This book ruined the Kitty Norville series for me. It gets off to an OK start. Kitty has locked herself away in a cottage, basically in the middle of nowhere, to help heal and cope with what happened to her at the end of "Kitty Goes to Washington." Kitty comes off a bit weak and even immature at moments in this book. Her calling in the other supernatural talk show under false names, to try and rile up or shake up the DJ. I just couldn't believe this was the same character. You are the girl who stood in a cage, faced down your assailants and turned their evil plan in your favor? You are the girl who literally pulled a fae over your spell circle? I can get taking a break from the show, but crank calls and stupid jealousy because you put your show on hold and someone else had the gal to have a show similar to it?
To make matters worse, Cormac brings a recently bitten Ben to her doorway.This is when the story goes completely south for me. It had such great promise, the idea that Ben, the ever cool lawyer is now a werewolf and Cormac, the werewolf hunter must now decide whether or not he's going to kill his cousin and best friend. The issue is that Ben is an annoying wolf.Don't get me wrong, I get that being turned into a wolf is traumatic, but Ben becomes a victim. He is always whining and relying on Kitty to talk care of him. The amount of times he yelled or whimpered "Kitty!" needing her was soooo annoying and made me roll my eyes lots.
Added to that, there is their relationship. HOW? I am sorry. Kitty has a short attention span. She throws herself at Cormac, while sleeping with Carl. Cormac is a bit freaked, which is to be expected seeing as he was raised to hunt werewolves, and so Kitty turns to Luis, who was boring as all hell. Now, all of a sudden she's into Ben? Cormac and Kitty have had chemistry since the first book. Their banter has made me laugh, etc. I liked Ben in earlier books, but there was never any real chemistry or attraction to each other. In fact, Ben spent the first two books telling Kitty how into her Cormac is, etc etc. Now all of a sudden they're together? I would have been ok with this, if after their initial hook up, there was a sign of romance, of attraction, of heat. NO, Ben just needs someone to take care of him because he's a submissive wolf and that bugs me. I am all for strong female characters, but an alpha female needs an alpha male, not some beta wolf that is going to bow his head and wait for her to get in the middle of the battles. I mean she is hurt protecting him and he's like "i should have done something" YES! You should have. Also, he goes from this badass lawyer who stared down overzealous senators on the senate floor, to a hack who cannot even handle some small town newbie prosecutor?
They're relationship is all about convenience. He's a wolf, she's a wolf, hey lets be a pack and while we're at it, lets have sex! Never mind that we never had any real attraction or interest in each other. Never mind that my cousin likes you. Never mind that when you would meet up, Ben would order lunch and barely pay you attention besides work.
I have said it before, a book is as good as it's romance and this romance was cheap, sloppily thrown together and not organic or even interesting. That coupled with Kitty's immaturity and the fact that they could not figure out simple little mysteries and threw Cormac under the bus really ruined this series. I have read some spoilers and I guess whats to come in the series is interesting, but I am disappointed, UF has not been bringing it's agame for me.