The second book is about the aftermath of the fall of the evil Tohan by a new warlord named Arai; all of which happen out of screen, since showing takes effort compared to just throwing in an infodump. The new warlord ain’t any better than the Tohan, since he also kills anyone who disagrees and plans to waste the protagonist and anyone around him just to make sure he won’t turn against him next. Something which the hero eventually does because he would be killed if he didn’t, therefore the new villain is an idiot.
Kaede, the hero’s sweetheart, is pregnant after that morbid sex scene in the previous book, and lies about the identity of the father in an attempt to save both of their lives. So yeah, Shigeru, the good feudal lord from the first book, is now the father, and Arai is stupid enough to believe he can’t kill his baby without causing a rebellion from all those who loved Shigeru. A rebellion that never happened when Shigeru was killed, but will somehow happen by the death of an unborn baby.
Kaede returns to her palace, in a territory ruined by wars, bad harvests, and a semi-crazy man who happens to be her father. Once again the world building is the best part of the book, since we get to fully understand what it’s like to live in a feudal society where honor is above all, to the point hara-kiri is the ultimate expression of it. It’s all about following traditions, being obedient, and gutting yourself when something goes terribly wrong.
It’s the character motivations that come off ham-fisted because of author Lian’s dislike of male sexism, as she constantly makes the lords ridiculing Kaede every time she wants to take the initiative and help out her father in restoring the land. There is a difference between telling a woman to shut up because she has a vagina and acting like a complete jerk; but author Lian doesn’t bother to tell which is which. She even goes as far as having Kaede’s crazy father trying to rape her like the asshole male he is, before getting killed by the deus ex machina of a ninja, which the hero trained with in the first book.
After that lazy resolution, the ninja helps her out in gaining control of the household by killing everyone who doesn’t accept her as his leader. Something which is evil when a man like Arai does it, but very heroic when Kaede does it… with the help of a man. Feminism for the win, right guys? Yes, it’s supposed to represent how there is no good or evil in the society they are living in, since everyone needs to dirty his hands in order to get on top of things. The way it was portrayed though doesn’t feel like that, since Kaede is clearly favored over any other man. What follows the violent take over, is her falling ill and miscarriages, thus being victimized in the eyes of the reader. See guys? Arai didn’t lose his baby. Kaede did, so feel sorry for her even if she is doing the exact same crap as the villain.
In the meantime, our hero Takeo is trained harshly by the ninjas in order to become a ruthless killer. He learns all sorts of ninja tricks and even kills some poor guys who were marked for death because they did the unforgivable crime of speaking their minds and being liberal. This part is showing again how inhumane this society of obedience really is. It treats people as objects or cattle. Both Kaede and Takeo are seen by their superiors as nothing more than breeders of powerful successors. The ninja masters go as far as having Takeo being seduced by a kunoichi, so she can get pregnant and offer them a ninja offspring with hidden powers such as his.
Takeo eventually betrays these assholes after he finds out they also murdered his father for not wanting to kill innocents anymore, and because they use him as nothing more than a stallion for knocking off all their females. Great story for a hentai, but this is not that type of a story. He seeks refuge in the wilderness, where he is aided by the Hidden, the tribe he grew up with. Once more we see Lian doing a lazy job by portraying these people as the obvious victims the reader is supposed to care about, while she is also pretending to keep things grey for both heroes and villains. If you ask me, the only reason these guys are mistreated is because they are pacifists who are never fighting back and author Lian is pro-pacifism.
And if you think that wasn’t bad enough, they have their own seer who gives the protagonist a prophecy. OH SHIT HERE WE GO AGAIN! Like a true shounen adventure that has to include a special hero with special powers, fate is working in his favor all the way. He’s not simply a super ninja, he also has noble blood, so he’s allowed to be the ruler of the land. Which he does because the prophesy said so. Great job at ruining the suspense Lian, can I stop reading now since you spoiled the ending? Also, the same prophesy says he will be killed by his own son, so I guess all he has to do is not have any sons. Oh, and thanks for also telling us he didn’t chose to leave the ninjas with his free will; it was God who forced him to do it. Fatalism: taking away the responsibilities of your actions since the invention of religions.
After this revelation, plot convenience spiral out of control and Naruto~er, I mean Takeo, keeps getting saved or finds out what he has to do next, with minimal effort. The most improbable random encounters with allies take place, so Takeo can save his life, find Kaede and marry her. And now things are free to can get worse from here.