*Courtesy of Random House UK, via Netgalley
I had no idea what to expect from this book when I first started it, but whatever it was, I got it. It's a combination of Neil Gaiman's Neverwhere, steampunk, and high fantasy. In a world obsessed with timekeeping, it's great to see things thrown on their heads - clocks are no longer instruments which humans have mastery over, but are gateways to their potential destruction. It's terrifying, but somewhat philosophical in a metaphorical sense, and this novel really made me think about something I hadn't thought about before, in terms of time and the creation of the universe and also of how it relates to us, the ways a clock showing the wrong time disorients us and makes us uncomfortable. Time, the fourth dimension in this novel, is captured and woven into a fantasy novel that is interesting to read.
Quare, our protagonist, is a cog in the English clockmakers guild, the Worshipful Company, and is thrown into a world where people in power are fighting to find and keep a mysterious watch called the hunter. Along the way he hears a story of what can only be described as an alternate universe, where gods or angels or demons live, and this is the origin of the hunter. There are betrayals, there's magic, of a kind, there's some blood and gore and even the slightest hints of romance. All of this set against a backdrop of a time where tensions between England and France are running high. Though there isn't much about this tension, it would have been nice for the historical element to be explored further, as it seeks to construct a world without actually constructing a world; without the mentions that the characters are Englishmen (or Scottsmen, Frenchmen, Americans, etc.), this novel could well be taking place in an invented fantasy realm. It doesn't quite do what novels like Gaiman's Neverwhere does, which superimposes a fantasy land, unknown to mere mortals, upon reality, but seeks to reshape it. However there is nothing solid in this world building, and though the world is believable, it's not believable as an alternate history of our world.
There were some things I couldn't understand the point of - Quare spontaneously ejaculating whenever he came into contact with Tiamat, the strange dragon creature, doesn't make any sense. No real reason is given except that he has no control over his body, but that seems a poor excuse when it happens more than once.
Also quite a few things seem to be left to the reader to puzzle out, for example, Longinus' appearance as an automaton on the clock in Otherwhere doesn't mean much until the end, where the reader is left to join the dots that he is part of the world because he left something of himself behind in it (his daughter). Various betrayals are not yet fully comprehensible, although I suppose that's an issue whose resolution will be found in the sequel, and intricacies of the world and its laws and its characters don't quite make sense; I suspect Witcover tried to fit too much into one novel and while most of it survived, there are blotted places in the fabric of the story that could have been cleared up; however, again, I suspect the answers will be in the sequels.
Other things that are just too unrealistic include Quare's seeming inability to feel pain whenever something traumatic happens to his body; it's probably a side effect of the hunter's magic, but it's too unrealistic to make a reader want to sympathise with him everytime something happens to his body.
Also, there are, in my opinion, far too many times were a character is rendered unconscious during which time important things happen to them and then are glossed over as a retelling afterwards. It feels like bad story telling because of all the blank time, and as a reader, I want to know not only what happened, but how it happened. When the doctor replaced Longinus' foot in Otherwhere, was there an argument from Doppler and Inge? did he do it secretly? did he have second thoughts about whether he was doing the right thing? Those are the kinds of questions that aren't answered, which, admittedly, have the potential to be answered in further books, but probably won't be. It's difficult to read about an aftermath without really seeing the original fallout.
On its own, it's a novel that's promising, but stands on shaky legs. As part of a series, I'm sure we'll find that it's been a very solid foundation. Indeed, it's a good read, but not a great one.