2 ½ to 3 stars Conflicted
So I've stated before how much I really dig Urban Fantasy, and after reading Nicholas Kaufman’s novella Chasing the Dragon,(standalone, unrelated novella) I was really excited to get my hands on the authors foray into Urban Fantasy, Dying is My Business. But as you can tell by the past tense verbiage the novel did not live up to my expectations.
This novel has the premise that our protagonist Trent, cannot stay dead. For some unknown reason he woke up a year ago with no memory and the ability to rise from the grave anytime he’s killed. He’s not a zombie or some kind of lich, doesn't have horcruxes like my boy Tommy Riddle. Trent just gets to get up and walk away after being plugged full of holes. He works for a mob boss, crime lord type who strings him along with the promise to provide information about his past as long as he does some impossible jobs for him.
The premise is very promising, offering a tale that seems a little different. Then on the back of the book you’re given all this wonderful information about there being demons, undead, dragons, and anything else you can find from mythology. Couple that with the fact that Mr. Kaufman has more fame as a horror writer than UF and you will find it safe to assume this should be a thrill ride of epic proportions. I was wrong in that assumption. Wait dear reader before you click to find another novel, let me explain. The book is not bad, the story is still good, and it’s just not as EPIC as it was made out to be. For me it was more like those movies that come out with the really awesome trailer that ends up showing you all of the awesome parts of the movie. (Sucker Punch, Miami Vice, Sky Captain and The World of Tomorrow, Prometheus, I’m looking at you!)
There are some good tasty bits mixed into this novel. It had an alternate magical history of the world. There was a dragon living under New York, and a different take on gargoyles and some other mythological creatures that were really cool. The way magic worked, who could use it and to what ends was intriguing as well. The story and premise were fine, the plot though, the plot fell short of my expectations.
The story has our protagonist Trent as a man with no memory of his past, but resurrects from the dead anytime he’s killed. No fanfare, no bright lights, just “Ouch, where am I?” kind of stuff. He works as a mob enforcer/muscle guy for a crime lord, and finds out that there is more than meets the eye going on in his world. (I've always wanted to say more than meets the eye, Transformer fetish or sumn I guess). I really liked the beginning and most of the end of this story, but the middle sucked for me. The action gets dull; the story slows and then ramps up adding more villains, side-kicks, and magic. It just takes too long to get going.
The problems:
First, our protagonist Trent is horrible as a mob enforcer. I mean I've met tougher sixth graders. The only thing he has going for him is the fact that he’ll resurrect. He loves his gun and I really do not recall him ever using it to any effectiveness. Now, this could have worked, making him a reluctant bad guy, but for me it made him ordinary and weak in a bad way. When the author ups the tension and the level of big bads he must confront, Trent really gets lucky more than anything. Not a deal breaker because overpowered is just as bad as weak, and he becomes more dangerous as the story develops. But the author does a good job of balancing Trent’s one “magical” skill by making it harder to use often. The one unique aspect is his resurrection is it comes with a price that I will not spoil, but gives reasons for why Trent wouldn't just charge into any situation willy nilly.
The middle was blah. Blah in the way the old Forgotten Realms novels without a great main character or big name were. You know, the ones without Drizzt or Elminster. The stories where there’s an adventure, something’s missing and the fledgling mage/cleric/knight, must confront the evil. Standard fantasy fare set in an urban setting, but without tension, suspense, or a character you really root for (at this point in the story).
Then, to top it all off Trent seems to forget he’s unkillable for minute. It’s important to note Trent isn't very keen on rising from the grave because of the cost of doing so which as I mentioned above I won’t reveal but will say it would make most people not overly keen on wanting to use the skill. My real problem comes from the fact he doesn't even contemplate it, it’s the feature that the novel is based on and it’s not used in the most obvious of scenarios. When fecal matter collides with the proverbial air circulation device Trent doesn't rely, or even stop to think about his one true skill, and that didn't ring as a plausible scenario to me.
The bad guy initially was meh, he and his minions really didn't escalate the action. The pace, even during the chase sequences, seemed slow to me. Additional characters were added who were immediately pivotal to the plot, which was nice, especially considering the fact that since our protagonist cannot be permanently put to pasture the readers needed a reason to feel sense of danger. But they’re not very deep characters and one is rather unlikable, so the pace of the plot at this point is still tortoise.
Overall, the story was alright. It was very predictable in the beginning and middle. The characters lacked some serious badassery in the middle. It really took a while to get going, but had some fun parts. I liked it overall, but I put it down to read other things, and had to come back and trudge through the swampy middle. I must say though, if there is another novel in this series I would read it just to see if the character and story reach their full potential. There is some good groundwork here, just nothing amazing. I was left convicted.