I picked this book up at my library mostly because I liked the cover, and because I've been really wanting to get back into the historical fiction genre. I enjoyed the overall mystery of the book, the way that the pieces of the puzzle were put together to figure out just who murdered a beautiful young woman, and the other subplots that were in this book.
Unfortunately, I did not enjoy the writing as much as I did the idea that went behind this book. There was a lot of tell and not show, where facts were being thrown into your face with little time to digest what you were reading. The characters were not very developed and read the same as one another, and some of the characters seemed like they were being forced to be there with little explanation as to why they were there.
This book outlined domestic abuse in the medieval ages, and horrific abuse at that with a woman (the wife of an aristocrat having her ear cut off, scars on her back, and being branded by her husband). It had the same woman running away from her abuser and being found in a relationship with another man that was beneath her station, and ultimately being murdered a year or so after she left her abusive husband.
I liked the idea behind this mystery. I really did. It's not often that domestic abuse is really explored in historical mysteries, and to have an in depth look at what damage it causes the victim was definitely an added plus.
What I did not like about this book was how poorly developed the characters were. It was definitely very difficult for me to grow attached to any of the characters, including the main protagonists. As a result, I found it nearly impossible to really tell these characters apart. There were moments while I was reading this book that I had to go back to the beginning of a section and re-read it to know what was going on, what characters were present in a scene, and what was being said.
Now, I loved the fact that the author put Scottish slang into her story. However, as I am not a Scot and don't understand the Scot language, it was difficult for me to really understand what was being said. I had to guess a lot of the time by going off what the rest of the sentence was saying to know what was being said, and felt sympathy for Pierre who was a French mason, who wasn't at all fluent and had to have Gilbert speak French to him throughout the book.
I want to mention the fact that the writing of this book in certain sections felt disjointed. I feel this could be blamed on the fact that the author hardly describes scenes and most of the writing is in your face and is told to you.
This leads me to the characters. The lack of development, the way the author tries so hard to actually show well rounded characters in her story, and the way this book is written makes a lot of the dialogue and the relationships in this book forced. Pierre (who was present with the main character when the body was discovered) seemed to tag along as a sidekick with hardly any personality or character of his own, despite the fact that the author was trying to represent him as a strong personality.
The other issue that I had was with Alys. It became very clear to me that Alys was going to be the love interest in this story. She grabbed the attention of Gil early on in the book and he saves her from harm. She also seems to exist to help Gil solve the case, but her and her father (the French mason) seem to be carbon copies of one another, with hardly any character or personality. The relationship between Alys and Gil seems to be forced, and there were times when I couldn't see a relationship working out between the two of them.
As for the mystery of this book, when we met the character and the way this character was presented, I knew immediately who was behind the murder of this innocent woman. The way that Gil has great distaste for this particular character, and the way the character goes about trying to know what is going on in the investigation, it became very clear that the author was heading towards this character as being the perpetrator.
All in all, I did like the book. I would be interested in picking up the second book in this series, but I wish to focus on other books first that are higher up on my priority list.