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Tainted

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Alex Franks believes the madness is behind them. With Ascension Labs under his direction and the forces threatening Emma's life overcome, they have a chance at a normal life, and keeping his secrets safely buried. But a shadow rises from Alex’s past, and she wants him back. Criminally brilliant, Hailey Westmore will stop at nothing to claim the boy she was meant to be with.

Without warning, Emma Gentry finds she cannot trust anything. Not her mind, her memory, not even herself. Tragic events and unexpected deaths stalk Alex and Emma, testing them in ways they would never imagine, and may not survive. Alex carries a new secret, and a horrifying guilt that Hailey uses to her advantage.

Emma’s life and sanity hang in the balance, and Alex may have created a monster...

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4 reviews
October 5, 2013
I should start this very short review by mentioning that I did not like the first book of this series Brocken at all. I initially had no plans to read this second installment, but then I heard that the series was optioned for TV and decided to check out the second one, thinking that there was maybe something I missed. Sadly I was wrong. I can honestly say I disliked this second book even more than the first, as if was filled with even more melodrama and over the top circumstances than it's predecessor. Ms. Rought has a firm handle on the language to be sure, but she doesn't seem to realize that you can't force an emotional response from readers by throwing as many horrible and sad things at them as will fit in one book. It's like writing a story about killing a puppy. That's sad right? Not enough? what if the puppy belonged to a little girl? Sad yet? No? What if the girl watched it die? And... she was an orphan... and she'd also watched her parents die... and it was raining... and her caretaker beats her... Eventually it's like, "Okay, we get it! Tell a story please!" Emotion can't be forced, it has to happen naturally, which is something these books don't get.

Some people may be into it, but I can tell you if you didn't care for the first one, you're not going to like this one.
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629 reviews16 followers
June 28, 2015
Actual rating: 0.5 stars

This review is also posted at: Thoughts and Pens. And at Amazon.

I highly recommend this book… only if you are determined to remain single for the rest of your life. Tainted is perhaps the cheesiest book I’ve read in my entire existence. It’s not even a novel because it’s just a patchwork of mushy romantic lines connected to each other to form something akin to a story.

Tainted immediately picked up where Broken left. But this time, the story was narrated from Alex’s point of view. Because Dr. Franks and Josh were already dead, another villain appears in the story in the person of Hailey Westmore, Alex’s demented and psychotic ex-girlfriend. I did have a lot of questions about Hailey’s existence you know but decided that I am not going to waste any more brain power with this book. I instructed myself to just go on with the flow like a mindless robot.

So Tainted really rocked my world when it started spewing over-the-top romantic lines that almost caused my digested food to go back from where it came. But I immediately stopped and an idea came to mind. Marriage is a scary thing you know and I couldn’t picture myself being tied to someone forever. So I think being a spinster would really suit me. But the problem is, how can I scare suitors away? Grumpiness is definitely out of the picture because I am a happy person. Being a psycho is tempting but I don’t want to spend my life being incarcerated or have my soul be damned in Hell. All I want is a simple strategy that is powerful enough to make suitors run as fast as light. And this book gave it to me. Hell, yeah. All I have to do is to take note some of the cheesiest lines of this book, memorize them and use them to my advantage. Want some sample?

The truth is, my mom read lullabies to me when I was sick, even as a teen. I think your quiet breathing makes the best lullaby.
Emma: A tornado couldn’t keep up apart. I meant it when I said I feel better with you, and I’m sorry I never said thank you. I really do love you, Alex.
Alex: Please don’t thank me for something so selfish. I love you too.
Alex: I’m whole with her.
Emma: When I realized I would never breathe again, all I wanted was you.
Alex: Nothing can defeat us. Not the dark my father created. Not the shadows looming over us now.
I cinch my arms tighter around Emma, drag her onto my lap. She’s more than my girlfriend, she’s my everything. They can’t take her away.
Character development isn’t important in this story. As long as Emma, Alex, Bree and Jason could throw corny romantic lines or kiss their partners to the point of sucking their saliva dry, it was already good. Even the new villain wasn’t doing her part well. Maybe the “doormat character sickness” is extremely contagious.

All throughout the story, instead of getting electrified about what Hailey could do, I was almost killed from the barrage of teenage sexual tensions. Instead of reading action scenes, I was forced to read a lot of lip and tongue action or arm action and how a simple touch or embrace can set someone on fire. I cannot grasp the whole point of this story because it’s supposed to be about executing Hailey’s master plan. But Hailey came to the game late. She was only mentioned in the first book and never made an appearance there. But the author used her for this book to come into existence. Instead of giving us an explanation of Hailey’s motivation for trying to win back Alex or for trying to get the 50% share of Ascension Labs, the story was determined to follow the b-llsh-t romance path. Every significant event that happened in this book were all plot devices in a desperate attempt to keep the story going. There’s Emma’s death and resurrection, there’s Jason’s sudden terminal sickness and Hailey’s out of this world evil scheme. They just fail to connect to make a solid plot. It was like the author does not know what she’s doing.

I finished this book with “zero care.” It was worse than the first one. Reading the series was a traumatizing ordeal for me. I think it would leave a permanent scar on my mind.

To conclude, this is the third series that I will not finish. Just thinking of the last installment makes me want to weep with fury. It is hard knowing that I will never acquire a closure with this book. But I am doing it for my own sanity.

If there’s one thing I’ve learned from reading Broken and Tainted, it is how not to write a book.

*ARC was provided freely by the publisher through Netgalley. Obviously, no money was involved with this review. All quoted lines were from an uncorrected proof and are therefore subject to changes*

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75 reviews5 followers
August 23, 2013
TAINTED, Masterpiece of Romanticism’s Dark

“Beauty of whatever kind, in its supreme development, invariably excites the sensitive soul to tears.”
― Edgar Allan Poe

One of the fundamentals of Romanticism lies in the tragic concept of beauty lost: one cannot fully appreciate love until it is gone forever. E.A Poe understood this all too well, placing him in the unlikely category as a practicing romanticist.

A.E Rought, then, is no practitioner. She is a master.

An emotionally gripping journey, TAINTED transports you to a very dark place of wanton passion and unbearable pain, riveting up to the intense climax. Panting. Gasping for air and then falling back on your bed, arms wrapped tight around you. Exhausted.

Haunted.

When it comes to sequels, I always brace myself, expecting deviant little plot bunnies and character schisms between books. The transition from BROKEN to TAINTED, however, is seamless, with characters developed smoothly even down to the cat. But what is even more incredible is the shift from Emma’s to Alex’s point of view. It maintains the story without flaw, adding layers of life to the completed work of both books.

Ms Rought’s voice throughout carries the story, from realistic and witty teen dialogue, to her unique style that often delivers a page of detail in a single, powerful word or phrase. The pacing also sings through an ebb and flow that drives with breakneck intensity and then backs down to a little girl’s lullaby in all the right places, mesmerizing page after page.

The conflict is on par with a Stephen King nightmare, stacking up first with the inner struggle between Daniel and Alex, then building through the torment of ex-girlfriend Hailey who would scare the hell out of John Carpenter’s Michael Myers. That’s just the basal conflict. Add overprotective parents, a blizzard, law enforcement, side effects of experimental medical practices, resurrection, teen rivals from other schools, and texting-induced paranoia whilst stuck in traffic with a town on fire. And Ms Rought pulls no punches with her delicious new splatter-factor. Plenty of gut wrenching gore to go around and deviously placed in the most sacred of areas.

Yes! This is still very much a romance! Saving the best for last, TAINTED also poses conflict of another kind, more powerful than the blood-spilling variety and the primary force that propels this book beyond a five-star review. Throughout, there is a constant level of sexual tension that teases and pulls reader emotion to the surface and then leaves them exposed to whatever twist may come. Whether sensual moments of completion between Alex and Emma, or the absolute worst heart wrenching loss and despair. From Emma’s innocent playfulness to the incredible sense of isolation found in the themes of sacrifice and desire, TAINTED slips beneath your flesh, burrows into your heart, and then has its way with you, leaving you laughing, weeping, hope-filled and a little broken. Tainted.

Enjoy!

“Never to suffer would never to have been blessed.”
― Edgar Allan Poe
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Author 16 books79 followers
September 3, 2016
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Tainted was so much better than the first book, Broken (see my review). Broken was so focused on relationship melodrama, whereas this book is more action/mystery. The main couple’s relationship is more stable, and the issues they face are more real (the girl might be going insane, the guy is dealing with the other people in his life) and it was easier to get on board with their feelings. I actually wish some of the feelings had been more explored than they were.

That being said, this still isn’t a fantastic book. The plot seems to be really circular - girl freaks out! girl runs off and does something awful! guy must rescue girl! girl cries about what she did! - and after a while it gets really tedious.

The characters in this book are also really, really dumb. The were a bit slow in the first book but I feel like it was much, much worse in this one. At one point the six foot tall protagonist hides from the villain by standing behind a curtain like a seven year old. They point out very early in the book that one character is just vindictive and evil and nuts, but then spend the rest of the book wondering who could be doing all these vindictive, evil, crazy things!

The parts of the story I really enjoyed were the relationship between the protagonist and his best friend, and between him and his guardian. They deal with some intense issues and have complicated relationships.

This review is really quick because I don’t have a lot to say about this book. It was better than the first but still missed the mark, and I can’t recommend this book alone because you won’t understand it unless you read the first, which I didn’t feel I could honestly recommend to anyone. (I had initially requested this from Netgalley before realizing there was a first book, and would never have picked this one up on my own if I had not already requested it).
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7 reviews
November 4, 2013
Mmmmmkay...

Allow me to begin by saying that romance is okay. I happen to love a good romance story, even when the only story going on is the romantic plotline.

Here's the thing though-you have to make me believe that the characters belong together, not just tell me over and over and over and over again. I love you, your my everything, we can't be separated, we're soul mates, I need you, you're my other half, etc. and to all this I say... WHY? No one ever JUST loves someone. There is ALWAYS a reason. Things like compatibility, understanding one another, fighting, making up, growing together, and the list goes on. SHOW me they belong together, give me a reason--even just one--and make me feel it. Don't just force the idea down my throat with nothing to back it up and expect me to swallow, cuz it won't happen.

Do not misunderstand, I don't always expect romance in books to be layered and deep, but when the romance is the ONLY THING going on, then it had better keep mu interest and make me want to invest, and to do that it will take more than kissing, spouting hollow sonnets, and more kissing.

Once again the writing itself was lovely, but that just wasn't enough.
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1,573 reviews292 followers
October 5, 2013
His father may be gone but life isn’t about to get any easier for Alex Franks. His ex, Hailey, is in town and determined to get him back, no matter what the cost. When Emma is involved in an accident, he has only moments to make a life-changing decision. There are lines that shouldn’t be crossed, Alex knows that all too well.

I loved A.E. Rought’s writing in Broken, a wonderful book despite the fact I knew the “twist” from the blurb. So I so wanted to love Tainted, a book that came without spoilers or preconceptions, but it just wasn’t to be. Told from Alex’s point of view, I found the narrative a bit melodramatic. His strength of feeling is supposedly explained by the chemical imbalance after his treatments but that would make me expect him to be as normal as can be for part the week. His love for Emma is just over the top and distracting from anything resembling a plot for a good third of the book.

I’m getting a bit fed up of blackmail as a plot device, partly from television but it’s also used a lot in books. It takes a lot for me to agree with their actions; usually I just want them to own up and/or go to the authorities. Hailey is a stereotypical, manipulative ex out for vengeance. She is a cardboard cut-out villain in a role that could have been tragic if handled with a bit more subtly. It’s clear what her agenda is from the outset and she makes the whole story predictable. And Alex mentions his doubt over Paul so often, it practically proves his innocence.

The romance and blackmail pushed what could have been interesting themes to the sidelines; for example, the reliance on medicine for the rest of your life and worrying about the whims of pharmaceutical companies (and, in real life USA, insurance). Especially with Jason’s story added into the mix. Jason probably saved the book for me; I thought his character was the most real and endearing.

Having said all that, the last quarter or so was fairly gripping and improved without so much sappiness. There were a few moments with deer that were perfect when you consider the impacts that deer had on Emma in the first book. I was even quite moved by the end.

Review copy provided by publisher.
Profile Image for Beth Ortega.
4 reviews
October 5, 2013
Had to stop just over half way. Couldn't handle the melodrama. Love is great, over the top love is okay too, but when everything else takes a back seat to pages and pages of sappy prose, that doesn't work for me.

Love is fine, but there needs to be plot too.
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236 reviews11 followers
September 5, 2013
I received a copy of this book from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

First of all I do need to confess I have not read the first book in the series. I am not sure if that influenced my feelings or not. Normally I like retellings. I will admit that Frankenstein is not my favorite book, but that was not my problem with this one. The Frankenstein aspect of the book was actually the most interesting part.

Of all the characters I liked Jason the best. I liked his attitude about life. By the end his attitude about death had gotten a little morbid, but by that point in the book I felt he was entitled.

I felt like Alex kept running around in circles. He would go try to save the day and put a band aid on the problem. Then go have conversations, with his friends, his mentor and his ex-girlfriend. Then something would happen and he would try to save the day again with the same band aid. The entire book circled around and around until finally the climax at the end.

I had a problem with Hailey's motivation for everything she was doing. She kept telling us what she wanted, but then her actions did not feel like that is what she was really going after. There was no other motivation given for her actions, so what she said she wanted must have been what she was really aiming at, but it did not feel sincere. I guess that was a problem with my interpretation of the writing.

The relationships within the story felt skewed. Between Emma and Alex especially. Her dead boyfriend hanging around because he couldn't let Emma go just came off creepy. Emma's character was weak therefore Alex had to go and rescue her every time anything happened.


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5 reviews
October 26, 2013
I never review, but I feel I ought to explain myself for my rating of both this novel and it's predecessor. It likely seems odd I would rate the first installment with a one star then read the second, but that is not how it occurred. When I picked up Tainted, I did not realize it was the second in a series. I got a ways through and was not liking it at all. The plot line seemed thin and the characters flat, but when I came to find out I had read it out of order, I assumed the issues I had with it were due to the fact that I'd not read the first book. I got the first book, Broken, planning to read it then return to the second book but I did not make it that far. I did finish the first book but I did not enjoy it, coming to find it had many of the problems the second book had. Beyond that, the first book did not add to the second at all or fix any of the plot and character problems I was having, so I did not return to Tainted. I very much enjoy this genre, but sadly these books do not get my recommendation.
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12 reviews
October 21, 2013
Actual Rating: 1.5

I'm not sure if there was actually a story interwoven in all the cheesey romance and tired tropes, but if there was it could have been good. But between the crazy ex, the broody guy, the over the top romance, and pretty much every other YA trope known to man, there wasn't time for anything new.

I have to say I'm not sure how to feel about his publisher in general. I'm not sure how other people feel, but for me they are either total hits(The Assassin's Curse, Pantomime, The Holders), or total misses(this one, Poltergeeks, Emily and the Hollow World, When the World was Flat). I think for the next few I will make more use of the free samples and go from there.

O-well, onward.
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5 reviews
November 4, 2013
1.5

Beautiful writer, but a weak story teller. Hero was self-absorbed and moody, heroine was weak and whiny, and the villainess didn't warrant the title. I would be willing to try a future work from this author so long as it was unrelated to this series.
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936 reviews143 followers
October 8, 2013
Review Taken From The Pewter Wolf

I have been holding out writing this review. I know most book blogger pals have been getting ARCs and NetGalley editions a few weeks ago. But I read Tainted before then. You see, I was one of Tainted's beta-readers. Which, basically means, I read it with some other people and we, not only read the story, but see if we can see any mistakes. And I think/fear, out of all the beta-readers, I was probably the worst. When I read a chapter and sent it back to AE Rought, I would ALWAYS have something in red. Whether that was a grammar, a question, a comment of "I like this paragraph" or basically stating "If you kill this character off, I will never forgive you".

So, why am I telling you this: Well, I am reviewing this book from what I read while beta-reading earlier in the year. So, while I am pretty certain the big events in the book have stayed the same, you will have to forgive me if I make a mistake. (Plus, I want a real book version of Tainted so it goes with Broken.)

Alex Franks believe that the madness and horror he and his girlfriend, Emma, faced in Broken is over. He hopes that he could try and live a normal life. Have a girlfriend, have friends, have a life, have the dark secrets of what his father did to him and countless others. Shame he's ex, the criminally brilliant (yet criminally unhinged) Hailey Westmore, doesn't want to let Alex go and is determined to get him back.

And then something shocking happens that changes everything...

Ok, I really enjoyed this book. If I didn't, I don't think AE Rought would have asked me to beta-read this. But I enjoyed the changes AE Rought made with this book. While Broken was told from Emma's point of her, Tainted is told from Alex's point of view. While Emma was trying to find out what was going on with Alex in Broken, Alex knew most of the dark secrets in Tainted and, because of this, the reader instantly knows that something's not quite right with this book and when things really hit the fan, Alex and the readers were on the same level with "What the heck!"

I wanna talk one big thing. Very early on within the book, there is about 5 chapters that I read with me going "No. No! NoNoNoNo! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!". It really shocked me as I didn't see these chapters coming so I have to praise AE Rought for not only pulling the twist off but suddenly making the book unpredictable, unsafe and addictive. I had to know what happened next once I got over the shock of these chapters.

I have only two small negatives and they both come from the ending. AE Rought knows this and has explained why both of these happen. Both of which I get, I do. But one of these negatives is the fate of a character that I loved and the other... well... I can sense some of you guys getting really angry over it. If you've read Cassandra Clare's City of Glass, it's very similar to something that happens in that (and that's all I'm going to say).

I really enjoyed reading this book. I liked the fact that this was an re-imagining of two classics (one I was told as The Mysterious Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde and the other is a guess on my part) and I kinda want a sequel, even though I am pretty certain this is a duology (don't hold me to this), and me sending little hints that I want a re-imagining of Phantom of the Opera isn't gonna happen (if it is, that would rock!). But I really enjoy AE Rought's writing and I can't wait to see what she writes next.
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356 reviews26 followers
March 14, 2016
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Modern re-tellings of classic stories are my favorites. I love seeing how authors take such well known stories and make them their own. Although this story still has that Frankenstein element to it, I was really pleasantly surprised to find that it also integrated the tale of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde! I loved the way these two stories melted into one, and I think Rought did an excellent job of leaving enough of the originals for the reader to be able to pull out the references but still weaving her own unique, beautiful, haunting story.

When I read Broken earlier this year, my biggest problem was with Emma. Everything about her just drove me crazy, and I think it really took away from the book for me. She was a slow narrator, and I just didn't like her. In Tainted, however, Alex is front and center, and he never slows down. Everything is so fast paced with him, and I kind of loved it. He's always looking for a solution, always trying to right his (and his father's) wrongs, and always doing whatever it takes to keep Emma safe while still wrestling his own demons. I loved him in Broken, and I love him even more in Tainted.

I think seeing Emma from an outside perspective makes her more tolerable. I didn't like being inside her head, but she's not as bad when you see her through Alex/Daniel's eyes. I understand better why he loves her, and I think she's just a better character in this book. I also liked getting to know Bree and Jason better, and Jason quickly became one of my favorite characters. He's an excellent friend to Alex & Emma and boyfriend to Bree, and his story is just so heartbreaking. I would love to have a short story from his perspective, because I think there's so much we don't know about him.

Although Alex's dad is a pretty decent villain in Broken, I think Hailey Westmore is an even better one here. She's cold, calculating, and willing to do whatever it takes to get Alex back. She actually terrifies me. I would NOT want to get on her bad side, because she's really got some major issues going on in that head of hers. At first, I felt like she came out of nowhere, but then I realized that this book is set not too long after Broken and things fell into place more smoothly. I love a well-developed villain, and Hailey definitely fits that bill.

Since Alex is narrating this book, everything feels more urgent and faster paced. I think it worked really well here without being overwhelming. We were still given enough details to figure out what was going on but they didn't bog down the plot or the pacing. I loved all of the twists and turns, and didn't see most of them coming. I think some things were a little unbelievable, but they fit within the framework of the story so it didn't bother me too much.

I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who has read Broken, even if you weren't crazy about it. The sequel is one of those rare gems that's actually better than its predecessor! It's still got that dark, haunting, Gothic feel to it but is faster and will keep you more on the edge of your seat. I couldn't put it down and stayed up until the wee hours of the morning furiously turning pages just to find out how Alex and Emma's story ends. I also recommend this series to anyone looking for a unique retelling of classic literature. You won't be disappointed! 5/5 for Tainted!
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Author 4 books66 followers
October 17, 2013
Tainted by A E Rought is the sequel to Broken, which I reviewed earlier this year. I enjoyed Broken but I have to admit I wasn't sold on the idea of a sequel, in the sense that I didn't really think one was needed. I probably should have paid attention to that instinct, since Tainted was a pile of not for me. Not particularly offensive or anything, just very much not the kind of book I enjoy. This review contains spoilers for itself and for the first book, Broken. So does the blurb.



Basically, I didn't really like Tainted but it didn't offend me terribly (really, the gender and science stuff could've been much worse). The writing itself wasn't terrible, although I think the beginning definitely could have been more interesting. I won't be reading a sequel if there is one (no idea at this stage). However, if you enjoyed Broken and don't mind lots of kissing and action, definitely give Tainted a go.

3 / 5 stars

You can read more of my reviews on my blog.
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189 reviews84 followers
October 1, 2013
‘Tainted’ is a solid sequel to ‘Broken’, but I did have more issues with it than I had with the first book. For starters, this book reads so differently from ‘Broken’. The story goes along at breakneck speed, something huge happening every other page. Mind you, I really enjoyed that for the first part of the book, but after that, it was just a bit too much for me.

This book is told from Alex’ point of view, which is quite different from Emma’s in ‘Broken’. I didn’t connect with him, not as much as I did with Emma. He was a bit over the top for me, especially in his love for Emma. Where there was mostly swoony love in the first book, here it seemed suffocating. I get it, he loves Emma and he will do anything to protect her, but at times I just wanted to smack him. Also, I’m not a fan of being all over each other when some of your best friends are standing right next to you. It’s awkward for them and I would feel ashamed and awkward too. Alex and Emma did this all the time in front of their best friends Bree and Jason. It bugged me, but that’s just because I wouldn’t like it if it was me in the story.

The only other issue I had was with the plot. The biggest surprise and actually the best part of the book was in the first halve. Jesus, there’s one scene there that I really hadn’t seen coming, one where I actually muttered “oh my god” without even realizing it. And from there on a lot of mysterious things happen and for the first time this was exhilarating. But then it happened again, and again, … I’m a bit conflicted about this, because I did enjoy the mystery and although some parts were quite gruesome, it fit right in this book. But I didn’t understand it. It was quite obvious to me who was behind it all and I just couldn’t understand the extremes this person went through for her goal. I had expected some grand explanation as to why it all happened, but it was just the same reasons that were mentioned before. Not what I would have wanted to see for this storyline.

I want to point out that I did enjoy some of this book and it’s definitely a rollercoaster of action-packed scenes with some major twists thrown in there. It was a good sequel to ‘Broken’, but just not for me. There were too many things that bugged me personally to make it a very good read for me. This isn’t the first time I’ve had this with Young Adult books, it seems I’m pretty picky when it comes to that age category. I’m pretty sure others will enjoy this though, it’s good Young Adult, definitely better than some I’ve read and that are more popular (which I still can’t understand, by the way). If you’re really into Young Adult, you should read this series. The writing is solid and fluent to read, which makes this a fast read in general. There’s enough going on to keep you flipping the pages and if you like a deep romance, than this one is definitely for you. It just wasn’t for me.

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209 reviews9 followers
October 6, 2013
3,5 stars

*I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.*

I was so happy when I found the sequel to Broken on Netgalley as I very much liked this book. I was looking forward ro Rought's poetic writing and her beautiful love story.

Tainted is written from Alex's POV which has both advantages and disadvantages. I often like when authors switch POV as it provides new insights and gives another angle to a series. But in this case, something got lost on the way. It's not that I don't like Alex or his thought. I loved to read about the way he has integrated both Daniel's and his own essence in one body. How he lives with the wonder of loving Emma every single day. But the first book had this very special poetic style which was probably, as I'm now pondering, due to Emma's perspective. I loved her description, the gloomy fall atmosphere.

Now, it is winter and Alex and Emma have to figure out how they can have a future together. Alex has inherited the Ascension Labs. And they can't simply ignore the fact that some horrible research is going on there, next to very successful medical progress. And there's still Hailey, Alex's ex-girlfriend and apparently also one of his father's experiments. She can't leave Alex alone. I was wondering where the story was heading when suddenly there was this big accident which changed everything. And boom! we were back to the dark and twisted plot, the gruesome bloody elements that made the series into a Frankenstein hommage. I was hooked and couldn't stop reading. It was fast-paced and moving towards a big finale. Towards the end, Rought created again this fascinating blend of plot, angst and the weather as the town is more and more consumed by a fierce blizzard at whose center the action takes place.

The main characters Emma and Alex grow even closer to their best friends Jackson and Bree. Especially Jackson and Alex develop a wonderful guy friendship. At the end, Bree and Jackson are almost as much in the focus as our main couple is. The book also tells us more about Paul, lead scientist of the Ascension Labs, and the one who takes Alex on his further "procedures". I liked Paul right away even though Alex repeatedly doubts his loyalty and true motives.

I was really scared that Emma's aggravating mom would be back in this book and that she would blast my frustration level but gladly she only acted from afar as she's sent away on a holiday trip while their house is fixed up after the fire.

I didn't really understand Hailey though. I know that she wants Alex back, that was already clear in the first book. But it doesn't really explain all her actions in this one. The solution of the novel seemed pretty lame to me.

Just as it was the case with the first book, it's unclear where the next book could be going as there is no real cliffhanger. But I'll definitely pick it up and see what Rought will make of it.
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996 reviews216 followers
January 1, 2017
Reviewed on Lili Lost in a Book

I remember really loving Broken, the first book, so I was very excited to start this! But, unfortunately, this ended up being kind of meh.

First of all, the relationship between Emma and Alex was cheesy AF! Seriously, someone check my teeth for cavities



I don’t know why I felt this way this time around. I remember really liking the romance in the last book, but I guess in that one they were just starting to get to know each other. In this one, they were just disgustingly sweet.



The story itself was frustrating. Weird things are going on with Emma--she keeps disappearing and comes back with missing chunks of time from her memory. And for some reason, no one could figure out why when it was so glaringly obvious!

There is also a tragic thing that happens to Emma, and apparently, there was only one way for Alex to help her. I did not like this. I mean, can you say hypocrite. *sigh*

There was one shocking plot twist there at the end involving Emma’s dead boyfriend Daniel which left me like, “What?!” It was brilliant! I also loved Alex’s best friend--he was so much fun! I actually really loved all the characters, despite the cheesiness.


Hailey: “Oh, now don’t get pissy with me, Alex. You won’t like me when I’m angry...”
“Ha!” I snort and pour as much condescension in my voice as possible. “Don’t quote Bruce Banner. Her turns into the Hulk. You’re just a bitch.”


And the whole Frankenstein bit was so great! It was quite action-packed, which I very much enjoyed. But there were some frustrating situations and the romance was too much even for my sweet tooth. Honestly, this was not a necessary sequel, but I admit that I enjoyed it overall :)
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2,796 reviews45 followers
November 7, 2016
This review originally published in < ahref="http://www.lookingforagoodbook.com&qu... For a Good Book. Rated 1.0 of 5

Tainted is the second book in the "Broken" series. I did not read the first book prior to reading this. I suspect that I might have had a better handle on the back story of the characters and their 'situation' had I read the first book, but author A.E. Rought does a fine job of providing the necessary back story information as this moves along. Unfortunately, it doesn't really matter.

Alex Franks and Emma Gentry are in love. They've recently been through a tough situation, but the outcome is that they have grown even closer to one another and are now looking forward to being together. But a girl from Alex's past, Hailey Westmore, is on the scene now, and she wants Alex back. Because Hailey knows something secret about Alex, she'll stop at nothing, including using the information as blackmail, to get Alex to come back to her.

If you have followed any of my reviews at all, you should already know that I have some strong opinions about what I consider to be typical YA work. The drama is high, the characters over-react to everything, and the littlest things seem to mean the difference between life and death. This is the formula, and I'm okay with it. There's a reason it's a formula ... there is a certain reading audience that looks for this. The difference, then, is in how the different authors work with this formula. I believe that it is possible to deliver a story that incorporates the formula, but Rought instead chooses to play up the already heightened emotions simply for the sake of playing with the emotions, but forgets that the story needs to be interesting.

Instead of story, we get lots of "you're my everything" dialog (from everyone).

This may sound a bit sexist, but I do find that these sorts of books (heightened emotional YA) have a predominantly female readership (this comes from personal observation from years as a bookseller for different companies and different stores) and because of that, I find it really interesting (in a negative way) that the women in this book are either weak and constantly need rescuing, or overtly evil and mean-tempered. Though I would note that the 'heroic' male is generally pretty stupid and doesn't come off as much better than the women.

YA that follows the heightened drama and pathos formula doesn't have to be tripe, but this one seems to be.

Looking for a good book? Even if you enjoy YA that simply plays with strong emotions, I'd avoid Tainted by A.E. Rought.

I received a digital copy of this book from the publisher, through Netgalley, in exchange for an honest review.
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Author 2 books46 followers
October 2, 2013
I received this ARC from Netgalley. I liked the blub and the cover looked interesting. I had no idea it was the 2nd book in the series or that it was a re-telling of Frankenstein. I found out when I went looking for the cover to put in this post on Goodreads. I have to say I am so happy to have been in the dark on both counts.

For one, the book actually can be read without reading the first, so don’t let being book 2 put you off. Secondly a lot of reviews posted have expressed it not being like Frankenstein enough. Fair points I guess, but it doesn’t do the author justice enough.

I liked this book a lot, it was a little weird, and at times dark and depressing but reading the whole story I’m glad to say the overall picture was one of hope (even if it looked like it was all lost), determination (even when it looked like they would never win, love and sadness. If I wanted Disney I would’ve picked up The Lion King.

So to Alex and Emma. Alex is a revived, put together, held together by formula ‘product’ of his father’s experiment. He houses some of the emotions and feelings of Emma’s dead boyfriend Daniel and he is irrevocably in love with Emma.

Emma returns that love and so the story gets underway. Enter Hailey, Alex’s psycho ex-girlfriend who will do anything to get him back. Including selling out his secret and the secret to Ascension Labs. The catalyst is Christmas Eve when Emma and Hailey meet and all hell breaks loose.

Emma’s life is never going to be the same. Alex has to think quickly, and he does the only thing he believes is his only option. Only things don’t go according to plan. Emma starts to have what looks like psychotic breaks followed by memory loss. Animals are dying, people are dying and the only name in the frame is hers.

Wowzer, holy genetic mutation does it pick up. Paul, the labs CEO is not to be trusted, neither is Trent, Hailey’s boyfriend…When it all goes to hell in a hand basket I couldn’t put it down, it was one dark turn after another. Was it really all Emma, was it Paul with an agenda or was it someone more sinister with a goal so driven they would use all of their mutation to end everyone.

I loved Alex, he was what you need in a book boyfriend, but I loved Jason even more. OMG, sharp turn with his story, I thought I was going to die. Tissues were needed!

My favorite quote “Just because you can, doesn’t mean you should” Read the book and find out yourself, don’t read it with another story in mind, read it with Alex and Emma in mind. The journey that way is so much better.

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325 reviews30 followers
October 15, 2013
The second installment of the Broken series unfolded itself before my eyes as soon as I finished the first one. I just can't stop myself for getting curious after all that had transpired from Broken. This book is narrated by Alex and was seen in his point of view. I appreciate that since it will help me as a reader to know more about Alex as I did with Emma on the first book. I was also looking forward to Tainted because the protagonists will get to meet new characters and encounter new issues.

The events were perhaps more intense than in the first book. It was a joyride of climactic conflicts which is thrilling and at the same time, it somehow made me feel that I was running around in circles. Similar to Broken, I was able to predict the whole thing again. It was just screaming out and I wanted to shake the characters for not realizing it. They prolonged the agony by turning the other cheek when the whole time, the answer is already in front of them. I was somehow disappointed with Alex because I know he was smart, rational and capable of anything but somehow his character became...dense. It was weird because I already guessed who was the source of all their problems but still he didn't do anything about it and still believe that he didn't know. It resulted to the issues blowing out of proportion when he could have already acted on it. It was like he covered a bleeding wound with a band-aid and it still would not stop. The villains and those with "potential" were also too shallow and ineffective. They didn't caused enough terror and fear, if you ask me. Their motivation is there but it was executed weakly and in a wrong way. They could have created a stronger impact. What made me give this book a three-star rating and what I did not expect was Jason's character. His development was amazing. I am actually speechless and I can't seem to think of what to say about him that will not spoil you, guys. All I know is that he is loyal and a great friend, and Alex was really lucky. I cried for him, seriously. I feel for Bree.

Overall, Tainted is still rough around the edges and didn't seem to be far more better than Broken. It still needs work with the plot and conflicts since it felt forced at times. Even the characters, I believe, need a better personality development. The readers needed to see and feel the progress. But sometimes a book only needs one redeeming element and it is Jason.
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Author 70 books238 followers
February 6, 2014
Our classics are a great source for inspiration, and AE Rought has paid homage to Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein in her Broken series. Though I didn’t get to read book #1, Broken, I didn’t feel at all lost in the story. The premise is clear: Alex Franks died, but his scientist father brought him back to life, but at a cost – the deaths of other young men. Now another’s heart beats in his chest, and Alex finds himself infatuated with the late Daniel’s girlfriend, Emma Gentry. Fortunately for Alex, Emma returns that love, and the two are so happily in love it’s positively gooey. But in a good way.

Of course if things were to remain that rosy, then there wouldn’t be much of a story, and there are plenty of complications our hero must face. He might have been offered a second chance at life, but he’s still tied to Ascension Laboratories, where dubious medical practices exists cheek by jowl with life-saving research.

Alex needs Ascension in order to maintain his unnatural existence. Unfortunately this entangles him with Hailey Westmore, who is a rather svelte, Evil Ex-Girlfriend of the highest order whose existence is integral to Ascension. She’s so deliciously wicked, and as the story unfolds, she’s so clearly at the heart of his problems but we just can’t pinpoint how – and she can’t just go away either.

Alex can’t find a convenient solution to this problem. He might be his father’s heir – a privileged young man – but he’s still just a teenager, who’s busy finishing his education, and is faced with all the other frustrations of not being a hundred percent in control of his life. Which tells, when the proverbial large, overripe fruit hits the fan – as it does. The plot curdles, and Alex’s frustrations increase. Things are happening in his life, and he’s at that awkward stage where well-meaning adults are still trying to take care of him – which to a degree paralyses him from solving his problems. When he does act, the results have far-reaching, unintended and tragic consequences.

Rought is a mistress of the Gothic novel who has imbued this literary style with her passion for a darn good love story that transcends the boundaries of death. If you’re looking for a contemporary paranormal tale that’s going to press all the right buttons, then add this one to your reading pile. Tragedy, madness, true love – what more could a reader ask for?
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372 reviews41 followers
September 29, 2013
(View this review on My Library in the Making.)

It's been just a month shy of a year since I read Broken, but the premise of that book is not something that's easily forgotten. I finished that one thinking, "so that's it", but lo and behold, we have a sequel! If you haven't read Broken, let me warn you that it's about to get a tad bit spoiler-y in here, so read at your own risk. I'll keep them to a minimum, I promise.

Now, I did say that it was easy to remember the events in Broken, but I meant the main ones—it was the little ones that stumped me. A re-read would have made Tainted's start less confusing. Still, Alex's perspective was so much more enjoyable than Emma's and his voice just hooked me. It was distinctly male, but it had that sense of deep emotion coupled with confusion, thanks to Daniel sort of living inside him. There was still no scientific explanation as to how that double existence came to be after the Lazarus Procedure, as they named it in this second book, but then, there's no scientific explanation as to the power of love, either.

Aside from being less mentally-unstable—seriously, that's what I remember of Emma's thoughts lol—Alex's perspective also gave more insight into Ascension Labs and the horrors hidden in it, particularly the Procedure and how it worked in bringing someone back to life. Not pretty, I tell you. What's pretty though was how much this book shocked me. All the crazy, unexpected turns that Tainted took made me gasp, internally and, at times, out loud.

I hadn't known how A.E. Rought could double the mystery and suspense in Broken, but she did. She never gave her characters any break and kept me guessing as to who their real enemy was. Tainted definitely outdid the first book and you know what? I could use another book in this series!

MY FAVORITE PART was when the "and Alex may have created a monster..." part of the blurb was clarified. That was one of my gasp-out-loud moments.
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1,217 reviews229 followers
September 29, 2013
Tainted is the sequel to Broken and getting it from NetGalley/AngryRobotBooks was what really made me read Broken already, since it had been in my list for a while. As always I'll try to keep this review spoiler free, but some spoilers for Broken might come up.

Tainted starts quite shortly after the ending of Broken, and since I read them one after the other on the same day, it worked pretty well for me.

Broken was told from Emma's POV and Tainted is told from Alex's POV. It works pretty well with the storyline of the book and offers a different insight to what we already knew from Broken.

Alex and Emma are dealing with the aftermath of everything that happened in Broken. They need to figure out a bit their relationship, Emma's parents and specially her mom are a bit more protective than usual, and Alex has inherited quite a mess to clean up from his dad if he really wants to distance himself from all the ugliness that Dr Franks championed.

Two characters that were barely in the background in Broken take a new prevalence in Tainted, Paul and Hailey, both important in Alex's past and both becoming massively important on what the future would hold for both Alex and Emma.

The change of pace in this book was quite something, where Broken was more slow on building up things and focused so much for so long on Alex & Emma's relationship, Tainted has plenty more action and quite a few unexpected surprises and twists, which were quite welcome! Still it seemed quite obvious for me who the "bad guy" behind all the strange happenings was, even if I didn't know clearly all details, so it was a bit frustrating having Alex distracted and muddled with details and not being able to figure out the bigger picture more easily.

More action doesn't mean no romance or less emotional content, I got quite emotional by then end of the book, so be warned, there can be tears!

Tainted was darker, even if still not a proper Gothic novel, it had enough disquieting and disturbing events to put it nearly there. Well deserved 3 stars.
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957 reviews75 followers
October 4, 2013
When I read BROKEN, I was curious about how it would become a series because it stood alone just fine. First, A.E. Rought makes Alex Franks the narrator instead of his girlfriend, Emma Jane Gentry, and let's his secrets drive the novel. Most important is his stalker ex-girlfriend, Hailey.

I really dislike the evil ex trope. TAINTED did nothing to change that. I still enjoyed other parts of the novel, but I wished there had been more characterization of Hailey. She's after either Alex as her boyfriend or half of his company, which just doesn't sound like obsessive love. Not to mention she's very smart and diabolical, rendering the plot a bit of cat versus mouse caught in a trap.

Now, what did work for me is that Rought takes TAINTED to very unexpected places. There's a huge event in the middle that I did not forsee at all, and one at the end that is brutal despite being foreshadowed. I also liked that TAINTED revealed more about Alex before he came to Shelley High after his father's experiments. There's still a sense of the characters being people who actually go to classes.

Some of the emotions and relationships in TAINTED disturbed me. Alex and Emma are into each other in an overwhelming manner, which I don't mind too much because it fits the Gothic romanticism of the story. I did mind some of Alex's thoughts about Bree, Emma's best friend, and how she needed a protector. The girls aren't delicate flowers, which Alex should know.

Overall, I preferred BROKEN to TAINTED. I didn't like Alex as much when I was inside his head, and the more inventive moments weren't enough to erase the taste of one of my least favorite tropes. TAINTED wasn't bad and I'm sure I'll finish the trilogy, but it just felt a little off to me.
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438 reviews63 followers
October 6, 2013
*Received in exchange for an honest review*
*Thank you, Strange Chemistry*
*May contain spoilers from Broken*
Tainted picks up where Broken left off, except this time we get to read from Alex's perspective - something I absolutely loved. This book contains even more drama than the first book and was such a thrilling read. I could not wait to find out what would happen and my first prediction was completely wrong. Tainted follows the complex relationship of Emma and Alex but this time Rought stirs into the mix an ex-girlfriend - I can tell you now this makes for an incredibly thrilling read! Psycho ex-girlfriend at its best!

This may follow some Young Adult cliches but I really enjoyed it. It was fast paced with plenty of action to keep me on my toes. I was so eager to discover what was going to happen next in the book that I couldn't stop flipping the pages. What was happening to Emma? Where does Hailey fit in? WHAT'S GOING ON?! Haha I loved it. Near the beginning Rought absolutely gob-smacked me. I did not see this coming and wow it was a brave move; a brave move which definitely paid off.

We learn more about the characters in Tainted and I definitely fell in love with Jason, Bree's boyfriend. He was such a wonderful character and I loved his honesty and his loyalty to his friends. I loved learning about the darkness within Ascension Labs, a truly terrifying concept. Tainted is a truly gothic tale filled to the brim with monsters and insanity - I definitely recommend this book.
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497 reviews33 followers
May 28, 2014
Review: Post events of Broken, Alex and Emma should be able to get back to their normal lives. These plans gets scrapped when Hailey Westmore turns up—Alex’s ex-girlfriend who we are quickly introduced to as a “manipulative, spoiled witch”. People start dying and it’s clear there’s more secrets that may come out.
This book is told from Alex’s POV as opposed to Emma’s which was a nice change because it helps you understand the Alex from Broken a little more too. It also means the narrator knows things that everyone else doesn’t, a feature I like sometimes in mysteries.
The beginning was good. Something big happens in a car which really changes the dynamics, which I liked, and the way that scene was written kept me gripped. Later, it wasn’t quite as good-it’s quite predictable and the villain, while being beautifully crazy, isn’t very deep at all.
It’s very over the top with use of tropes and lots of romantic lines that you’ve heard before. There’s a lot of focus on the romance, which I found less interesting than all the action going on. Alex also goes a bit broody and annoying at times. I liked Emma just as much as in Broken.
There’s still bits of Frankenstein in here, but there’s bits of Doctor Jekyll and Mr Hyde in here too.
I liked the fact that the deers were still a thing.



Overall: Strength 3 tea to a book where we saw different parts of other characters.
3 reviews
November 16, 2013
Actual Rating: 1.5 (Note: I may come to raise the rating after some consideration. I read four books from this one publisher in a row, this was the last of the bunch. As I only liked one out of the four, I am willing to consider that the bad taste in my mouth MAY have affected my rating of this story, so I will reconsider after a week or so. Until then, it is a 1.5)

This review won't be long as I do not have much to say. That is due almost entirely to the fact that this book didn't have much going on. There were several aspects that could have gone in an interesting direction such as the idea of loosing one's mind and the Dr. Franks character, but thanks to the constant and often pointless melodrama, the ideas were never able to make it off the ground.

I have no problem with drama, romance, and even some pining and angst, but when the romance has no foundation the pining and angst gets old, and when the great mystery of the plot is openly obvious it makes the drama seem forced. I don't want to be able to tell the main characters who the bad guy is only a fourth of the way into the book, at least not when it's supposed to be some big secret.

I won't 'not' recommend it, just be prepared for a very simple story and a large helping of eye rolls.
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106 reviews
January 27, 2014
I didn't find Alex's voice convincing in this novel. The plot could have been dealt with far quicker if all of his caveman 'I must protect my little blonde woman' observations had been cut. What most concerns me is it's never flagged up how unhealthy this relationship is - obsessive, possessive, co-dependent, yet it's treated like every teen's dream. I dread to think what would happen to Emma if she ever tried to leave Alex.
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954 reviews38 followers
September 4, 2013
Very well written story with a plot that keeps your attention from start to finish. Intriguing, fascinating, exciting, gripping. The characters were layered and had proper believable flaws making them feel very realistic and drawing you in. Excellent handling of the plot right through the climax and on to the last words on the last page.
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2,673 reviews51 followers
August 11, 2015
This sequel gender flips a lot of YA tropes which is refreshing. I also liked that everything was from Alex's perspective this time. As for the story itself, it sometimes stretches believability, but I thought it was a good sequel.
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