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Mr. Darcy's Refuge: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
Trapped for three days by a flood, and trapped forever by society because of it….
The river isn't the only thing overflowing in Hunsford when a natural disaster forces Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy to work together. The residents of flood-stricken Hunsford, seeking refuge in the parsonage atop the hill, are unaware they are interrupting Darcy's disastrous proposal. Even worse, the flood has washed out the only bride to Rosings Park, stranding Darcy with the woman who has just refused his offer of marriage. But it may already be too late to redeem Elizabeth’s reputation….
The river isn't the only thing overflowing in Hunsford when a natural disaster forces Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy to work together. The residents of flood-stricken Hunsford, seeking refuge in the parsonage atop the hill, are unaware they are interrupting Darcy's disastrous proposal. Even worse, the flood has washed out the only bride to Rosings Park, stranding Darcy with the woman who has just refused his offer of marriage. But it may already be too late to redeem Elizabeth’s reputation….
236 pages, Paperback
First published August 1, 2012
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Abigail Reynolds
66 books779 followersAbigail Reynolds may be a nationally bestselling author and a physician, but she can’t follow a straight line with a ruler. Originally from upstate New York, she studied Russian and theater at Bryn Mawr College and marine biology at the Marine Biological Laboratory in Woods Hole. After a stint in performing arts administration, she decided to attend medical school, and took up writing as a way to retain her sanity during her years as a physician in private practice.
A life-long lover of Jane Austen’s novels, Abigail began writing variations on Pride & Prejudice in 2001, then expanded her repertoire to include a series of novels set on her beloved Cape Cod.Her most recent releases are A Matter of Honor, Mr. Darcy's Enchantment, and Conceit & Concealment. Her books have been translated into six languages. A lifetime member of JASNA, she lives on Cape Cod with her husband, her son and a menagerie of animals. Her hobbies do not include sleeping or cleaning her house.
A life-long lover of Jane Austen’s novels, Abigail began writing variations on Pride & Prejudice in 2001, then expanded her repertoire to include a series of novels set on her beloved Cape Cod.Her most recent releases are A Matter of Honor, Mr. Darcy's Enchantment, and Conceit & Concealment. Her books have been translated into six languages. A lifetime member of JASNA, she lives on Cape Cod with her husband, her son and a menagerie of animals. Her hobbies do not include sleeping or cleaning her house.
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July 6, 2022
After having read this as soon as it came out and now finally deciding to do reviews on all the JAFF I own, I read through all other 89 reviews and gave direct comments to some. I will not repeat what is already written in so many reviews other than to say that Abigail Reynolds is one of my favorite JAFF authors, and I appreciate that she has the ability to come up with so many imaginative alternate endings and situations and sides to characters, i.e., Mr. Bennet's past history with a bully, Colonel Fitzwilliam's proposal and then pursuit of Jane, his parents' history, etc. My favorite part is when Lizzie and her aunt and uncle arrive at Pemberley and she realizes Darcy is at home and runs into his arms. That scene is one I treasure! Oh, and the ending scene at the opera with Mr. Bennet finally giving comeuppance to the Colonel's father. Keep up the good work, Abigail. I don't understand comments about how different from the original these stories are - if you want it to be like the original, keep reading the original over and over again. I love these other takes and especially the sexual tension!
December 2, 2012
1.5
MAD ABOUT IT.
I knocked two full stars off of this because the author BROKE UP BINGLEY AND JANE.
Nope. REJECTED. Not necessarily because I can't bear the thought of Jane and Bingley not ending up together, but because the way that she went about it was directly opposite to Jane's character, leaned heavily on creating a way over-idealized version of Colonel Fitzwilliam, and seemed to derive from some sort of resentment the author herself bore towards Mr. Bingley.
1) Jane Bennet would never hold a grudge. Ever. It wouldn't happen. That's not how she operates. It is the very opposite of who Jane Bennet is. She genuinely and deeply loved Bingley and was constant to that affection and did not blame him or anyone else for the fact that she wasn't a practical match for him in the eyes of his family -- nor did she blame him for what she assumed was a lack of deep affection on his part. The narrative communicates that Jane would be weak or a pushover to accept Bingley back (which I have so many objections to) and through perceiving it this way completely misses out on the sweetness at the core of Jane's character. A Jane who angrily resents Bingley for his defection and constantly compares his manners and character unfavorably to Colonel Fitzwilliam might be more satisfying for some people's tastes, but she's not at all Jane-like.
2) In the book, Colonel Fitzwilliam is an amiable and personable dude who is pretty clearly interested in Elizabeth, but won't marry anyone who's not an heiress. Understandable for the time, though not especially romantic. The author repairs this by suddenly making him this intense romantic who's willing to forgo that first for Lizzie and then for Jane in what can't appear as anything but an attempt to make a contrast with Bingley and cast the latter in a poor light. While I don't oppose elaborating on a secondary character in books like these, doing so just because you prefer to invent your improved version and supplant one of the actual main characters with them is in bad taste. And the contortions she goes through to make him be able to support Jane properly are weak contrivances.
3) The total lack of justice in the facts that:
a) no one ever even bothers to EXPLAIN to Jane why Bingley left Netherfield or that he had no idea she was in London for months so she just thinks he had no strong feelings for her and then decided to pick her back up when he got bored;
b) Lizzie completely dismisses Darcy's role in Bingley leaving and blames Bingley entirely for it, even after Darcy explains in full Bingley's character and how he manipulated him AND even though Darcy never did tell Bingley that Jane was in London for months and Bingley had to find it out from Mrs. Gardiner at Pemberley;
c) Bingley and Darcy's friendship is ruined forever and Bingley ends up marrying some random woman who, implicitly, he only gets with because she reminds him of Jane;
make clear that the author really, really dislikes Bingley (or is doing a pretty credible impression of someone who does) and doesn't value the character or his relationships at all. Which, whatever, like or dislike whatever characters you want. But crafting an entire subplot for the express purpose of tearing down that character and ruining their life while propping up your fave is the worst. Not to mention completely dismissing Darcy and Bingley's strong friendship and Lizzie's own high regard for Bingley.
Additionally, another big flaw was Mr. Bennet's role. Though she tries to explain it away with an involved backstory between him and the Earl of Matlock, the idea of the negligent and indolent Mr. Bennet suddenly becoming this draconian jailer of Elizabeth, his favorite daughter, refusing to listen to any explanation, and keeping her from marrying or even having any contact at all with a man she loves even when an engagement has already been announced, isn't at all believable.
In short, this book spent way too much time reshaping the characters to fit the author's plot needs.
MAD ABOUT IT.
I knocked two full stars off of this because the author BROKE UP BINGLEY AND JANE.
Nope. REJECTED. Not necessarily because I can't bear the thought of Jane and Bingley not ending up together, but because the way that she went about it was directly opposite to Jane's character, leaned heavily on creating a way over-idealized version of Colonel Fitzwilliam, and seemed to derive from some sort of resentment the author herself bore towards Mr. Bingley.
1) Jane Bennet would never hold a grudge. Ever. It wouldn't happen. That's not how she operates. It is the very opposite of who Jane Bennet is. She genuinely and deeply loved Bingley and was constant to that affection and did not blame him or anyone else for the fact that she wasn't a practical match for him in the eyes of his family -- nor did she blame him for what she assumed was a lack of deep affection on his part. The narrative communicates that Jane would be weak or a pushover to accept Bingley back (which I have so many objections to) and through perceiving it this way completely misses out on the sweetness at the core of Jane's character. A Jane who angrily resents Bingley for his defection and constantly compares his manners and character unfavorably to Colonel Fitzwilliam might be more satisfying for some people's tastes, but she's not at all Jane-like.
2) In the book, Colonel Fitzwilliam is an amiable and personable dude who is pretty clearly interested in Elizabeth, but won't marry anyone who's not an heiress. Understandable for the time, though not especially romantic. The author repairs this by suddenly making him this intense romantic who's willing to forgo that first for Lizzie and then for Jane in what can't appear as anything but an attempt to make a contrast with Bingley and cast the latter in a poor light. While I don't oppose elaborating on a secondary character in books like these, doing so just because you prefer to invent your improved version and supplant one of the actual main characters with them is in bad taste. And the contortions she goes through to make him be able to support Jane properly are weak contrivances.
3) The total lack of justice in the facts that:
a) no one ever even bothers to EXPLAIN to Jane why Bingley left Netherfield or that he had no idea she was in London for months so she just thinks he had no strong feelings for her and then decided to pick her back up when he got bored;
b) Lizzie completely dismisses Darcy's role in Bingley leaving and blames Bingley entirely for it, even after Darcy explains in full Bingley's character and how he manipulated him AND even though Darcy never did tell Bingley that Jane was in London for months and Bingley had to find it out from Mrs. Gardiner at Pemberley;
c) Bingley and Darcy's friendship is ruined forever and Bingley ends up marrying some random woman who, implicitly, he only gets with because she reminds him of Jane;
make clear that the author really, really dislikes Bingley (or is doing a pretty credible impression of someone who does) and doesn't value the character or his relationships at all. Which, whatever, like or dislike whatever characters you want. But crafting an entire subplot for the express purpose of tearing down that character and ruining their life while propping up your fave is the worst. Not to mention completely dismissing Darcy and Bingley's strong friendship and Lizzie's own high regard for Bingley.
Additionally, another big flaw was Mr. Bennet's role. Though she tries to explain it away with an involved backstory between him and the Earl of Matlock, the idea of the negligent and indolent Mr. Bennet suddenly becoming this draconian jailer of Elizabeth, his favorite daughter, refusing to listen to any explanation, and keeping her from marrying or even having any contact at all with a man she loves even when an engagement has already been announced, isn't at all believable.
In short, this book spent way too much time reshaping the characters to fit the author's plot needs.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 12, 2020
“There are three means of refuge from the challenges of life; good music, good friends and good food.” –Natasha Potter
Rating: Mature Audience: they stretched the bounds of propriety throughout the story; however, it was at 95% that we hit the wedding night. Yeah, we went into the bedroom. [5+stars]
I loved this story. It was exciting from beginning to end. There was just enough canon to keep me on track with the timeline and enough new material to never be dull. There was excitement, despair, frustration, more frustration, even more frustration, and a mystery as to what-the-heck was wrong with this character type of drama. Oh, the outcome was marvelous. I simply adored Darcy, heavy sigh. Yeah, he was stupendous, over the top and large and in charge.
Our dear Colonel Richard was a BIG surprise. His help at Hunsford was hilarious until it backfired in his face. He then met someone who would change his life. I’ve seen this pairing before and I really like it. Oh-My-Goodness. Did the sparks ever fly! At first, I wasn’t sure about him. This Fitzwilliam family was not very nice. Lord Matlock was a swine. Lady Matlock was another BIG surprise. Oh, I just loved her. She was hilarious.
Mr. Bennet was the… OK, one more time… the BIG surprise in this story. We don’t usually hear why he doesn’t like going to town. Boy, did we ever get the gist of why he hated the ton and society! Man, I felt for him but not enough to forgive him for the trouble he caused Darcy and Elizabeth. His behavior was outrageous even to Lizzy and I thought it was over. I was biting my nails and I didn’t like him at all.
As far as the rest of the Longbourn ladies were concerned… we only had to deal with Mrs. Bennet’s nerves and Kitty for about five minutes and the situation with Lydia and Wickham was handled off the page completely. Good riddance, I say. Mary was a--adorable. Thought I was going to say a BIG surprise. Well, she was and she was adorable. I liked her. We didn’t see much of her but she was a big help to Jane and Lizzy. I can’t say enough about M/M Gardiner. They were amazing. Love them.
“A true friend encourages us, comforts us, supports us like a big easy chair, offering us a safe refuge from the world.” –H. Jackson Brown, Jr.
I simply adored this story. I needed this. Once the obstacles were conquered, it was a feel-good story that just made the heart sing. This Darcy and Elizabeth were so good together. Heavy sigh. I can’t say enough about this story other than, why did I wait so long to read it?
Rating: Mature Audience: they stretched the bounds of propriety throughout the story; however, it was at 95% that we hit the wedding night. Yeah, we went into the bedroom. [5+stars]
I loved this story. It was exciting from beginning to end. There was just enough canon to keep me on track with the timeline and enough new material to never be dull. There was excitement, despair, frustration, more frustration, even more frustration, and a mystery as to what-the-heck was wrong with this character type of drama. Oh, the outcome was marvelous. I simply adored Darcy, heavy sigh. Yeah, he was stupendous, over the top and large and in charge.
Our dear Colonel Richard was a BIG surprise. His help at Hunsford was hilarious until it backfired in his face. He then met someone who would change his life. I’ve seen this pairing before and I really like it. Oh-My-Goodness. Did the sparks ever fly! At first, I wasn’t sure about him. This Fitzwilliam family was not very nice. Lord Matlock was a swine. Lady Matlock was another BIG surprise. Oh, I just loved her. She was hilarious.
Mr. Bennet was the… OK, one more time… the BIG surprise in this story. We don’t usually hear why he doesn’t like going to town. Boy, did we ever get the gist of why he hated the ton and society! Man, I felt for him but not enough to forgive him for the trouble he caused Darcy and Elizabeth. His behavior was outrageous even to Lizzy and I thought it was over. I was biting my nails and I didn’t like him at all.
As far as the rest of the Longbourn ladies were concerned… we only had to deal with Mrs. Bennet’s nerves and Kitty for about five minutes and the situation with Lydia and Wickham was handled off the page completely. Good riddance, I say. Mary was a--adorable. Thought I was going to say a BIG surprise. Well, she was and she was adorable. I liked her. We didn’t see much of her but she was a big help to Jane and Lizzy. I can’t say enough about M/M Gardiner. They were amazing. Love them.
“A true friend encourages us, comforts us, supports us like a big easy chair, offering us a safe refuge from the world.” –H. Jackson Brown, Jr.
I simply adored this story. I needed this. Once the obstacles were conquered, it was a feel-good story that just made the heart sing. This Darcy and Elizabeth were so good together. Heavy sigh. I can’t say enough about this story other than, why did I wait so long to read it?
July 5, 2015
I enjoyed this book and the plot kept me interested. Darcy was so sweet and the twists were pretty interesting. I loved the relationship with the Gardiners, as Mr. Bennet really was not his typical self. There was a different story here for Jane, which I found sweet and satisfying. A nice, quick read, with some intense intimate scenes with ODC.
November 28, 2022
Elizabeth is trapped by flooding in the Hunsford personage. Mr Darcy comes to the rescue but does not get the welcome he expected.
February 14, 2023
What if Mr. Bennet was a birdwit?
Lizzy and Darcy are thrown together at Rosings during a huge flood? Well them getting together during tough times was great. Even better though was Mr. Bennet HATING Darcy’s uncle, the Earl.
A really good story with excellent new characters, good and bad, bring new flavors of angst. I recommend the story highly.
Lizzy and Darcy are thrown together at Rosings during a huge flood? Well them getting together during tough times was great. Even better though was Mr. Bennet HATING Darcy’s uncle, the Earl.
A really good story with excellent new characters, good and bad, bring new flavors of angst. I recommend the story highly.
October 27, 2017
There are parts of the book I really liked and parts that made me want to tear out my hair.
September 17, 2012
Absolute drivel. I've read her other Pemverley variations and enjoyed most of them, this, however, is a different beast. While in fan fiction, there is always room for willing suspension of disbelief regarding character behavior, it seems in some cases there is almost no resemblance to the original characters at all in this book. Rational behavior seems to fly out the window in characters that were defined by it in the original novel. I love P&P fan fiction and I can say that this was a waste of time.
September 5, 2021
One of my faves.
Reread: I am surprised this has so few stars. It is short and funny.
Reread: Still loving this one. Way to go, Jane!
Reread: I am surprised this has so few stars. It is short and funny.
Reread: Still loving this one. Way to go, Jane!
January 4, 2016
It's been a while since I've read a Pride & Prejudice spin-off, and I had this one laying around, so I decided to give it a try.
This is a "what if" story, it follows the original book until the point where Mr. Darcy makes his disastrous and embarrassing first proposal. Elizabeth is interrupted while she's rejecting him, she thinks he got the message, but nope, he did not. He was so sure that she would agree, that he's absolutely certain she was accepting his proposal. I mean, how could she not want to marry the great Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy of Pemberley?! *sarcasm*
Don't get me wrong. I freaking love Darcy, but the moment when he gets rejected by Elizabeth in the original book is just glorious!
So after Mr. Darcy pretty much crosses the line of propriety by hugging Elizabeth and sweetly kissing her neck (believing they were engaged), she sets the record straight and makes sure this time he understands.
But fate can be so cruel sometimes... there's a flood and none of them can leave the house. And, on top of that, they're joined by people from the village who lost their homes and have to take care of them. This and a few other things end up putting Elizabeth's reputation at risk, which is why Mr. Darcy has yet another reason to marry her.
This is not my first Abigail Reynolds Pride & Prejudice spin-off, and I have to admit she's really good at this stuff! Well, it's just the second one I read, but they were both very enjoyable.
I could not stand Mr. Bennet though... I usually really like him, he adores Lizzie and is very sweet. But OH. MY. GOD. He was so annoying here! And so out of character. I guess it had to be done so the story would work, but I didn't like him one bit. We know that, after Darcy gets over his pompous, snobbish self, he becomes an amazing man. So back off, Mr. Bennet!
The Gardiners I did love, though. They play big roles in this story and they obviously have more common sense than this obnoxious version of Mr. Bennet.
All in all, this was really good! I recommend this to you if you like the original Pride & Prejudice. But if you're a fan of Jane and Bingley, you might want to skip this one.
More reviews on my blog: Lipstick and Mocha
This is a "what if" story, it follows the original book until the point where Mr. Darcy makes his disastrous and embarrassing first proposal. Elizabeth is interrupted while she's rejecting him, she thinks he got the message, but nope, he did not. He was so sure that she would agree, that he's absolutely certain she was accepting his proposal. I mean, how could she not want to marry the great Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy of Pemberley?! *sarcasm*
Don't get me wrong. I freaking love Darcy, but the moment when he gets rejected by Elizabeth in the original book is just glorious!
So after Mr. Darcy pretty much crosses the line of propriety by hugging Elizabeth and sweetly kissing her neck (believing they were engaged), she sets the record straight and makes sure this time he understands.
But fate can be so cruel sometimes... there's a flood and none of them can leave the house. And, on top of that, they're joined by people from the village who lost their homes and have to take care of them. This and a few other things end up putting Elizabeth's reputation at risk, which is why Mr. Darcy has yet another reason to marry her.
This is not my first Abigail Reynolds Pride & Prejudice spin-off, and I have to admit she's really good at this stuff! Well, it's just the second one I read, but they were both very enjoyable.
I could not stand Mr. Bennet though... I usually really like him, he adores Lizzie and is very sweet. But OH. MY. GOD. He was so annoying here! And so out of character. I guess it had to be done so the story would work, but I didn't like him one bit. We know that, after Darcy gets over his pompous, snobbish self, he becomes an amazing man. So back off, Mr. Bennet!
The Gardiners I did love, though. They play big roles in this story and they obviously have more common sense than this obnoxious version of Mr. Bennet.
All in all, this was really good! I recommend this to you if you like the original Pride & Prejudice. But if you're a fan of Jane and Bingley, you might want to skip this one.
More reviews on my blog: Lipstick and Mocha
April 15, 2025
Update Sep 27, 2022
On reading this a second time since my past review, I'm increasing my rating to 5 stars. Although the book has its moments when I felt it slowed down, I love how it began and ended, and the between is certainly without any significant flaws, or even anything I can really complain about. I was happy to read it again.
Review Feb 8, 2020
This is a Pride and Prejudice variation, from a favorite author, that is truly unique. It preserves the characters we know and love, putting them in an entirely new situation, and perhaps explaining why some of them are the way they are, particularly Mr. Bennet. It's filled with angst, tragedy, stories from the past, and lots of romance. The bones of the story seem to remain intact to a great extent, though some of the outcomes change. But it never fails to be a compelling and in the end a very satisfying story based on P&P. A retelling well worth reading.
The story begins as Mr. Darcy decides he has to see Elizabeth Bennet, who has not appeared for dinner at Rosings with her friends and cousin. Mrs. Collins says Elizabeth isn't feeling well. Darcy slips out of his aunt's house and rides across the bridge between Rosings and the Hunsford parsonage in the midst of a serious rainstorm that has swollen the river, to call on Elizabeth and make his awkward proposal. Just as she is answering him there is loud pounding and shouting at the front door of the parsonage. The river has burst its banks and flooded the village, and people have fled to the parsonage because it's on higher ground. There are dead and injured and missing, and a lot of people who need to take refuge somewhere.
Darcy and Elizabeth both set to work doing what they can to help, Elizabeth thinking she has made her refusal to Darcy, and Darcy thinking she accepted him and that they are now engaged.
The story gets even more interesting from there. I lost myself in this one, becoming caught up in it as quickly as the pair get caught up in dealing with the flood. Well worth reading.
On reading this a second time since my past review, I'm increasing my rating to 5 stars. Although the book has its moments when I felt it slowed down, I love how it began and ended, and the between is certainly without any significant flaws, or even anything I can really complain about. I was happy to read it again.
Review Feb 8, 2020
This is a Pride and Prejudice variation, from a favorite author, that is truly unique. It preserves the characters we know and love, putting them in an entirely new situation, and perhaps explaining why some of them are the way they are, particularly Mr. Bennet. It's filled with angst, tragedy, stories from the past, and lots of romance. The bones of the story seem to remain intact to a great extent, though some of the outcomes change. But it never fails to be a compelling and in the end a very satisfying story based on P&P. A retelling well worth reading.
The story begins as Mr. Darcy decides he has to see Elizabeth Bennet, who has not appeared for dinner at Rosings with her friends and cousin. Mrs. Collins says Elizabeth isn't feeling well. Darcy slips out of his aunt's house and rides across the bridge between Rosings and the Hunsford parsonage in the midst of a serious rainstorm that has swollen the river, to call on Elizabeth and make his awkward proposal. Just as she is answering him there is loud pounding and shouting at the front door of the parsonage. The river has burst its banks and flooded the village, and people have fled to the parsonage because it's on higher ground. There are dead and injured and missing, and a lot of people who need to take refuge somewhere.
Darcy and Elizabeth both set to work doing what they can to help, Elizabeth thinking she has made her refusal to Darcy, and Darcy thinking she accepted him and that they are now engaged.
The story gets even more interesting from there. I lost myself in this one, becoming caught up in it as quickly as the pair get caught up in dealing with the flood. Well worth reading.
January 21, 2020
In this Pride & Prejudice variation, Elizabeth is compromised by being trapped at Hunsford with Darcy after his disastrous proposal. A tremendous rain has flooded the river and destroyed the bridges separating Rosings from the parsonage. As they must work together to help the villagers, Elizabeth's opinion of Darcy slowly changes. He is forced to publish a marriage announcement in the papers in order to protect her reputation. The announcement sets off a chain reaction which forces Elizabeth to decide her alliance and tests Darcy's patience to the extreme. Luckily they have a few people on their side and the usual disaster with Lydia brings further resolution. An alternative happy ending for Jane is very well done with a wonderful epilogue for Mary. Our dear couple finds their happily ever after but only after a steamy wedding night to bring all the sensual tension in the story to a close.
I am happy to own all of Abigail's works and this is a story I enjoying reading over and over.
I am happy to own all of Abigail's works and this is a story I enjoying reading over and over.
August 27, 2015
Darcy and Elizabeth forced to sleep under the same roof during a flood, forced to ride together in the rain (Darcy tightly holding his beloved Lizzy close to him, but not taking advantage of the situation), Darcy being subjected to disdain at the prospect of his marrying Lizzy, she determinedly accepting his
proposal when witnessing how he stands up to his relatives and their fierce opposition ( great scene) , a walk to the river, a horrible separation at the hands of Mr Bennet, their (beautifully written ) unexpected meeting at Pemberley and a happy ever after......... Such sweet contentment....highly recommended.
proposal when witnessing how he stands up to his relatives and their fierce opposition ( great scene) , a walk to the river, a horrible separation at the hands of Mr Bennet, their (beautifully written ) unexpected meeting at Pemberley and a happy ever after......... Such sweet contentment....highly recommended.
December 19, 2019
¡Me ha encantado!
Al principio no me estaba convenciendo mucho la variación, pero con el pasar de las páginas le agarré emoción.
Soy fan de Jane Austen y especialmente de Orgullo y Prejuicio. No me considero exigente con las variaciones, así que trato de disfrutar todo lo que se me presente.
Han habido algunas cosas que no me convencieron, pero fue una gran lectura. Me han dado ganas de volver a leer el libro original :P
Al principio no me estaba convenciendo mucho la variación, pero con el pasar de las páginas le agarré emoción.
Soy fan de Jane Austen y especialmente de Orgullo y Prejuicio. No me considero exigente con las variaciones, así que trato de disfrutar todo lo que se me presente.
Han habido algunas cosas que no me convencieron, pero fue una gran lectura. Me han dado ganas de volver a leer el libro original :P
December 6, 2024
A Hunsford Variation
A change from the usual Hunsford result — no letter, but the circumstances by which Darcy tells Elizabeth the truth about Wickham is satisfying. Mr. Bennet was a pain, but it worked with the plot and his hatred for Lord Matlock, although I do like our usual Mr. Bennet better. I appreciated E&D’s relationship once E came to her senses. I did enjoy them both in this book.
May 19, 2021 - Audiobook
Very good narration by Pearl Hewitt
A change from the usual Hunsford result — no letter, but the circumstances by which Darcy tells Elizabeth the truth about Wickham is satisfying. Mr. Bennet was a pain, but it worked with the plot and his hatred for Lord Matlock, although I do like our usual Mr. Bennet better. I appreciated E&D’s relationship once E came to her senses. I did enjoy them both in this book.
May 19, 2021 - Audiobook
Very good narration by Pearl Hewitt
May 25, 2022
Not my favorite by this author, but entertaining. I stayed up way too late reading it all in one sitting (and now regret my life choices), so that gives you an idea of my enjoyment.
This book contained two things that, if done even halfway decently, will always be a win for me. First, it starts as a forced proximity romance. It's no surprise that I enjoyed this element, considering Alone with Mr. Darcy: A Pride & Prejudice Variation is one of my favorites. Second, Jane , and I was so excited when I realized the plot was going this direction.
Darcy was pretty obnoxious in the beginning here, an impression probably exacerbated by starting the book in his POV. I enjoyed the shift in his manners and thinking as the book went on, but sometimes his thoughts felt oddly expressed in the text. It's hard to explain what I mean here, but basically I think it comes down to a lack of subtlety. Maybe this is an impression marred by getting sucked into the story, but I think the author put a lot more focus on his bad attributes through hearing his thoughts, but covered his good attributes through his actions and spoken words. Maybe that was necessary, given that Darcy is keeping his intentions close at the beginning, but the sheer amount of internal monologue feels imbalanced as a result. The proposal itself is probably sufficient to show he needs some self-reflection. This is my primary reason for deducting a star.
I didn't love Mr. Bennet (how could I?), and while the history provided for his actions helps some, I didn't like how the information was dropped into the middle of the story without any prior hints about it. The saving grace is that . (Also, it's better than Mr. Bennet in By Force of Instinct.) I did love his relationship with Colonel Fitzwilliam, and their interactions often made me laugh.
The best bits of this are, obviously, the interactions between Darcy and Elizabeth as they get to know one another better. I liked that the middle section is not drawn out for dramatics and angst, and found that it was just the right amount of both. Elizabeth's sass and willingness to stand up for herself and others was center stage and I loved it. Mary's role in the story is relatively small but also nice for a change. Lydia and Kitty are off stage for 99% of the story, and I'm not mad about it. Mrs. Bennet is at maybe 95%. Also not mad.
Overall very good, and I'm happy to add this to the list of Abigail Reynolds books I've enjoyed. She has written many of my top JAFF stories, and while this isn't one of them, I'm sure it will go on the reread list all the same. Solid 4 stars.
This book contained two things that, if done even halfway decently, will always be a win for me. First, it starts as a forced proximity romance. It's no surprise that I enjoyed this element, considering Alone with Mr. Darcy: A Pride & Prejudice Variation is one of my favorites. Second, Jane , and I was so excited when I realized the plot was going this direction.
Darcy was pretty obnoxious in the beginning here, an impression probably exacerbated by starting the book in his POV. I enjoyed the shift in his manners and thinking as the book went on, but sometimes his thoughts felt oddly expressed in the text. It's hard to explain what I mean here, but basically I think it comes down to a lack of subtlety. Maybe this is an impression marred by getting sucked into the story, but I think the author put a lot more focus on his bad attributes through hearing his thoughts, but covered his good attributes through his actions and spoken words. Maybe that was necessary, given that Darcy is keeping his intentions close at the beginning, but the sheer amount of internal monologue feels imbalanced as a result. The proposal itself is probably sufficient to show he needs some self-reflection. This is my primary reason for deducting a star.
I didn't love Mr. Bennet (how could I?), and while the history provided for his actions helps some, I didn't like how the information was dropped into the middle of the story without any prior hints about it. The saving grace is that . (Also, it's better than Mr. Bennet in By Force of Instinct.) I did love his relationship with Colonel Fitzwilliam, and their interactions often made me laugh.
The best bits of this are, obviously, the interactions between Darcy and Elizabeth as they get to know one another better. I liked that the middle section is not drawn out for dramatics and angst, and found that it was just the right amount of both. Elizabeth's sass and willingness to stand up for herself and others was center stage and I loved it. Mary's role in the story is relatively small but also nice for a change. Lydia and Kitty are off stage for 99% of the story, and I'm not mad about it. Mrs. Bennet is at maybe 95%. Also not mad.
Overall very good, and I'm happy to add this to the list of Abigail Reynolds books I've enjoyed. She has written many of my top JAFF stories, and while this isn't one of them, I'm sure it will go on the reread list all the same. Solid 4 stars.
August 14, 2014
TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: Begins with the night of Darcy’s proposal at Hunsford Parsonage
MAIN CHARACTERS: Elizabeth Bennet, Mr. Darcy, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Mr. Bennet, Jane Bennet, Little Jenny, Lord Matlock, Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner
SCENARIO: What if, on the night Darcy went to propose to Elizabeth at Hunsford Parsonage, there were terrible rain storms and the water levels rising at an alarming rate through the village? What if in the midst of giving her refusal, Elizabeth is interrupted by dozens of villagers knocking on the parsonage doors seeking shelter from the floods? What if Darcy, steps into “Master of Pemberley Mode” and remained at Hunsford Parsonage to protect and care for all the villagers and inhabitants of Hunsford, including Elizabeth Bennet?
WHAT I LOVED:
Restricted Circumstances: I love it when authors place Darcy and Elizabeth in which they are constrained of either company or mobility and are forced into a situation that is atypical and unique. It is interesting to see how different their relationship develops in these circumstances. How Elizabeth often sees Darcy in a new light and how with just a few conversations and observations Darcy’s true character is revealed for her.
Liberating Circumstances: In addition, when Darcy and Elizabeth are placed in situations beyond their control, sometimes there is the need for them to bend or break the rules of propriety a little. (It is not their fault there is no chaperones around…) I love seeing them do things like ride together on a single horse and talk privately outside under the stars! *le sigh* ;)
New Insight for Mr. Bennet: In this variation we learn a very plausible reason for Mr. Bennet’s disinclination for society and preference to stay at home rather than travel to London. I thought this development of Mr. Bennet’s character to be quite fascinating and thought-provoking. It is amazing how experiences and people from our childhood can greatly affect who we are as an adult.
New Path for Colonel Fitzwilliam: This storyline may be a bit controversial with readers, but I quite enjoyed our glimpse into the our dear colonel’s head and heart. His resentment for being a dependent second son comes out a little and we see that he is perhaps a little jealous of Darcy and all he has. But we also witness Colonel Fitzwilliam show great care for Darcy and protect and defend him against his tyrannical father. I don’t want to give anything away, but I’ll just say that I really enjoyed how Colonel Fitzwilliam found his way to happiness, he deserves it!
Jenny and Her Hero: I always love it when there is an adorable child in the story and Darcy interacts with them. Jenny, was quite a little dear and I took great pleasure in following her story and seeing her exchanges with her rescuer! I love how she came back in the end too!
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
Some Niggling Thoughts: Sometimes you have those quibbles or questions that you just can’t ignore. Such as, was Elizabeth’s reputation really in danger? (It didn’t seem like it.) And why was Mr. Bennet so unreasonable to Darcy, but not nearly so to Colonel Fitzwilliam? (who he has an even greater reason to dislike and mistrust!) However, these were very minor quibbles that didn’t deter my enjoyment of the story very much.
WARNING: A somewhat explicit wedding night scene takes place in the last ten pages of this tale (love how irresponsible Darcy was!), and Darcy and Elizabeth enjoy a brief but sensuous encounter sixty pages before that. Recommended for Mature Audiences
CONCLUSION:
Inventive scenarios, insightful character development, and intense emotion – this is what I’ve come to expect every time I open a novel by Abigail Reynolds. I find her prose to be wonderfully engrossing and I delight in exploring the unique and imaginative ways she brings Darcy and Elizabeth together time and time again!
TIME FRAME: Begins with the night of Darcy’s proposal at Hunsford Parsonage
MAIN CHARACTERS: Elizabeth Bennet, Mr. Darcy, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Mr. Bennet, Jane Bennet, Little Jenny, Lord Matlock, Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner
SCENARIO: What if, on the night Darcy went to propose to Elizabeth at Hunsford Parsonage, there were terrible rain storms and the water levels rising at an alarming rate through the village? What if in the midst of giving her refusal, Elizabeth is interrupted by dozens of villagers knocking on the parsonage doors seeking shelter from the floods? What if Darcy, steps into “Master of Pemberley Mode” and remained at Hunsford Parsonage to protect and care for all the villagers and inhabitants of Hunsford, including Elizabeth Bennet?
WHAT I LOVED:
Restricted Circumstances: I love it when authors place Darcy and Elizabeth in which they are constrained of either company or mobility and are forced into a situation that is atypical and unique. It is interesting to see how different their relationship develops in these circumstances. How Elizabeth often sees Darcy in a new light and how with just a few conversations and observations Darcy’s true character is revealed for her.
Liberating Circumstances: In addition, when Darcy and Elizabeth are placed in situations beyond their control, sometimes there is the need for them to bend or break the rules of propriety a little. (It is not their fault there is no chaperones around…) I love seeing them do things like ride together on a single horse and talk privately outside under the stars! *le sigh* ;)
New Insight for Mr. Bennet: In this variation we learn a very plausible reason for Mr. Bennet’s disinclination for society and preference to stay at home rather than travel to London. I thought this development of Mr. Bennet’s character to be quite fascinating and thought-provoking. It is amazing how experiences and people from our childhood can greatly affect who we are as an adult.
New Path for Colonel Fitzwilliam: This storyline may be a bit controversial with readers, but I quite enjoyed our glimpse into the our dear colonel’s head and heart. His resentment for being a dependent second son comes out a little and we see that he is perhaps a little jealous of Darcy and all he has. But we also witness Colonel Fitzwilliam show great care for Darcy and protect and defend him against his tyrannical father. I don’t want to give anything away, but I’ll just say that I really enjoyed how Colonel Fitzwilliam found his way to happiness, he deserves it!
Jenny and Her Hero: I always love it when there is an adorable child in the story and Darcy interacts with them. Jenny, was quite a little dear and I took great pleasure in following her story and seeing her exchanges with her rescuer! I love how she came back in the end too!
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
Some Niggling Thoughts: Sometimes you have those quibbles or questions that you just can’t ignore. Such as, was Elizabeth’s reputation really in danger? (It didn’t seem like it.) And why was Mr. Bennet so unreasonable to Darcy, but not nearly so to Colonel Fitzwilliam? (who he has an even greater reason to dislike and mistrust!) However, these were very minor quibbles that didn’t deter my enjoyment of the story very much.
WARNING: A somewhat explicit wedding night scene takes place in the last ten pages of this tale (love how irresponsible Darcy was!), and Darcy and Elizabeth enjoy a brief but sensuous encounter sixty pages before that. Recommended for Mature Audiences
CONCLUSION:
Inventive scenarios, insightful character development, and intense emotion – this is what I’ve come to expect every time I open a novel by Abigail Reynolds. I find her prose to be wonderfully engrossing and I delight in exploring the unique and imaginative ways she brings Darcy and Elizabeth together time and time again!
November 6, 2012
This is another of Abigail Reynolds what if scenarios on Pride and Prejudice. The book begins as Darcy is about to go to the parsonage at Hunsford to make his ill-fated proposal, but the difference is that it's been raining very heavily and the river bursts its banks while Darcy is there, before Elizabeth properly has a chance to reply. The village is flooded and Elizabeth and Darcy are stuck for days together in the parsonage with stranded villagers to look out for. Thus they are forced to spend a lot of time together and rather than have the heated argument followed by the letter and months of separation as in Pride and Prejudice, Elizabeth and Darcy begin to get to know each other better. I particularly liked how Darcy's character unfolds in this time. I would like to tell you more but don't want to give away any spoilers.
Some of the other characters are portrayed slightly differently from P&P, I am not massively keen on Colonel Fitzwilliam in this book, he is a tad flaky, and he does something that I wasn't very impressed with, for the same reasons that Lizzy isn't, so I am in good company! Mr Bennet is different, his behaviour seems illogical on quite a few occasions, but reasons are given for this.
I have read a few other Abigail Reynolds books and I felt that this one had less serious themes than some, and was quite low on angst although there are obstacles to overcome, but that makes it no less enjoyable to read, I'd certainly be happy to re-read it. The spelling is American English, but the words are not noticeably Americanised aside from that. Also, for those who are bothered about sex scenes, there is a sex scene. Personally I don't mind them as long as they don't seem to be out of character, and I thought that this one was fine in the context of the story and generally nicely written.
Some of the other characters are portrayed slightly differently from P&P, I am not massively keen on Colonel Fitzwilliam in this book, he is a tad flaky, and he does something that I wasn't very impressed with, for the same reasons that Lizzy isn't, so I am in good company! Mr Bennet is different, his behaviour seems illogical on quite a few occasions, but reasons are given for this.
I have read a few other Abigail Reynolds books and I felt that this one had less serious themes than some, and was quite low on angst although there are obstacles to overcome, but that makes it no less enjoyable to read, I'd certainly be happy to re-read it. The spelling is American English, but the words are not noticeably Americanised aside from that. Also, for those who are bothered about sex scenes, there is a sex scene. Personally I don't mind them as long as they don't seem to be out of character, and I thought that this one was fine in the context of the story and generally nicely written.
August 27, 2019
Status: Read from August 24 to 25, 2012
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
My Library Notes:
Mr. Darcy's Refuge: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by Abigail Reynolds
Paperback, First Edition, 239 pages
Published August 1st 2012 by White Soup Press
ISBN: 0615669751 (ISBN13: 9780615669755)
Trapped for three days by a flood, and trapped forever by society because of it…
The river isn't the only thing overflowing in Hunsford when a natural disaster forces Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy to work together. The residents of flood-stricken Hunsford, seeking refuge in the parsonage atop the hill, are unaware they are interrupting Darcy's disastrous proposal. Even worse, the flood has washed out the only bride to Rosings Park, stranding Darcy with the woman who has just refused his offer of marriage. But it may already be too late to redeem Elizabeth’s reputation…
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
My Library Notes:
Mr. Darcy's Refuge: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by Abigail Reynolds
Paperback, First Edition, 239 pages
Published August 1st 2012 by White Soup Press
ISBN: 0615669751 (ISBN13: 9780615669755)
Trapped for three days by a flood, and trapped forever by society because of it…
The river isn't the only thing overflowing in Hunsford when a natural disaster forces Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy to work together. The residents of flood-stricken Hunsford, seeking refuge in the parsonage atop the hill, are unaware they are interrupting Darcy's disastrous proposal. Even worse, the flood has washed out the only bride to Rosings Park, stranding Darcy with the woman who has just refused his offer of marriage. But it may already be too late to redeem Elizabeth’s reputation…
September 8, 2012
There are so many things I love about this novel that I don't know where to begin
It's my favourite Pride and Prejudice Variation by Abigail Raynolds together with "Mr. Darcy's Obsession".
When I started reading it, two days ago, I had three or four other books to finish. So I saied "I'll read it slowly, savouring the story. There's no need to rush to the end, I know that Darcy and Elizabeth will be together".
Once I began, I simply couldn't put it down. I had to go on reading, because the story take such a different turn from the original that I wasn't sure anymore about the ending.
I love Mr. Bennet, so I had a difficult time in reconcile myself with his stubborness. However his character is rendered perfectly.
I don't want to spoil the pleasure of reading, so I'll restrict myself to saying that Colonel Fitzwilliam has his share of action and the epilogue is perfect!
I can't wait to read the next Variation!
It's my favourite Pride and Prejudice Variation by Abigail Raynolds together with "Mr. Darcy's Obsession".
When I started reading it, two days ago, I had three or four other books to finish. So I saied "I'll read it slowly, savouring the story. There's no need to rush to the end, I know that Darcy and Elizabeth will be together".
Once I began, I simply couldn't put it down. I had to go on reading, because the story take such a different turn from the original that I wasn't sure anymore about the ending.
I love Mr. Bennet, so I had a difficult time in reconcile myself with his stubborness. However his character is rendered perfectly.
I don't want to spoil the pleasure of reading, so I'll restrict myself to saying that Colonel Fitzwilliam has his share of action and the epilogue is perfect!
I can't wait to read the next Variation!
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October 16, 2018This was actually a reread for me, and I'm not sure why I never marked it the first time. It's a fun, scandalous premise, that occasionally delves into ridiculous (for Regency) scenarios -- but that just adds to the fun.
August 29, 2012
DISCLAIMER: THERE ARE NO OUTRIGHT SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW BUT THERE ARE SOME HINTS AT THE OVERARCHING PLOT DIRECTIONS OF THE NOVEL.
I think this must be one of the better books by the author, although the length of it left me desiring more. The story twists here are a bit more complex and intriguing. Those who enjoy the extended conflict between Darcy and Lizzy as they reassess their own views and opinions will be a bit disappointed, for this period is compressed into the relatively narrow confines of flooded Hunsford, but there is no lack of drama as this conflict is instead replaced with conflict between Lizzy and her father and the tension of her forced estrangement from Darcy.
While Mr. Bennet's actions here made me grind my teeth in frustration, they are at least well explained (if terribly misplaced in logic). The author doesn't demean him by simply turning him into some kind of a horrible character just to suit the story, but she plays up to his own sense of pride in his own discernment of character, in some ways simply magnifying the Lizzy's own character flaw from the original novel. But as those who have read the story, his final words at the end of the novel in the theatre (a witty retort for we would expect no less) are a delight and gave me much laughter. Similarly the author's conclusion of Jenny's story (a new character) is done with such a funny turn of phrase that I just had to chortle. And finally, Col. Fitzwilliam is also given a good share of the stage instead of playing second fiddle to Darcy like in many stories. He has his own journey here and in retrospect given the relatively short book I am amazed how well the author is able to insert it into the main storyline.
I think this must be one of the better books by the author, although the length of it left me desiring more. The story twists here are a bit more complex and intriguing. Those who enjoy the extended conflict between Darcy and Lizzy as they reassess their own views and opinions will be a bit disappointed, for this period is compressed into the relatively narrow confines of flooded Hunsford, but there is no lack of drama as this conflict is instead replaced with conflict between Lizzy and her father and the tension of her forced estrangement from Darcy.
While Mr. Bennet's actions here made me grind my teeth in frustration, they are at least well explained (if terribly misplaced in logic). The author doesn't demean him by simply turning him into some kind of a horrible character just to suit the story, but she plays up to his own sense of pride in his own discernment of character, in some ways simply magnifying the Lizzy's own character flaw from the original novel. But as those who have read the story, his final words at the end of the novel in the theatre (a witty retort for we would expect no less) are a delight and gave me much laughter. Similarly the author's conclusion of Jenny's story (a new character) is done with such a funny turn of phrase that I just had to chortle. And finally, Col. Fitzwilliam is also given a good share of the stage instead of playing second fiddle to Darcy like in many stories. He has his own journey here and in retrospect given the relatively short book I am amazed how well the author is able to insert it into the main storyline.
December 24, 2022
I can not begin to tell you how much I mentally pace when I know A.R. has another P&P variation coming out. An agony it is, as you say to yourself " It will arrive on such and such a day, but all the while hoping for ten days sooner";D
The book was splendid as they always are and I look forward to rereading it all though the fall season. A.R. is, in my estimation, far and away the best of the variation writers.
synopsis from cover
Trapped for three days by a flood, and trapped forever by society because of it….
The river isn't the only thing overflowing in Hunsford when a natural disaster forces Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy to work together. The residents of flood-stricken Hunsford, seeking refuge in the parsonage atop the hill, are unaware they are interrupting Darcy's disastrous proposal. Even worse, the flood has washed out the only bride to Rosings Park, stranding Darcy with the woman who has just refused his offer of marriage. But it may already be too late to redeem Elizabeth’s reputation….
In this Pride & Prejudice variation, the lane dividing the Hunsford parsonage from Rosings Park has been replaced by one of the flood-prone Kentish rivers. The storms are real – the spring of 1811 was remarkable for numerous thunderstorms in Southeast England.
The book was splendid as they always are and I look forward to rereading it all though the fall season. A.R. is, in my estimation, far and away the best of the variation writers.
synopsis from cover
Trapped for three days by a flood, and trapped forever by society because of it….
The river isn't the only thing overflowing in Hunsford when a natural disaster forces Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy to work together. The residents of flood-stricken Hunsford, seeking refuge in the parsonage atop the hill, are unaware they are interrupting Darcy's disastrous proposal. Even worse, the flood has washed out the only bride to Rosings Park, stranding Darcy with the woman who has just refused his offer of marriage. But it may already be too late to redeem Elizabeth’s reputation….
In this Pride & Prejudice variation, the lane dividing the Hunsford parsonage from Rosings Park has been replaced by one of the flood-prone Kentish rivers. The storms are real – the spring of 1811 was remarkable for numerous thunderstorms in Southeast England.
October 18, 2019
Hmmm, not Bad. Not my favourite of this authors novels. I liked the premise, I liked that Darcy was going to huntsford again to try and make things right, before getting himself caught up in a situation that no one expects. This situation is in no way not wanted by Darcy; he's quite happy with how things have turned out.
I do find him a little high handed with his assumptions (like his announcement) but I also know he is right in his own way. But he needed to be a little more honest with Elizabeth about the situation.
I found C.Fitzwilliam a little out of character too with his offer to Lizzie, going against his cousin. Oh and lizzys father. Really not himself at all; very very odd indeed.
As for the rest I really enjoyed, loved the gardeners and how they help the star crossed pair.
Four stars but for me the characters weren't quite there for me.
I do find him a little high handed with his assumptions (like his announcement) but I also know he is right in his own way. But he needed to be a little more honest with Elizabeth about the situation.
I found C.Fitzwilliam a little out of character too with his offer to Lizzie, going against his cousin. Oh and lizzys father. Really not himself at all; very very odd indeed.
As for the rest I really enjoyed, loved the gardeners and how they help the star crossed pair.
Four stars but for me the characters weren't quite there for me.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 10, 2016
This variation begins at Rosings, when Darcy is on his way to Hunsford Parsonage to offer marriage to Elizabeth. During this proposal the storm that has been raging gets worse and there are interrupted by villagers looking for a safe haven from the storm. Can any actions of Darcy persuade Elizabeth to accept him, of course the situations is made worse by the interference of all their families.
An enjoyable story and an easy writing style, with the usual characters plus more of the Matlock family.
An enjoyable story and an easy writing style, with the usual characters plus more of the Matlock family.
June 14, 2021
Wow! Such a great story. I won’t summarize but will highlight my favorites.
SPOILERS starting NOW…
Jane marries Colonel Fitzwilliam! - fantastic!
Mr Bennet (aka Birdwit) as the ogre father - I was so angry at him but he finally came around in the end.
The Earl of Matlock as the baddie - I think he was almost worse than Wickham in this story.
The angst of weeks of separation between D&E and the Gardiners helping them.
The sexual tension between D&E!
So many sweet and memorable moments. Definitely will reread again sometime in the future.
SPOILERS starting NOW…
Jane marries Colonel Fitzwilliam! - fantastic!
Mr Bennet (aka Birdwit) as the ogre father - I was so angry at him but he finally came around in the end.
The Earl of Matlock as the baddie - I think he was almost worse than Wickham in this story.
The angst of weeks of separation between D&E and the Gardiners helping them.
The sexual tension between D&E!
So many sweet and memorable moments. Definitely will reread again sometime in the future.
July 18, 2023
Darcy and Elizabeth get trapped by a flood at Hunsford, letting Lizzy see how good Darcy is in a crisis. But his relatives disapprove of the engagement, and so does Mr. Bennet, who thinks that Lord Matlock is a bully and Darcy is going to be just like him. So there's a long separation and ODC aren't even allowed to communicate.
I love this story and I reckon Jane was well rid of Bingley.
I love this story and I reckon Jane was well rid of Bingley.
February 5, 2021
A romantic, clever variance that wont displease.
Synopsis:
On a storming evening, after Darcy proposes in Hunsford but before Lizzy can Cleary reject the overconfident Darcy, Mr Collins distressed parsonage members interrupt begging for asylum as a flash flood has arrived.
Darcy right away goes to help a girl stuck under a tree and helps Lizzy set everyone up comfortably.
Darcy spends the evening happy thinking he is engaged and Lizzy spends it impressed the proud Darcy took a rejection so well.
Soon this is awkwardly cleared up, but with the Collins trapped at Rosings they are quite unchaperoned,
They are clearly compromised but the plot thickens when the good Colonel arrives and gives Lizzy another alternative,
The main obstacle becomes Mr Bennet selfishly trying to cling to Lizzy, his home entertainment
IWhat I enjoyed:
-Darcy’s delusional thought process explaining why he was so assured of Lizzy’s acceptance had me in fits;
-The expanded perspective of the pressure on Mr Darcy to not marry with his heart in mind made his insufferable conceited proposal to Lizzy sympathetic,
-Colonel Fitzwilliam was after my own heart, sardonic, witty and selfless;
What Displeased Me:
There is no specific complaints form me, it was a short read, it lacked secondary character development to make it compelling. It was a merely good read, not great.
-There are many ways to measure the merit of a JAFF. One of the more foolproof methods is by the ridiculousness of Darcy’s horse’s name.
A safe and logical name tend to be allusions to a literary character, take ‘Benedict’, per say.
A sillier JAFF have had things like ‘Thunder’ or 'Fury', this one had “Stormwind”, the most cringe inducing of my recent memory.
Conclusion:
A cute JAFF, kept my rapt attention, had some very pretty scenes, and overall I can’t complain.
MsAbigail Reynolds usually only satisfies me,The Last Man in the World, occasionally disappoints me, Alone with Mr. Darcy: A Pride & Prejudice Variation and occasionally pleases me, Mr. Darcy's Undoing: A Pride and Prejudice Variation.
I'm glad to relate and assure in this work she does the latter, in fact I believe this may be my favorite of hers.
I measure the quality of a JAFF by three factors, as follows;
1. Did I feel the characters acted true to Austen's character framework (allowing for changed circumstance and scenario to offer some leeway)?Yes
2. Was I engaged during the reading and not bored?Yes
3. Was the writing compelling/ intelligent and was there sufficient interaction/dialogue between the main characters? Yes
“Darcy visibly fought to calm himself. “I will hope for a better resolution than seems possible at the moment.” Then emotion seemed overcome him. “My heart is yours, Elizabeth, and nothing can change that. I can be patient until December if I must. Wait for me, I beg of you, no matter what may come.”
Synopsis:
Darcy would have thought Elizabeth would stop at nothing to come to Rosings tonight, his last night in Kent, and her last chance to ensnare him.
On a storming evening, after Darcy proposes in Hunsford but before Lizzy can Cleary reject the overconfident Darcy, Mr Collins distressed parsonage members interrupt begging for asylum as a flash flood has arrived.
Darcy right away goes to help a girl stuck under a tree and helps Lizzy set everyone up comfortably.
And Elizabeth would be waiting for him, like the treasure at the end of a knight’s quest
Darcy spends the evening happy thinking he is engaged and Lizzy spends it impressed the proud Darcy took a rejection so well.
Soon this is awkwardly cleared up, but with the Collins trapped at Rosings they are quite unchaperoned,
All too soon he reached her room, dimly lit by the one candle. Good Lord, he was alone with Elizabeth in her bedroom, and she was nestled close to him – and he was supposed to put her down and walk away. He was going to be a candidate for sainthood by the time this was over.
They are clearly compromised but the plot thickens when the good Colonel arrives and gives Lizzy another alternative,
“If marrying Darcy is not palatable to you, I am offering myself as another option.”
The main obstacle becomes Mr Bennet selfishly trying to cling to Lizzy, his home entertainment
IWhat I enjoyed:
-Darcy’s delusional thought process explaining why he was so assured of Lizzy’s acceptance had me in fits;
She must be avoiding him. There could be no other reason for her absence. But why? She had every reason to wish to be in his presence, unless she had decided that winning his love was a hopeless cause. Perhaps that was it. Perhaps his failure to declare himself had left her believing that he was simply toying with her. Perhaps she thought it would be too painful to see him tonight, knowing it would be for the last time. Darcy’s mouth curved a little with the thought. Dearest Elizabeth! How happy she would be to receive his assurances of love.”
-The expanded perspective of the pressure on Mr Darcy to not marry with his heart in mind made his insufferable conceited proposal to Lizzy sympathetic,
“Memories of his father, telling him he must marry an heiress because Georgiana’s dowry would cut into the Pemberley coffers.
His mother, taking him aside so that his father would not hear, reminding him that he was an earl’s grandson. Her voice still echoed in his ears.
“Pemberley does not want for money or land. You must find yourself a titled lady to bring honor to the family name.”
-Colonel Fitzwilliam was after my own heart, sardonic, witty and selfless;
“I tried proposing to the girl myself – even told her that my brother was sickly and I was his only heir. No luck, not even when I dangled a countess’ title.”
What Displeased Me:
There is no specific complaints form me, it was a short read, it lacked secondary character development to make it compelling. It was a merely good read, not great.
-There are many ways to measure the merit of a JAFF. One of the more foolproof methods is by the ridiculousness of Darcy’s horse’s name.
A safe and logical name tend to be allusions to a literary character, take ‘Benedict’, per say.
A sillier JAFF have had things like ‘Thunder’ or 'Fury', this one had “Stormwind”, the most cringe inducing of my recent memory.
Conclusion:
A cute JAFF, kept my rapt attention, had some very pretty scenes, and overall I can’t complain.
MsAbigail Reynolds usually only satisfies me,The Last Man in the World, occasionally disappoints me, Alone with Mr. Darcy: A Pride & Prejudice Variation and occasionally pleases me, Mr. Darcy's Undoing: A Pride and Prejudice Variation.
I'm glad to relate and assure in this work she does the latter, in fact I believe this may be my favorite of hers.
I measure the quality of a JAFF by three factors, as follows;
1. Did I feel the characters acted true to Austen's character framework (allowing for changed circumstance and scenario to offer some leeway)?Yes
2. Was I engaged during the reading and not bored?Yes
3. Was the writing compelling/ intelligent and was there sufficient interaction/dialogue between the main characters? Yes
February 7, 2019
El relato comienza cuando Elizabeth visita a los Collins y, al enterarse de que Darcy tuvo que ver en la separación entre Bingley y su hermana, decide no asistir a la cena en Rosings Park. Allí la historia original termina e inicia la ficción de esta autora: Darcy decide ir a la casa de los Collins a declararse a Lizzy, pero los sorprende una tormenta y comienzan las idas y vueltas.
La historia en general me pareció ok, nada sublime, pero entretenida. Hay momentos picantes entre Elizabeth y Darcy, cosa que no me esperaba porque leí "La Obsesión de Darcy" de la misma autora y más que un par de besos no pasaba nada, así que supuse que no sería su estilo. En este sentido, si bien siempre se remarca que Darcy es caballeroso, lo sentí un poquito lascivo en algunos momentos. Nada terrible, igual.
El papá de Lizzy estaba bastante irreconocible, me costó un poco digerir el pasado que le construyó la autora, lo cual lo hacía comportarse como un nene haciendo berrinches. Y a veces la sentí a Lizzy algo caprichosa.
*****SPOILER*****
No me gustó particularmente la relación que la autora estableció entre Jane y el coronel Fitzwilliam, creo que es una de esas cosas que... no cierran.
La historia en general me pareció ok, nada sublime, pero entretenida. Hay momentos picantes entre Elizabeth y Darcy, cosa que no me esperaba porque leí "La Obsesión de Darcy" de la misma autora y más que un par de besos no pasaba nada, así que supuse que no sería su estilo. En este sentido, si bien siempre se remarca que Darcy es caballeroso, lo sentí un poquito lascivo en algunos momentos. Nada terrible, igual.
El papá de Lizzy estaba bastante irreconocible, me costó un poco digerir el pasado que le construyó la autora, lo cual lo hacía comportarse como un nene haciendo berrinches. Y a veces la sentí a Lizzy algo caprichosa.
*****SPOILER*****
No me gustó particularmente la relación que la autora estableció entre Jane y el coronel Fitzwilliam, creo que es una de esas cosas que... no cierran.
July 12, 2022
I didn’t enjoy this very much. The whole premise seemed suspect. How could the parsonage, which we are told in canon was only separated from Rosings by a lane, be separated from Rosings by a flood? But they could still get to Tunbridge Wells?
Also, the whole Mr Bennet had a horrible time at school went on too long. I also wanted more of a comeuppance for the evil Matlock.
Also, the whole Mr Bennet had a horrible time at school went on too long. I also wanted more of a comeuppance for the evil Matlock.
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