Veracity is a book that should've narrowed its scope. I need to say that first, but before I say anything negative, let me tell you about all the positives.
First, the setting is fantastic. It's another dystopian future (this time the former United States) after a Pandemic that left the Confederation and President in charge. The main means of control comes from the chips implanted in everyone that will electrocute and immediately inform the authorities (Blue Coats) if the person speaks a Red Listed word like "rebellion" or "freedom" and so forth.
The nature of controlling language to control the populace is the central idea of this book and in that regard it works remarkably well. The protagonist, Harper, is simply ignorant of so many words because she's never heard them before. Her learning all these banned words and their meanings is a great way of showing her growth.
Her ability to "sense" people's feelings as a visual spectrum of colors is also a really cool idea, albeit one that I thought was initially superfluous at the beginning. Luckily this is more fleshed out and relative to the plot as I thought I would've preferred it given its own book when I first read about it.
The only real problem I had with the book is that it crammed in unnecessary details that hurt the story on the whole. The two most glaring ones (spoilers) were the "love story" and the traitor. For the former, there is absolutely no chemistry between Harper and Gage. Other than the fact that he is a male character her age...they have nothing in common. This is especially glaring given how many times Harper's mentioned that the Confederation isn't interested in banning all forms of sex, only love. Not that I think she needed a female love interest, but it seemed weird to have such an unnecessary male one if you're going to harp on how homosexual love is taboo but the sex isn't.
Perhaps it was meant to be a set up for a future book, but everything wraps up so tidy at the end, it's a wonder there was need for a rebellion at all. As I'm going along, I'm remembering more things I had issues with but I'll go in order.
The traitor was a waste of space. The identity of the traitor was immediately obvious to anyone. If Harper as the narrator is going into detail about this one character who didn't want to be there keeps acting suspicious...and then is surprised to find out that he/she was the traitor? That's just dumb. This subplot didn't really do anything than waste space and make Harper seem really idiotic. It'd be one thing if a trustworthy (seemingly) character turned out to be a turncoat, but to make the obvious choice for a traitor the traitor? It's pointless.
Another superfluous addition was Harper losing her sense powers for no reason only to magically gain them back in time to fulfill her goal. There was no sense of tension about this because you knew she'd get them back just in the nick of time. It would've been better to show her struggling as she had been already without the unnecessary (tired of that word yet?) addition of her losing her powers for a time.
Also as I said, the book ends very abruptly. After some fighting...the war is over. Now a quick revolution is interesting, but after all the hype that went into setting it up, it seems...fake. I realize Harper was needed to deactivate the main chip controller device, but the reason why Big Brother in 1984 was so menacing was because it was everywhere and undefeatable.
Don't get me wrong; by no means do I desire all dystopian settings to remain bleak and hopeless. I love the triumph and the restoration of freedom. I just like it to be earned, or at least, show some of what the world is like now. There was tons of talk underground of who would take what position, SHOW THAT.
The ending with Veracity was obvious and a nice bookend, but it would've been better to show the world, rather than more of Gage's forced romanticism.
2/3s of this book is fantastic. The setting and the concept are great; it just falls apart near the end with mounted weight of unwarranted and unnecessary additions that only fill up a page quota without adding anything to a good story.