by Margot Kinberg12 Lit Mags Featuring Disabled/Chronically Ill Writers and Artists: by Trish Hopkinson7 Novels About Learning and Mastering A New Skill: by Camille Bordas @electricliteratureCrime Fiction: In The Spotlight: Rebecca N. Porter’s The Rest Hollow Mystery: @margotkinberg5 Books About Carnivals That Aren’t All Fun & Games: by Mahvesh Murad @Litreactor @reactormagBird by Bird: Anne Lamott’s Timeless Guide to Writing & Life: by @jerrybjenkinsCreativity and Inspiration / Productivity / Fitting in Writing10 Ways to Meet Your Writing Goals When You Have No Time: by Kelsie EngenCreativity and Inspiration / Productivity / Writer’s Block5 Ways I Broke Out of a Writing Rut: by Rachel CarringtonWriter’s Block? Make Room for Beauty: by Beth Kephart @womenwriterswomensbooksCreativity and Inspiration / Productivity / Writing QuicklyHow to Write 5,000 Words a Day: by Bamidele OnibalusiCreativity and Inspiration / SuccessThe Writer’s Success Triad: by Suzanne LieuranceCreativity and Inspiration / Writing LifeHow to Spot and Avoid Phishing Emails: Indie Author Guidance: by Michael La RonnJuggling Life and Writing: 9 Tips for Maintaining Creative Focus: by KM WeilandWriting: How to Write in Summer: by Linda S. ClareWhy losing is never really losing: by Ann GomezOvercome Your Challenges And Write Your Book. A Disabled Writer Shares His Journey: from Joanna PennCaught in the Eddies: from Fox Print EditorialHow to Keep Yourself From Editing As You Write: by Bucket SilerHow to Keep Creating No Matter What: by Diane CallahanName Your Grief: How to Use Writing to Break through the Fog of Loss: by Brooke Lewis7 Lessons Learned from Five Years of Writing Full-Time: by Sacha BlackTrust the Strangeness and the Uncertainty of the Writing Process: by Victor LodatoSeeking a Gentler Mythology of the American West: by Joe Wilkins @literaryhubThe Waiting Game for Writers: by Lisa NormanHow Focus Affects Creativity: by Concetta CucchiarelliOrganize Your Writing Life: Learn to Capture, Catalog, and Retrieve Writing Ideas: @ediemelsonWhy Use Airplane Mode When Not Flying? @worddreams3 Disciplines that Help Writers Maintain a Good Work-Life Balance: @LarryJLeechII @EdieMelsonWhen the Writing Life Doesn’t Go As Planned, Learn to Roll with the Punches: by Cindy K. Sproles @CindyDevoted @ediemelsonGenres / Fantasy6 Telltale Signs You’re Reading an Epic Fantasy Novel: by Kyle MassaTop 5 Mistakes Writers Make With Their Fantasy Stories: @bang2writeGenres / MysteryMysteries in Which the Murderer Needs Help from a Friend: by Margot KinbergInteresting Endings in Crime Fiction: by Margot KinbergUnhelpful Witnesses in Crime Fiction: by Margot KinbergCreative Ways to Commit a Crime: from Mystery and Suspense MagazineGenre Expectations: Writing Suspense and Thrillers: by A.C. WilliamsMystery Writers Who Write Themselves Into Their Books: @margotkinbergCrime Fiction: Clues: by Kay DiBiancaGenres / Non-FictionWriting Hard Truths And Tips For Writing Non-Fiction With Efren Delgado: by Joanna PennHow to put off dealing with persnickety references and endnotes: @jbernoffGenres / PoetryThe 3 Best Things about Writing Poetry: by Chloe-Anne RossGenres / RomanceHow (and Why) to Add Romance in Any Genre: by Priscilla OliverasGenres / Short Stories5 Reasons to Write a Short Story: by Ellen BuikemaHow to Write Short Stories That Captivate Readers: by Chris WinkleGenres / Young AdultIs Your 18+ Protagonist Young Adult, New Adult, or Adult? by Shannon A. ThompsonPromo / Ads8 Reasons Your Amazon Ads Aren’t Working: @therealbookgalPromo / BloggingWordPress: How To Close Comments: What You Need To Know: @HughRoberts05Promo / Connecting with ReadersBe Yourself So Your Readers Can Find You: by Andrea Guevara for @janefriedmanPromo / MetadataChoosing the Right Categories and Keywords for Your Book: by L. Diane Wolfe @theiwsgPromo / MiscellaneousThe Courage to Share: Overcoming Self-Promotion Hurdles in Your Writing Journey: by Leigh ShulmanPromo / PlatformsWhy You Need An Author Brand, Plus 3 Examples: from Bang2WritePublishing / MiscellaneousPiracy: A US Court Upholds a DMCA Provision: by Porter Anderson @pubperspectivesIOP Publishing Announces a Journal Series on Machine Learning: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesIn Praise of Collective Licensing: by Richard CharkinHow Effective Are Content Notices? by Oren AshkenaziOpen Road Offers Geo-Targeting To Open Banned Books: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesAcademic Publishing: ALPSP Names Its Rising Stars for 2024: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesPenguin Random House Opens Its Audio Narrator Mentorship: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesThe US National Book Foundation Issues $350,000 in Grants: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesCaring for Editors: By Arpita Das | @arpitayodapress @pubperspectivesPublishing / News / International PublishingFrankfurter Buchmesse 2024: Frankfurt Audio and The Arts+: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesThe UK’s Spiracle Opens ‘Audiobook in a Card’ for Bookstores: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesLondon’s Tandem Collective and Bookinfluencers Inspire ‘ChallyPop’: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesTunisia Arrests IPA Prize-Winning Activist Sihem Bensedrine: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesItaly: A New Ubik Bookstore on Sicily’s Island of Ortigia: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesSkeelo on Expanding Digital Reading in Brazil, Working with Telcos: @talitafacchini @pubperspectivesIrina Scherbakova To Honor Anne Applebaum at German Peace Prize: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesLiterary Agent Elif Nur Şafak on Wattpad in Türkiye: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesUK: 200 Companies Sign Publishers Association’s Sustainability Pledge: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesPublishing / Options / Traditional Publishing / QueryingIdeas aren’t sacred, but agents should treat submissions confidentially: @nathanbransfordEmail Your Pitch Before Sending Your Proposal: by W. Terry Whalin16 Query Tips From Literary Agents: by Jacqui MurrayPreparing Your Manuscript For Pitching Agents With Renee Fountain: @thecreativepennPublishing / Options / Traditional Publishing / RejectionsRejected? How to Keep it in Perspective: by Ruth HarrisPublishing / Process / ContractsEvaluating Publishing Contracts: Six Ways You May Be Sabotaging Yourself: @victoriastraussPublishing / Process / ISBNsShould you buy your own ISBNs? by Jacqui MurrayPublishing / Process / Pen NamesChoosing an Author Name Format: Critical Mistakes to Avoid: @therealbookgalPublishing / Process / Services to AvoidCheated, Swindled, or Scammed: What’s a Writer to Do? by Victoria StraussThe Literary Reporter: A New Book Promo Site That’s Rather Less Than It Appears: @victoriastraussWriting Craft / Characters / AntagonistsIs There a Trend of Revamping Villains? by Charles E. YallowitzWriting Craft / Characters / DevelopmentCan We Talk? Interviewing Your Characters: by Sarah Sally HamerUsing Clothes to Characterize: by Becca PuglisiWhat is a Static Character? Definition, Examples & More: from The Art of NarrativeCharacter Template for Fiction Writing: by Angie AndriotChoosing A Unique (But Fitting) Talent for Your Character: @beccapuglisiWriting Craft / Characters / EmotionWe’re Trying to Break Their Hearts: Exploring the Power of Emotion in Art: by Matthew NormanWriting Craft / DraftsWriting Your First Draft: by Linda WilsonWriting Craft / Lessons from Books and FilmNEW GIRL Case Study: How To Learn To Plot by Watching Sitcoms: from Bang2WriteHow To Use The Rashomon Storytelling Technique In Your Story: by Lucy V. Hay7 Thrillers With Shocking Twists: by Jenna Satterthwaite @electricliteratureThree Writing Lessons from Bridgerton Season 3: by By Greer MacallisterSix Plot Holes and Retcons to Get Angry About: by Oren AshkenaziWriting Craft / Literary DevicesWhat is a Theme of a Story: Definitions and Examples: by Polly WattWriting Craft / MiscellaneousWriting & Structuring Multiple Plotlines (with Visuals): by September C FawkesHow to Use Hybrid Forms to Build Suspense: by Rachel Dempsey7 Tips for Crafting Compelling Casino Scenes in Your Writing: from Bang2WriteSuspense vs. Anticipation: by Sue ColettaUsing Real People in Fiction: by Beem WeeksHow, and When, to Show and Not Tell: by Debbie VilardiEverything You Need to Know About the Lie the Character Believes: by K.M. WeilandFive Tips to Develop Your Writing Skills: by Sarah Sally HamerHandling a Cast of Thousands: by Terry OdellWhat Makes Timeless Fiction Timeless: by Donald MaassHow to Avoid Dumb Moves: by James Scott Bell @jamesscottbellHow Long Should a Chapter Be? by Hank Phillippi Ryan @careerauthorsHow to Write Epistolary Fiction: by Melody E. McIntyre @evamarie41Writing Scenes Without Conflict: Incidents, Happenings, Sequels, & More: @septcfawkes5 Timeless Truths of Popular Fiction: @jamesscottbellWriting Craft / MoodInfusing Mood into Your Fiction: by CS LakinWriting Craft / POVOn Point of View: by Josh LangstonWhat It Means to Persist (Or, POV Still Sucks): @foxprintedWriting Craft / Pre-Writing / OutliningHow to Plan Your Self-Published Book: Guidance for Plotters and Planners: by 1106 Design @indieauthoralliWriting Craft / Pre-Writing / ResearchNovel research: How much is too much? by Alessandra TorreResearching Your Novel With ChatGPT: by Randy Ingermanson @snowflakeguyWriting Craft / Punctuation and GrammarThe Difference Between Commas and Semicolons: @TheGrammarDivaWriting Craft / RevisionEditing tip: Are you suffering from -ing disease? by Bucket SilerFind and delete these phrases from your novel: @nathanbransfordWriting: Delete Unneeded Words: by Linda S. ClareCut Unnecessary Prepositions and Prepositional Phrases: by Shutta CrumQuick Revision Tip: Read Your Draft Faster: by Bucket SilerQuick Editing Tip: “That”: by @bucketsilerWriting Craft / ScenesWriting memorable scenes – The two worse proposal scenes I’ve read/viewed: by Roberta Eaton CheadleWriting Craft / Transitions94 Transition Words and Phrases (with Examples): by Shane MillerWriting Craft / TropesThe Chosen One Trope: by Vaughn RoycroftWriting Craft / VoiceDiscovering Our Voice: Learning and Unlearning: by Steven PressfieldWriting Craft / Word CraftingVisceral Words: by Sue Coletta150+ Strong Verbs List for Writing: by Linda O’DonnellWriting Tools / MiscellaneousHow to Quickly Create an EPUB File From Word: @janefriedman2 Ways Artificial Intelligence (AI) Can Ruin Credibility: by Miffie Seideman
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August 3, 2024
LitLinks
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
LitLinks are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 70,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers. While you’re there, check out the Writer’s Digest award-winning Hiveword novel organizer.
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A quick note that I’ll be taking the next couple of weeks off for a summer break. :) I’ll look forward to being back Aug. 18 for LitLinks. And good news…X was able to get me back on the platform at long last. Business / MiscellaneousWhat Editors Wished Writers Knew: by Katherine Hutchinson-HayesConferences and Events / MiscellaneousBuchmesse’s B2B Platform Is Open: ‘Frankfurt Connect’: by Porter AndersonThe UK’s Booker Prize For Fiction: 2024 Longlist: by Porter AndersonFrankfurter Buchmesse’s 2024 Rights Center Sells Out: by Porter AndersonCreativity and Inspiration / Goal settingWhy Slowing Down Offers Writers an Effective Goal-Achievement Strategy: by Nina AmirCreativity and Inspiration / InspirationStory Ideas for Inspiration: by Angie AndriotWriter inspiration and tips on using AI to generate ideas: by Helena FairfaxCreativity and Inspiration / Inspiration / Reading as WritersFive SFF Stories About Houses With Minds of Their Own: by Ratika Deshpande @litreactorDoes Orwell still matter? by Peter Brian Barry8 Adventure-Filled Books Set on Trains: by Sarah Brooks @electricliterature6 Heart-Stopping Medical Thrillers: by BookTrib7 Novels About Brilliant Freaks: by Jane Flett @electricliteratureCreativity and Inspiration / Productivity / Writer’s BlockPractical (and Fun) Tips for Overcoming Writer’s Block: by Elizabeth StixCreativity and Inspiration / Writing LifeOn the Internet, We’re All Unreliable Narrators: by Olivia Muenter @literaryhubThe fierce imperative to create – poet and novelist Alan Humm: by Roz MorrisProcrastination, Deadline Doom, and General Writer Panic: @msheatherwebbWriting Through Fear With Caroline Donahue: by Joanna PennCreative Gaslighting – Why Do We Do This? by Gabriela PereiraThe Pitfalls of Expert Advice: by Lauren Reynolds @janefriedmanWhy laughter is the best medicine for writers: by Ann GomezNothing is Lost or Wasted: by Anne JanzerWe’re Not Competing With Human Writers Any More: by Nicole PylesOpening to the Unexpected as a Writer: by Sophie MassonGenres / FantasyTop 10 Tips On Writing A Fantasy Novel: by Lucy V. Hay @writers_helping_writers_angelaGenres / MysteryCozy Mystery Writing: from authors on the Kill ZoneParanormal Cozy Mysteries: from Mystery and Suspense MagazineChanges in Crime TV Series: by Mystery and Suspense MagazineCrime Fiction Writers Who’ve Changed Careers to Write: by Margot KinbergGenres / Picture BooksWriting Pitfalls in Children’s Writing: by Karen CioffiGenres / ScreenwritingYour Spec Script Is Doomed, Unless You Avoid This: by Bang2WriteGenres / Short StoriesWhat Previously Published Means for Flash Fiction: by Christina DalcherPromo / BloggingHow Changing Your Environment Helps You Develop New Blogging Habits: by Nina AmirPromo / Book Descriptions and CopywritingWriting that Book Blurb: by Anne K. HawkinsonPromo / Book ReviewsWhat Should Writers Do With Their Bad Reviews? by Lev RaphaelPromo / MiscellaneousHow to Sell More Books During the Holidays: 7 Effective Strategies: @therealbookgalDo Authors Really Need to Spend Their Own Money to Make a Book Successful? by Maris Kreizman @literaryhubPublishing / MiscellaneousInterlink Publishing’s Ownership Transferred in Moushabeck Family: by Porter AndersonAssociation of American Publishers Backs Senate ‘NO FAKES Act’: by Porter AndersonReadSpeaker on the Costs of Text-to-Speech Technology: by Porter AndersonScribd Introduces ‘Ask AI’ to Subscribers in a Beta Release: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesPublishing / News / AmazonOn Amazon Account Suspensions: by Nicholas C. RossiPublishing / News / DataCircana BookScan: US Print’s January-June Print Market: by Porter AndersonPublishing / News / International PublishingAudioUK Surveys Data, a Bid for Government Support: by Porter AndersonUniversity of Toronto Press and Canadian Science Publishing Partner: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesElisabeth Jaquette: New Words Without Borders Executive Director: @Porter_Anderson @pubperspectivesPublishing / Options / Traditional Publishing / Rejections10 Ways to Handle Rejection Letters: by Kelley J. P. LindbergThe Business of Writing is Dominated by Rejections: by Philip AthansWriting Craft / BeginningsShould a Novel Ever Begin with a Dream? by N.L. HolmesWriting Craft / Characters / DevelopmentMaking Your Villain a Major Character: from MythcreantsCharacter Traits List for Creative Writers (with Examples): by Angie AndriotLet Grief Touch Your Characters: by D. Wallace PeachCharacter Flaws: Types And Guidelines: by @k.m.allan_writerWriting Craft / Characters / ProtagonistsIs There a Good Way to Have a Decoy Protagonist? by Oren AshkenaziWriting Craft / DiversityInclude Diversity in Your Characters: by Margot ConorWriting Craft / Literary DevicesThe Three Types of Irony: by Robinette WatersonMetaphor Magic: Wield Your Pen Like a Wand: @annkroekerWriting Craft / MiscellaneousWriting Animals into your Story: by D. Wallace PeachHow to Give Your Narration Flavor: by Andrea LundgrenPlot Perfection: A Guide to Crafting Compelling Narratives: @theleighshulmanCan You Combine Two Characters Into One? Offstage Action: by Dave KingMoving Beyond “Write What You Know”: by Maggie SmithKeep Your Novel Out of the Dreaded DNF—Did Not Finish—Book Club: by Amy L. Bernstein @janefriedmanStory and Understory: by Steven PressfieldEditing Tips: How to Focus Your Story and Keep Readers Turning the Pages: by Helena FairfaxHow an Academic Editor Can Help a Scholar Write a Better Article: by Wayne Jones for @janefriedmanAuthorsplaining: an Insidious Invitation for Readers to Skim: by Laura DrakeUnlocking the Secret of How to Write Great Set-ups and Pay-offs: by Zena Dell LoweDo Your Lovebirds Have a Solid Reason to Stay Apart? by Oren AshkenaziWriting Craft / POVPoint of view: Avoid Head-Hopping: by Anne R. AllenFirst Person and Verb Tense: by Kay DiBiancaWriting Craft / Pre-Writing / OutliningStory Development 101: How to Go from Idea to Outline: byLisa Taylor at FictionaryWriting Craft / RevisionGet It Right—Three Reasons to Rewrite Your Work: by Lilka RaphaelWriting: Revising Your Plot: by Linda S. ClareWriting Craft / Revisions / CritiquesQuestions to ask beta readers: from Rhea’s Chaos MotivationReasons To Be In More Than One Critique Group: by Debra Kempf ShumakerWriting Craft / ScenesScene Structure and Transitions in Big Scenes: by KM WeilandWriting Craft / World-BuildingIs Your Worldbuilding Novel or Bizarre? by Oren AshkenaziWriting Tools / AppsCollaborative Writing With AI With Rachelle Ayala: by Joanna Penn
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July 28, 2024
Can You Combine Two Characters Into One?
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
I was reading a mystery recently, a book that I was enjoying. It was a British police procedural with great, atmospheric settings, interesting characters, and a puzzling murder.
It was also very confusing, although it didn’t start out that way. Starting out, it seemed well-organized with shifts between the POV of the victim’s girlfriend and the POV of the investigating officer.
But suddenly, the reader was introduced to what seemed like the entire police station. Two characters seemed as if they might be sounding boards for the detective. Then there were a couple of others who seemed like bad apples, making the police department look bad. A few others were introduced, as well. All of the characters were named.
If a character is named, I try hard to remember who the character is for the next time he pops up in a scene or is mentioned in dialogue. Chapters went by, however, without the characters being mentioned again.
Then I realized it was a debut novel by the author, although the series is now an established one.
Sure enough, later on it became obvious. Two of the named detectives that returned in future chapters, were just sort of sidekick characters. It wouldn’t have been a problem unless there weren’t many other characters. But there were.
In this instance, I think it would have been helpful for the author or editor to realize the two characters could be combined into one because they played the same role in the story.
This can be done in plenty of other situations. Do you need two close friends for your protagonist? Do you need two neighbors to give perspective on the protagonist’s neighborhood?
It’s tricky for readers, especially in today’s distracting world, to keep up with a large cast. This is just one way to winnow them down.
Do you get lost with too many characters as a reader? How do you address it as a writer?
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July 27, 2024
LitLinks
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
LitLinks are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 70,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers. While you’re there, check out the Writer’s Digest award-winning Hiveword novel organizer.
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Conferences and Events / MiscellaneousThe International Publishers Association at Frankfurter Buchmesse: by Porter AndersonCreativity and Inspiration / Inspiration100 One-Word Writing Prompts: by Javacia Harris BowserWrite Like A Kid Again: Using Writing Prompts: by Annie CosbyCreativity and Inspiration / Inspiration / Reading as Writers7 Books About People Accused of Being Witches: by J. Nicole JonesCrime Fiction: In The Spotlight: Alex Pavesi’s the Eighth Detective: by Margot Kinberg 10 Feminist Crime Novels Subverting the Dead Girl Trope: by Kat Davis7 Books Structured as Conversations: by Shze-Hui TjoaThe Lure of the Jailhouse Confessional: by Carol LaHinesCreativity and Inspiration / Productivity / Fitting in WritingProven Strategies to Overcome Distraction and Write Your Book: by Rochelle MelanderBig, beautiful goals – but can’t be bothered? 11 great productivity tips for lazy people: by Joel SnapeCreativity and Inspiration / Productivity / Writer’s BlockSix Writers on How They Tackle Writer’s Block: from Lit HubPractical (and Fun) Tips for Overcoming Writer’s Block: by Elizabeth StixCreativity and Inspiration / Writing LifeTwo Reasons Not to Use AI to Write Your Novels: by Beth K. VogtThoughts on Focus for Writers & the Distractions We Battle: by Larry J. LeechHow Writers Torture Themselves (& How To Stop): by Susanne BennettShould You Show a WIP to Friends and Family? by Anne R. AllenWriting as a Transformation: by Doug LewarsWriting Advice: It May or May Not Work for You: by Tammy KarasekSerendipity for Writers: by Kathleen McClearyWriting Your Novel Backward Might Be the Secret to Success: by Janice HardyBalancing a Writng Career with Self-Care: by Fox Print EditorialOn the Internet, We’re All Unreliable Narrators: by Olivia Muenter @literaryhubGenres / FantasySix Things You Need to Know about Writing Romantasy: by Maria V. SnyderGenres / HumorWhy Humor is one of the Sharpest Tools in a Writer’s Arsenal: by Rob HartGenres / MemoirHow to Write a Memoir: 10 Tips for Sharing Your Story: by Linda O’DonnellThe Missing Link in Memoir Character Development : by Lisa Cooper EllisonGenres / MiscellaneousHow one author writes in multiple genres: by Alessandra TorreWhat Writers Should Know: Genres: by D.L. FinnGenres / MysteryChildren with Famous Parents as an Element in Crime Fiction: by Margot KinbergBalance of Power in Relationships as an Element of Crime Fiction: by Margot KinbergGenres / Short StoriesHow to Publish a Collection of Your Short Stories: by Rayne Hall @theiwsgPromo / Book Descriptions and CopywritingWriting that Book Blurb: by Anne K. HawkinsonPromo / MiscellaneousGetting Book Endorsements: Everything You Need to Know: by Penny SansevieriPromo / PodcastsPodcast Guesting Goals: by Debra EckerlingPublishing / MiscellaneousHow to Write Your Book’s Acknowledgments: by Lisa TenerPublishing / News / International PublishingAmazon Literary Grants This Year Expand to Ireland: by Porter AndersonChina Bestsellers: Summer Shuffles Book Sales Charts: by Porter AndersonHong Kong’s First Open Access Books Program: Three Universities: by Porter AndersonPublishing / Options / Hybrid PublishingTen Things I’ve Learned as a Hybrid Author: by Tari Lynn JewettPublishing / Options / Traditional PublishingHow Books Are Chosen for Publication: from David FarlandPublishing / Options / Traditional Publishing / Querying“Eleven and up” isn’t a genre (query critique): by Nathan BransfordTips on finding the right agent: by Natalie AguirreQuery Letter Questions Answered: by Linda GildenPublishing / Options / Traditional Publishing / Rejections10 Ways to Handle Rejection Letters: by Kelley J. P. LindbergPublishing / Process / Services to AvoidSix common publishing and book marketing hustles of 2024 – and what we can do: by Roz MorrisWriting Craft / Characters / DevelopmentMaking Your Character’s Choices Fit Their Personality: by Beau Donnan9 Proven Steps for Memorable Character Development: by Jerry JenkinsWriting Craft / Common MistakesShowing vs. Telling: by Marilynn ByerlyWriting Craft / Flashback and Back StoryNeed a Lot of Backstory? Options for Structuring Your Story: by Jami GoldWriting Craft / Lessons from Books and FilmOne Snail: Writing Lessons From the Bell Jar: by Liza Nash TaylorFive Fantasy Movies With Timeless Fairy Tale Vibes: by Lorna WallaceWriting Craft / Literary Devices3 Ways to Infuse Your Story with Theme: by CS Lakin38 Tone Examples: How to Use Tone in Writing: by Linda O’DonnellCrafting themes to inspire: by Alessandra TorreTypes of Irony in Writing: by Jerry JenkinsWriting Craft / MiscellaneousMaking Your World Dangerous: from MythcreantsConsider This Before Killing a Character: by K.M. WeilandAn Interview With Author Cynthia Beach: by Hugh CookWhat Do We Really Mean When We Say “Show, Don’t Tell”? by Janet S. FoxWriting Animals into your Story: by D. Wallace PeachWriting Craft / RevisionWhy you should keep an editing diary: by Daphne Gray-GrantHow to Rewrite a Story for a Different Call: by Dannye ChaseTips for Revision: by ARHuelsenbeckHow to Fix Big Story Problems: by @writers_helping_writers_angelaGet It Right—Three Reasons to Rewrite Your Work: by Lilka RaphaelWriting Craft / Revisions / CritiquesWhy Your Book Needs Beta Readers: by Andrea LundgrenWhat to Ask Your Beta Readers: by Andrew Noakes for @janefriedmanWriting Craft / ScenesWriting: The Whens and Wheres of Scenes: by Linda S. ClareThe Secret to Page-Turning Scene Endings: by Lisa Poisso @writers_helping_writers_angelaWriting Craft / World-Building5 Tips For Better World Building: from Kathryn, The Fake Redhead
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July 21, 2024
An Interview With Author Cynthia Beach
Interview by Hugh Cook
Cynthia Beach is the author of The Surface of Water, a timely novel published this year by InterVarsity Press. The novel presents an unflinching, lifting-the-veil portrayal of a contemporary evangelical megachurch; it reveals the damaging consequences when faith is overruled by the temptations of power and wealth. In our age of #churchtoo, the novel thus is a relevant and timely read.
Cynthia Beach is interviewed by author Hugh Cook.
What is the main storyline of The Surface of Water?
Matthew Goodman, celebrated pastor of a Chicago megachurch, nevertheless has a secret that could severely damage his reputation if it is revealed. A young woman named Trish Card comes into Goodman’s life, and she is the only person who can uncover his secret. But Goodman doesn’t know it. He has become lost inside his fame, and what Trish Card may offer him is a doorway to truth.
What motivated you to write this novel?
In November 2008, 55-year-old Pastor Matthew Goodman and 25-year-old Trish Card arrived. Goodman came to my mental door, invited there by a “what if” question. What if a successful pastor is a Richard Cory?
Richard Cory is the glamorous and tragic gentleman-celebrity of a poem by American
Pulitzer-prize-winning poet E. A. Robinson. In high school, I read Robinson’s poem “Richard Cory” and could not forget it. In it, the working town’s celebrity, the business tycoon everyone loves and envies, has an internal life vastly different from the external image he projects. The poem taught me the complexity of being human. Some folks who seem to have it all, in fact do not.
So, this “what if” question arrived—but this time with an evangelical pastor. And not just
any pastor, but a wealthy broadcast pastor with a Chicago megachurch, a pastor who is good-
looking and articulate and very, very successful. But Matthew Goodman’s success doesn’t fill him. Why not? Matthew has shuttered his soul and fails to explore the discordant chaos around his father, radio evangelist Jacob Goodman. So, yes, what if? What if a successful pastor is a Richard Cory?
As if that’s not enough, Trish Card, his new assistant, arrives in this successful man’s life
as someone on a mission—and as someone who hasn’t had any of the social advantages Matthew Goodman has had. A girl from Trentwood. What she has, though, is sacrificial love demonstrated by the Latino family who cared for her after her mom’s death. Because of their love and her suffering, Trish operates with keen authenticity that wakes this image-conscious leader. In the world of fiction, this is an “odd-couple pairing.” What might a Trish Card teach a Richard Cory?
What are some themes in this novel?
The costs to the powerful for being the powerful and the costs to the powerless for being powerless. Another theme contrasts true religion with false. Finally, there’s a theme of redemption, too, for Matthew Goodman—if he’s willing. When we become lost in life, we must find a path to renewal.
What genre is your novel?
Contemporary, upmarket fiction. This means it’s literary—character-driven with some artful word use—while maintaining tantalizing suspense. It’s a good combo. Artful and suspenseful.
Of course, suspense doesn’t mean a physical bomb explodes, right? Suspense includes emotional bombs, too, and that’s what Surface is about.
What are readers saying about your novel?
The most common response to date is a complaint. Readers say they stay up too late finishing it. They must find out what happens. That, of course, delights me. I start to laugh.
So, why can’t people put the novel down?
Matthew Goodman and Trish Card are complex characters. They aren’t one-dimensional, and neither are their problems. My impression? Readers care about them. Readers feel Goodman’s vulnerabilities—and Trish’s.
I also learned a great fiction technique from what agent Donald Maass called “micro-tension,” which he defines as conflicting emotions. The Surface of Water has protagonists who are riddled with ambivalence—Goodman with his isolating fame, and Trish with the whole mystery about who her dad is and her mom’s tough life.
What are you most proud of in Surface?
Hmm. Okay, here’s what I’m most proud about: looking at things in both a truthful and loving way. I respect Goodman. I respect Trish. The story doesn’t trash men. Although it touches on #ChurchToo, it’s not a story colored by gender contempt. I have a high view of how we suffer regardless of who we might be.
Water appears in the title and throughout the novel. What does it mean?
Goodman is a surface guy. He has built a lifestyle in which he neglects his soul, his family, his relationship to the world. So, what would happen if he plunges into the deep end? That’s one meaning of water in this novel.
But symbolism doesn’t function like simple arithmetic. There is a “beyond-ness” to water in this story. Is it mercy? Grace? A transcendent being?
Is there anything else you’d like us to know about your novel?
The Surface of Water is distinct in several ways. First, its point of view directs empathy toward Pastor Goodman. What is the impact of our celebrity culture on a human soul? Goodman’s celebrity status makes examining the truth of his inner life difficult. A second distinct feature is that this novel explores sexual misconduct as sexual addictions, not as a “mistake” or one small sin, but a chosen psychological gear returned to again and again.
While alive to social justice issues, the novel doesn’t preach; instead, it has understated depth.
Readers will find real characters, not one-dimensional caricatures, which is especially vital in a story about a pastor. Readers travel with a celebrity pastor, a “Richard Cory,” who finds his status isolating and burdensome. They will discover a man who is complex, aggravating in his arrogance and accessible in his sadness, and a young woman whose past makes her both strong and troubled.
What are you working on now?
A Thousand Wings of Light, a sequel to Surface of Water, which has riveted my focus now. Joining Goodman and Trish as point-of-view characters are Goodman’s son, Jonathan, and Maria’s son, Andres. At the end of Surface, everything erupts, and now we move with these four characters to see what happens next.
Where can readers obtain a copy of The Surface of Water?
Readers can order the book from their local bookstore, from Amazon, or Barnes & Noble.
Cynthia Beach is a longtime professor of creative writing and author of Creative Juices for Writers and the novel The Surface of Water. She has an MA in journalism from Wheaton College and an MFA in fiction writing. Cynthia directs a faith-based writing workshop, Scriptoria, with Newbery-winner Gary Schmidt. She lives near Grand Rapids, Michigan on seven quiet acres with her husband, Dave. Her Surface sequel is forthcoming. For author information, visit cynthiabeach.com.
Hugh Cook holds an MFA in fiction writing from the Writers’ Workshop at the University of Iowa. He has published two books of short stories and two novels. Readers can obtain his recent award-winning novel Heron River at Amazon and at Barnes and Noble . Hugh also edits fiction manuscripts. Contact him at hughcook212@gmail.com. For more information, check his website at hugh-cook.ca.
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July 20, 2024
LitLinks
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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July 14, 2024
Public Speaking for Writers
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
I’ve definitely made my peace with public speaking in the last 15 years or so. It’s still usually not my most favorite activity, but I’ve gotten to the point where I enjoy sharing information and even providing some entertainment.
The easiest form of public speaking is podcasts. I usually appear on a podcast at least once a year. It’s minimal prep and I can even have notes in the background. The same goes for zoom calls, recorded or not. I have a checklist for appearing on podcasts, which you can see here.
Minimally harder is speaking to writers in person at conferences. I feel very much at ease speaking to writers, so the only hard part is making sure I’m prepared for any questions. I’ve found it’s very important to get a feel for exactly where the audience is, in terms of their writing. Are they just started out? Are they publishing? Do they want to hear more about craft or promo? Usually the organizer can answer these questions for me in advance so that I can be prepared. I answer questions at the end. If a question from a writer gets too technical and seems to be beyond the scope of what the rest of the writers are interested in, I ask them to speak with me afterwards or shoot me an email.
The toughest, for me, is speaking with readers. The very toughest is speaking with book clubs (tip: I recommend keeping all of your outlines to use as cheat sheets before speaking with book clubs), but speaking with other readers is also hard. I’ve found that the audience tends to like my general talk the best. In it, I start out asking for a show of hands to see how many grew up reading mysteries or watching them (Scooby Doo, et al) on TV. Then I talk about constructing mysteries for a bit . . . clues, red herrings, sleuths, and suspects. From there, I give an overview of how I got started writing and then my writing life and routine. I include as much humor as possible and end up by taking questions.
General tips for in-person talks:Arrive early. This is my biggest tip. It helps avoid tech issues that may crop up. You can also greet the audience as they come in, which I’ve found helps me reduce nerves.
Move around. Although standing behind a lectern feels very safe, it’s less visually interesting for the audience than seeing the speaker walk.
If you use a PowerPoint presentation, have it be image-based instead of text-based.
Keep track of your audience. If people are looking bored or sleepy, pivot and talk about something else.
Focus on delivering value. Not only will the audience walk away from the event feeling they gained something, it helps speakers reduce any anxiety regarding public speaking.
Do you do much public speaking? What tips have I missed?
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July 13, 2024
LitLinks
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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July 7, 2024
Nail Your In-Store Book Signing
by Hugh Cook
On a rainy Saturday morning this spring, Indigo Books, Canada’s largest bookstore chain, arranged an in-store book signing for my novel Heron River. Many of you who read the blogs here on Elizabeth Craig’s site are also writers, and you may be hoping to obtain a bookstore signing yourself for your recently published or soon-to-be-published book. If you land that signing, perhaps some of what I experienced that day at Indigo Books may resonate with you.
The store manager welcomed me as I entered the store and led me to a table just inside the store’s front doors. “Here’s your spot,” he said.
I was worried that with the rain, few people might visit the store that day. Still, I was happy the manager had arranged a spot for me at the store entrance, so that the shoppers who braved the rain that day would have to pass by my table. Had I been placed deep in the store, readers looking for a book on notorious serial killers or how to get rich playing the stock market would have missed my table. So when you land an in-store book signing, see if they can place you at the store entrance, especially if it’s a big-box store like Indigo or Barnes & Noble. The mantra that realtors like to repeat is true also of a book signing: location, location, location.
My advantageous spot in the store would have meant nothing, however, if I’d glued my posterior to the chair behind my table the three hours I was there. You may be a card-carrying introvert, and the thought of getting up off your chair to talk to complete strangers may give you hives, but if you hope to sell books you must get up off your duff. And talk to people.
I tried to think of a snappy ice breaker, something so shoppers walking by would know I was selling a novel, not a book on the basic teachings of Mormonism or a revolutionary new diet that would enable you to lose forty pounds a month. When a woman approached my table, I said, “You’re looking for that gripping novel you can’t put down.”
The woman gave a little snort. “I’m looking for my daughter,” she said, and walked on.
Undeterred, I tried my opening gambit on another shopper. “You’re looking for that gripping novel you can’t put down.”
The woman must have thought I was an employee. “No,” she said, “but can you tell me where the stuffed animals are?”
I tried my spiel a third time. “Actually,” the woman said, “I’m looking for white candles for Easter.”
Oh yes, the store sold more than books. Much more.
I realized my clever line about looking for a gripping novel they couldn’t put down was nothing more than that: merely clever. I would have to change my approach. I told people I was a local author, that the store was featuring a novel I had just published, and that I’d be happy to tell them what it was about. In the next fifteen minutes, two women I talked to said they wanted to support local authors, and bought a copy of my novel. “Bless your heart,” I told them.
I had to engage people, yes, but I also had to be genuine.
Speaking of local, I found it important to tell people my novel is set in nearby Caledonia, a small town on the Grand River fifteen miles away. “I live in Caledonia,” a man said, a smile of surprise lighting his face. I handed him a copy of the novel. He looked it over, recognized the river on the front cover and the old mill on the back, and said those three lovely words, “I’ll buy it.” At your book signing, mention the setting of the novel, wherever that is: Philadelphia, Tuscany, wherever. You might just hit a person who remembers Philadelphia from the movie Rocky, or who had a great vacation last summer in a villa in Tuscany.
The way this man looked the book over, though, front cover and back, riffled through the pages, then bought the book, convinced me I would hand my novel to every person I talked to. Every shopper I handed the book to took their time looking at it, which I figure increased their chances of buying it. If they did not want to buy the book, they would have to hand it back to me.
At this point I need to tell you briefly what the book is about. My novel has two central characters. Adam, a young man of 25, has a developmental disability, the result of his having fallen into a deep well when he was six. Although firefighters pulled him up and he was revived after forty-five minutes of CPR, he was under water long enough to have experienced lack of oxygen to the brain, causing irreversible brain damage. The other central character, Adam’s mother Madeline, blames herself for her son’s fall into the well. She was hanging wash on the clothesline while her two boys played outside, and she feels she should have been more vigilant.
Every writer who has finished a book is told to prepare an elevator pitch, a thirty-second high-concept statement of your novel’s key selling point that compels your listener to want to know more. Now, Heron River, as you can gather from what I’ve just told you about the two main characters, may not appeal initially to those readers who look for a novel that will lift their spirits. And yet, despite the book’s serious subject matter, most audiences are emotionally moved, I find, when I read from the novel’s opening chapter.
So, unable to tell the shoppers at Indigo that my main character marries his college cheerleader sweetheart, they win a ten-million-dollar lottery, and have three beautiful children, I told them the main character of my novel is a 25-year-old young man with a developmental disability after he fell into a well when he was six. Not exactly Oprah, heart-warming stuff.
After about an hour, though, I realized that almost all the people who bought my novel were women, and I decided I would change my elevator pitch. Instead of telling people my main character is a 25-year-old young man with a developmental disability, I told them my main character is a mother whose life takes a tragic turn when her six-year-old boy falls into a well. No one turned away to find a stuffed animal or Easter candles after I said this.
Expect the possibility of surprise. At a book signing, authors not only sign books, but are often asked to inscribe the book to someone. In fact, it’s a question I always ask someone who buys my book: “Would you like me to inscribe it to you?”
That Saturday a young couple came to my table; the mother was carrying a baby. They bought my novel, I signed it, and before I could ask, the mother said, “Could you inscribe it to Isabella?”
“I’d love to,” I said, “that’s you?”
“No, she’s Isabella,” the mother said, and held up her baby.
I had to think for a second. “How old is she?” I asked. I think I must have smiled.
“Fourteen months.”
“You realize this is a novel for adults, right?”
“Uh huh,” the mother said, nodding.
“I guess you’ll be putting it aside for a while then,” I said, and inscribed the book “To Isabella.” Later, I wondered whether this was perhaps the first time they’d met an actual author, and they wanted to commemorate the occasion.
A final suggestion. After Heron River came out, my local city newspaper gave full-page coverage of my novel: a feature story about how I approach writing, and a lengthy review of the book. A full page. Man, most writers I know would give their right arm for such coverage. I took the page along to Indigo, and placed it on the table where shoppers couldn’t miss it. I also printed off a sheet of paper containing the following brief excerpts from newspaper reviews of my novel:
“I had the good fortune of reading Heron River. There isn’t a false note in it.”
“As lovely a novel as I have read in a long time.”
“A beautiful book – a very beautiful book.”
I printed these excerpts in large, 36-point bold font so that even Mr. Magoo would have been able to read them. When you’re selling your novel in a store that has thousands of books—not to mention stuffed animals and Easter candles—you do what it takes. At your book signing, if you’re fortunate to have received reviews of your book, whether they’re from a newspaper, from Amazon, Barnes & Noble, or Goodreads, take along brief excerpts.
I felt good after my three hours in the store, and thought it had gone well. As I was packing up, the manager came over and told me how many books I’d sold. “Impressive,” he said.
I walked out of the store to my car and saw it had stopped raining.
Hugh Cook holds an MFA in fiction writing from the Writers’ Workshop at the University of Iowa. He has published two books of short stories and two novels. Readers can obtain his recent novel Heron River at Amazon and at Barnes and Noble . Send him a query at hughcook212@gmail.com.
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by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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