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Didn't enjoy this as much as I thought I would, the main characters irritated me, they weren't as likeable or endearing as they used to be. Their angst and blandness bogged down the story, it was still interesting but could have been better if the characters hadn't been so annoying.
-Liked the various reveals (for the most part): the Arawn/Matilda/Gwynn legend, the fae factions/conflicts, the truth about Olivia's parents, Ricky learning about the fae/who he was, and Olivia's visions/her past. Even though the reveals were good it did take away a lot of the mystery and tension, I think it would have served the story better if some things had been held back.
I was a little disappointed at there being less focus on Cainsville and not as much omen stuff with Olivia, the omens and Cainsville elements for me were what made the series stand out from the rest of the genre, them not featuring as much made this installment more like a run of the mill UF offering.
-Not sure what I felt about the Matilda reveal, I didn't hate it but I didn't like it either. I know Olivia wasn't meant to be a reincarnation of Matilda but she may as well have been as Ricky/Olivia/Gabriel were pretty much a repeat of the Arawn/Matilda/Gwynn dynamic, just with some slight differences. I don't think making Olivia's arc all about which guy she has babies with is all that creative or interesting. I don't mind a good love triangle, but not when the most important part of the heroine's journey seems to be all about which guy she ultimately chooses.
-There was too much page time dedicated to Olivia/Gabriel misinterpreting each other and making up daft assumptions, it was repetitive and frustrating. Their relationship just went round in circles, I was expecting more development as the last book ended with Gabriel realising how much he cared for Olivia. I didn't want a romance between them but I at least expected them to develop their friendship instead of the repetitive YA crap that was going on between them.
-Used to like Olivia but not so much in this one. I think it was a combination of her turning into even more of a speshul snowflake and her having every guy chase after her. I rolled my eyes at Olivia finding out she was the key to saving the Cainsville fae. Yea, Olivia being the-one-to-save-them-all just bored me.
Then there was Olivia's personality which was no longer appealing, she was just generic with her mummy/daddy issues, her self righteousness, and her focusing so much on her love life. It also bothered me how Ricky and Gabriel spent most of their time bending over backwards to protect her and making her their number one priority. I know that wasn't really Olivia's fault, but most of the time I didn't think she was worthy of all the attention she received. I kind of changed my mind at the end though when Gabriel threw a hissy fit and abandoned Olivia knowing she could be in serious danger, the whole thing was pathetic. As much as Gabriel's immaturity and pettiness annoyed me I still preferred him and his flaws over the bland, to-good-to-be-true Ricky.
-I didn't mind Olivia flip flopping ever so slightly with Ricky and Gabriel. I didn't blame her for being confused about Gabriel after spending so much time with him and I didn't blame her for being with Ricky when he was the perfect, puppy dog boyfriend. I was glad she didn't dump Ricky for Gabriel, it would have been pathetic when he gave little indication he was romantically interested in her, if anything Gabriel made it clear that he wouldn't look twice at her. So yea, I liked Olivia staying with Ricky instead of chasing after ice cold Gabriel.
-Ricky was a nice guy and that was all there was to him. He didn't say or do anything interesting, I found his whole perfect boyfriend act with Olivia kind of unrealistic when they'd only been dating all of 5 minutes, she had so much chaos and strangeness going on in her life but Ricky was always there for her and knew exactly how to support and help her. It was just cheesy and one dimensional.
-Gabriel was a very frustrating character, any development he made in the first two books went right out the window. He kept throwing hissy fits and getting all sensitive about the silliest things, he didn't know how to react to Olivia's emotions despite being so insightful and intelligent about everything else. Even with all that though he managed to be a better character than bland Ricky, at least Gabriel managed to make me feel something.
-Hated the pathetic, ridiculous girl fight Olivia had with Lily at the biker's bar. The whole thing was so cliched with 'trashy' mean girl Lily going after speshul-snowflake-oh-so-perfect Olivia. I actually ended up rooting for Lily because I knew it was going to end up with her being humiliated and tossed aside whilst Olivia would be the victor in every way possible. Ugh, it was such a crap scene and all it did was make me hate perfect Olivia.
-Wasn't impressed with Olivia being mostly surrounded by guys, the one young woman she encountered was portrayed as a violent, jealous harpy. It irked me how Olivia only really got along with guys or women who were much older than her. Also, I was pissed at her being so loving towards both her dads and them being portrayed as oh so kind and genuine, whilst both her mothers were selfish and/or psychotic, who she thought very little of. The dynamics between the men and women in her life made her seem like one of those women who only care about men but don't give a damn about the women.
-I ended up siding with serial killer Pamela over Olivia. I found Olivia ungrateful, self-righteous, unforgiving, cold, judgmental and bitchy when it came to her mum. She needed to get off her high horse, her lecturing Pam made me roll my eyes. It was irritating especially when she was all about her dads, I hated the whole daddy's girl vibe she gave off.
-Didn't get why Pamela had such a pathological hatred for the Tylweth Teg/Cainsville fae. There was no real basis for the level of hatred she had for them, there should be have an actual explanation for it rather then her hating them just because she did. And it made no sense that a four year old Pam would despise the fae to the ridiculous level that she did, when they hadn't actually done anything to her.
Hope the next book focuses more on Cainsville, and there's less angst/fighting/misunderstandings between Gabriel/Olivia. Also, I'd like to see more positive female friendships and for Olivia to get along with women her own age instead of only grandma-aged women (doubt that'll happen though).