Well, it was bound to happen sooner or later in my foray into the world of Harmony, a tale that just didn't rez with me. It's funny though because individually I liked both characters. I mean I really liked Lyra, she was tough, smart, talented, and resilient. Cruz didn't seem so bad except that he needed to be brought up to snuff and he never quite made it. I don't blame him, he was dealt a terrible hand in his backstory and then it wasn't handled in a way that would generate any sympanthy for the character. Although Lyra finally had enough and had her moment at the end, I was ready to picth the book across the room myself if another Sweetwater mentioned how heartbroken Cruz was. Seriously. He deserved everything that he got, and did nothing, at any point to try and rectify the situation, no apology, or explanation, or attempt to reconcile.
Aside from the bedroom chemistry and the fact that "Sweetwater men recognize their true mates...", I'm really struggling to see how Lyra and Cruz are a good match. There certainly didn't seem to be a lot of give and take in the relationship, they didn't complement each other or work together to achieve a common goal, in fact, it seemed to me that Cruz was happy to take whatever Lyra offered without much consideration for her at all. He was needlessly overbearing and he never seemed to have faith in or trust Lyra and her abilities. If his ultimate motive was to win/protect Lyra it didn't come across that way.
Perhaps, the "relationship" suffers from having the reader dropped into it three months after it had met an untimely demise, though I don't really think that is it, at least not for me. The "betrayal" is brought up again, and again, and again but no real motive for it was given other than he "did what he thought he had to do". Let me tell you, after lying about who he was, beginning a romance under false pretenses, orchestrating the takeover of the ruins that she had discovered, allowing her to bankrupt herself in a lawsuit over said ruins, and then only reinitiating contact after three months becasue he needed a favour the very first words out of his mouth should have been "I'm sorry". There aren't enough Amythest Orchids in the world to make up for the way he behaved, and he never even tried to redeeem himself, which is what truly irritated me, especially since Lyra brings it up over and over again. Even if the reader were inclined to forgive and forget, it wasn't possible. I guess it was a pitfall in trying to convey the gravity of the betrayal that had occurred.
Oh, and don't even get me started on all the Sweetwater and Dore family history, it just added an unneccessary complication to an overly complicated tale (though, in retrospect it could have worked for the story if they had skipped the romantic history of the couple, had Lyra betrayed by someone else in the Sweetwater empire, and then had her meet Cruz for the first time when he had to come begging her to help his workers who were trapped in the ruin, against his family's wishes - he would still have to overcome the betrayal, it just wouldn't have been quite so personal, the feuding families plot point would have been relevant, and he wouldn't have started the story with the deck stacked quite so high against him because he wouldn't have treated his soul mate in such a terrible manner).
All in all, the story was okay, not the best in the series but even that is better than a lot of romances out there. If for no other reason, read it for Vincent, the dust bunny, who was adorable.