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488 pages, Mass Market Paperback
First published January 1, 2013
"What law enforcement agencies were you designed to work with?"
"None. I was designed to work with any large organization."
"Why? Large organizations could include crime families and cults."
"The programmers initially entered all existing laws and connected to courts for legal updates. Then all potential purchasing organizations entered their unwritten special orders. There were so many contradictions the programmers switched to boosting the artificial intelligence in order to deal with the inconsistencies. After analyzing all available data, I concluded that all governments and laws exist only to oppress one group to benefit another group. The politicians did not want that analysis leaking out, so they killed the funding on the project."
Government Liberator: "Don't do nothing stupid, and no one gets hurt. I'm from Wealth Allocation Shares To Everyone, and I'm here collecting the windfall profits tax. Wealthy people needs pay fair share."
Capitalist Exploiter: "Me employee. Leave something. Lose job if lose money. That how got job."
Government Liberator: "Tough. Do honest work for government, then no worry. Work for capitalists, you no better them. Deserve anything happen you."
Now, interspersed between the stories of the winners of the contest are brief writings from two successful writers and one illustrator. Their writings are giving advice to the up and comers. This is where Hubbard comes in. His was the first one and when I started reading it I was totally confused and a little annoyed. I got grief from some of my friends for reading a book by the crazy Scientology guy, but all he did for the book was flaunt how he is a successful writer, not because he’s a good writer, but because he’s smarter at business than you are. All three of the sections take way from the mood that builds up as you read the short stories. It’s like watching an awesome movie that has been pulling you in and then the commercials come on and totally rune the mood. Plus, having these inspirational pieces gives the impression that they expected only the people who entered the contest to ever read the book.
While, I wasn't really happy with the people who put the book together I did really like a lot of the stories that were in it. The first one “War Hero” by Brian Trent I would read as a full novel. It had enough intrigue and set up for a larger universe that it could carry itself over a longer length story. “Planetary Scouts” by Stephan Sottong had a similar appeal, but I think would be more successful as an episodic television show. Each episode could be a planet explored, or have story arcs for some of the more important ones. Think a much darker version of Star Trek.
I mentioned before that there were some horror stories in the book as well. I have a soft spot for horror so I was generally pleased and I got a different feeling from them all. “Dreameater” by Andrea Stewart had that serial killer violence and suspense. Although, if you took away the supernatural elements and lowered the body count, it might be confused as a Lifetime movie. Good thing it had the most gruesome death scene of the whole book. Though “Scavengers” by Shannon Peavey had the most heart wrenching death, especially if you saw it coming. But the creepiest story award goes to “Vestigial Girl” by Alex Wilson for knowing what’s going to happen and then having to wait for it and wait for it and wait for it. It has the feeling of dread for sure, as well as some other good feelings for a scary story to be successful.
Two other stories also stood out to me, mostly on a personal level. One of my favorite books is 1984 by Orson Wells and “Cop for a Day” by Chrome Oxide has the same dystopian theme that I enjoy. Depending on your political affiliation you may either really agree with that future being the world is going, or not. The other story is “The Ghost Wife of Arlington” by Marilyn Guttridge which made the little goth girl inside me giggle with happiness. It’s basically a love story for people who like ghost stories.
All the stories had good features worthy of publication and I look forward to seeing more work from them. I think that most fiction fans will be able to find at least one of them enjoyable. However, unless you plan on entering the contest I suggest skipping the three advice sections. And although I rightly deserved the groans I got from my friends when they saw Hubbard’s name on the book I was reading, I think the contest is a good avenue for early writers trying to get some exposure.
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“We need you to kill Peznowski again.”
“Rule one: If the local fauna or flora starts chasing you, shoot it.”
“Victim’s siphons need to be twelve seconds, and end with a halo.”
“My father taught me that all things that fall out of time serve the World Clock. Come,” said the old man as he picked up his valise. “I’ve something to show you.”
This is unreal! I thought. The car wants to know if I am moral enough to work with after telling me that there isn’t any difference between a criminal enterprise and a government.
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The hand grabbed the forceps.
“Could she defeat the monster entirely on her own?”
“Even though I had been looking forward to Break Day, I woke to panic.”
“It was His kingdom, and for a time, Vivian was His queen.”
“The last image hung in the air, alive but undisturbed, like a sleeping mouse in its nest.”
“I wish you true sight, Mara of the Goldwater.”
“Your mother isn’t a dreamcatcher.”
“The knowledge of Master Belladino does not come cheap.”