The voice from the Edge.
Harlan Ellison was a superb storyteller who could, from the most innocuous idea, create the most original and twisted story. He frequently walked the path of the darkest and cruellest sides of human nature, yet he also celebrated fleeting moments of rapture and transcendence. His voice was powerful, unique, and very abrasive.
Much of the "Shatterday" collection deals with the "shattering" of the self and the darker side of human relationships. He often described these stories as "mortal dreads," focusing on the quiet, everyday horrors of modern life rather than monsters or aliens.
As with his other short-story collections I reviewed, this one seeks to capture the unique impressions left on me by each narrative. This particular volume contains several award winners and nominees; the tone is consistently sombre, demanding a disciplined, careful reading to achieve full impact.
Jeffty is Five
We all inhabit a realm of Mortal Dreads, where souls are routinely stolen. We fear the theft of the self by the unknown and the unimaginable, lurking in the shadows of the night. In "Jeffty is Five," however, the thief is the adult world itself, closing its predatory maw upon a child's innocence.
This stands as one of Ellison’s most visceral works—a heartbreaking elegy for the death of wonder. We have each, in our turn, beaten and drowned our own innocence to assimilate into "real life": a cycle of industry, profit, and conflict. And always, we persist in the masquerade, pretending this is exactly the world we desired.
How's the Night Life on Cissalda?
Satyromaniacs and nymphomaniacs beware, this story is not for the faint of heart.
Only Ellison could tell us how the "perfect fuck" exterminated mankind and, therefore, the cockroaches inherited Earth.
Disgustingly hilarious. The flaw is obvious, but I let you discover it...
Flop Sweat
The title draws its name from the showbiz shorthand for raw anxiety: cold sweat. Ellison was famously vociferous regarding the need for moral responsibility to moderate the unchecked power of the media, and in this apocalyptic horror, that power turns lethal.
In this vision of the end, humanity—like Christ—is hauled before a Sanhedrin from Hell and found wanting. But unlike the biblical narrative, there is no "Harrowing of Hell" to rescue the condemned; no saviour is coming to break the gates. We are left in the dark with the chilling realisation that this fate is no more than we deserve.
Would You Do It for a Penny?
The Art of the Aisle: A tactical guide to store-front flirting!
So, you’ve spotted someone intriguing between the frozen peas and the artisanal sourdough. Before you go full "Don Juan protagonist," you need a plan that doesn’t end with a security escort. Here is how to manoeuvre with grace, wit, and a dash of tactical positioning.
Step 1: Long-Range Reconnaissance!
First, establish a baseline of interest. Make brief eye contact to see if there’s a spark or if she’s trying to remember if she’s out of milk. You’re looking for a reaction that’s extra positive—a lingering look or a soft smile. If she immediately becomes fascinated by the expiration date on a carton of yoghurt, abort mission; she’s just not into your choice of cereal.
Step 2: The Casual Flank!
Once you’ve confirmed she hasn't fled to the pharmacy section in panic, it’s time to meander. Don't sprint; instead, casually navigate the linoleum tundra until you’ve positioned yourself within a respectable, non-threatening distance—roughly two aisles and a display of discounted crackers away. The goal is to enter her peripheral vision without looking like you’re closing in to pounce.
Step 3: The Smile Deployment!
From your new vantage point, wait for the "accidental" re-connection. When your eyes meet again, deploy a quick, warm smile. Think charming protagonist, not Batman villain. This is the moment of truth. Focus entirely on her response: if she returns the smile, you have a green light. If she looks at you like you’re a suspicious dent in a soup can, it’s time to pivot and spend the next ten minutes very intensely comparing the fibre content of different granolas.
The story idea was from Ellion's friend and collaborator, Haskell Barkin, and, being written almost sixty years ago, it's cruelly misogynistic in an extremely clever tale of a skilled con artist who manages in his single-minded pursuit of the art of what it passes for one-directional "animal attraction" in supermarkets.
I found this story a bit out of place in this collection.
The Man Who Was Heavily into Revenge
Fear not your enemies, for they can only kill you; fear not your friends, for they can only betray you. Fear only the indifferent who permit the killers and betrayers to walk safely on Earth. (Edward Yashinsky)
Cosmic justice—that sudden lightning bolt meant to punish the wicked and succour the broken—doesn't exist. It feels good to dream about, sure. Or not. It is one thing to wish the worst upon someone; it is quite another to see those wishes granted. In the aftermath, we realise how little revenge truly helps and how little it actually provides any sense of compensation.
This brings us back to the classic Harlan Ellison avalanche of doom. It’s a descent where no one claims the blame. As Stanisław Jerzy Lec famously put it: No snowflake in an avalanche ever feels responsible.
Shoppe Keeper
This one is a deconstruction of the "The Little Shop That Wasn't There Yesterday" trope.
This story—Harlan Ellison’s "Shoppe Keeper"—originated from a simple, nagging curiosity about a classic fantasy trope. We, who read, we’ve all "seen" the mysterious magic shops that appear in alleyways to sell protagonists exactly what they desire. But Ellison looked deeper. He wondered about the person behind the counter: Who would run such a shop? What could they possibly gain by selling magical trinkets to unsuspecting passers-by? And most importantly, where do they go when the shop inevitably disappears?
In just eighteen pages, the narrative shifts seamlessly from whimsical fantasy to hard science fiction, all while deconstructing the struggle of the artist against the cold necessities of survival. Ultimately, Ellison poses a harrowing choice: which is more important—the art or the artist’s life? He pushes the reader to consider why one must eventually triumph over the other, and ultimately, challenges us to question the true role of the "narrator" in the fabric of a story.
Imagine this, please:
Setting: A snowy London rooftop, overlooking a bustling Christmas Eve street. Gonzo, in his frock coat and top hat, perches precariously on a chimney, quill in hand. Rizzo the Rat clings to the same chimney, shivering and looking utterly unimpressed.
The Scene:
"I told you, storytellers are omniscient; I know everything!" Gonzo declared with a flourish.
Rizzo the Rat shivered, pulling his tiny scarf tighter around his neck. "Hoity-toity, Mr Godlike smarty-Pants. If you're so omniscient, how come you can't tell me where I stashed that half-eaten cheese danish this morning?"
Gonzo puffed out his chest. "My dear Rizzo, an author's omniscience pertains to the grand tapestry of narrative! Not the mundane minutiae of a rat's gastronomical misplacements."
He peered down at the street. "Ah, yes! Behold, the very moment young Ebenezer will encounter the charitable gentlemen!"
Rizzo squinted. "Are you sure? Because it looks like he's just... yelling at a dog."
"Details, details!" Gonzo waved a dismissive hand. "The spirit of the scene is what truly matters, the foreshadowing of his impending transformation! The very air itself, pregnant with untold tales!"
"Yeah, well, this air feels pregnant with frostbite," Rizzo grumbled, rubbing his paws together. "And what's our particular narrative function up here, anyway? Besides giving me a fear of heights and a craving for warm, delicious food?"
"Why, we are the Greek Chorus, Rizzo! The omnipresent, all-knowing narrators guiding our audience through the moral labyrinth of Mr Scrooge's soul!" Gonzo proclaimed.
"More like the 'reek chorus' after two days on this rooftop," Rizzo muttered under his breath, then called out, "Hey, if you know everything, what's for dinner tonight? Because I'm picturing something involving lots of gravy and no chimney soot."
Gonzo paused, his quill hovering above the parchment. He tapped his chin thoughtfully, a rare moment of silence. "Hmm. Dinner... Yes. I foresee... a rather splendid gruel."
Rizzo gasped, clutching his head dramatically. "Gruel?! Oh, the humanity! I knew you weren't omniscient! An all-knowing being would never inflict gruel upon a starving rat! You're a fraud, Gonzo! A literary charlatan!"
I, the author of this, I'm certainly also a literary charlatan with my flimsy rumbles, but H Elisson was no charlatan at all.
All the Lies That Are My Life
What is friendship? How—and where—do we find an adequate answer? For concepts such as friendship, love, or art, the definition redefines itself each time the question arises. These are not static terms found in a dictionary; they are lived experiences that yield a multitude of shifting answers. Because these definitions are fluid, we must look beyond traditional meanings to gain a deeper understanding—especially when a dark, hidden secret looms beneath the surface.
Is it entirely appropriate to employ the term "infidelity" within the context of friendship? While disloyalty often describes a general failure of support, infidelity more accurately captures a profound breach: the violation of a foundational faith. When a friend violates the trust inherent in that bond, are they truly a friend any longer?
This story is semi-autobiographical; not SF or Fantasy, but a contemporary mainstream story taken from possible real-life events. His most solipsistic work I have read, so far and one that is among my least favourites.
Django
The smell of dust, the weight of silence, and the transition from old ambitions to a new reason for living.
In a graveyard of ambition, art demanded its due, laying its sacrifices upon the stone altars of forgotten gods—those silent idols that no longer answered any prayers.
A tribute to Django Reinhard, written in two days, sitting in the front window of a bookstore in Boston; he had offered up years to the ink and the paper, watching the smoke of his youth rise and vanish into the rafters. But in the quiet rot of that sanctuary, he found a different pulse. It wasn't in the finished masterpiece, but in the simple, steady rhythm of a breath shared with another. He stopped reaching for the heavens and finally found something to live for right there.
Count the Clock That Tells the Time
Where does the time go, Shakespeare?
When I do count the clock that tells the time,
And see the brave day sunk in hideous night;
When I behold the violet past prime,
And sable curls all silver'd o'er with white;
When lofty trees I see barren of leaves
Which erst from heat did canopy the herd,
And summer's green all girded up in sheaves
Borne on the bier ...
Without love, we fade into nothingness—I know that very well. But dreaming about love can also destroy us (a truth I know even more intimately). It is when the dream dies that we perish along with it, never having tasted joy because no one ever told us what it was supposed to be.
In the story “Count the Clock That Tells the Time,” we are forced to plumb the depths of human loneliness and despair. It posits that the universe obeys a Law of Conservation of Time just as strictly as the Law of Conservation of Energy: nothing is truly lost, yet nothing can be reclaimed. It is a concept that is as sweet and poignant as it is devastating.
Where did time go? Where did we waste our lives? Metaphysics SUCKS!
In the Fourth Year of the War
A horror story! Another "revenge" story!
Each of us moves through life shadowed by memories we never forget. We are bent, shaped and broken by those ancient fears and hatreds...within every adult is caged a frightened child...
Have you ever heard "voices" in your head?
What are they? An alien? A ghost? A psychotic doppelganger or a fragmented personality? Or, most horrifically, is it your innermost self finally unleashed?
Memories: “Zombie things from the quicklime pit…” I love this concept of our memories. We try to ignore them. We try to inter them in the shallow burial grounds of our minds. But like the undead, they refuse to stay down. We are made up of our memories, including the rotten ones, and as human beings, we never really let things go. They just wait to find their way home.
Alive and Well and on a Friendless Voyage
This is a play on the biblical phrasing "the truth shall make you free".
We are, each of us, an island universe in a sea of space, drifting through a hermetic silence we can never quite break. We are tiny creatures in a cosmos that is neither benign nor malign; it is simply vast and unaware of us, save perhaps as fodder for the cold mechanics of a biological chain. We reach across the void for meaning, yet there is a danger in the discovery: you shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you mad. It is enough to make one wonder if we have been looking at the heavens all wrong—that perhaps this world is not a beginning, but another planet's hell.
All the Birds Come Home to Roost
Picture this: you are a big, powerful male, a body full of heat and hormones, sitting alone in the quiet of your home. You are a vault of memories, a collection of former lovers tucked away in the dark corners of your mind. Then, the timeline collapses.
They start to arrive. One after another. They don't come in a blur; they march in chronological order, from the woman you left last month to the girl you lost two decades ago. The "past" is no longer a concept—she is standing in your living room, real as stone, asking for a glass of water.
It’s a brutal awakening. It destroys the lie that any single relationship was perfect. Standing there, you’re forced to see them through the eyes of who you are now, rather than the delusional version of yourself that loved them then.
Seeing them all in one room reveals the "Type." You see the cycle. You see the recurring emotional wounds you’ve spent a lifetime reopening. They are a mirror reflecting exactly what you were at every stage of your life, and the view is devastating.
Most hauntings depend on the mystery of the dark. But when you drag everyone into the light at once, the ghost story ends. You realise that while you believed you were capable of loving all these different women, you were really just looking for different versions of yourself.
Close the door. Seek the silence. It is a necessary reminder that we carry these people as ghosts because we cannot carry them as flesh and blood. The weight of all that history, gathered in a single room, is physically and emotionally unsustainable.
Opium
We spend the better part of our lives hiding from reality.
We hide within cheap TV shows; we are enslaved and exploited by vapid social media. We drown in religion, alcohol, and drugs—numbed by fast food, hollow shopping sprees, and the endless void of the Internet.
All these distractions are designed to keep us mindless. We are a people living in a delusion of illusions. Marx was right.
But the screen eventually goes dark, and the high always drops. In the quiet, we find ourselves standing in a desert of our own making. We have traded our souls for convenience and our musical consciousness for a comfortable muzak. We are strangers to our own reflections, staring into the mirror only to see a ghost of the person we were meant to become. We are awake, yet we have never been more asleep.
The Other Eye of Polyphemus
This modern, surrealist parable explores themes of alienation, the burden of utility, and the profound human ache for connection.
The absence of the "other eye"—the missing lens of self-awareness and self-care—is deeply symbolic. It serves as a metaphor for a perspective long lost: the ability to recognise our own needs or to be perceived by others as a human being rather than a mere tool.
This is the most tragic layer of Ellison’s narrative, mirrored in the myth of the blinded Polyphemus. When an individual is "blinded" by those in their life, they suffer the consequences of having lived as a Nobody—a utility stripped of personal identity. When they finally break or cry out for help, the world remains indifferent. Because they are surrounded by "friends" who have caused the blindness, those friends ignore the pain; they see only the Nobody they have grown accustomed to using.
The Executioner of the Malformed Children
The future, no longer a distant promise, is bleeding into the present. Sentient horrors—the entropic dregs of a dying timeline—are tearing through the fabric of our reality. Only the Paladins, those sanctified mutations bound by ancient code and cybernetic scars, can hold back the dark.
But they are still forged from men, and betrayal is the darkest of all sins—a rot that no amount of holy light can cleanse.
Shatterday
You live alone. One evening, you dial your own number by mistake, only to hear the phone ringing inside your empty apartment. Then, the receiver is picked up. You answer yourself from across town.
What if your conscience—that little voice you never paid any attention to—suddenly split into a physical double of yourself?
At its core, the story uses the literary trope of the doppelgänger (a spirit double) to explore how we distance ourselves from our own failures. Only one can stay, and the other must be "deleted"
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For those who summon the courage to enter Ellison’s world, there is no middle ground: you will either recoil in regret or find a revelation. Regardless, you will not be the same reader you were when you began.
Harlan Ellison didn't just tell stories; he committed them. His prose was forged in speculative fiction and raw fury, delivered with a vocabulary that hits like a kick in the "family jewels." He was a master of shattering the naive tropes of golden-age sci-fi, choosing instead to focus on the messy, bleeding interior of the human soul.
When accused of writing a story merely to provoke and shock, his answer was characteristically blunt: "At least you got that part right!" For Harlan, hydrogen and idiocy were the two most common elements in the universe.
Long live Harlan Ellison!