*SPOILER FREE* Review of Two Graves, but really my thoughts on the Helen Trilogy.
I've been a Lincoln/Child/Agent Pendergast fan since that very first adventure underneath the museum all those years ago. I've liked just about every book the two have put out together, with the huge exception of the newer Gideon Crew series---those are just terrible.
So it was with great glee that I read the advanced reader copy of Two Graves that came across my desk at work. Finally, I thought, all the answers to the Helen question would be answered! And they are answered, don't worry about that.
What I liked most about this book was that it returned (for the most part) to the action/thriller/mystery solving Pendergast adventures of yore, before the Helen trilogy started. Don't get me wrong, Fever Dream was quite the adventure, but its ending left me a little befuddled. Cold Vengeance, while being as much fun as it was frustrating, in retrospect turns out to be a wheel-spinning adventure that delayed answering questions rather than developing it in any fruitful way. What I remember most about the end of that book was a conversation between Pendergast and his brother-in-law.
BIL: Pendergast, I swear I'll tell you everything, but I can't tell you right now because there's not enough time.
Pendergast: We have a two hour boat ride back to dry land. Just the two of us. Alone.
BIL: Everything, I promise, but there's not enough time right now!
Pendergast: 2 hours, not minutes. Hours.
BIL: Not enough time!
Okay, so it's not verbatim, but if you read between the lines it was telling the reader, I can't say anything now because it'll be explained in the next book. And that's frustrating as heck since it was so obvious. I don't remember feeling that way at all with the Diogenes trilogy: each one was perfect on its own but still managed to lead directly into the next one with a sense of happy anticipation. I didn't feel that with these last two books.
Now maybe it's true that I'm looking back at the earlier books through rose colored glasses, but I remember they were always logical and plausible, even with underground monsters, haunted ships, and 150 year old women. But with these final two Helen books, great holes in logic and plot began to appear, things that didn't make sense, events that in the past would have served to complicate matters are instead glossed over with laughable or no explanations. There were a couple of whoppers in Cold Vengeance that really left me scratching my head, and there's a couple more in Two Graves. I can only attribute this to undue influence from the terrible awful no good bad Gideon Crew series. Those are even worst in terms of... well, everything.
So it's with mixed feelings that I started Two Graves, and it's with mixed feelings that I finished Two Graves. Questions are answered, for sure, and the adventure is fun, for sure. But even at the breakneck speed with which I plowed through it, I still felt frustrated with the storytelling.
There are three stories told here, with only one of them being really interesting, and that one keeps getting interrupted by the other two.
Subplot 1 is about a character we've come to really like but it really doesn't involve her. It involves another character trying to find out about her, and while his adventure does take a turn for the bizarre, it felt out of place here, padding that slowed down the momentum of the A-list plot. We get a nice bit of extra information and resolution at the end, and I can see how it's important, but considering how much is glossed over with this (and other) plots, it still feels like extra padding.
Subplot 2 involves another character we've come to really like, but that story too take a left turn and goes off on its own. That story rolls along, rolls along, rolls along, and is cut off when the A-list plot takes over for the long haul to its resolution. I was afraid subplot 2 would be left hanging (much like another plot was left hanging in Cold Vengeance) but no, it was kinda sorta resolved with a throwaway line at the end of the book. After all that was put into it, that's how it ended? Maybe it will be explained more in the next book, but that just shows how out of place it is in this volume.
I don't know, I feel like I'm asking to have my cake and eat it too. I know we have the Constance Green story sort of simmering in the background for far too long now, but I hope it doesn't become a habit that storylines are started but not resolved for several books. As a huge fan of the series I can promise the authors that I'll always read the next book, you don't have to dangle the same carrot over many volumes. There's a fine line between creating anticipation and stringing the reader along.
So my final verdict on Two Graves? It's a great Pendergast adventure and it introduces some interesting complications to his life that hold promise for future books. I might not like so much one of those complications (it could have easily been, ah, 'prevented' in the course of this book, and it feels a little too easy plotwise) but oh well.
So there you have it. If this review is too vague, well, I hate spoiling books, and this is a book worthy of not being spoiled, especially three months before it comes out.