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The Black Lotus
It's 1752 and Melissa meets the man who will change her life forever. At her disastrous debut, Melissa meets the handsome Justin Lestrade and finds herself falling into his world. But Justin has secrets and many enemies. His dark past will not only ensnare her, but damage everything she knows and understands. Join Melissa as she sinks into a world of old feuds and ancient magic.
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February 3, 2016
“Magic is believing in yourself, if you can do that, you can make anything happen.”
----Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
Claire Warner, an English writer, has penned an enchanting tale of magic, immortality and love, in her book, The Black Lotus which is the first book in the Night Flower series. This story unfolds the forbidden regency styled romance between a young debutante and a mysterious bachelor in town and on top of that the story has elements of mystery, magic and is set in the early eighteenth century .
Synopsis:
It's 1752 and Melissa meets the man who will change her life forever. At her disastrous debut, Melissa meets the handsome Justin Lestrade and finds herself falling into his world. But Justin has secrets and many enemies. His dark past will not only ensnare her, but damage everything she knows and understands. Join Melissa as she sinks into a world of old feuds and ancient magic.
Melissa is a debutante who is all set to settle down with a nice, handsome man. Her parents have high hopes for her. But when a mysterious and handsome stranger named, Justin comes to town, things get worse as well as passionately romantic for Melissa's tough heart. This man bears a lot of dark secrets that are terribly dangerous if anyone gets too close to him. Despite of her parents' and others' reluctance, Melissa falls for the bad boy. Will Melissa's love for Justine throw her into the face of danger and death?
The story is thoroughly mystifying and with an eloquent style of author's writing , makes this story even more delectable. And not to mention the narrative style is equally captivating and free-flowing that will only keep the readers glued till the end of the book. There are lots of elements of mystery that will ultimately keep the readers guessing till the very last page. Although the story opens bit slow, but soon catches up pace, once Justin's dark secrets start to unravel.
The world building and the setting of a 18th-century era is done vividly by the author. The author not only captures the timeline but also draws a majestic and striking picture filled with those era's society and its norms, the fashion, the attitude of the people, in short capturing all the tiny details of that time period that will only make the readers feel like they are transported in that era.
The characters are really well-developed, from the supporting cast to the main characters, each one of them holds an air of class and grace. The main character, Melissa is projected as someone who is rebellious and brave and is someone who can strongly walk against society's norms and regulations. Moreover, when Melissa is thrown into danger, she used her head wisely to make certain decisions. And with the plot, Melissa will grow more on the readers. Justin is yet another likable character of the book whose seductive charms make the story quite forbidden yet attractive. He has killer looks and a dangerous past but his intentions are noble, and with a strong back story, it will only help the readers to contemplate with him.
The romance depicted between Melissa and Justin is like love at first sight yet the development in their hearts growing fonder for one another is done with lot of time and gradually with Justin's each move. Well the mystery is so deep and dark, that it will not only keep the readers hooked onto it till the very end, but will also make them vouch for the next book in the series. In a nutshell, this is a dark yet poignant paranormal and historical fantasy.
Verdict: If you're a huge fan of historical fantasy filled romance then don't miss out on this book.
Courtesy: I received a copy of the book from YA Bound Book Blog Tours.
----Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
Claire Warner, an English writer, has penned an enchanting tale of magic, immortality and love, in her book, The Black Lotus which is the first book in the Night Flower series. This story unfolds the forbidden regency styled romance between a young debutante and a mysterious bachelor in town and on top of that the story has elements of mystery, magic and is set in the early eighteenth century .
Synopsis:
It's 1752 and Melissa meets the man who will change her life forever. At her disastrous debut, Melissa meets the handsome Justin Lestrade and finds herself falling into his world. But Justin has secrets and many enemies. His dark past will not only ensnare her, but damage everything she knows and understands. Join Melissa as she sinks into a world of old feuds and ancient magic.
Melissa is a debutante who is all set to settle down with a nice, handsome man. Her parents have high hopes for her. But when a mysterious and handsome stranger named, Justin comes to town, things get worse as well as passionately romantic for Melissa's tough heart. This man bears a lot of dark secrets that are terribly dangerous if anyone gets too close to him. Despite of her parents' and others' reluctance, Melissa falls for the bad boy. Will Melissa's love for Justine throw her into the face of danger and death?
The story is thoroughly mystifying and with an eloquent style of author's writing , makes this story even more delectable. And not to mention the narrative style is equally captivating and free-flowing that will only keep the readers glued till the end of the book. There are lots of elements of mystery that will ultimately keep the readers guessing till the very last page. Although the story opens bit slow, but soon catches up pace, once Justin's dark secrets start to unravel.
The world building and the setting of a 18th-century era is done vividly by the author. The author not only captures the timeline but also draws a majestic and striking picture filled with those era's society and its norms, the fashion, the attitude of the people, in short capturing all the tiny details of that time period that will only make the readers feel like they are transported in that era.
The characters are really well-developed, from the supporting cast to the main characters, each one of them holds an air of class and grace. The main character, Melissa is projected as someone who is rebellious and brave and is someone who can strongly walk against society's norms and regulations. Moreover, when Melissa is thrown into danger, she used her head wisely to make certain decisions. And with the plot, Melissa will grow more on the readers. Justin is yet another likable character of the book whose seductive charms make the story quite forbidden yet attractive. He has killer looks and a dangerous past but his intentions are noble, and with a strong back story, it will only help the readers to contemplate with him.
The romance depicted between Melissa and Justin is like love at first sight yet the development in their hearts growing fonder for one another is done with lot of time and gradually with Justin's each move. Well the mystery is so deep and dark, that it will not only keep the readers hooked onto it till the very end, but will also make them vouch for the next book in the series. In a nutshell, this is a dark yet poignant paranormal and historical fantasy.
Verdict: If you're a huge fan of historical fantasy filled romance then don't miss out on this book.
Courtesy: I received a copy of the book from YA Bound Book Blog Tours.
February 21, 2016
This is a very very very long historical paranormal romance. I think I may have truly enjoyed the story if it had been 200 pages shorter.
Melissa is debut in her London season when she meets the enigmatic rake Justin Lestrade, newly returned from the colonies to take up his family estate. He's a bona fide rake with dubious connections. Melissa, who is very different from "polite society" must be sequestered after her disastrous debut, because the scandal of her yelling and slapping an attacker is too headstrong for the lads of London to accept in a suitable wife.
Going back to the country, Melissa learns that her estate is close to that of the ruined Lestrade homestead. The county is rife with gossip regarding both Melissa and Justin Lestrade for different reasons. They do find cause to meet up, both taken with each other and fearing a future. For different reasons. Headstrong does not begin to describe Melissa. Reckless, feckless and foolish would be better adjectives.
I'm usually a fan of a plucky historical heroine, but Melissa is really a woman out-of-time, here. It's London 1760s or so, and she seems one step from burning her corset and demanding autonomy. She knowingly associates with persons that will undoubtedly make her unmarriagable, and this is okay because she doesn't want a strange man/husband lording it over her all the time. Buck up, Mellie, all is completely lost due to your own frippery.
Justin and his family have dark secrets which were pretty much apparent to me by page 100, of this hefty 500+ page tome. This dark secret has to do with Justin's recognized intelligence well beyond his years, which are supposedly numbered at 19. Let's just say that the curse of Lestrade is unique, but confers unwelcome and gruesome side effects. Is he involved with the mysterious disappearances and deaths of young maidens in the London area?
I will admit to skimming, which I so rarely do. The prose was just SO INCREDIBLY VERBOSE and repetitive. The author would do well to read a Tessa Dare novel to study brevity and levity in historical romance. I struggled with the poorly edited work. I'm a real stickler for spelling, punctuation, etc and had a near apoplexy with the errors present.
Melissa is debut in her London season when she meets the enigmatic rake Justin Lestrade, newly returned from the colonies to take up his family estate. He's a bona fide rake with dubious connections. Melissa, who is very different from "polite society" must be sequestered after her disastrous debut, because the scandal of her yelling and slapping an attacker is too headstrong for the lads of London to accept in a suitable wife.
Going back to the country, Melissa learns that her estate is close to that of the ruined Lestrade homestead. The county is rife with gossip regarding both Melissa and Justin Lestrade for different reasons. They do find cause to meet up, both taken with each other and fearing a future. For different reasons. Headstrong does not begin to describe Melissa. Reckless, feckless and foolish would be better adjectives.
I'm usually a fan of a plucky historical heroine, but Melissa is really a woman out-of-time, here. It's London 1760s or so, and she seems one step from burning her corset and demanding autonomy. She knowingly associates with persons that will undoubtedly make her unmarriagable, and this is okay because she doesn't want a strange man/husband lording it over her all the time. Buck up, Mellie, all is completely lost due to your own frippery.
Justin and his family have dark secrets which were pretty much apparent to me by page 100, of this hefty 500+ page tome. This dark secret has to do with Justin's recognized intelligence well beyond his years, which are supposedly numbered at 19. Let's just say that the curse of Lestrade is unique, but confers unwelcome and gruesome side effects. Is he involved with the mysterious disappearances and deaths of young maidens in the London area?
I will admit to skimming, which I so rarely do. The prose was just SO INCREDIBLY VERBOSE and repetitive. The author would do well to read a Tessa Dare novel to study brevity and levity in historical romance. I struggled with the poorly edited work. I'm a real stickler for spelling, punctuation, etc and had a near apoplexy with the errors present.
February 26, 2016
Full Review @http://www.abookishescape.com/2016/02...
The End, there isn’t any resolution but there is more trouble. Everyone has shown their card and unfortunately Melissa has had to pay the highest price. She is the target of Justin’s enemy and there isn’t anything anyone can do to avoid what is bound to come. The reader finds out Justin’s secrets but I hope we get some more details of that fateful night when his whole life changed. Melissa knows where everyone stands. After the choice is taken away from her Melissa will realize there is only one way things could have played out. Not once did she think she would lose so much. Things have escalated to a serious degree and now the stakes are higher than ever before. I look forward to Melissa’s growth as a character and I will be cheering for her and Justin. Enemies abound and the situation not particularly good will not keep him down. Vowing to achieve the sought redemption Justin knows what he must do and with Melissa by his side the desire and determination are a thousand fold.
My Rating
4.0 Lotus, Curse, Pictures, Sick Games, Court, Reputation, Duel, Advice, Broken Wheel, Revenge, Dancing, Truth, Centuries, Mistakes, Murder, Destruction, The Search for Answers with the help of Love filled stars!
The End, there isn’t any resolution but there is more trouble. Everyone has shown their card and unfortunately Melissa has had to pay the highest price. She is the target of Justin’s enemy and there isn’t anything anyone can do to avoid what is bound to come. The reader finds out Justin’s secrets but I hope we get some more details of that fateful night when his whole life changed. Melissa knows where everyone stands. After the choice is taken away from her Melissa will realize there is only one way things could have played out. Not once did she think she would lose so much. Things have escalated to a serious degree and now the stakes are higher than ever before. I look forward to Melissa’s growth as a character and I will be cheering for her and Justin. Enemies abound and the situation not particularly good will not keep him down. Vowing to achieve the sought redemption Justin knows what he must do and with Melissa by his side the desire and determination are a thousand fold.
My Rating
4.0 Lotus, Curse, Pictures, Sick Games, Court, Reputation, Duel, Advice, Broken Wheel, Revenge, Dancing, Truth, Centuries, Mistakes, Murder, Destruction, The Search for Answers with the help of Love filled stars!
September 7, 2014
(I received this eBook in exchange for an honest review. LoP)
At first I have to say that I enjoyed reading the book. The story is interesting especially when it is taken back to hundreds of years ago. I thank the author for providing me with the opportunity to read this book.
However if I want to be honest I found this book to be a parody of perhaps the medieval romance with its exaggeration on the function of the duels for the sole purpose of defending a maiden’s honor. The role of a loving and overprotective brother who fought a duel for the sake of defending the honor of her sister seems to me a bit artificial and unbelievable. I also noticed that throughout the novel especially during the parties, the strangers directly introduce themselves to the heroine which as far as I know, through reading Jane Austen’s novels which are set during that period, is socially incorrect. Two people who were not introduced before need to be introduced to each other by a third party who is acquainted with both of them, this is especially mentioned in "Northanger Abbey". I mentioned that this work appears to be a parody because it makes fun of courtly love. The characters preach about code of honor yet they break it themselves. Justin believes that he is protecting Melissa yet he is the one that makes the first advances toward her. I love the heroines of historical romances who are brave enough to change their destiny, however, I couldn’t love Melissa. She seems too bold and yet too simple. She wants to be in control of her life yet unlike other heroines she is not cautious enough to behave properly in front of her lover. In other words she does not seem to be a heroine of a historical romance novel at all. This book also reminds me of "The Picture of Dorian Gray". Dorian remains young and unharmed while the picture gets older and changes. Similarly in this story the victims gets the harm that that the owner of the lotus is supposed to have.
I’m very curious to know what a male reader would think of reading these types of novels, I mean despite everything I said I loved the novel. But it is certainly a feminine reading. It is quite descriptive, and there are only a handful of actions in the novel. Most of the novel centers on conversations and explanations. Nothing was much revealed except a bit from the past and a few events from the present. There could be more than three or four sequels to this novel that may eventually answer all the questions that this book raises.
At first I have to say that I enjoyed reading the book. The story is interesting especially when it is taken back to hundreds of years ago. I thank the author for providing me with the opportunity to read this book.
However if I want to be honest I found this book to be a parody of perhaps the medieval romance with its exaggeration on the function of the duels for the sole purpose of defending a maiden’s honor. The role of a loving and overprotective brother who fought a duel for the sake of defending the honor of her sister seems to me a bit artificial and unbelievable. I also noticed that throughout the novel especially during the parties, the strangers directly introduce themselves to the heroine which as far as I know, through reading Jane Austen’s novels which are set during that period, is socially incorrect. Two people who were not introduced before need to be introduced to each other by a third party who is acquainted with both of them, this is especially mentioned in "Northanger Abbey". I mentioned that this work appears to be a parody because it makes fun of courtly love. The characters preach about code of honor yet they break it themselves. Justin believes that he is protecting Melissa yet he is the one that makes the first advances toward her. I love the heroines of historical romances who are brave enough to change their destiny, however, I couldn’t love Melissa. She seems too bold and yet too simple. She wants to be in control of her life yet unlike other heroines she is not cautious enough to behave properly in front of her lover. In other words she does not seem to be a heroine of a historical romance novel at all. This book also reminds me of "The Picture of Dorian Gray". Dorian remains young and unharmed while the picture gets older and changes. Similarly in this story the victims gets the harm that that the owner of the lotus is supposed to have.
I’m very curious to know what a male reader would think of reading these types of novels, I mean despite everything I said I loved the novel. But it is certainly a feminine reading. It is quite descriptive, and there are only a handful of actions in the novel. Most of the novel centers on conversations and explanations. Nothing was much revealed except a bit from the past and a few events from the present. There could be more than three or four sequels to this novel that may eventually answer all the questions that this book raises.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 5, 2016
The beginning jumps right into the book it is slightly confusing and I did read it twice to catch the characters names, but you immediacy get a feeling something dark is going on. It makes me want to read on to see what is going to happen to Melissa.
I love the author’s development of Melissa as the main character makes me want to keep reading this book. Melissa is easy to love as a main character she is set in a time where women are as she refers to it sold into marriage and she is completely against this. Melissa wants to marry for love and she also wants to hold onto her freedom. Melissa is strong and independent something not seen during this time period so she sticks out from the crowd.
The book goes back and forth between who is telling the story. A large portion of the story is told through Melissa's eyes, but we also get to see parts of Justin and John. I think this really helps to give the reader a big picture of this book. As you read the story you get to know more details about what is really going on with Justin and John. Also, you get a chance to see the relationship between other characters as well.
In regards to relationships the author does not let the reader down she throws more and more complicated relationships at the reader. Melissa and her brother are very close and because of this Melissa has maintained a large amount of independence that other women her age might not have. Melissa depends on her brother to help fight her parents to let her do things. Melissa's brother also protects her reputation from suitors. He also trusts her, which plays a big part in the story. The relationship that the author created between just these two characters makes you want to keep reading more. I love a story with a close brother/sister bond it is important to have someone that you can count on in life.
I also love the relationship that develops between Melissa and Justin. In her first meeting with him she really lets down her guard and is her true self. Melissa is very open minded to Justin and trusting. It is like she can see immediately through his charade, which lets me as a reader see how smart and intuitive she is.
The book does end with a nice cliffhanger, but I would have wanted to see a little more action. The action scenes that did occur in the book where slightly hard to follow I wasn't sure who was hurt or what was going on. I would have liked a little more descriptions in the action scenes.
I would suggest reading this book at night before bed. It is an easy book to pick up/put-down and still easily be able to follow along in the story. It isn't too scary so nothing to keep you up at night. I will be on the lookout to read the next book in this series!
I received a copy of this book from YA Bound Book Tours for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book.
I love the author’s development of Melissa as the main character makes me want to keep reading this book. Melissa is easy to love as a main character she is set in a time where women are as she refers to it sold into marriage and she is completely against this. Melissa wants to marry for love and she also wants to hold onto her freedom. Melissa is strong and independent something not seen during this time period so she sticks out from the crowd.
The book goes back and forth between who is telling the story. A large portion of the story is told through Melissa's eyes, but we also get to see parts of Justin and John. I think this really helps to give the reader a big picture of this book. As you read the story you get to know more details about what is really going on with Justin and John. Also, you get a chance to see the relationship between other characters as well.
In regards to relationships the author does not let the reader down she throws more and more complicated relationships at the reader. Melissa and her brother are very close and because of this Melissa has maintained a large amount of independence that other women her age might not have. Melissa depends on her brother to help fight her parents to let her do things. Melissa's brother also protects her reputation from suitors. He also trusts her, which plays a big part in the story. The relationship that the author created between just these two characters makes you want to keep reading more. I love a story with a close brother/sister bond it is important to have someone that you can count on in life.
I also love the relationship that develops between Melissa and Justin. In her first meeting with him she really lets down her guard and is her true self. Melissa is very open minded to Justin and trusting. It is like she can see immediately through his charade, which lets me as a reader see how smart and intuitive she is.
The book does end with a nice cliffhanger, but I would have wanted to see a little more action. The action scenes that did occur in the book where slightly hard to follow I wasn't sure who was hurt or what was going on. I would have liked a little more descriptions in the action scenes.
I would suggest reading this book at night before bed. It is an easy book to pick up/put-down and still easily be able to follow along in the story. It isn't too scary so nothing to keep you up at night. I will be on the lookout to read the next book in this series!
I received a copy of this book from YA Bound Book Tours for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book.
January 14, 2015
Book Review originally posted here: http://www.iheartreading.net/book-tou...
The Black Lotus is an intriguing historical romance with a paranormal twist, focusing on life in the eighteenth century, and giving the reader a tale of romance, intrigue and the paranormal.
Melissa De Vire is a debutante making her first appearance in high society. Unlike what society wants her to be, Melissa is fiesty, stubborn, driven, and she’s not afraid to stand up for herself and others. As a reader, this instantly made me like her, root for her, and relate to her. Then Melissa meets Justin Lestrade, a man bored with life, who has seen it all and done it all. Nothing surprises him anymore. That is, until he sees Melissa. She’s different, and they have an instant spark. But Justin isn’t exactly marriage-material, and he hides a terrible secret that could ruin both of them.
While I loved Melissa, I liked Justin too – I thought he formed a good match for Melissa, and he had an entertaining personality. If anything bothered me about him, it would be his history, the curse, and how not all of that was explained during the course of the book. The tag line says ‘paranormal twist’, but I had liked to know more about the whole paranormal part of the book.
Apart from that, I loved it. Like I mentioned, the characters were great, but the plot was good too. It held a few surprises. The descriptions of life in eighteenth century were so vivid I could picture most of it, from the scenes and settings to the gowns and dresses. I can’t wait to read the next book in the series.
The Black Lotus is an intriguing historical romance with a paranormal twist, focusing on life in the eighteenth century, and giving the reader a tale of romance, intrigue and the paranormal.
Melissa De Vire is a debutante making her first appearance in high society. Unlike what society wants her to be, Melissa is fiesty, stubborn, driven, and she’s not afraid to stand up for herself and others. As a reader, this instantly made me like her, root for her, and relate to her. Then Melissa meets Justin Lestrade, a man bored with life, who has seen it all and done it all. Nothing surprises him anymore. That is, until he sees Melissa. She’s different, and they have an instant spark. But Justin isn’t exactly marriage-material, and he hides a terrible secret that could ruin both of them.
While I loved Melissa, I liked Justin too – I thought he formed a good match for Melissa, and he had an entertaining personality. If anything bothered me about him, it would be his history, the curse, and how not all of that was explained during the course of the book. The tag line says ‘paranormal twist’, but I had liked to know more about the whole paranormal part of the book.
Apart from that, I loved it. Like I mentioned, the characters were great, but the plot was good too. It held a few surprises. The descriptions of life in eighteenth century were so vivid I could picture most of it, from the scenes and settings to the gowns and dresses. I can’t wait to read the next book in the series.
June 28, 2015
>Book Review – The Black Lotus –
>This is the first book in what I hope is a very long series. This story ends without a cliffhanger, but nothing is really resolved.
>This story takes place in the 1700s. Women, at that time, were treated as property. The main female character, Melissa, despises her treatment. She wants the freedoms her beloved brother, Marcus has. As Melissa is presented to society, in order to find a husband, she becomes attracted to a rake, Justin. Justin is attracted, as well, but he has a secret and cannot become involved with Melissa.
>Justin's group is an interesting bunch. I am not sure why some of them harbor such hatred for Justin, blaming him for what happened to them. Back when Justin and his brother found the Black Lotus, neither realized the danger. One of the cursed, John, is constantly trying to hurt Justin by harming anyone he begins to like. Melissa is now in danger, but she is unaware.
>The family dynamics are typical of the time period. Melissa's father is a bit cruel, her mother is strict and her brother is loving. The relationship between Melissa and Marcus is very touching. He duels for her honor, he teachers her how to shoot, he listens and holds her when she cries. I wish I had such a brother. This story transports one into the gothic time period, into Melissa's world. I love a good story with some length to it and this book does not disappoint. I want more of the story and characters. So much was left up in the air.
>This book is appropriate for a young adult (16+) to adult audience.
>Reviewer for Paranormal Romance and Authors That Rock.
>This is the first book in what I hope is a very long series. This story ends without a cliffhanger, but nothing is really resolved.
>This story takes place in the 1700s. Women, at that time, were treated as property. The main female character, Melissa, despises her treatment. She wants the freedoms her beloved brother, Marcus has. As Melissa is presented to society, in order to find a husband, she becomes attracted to a rake, Justin. Justin is attracted, as well, but he has a secret and cannot become involved with Melissa.
>Justin's group is an interesting bunch. I am not sure why some of them harbor such hatred for Justin, blaming him for what happened to them. Back when Justin and his brother found the Black Lotus, neither realized the danger. One of the cursed, John, is constantly trying to hurt Justin by harming anyone he begins to like. Melissa is now in danger, but she is unaware.
>The family dynamics are typical of the time period. Melissa's father is a bit cruel, her mother is strict and her brother is loving. The relationship between Melissa and Marcus is very touching. He duels for her honor, he teachers her how to shoot, he listens and holds her when she cries. I wish I had such a brother. This story transports one into the gothic time period, into Melissa's world. I love a good story with some length to it and this book does not disappoint. I want more of the story and characters. So much was left up in the air.
>This book is appropriate for a young adult (16+) to adult audience.
>Reviewer for Paranormal Romance and Authors That Rock.
September 24, 2014
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review (LoP or Lovers of Paranormal).
As a fan of historical fiction and the paranormal, I was looking forward to picking up The Black Lotus. The author did a very good job of capturing the historical aspects of the story. A reader is drawn into the world of the 1700s with its fashion and social events. I adored the main character Melissa. She's feisty and goes against the status quo of young women in society during this period. You can't help but root for her and hope that things works out for her in the end. The author did a good job with her character development. The paranormal side of the story is there as well, but I felt it could have used a little more development. I was really wanting to understand the origins of the curse that Justin and his comrades are victims of. There were still a few other unanswered questions. I imagine this will be a topic for future installments of the series. Regardless of this, the concept of the black lotus and the curse itself seems very original to me and I can appreciate the time and effort the author put into coming up with the concept and its development through the stories. I would be interested in reading future works in the series.
As a fan of historical fiction and the paranormal, I was looking forward to picking up The Black Lotus. The author did a very good job of capturing the historical aspects of the story. A reader is drawn into the world of the 1700s with its fashion and social events. I adored the main character Melissa. She's feisty and goes against the status quo of young women in society during this period. You can't help but root for her and hope that things works out for her in the end. The author did a good job with her character development. The paranormal side of the story is there as well, but I felt it could have used a little more development. I was really wanting to understand the origins of the curse that Justin and his comrades are victims of. There were still a few other unanswered questions. I imagine this will be a topic for future installments of the series. Regardless of this, the concept of the black lotus and the curse itself seems very original to me and I can appreciate the time and effort the author put into coming up with the concept and its development through the stories. I would be interested in reading future works in the series.
September 17, 2014
I received this book in exchange for an honest review from Lovers of Paranormal.
My rating is really a 3.5. This is the story of Melissa De Vire, a high-born female and her forbidden love affair with Justin Lestrade. I absolutely loved Melissa and feel that she was born in the wrong time period (before women's rights). I know that if I were around during that time, i would have been just as frustrated and miserable as she was. I also appreciated that Justin's immortality wasn't portrayed as glamourous-after a century or two, I imagine I would get bored as well. I enjoyed the book, but feel that it wa a little dragged out in some places and I feel that more questions should have been answered in regards to the curse. I guess that's why it's a series. I will definitely be reading the second book and would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys historical fiction with some paranormal thrown in.
My rating is really a 3.5. This is the story of Melissa De Vire, a high-born female and her forbidden love affair with Justin Lestrade. I absolutely loved Melissa and feel that she was born in the wrong time period (before women's rights). I know that if I were around during that time, i would have been just as frustrated and miserable as she was. I also appreciated that Justin's immortality wasn't portrayed as glamourous-after a century or two, I imagine I would get bored as well. I enjoyed the book, but feel that it wa a little dragged out in some places and I feel that more questions should have been answered in regards to the curse. I guess that's why it's a series. I will definitely be reading the second book and would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys historical fiction with some paranormal thrown in.
May 30, 2016
'The Black Lotus' is pretty awesome. I don't come across historical romance for young-adults very often but this was such a good read for that genre! This is my second time reading the novel - mostly to refresh my poor memory of the plot, characters and events that happened in this book so that I may continue onto book two, 'Blood Orchid'. I really enjoyed the prolonged sense of mystery that filled the novel and how the prologue really hooked and reeled you in. The setting and historical aspects were good but I believe they could have been a little bit more detailed to give the story that "wow" factor. The new cover is gorgeous, I am so happy that the author has decided to change it!
Congratulations to Claire Warner on publishing her debut novel!
Congratulations to Claire Warner on publishing her debut novel!
December 3, 2014
Melissa De Vire is a young debutante who is making her first appearance at court. Justin Lestrade fills his days with his debauchedly vices. He has lost feeling for the life he is living. When Melissa and Justin met. There is a spark and they could not stop from thinking of each other. This is a different twist on historical paranormal romance. I was intrigued about the Lotus flower. I wish more explanation was given about the origin. Hopefully it will mentioned in the next book. Overall, it was an enjoyable read. I received this complimentary book in exchange for an honest review. (LOP or Lovers of Paranormal on Goodreads)
February 26, 2017
So . . .this book. . . . Are there any LOST fans out there? You know how watching LOST, you were, well. . .lost? By the end of one episode week after week you were left with a million questions and maybe one was answered in that 50 minute period? Welcome to "The Black Lotus". To begin with, readers are actually starting 5 months BEFORE we get to the backstory. This actually had me upset because I like an order to things. But I have to be honest. The way that this "prologue" ended literally had me laughing out loud and ready to dive into this book. However, what really got me was that with each chapter read I had about 15 new questions and maybe was rewarded with 1 answer.
Melissa De Vire has just been debuted for court with one goal in mind; to find a suitable husband. Among the guests is a notorious womanizer, rather well accomplished considering his age, and he has drawn the attention of Melissa. Although completely smitten with this Justin Lestrade, it seems he has written her off, which is completely fine for her family's standards. No amount of etiquette and manners classes could prepare any girl for a man out to ruin their reputation; which is exactly what happens to Melissa. While filling out her dance card, Melissa is forcibly escorted away from the crowd. Panicked, Melissa does not want to make a scene, however she knows this could damage her prospects for her. Acting on her own volition, she strikes the man across the cheek to get him to stop and listen to her. Unfortunately for Melissa, the man intends to strike back. Luckily, a crowd has drawn and Melissa's brother, Marcus, saves the day, while challenging the man (Montjoy) to a duel to defend his sister's honor.
Much to her parent's dismay, they decide to pack up and move back to their country house in hopes that court life will regret their daughter's debacle. What they weren't expecting was their daughter's mistake to be overshadowed by a string of murders.
While her family is dealing with embarrassment and fighting for her honor, Melissa poses the most perfect question. Why is she at fault for defending her own honor. If Melissa would not have taken initiative in striking a man that may have defiled her honor further, there would be no future suitors for her at all. Why is she being blamed for stopping it? Why does her family have the ultimate say in her future and she just has to pretend to be okay with it? Melissa struggles with the pivotal question why she was born a girl instead of a boy- something that a lot of girls even struggle with today, making the main character extremely relatable.
The start of this book actually had me cringing. I kept saying, here we go again. . .it's another girl meets bad boy, bad boy tells her to stay away from him for her own good, silly girl decides not to listen, etc. It's been done. . .overly done. And then half way through the book, I was able to look past this over-done plot and really fall in love with the story line.
HOWEVER
There was an ever present issue I had with this book, which ultimately brought down the rating it deserved. . .I actually had to wonder if this book went through editors. There were SO many mistakes. I know that not ALL mistakes make the cut, but seriously, it seemed like there was at least 5 in each chapter. Not to mention that on the kindle version there was an ENTIRE chapter repeated- start to finish. I don't easily get annoyed by mistakes, although with how much I read they are easier to pick out. . .but when I seriously have to re-read a sentence every single chapter because something isn't making sense, it takes away from getting into the book and makes me want to mark it with a red pen.
All said and done, "The Black Lotus" is a worthwhile read. . .it's extremely different than what I first imagined it would be. I'm hoping when I move on to "Blood Orchid" that it has gone through editors.
Melissa De Vire has just been debuted for court with one goal in mind; to find a suitable husband. Among the guests is a notorious womanizer, rather well accomplished considering his age, and he has drawn the attention of Melissa. Although completely smitten with this Justin Lestrade, it seems he has written her off, which is completely fine for her family's standards. No amount of etiquette and manners classes could prepare any girl for a man out to ruin their reputation; which is exactly what happens to Melissa. While filling out her dance card, Melissa is forcibly escorted away from the crowd. Panicked, Melissa does not want to make a scene, however she knows this could damage her prospects for her. Acting on her own volition, she strikes the man across the cheek to get him to stop and listen to her. Unfortunately for Melissa, the man intends to strike back. Luckily, a crowd has drawn and Melissa's brother, Marcus, saves the day, while challenging the man (Montjoy) to a duel to defend his sister's honor.
Much to her parent's dismay, they decide to pack up and move back to their country house in hopes that court life will regret their daughter's debacle. What they weren't expecting was their daughter's mistake to be overshadowed by a string of murders.
While her family is dealing with embarrassment and fighting for her honor, Melissa poses the most perfect question. Why is she at fault for defending her own honor. If Melissa would not have taken initiative in striking a man that may have defiled her honor further, there would be no future suitors for her at all. Why is she being blamed for stopping it? Why does her family have the ultimate say in her future and she just has to pretend to be okay with it? Melissa struggles with the pivotal question why she was born a girl instead of a boy- something that a lot of girls even struggle with today, making the main character extremely relatable.
The start of this book actually had me cringing. I kept saying, here we go again. . .it's another girl meets bad boy, bad boy tells her to stay away from him for her own good, silly girl decides not to listen, etc. It's been done. . .overly done. And then half way through the book, I was able to look past this over-done plot and really fall in love with the story line.
HOWEVER
There was an ever present issue I had with this book, which ultimately brought down the rating it deserved. . .I actually had to wonder if this book went through editors. There were SO many mistakes. I know that not ALL mistakes make the cut, but seriously, it seemed like there was at least 5 in each chapter. Not to mention that on the kindle version there was an ENTIRE chapter repeated- start to finish. I don't easily get annoyed by mistakes, although with how much I read they are easier to pick out. . .but when I seriously have to re-read a sentence every single chapter because something isn't making sense, it takes away from getting into the book and makes me want to mark it with a red pen.
All said and done, "The Black Lotus" is a worthwhile read. . .it's extremely different than what I first imagined it would be. I'm hoping when I move on to "Blood Orchid" that it has gone through editors.
August 30, 2017
The Black Lotus by Claire Warner is a YA fantasy novel following protagonists Justin and Melissa as they uncover secrets in the English court of 1752.
Warner’s story shows great creative potential, but the execution falls flat, pulled down by cliche characters and repetitive writing.
One of the central issues of the book — the first in the “Night Flower” series — is Melissa struggling with the idea of an arranged marriage while simultaneously dealing with her debut season in court. Warner explicitly resurfaces the issue countless times, when it is already evident in Melissa’s dialogue and actions. Melissa’s family is sympathetic to her feelings, but the conversation about her rights as a woman never ventures beyond complaining.
In the same glossed-over way, Justin and Melissa fall into a love-at-first-sight relationship; they continually mention their deep feelings, but never delve into what those feelings actually mean.
They’re the typical characters to fall in this supposedly passionate and inexplicable way: the fiery young woman, who is upset at her situation and just cannot seem to fit into her role, and the mysterious, handsome rake (every character in “The Black Lotus” has apparently agreed to repeatedly call Justin “a gamester and a cad”) with a bad reputation. It makes their dialogue effortless, sure, but that’s about it; Justin and Melissa’s characters don’t affect the plot in any natural way, and they hardly inspire any curiosity from the reader.
Warner’s description’s of decadent court life are rich and elaborate, moving the story along more than any other element of the book. They are just exotic enough to hint at the fantasy to come, a subtlety that Warner would do well to expand into the other elements of “The Black Lotus.”
I don’t doubt that Warner’s name could be among other celebrated YA authors before long, but this book bears all the marks of a debut, and does not wear them well.
Warner’s story shows great creative potential, but the execution falls flat, pulled down by cliche characters and repetitive writing.
One of the central issues of the book — the first in the “Night Flower” series — is Melissa struggling with the idea of an arranged marriage while simultaneously dealing with her debut season in court. Warner explicitly resurfaces the issue countless times, when it is already evident in Melissa’s dialogue and actions. Melissa’s family is sympathetic to her feelings, but the conversation about her rights as a woman never ventures beyond complaining.
In the same glossed-over way, Justin and Melissa fall into a love-at-first-sight relationship; they continually mention their deep feelings, but never delve into what those feelings actually mean.
They’re the typical characters to fall in this supposedly passionate and inexplicable way: the fiery young woman, who is upset at her situation and just cannot seem to fit into her role, and the mysterious, handsome rake (every character in “The Black Lotus” has apparently agreed to repeatedly call Justin “a gamester and a cad”) with a bad reputation. It makes their dialogue effortless, sure, but that’s about it; Justin and Melissa’s characters don’t affect the plot in any natural way, and they hardly inspire any curiosity from the reader.
Warner’s description’s of decadent court life are rich and elaborate, moving the story along more than any other element of the book. They are just exotic enough to hint at the fantasy to come, a subtlety that Warner would do well to expand into the other elements of “The Black Lotus.”
I don’t doubt that Warner’s name could be among other celebrated YA authors before long, but this book bears all the marks of a debut, and does not wear them well.
March 18, 2017
Black Lotus is book one of the Night Flower series which is a Historical Paranormal Romance but it isn't your average paranormal book, it has a twist. Claire Warner has this way of building up her characters that give you specific details of each person which helps you really visualize the people and the scenes, which just goes with her impeccable writing style and attention to detail.
It all starts with a girl, a boy, and a curse. First, you meet Melissa De Vire, I loved her character. She is a strong willed young lady going through her first court. She goes against the typical rules of the 1970's as she wants control of her own life, wants to marry for love and to be able to do things like her male counterparts.
Melissa meets Justin and a few other undesirables throughout her first night. An incident happens and Melissa's family think it's best to move back to the country. This is when Melissa gets thrust into a new adventure that she wasn't looking for but she was ready, even if it went against her families wishes.
The book builds the characters up slowly, but with everything that happens, it doesn't get boring. Once secrets are shared, lives begin to change the book becomes so fast paced you get so drawn in that you simply can't put the book down. I can't wait to read Blood Orchid!
It all starts with a girl, a boy, and a curse. First, you meet Melissa De Vire, I loved her character. She is a strong willed young lady going through her first court. She goes against the typical rules of the 1970's as she wants control of her own life, wants to marry for love and to be able to do things like her male counterparts.
Melissa meets Justin and a few other undesirables throughout her first night. An incident happens and Melissa's family think it's best to move back to the country. This is when Melissa gets thrust into a new adventure that she wasn't looking for but she was ready, even if it went against her families wishes.
The book builds the characters up slowly, but with everything that happens, it doesn't get boring. Once secrets are shared, lives begin to change the book becomes so fast paced you get so drawn in that you simply can't put the book down. I can't wait to read Blood Orchid!
December 27, 2020
Lotus Mystery
Excellent read! This book is full of excitement and mystery. You have Melissa whom is high born. She is not one to be uppity but wants to be able to choose her own life until she meets Justin the cad and playboy. He is the reason for getting Melissa involved in his life and the start of the lotus.
I recommend this book to anyone that enjoys excitement and a great read from start to finish.
Excellent read! This book is full of excitement and mystery. You have Melissa whom is high born. She is not one to be uppity but wants to be able to choose her own life until she meets Justin the cad and playboy. He is the reason for getting Melissa involved in his life and the start of the lotus.
I recommend this book to anyone that enjoys excitement and a great read from start to finish.
July 8, 2015
When I read the synopsis of this book, I was thinking "oh cool, historical fiction. And a hint of something special. I can probably deal with the romance." Unfortunately, while the backdrop to the world was interesting, the starting and the protagonist irritated me so much that I couldn't really enjoy the book.
The Black Lotus is about Melissa De Vire, who's making her debut into society. She's not normal, having learnt to shoot from her brother, but her parents are really strict so she has to make a good match. Oh, and she's drop dead gorgeous. That basically screamed "Mary Sue" to me. Anyway, at her first party, after she's presented to the King, she meets the "cad" Justin Lestrade, and despite the fact that she's warned about him, ends up talking to him anyway. But Justin isn't human, and now that Melissa's got his attention...
Ok, I'm going to start with the things I didn't like, and when I'm done, go on to the stuff I like.
First, Melissa. Melissa just annoyed me. It may be because I've been reading Limyaael's Fantasy Rants lately, but you're telling me that a properly raised girl in that society is going to start questioning the social order on her first day out? True, her brother seems unconventional, but her father is strict and very about propriety. Her mother listens to the dad. So how is it that she questions everything? It's as though she's a modern girl in a medieval period, and that really annoyed me. (And she seems to have no problems swearing - did ladies of the time do that?). If it was a gradual change, I might understand, but Melissa is presented as this "feisty modern girl" from the start, and it just did not ring true for me. It rang "Mary Sue".
The book might have been very accurate with regard to details, but to be honest, Melissa's striking modernity prevented me from seeing any of it.
Next, Lestrade. Lestrade was more likable than Melissa, but he was still very flat. The rake who falls in love is a trope, and if your character is that, a bit more needs to be done to bring him to life for me. It got a bit predictable, to be honest.
Oh, and the insta-love. If you've been reading my reviews, you know I'm not a fan of insta-love. There have been a few cases where it sort of works for me, but those are few and this is not one of them. Melissa and Justin have no real chance for proper interaction (I think less than 5?), and how can you fall in love so quickly and deeply after a few conversations? They don't go through experiences together, and that's the main problem for me. There was this moment where I thought Melissa had some recognition of the fact, but then it passed. And while the two may have tried to deny it, denying it then going "but there's something so special about her" is unconvincing. If you're as old as you say you are, why are you acting like that?
Now on to the things I liked.
I quite liked the little I saw of Emily and Katherine. Katherine's mindset felt very realistic to me, and Emma plays the part of the reckless devil-may-care character well. It's possible that I'd get sick of Emma if she appears too much, but I see a lot of potential in Katherine. If only she were the main character.
I liked the background secret. I can't say too much without giving it away, but Justin and his "family"? The way they interacted, how alliances were formed/broken/there was never an alliance, that was cool. If this was the main thing, and the romance a side plot, I would have liked this a lot better.
The "good" parts may have seemed short, but they almost saved the book. Almost. Unfortunately, because of Melissa, i never got into the book. So little odd sentences like
"No puce is a wonderful colour if utilised properly" (Shouldn't it be "No, puce is a wonderful colour if utilised properly"?)
became an irritant to me. They appeared often enough (a couple of times in every chapter) that it tilted the book into two stars territory.
This book had a lot of potential. I liked the background behind Justin and his family, as well as his interactions with them. It's just a pity I didn't like Melissa (and to a lesser extant, Justin), and wasn't even the slightest bit convinced about their relationship.
Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the author via Enchanted Blog Tours in exchange for a free and honest review.
This review was first posted at Inside the mind of a Bibliophile
The Black Lotus is about Melissa De Vire, who's making her debut into society. She's not normal, having learnt to shoot from her brother, but her parents are really strict so she has to make a good match. Oh, and she's drop dead gorgeous. That basically screamed "Mary Sue" to me. Anyway, at her first party, after she's presented to the King, she meets the "cad" Justin Lestrade, and despite the fact that she's warned about him, ends up talking to him anyway. But Justin isn't human, and now that Melissa's got his attention...
Ok, I'm going to start with the things I didn't like, and when I'm done, go on to the stuff I like.
First, Melissa. Melissa just annoyed me. It may be because I've been reading Limyaael's Fantasy Rants lately, but you're telling me that a properly raised girl in that society is going to start questioning the social order on her first day out? True, her brother seems unconventional, but her father is strict and very about propriety. Her mother listens to the dad. So how is it that she questions everything? It's as though she's a modern girl in a medieval period, and that really annoyed me. (And she seems to have no problems swearing - did ladies of the time do that?). If it was a gradual change, I might understand, but Melissa is presented as this "feisty modern girl" from the start, and it just did not ring true for me. It rang "Mary Sue".
The book might have been very accurate with regard to details, but to be honest, Melissa's striking modernity prevented me from seeing any of it.
Next, Lestrade. Lestrade was more likable than Melissa, but he was still very flat. The rake who falls in love is a trope, and if your character is that, a bit more needs to be done to bring him to life for me. It got a bit predictable, to be honest.
Oh, and the insta-love. If you've been reading my reviews, you know I'm not a fan of insta-love. There have been a few cases where it sort of works for me, but those are few and this is not one of them. Melissa and Justin have no real chance for proper interaction (I think less than 5?), and how can you fall in love so quickly and deeply after a few conversations? They don't go through experiences together, and that's the main problem for me. There was this moment where I thought Melissa had some recognition of the fact, but then it passed. And while the two may have tried to deny it, denying it then going "but there's something so special about her" is unconvincing. If you're as old as you say you are, why are you acting like that?
Now on to the things I liked.
I quite liked the little I saw of Emily and Katherine. Katherine's mindset felt very realistic to me, and Emma plays the part of the reckless devil-may-care character well. It's possible that I'd get sick of Emma if she appears too much, but I see a lot of potential in Katherine. If only she were the main character.
I liked the background secret. I can't say too much without giving it away, but Justin and his "family"? The way they interacted, how alliances were formed/broken/there was never an alliance, that was cool. If this was the main thing, and the romance a side plot, I would have liked this a lot better.
The "good" parts may have seemed short, but they almost saved the book. Almost. Unfortunately, because of Melissa, i never got into the book. So little odd sentences like
"No puce is a wonderful colour if utilised properly" (Shouldn't it be "No, puce is a wonderful colour if utilised properly"?)
became an irritant to me. They appeared often enough (a couple of times in every chapter) that it tilted the book into two stars territory.
This book had a lot of potential. I liked the background behind Justin and his family, as well as his interactions with them. It's just a pity I didn't like Melissa (and to a lesser extant, Justin), and wasn't even the slightest bit convinced about their relationship.
Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the author via Enchanted Blog Tours in exchange for a free and honest review.
This review was first posted at Inside the mind of a Bibliophile
March 25, 2016
ARC kindly provided by Claire Warner in exchange for an honest review.
Review
Rating Plan
1 star : Strongly did not like the book, writing and plot was bad. Idea of the book was against my liking.
2 star : Didn't like it, didn't find it interesting or gripping. Seemed to drag on to me.
3 star : An average book. Wasn't bad or good. Everything else was well done. Original idea.
4 star : Like a 3 star but has potential to it as a series or the book grew on me as it progressed and certain scenes captured me. I Enjoyed it and read it in one sitting.
5 star : I LOVED IT! I stayed up late until 3 am. Author is a genius, characters, plot, idea, development, EVERYTHING was EXCELLENT. Nothing else can possibly be said except that its 5 STAR!
Review
I have always loved historicals: especially those taking place in regency time periods. I was extremely intrigued as to how and how well the author would weave the world of balls and gowns to that of magic and spells. This is probably the FIRST novel I have read with this unique combination of genres so expectations weren't very high for me, but nevertheless there.
The author's writing style was absolutely superb. I was enchanted right from the beginning. It was smooth and flowing – not at all stilted, which I very much enjoyed. It completely suited the time period and was overwhelmingly realistic. It was so beautiful and enchanting! I really can't tell you what it was exactly that actually captured me and my instant admiration for this author.
The characters were extremely well developed. I loved the variety of personalities that each and every one of them had. It was enchanting to read about so many complex and vital personalities as they really added a captivating spice to the story. Each had their own perks and downfalls; their own unique appearance which did not seem to blend with another's; their own character which was strong and present allowing for an enrichment of the plot. I really liked Melissa De Vire as a female protagonist. She WAS a typical character but I liked her nevertheless because of her strength and cleverness amongst others in society. She didn't want to bow down to her place as a woman in the seventeen-hundreds but had a mind of her own. Justin Lestrade was a very enigmatic and sensual male character. He was full of secrets and unknown characteristics.
I felt every pull and spark that Melissa and Justin felt for each other. I also absolutely LOVED how the author prolonged tension between the two, never giving much more than a heated glance or a seductive touch between the two in the first half of the novel. The author would draw out moments between the two until I was on the edge I my seat eager for something – ANYTHING – to happen between the two. A totally swoon worthy read!
The setting was done just right. For every key event that happened, the author would pick a place for her characters that highlighted emotions and actions, bringing to life a gorgeous interaction in an enchanting world.
What really upset me was the poor quality formatting this novel received in paperback format. The writing was full of small incorrect punctuation marks, would leave out a word every now and then, and use incorrect tense. For example, after a characters spoken sentence would be written, a full stop would be used instead of a comma or vice versa. If a sentence should have begun with the word "sitting" it began with the word "sat" instead. It wasn't altogether irritating or in any way confusing, it just made the standard of the work fall. Yet another big downer was the way the novel was presented with a very small text font, which made it almost impossible to read and the very large unneeded spacing left between lines.
I spotted LOADS of typos, but I believe this can all be fixed with another editing of the novel. I loved the prose that was used sometimes. I LITERALLY felt transported to 1752! The grammar was OUTSTANDING and I loved that there were no pesky spelling mistakes. A solid FOUR star!
I loved the ending. It was just absolutely perfect for this novel. And for all you cliff-hanger haters: Well this novel doesn't have one! I'm still not sure whether to cry or laugh. This novel did a pretty good job enticing me to read the novel without a cliff-hanger, but I bet that if there was one, I would have wailed in injustice and totally given this novel a five star!
Congratulations to Clair Warner on publishing a gorgeous debut!
Rating Plan
1 star : Strongly did not like the book, writing and plot was bad. Idea of the book was against my liking.
2 star : Didn't like it, didn't find it interesting or gripping. Seemed to drag on to me.
3 star : An average book. Wasn't bad or good. Everything else was well done. Original idea.
4 star : Like a 3 star but has potential to it as a series or the book grew on me as it progressed and certain scenes captured me. I Enjoyed it and read it in one sitting.
5 star : I LOVED IT! I stayed up late until 3 am. Author is a genius, characters, plot, idea, development, EVERYTHING was EXCELLENT. Nothing else can possibly be said except that its 5 STAR!
June 2, 2017
I received books one and two of the Night Flower series from YA Bound Book Tours. I hadn't heard of the series previously but the premise interested me immensely and the fact that this was a historical PNR was the clincher. I'm going to be reviewing books one and two together and I will not include any spoilers.
I really struggled with a rating for both of these books (both three to three and a half stars from me) because I did really enjoy them and they were great entertainment value for me. They kept me reading until late in the night and while some of the great reveals weren't hard to guess, I just enjoyed the books for what they were. Unfortunately both books suffered from editing issues and while I don't mind a spelling error or two or a grammatical faux-pas here and there I also think that both of these books could have had some scenes cut and some re-writes done in order to make the plot tighter and to make the books even more engaging.
The books are set in the 1700s with Melissa as our main protagonist. A woman before her time and a young debutante she is not happy being shunted off into the best possible marriage by her parents and is jealous of the freedom and autonomy of the men of her era.
The historical aspects of the story seem to have been researched and represented well although we could have had even more detail in order to give us a broader scope of the setting. The paranormal facets are both unique and interesting and I love the idea of the curse and how the characters deal with their immortality.
The writing, while not perfect, was vivid and I loved the descriptions that Warner gave us and I was able to envisage the world with great clarity. Characters were developed satisfactorily in book one and by the second book I think Warner really hit her stride and I enjoyed learning more of their backgrounds and seeing their interactions.
The romance started off as a bit of insta-lust but I think that it turned into something sweeter and more believable as the books went on and this wasn't a problem for me at all.
Overall the second book was better than the first being more tightly plotted (and shorter), better character development and faster pacing however it's obviously necessary to read them both!
If you're a fan of YA PNR and/or historical romance, give this one a try!
April 28, 2016
It’s 1752 and Melissa is preparing for her first season at court. However, her first appearance is less than ideal. She meets an intriguing young gentleman, Justin Lestrade, whom she can’t help but become fascinated with – but she is somewhat scandalized for defending herself from a man with ill intentions.
Melissa finds more opportunities to talk with Mr. Lestrade despite her family’s insistence that he is a cad and can further damage her tarnished reputation. He has secrets, but she can’t tell what. For all his efforts to stay away to protect Melissa’s reputation, Justin keeps finding he is drawn to her as well. His secret, though, will change both of their lives forever.
Melissa detests the limits imposed on her by tradition that she be quiet and demure and behave as if she is a fragile creature. She insists time and again that she is capable of doing so much more, which infuriates her father. She continues to push the boundaries of society within her family and strive for more than just becoming a wife to some man her father deems suitable.
This book has a plethora of great vocabulary words! I highlighted about thirty words that I had to define – like lassitude, hoyden, rictus, and sibilant. I enjoyed expanding my knowledge, and I was able in infer meaning to many other words. However, some readers may prefer a different intensity of vocabulary when they read.
The author uses vivid color descriptions throughout the story, especially when describing the clothing seen at the balls. There are also lots of references to different fabrics to convey textures and colors and paint the scenes. I found this useful in picturing the scenes and getting more involved in the story.
There were a handful of minor editing issues I came across. None ghastly enough to distract from the story. Just enough to be noticed and make mention. Things such as “You would have heard if they news was being spoken of openly” – use of they instead of the. Very minor.
The Black Lotus had a very Pride and Prejudice feel. At times, I was somewhat bored. I felt like the story really started dragging until chapter 19. You have an idea that Justin has some massive secret, but the allusions start to get old. I did feel like I was waiting for some grand Dracula type story, but that is not quite where the story goes. Lots of time is spent on social engagements and social protocol. But in my opinion, it does take too long to get “to the good stuff”.
I was also confused a bit by some of the outlying characters. They seem to play an important role in Justin’s story, but their backstory doesn’t get explained almost until the end of the book. I understand that you want to have unanswered questions to keep the reader engaged, but I think dropping a few hints along the way would have made me much less confused.
Overall, the story was okay. I was able to make it through, but I don’t see myself reading it again or even reading the rest of the series. If you enjoy Pride and Prejudice – which I find boring – then I think you will enjoy this series. There is good depth to the main characters and the story line is easy to follow.
Review by Patti F.
This book was given to TAB in exchange for an unbiased and honest review with no promise of a positive review.
Melissa finds more opportunities to talk with Mr. Lestrade despite her family’s insistence that he is a cad and can further damage her tarnished reputation. He has secrets, but she can’t tell what. For all his efforts to stay away to protect Melissa’s reputation, Justin keeps finding he is drawn to her as well. His secret, though, will change both of their lives forever.
Melissa detests the limits imposed on her by tradition that she be quiet and demure and behave as if she is a fragile creature. She insists time and again that she is capable of doing so much more, which infuriates her father. She continues to push the boundaries of society within her family and strive for more than just becoming a wife to some man her father deems suitable.
This book has a plethora of great vocabulary words! I highlighted about thirty words that I had to define – like lassitude, hoyden, rictus, and sibilant. I enjoyed expanding my knowledge, and I was able in infer meaning to many other words. However, some readers may prefer a different intensity of vocabulary when they read.
The author uses vivid color descriptions throughout the story, especially when describing the clothing seen at the balls. There are also lots of references to different fabrics to convey textures and colors and paint the scenes. I found this useful in picturing the scenes and getting more involved in the story.
There were a handful of minor editing issues I came across. None ghastly enough to distract from the story. Just enough to be noticed and make mention. Things such as “You would have heard if they news was being spoken of openly” – use of they instead of the. Very minor.
The Black Lotus had a very Pride and Prejudice feel. At times, I was somewhat bored. I felt like the story really started dragging until chapter 19. You have an idea that Justin has some massive secret, but the allusions start to get old. I did feel like I was waiting for some grand Dracula type story, but that is not quite where the story goes. Lots of time is spent on social engagements and social protocol. But in my opinion, it does take too long to get “to the good stuff”.
I was also confused a bit by some of the outlying characters. They seem to play an important role in Justin’s story, but their backstory doesn’t get explained almost until the end of the book. I understand that you want to have unanswered questions to keep the reader engaged, but I think dropping a few hints along the way would have made me much less confused.
Overall, the story was okay. I was able to make it through, but I don’t see myself reading it again or even reading the rest of the series. If you enjoy Pride and Prejudice – which I find boring – then I think you will enjoy this series. There is good depth to the main characters and the story line is easy to follow.
Review by Patti F.
This book was given to TAB in exchange for an unbiased and honest review with no promise of a positive review.
March 4, 2016
Wasn’t sure what to expect with a historical book but this was great. There was a air of darkness that surrounded the story. And the black lotus flower and what it symbolized was amazing.
I felt for both Justin and Melissa. they were in impossible situations. Justin felt guilt everyday of his life. His past decisions caused so much pain for so many but also started a feud that has him running so that he can protect others. Each time John shows Justin needs to skadoodle only this time the stakes are more dangerous and higher. Melissa is a woman in the 1800′s more thing. Her mind is more modern and she is stuck in the antiquated views of a ladies position. She wants to make her own decisions, defend herself and be seen for who she is and not her dowry. she wants to be able to love freely and this is where Justin plays a sticking point in her life.
these are two independent, strong characters. One with guilt and darkness that eats at him while being a good person and the other a strong stubborn person stuck in a role society has placed upon her and not wanting it. One wants to break the chains and the other to keep people safe. One feels everything while the other wishes to be numb and not care for caring gets people hurt and killed.
Justin and Melissa come together at a ball and intrigue each other. Her with her honesty and quick wit and him with his mystery and not seeming to be what he appears. Soon neither can get the other off their minds. Although Melissa is banished to the country for a time due to a scandal and the scoundrel Montroy becoming fresh and Melissa defending herself. Go girl. Her brother Marcus (whom I love only brother i love for Alaister is horrid and mean) defends her honor and helps her feel more free. He respects her as does Justin. Unfortunately going to the country doesn’t rid Melissa of Justin for he lives next door and their interest is piqued more for each other.
As they get to know each other and Justin tells her his secret and about the Black Lotus, they are finding it harder to stay away from one another and the danger to Melissa’s life increases. She is attacked in her room and threatened. All the while Justin is trying to protect her by staying away but that doesn’t work to well either because she is still in danger and he loves her.
The darkness surrounding them forebodes the danger coming and the climax of the danger. What Emily does to Melissa is unforgivable and I am glad Hugh stood up to her. Alaister and Katherine are horrid and don’t deserve friends. Justin poor guy he just wants to keep Melissa safe but by the time he tries to go it is too late and chaos has ensued at the DeVire estate. the ending is so sad but hopeful as well.
this is a well written, gripping, character driven story about two people stuck in impossible situations who fall in love with each other. One tries to protect the other only to put them in more danger and in the end it was for naught. A intriguing dark tale filled with love, mystery and resentment. Danger and intrigue but also has some tender sister/brother moments and moments between Justin and Melissa that has you see the attraction between them. A great beginning to this dark intriguing story of love and finding a way to end the darknes that is the Black lotus.
I felt for both Justin and Melissa. they were in impossible situations. Justin felt guilt everyday of his life. His past decisions caused so much pain for so many but also started a feud that has him running so that he can protect others. Each time John shows Justin needs to skadoodle only this time the stakes are more dangerous and higher. Melissa is a woman in the 1800′s more thing. Her mind is more modern and she is stuck in the antiquated views of a ladies position. She wants to make her own decisions, defend herself and be seen for who she is and not her dowry. she wants to be able to love freely and this is where Justin plays a sticking point in her life.
these are two independent, strong characters. One with guilt and darkness that eats at him while being a good person and the other a strong stubborn person stuck in a role society has placed upon her and not wanting it. One wants to break the chains and the other to keep people safe. One feels everything while the other wishes to be numb and not care for caring gets people hurt and killed.
Justin and Melissa come together at a ball and intrigue each other. Her with her honesty and quick wit and him with his mystery and not seeming to be what he appears. Soon neither can get the other off their minds. Although Melissa is banished to the country for a time due to a scandal and the scoundrel Montroy becoming fresh and Melissa defending herself. Go girl. Her brother Marcus (whom I love only brother i love for Alaister is horrid and mean) defends her honor and helps her feel more free. He respects her as does Justin. Unfortunately going to the country doesn’t rid Melissa of Justin for he lives next door and their interest is piqued more for each other.
As they get to know each other and Justin tells her his secret and about the Black Lotus, they are finding it harder to stay away from one another and the danger to Melissa’s life increases. She is attacked in her room and threatened. All the while Justin is trying to protect her by staying away but that doesn’t work to well either because she is still in danger and he loves her.
The darkness surrounding them forebodes the danger coming and the climax of the danger. What Emily does to Melissa is unforgivable and I am glad Hugh stood up to her. Alaister and Katherine are horrid and don’t deserve friends. Justin poor guy he just wants to keep Melissa safe but by the time he tries to go it is too late and chaos has ensued at the DeVire estate. the ending is so sad but hopeful as well.
this is a well written, gripping, character driven story about two people stuck in impossible situations who fall in love with each other. One tries to protect the other only to put them in more danger and in the end it was for naught. A intriguing dark tale filled with love, mystery and resentment. Danger and intrigue but also has some tender sister/brother moments and moments between Justin and Melissa that has you see the attraction between them. A great beginning to this dark intriguing story of love and finding a way to end the darknes that is the Black lotus.
March 4, 2016
Melissa caused such a scandal at her first society event, causing her brother to fight a dual in her honor and her father to cloister her away hoping people would forget about her behavior. One person can't forget about her, and that is Justin Lestraide, the rake and womanizer who has secrets he can't share with anyone, regardless of his interest. Melissa enters back into society when something else causes a shock, and that would be murder. Girls are being murdered and there might be a connection with Justin and his secrets. It is in Melissa's best interests to stay away, but she can't resist his allure.
I really wanted to like this book and I was ever so excited to read it. The cover alone is gorgeous and the synopsis is so mysterious I could not resist. But unfortunately, I did not enjoy my reading experience for the most part. Don't get me wrong, I thought the plot was interesting, I just had other issues along the way that kept me from loving the book. The backbone of the story dealt with immortals, curses, murder and a huge engrossing mystery- all elements I love in a story. The execution of the plot was where my interest waned.
My biggest compliant of the story was that very little action and dialogue occurred, instead I was overwhelmed by inner reflection and descriptions of the countryside, attire and history. I am guilty of skimming through the repetitive inner ramblings of "life is not fair" of both the main characters to try and find some action or anything to help the plot move in a forward motion. I found myself bored while reading which makes me feel bad, but it is the truth.
I was not a fan of Melissa either. She spent most of her time having a pity part for herself about how terrible it is to be a woman and how she wished she was born a man. Her ideas did not fit the time and after the first temper tantrum where she threw things against the wall, I completely disregarded her need to be treated as an equal or an adult. Her mental tangents did not endear her to me, but they did make me super glad that I did not live during that time period since women were “to be seen and not heard” and their only acceptable activity was needlepoint (which the book described over and over again). Nothing against needlepoint, but I was so bored.
Overall, I though the idea of the book had potential I just could not get engaged by what I read. The story was very slow, about 100 pages was the equivalent to 2 days in the story. I don’t think I will continue on with the series, but I am sure others will really enjoy the book (as seen by the really high reviews I discovered on Goodreads).
I received this title from the author in return for my honest review.
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I really wanted to like this book and I was ever so excited to read it. The cover alone is gorgeous and the synopsis is so mysterious I could not resist. But unfortunately, I did not enjoy my reading experience for the most part. Don't get me wrong, I thought the plot was interesting, I just had other issues along the way that kept me from loving the book. The backbone of the story dealt with immortals, curses, murder and a huge engrossing mystery- all elements I love in a story. The execution of the plot was where my interest waned.
My biggest compliant of the story was that very little action and dialogue occurred, instead I was overwhelmed by inner reflection and descriptions of the countryside, attire and history. I am guilty of skimming through the repetitive inner ramblings of "life is not fair" of both the main characters to try and find some action or anything to help the plot move in a forward motion. I found myself bored while reading which makes me feel bad, but it is the truth.
I was not a fan of Melissa either. She spent most of her time having a pity part for herself about how terrible it is to be a woman and how she wished she was born a man. Her ideas did not fit the time and after the first temper tantrum where she threw things against the wall, I completely disregarded her need to be treated as an equal or an adult. Her mental tangents did not endear her to me, but they did make me super glad that I did not live during that time period since women were “to be seen and not heard” and their only acceptable activity was needlepoint (which the book described over and over again). Nothing against needlepoint, but I was so bored.
Overall, I though the idea of the book had potential I just could not get engaged by what I read. The story was very slow, about 100 pages was the equivalent to 2 days in the story. I don’t think I will continue on with the series, but I am sure others will really enjoy the book (as seen by the really high reviews I discovered on Goodreads).
I received this title from the author in return for my honest review.
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March 13, 2017
* i received a free copy for the blog tour in exchange for an honest review*
Melissa De Vire is about to make her debut into society and find herself a husband. But Melissa would rather shooting with her brother than attend balls any day. As the pressure of being a young lady who's family's reputation depends on making a good match weighs on her, Melissa starts to hate the hypocritical and voracious gossiping nature of her society, If slapping a lord at her first ball didn't already make her the subject matter of every conversation, catching they eye of Justin Lestrade did. Justin is a handsome and rich young lord with no history and no attachments to any woman despite his constant flirting but Melissa's outspokenness and vivid honesty catches him unaware and what was once a challenge becomes true affection. But Lestrade isn't who he says he is and his secrets will put Melissa's life in danger.
I think my only issue with this book, was the length. It was quite long and had a very slow start and tended to drag on at times. Other than that, the plot did pick up after a while and i can't say much without spoiling everything,.I can say that it was a fresh and unique take on immortality. I know, when you read immortality you think vamps and angels right? This kind of immortality is much darker and less,,,sparkly (Edward ref lol :P)! It's more on the lines of a dark, dangerous curse and people wanting revenge for being victims of the curse! Plus there was this really subtle but present piece of a thriller due to the murders of the young women.
Marcus De Vire, Melissa's brother, is one of my favorite characters! If you've read some of my other blog posts then you might know i'm a total sucker for cutesy and adorable bro-sis relationships! Marcus was so sweet and protective of Melissa throughout the novel. And most importantly, he understood her, he didn't dismiss her problems but went to talk to her about it. He understood that she was sick of being treated like and object and even took her shooting! Yeah LOVE THIS DUDE!
Melissa and Justin were such an awesome pair. Melissa was the fiery, determined and headstrong girl and Justin was the insufferable flirt that could be such a softie sometimes! The setting was perfect! Super well described with all the Victorian feels and balls and visiting old ladies and hearing them rant about gossip-just a perfect representation of the time setting!
Overall, a great and rich tale of love, curses and societal pressures! If you can get past the slow start then you will definitely enjoy this book!
Melissa De Vire is about to make her debut into society and find herself a husband. But Melissa would rather shooting with her brother than attend balls any day. As the pressure of being a young lady who's family's reputation depends on making a good match weighs on her, Melissa starts to hate the hypocritical and voracious gossiping nature of her society, If slapping a lord at her first ball didn't already make her the subject matter of every conversation, catching they eye of Justin Lestrade did. Justin is a handsome and rich young lord with no history and no attachments to any woman despite his constant flirting but Melissa's outspokenness and vivid honesty catches him unaware and what was once a challenge becomes true affection. But Lestrade isn't who he says he is and his secrets will put Melissa's life in danger.
I think my only issue with this book, was the length. It was quite long and had a very slow start and tended to drag on at times. Other than that, the plot did pick up after a while and i can't say much without spoiling everything,.I can say that it was a fresh and unique take on immortality. I know, when you read immortality you think vamps and angels right? This kind of immortality is much darker and less,,,sparkly (Edward ref lol :P)! It's more on the lines of a dark, dangerous curse and people wanting revenge for being victims of the curse! Plus there was this really subtle but present piece of a thriller due to the murders of the young women.
Marcus De Vire, Melissa's brother, is one of my favorite characters! If you've read some of my other blog posts then you might know i'm a total sucker for cutesy and adorable bro-sis relationships! Marcus was so sweet and protective of Melissa throughout the novel. And most importantly, he understood her, he didn't dismiss her problems but went to talk to her about it. He understood that she was sick of being treated like and object and even took her shooting! Yeah LOVE THIS DUDE!
Melissa and Justin were such an awesome pair. Melissa was the fiery, determined and headstrong girl and Justin was the insufferable flirt that could be such a softie sometimes! The setting was perfect! Super well described with all the Victorian feels and balls and visiting old ladies and hearing them rant about gossip-just a perfect representation of the time setting!
Overall, a great and rich tale of love, curses and societal pressures! If you can get past the slow start then you will definitely enjoy this book!
September 15, 2015
This is not my review of my book - This is a review taken from 'The Online Book Club'
This book centers around the forbidden relationship formed between Melissa De Vire and Justin Lestrade. Melissa de Vire is an innocent maiden who has just been introduce to society in order to find a husband, but her first coming out party was a complete disaster and she must leave for the country for awhile to avoid the scandal. Justin Lestrade is a young gentleman who has the reputation as a rake and not the type of man any parent wants for their daughter, Justin is not what he seems and he has a secret that has to be kept hidden. Melissa and Justin have so much to contend with and their lives only get more entwined and tangled with drama. The story ends will a whole lot of unanswered question, so will be looking out for the next book to help fill in some of the mystery.
This book is filled with suspense, intrigue, drama and romance, so I feel it can fit in either of those genres as it has so many elements of each genre.
I think the author has a great writing style, and she definitely knows how to capture and keep the reader’s attention. She created impressive characters filled with intense emotions and powerful personalities. I enjoyed that she gave the story from each characters point of view not just the one. This is the first book in the Night Flower series by this author and I cannot wait to read the next one she produces. I would recommend any of this authors books and will be looking out for any books she releases in the near future.
I really enjoyed this book and the story line was fascinating and full of intrigue, I struggled to put it down until I reached the very last page. The characters were perfect for the story, Justin’s character is mysterious and full of depth while Melissa is to the point and does not beat around the bush she is strong and all she wishes is to make her own choices in life. Although the choice of which path her life will follow was taken away from her. I think this book will appeal to a lot of different people as it falls into multiple genre’s, whether you are a fan of romance or drama, you are guaranteed to enjoy this book.
I would recommend this book to all those book fanatics who love a good read. I rate this book a 4 out of 4.
This book centers around the forbidden relationship formed between Melissa De Vire and Justin Lestrade. Melissa de Vire is an innocent maiden who has just been introduce to society in order to find a husband, but her first coming out party was a complete disaster and she must leave for the country for awhile to avoid the scandal. Justin Lestrade is a young gentleman who has the reputation as a rake and not the type of man any parent wants for their daughter, Justin is not what he seems and he has a secret that has to be kept hidden. Melissa and Justin have so much to contend with and their lives only get more entwined and tangled with drama. The story ends will a whole lot of unanswered question, so will be looking out for the next book to help fill in some of the mystery.
This book is filled with suspense, intrigue, drama and romance, so I feel it can fit in either of those genres as it has so many elements of each genre.
I think the author has a great writing style, and she definitely knows how to capture and keep the reader’s attention. She created impressive characters filled with intense emotions and powerful personalities. I enjoyed that she gave the story from each characters point of view not just the one. This is the first book in the Night Flower series by this author and I cannot wait to read the next one she produces. I would recommend any of this authors books and will be looking out for any books she releases in the near future.
I really enjoyed this book and the story line was fascinating and full of intrigue, I struggled to put it down until I reached the very last page. The characters were perfect for the story, Justin’s character is mysterious and full of depth while Melissa is to the point and does not beat around the bush she is strong and all she wishes is to make her own choices in life. Although the choice of which path her life will follow was taken away from her. I think this book will appeal to a lot of different people as it falls into multiple genre’s, whether you are a fan of romance or drama, you are guaranteed to enjoy this book.
I would recommend this book to all those book fanatics who love a good read. I rate this book a 4 out of 4.
July 25, 2015
This book was one awesome surprise. I really enjoyed the entire premise and found the main character Melissa De Vire incredibly refreshing. During this particular period of time women were basically considered property, and their behavior and actions were under careful scrutiny, promising retribution and ruined reputations for the slightest infraction.
Melissa recognizes the double standard she is held to and longs to break free from these strictures. She is stubborn, willful, determined and quite rebellious yet she has a wonderful sense of right and wrong. The relationship she shares with her brother Marcus is heartwarming, and though he has a difficult time understanding her predicament, he is quite protective of her.
The plot was intriguing and totally original in nature. I can't go into too many details. If I did you would hate me because the spoilers would be epic, but I think it important to note that this paranormal romance did not make me roll my eyes at the idea of love at first sight like so many others do. No, this one took attraction and then slowly grew it into something more believable between Melissa and Justin. This is a bonus because not only will teens love this book, but adults will be able to get behind it as well.
Justin is mysterious and brooding-don't we just love that-and his secrets are far more dangerous than we are first led to believe. His intentions are noble, but he craves love and happiness like anyone, and so some of his choices, though understandable, put Melissa in danger. It makes him just as complex a character as Melissa is, and their romantic connection is believable due to the natural development that takes place.
When I finished the book I immediately went searching for the next one only to discover that it hasn't been published yet. GAH! The ending certainly leaves you with questions and a desire to know what's going to happen next with Justin and Melissa's story.
The Black Lotus is a must read, paranormal romance. With its original plot line, intriguing characters, and well paced plotting and dialogue it is sure to grab the reader and hold their attention for the duration of the story. That's certainly what happened to me. Stayed up until one in the morning to finish it. Yeah. Thanks for that, Claire Warner.
Melissa recognizes the double standard she is held to and longs to break free from these strictures. She is stubborn, willful, determined and quite rebellious yet she has a wonderful sense of right and wrong. The relationship she shares with her brother Marcus is heartwarming, and though he has a difficult time understanding her predicament, he is quite protective of her.
The plot was intriguing and totally original in nature. I can't go into too many details. If I did you would hate me because the spoilers would be epic, but I think it important to note that this paranormal romance did not make me roll my eyes at the idea of love at first sight like so many others do. No, this one took attraction and then slowly grew it into something more believable between Melissa and Justin. This is a bonus because not only will teens love this book, but adults will be able to get behind it as well.
Justin is mysterious and brooding-don't we just love that-and his secrets are far more dangerous than we are first led to believe. His intentions are noble, but he craves love and happiness like anyone, and so some of his choices, though understandable, put Melissa in danger. It makes him just as complex a character as Melissa is, and their romantic connection is believable due to the natural development that takes place.
When I finished the book I immediately went searching for the next one only to discover that it hasn't been published yet. GAH! The ending certainly leaves you with questions and a desire to know what's going to happen next with Justin and Melissa's story.
The Black Lotus is a must read, paranormal romance. With its original plot line, intriguing characters, and well paced plotting and dialogue it is sure to grab the reader and hold their attention for the duration of the story. That's certainly what happened to me. Stayed up until one in the morning to finish it. Yeah. Thanks for that, Claire Warner.
August 15, 2015
I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
From the get go this book held my attention. The prologue gave me an idea of where the book was heading, like so many have started doing, but it did not prepare me for the full idea and how the characters all got from point A to point B. It was a well thought out idea and the book holds great promise for a series.
This book was definitely not like most of the paranormal romance that you read. You get from point A to point B and the two main characters fall in love/get married. That is not what happened here and I am glad it didn't. Sometimes a nice change of pace helps bring freshness to a genre.
I do wish that we got more back story about the "issue" the characters are facing. I felt a little confused about what they were dealing with. It wasn't enough to take away from the story but I feel like we could definitely use more back story. I just would love to know how they all ended up the way they are.
I can say that as a character Melissa is a great main character. She is definitely not your simple, happy girl who does what her family wants her to do. No, she is stubborn, feisty and definitely a handful. I love women like this though. You get so many period women who do exactly what their families want. She was not one of the those girls. She made the story more fun, with her own idea of what she needed to be doing.
I can't wait until the next book so I can see where everything goes for these characters.
Pros: The characters are strong and the story is well thought out.
Cons: More back story needed, and sometimes things felt a little rushed.
Overall Rating: I would definitely recommend this book!
From the get go this book held my attention. The prologue gave me an idea of where the book was heading, like so many have started doing, but it did not prepare me for the full idea and how the characters all got from point A to point B. It was a well thought out idea and the book holds great promise for a series.
This book was definitely not like most of the paranormal romance that you read. You get from point A to point B and the two main characters fall in love/get married. That is not what happened here and I am glad it didn't. Sometimes a nice change of pace helps bring freshness to a genre.
I do wish that we got more back story about the "issue" the characters are facing. I felt a little confused about what they were dealing with. It wasn't enough to take away from the story but I feel like we could definitely use more back story. I just would love to know how they all ended up the way they are.
I can say that as a character Melissa is a great main character. She is definitely not your simple, happy girl who does what her family wants her to do. No, she is stubborn, feisty and definitely a handful. I love women like this though. You get so many period women who do exactly what their families want. She was not one of the those girls. She made the story more fun, with her own idea of what she needed to be doing.
I can't wait until the next book so I can see where everything goes for these characters.
Pros: The characters are strong and the story is well thought out.
Cons: More back story needed, and sometimes things felt a little rushed.
Overall Rating: I would definitely recommend this book!
October 2, 2015
I was given an ARC book for an honest review free of persuasion from the author or anyone else affiliated with this book.
CONTAINS SOME SPOILERS
This book was amazing. It combined two of my favorite loves; historical romance and paranormal. After you throw in a little suspense and mystery, what is not to love about that combination!
Melissa De Vire has just become of age. She is debuting in her first season in London. Melissa is not your typical woman of this time period. She is feisty and head strong. She hates how everything in her life is controlled by men. Right now her father and brother control where she goes, how she acts, and even who she can see. When she gets married, it will be her husband's right to control her time and money. She dislikes the whole season scene with the men flocking over her and declaring their love for her. That is until she meet Justin Lestrade. Justin intrigues Melissa from the get go. He seems to be only a year or two older than Melissa, but his actions state that he is more Melissa's fathers age. How is he so knowledgeable of things around them? Young upper class women start to get murdered. When everyone in the court begins to look at Justin, Melissa is further intrigued. After one conversation with the man, she is certain that he is not the murder, but is being setup. But by who and why? Melissa is determined to learn everything about Justin and who he is.
I would recommend this book very highly. The scenes were so descriptive. I felt like I was back in this time period watching everything as it took place. I can't wait to read more in this series as well as anything else by this author!
CONTAINS SOME SPOILERS
This book was amazing. It combined two of my favorite loves; historical romance and paranormal. After you throw in a little suspense and mystery, what is not to love about that combination!
Melissa De Vire has just become of age. She is debuting in her first season in London. Melissa is not your typical woman of this time period. She is feisty and head strong. She hates how everything in her life is controlled by men. Right now her father and brother control where she goes, how she acts, and even who she can see. When she gets married, it will be her husband's right to control her time and money. She dislikes the whole season scene with the men flocking over her and declaring their love for her. That is until she meet Justin Lestrade. Justin intrigues Melissa from the get go. He seems to be only a year or two older than Melissa, but his actions state that he is more Melissa's fathers age. How is he so knowledgeable of things around them? Young upper class women start to get murdered. When everyone in the court begins to look at Justin, Melissa is further intrigued. After one conversation with the man, she is certain that he is not the murder, but is being setup. But by who and why? Melissa is determined to learn everything about Justin and who he is.
I would recommend this book very highly. The scenes were so descriptive. I felt like I was back in this time period watching everything as it took place. I can't wait to read more in this series as well as anything else by this author!
December 28, 2014
From start to finish, this book was a fascinating read. At no point could I say that I was bored of the book or that I needed a break from it. It's a habit of mine to pause in the middle of stories and not go back to them for weeks on end because they failed to hold my interest. I found The Black Lotus, however, entertaining enough that I didn't feel as if I was making excuses to not read it.
The characters were developed well in the story: new people seemed to spring up throughout the story so it was difficult to get bored of the progression of the plot. I really liked the way Melissa's feminist attitude was portrayed in a time period that women were considered to be inferior to men; I did, however, wonder how she came to have such ideas when all her friends and family had traditional beliefs. The story was told from a third-person point-of-view and the focuses constantly jumped around different characters, so that Melissa wasn't the only one followed throughout the story.
Although I enjoyed the way the time period was shown, with the different clothing and customs, I found that I would have liked a little bit more action during the first half and middle of the story. The most exciting events happens in the last few chapters, whereas the rest of the story constitutes mainly of Melissa going to balls, constantly getting angry that she can't do everything men can, and wondering about the mysterious Justin Lestrade.
Apart from this, however, I really enjoyed the story and am definitely looking forward to reading the second book in the series.
The characters were developed well in the story: new people seemed to spring up throughout the story so it was difficult to get bored of the progression of the plot. I really liked the way Melissa's feminist attitude was portrayed in a time period that women were considered to be inferior to men; I did, however, wonder how she came to have such ideas when all her friends and family had traditional beliefs. The story was told from a third-person point-of-view and the focuses constantly jumped around different characters, so that Melissa wasn't the only one followed throughout the story.
Although I enjoyed the way the time period was shown, with the different clothing and customs, I found that I would have liked a little bit more action during the first half and middle of the story. The most exciting events happens in the last few chapters, whereas the rest of the story constitutes mainly of Melissa going to balls, constantly getting angry that she can't do everything men can, and wondering about the mysterious Justin Lestrade.
Apart from this, however, I really enjoyed the story and am definitely looking forward to reading the second book in the series.
March 9, 2016
This is a fun paranornal historical romance. With debutants and magic and a great heroine who won't be pushed into submission, it's a fun adventure. Melissa originally sounded like the normal lady in that time. She was going to marry, be a good wife, make her parents proud. But then the handsome stranger Justin comes into town and everything changes. There's definitely a spark of romance between them but Justin has some issues and people around him aren't safe. And he's the bad boy that everyone wants Melissa to stay away from.
I liked both main characters and I really enjoyed that Melissa wasn't a push over. There's a good bit of mystery and suspense following the plot and that kept the pages turning. The world building was nicely done as well. And I really liked the writing style. I'm not big into historical so it's great that this one was well done and kept me captivated. And I loved that though it started a little slow for me, it built and then when Justin's secrets came to light it was fast paced! And of course the romance was fun! Passions and sparks fly with them. And the more you learn about both characters the more you like them and cheer for their HEA!
Overall, if you like a little rebellion with your historical romance and a great paranornal mystery added in, I definitely recommend this one!! I look forward to book two!! 4.5 PAWS!!
I liked both main characters and I really enjoyed that Melissa wasn't a push over. There's a good bit of mystery and suspense following the plot and that kept the pages turning. The world building was nicely done as well. And I really liked the writing style. I'm not big into historical so it's great that this one was well done and kept me captivated. And I loved that though it started a little slow for me, it built and then when Justin's secrets came to light it was fast paced! And of course the romance was fun! Passions and sparks fly with them. And the more you learn about both characters the more you like them and cheer for their HEA!
Overall, if you like a little rebellion with your historical romance and a great paranornal mystery added in, I definitely recommend this one!! I look forward to book two!! 4.5 PAWS!!
July 17, 2015
I am a big fan of historical fiction. This book gave me that and some of the paranormal. It was awesome. It took me a bit to get into the book, but once I got there, I was hooked.
This book is about a young woman who is just getting into society and who meets a not so savory character. This man just happens to be cursed as well. Melissa, is a very likeable character because she is not the norm. She isn't into all the rules that young ladies were made to follow. She is very unique in her own right.
This book was written well. It was full of intrigue, romance, and mystery. The ending leaves you on such a cliffhanger. I cant wait to read more. I would definitely recommend this book to romance readers and paranormal readers alike. While I have never been big on paranormal, this book was fascinating....Stormi
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This book is about a young woman who is just getting into society and who meets a not so savory character. This man just happens to be cursed as well. Melissa, is a very likeable character because she is not the norm. She isn't into all the rules that young ladies were made to follow. She is very unique in her own right.
This book was written well. It was full of intrigue, romance, and mystery. The ending leaves you on such a cliffhanger. I cant wait to read more. I would definitely recommend this book to romance readers and paranormal readers alike. While I have never been big on paranormal, this book was fascinating....Stormi
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May 31, 2015
Ms. Warner brings us a wonderful tale of young Melissa De Vire. Melissa is a headstrong young woman that goes against the standards of the 1700's She has her own sense of style and the way she deals with society.
You have to keep turning the pages and rooting for things to go her way.
It is evident that Ms. Warner did her research on the time period and she weaves the settings and society of the time into the story flawlessly. I would have loved to see more of the Paranormal side of things developed, I found myself wanting to understand more of what Justin and his friends did to suffer from the curse they are the victims of. Perhaps in the next installment will bring this to light. I certainly hope so.
If you are looking for a great historical/paranormal romance - I would highly recommend The Black Lotus.
Reviewer for Paranormal Romance and Authors That Rock
You have to keep turning the pages and rooting for things to go her way.
It is evident that Ms. Warner did her research on the time period and she weaves the settings and society of the time into the story flawlessly. I would have loved to see more of the Paranormal side of things developed, I found myself wanting to understand more of what Justin and his friends did to suffer from the curse they are the victims of. Perhaps in the next installment will bring this to light. I certainly hope so.
If you are looking for a great historical/paranormal romance - I would highly recommend The Black Lotus.
Reviewer for Paranormal Romance and Authors That Rock
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