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World of the Lupi #5
Mortal Sins
FBI Agent Lily Yu and her werewolf lover are embroiled in a series of murders, each linked to a form of dangerous "death magic."
334 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 3, 2009
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Eileen Wilks
128 books1,523 followersEileen Wilks’ first book, a Silhouette Desire published in 1996, hit the USA Today Bestseller List and was nominated for Romantic Times' Best First Short Contemporary award. Since then, her books have appeared consistently on national bestseller lists. With thirty two books in print and novellas in nine anthologies, she has been a finalist in the prestigious Rita Awards three times, as well as receiving several nominations from Romantic Times, including one for Career Achievement in Series Romantic Suspense.
Each book in her World of the Lupi series gains a larger audience. It was originally sold in the Romance section of bookstores, but more and more you will be able to find copies cross-shelved under Sci-Fi and Fantasy as the popularity of the series grows!
Eileen has lived in the West Texas town of Midland, TX for over 30 years--three years as a young teen, and the remaining years since she moved back here as an adult. When she first started writing over 10 years ago, it hit her like the first drink for an alcoholic . . . or the first kiss for Romeo and Juliet.
She came to writing romance in a roundabout way. Having read and loved science fiction for years, that’s where she first tried her hand when the writing bug bit. Somehow her stories always ended up having a strong romantic subplot, but she hadn’t read a romance since the early 80’s and didn’t think “those little books” were her kind of stories. But when a friend in her critique group began working on a romance novel, Wilks decided she needed to give the genre another try. She asked her friend to recommend some titles--and quicker than you can say “Jayne Ann Krentz,” she fell in love. The genre had been busy growing up while she wasn’t watching. These days, with romances comprising over 50% of the mass market books published in the U.S., there are romances to appeal to almost every taste--historicals, paranormals and contemporaries that range from romantic suspense to romantic comedy, from inspirational to sizzling.
Eileen covered a lot of territory before coming home to Midland, having lived in Canada and Venezuela as well as twelve U.S. cities in five states.
Profile taken from the author's site with her permission.
Each book in her World of the Lupi series gains a larger audience. It was originally sold in the Romance section of bookstores, but more and more you will be able to find copies cross-shelved under Sci-Fi and Fantasy as the popularity of the series grows!
Eileen has lived in the West Texas town of Midland, TX for over 30 years--three years as a young teen, and the remaining years since she moved back here as an adult. When she first started writing over 10 years ago, it hit her like the first drink for an alcoholic . . . or the first kiss for Romeo and Juliet.
She came to writing romance in a roundabout way. Having read and loved science fiction for years, that’s where she first tried her hand when the writing bug bit. Somehow her stories always ended up having a strong romantic subplot, but she hadn’t read a romance since the early 80’s and didn’t think “those little books” were her kind of stories. But when a friend in her critique group began working on a romance novel, Wilks decided she needed to give the genre another try. She asked her friend to recommend some titles--and quicker than you can say “Jayne Ann Krentz,” she fell in love. The genre had been busy growing up while she wasn’t watching. These days, with romances comprising over 50% of the mass market books published in the U.S., there are romances to appeal to almost every taste--historicals, paranormals and contemporaries that range from romantic suspense to romantic comedy, from inspirational to sizzling.
Eileen covered a lot of territory before coming home to Midland, having lived in Canada and Venezuela as well as twelve U.S. cities in five states.
Profile taken from the author's site with her permission.
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April 26, 2019
Every now and then I read a review that mentions something along the lines of, "I'm not going to summarize this book because you can read the description."
You kids are so cute with your functioning memories. Despite having placed book #7 of the series on my TBR list, I did not remember the general plots of books #3-#6, so I decided that I must have skipped them. Until I reached the last third of Mortal Sins and recognized a particularly tense emotional scene. I thought I remembered how it turned out, but I peeked to be sure. So I will continue to remind myself of the plots, who narrates and all those silly things, because apparently, if I don't, I won't.
However, don't consider that a mark against Mortal Sins or this series. In fact, I'd go so far as to say that people who would like a police procedural combined with a world rich in lupi and magic could do far worse than to pick up Eileen Wilk's World of the Lupi series. In most of them, particularly the first, Detective Lily Yu and Rule Turner, poster boy for the lupi-rights movement, are the leading protagonists. As the series progresses, each book may bring in other viewpoints depending on the case being worked. Mortal Sins concentrates almost exclusively on the stories of Lily and Rule as they attempt to wrap up issues in D.C./Virginia area.
Mortal Sins has two major plots: the personal one of a custody hearing for Rule's son, Toby; and the professional one of a series of seemingly unconnected killers who are almost fatally confused and whose victims smell of death magic. I thought the balance between the two was handled quite well, resulting in Lily and Rule feeling like a typical busy professional couple who were trying to balance needs of personal, family and professional lives. When Rule discovers the missing victims and both he and Lily note the death magic, she eagerly takes over the case on behalf of the FBI. Meanwhile, as Rule deals with Leidolf pack issues from the last book, the press gets wind he is in town on personal matters.
It's fun to watch Lily work, as her competence, focus, and drive often set those unused to her off balance. There's often some power dynamics when has to work with other agencies, and Wilks doesn't shy from bringing up sex, race, or species issues. Honestly, it's always a pleasure. Lily's such a thinking person, and her technique is to ask frequent questions, which often results in interesting answers for both her and the reader. Rule, however, often seems to be the feeling part of the couple, an absolutely enjoyable turnaround from normal female and male characterizations. The investigation struggles at first, as the team tries to sort out likely from unlikely scenarios. The fact that a great deal of magic was let into the world seven months ago means everyone is still discovering ramifications.
Wilks does a nice job of keeping the focus on the investigation and the family issues without getting distracted too much by prior plots or side characters. That said, it is likely a series that is harder to pick up without reading book one and two where Wilks does a more thorough introduction to her world. There's a bit of awkward info-dumping in the beginning of this one, but it's a nice shorthand for those forgetful folks (cough, cough). I thought characterization was extremely impressive, from Lily and Rule progressing, to Toby's nine-year-old perspective, to Granny.
I'd recommend this series to fans of urban fantasy. I think if you wanted to like Anne Bishop's Others series, but found it boring and illogical, this might be more palatable. Or if you liked early Anita Blake (minus the multiple sex scenes; while present here, they are quickly completed). I also suspect fans of the earlier Kate Daniels might enjoy this; while there isn't the prevalent humor and new mythology, there's a kick-ass, competent woman in charge. Thinking about it, I'd say it most feels like Shaefer's Daniel Faust series, with less smart-ass. Really, it's become my new favorite candy series, although it feels more satisfying than your average Skittles. Maybe it's a brownie read: solid and satisfying.
Note: series continues to maintain it's lead for "Worst Cover Art for a Series," 2018 reads edition.
You kids are so cute with your functioning memories. Despite having placed book #7 of the series on my TBR list, I did not remember the general plots of books #3-#6, so I decided that I must have skipped them. Until I reached the last third of Mortal Sins and recognized a particularly tense emotional scene. I thought I remembered how it turned out, but I peeked to be sure. So I will continue to remind myself of the plots, who narrates and all those silly things, because apparently, if I don't, I won't.
However, don't consider that a mark against Mortal Sins or this series. In fact, I'd go so far as to say that people who would like a police procedural combined with a world rich in lupi and magic could do far worse than to pick up Eileen Wilk's World of the Lupi series. In most of them, particularly the first, Detective Lily Yu and Rule Turner, poster boy for the lupi-rights movement, are the leading protagonists. As the series progresses, each book may bring in other viewpoints depending on the case being worked. Mortal Sins concentrates almost exclusively on the stories of Lily and Rule as they attempt to wrap up issues in D.C./Virginia area.
Mortal Sins has two major plots: the personal one of a custody hearing for Rule's son, Toby; and the professional one of a series of seemingly unconnected killers who are almost fatally confused and whose victims smell of death magic. I thought the balance between the two was handled quite well, resulting in Lily and Rule feeling like a typical busy professional couple who were trying to balance needs of personal, family and professional lives. When Rule discovers the missing victims and both he and Lily note the death magic, she eagerly takes over the case on behalf of the FBI. Meanwhile, as Rule deals with Leidolf pack issues from the last book, the press gets wind he is in town on personal matters.
It's fun to watch Lily work, as her competence, focus, and drive often set those unused to her off balance. There's often some power dynamics when has to work with other agencies, and Wilks doesn't shy from bringing up sex, race, or species issues. Honestly, it's always a pleasure. Lily's such a thinking person, and her technique is to ask frequent questions, which often results in interesting answers for both her and the reader. Rule, however, often seems to be the feeling part of the couple, an absolutely enjoyable turnaround from normal female and male characterizations. The investigation struggles at first, as the team tries to sort out likely from unlikely scenarios. The fact that a great deal of magic was let into the world seven months ago means everyone is still discovering ramifications.
Wilks does a nice job of keeping the focus on the investigation and the family issues without getting distracted too much by prior plots or side characters. That said, it is likely a series that is harder to pick up without reading book one and two where Wilks does a more thorough introduction to her world. There's a bit of awkward info-dumping in the beginning of this one, but it's a nice shorthand for those forgetful folks (cough, cough). I thought characterization was extremely impressive, from Lily and Rule progressing, to Toby's nine-year-old perspective, to Granny.
I'd recommend this series to fans of urban fantasy. I think if you wanted to like Anne Bishop's Others series, but found it boring and illogical, this might be more palatable. Or if you liked early Anita Blake (minus the multiple sex scenes; while present here, they are quickly completed). I also suspect fans of the earlier Kate Daniels might enjoy this; while there isn't the prevalent humor and new mythology, there's a kick-ass, competent woman in charge. Thinking about it, I'd say it most feels like Shaefer's Daniel Faust series, with less smart-ass. Really, it's become my new favorite candy series, although it feels more satisfying than your average Skittles. Maybe it's a brownie read: solid and satisfying.
Note: series continues to maintain it's lead for "Worst Cover Art for a Series," 2018 reads edition.
September 11, 2017
*** 4.25 ***
The more I read this series, the more I like it. What I like about it - it tells its story through actions and series of events, it does not "tell us" what to think and feel, it just lets us experience it. I have noticed that I have become quite impatient toward stories which get bogged down into telling us all the emotions the characters are feeling, just to justify their actions or angst. Thus the Lupi series has my favor at this time - it just is. Action, reaction, life and death, it is there for us to experience it first hand, not through being spoon-fed emotions and wondering why the heck the characters are acting so ridiculous... Is it perfect? Of course not. Far from it. Lily and Rule can be preachy at times, always feeling a bit to righteous, a bit to proper, and much to amazingly awesome, and nobody likes the "special snowflakes" all the time... But they also have vulnerabilities and sweetness, which balance out the violence and spookiness that is always present. They boast a great supporting cast as well, staring with the Wizard-Wolf-Stripper and his Finder wife, and in this volume, the friends of Rule's son Toby and his granny - I truly enjoyed them all.
If you are feeling like reading a fun and action-packed were-wolf series, this is not a bad choice at all!!! In fact, it is one of the top 10 for sure. Lily's practicality, competency and strength, as well as her vulnerability and insecurities are a wonderful bland of qualities you would like in your best friend or family members. She is a bit cagey, but can you blame her - she is Magic-sensitive and despite not being able to use magic, she can feel it all around her and can recognize it in the people she gets into contact with. It so happens that her boyfriend, being the heir of his Pack and all, as well as her job, are constantly putting her in situations where magic is the main reason for danger and life-threatening encounters. In Mortal Sins Lily and Rule are visiting one of the Southern States where his son is being raised by his maternal grandmother. They are trying to get full custody of him, while some creature, somehow associated with death magic, is possessing regular folks in the area and is making them kill randomly. It actually got quite spooky at times and I was glued to the pages! Finished it in no time and was kind of happy with the ending, despite it being a bit to syrupy sweet....
Overall, I will recommend this series to anyone who can handle some romance with their werewolfs and magic:):):) And there was one very, very adorable kid and his friend in there, soooo...:):):)
Now I wish you Happy Reading and many more wonderful Books to come!!!
The more I read this series, the more I like it. What I like about it - it tells its story through actions and series of events, it does not "tell us" what to think and feel, it just lets us experience it. I have noticed that I have become quite impatient toward stories which get bogged down into telling us all the emotions the characters are feeling, just to justify their actions or angst. Thus the Lupi series has my favor at this time - it just is. Action, reaction, life and death, it is there for us to experience it first hand, not through being spoon-fed emotions and wondering why the heck the characters are acting so ridiculous... Is it perfect? Of course not. Far from it. Lily and Rule can be preachy at times, always feeling a bit to righteous, a bit to proper, and much to amazingly awesome, and nobody likes the "special snowflakes" all the time... But they also have vulnerabilities and sweetness, which balance out the violence and spookiness that is always present. They boast a great supporting cast as well, staring with the Wizard-Wolf-Stripper and his Finder wife, and in this volume, the friends of Rule's son Toby and his granny - I truly enjoyed them all.
If you are feeling like reading a fun and action-packed were-wolf series, this is not a bad choice at all!!! In fact, it is one of the top 10 for sure. Lily's practicality, competency and strength, as well as her vulnerability and insecurities are a wonderful bland of qualities you would like in your best friend or family members. She is a bit cagey, but can you blame her - she is Magic-sensitive and despite not being able to use magic, she can feel it all around her and can recognize it in the people she gets into contact with. It so happens that her boyfriend, being the heir of his Pack and all, as well as her job, are constantly putting her in situations where magic is the main reason for danger and life-threatening encounters. In Mortal Sins Lily and Rule are visiting one of the Southern States where his son is being raised by his maternal grandmother. They are trying to get full custody of him, while some creature, somehow associated with death magic, is possessing regular folks in the area and is making them kill randomly. It actually got quite spooky at times and I was glued to the pages! Finished it in no time and was kind of happy with the ending, despite it being a bit to syrupy sweet....
Overall, I will recommend this series to anyone who can handle some romance with their werewolfs and magic:):):) And there was one very, very adorable kid and his friend in there, soooo...:):):)
Now I wish you Happy Reading and many more wonderful Books to come!!!
December 5, 2016
She did what she did out of choice, and his Chosen chose him over and over.
Lily and Rule were thrown together in the werewolf equivalent of an arranged marriage, but since then they have grown to love each other. Still, it may have felt like a rip-off that we never got to see them in a romance, and organically fall in love. But, little by little, we have been seeing them grow into a great couple. The big question would always be in our minds, though: would they have picked each other without the mating-bond? Would their relationship survive the loss of the mating-bond?
Questions are answered in this book.
The relationships in this book are so well developed. It feels real and right. I love the world, but I love the characters even more. It has all been slowly coming together as the series goes on.
especially when there is blood and death in that plan...
Aside from the personal side, there is a mystery of a wraith that is killing people. They have to figure out how to kill something that is already dead and has a thirst for blood.
Quick! To the pointy sticks!
This book had a lot going on, which I liked. I never felt bored, and it never got so "explainy" that I learned anything. I'm not here to learn. Stop trying to educate me, books!! Just entertain me.
Strangely, I am...
Lily and Rule were thrown together in the werewolf equivalent of an arranged marriage, but since then they have grown to love each other. Still, it may have felt like a rip-off that we never got to see them in a romance, and organically fall in love. But, little by little, we have been seeing them grow into a great couple. The big question would always be in our minds, though: would they have picked each other without the mating-bond? Would their relationship survive the loss of the mating-bond?
Questions are answered in this book.
The relationships in this book are so well developed. It feels real and right. I love the world, but I love the characters even more. It has all been slowly coming together as the series goes on.
especially when there is blood and death in that plan...
Aside from the personal side, there is a mystery of a wraith that is killing people. They have to figure out how to kill something that is already dead and has a thirst for blood.
Quick! To the pointy sticks!
This book had a lot going on, which I liked. I never felt bored, and it never got so "explainy" that I learned anything. I'm not here to learn. Stop trying to educate me, books!! Just entertain me.
Strangely, I am...
May 27, 2022
I wish this author would stop over-explaining everything, especially how spells work and how all the magical creatures are brought about. The endless backstory, while great for someone just picking up this series right in the middle, is a little overmuch for long-time fans.
Otherwise, this book was a great addition to the series, with a LOT going on. Anything I say may end up spoiling some part of this book for you...but it really was a wonderful edition. I loved that this book revolved around Rule and Lily yet had a good sprinkling of Cullen mixed in. New characters are added (probably just for this book, although I can think of one that I would love to see in future novels) and are treated quite well, seeing that they are only secondary characters.
Wonderful things will happen with Rule's dual Mantles and Lilys' dual (lol!) personalities or selves. Toby will play a large part in this book, as does his Grandmother.
As I said -a great addition to the series with only a couple of complaints.
Otherwise, this book was a great addition to the series, with a LOT going on. Anything I say may end up spoiling some part of this book for you...but it really was a wonderful edition. I loved that this book revolved around Rule and Lily yet had a good sprinkling of Cullen mixed in. New characters are added (probably just for this book, although I can think of one that I would love to see in future novels) and are treated quite well, seeing that they are only secondary characters.
Wonderful things will happen with Rule's dual Mantles and Lilys' dual (lol!) personalities or selves. Toby will play a large part in this book, as does his Grandmother.
As I said -a great addition to the series with only a couple of complaints.
December 4, 2016
I'm not in a mood to do a review rn, so I'll be short and a little bit spoilery...
Nice look at ghost stories. Plot was different as always.
I loved what happened with the bond. It let us see whether the relationship between Rule and Lily was real or forced upon them.
Finally Toby turned into a reality in their lives instead of being just a plot point. I don't like when kids are hidden in the closet to take them out only when story needs a shake down. I loved his PoVs. He is really cute and I felt for him as his feelings are revealed.
Oh and Cullen. Sigh. That's it.
Nice look at ghost stories. Plot was different as always.
I loved what happened with the bond. It let us see whether the relationship between Rule and Lily was real or forced upon them.
Finally Toby turned into a reality in their lives instead of being just a plot point. I don't like when kids are hidden in the closet to take them out only when story needs a shake down. I loved his PoVs. He is really cute and I felt for him as his feelings are revealed.
Oh and Cullen. Sigh. That's it.
January 9, 2011
I was very glad to get back to Lily and Rule as the main characters. I think that switching to a different set of lead characters for a book or two was a great idea to keep the series fresh, and I was really excited to read about Cynna and Cullen originally, but I ended up not really enjoying their storyline that much. So, getting back to Lily and Rule was something of a relief.
This isn't a series that I feel you can pick up in the middle. Each book builds on each other and I think you'll lose the attachment and care you'd have after reading the other books if you jumped into the series here. I think this series is good enough to make reading all of the books worth it, but that's just me. :)
I really liked getting to see more of Toby in this book. His very existence is so important to Rule that I've been craving more information about their relationship. I certainly got that here, and I was very pleased by how that whole situation resolved.
Occasionally things got a bit slow while reading, but it always ended up picking back up. The storyline with Toby and the storyline with the magically influenced murders really kept my attention. I think Wilks does an excellent job making Lily's job seem lifelike and interesting without boring the reader with too much tedious detail.
Rule and Lily continue to be the main draw of this series. Even after so many books in the series I still find their relationship interesting to read about. The author continues to have them work through the issues that arise and shows them both working to navigate the unfamiliar waters of the mate bond.
I think one of my favorite things about this series is that in the midst of all these paranormal creatures, Lily and Rule seem like a normal couple doing the best that they can to work out their issues to make sure their relationship continues to be happy. And I don't mean normal as in Romance couple normal, I mean real life normal.
Lily and Rule talk things out and don't have huge misunderstandings that create high drama for the reader. They disagree and they occasionally snipe, but if they're mad they usually back away and then come back together later to try to work things out. They don't scream and throw things and play the hate game. They seem real and I love them for it. Don't get me wrong, I like drama, but I crave relationships like this in more of my books.
I loved the way that this story developed, but I feared for a while there that I would have to reach through the book and strangle a certain mother. I CANNOT believe she did that. I know that she loves him (even if it's not healthy) but I still haven't forgiven her, even if other characters have. I wouldn't be displeased at all to hear that something unfortunate had occurred and she would never again be able to mess up their lives.
The end of this book had my eyebrows shooting up in surprise. I had been wondering if that would ever crop up, and I'm excited to see where the author goes with it.
This isn't a series that I feel you can pick up in the middle. Each book builds on each other and I think you'll lose the attachment and care you'd have after reading the other books if you jumped into the series here. I think this series is good enough to make reading all of the books worth it, but that's just me. :)
I really liked getting to see more of Toby in this book. His very existence is so important to Rule that I've been craving more information about their relationship. I certainly got that here, and I was very pleased by how that whole situation resolved.
Occasionally things got a bit slow while reading, but it always ended up picking back up. The storyline with Toby and the storyline with the magically influenced murders really kept my attention. I think Wilks does an excellent job making Lily's job seem lifelike and interesting without boring the reader with too much tedious detail.
Rule and Lily continue to be the main draw of this series. Even after so many books in the series I still find their relationship interesting to read about. The author continues to have them work through the issues that arise and shows them both working to navigate the unfamiliar waters of the mate bond.
I think one of my favorite things about this series is that in the midst of all these paranormal creatures, Lily and Rule seem like a normal couple doing the best that they can to work out their issues to make sure their relationship continues to be happy. And I don't mean normal as in Romance couple normal, I mean real life normal.
Lily and Rule talk things out and don't have huge misunderstandings that create high drama for the reader. They disagree and they occasionally snipe, but if they're mad they usually back away and then come back together later to try to work things out. They don't scream and throw things and play the hate game. They seem real and I love them for it. Don't get me wrong, I like drama, but I crave relationships like this in more of my books.
I loved the way that this story developed, but I feared for a while there that I would have to reach through the book and strangle a certain mother. I CANNOT believe she did that. I know that she loves him (even if it's not healthy) but I still haven't forgiven her, even if other characters have. I wouldn't be displeased at all to hear that something unfortunate had occurred and she would never again be able to mess up their lives.
The end of this book had my eyebrows shooting up in surprise. I had been wondering if that would ever crop up, and I'm excited to see where the author goes with it.
January 31, 2009
I just adore Eileen Wilks' Lupi series. "Mortal Sins" is book five and heroine Lily Yu is the best. She's a take-charge, don't take crap, stand up for what's right regardless of the cost kinda gal...and she has one of the sexiest four-to-two-legged wolf guys you'll ever read about. This is one series that just keeps getting bigger and better.
Lily and Rule are in North Carolina on a personal vacation. Rule is about to finally get custody of his son--a son who will likely one day become the Rho of the Nokolai clan. While on a four-legged run, Rule scents something bad. Death magic. After a quick confirmation by Lily, she's put in charge of the case in her capacity as an agent of the FBI Magical Crimes Division. But this small town may not be big enough for death magic, a custody battle, wraiths, werewolves, bigots, and murder.
I'm not going to try to explain this series if you haven't been reading it. I will tell you that it's a mix of sizzling sex, magic, dragons, Chinese lore, Wiccans, werewolves, Voodoo, and a bunch of other wild things that Wilks' somehow manages to combine into a seamless series of mysteries with romance, action, suspense, and even a bit of humor at times. Where else will you find a series that has one hero who is a werewolf magician former-stripper? Yeah...this is the only one I can think of too.
Lily and Rule are in North Carolina on a personal vacation. Rule is about to finally get custody of his son--a son who will likely one day become the Rho of the Nokolai clan. While on a four-legged run, Rule scents something bad. Death magic. After a quick confirmation by Lily, she's put in charge of the case in her capacity as an agent of the FBI Magical Crimes Division. But this small town may not be big enough for death magic, a custody battle, wraiths, werewolves, bigots, and murder.
I'm not going to try to explain this series if you haven't been reading it. I will tell you that it's a mix of sizzling sex, magic, dragons, Chinese lore, Wiccans, werewolves, Voodoo, and a bunch of other wild things that Wilks' somehow manages to combine into a seamless series of mysteries with romance, action, suspense, and even a bit of humor at times. Where else will you find a series that has one hero who is a werewolf magician former-stripper? Yeah...this is the only one I can think of too.
May 9, 2016
I’ll admit, I haven’t been 100% sold on the Rune and Lily relationship. One of the reason I liked Night Season so much is because I enjoyed watching the romance evolve between Cynna and Cullen. Theirs isn’t a mate bond; they’re together because they want to be… because they love each other. In this book, I finally felt the love that ties together Lily and Rune as something more than a physical connection. It’s real. It would exist even without bond. And it made such a difference.
The story picks up with Lily and Rune ready to finally take custody of Rune’s son, Toby. But nothing is simple for these two. Not only is there trouble on that front, but a major case pops up in town and only Lily can take point. Someone is using death magic to kill people, but in no way that anyone has seen before. She must split her focus on figuring out the mystery and supporting her mate as Toby’s mom blows back into town.
This is my favorite book by far featuring this couple. I enjoyed it every bit as much as I did Night Season. The author has shaken off the uneven plotting. The story flows well. It’s engaging. And she ties in all the elements in a very organic way. There is a lot of action, but also a lot of character development, just the right blend, in fact.
Another thing I liked? More exploration into the two clans Rule is now linked to. I was really interested in seeing what those two mantles mean for him and for his family. And I loved the way it plays out here. It feels like this was something Eileen Wilks always had planned, which makes me all the more excited to see what she has in store next.
I’m a little sad we didn’t get to see Lily’s grandmother, but there are plenty of secondary characters who get to shine, especially Toby. I was a bit surprised at how much I liked his Grammy too. I would like to get to know Alex a bit better. And of course, there is Cullen, who I just adore. Marriage isn’t slowing him down one bit. (Which reminds me, make sure you read “Cyncerely Yours” to catch his wedding ceremony, or you will feel the lack.)
I’m finally feeling the excitement about these books that so many of my fellow readers seem to have. And the ending here… such a lovely surprise. You don’t want to miss it.
Rating: B+/A-
The story picks up with Lily and Rune ready to finally take custody of Rune’s son, Toby. But nothing is simple for these two. Not only is there trouble on that front, but a major case pops up in town and only Lily can take point. Someone is using death magic to kill people, but in no way that anyone has seen before. She must split her focus on figuring out the mystery and supporting her mate as Toby’s mom blows back into town.
This is my favorite book by far featuring this couple. I enjoyed it every bit as much as I did Night Season. The author has shaken off the uneven plotting. The story flows well. It’s engaging. And she ties in all the elements in a very organic way. There is a lot of action, but also a lot of character development, just the right blend, in fact.
Another thing I liked? More exploration into the two clans Rule is now linked to. I was really interested in seeing what those two mantles mean for him and for his family. And I loved the way it plays out here. It feels like this was something Eileen Wilks always had planned, which makes me all the more excited to see what she has in store next.
I’m a little sad we didn’t get to see Lily’s grandmother, but there are plenty of secondary characters who get to shine, especially Toby. I was a bit surprised at how much I liked his Grammy too. I would like to get to know Alex a bit better. And of course, there is Cullen, who I just adore. Marriage isn’t slowing him down one bit. (Which reminds me, make sure you read “Cyncerely Yours” to catch his wedding ceremony, or you will feel the lack.)
I’m finally feeling the excitement about these books that so many of my fellow readers seem to have. And the ending here… such a lovely surprise. You don’t want to miss it.
Rating: B+/A-
December 21, 2016
This keep getting better and better! :)
I love how every book introduces new elements to the world! It's the most excellent thing in this series!
Obviously the characters are wonderful too!
What I enjoy most is their being constant to themselves! They don't act stupid, they don't rush head-fist into danger! They have a healthy reasoning and, incredibly, for this world is a place where magic, strange things occur, everything makes sense!!!!
On to the next... :)
I love how every book introduces new elements to the world! It's the most excellent thing in this series!
Obviously the characters are wonderful too!
What I enjoy most is their being constant to themselves! They don't act stupid, they don't rush head-fist into danger! They have a healthy reasoning and, incredibly, for this world is a place where magic, strange things occur, everything makes sense!!!!
On to the next... :)
March 7, 2016
4/5; 4 stars; A-
There is a lot going on in this book, both on a personal front for Lily and Rule, and in the clans. I think that Wilks did a great job of balancing out the storyline of Toby's custody with the progression,of Rule's role in Leidolf and the "Lady's" overall agenda.
There is a lot going on in this book, both on a personal front for Lily and Rule, and in the clans. I think that Wilks did a great job of balancing out the storyline of Toby's custody with the progression,of Rule's role in Leidolf and the "Lady's" overall agenda.
September 19, 2018
Ahh, so nice to get back to Lily and Rule! Their story took a few surprising directions this time, and the twist with the wraith was great. I love this author’s imagination. Dialogue got a little explainy at times, but the story built momentum like it always does, and I stayed up way past my bedtime to finish.
June 5, 2010
4.5 stars: Great paranormal romance mixed with a good amount of mystery and adventure
FBI agent Lily Yu is on vacation with her werewolf mate Rule Turner. They are in NC awaiting a court case to gain custody of his son. While running as a wolf, Rule comes across several bodies. Since its determined that they were killed due to magical means, Lily's boss asks her to take the case. With her gift as a Sensitive she is one of the few who is immune to Death Magic. There are lots of twists and turns to the plot--not only in the case Lily investigates but also in what unfolds with their family dramas and personal lives. There's several edge of your seat moments. And the ending of this book was soooo romantic and such a surprise. A cannot put down book!
I've read all of the World of Lupi books. Tempting Danger, Mortal Sins (this book) and Blood Magic are my favorites in the entire series. If you like under urban fantasy or paranormal romance, give this series a try. The books have rich, complex plotlines that involve a good mix of mystery, suspense, action and romance. Wilks writes appealing, believable characters that I continue to think about after putting down the books. I really like the main characters Lily and Rule and key supporting cast like Cullen and Lily's grandmother. In this book I also really connected with Rule's young son and his fiesty grandmother. The character development and dialogue is well done.
The author also does a good job bringing in interesting cases for Lily to work--the magical slants are especially creative. Before my current Urban Fantasy/Paranormal Romance kick, I used to read a lot of Mystery/Suspense. I think fans of cop books who are open to magic in their stories, would also enjoy this series. Only negative I've come across in some of the books is the pacing. Some of them (not this one) got a bit slow in parts but then they always picked back up, so it's not a major thing. I tend to like a lot of action and suspense, so that may just be personal preference.
World of Lupi reading order:
1: Tempting Danger
2: Mortal Danger
3: Blood Lines
4: Night Season
5: Mortal Sins
6: Blood Magic
7: Blood Challenge
If you are looking for more great books simliar in style, check out some of my favorites:
Mercy Thompson series and Alpha & Omega series by Patricia Briggs (Don't miss the anthology in On the Prowl,which is a prequel to Cry Wolf)
Kate Daniels series by Ilona Andrews
Night Huntress series by Jeaniene Frost
Guild Hunters series by Nalini Singh
Chicagoland Vampires series by Chloe Neill
FBI agent Lily Yu is on vacation with her werewolf mate Rule Turner. They are in NC awaiting a court case to gain custody of his son. While running as a wolf, Rule comes across several bodies. Since its determined that they were killed due to magical means, Lily's boss asks her to take the case. With her gift as a Sensitive she is one of the few who is immune to Death Magic. There are lots of twists and turns to the plot--not only in the case Lily investigates but also in what unfolds with their family dramas and personal lives. There's several edge of your seat moments. And the ending of this book was soooo romantic and such a surprise. A cannot put down book!
I've read all of the World of Lupi books. Tempting Danger, Mortal Sins (this book) and Blood Magic are my favorites in the entire series. If you like under urban fantasy or paranormal romance, give this series a try. The books have rich, complex plotlines that involve a good mix of mystery, suspense, action and romance. Wilks writes appealing, believable characters that I continue to think about after putting down the books. I really like the main characters Lily and Rule and key supporting cast like Cullen and Lily's grandmother. In this book I also really connected with Rule's young son and his fiesty grandmother. The character development and dialogue is well done.
The author also does a good job bringing in interesting cases for Lily to work--the magical slants are especially creative. Before my current Urban Fantasy/Paranormal Romance kick, I used to read a lot of Mystery/Suspense. I think fans of cop books who are open to magic in their stories, would also enjoy this series. Only negative I've come across in some of the books is the pacing. Some of them (not this one) got a bit slow in parts but then they always picked back up, so it's not a major thing. I tend to like a lot of action and suspense, so that may just be personal preference.
World of Lupi reading order:
1: Tempting Danger
2: Mortal Danger
3: Blood Lines
4: Night Season
5: Mortal Sins
6: Blood Magic
7: Blood Challenge
If you are looking for more great books simliar in style, check out some of my favorites:
Mercy Thompson series and Alpha & Omega series by Patricia Briggs (Don't miss the anthology in On the Prowl,which is a prequel to Cry Wolf)
Kate Daniels series by Ilona Andrews
Night Huntress series by Jeaniene Frost
Guild Hunters series by Nalini Singh
Chicagoland Vampires series by Chloe Neill
January 31, 2012
Mortal Sins was excellent and this series just keeps getting better and better. I was happy that Lily and Rule were the main focus in this book. They are in North Carolina to get full custody of his son, when Rule finds some bodies in the woods. These bodies have a trace of death magic and Lily starts the investigation of what killed them and why. This story was suspenseful and kept me on the edge of my seat. I enjoyed every aspect of this book and I cannot wait to read the next one.
January 25, 2016
Finally back to this series. I love World of the Lupi and got distracted from it, but it is my goal to get caught up on the series this year.
So yes, this is an engaging urban fantasy series that focuses on the author's intricate and fabulous werewolf world, but isn't limited to weres. All other forms of supernatural drop in for the series which is an exciting blend of paranormal, suspense, action, and romance.
It is an ongoing story that really needs to be read in order to get the full, wondrous effect and backstory for the main characters and their world. This is book five of the series and I think I can avoid major spoilerage though minor spoilers will seep through. Can't be helped.
The story opens with Lily and Rule arriving in North Carolina on business of a personal kind- Rule is there to attend the court hearing that will finally relinquish his son into his care. As Lupi, Toby will soon need to be with his clan as he goes into his First Change and Rule is eager to have Toby with him after all the years of Toby living with his maternal grandmother.
But then Rule discovers the bodies while out running in his wolf form. They are coated with death magic. Instead of Lily being there to support Rule and Toby, she is now presented with a new case for the FBI's magic division. Hostile local law enforcement, a mysterious killer, tension with the local werewolf clan, Rule's ex suddenly taking an interest in Toby and the court hearing, and difficult no win choices make this trip one that will make or break Lily and Rule.
As I said, it has been some time since I read the last installment of the series, but it was easy to slip back into the incredible magical world that Eileen Wilks has created. I was so excited to see the large portions of Rule and Toby's narration along with Lily's in this book. Rule and Lily's mate bond is so unique, but the telling up to this point has been balanced more toward Lily. The equal time with Rule was a gift.
This book had the usual paranormal suspense case for Lily to solve with the help of Rule and the gang, but I also like that it gave equal time to some threads that have intrigued me from the beginning. Finally, I got to encounter Toby's mother up close and personal and in scenes with Rule and Lily. Sparks flew of course and she made it interesting for the situation of Toby's legal custody. Then there was the time spent for Lily and Rule to truly consider what they have together apart from the mate bond that forced them. What are they as a couple if that bond wasn't there? They get to find out and I loved getting that part of their story.
Then there was Rule and Lily- particularly Rule- having to transition from being a parent at a distance to being an everyday parent for Toby. And naturally, there is more to it than that since he is a Lupi with special issues.
Toby gets a lot of page time and I liked that since the whole custody thing and some other startling reveals revolve around him. I thought the author got his feelings and actions just right for a kid who is confused by all that he feels and is confronted by big changes ahead.
And of course, for those who adore the sexy wolf Cullen, he and Cyanna are around to keep it fun and real.
The case is a twisty one and has some shocking and disturbing aspects. I love how the author can create that atmosphere of danger and mystery and present a case that isn't easily figured out.
All in all, this was a abso-fab reunion with the World of the Lupi for me and I can't wait to continue. I highly recommend this series for those who enjoy their Urban Fantasy blended with a mystery and an intriguing werewolf culture.
So yes, this is an engaging urban fantasy series that focuses on the author's intricate and fabulous werewolf world, but isn't limited to weres. All other forms of supernatural drop in for the series which is an exciting blend of paranormal, suspense, action, and romance.
It is an ongoing story that really needs to be read in order to get the full, wondrous effect and backstory for the main characters and their world. This is book five of the series and I think I can avoid major spoilerage though minor spoilers will seep through. Can't be helped.
The story opens with Lily and Rule arriving in North Carolina on business of a personal kind- Rule is there to attend the court hearing that will finally relinquish his son into his care. As Lupi, Toby will soon need to be with his clan as he goes into his First Change and Rule is eager to have Toby with him after all the years of Toby living with his maternal grandmother.
But then Rule discovers the bodies while out running in his wolf form. They are coated with death magic. Instead of Lily being there to support Rule and Toby, she is now presented with a new case for the FBI's magic division. Hostile local law enforcement, a mysterious killer, tension with the local werewolf clan, Rule's ex suddenly taking an interest in Toby and the court hearing, and difficult no win choices make this trip one that will make or break Lily and Rule.
As I said, it has been some time since I read the last installment of the series, but it was easy to slip back into the incredible magical world that Eileen Wilks has created. I was so excited to see the large portions of Rule and Toby's narration along with Lily's in this book. Rule and Lily's mate bond is so unique, but the telling up to this point has been balanced more toward Lily. The equal time with Rule was a gift.
This book had the usual paranormal suspense case for Lily to solve with the help of Rule and the gang, but I also like that it gave equal time to some threads that have intrigued me from the beginning. Finally, I got to encounter Toby's mother up close and personal and in scenes with Rule and Lily. Sparks flew of course and she made it interesting for the situation of Toby's legal custody. Then there was the time spent for Lily and Rule to truly consider what they have together apart from the mate bond that forced them. What are they as a couple if that bond wasn't there? They get to find out and I loved getting that part of their story.
Then there was Rule and Lily- particularly Rule- having to transition from being a parent at a distance to being an everyday parent for Toby. And naturally, there is more to it than that since he is a Lupi with special issues.
Toby gets a lot of page time and I liked that since the whole custody thing and some other startling reveals revolve around him. I thought the author got his feelings and actions just right for a kid who is confused by all that he feels and is confronted by big changes ahead.
And of course, for those who adore the sexy wolf Cullen, he and Cyanna are around to keep it fun and real.
The case is a twisty one and has some shocking and disturbing aspects. I love how the author can create that atmosphere of danger and mystery and present a case that isn't easily figured out.
All in all, this was a abso-fab reunion with the World of the Lupi for me and I can't wait to continue. I highly recommend this series for those who enjoy their Urban Fantasy blended with a mystery and an intriguing werewolf culture.
July 4, 2019
Mortal Sins is book 5 in the World of Lupi series by Eileen Wilks. I read this along with my book club.
In Mortal Sins, Lily and Rule must investigate a case involving Death Magic. I include Rule when I say this, as even though he has other personal things going on, he is still a vital piece to the mystery. Lily and Rule are actually in North Carolina so that Rule can take full custody of Toby. They did not intend to end up in the middle of an investigation that brings danger to everyone in the family. But that seems to be the way Lily's life rolls.
I liked that Toby and his friends were able to contribute some to the investigation. It was a great side to Cullen to see him helping one of Toby's friends deal with her magic. What she was seeing was really creepy and I can't imagine being a child that sees what she did.
When Toby's mom shows up, I was ready for a good fight. I didn't think she was a great mom to start with, but she just proves herself even lower than I thought. I loved the way Lily handles her. She really steps up for Toby and Rule. I think Rule was kind of taken back by the way Lily handled things. She was pretty awesome. I still can't believe that woman's intentions for poor Toby! It will be so good for that boy to be at Clanhome.
I thought Mortal Sins was mysterious, creepy and a lot of fun! I like the way Lily and Rule's relationship is building. I'm also a big fan of Cullen and Cynna. We don't get to see Cynna in this installment, but we hear from her. I also think I missed a novella that had Cullen and Cynna's wedding in it. I'll have to go back and grab that. It would have been really interesting to be at that wedding where it is so against the nature of the lupi.This review was originally posted on Rantings of a Reading Addict
In Mortal Sins, Lily and Rule must investigate a case involving Death Magic. I include Rule when I say this, as even though he has other personal things going on, he is still a vital piece to the mystery. Lily and Rule are actually in North Carolina so that Rule can take full custody of Toby. They did not intend to end up in the middle of an investigation that brings danger to everyone in the family. But that seems to be the way Lily's life rolls.
I liked that Toby and his friends were able to contribute some to the investigation. It was a great side to Cullen to see him helping one of Toby's friends deal with her magic. What she was seeing was really creepy and I can't imagine being a child that sees what she did.
When Toby's mom shows up, I was ready for a good fight. I didn't think she was a great mom to start with, but she just proves herself even lower than I thought. I loved the way Lily handles her. She really steps up for Toby and Rule. I think Rule was kind of taken back by the way Lily handled things. She was pretty awesome. I still can't believe that woman's intentions for poor Toby! It will be so good for that boy to be at Clanhome.
I thought Mortal Sins was mysterious, creepy and a lot of fun! I like the way Lily and Rule's relationship is building. I'm also a big fan of Cullen and Cynna. We don't get to see Cynna in this installment, but we hear from her. I also think I missed a novella that had Cullen and Cynna's wedding in it. I'll have to go back and grab that. It would have been really interesting to be at that wedding where it is so against the nature of the lupi.This review was originally posted on Rantings of a Reading Addict
March 7, 2018
4.5 stars
So many topics touched in this installment:
So many things happening at once. Never a dull moment when this pair is front and center. This is what I like about this series. This urge to keep reading, the interest and commitment to the characters. And nothing is ever final or clear cut. There are multiple decisions stemming from one crisis and you are always left with something else to ponder on .
Onward with the reading!
So many topics touched in this installment:
So many things happening at once. Never a dull moment when this pair is front and center. This is what I like about this series. This urge to keep reading, the interest and commitment to the characters. And nothing is ever final or clear cut. There are multiple decisions stemming from one crisis and you are always left with something else to ponder on .
Onward with the reading!
December 28, 2011
Grade: A+ and/or strong 5 Stars
Mortal Sins has action, mystery, a strong story, convincing dialogue, a little bit of horror and romance. The storytelling is focused and fast-paced. What’s not to love?
The Story
Lily and Rule are in North Carolina for personal and clan reasons. Rule is seeking custody of his son Toby, who has long been kept from him by his former lover and her mother. Carrying partial Leidolf mantle, he will also perform the gens compleo, a ceremony accepting young wolves as full adults, for a clan who was once an enemy of the Nikolai Clan. The trip is stressful and becomes further complicated when bodies are discovered with death magic lingering. Lily, a Gifted FBI agent, must use her resources and sharp mind to prevent death from spreading in an extraordinary case.
My Thoughts
Lily and Rule were terrific together. They are capable of working as a unit and independently. The author didn’t throw in any unnecessary angst or drama. After the events between Cynna and Cullen, I wasn’t sure if there wouldn’t be any fallout and drama between these two. They work efficiently with little words and effective communication.
The secondary characters were fleshed out without being distracting or silly. Ms. Wilks subtly shades her characters without overpowering their personalities or dropping them into neat niches. There wasn’t an ass substituting as the sheriff, or a buffoon FBI agent who screws things up. They were human and felt real. There also wasn’t the parade of previous characters that authors throw in to appease fans. Cullen arrives in town to help Lily without Cynna tagging along. She was busy, and the author didn’t unnecessarily use her. The appearance of Toby’s mother was effective and affecting. Alicia was a bitch then she wasn’t. She had a moment where she shined, just a bit. It was enough.
In the past, I found Ms. Wilks attention to detail distracting. Sometimes, she would go into such detail my eyes felt like crossing. This book was so smooth. The plot, subplots, characters, and evil presence were woven in such a clean way I never felt the need to skip a single word. (I’m guilty of skimming through settings. Well, and sometimes sex scenes. Shhh. )
Summing It Up
This was a damn good book!
Mortal Sins has action, mystery, a strong story, convincing dialogue, a little bit of horror and romance. The storytelling is focused and fast-paced. What’s not to love?
The Story
Lily and Rule are in North Carolina for personal and clan reasons. Rule is seeking custody of his son Toby, who has long been kept from him by his former lover and her mother. Carrying partial Leidolf mantle, he will also perform the gens compleo, a ceremony accepting young wolves as full adults, for a clan who was once an enemy of the Nikolai Clan. The trip is stressful and becomes further complicated when bodies are discovered with death magic lingering. Lily, a Gifted FBI agent, must use her resources and sharp mind to prevent death from spreading in an extraordinary case.
My Thoughts
Lily and Rule were terrific together. They are capable of working as a unit and independently. The author didn’t throw in any unnecessary angst or drama. After the events between Cynna and Cullen, I wasn’t sure if there wouldn’t be any fallout and drama between these two. They work efficiently with little words and effective communication.
The secondary characters were fleshed out without being distracting or silly. Ms. Wilks subtly shades her characters without overpowering their personalities or dropping them into neat niches. There wasn’t an ass substituting as the sheriff, or a buffoon FBI agent who screws things up. They were human and felt real. There also wasn’t the parade of previous characters that authors throw in to appease fans. Cullen arrives in town to help Lily without Cynna tagging along. She was busy, and the author didn’t unnecessarily use her. The appearance of Toby’s mother was effective and affecting. Alicia was a bitch then she wasn’t. She had a moment where she shined, just a bit. It was enough.
In the past, I found Ms. Wilks attention to detail distracting. Sometimes, she would go into such detail my eyes felt like crossing. This book was so smooth. The plot, subplots, characters, and evil presence were woven in such a clean way I never felt the need to skip a single word. (I’m guilty of skimming through settings. Well, and sometimes sex scenes. Shhh. )
Summing It Up
This was a damn good book!
November 4, 2012
I liked this much better than Night Season.
The story centered around Lily and Rule, it is set in the here and now and not some other fantastic realm, werewolves play a large part of it and the plot that developed in Blood Lines is picked up again. It's a cop story with shapeshifters, ghosts and magic.
I liked the new characters, especially the cops and FBI agents. Alex also developped nicely. And visiting Toby's home and meeting his grandmother and mother was a nice addition to Wilks' world.
Hopefully the next books stay with this plot! Wandering off into Mordor with Cynna and Cullen didn't do much for me.
The story centered around Lily and Rule, it is set in the here and now and not some other fantastic realm, werewolves play a large part of it and the plot that developed in Blood Lines is picked up again. It's a cop story with shapeshifters, ghosts and magic.
I liked the new characters, especially the cops and FBI agents. Alex also developped nicely. And visiting Toby's home and meeting his grandmother and mother was a nice addition to Wilks' world.
Hopefully the next books stay with this plot! Wandering off into Mordor with Cynna and Cullen didn't do much for me.
May 4, 2016
Mortal Sins was my favorite installment of World of the Lupi so far. I enjoyed trying to ID the mysterious murderer Lily was tracking in North Carolina. And, Toby, Rule's son, is absolutely adorable. I really liked that he had a larger part in this installment; I look forward to seeing more of him in the future.
With each installment, my enthusiasm about this series grows. The character growth continues to impress. I highly recommend this series to all fans of UF.
(✮✮✮✮½)
With each installment, my enthusiasm about this series grows. The character growth continues to impress. I highly recommend this series to all fans of UF.
(✮✮✮✮½)
September 5, 2011
I loved getting back to Lily and Rule. I loved seeing them both learn to make room for the other in their lives, learn to incorporate the other as their friend, their confidante, their advisor. Honestly, this is one of the best, most real relationships that I have seen in a novel, and I am really loving it.
I don't have any complaints about this one, honestly... I gobbled it up. It was great getting this in-depth look at Rule's family, and I hope this isn't the last we'll see of Louise.
I don't have any complaints about this one, honestly... I gobbled it up. It was great getting this in-depth look at Rule's family, and I hope this isn't the last we'll see of Louise.
March 15, 2016
Not bad, but the tone felt almost academic and therefore slow. I put it down several times. The author fills the pages with analytical discussions and thoughts about the precise nature of the double mantle, the soul, analysis of blood magic, lupine cancer, the mate bond, religion, and police procedures. Plus, there's the issues of child custody.
I did like the characters, including some new secondary characters. And the setting in North Carolina felt real.
But this could be a book to skip.
Several typos in kindle book.
I did like the characters, including some new secondary characters. And the setting in North Carolina felt real.
But this could be a book to skip.
Several typos in kindle book.
June 7, 2023
Fifth in the World of the Lupi paranormal fantasy series and revolving around the lupi, werewolves who have recently come out. The couple focus is on Agent Lily Yu and Rule Turner, the Nokolai "prince".
My Take
Wilks does a nice job of showing us the wolf's perspective on things — and Rule is really good with his son, in helping him to understand the differences between himself and his wolf as well as helping him to come to his own conclusions. The best way for the lessons to sink in!
Wilks uses third person global subjective point-of-view with Lily, Rule, and Toby as the primary perspectives in this combination of cozy and police/magic investigation.
There's a nice bit of back history on why the Nokolai came to California. Cullen also drops the secret of the Etorri not getting cancer!
Oooh, talk about prejudice! Humans do not like lupi, and it colors how people speak to, of, and treat them. It's a sad metaphor for how Blacks are treated. Although, I did find the sheriff's accusation of bigotry hypocritical!
That bigotry isn't the only conflict in the series, there's also the mate bond that forces Lily and Rule to stay close to each other. It's a distance that changes every once in awhile, and it keeps them both on their toes while adding conflict.
That's the series conflicts. As for Mortal Sins' conflicts, oy. Wilks definitely keeps things interesting with Talia's problems and her parents, Toby's frustrations with his mother, his MOTHER and her stupidity and selfishness, Louise's own conflicts, the murderous It, Rule's issues with the Leidolf, the cop vs FBI vs lupi interactions, and on and on. Mortal Sins is not boring. Nope, not at all *grinning*.
I do adore Cullen, lol. He's got an overabundance of snark and uses it well, breaking rules with wild abandon. His phone conversations with Cynna keep me laughing! Then he turns around and is so compassionate with Talia's issues, and he's very scientific on the magic. Yep, you can bring science into the magic. Ya gotta love him!
Lily. I adore her even more. She may be tiny, but she stands up well, lolololol. Wait'll you read her putdown of Crystal, *more laughter*.
Mortal Sins is all about child custody and Rule's excitement and fears about being a full-time father. Lily also worries.
There's a lot of hairsplitting that goes on. Primarily for Rule as he juggles his responsibilities and loyalties while holding two mantles. Luckily, Alicia doesn't do hairsplitting. She's all about herself. And the more you read about her, the more you'll hate her.
The bad guy is so creepy and Wilks keeps its identity and needs vague, making the story even creepier while Lily and everyone else tries to figure out who (or what) it is. I found myself wanting to scream out to the characters to beware! Reading of The Voice is almost creepier, as it makes you wonder what could be so much stronger than this cold presence. I know I felt cold whenever I read its thoughts!
The prose is an easy read with a story that's both action- and character-packed with plenty of laughs. Not all the laughs are good ones . . .
Good question. Why would ghosts be afraid?
The Story
Rule Turner, Lu Nuncio of the Nokolai werewolf clan, and his lover, Lily Yu, have come to North Carolina to gain full custody of Rule's young son. It's a personal visit. In and out. Until Rule discovers three bodies in a forest grave, covered in death magic.
That magic makes it a federal crime, and FBI Agent Lily Yu is right there. Only, nothing adds up. Especially with the main suspect behind bars when death strikes again.
But murder, however bizarre, is an everyday affair for Lily, who was a homicide cop before being recruited into the FBI's Magical Crimes Division. A more personal shock arrives in the form of Rule's son's mother. Why would she now challenge Rule's plan to bring his son to live among the Nokolai? But family matters must take a backseat when the violence escalates, and there's no rhyme or reason for the next strike — by a killer who may not even be of this world.
The Characters
Lily Yu is an FBI agent who is a touch sensitive and immune to magic; she's also the Chosen of Rule Turner. Dirty Harry is Lily's cat. Other-Lily is the half from whom she was split in Mortal Danger , 2.
Rule Turner is the Lu Nuncio for his clan, the Nokolai, as well as his father's heir.
Toby is Rule's nine-year-old son who lives with his maternal grandmother, Louise Asteglio, a.k.a. Grammy, in Halo, North Carolina. Connie Milligan is Louise's next-door neighbor and her best friend. Old Franklin Hodge is another neighbor, a grouchy one, whose wife, Maisie, had died. Justin and Talia Appleton are best friends with Toby. Aunt Sherri is always telling the Appletons' mom that the reverend is full of beans. The so-selfish Alicia Asteglio is Louise's daughter and Toby's absent mother. James French is Alicia's new husband. Uncle Mark and Aunt Deirdre had come to help Louise.
The gorgeous Cullen Seabourne had been a lone lupus, thrown out of the Etorri clan, and later adopted into Nokolai. He's a friend of Rule's, a former stripper, and a sorcerer. The pregnant Cynna is his wife as well as an FBI agent who has a Finder Gift.
The Nokolai are . . .
. . . a lupi clan based outside San Diego. Isen Turner is Rule's father and the clan's Rho. Benedict is Rule's older brother and the head of security for Nokolai. Mick had been another brother we met in Tempting Danger , 1. Dr Nettie Two Horses is Benedict's daughter and a healer with a medical degree.
The Leidolf are . . .
. . . a lupi clan based in North Carolina and sworn enemies of the Nokolai. Victor Frey is their ailing Rho and Rule holds the heir's portion of their mantle. Yep, it makes for some interesting questions. Alex Thibideux is Lu Nuncio with a degree in sociology.
Halo, North Carolina
Sheriff Jay Deacon with the Dawson County Sheriff's Department has an empathy gift and is not happy that the FBI is tramping around on his turf. His men include Deputy Bingham and Corporal Sanchez, Matheson, and Hemmings who are guards. Edna is Deacon's secretary. Marcia Farquhar is the district attorney; Mark is her husband. She's also Crystal's godmother. Dr Stanfield is the conspiracy veterinarian who couldn't wait to contact the press. He's also the head of the local SPCA.
Roy Don Meacham is/was married to Becky née Nordstrom. Andrew was their son. Bill Watkins is a postman. Bethany White has a handicapped daughter. Crystal Kessenblaum, a wanna-be hippie, is Roy Don's attorney. Charley is Crystal's deceased brother. Mandy Ann is their mother. Mr Peters teaches math. Coach Tom. Pritchard Memorial is the local hospital. Dr Patel, who has a minor Finding Gift, is a cardiologist. Bessie is one of two sisters who bitch at Lily. The Reverend Barnes is one of those hellfire preachers. Marjorie Aibgail Deacon is Deacon's sweetheart of a grandmother who is also a medium. Harold is the husband who died seven months ago.
Ed Eames is a reporter with AP. Miriam is with the Washington Post. The obnoxious Jimmy Bassinger is with Global. Joe is a cameraman.
Magical Crimes Division (MCD), FBI
Lily works for Unit 12 in the MCD under Ruben Brooks. Ida Rheinhart is Ruben's secretary and the terror of every agent in the Unit. Abel Karonski is a Wiccan agent. Georgetown University Hospital is the only possibility to hold the possessed.
Agent Nathan Brown is local FBI with twenty-two years on the job — and he doesn't like Lily. Agent Mirabelle Brown, a.k.a. Brown Two. Dr Alderson is an FBI veterinarian. Agent Jacobs has ten years with the Bureau.
Sam is the leader of the dragons who came to earth in Mortal Danger . The Dragon Accords are a treaty whereby the dragons aid the world with their presence. Gan is the orange demon who precipitated events in Mortal Danger . The Turning was an event that cracked open nodes that spilled a tsunami of raw magic into the earth, disrupting technology. Dis is what we call hell. Sherry is the head of a coven whose testimony is accepted by the courts. Thérèse is a mambo priestess friend of Cynna's.
The Lady is the "goddess" of the lupi. A Chosen is a woman the Lady chooses for one of the lupi, who are all male. Terra tradis is a protected location where young lupi approaching First Change live until they can control their wolves. Each clan has a mantle that's mostly carried by the Rho; it helps keep the wolves of that clan steady. Gado, a.k.a. gadolinium, is a rare earth element used to drug lupi into being unable to change. John retired from the CDC.
The Cover and Title
The cover is a range of electric greens with a frame of twisting branches creating a roundish shape in the middle of a barebacked, black-haired Lily in jeans fighting against the forest. At the top is a rectangle of pale green showcasing the artist's name and an info blurb in black. To the left of Lily's shoulders is a testimonial in white. Below Lily is the title in the same green as the box background above. I gotta say, Lily would not be barebacked like this. It's not in her character.
The title reflects the black magic used, the Mortal Sins that create mayhem.
My Take
Wilks does a nice job of showing us the wolf's perspective on things — and Rule is really good with his son, in helping him to understand the differences between himself and his wolf as well as helping him to come to his own conclusions. The best way for the lessons to sink in!
Wilks uses third person global subjective point-of-view with Lily, Rule, and Toby as the primary perspectives in this combination of cozy and police/magic investigation.
There's a nice bit of back history on why the Nokolai came to California. Cullen also drops the secret of the Etorri not getting cancer!
Oooh, talk about prejudice! Humans do not like lupi, and it colors how people speak to, of, and treat them. It's a sad metaphor for how Blacks are treated. Although, I did find the sheriff's accusation of bigotry hypocritical!
That bigotry isn't the only conflict in the series, there's also the mate bond that forces Lily and Rule to stay close to each other. It's a distance that changes every once in awhile, and it keeps them both on their toes while adding conflict.
That's the series conflicts. As for Mortal Sins' conflicts, oy. Wilks definitely keeps things interesting with Talia's problems and her parents, Toby's frustrations with his mother, his MOTHER and her stupidity and selfishness, Louise's own conflicts, the murderous It, Rule's issues with the Leidolf, the cop vs FBI vs lupi interactions, and on and on. Mortal Sins is not boring. Nope, not at all *grinning*.
I do adore Cullen, lol. He's got an overabundance of snark and uses it well, breaking rules with wild abandon. His phone conversations with Cynna keep me laughing! Then he turns around and is so compassionate with Talia's issues, and he's very scientific on the magic. Yep, you can bring science into the magic. Ya gotta love him!
Lily. I adore her even more. She may be tiny, but she stands up well, lolololol. Wait'll you read her putdown of Crystal, *more laughter*.
Mortal Sins is all about child custody and Rule's excitement and fears about being a full-time father. Lily also worries.
There's a lot of hairsplitting that goes on. Primarily for Rule as he juggles his responsibilities and loyalties while holding two mantles. Luckily, Alicia doesn't do hairsplitting. She's all about herself. And the more you read about her, the more you'll hate her.
The bad guy is so creepy and Wilks keeps its identity and needs vague, making the story even creepier while Lily and everyone else tries to figure out who (or what) it is. I found myself wanting to scream out to the characters to beware! Reading of The Voice is almost creepier, as it makes you wonder what could be so much stronger than this cold presence. I know I felt cold whenever I read its thoughts!
The prose is an easy read with a story that's both action- and character-packed with plenty of laughs. Not all the laughs are good ones . . .
Good question. Why would ghosts be afraid?
The Story
Rule Turner, Lu Nuncio of the Nokolai werewolf clan, and his lover, Lily Yu, have come to North Carolina to gain full custody of Rule's young son. It's a personal visit. In and out. Until Rule discovers three bodies in a forest grave, covered in death magic.
That magic makes it a federal crime, and FBI Agent Lily Yu is right there. Only, nothing adds up. Especially with the main suspect behind bars when death strikes again.
But murder, however bizarre, is an everyday affair for Lily, who was a homicide cop before being recruited into the FBI's Magical Crimes Division. A more personal shock arrives in the form of Rule's son's mother. Why would she now challenge Rule's plan to bring his son to live among the Nokolai? But family matters must take a backseat when the violence escalates, and there's no rhyme or reason for the next strike — by a killer who may not even be of this world.
The Characters
Lily Yu is an FBI agent who is a touch sensitive and immune to magic; she's also the Chosen of Rule Turner. Dirty Harry is Lily's cat. Other-Lily is the half from whom she was split in Mortal Danger , 2.
Rule Turner is the Lu Nuncio for his clan, the Nokolai, as well as his father's heir.
Toby is Rule's nine-year-old son who lives with his maternal grandmother, Louise Asteglio, a.k.a. Grammy, in Halo, North Carolina. Connie Milligan is Louise's next-door neighbor and her best friend. Old Franklin Hodge is another neighbor, a grouchy one, whose wife, Maisie, had died. Justin and Talia Appleton are best friends with Toby. Aunt Sherri is always telling the Appletons' mom that the reverend is full of beans. The so-selfish Alicia Asteglio is Louise's daughter and Toby's absent mother. James French is Alicia's new husband. Uncle Mark and Aunt Deirdre had come to help Louise.
The gorgeous Cullen Seabourne had been a lone lupus, thrown out of the Etorri clan, and later adopted into Nokolai. He's a friend of Rule's, a former stripper, and a sorcerer. The pregnant Cynna is his wife as well as an FBI agent who has a Finder Gift.
The Nokolai are . . .
. . . a lupi clan based outside San Diego. Isen Turner is Rule's father and the clan's Rho. Benedict is Rule's older brother and the head of security for Nokolai. Mick had been another brother we met in Tempting Danger , 1. Dr Nettie Two Horses is Benedict's daughter and a healer with a medical degree.
The Leidolf are . . .
. . . a lupi clan based in North Carolina and sworn enemies of the Nokolai. Victor Frey is their ailing Rho and Rule holds the heir's portion of their mantle. Yep, it makes for some interesting questions. Alex Thibideux is Lu Nuncio with a degree in sociology.
Halo, North Carolina
Sheriff Jay Deacon with the Dawson County Sheriff's Department has an empathy gift and is not happy that the FBI is tramping around on his turf. His men include Deputy Bingham and Corporal Sanchez, Matheson, and Hemmings who are guards. Edna is Deacon's secretary. Marcia Farquhar is the district attorney; Mark is her husband. She's also Crystal's godmother. Dr Stanfield is the conspiracy veterinarian who couldn't wait to contact the press. He's also the head of the local SPCA.
Roy Don Meacham is/was married to Becky née Nordstrom. Andrew was their son. Bill Watkins is a postman. Bethany White has a handicapped daughter. Crystal Kessenblaum, a wanna-be hippie, is Roy Don's attorney. Charley is Crystal's deceased brother. Mandy Ann is their mother. Mr Peters teaches math. Coach Tom. Pritchard Memorial is the local hospital. Dr Patel, who has a minor Finding Gift, is a cardiologist. Bessie is one of two sisters who bitch at Lily. The Reverend Barnes is one of those hellfire preachers. Marjorie Aibgail Deacon is Deacon's sweetheart of a grandmother who is also a medium. Harold is the husband who died seven months ago.
Ed Eames is a reporter with AP. Miriam is with the Washington Post. The obnoxious Jimmy Bassinger is with Global. Joe is a cameraman.
Magical Crimes Division (MCD), FBI
Lily works for Unit 12 in the MCD under Ruben Brooks. Ida Rheinhart is Ruben's secretary and the terror of every agent in the Unit. Abel Karonski is a Wiccan agent. Georgetown University Hospital is the only possibility to hold the possessed.
Agent Nathan Brown is local FBI with twenty-two years on the job — and he doesn't like Lily. Agent Mirabelle Brown, a.k.a. Brown Two. Dr Alderson is an FBI veterinarian. Agent Jacobs has ten years with the Bureau.
Sam is the leader of the dragons who came to earth in Mortal Danger . The Dragon Accords are a treaty whereby the dragons aid the world with their presence. Gan is the orange demon who precipitated events in Mortal Danger . The Turning was an event that cracked open nodes that spilled a tsunami of raw magic into the earth, disrupting technology. Dis is what we call hell. Sherry is the head of a coven whose testimony is accepted by the courts. Thérèse is a mambo priestess friend of Cynna's.
The Lady is the "goddess" of the lupi. A Chosen is a woman the Lady chooses for one of the lupi, who are all male. Terra tradis is a protected location where young lupi approaching First Change live until they can control their wolves. Each clan has a mantle that's mostly carried by the Rho; it helps keep the wolves of that clan steady. Gado, a.k.a. gadolinium, is a rare earth element used to drug lupi into being unable to change. John retired from the CDC.
The Cover and Title
The cover is a range of electric greens with a frame of twisting branches creating a roundish shape in the middle of a barebacked, black-haired Lily in jeans fighting against the forest. At the top is a rectangle of pale green showcasing the artist's name and an info blurb in black. To the left of Lily's shoulders is a testimonial in white. Below Lily is the title in the same green as the box background above. I gotta say, Lily would not be barebacked like this. It's not in her character.
The title reflects the black magic used, the Mortal Sins that create mayhem.
April 24, 2019
Make sure to read the available-for-free novella Cyncerely Yours that occurs in between books 4 & 5. While it's not essential to following the plot in this, it IS referenced.
We're back with our main characters, Lilly (magically gifted FBI agent) and Rule (heir to his werewolf clan & the basic head of PR for werewolves), as Rule attempts to get full custody of his son. However, an unknown entity is using death magic to kill the local townspeople. Lilly & Rule must not only solve the case, but juggle the increased, and unwanted, media attention. What was supposed to be a cut & dry custody hearing has turned into anything but.
These are fast paced and fun reads.
We're back with our main characters, Lilly (magically gifted FBI agent) and Rule (heir to his werewolf clan & the basic head of PR for werewolves), as Rule attempts to get full custody of his son. However, an unknown entity is using death magic to kill the local townspeople. Lilly & Rule must not only solve the case, but juggle the increased, and unwanted, media attention. What was supposed to be a cut & dry custody hearing has turned into anything but.
These are fast paced and fun reads.
December 28, 2015
Lily Yu and her mate, Rule Turner are completing the legal procedure to get Rule full custody of his son. It’d be nice if the could do it interrupted- but the looming politics of the press attention for the “lupi prince” and the complication of Rule now carrying the magical Mantle of the Leidolf clan despite them being his ancestral enemies
Then people start dying – and in the post-Turning world with wild magic and long gone creatures now emerging, this is far from a simple murder. And unsimple murders are now Lily’s job as an FBI Agent for the Magical Crime’s unit. Mystical serial killers have to take precedence to even the most important of family dramas
This book was a blessed relief to me. In the last 3 book reviews I have been immensely frustrated by how this series has expanded immensely quickly without nearly enough time to develop it. We started jumping dimensions, suddenly there were more supernatural creatures than we could shake a stick at and I have no idea what was happening and why. I love a big rich world, I really do – but this was too much too soon. It was like sitting down to an epic 4 course meal full of all your favourite food – them having someone dump all of it on one plate an expect you to eat it all at once.
So this book, while not removing what has come before, focuses much more closely. The dragons are out there, the huge magical take down of technology is still happening, the increase in magic and the gifted is all still there – but it’s a background to a story which is more local and lets us digest the world a bit more, what has changed and what these characters are without them disappearing to Hell or Edge or dealing with dragons or elves or demons or any other deluge of creatures.
We still have the mystery and a world changing – the Turning has still brought new magical beings and challenges and Lily’s entire job has vastly expanded to be part of the new FBI task force dealing with all the random magical chaos. But it’s much more digestible. For the first time in 3 books I feel I can catch my breath absorb this world without it pulling the rug out from under my feet and hitting me with some other massive world building overhaul.
I also have to say how much I lie how little of this world is known – characters are very willing to say “I don’t know”, which I like. We don’t know every aspect of our world – and their world has changed so much, how could everyone know how things are? Too often fictional worlds present everything as known and certain – rather than unknown and theorised
There’s also a return to my preferred protagonist – Lily and Rule as opposed to Cynna and Cullen. Lily, being a detective is much more focused and practical and just a lot more fun to me.
The story is a murder mystery, with Lily & co having to do some investigating and a lot of research in the face of the new possibilities that magic has brought. I love the contrast between sensible research and detective work and the wider world they have to work in that brings in so many more unknowns. Without needing to do all the recapping that clogged the last book it was also much better paced and I finished the book surprisingly quickly because of it.
And I like Lily, she is so practical in the face of the woo-woo. Brave without being reckless, intelligent and skilled without super-woo-woo. She’s sensible. She doesn’t take shit from people, but doesn’t pick fights and act hyper-aggressive as a way to “stand up for herself” as we often see. She’s confident and assured without being raging and out of control. She also has some nice personal conflicts with family, her relationship to Rule’s son and her uncomfortable reaction to and relationship with spirituality due to her family history (which was a nice additional bit of development). I like her a lot and always have. She’s just… so practical in a woo-woo setting.
I like how we have the depiction of how she works with the local police forces. We often see this battle played out – but it was nice to see that despite objections, despite battles and personality clashes, ultimately most people were sensible and we didn’t get almost comic infighting which is so sadly common. There were no caricatures – even people who opposed Lily because of her age or race or gender were not caricatures of awful – they were people with prejudiced views that were terrible and needed correcting (which Lily did, awesomely and firmly) without being over the top caricatures of awful. I appreciate that – because it is so easy to demonise the prejudiced to the point where they only resemble the most extreme of people – but most prejudice we face isn’t like that. Most of it is the every day microaggressions and “normal” people with terrible views and behaviours.
Rule brought all the personal conflict and it worked well with the main storyline – both linking with it and making a nice point that their lives go on even when dramatic things are happening. I like that especially as it teaches Lily the importance of delegation – because she does get to have a life as well.
And I like Rule’s story with his son, the custody battle as well as the continuing drama between him and the Liedolf clan (historical enemies of his clan that he now finds himself ruling). I like how, again, the enemies are not clearcut terribad wrong – they’re just another clan of people that has been in opposition to Rule’s own (this applies to most of the characters in this book except, perhaps, for the unfortunate example of the mother of his son who is pretty over the top awful – but even she has an excellent redemption moment). There’s a lot of really good interactions between Rule, Lily and Rule’s son Toby. I want to applaud their parenting skills because they’re pretty damn awesome. And through them we get to see a lot of Lupi culture which is really rich and involved.
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Then people start dying – and in the post-Turning world with wild magic and long gone creatures now emerging, this is far from a simple murder. And unsimple murders are now Lily’s job as an FBI Agent for the Magical Crime’s unit. Mystical serial killers have to take precedence to even the most important of family dramas
This book was a blessed relief to me. In the last 3 book reviews I have been immensely frustrated by how this series has expanded immensely quickly without nearly enough time to develop it. We started jumping dimensions, suddenly there were more supernatural creatures than we could shake a stick at and I have no idea what was happening and why. I love a big rich world, I really do – but this was too much too soon. It was like sitting down to an epic 4 course meal full of all your favourite food – them having someone dump all of it on one plate an expect you to eat it all at once.
So this book, while not removing what has come before, focuses much more closely. The dragons are out there, the huge magical take down of technology is still happening, the increase in magic and the gifted is all still there – but it’s a background to a story which is more local and lets us digest the world a bit more, what has changed and what these characters are without them disappearing to Hell or Edge or dealing with dragons or elves or demons or any other deluge of creatures.
We still have the mystery and a world changing – the Turning has still brought new magical beings and challenges and Lily’s entire job has vastly expanded to be part of the new FBI task force dealing with all the random magical chaos. But it’s much more digestible. For the first time in 3 books I feel I can catch my breath absorb this world without it pulling the rug out from under my feet and hitting me with some other massive world building overhaul.
I also have to say how much I lie how little of this world is known – characters are very willing to say “I don’t know”, which I like. We don’t know every aspect of our world – and their world has changed so much, how could everyone know how things are? Too often fictional worlds present everything as known and certain – rather than unknown and theorised
There’s also a return to my preferred protagonist – Lily and Rule as opposed to Cynna and Cullen. Lily, being a detective is much more focused and practical and just a lot more fun to me.
The story is a murder mystery, with Lily & co having to do some investigating and a lot of research in the face of the new possibilities that magic has brought. I love the contrast between sensible research and detective work and the wider world they have to work in that brings in so many more unknowns. Without needing to do all the recapping that clogged the last book it was also much better paced and I finished the book surprisingly quickly because of it.
And I like Lily, she is so practical in the face of the woo-woo. Brave without being reckless, intelligent and skilled without super-woo-woo. She’s sensible. She doesn’t take shit from people, but doesn’t pick fights and act hyper-aggressive as a way to “stand up for herself” as we often see. She’s confident and assured without being raging and out of control. She also has some nice personal conflicts with family, her relationship to Rule’s son and her uncomfortable reaction to and relationship with spirituality due to her family history (which was a nice additional bit of development). I like her a lot and always have. She’s just… so practical in a woo-woo setting.
I like how we have the depiction of how she works with the local police forces. We often see this battle played out – but it was nice to see that despite objections, despite battles and personality clashes, ultimately most people were sensible and we didn’t get almost comic infighting which is so sadly common. There were no caricatures – even people who opposed Lily because of her age or race or gender were not caricatures of awful – they were people with prejudiced views that were terrible and needed correcting (which Lily did, awesomely and firmly) without being over the top caricatures of awful. I appreciate that – because it is so easy to demonise the prejudiced to the point where they only resemble the most extreme of people – but most prejudice we face isn’t like that. Most of it is the every day microaggressions and “normal” people with terrible views and behaviours.
Rule brought all the personal conflict and it worked well with the main storyline – both linking with it and making a nice point that their lives go on even when dramatic things are happening. I like that especially as it teaches Lily the importance of delegation – because she does get to have a life as well.
And I like Rule’s story with his son, the custody battle as well as the continuing drama between him and the Liedolf clan (historical enemies of his clan that he now finds himself ruling). I like how, again, the enemies are not clearcut terribad wrong – they’re just another clan of people that has been in opposition to Rule’s own (this applies to most of the characters in this book except, perhaps, for the unfortunate example of the mother of his son who is pretty over the top awful – but even she has an excellent redemption moment). There’s a lot of really good interactions between Rule, Lily and Rule’s son Toby. I want to applaud their parenting skills because they’re pretty damn awesome. And through them we get to see a lot of Lupi culture which is really rich and involved.
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June 22, 2017
Sorry, this was not one of my faves. In all fairness, I haven't read the others so I was quite lost with this one. I also felt like there was too much going on for me to really enjoy it. There was a lot thrown in here that didn't make sense to me. We have a story with werewolves and now wraiths in the mix. Lily and Rule are good characters, and if there wasn't so much going on, may have been a great read. The surrounding plot just didn't hold my interest and made me keep putting the book down.
September 23, 2021
More great detective story meshed with magical crimes. I'm really confused about the cover, though, as the sexual content was fairly tame. And the title doesn't seem to relate to the story either.
June 26, 2016
Another success. As long as these books continue to be well written, interesting and full of twists and turns that I can never figure out, I’ll continue to read them. Its kind of crazy, because I haven’t really stuck with a series this diligently in a while. Usually i’ll read one or two books and then go off and read 5 or 10 other books, come back to the series, rinse and repeat. But for the past three months, I’ve been for the most part reading World of Lupi books. I love them!
Mortal Sins takes the series back to my other favorite couple, Rule and Lily. They’re in Halo North Carolina for what’s supposed to be a work and stress free trip, while Rule gets custody of his son Toby. But of course, in these stories, things never go as planned and are never as simple as we all wish they could be. Lily and Rule stumble on a few bodies that have been touched by death magic while they’re on a walk one night and of course, being the amazing FBI agent that she is, Lily takes on the case. What happens afterwards is an onslaught of danger, murder attempts, kidnapping, confusion and fear. I of course enjoyed every single page.
Eileen writes good stories. So far, the plots of each of these books have had one encompassing story arc that involves the characters and their development and the progression of their relationships. Relationships that I have come to really love and look forward to when reading these books. Seeing Rule and Lily continue to fall more in love with one another. Laughing at the Big Sister, Little Brother relationship Lily and Cullen have even though Cullen is FAR older than her. And of course seeing the love and trust bloom between Lily and Rules son. I JUST LOVE IT! Each book has of course had their own individual plot lines as well which involves the current threat or crazy person hungry for power and chaos. Or just unwilling to accept reality and doing whatever they can to alter it. I think what I’m enjoying about these books so much is the fact that both elements are explored, executed and come together so well. I’ll always love watching the progression of Rule and Lilys relationship with one another as well as the relationships and friendships they’re making while on these crazy adventures. But I also love reading about their adventures and the trouble they get in and out of in each book.
Mortal Sins, like the previous four books, did a great job of keeping me fully invested and interested in what was going on while at the same time keeping me completely in the dark about what was going on. I’d like to think of myself as a pretty damn good detective. For the most part, I can predict whats going to happen in a book before it happens or what the angle is and how everything is going to play out. But so far, with each of these books, I’m just reading them, scratching my head COMPLETELY clueless as to why things are happening and what the motivations are behind some of the characters actions. But in a good way, because when everything is cleared up and explained and when all the pieces finally click into place. There’s always that moment of “OOHHHH THATS WHY!!...” Which is a refreshing moment to have every once in a while.
I learned a long time ago that I’m a sucker for love. I’d like to put on a front like I would enjoy a book without any romance. A book that was all about the action, mystery and message. But that’s a load of crap. I need some FEELS! And so far this series delivers just the right amount of action, mystery, message and feels. I like guns blazing, fight scenes, car chases and explosions. But I also like sweet kisses, endearing words and heartfelt declarations. Its all about BALANCE people. Mortal Sins had dangerous moments where lives were at stake and the survival of everyone was dependent on fast reflexes and split second decisions. But it also had moments of passion and grand gestures of romance. If you can get that balance like Eileen Wilks has, or Patricia Briggs and Ilona Andrews have, then you’ve got a fan in me.
I’m pretty much obsessed with this series right now. I had every intention of just powering through it, especially since I haven’t really had an itch to read anything else. The ONLY reason I’m NOT reading the next book in the series is because I got sucked into reading More Happy Than Not by a friend. But make no mistake! I will most definitely be continuing on with this series. I need some more of Rule Turner, Lily Yu, Cynna Weaver and Cullen Seaborne in my life.
August 25, 2010
Lily and Rule are back in the forefront in this book. What started out as a trip to pick up Rule's son, Toby, quickly turns into a huge mess when Rule stumbles upon three bodies stinking of death magic. Of course Lily is assigned the case, but she quickly learns things are not as they seem. To complicate things further, Toby's mother is now trying to contest Rule gaining custody. Adding into the trouble is the mess with Rule holding both the Leidolf and Nokolai mantles, and all the politics that ensue. When Rule tries to handle some of his duties to Nokolai, the mate bond between Lily and Rule throws a wrench in those plans.
I really do not like the way people treat Lily in this book because of her relationship with Rule. Its a wonder to think that she hid her gift all those years to shield herself from such ridicule, but in the end it comes anyway for a different reason. It just goes to show that there will always be prejudices no matter the race or species for that matter. At least Lily has a tough skin, and it seems to bother me more than her, but perhaps I've just developed a major soft spot for her.
This book kept me guessing the entire time. The brief glimpses into the "killer's" mind were very intriguing and made only want to read faster to figure out who it was. In the end, the culprit turned out to be a really interesting and unexpected twist. To stop the killings some hard choices had to be made, but I think even with the consequences things will work out in the end for the better.
The ending of this book was by far the best so far of any books in The World of the Lupi series. However, while there was definite happiness, I think the ending events are going to reek major havoc in future books. I cannot wait to read the next book to see how things work out. Some series start to fizzle after a few books, but this one is the opposite. It is definitely getting better and better the further into I get.
I really do not like the way people treat Lily in this book because of her relationship with Rule. Its a wonder to think that she hid her gift all those years to shield herself from such ridicule, but in the end it comes anyway for a different reason. It just goes to show that there will always be prejudices no matter the race or species for that matter. At least Lily has a tough skin, and it seems to bother me more than her, but perhaps I've just developed a major soft spot for her.
This book kept me guessing the entire time. The brief glimpses into the "killer's" mind were very intriguing and made only want to read faster to figure out who it was. In the end, the culprit turned out to be a really interesting and unexpected twist. To stop the killings some hard choices had to be made, but I think even with the consequences things will work out in the end for the better.
The ending of this book was by far the best so far of any books in The World of the Lupi series. However, while there was definite happiness, I think the ending events are going to reek major havoc in future books. I cannot wait to read the next book to see how things work out. Some series start to fizzle after a few books, but this one is the opposite. It is definitely getting better and better the further into I get.
September 7, 2016
(4.75 Stars Actually)
In my new favorite for the series, Lily and Rule are in South Carolina to complete arrangements so they will be sole guardians to Rule's son Toby's and stumble into a Death Magic Case.
Lily's case introduces a new entity for her that requires the expertise of favorites Cynna & Cullen take a field trip to South Carolina. The elusive culprit twines into the introduction of Toby's mother and Toby's growing into his role as a lupus approaching first change and as Rule's son. Thankfully, the Liedolf clan required Rule's attending in this outing, giving him more to do than hold Lily's purse. As expected this thread looped also very neatly back to Lily's case.
Both major threads, Lily's murder case and Toby's custody issues, were intriguing, emotional and more layered than a cursory glance could convey. Toby showed a lot of promise in being a future hot alpha to be reckoned with Toby displayed a lot of himself with the care he showed his friends and grandmother and the compassion and respect to the other characters. I enjoyed the first in-depth look at Toby this read provided. Lily got a chance to show not only her shiny new parenting skills but that her take charge intelligent female persona is more than just her touch sensitive gift. This story added a lot of depth to her character. This outing really put Lily's investigative skills on display instead of just being told she had them. Rule's arc also showed subtle growth for his character but not to the degree of Toby's and/or Lily's. This outing did the best portrayal of Rule and Lily as individuals, as a couple and as parents than any other to date (IMO). I'm in love with Rule all over again! (we've been drifting apart since book one.)The FBI agents on loan and the police were the most visible among the new secondary roster and seem to be establishing a presence for something on the horizon.
In my new favorite for the series, Lily and Rule are in South Carolina to complete arrangements so they will be sole guardians to Rule's son Toby's and stumble into a Death Magic Case.
Lily's case introduces a new entity for her that requires the expertise of favorites Cynna & Cullen take a field trip to South Carolina. The elusive culprit twines into the introduction of Toby's mother and Toby's growing into his role as a lupus approaching first change and as Rule's son. Thankfully, the Liedolf clan required Rule's attending in this outing, giving him more to do than hold Lily's purse. As expected this thread looped also very neatly back to Lily's case.
Both major threads, Lily's murder case and Toby's custody issues, were intriguing, emotional and more layered than a cursory glance could convey. Toby showed a lot of promise in being a future hot alpha to be reckoned with Toby displayed a lot of himself with the care he showed his friends and grandmother and the compassion and respect to the other characters. I enjoyed the first in-depth look at Toby this read provided. Lily got a chance to show not only her shiny new parenting skills but that her take charge intelligent female persona is more than just her touch sensitive gift. This story added a lot of depth to her character. This outing really put Lily's investigative skills on display instead of just being told she had them. Rule's arc also showed subtle growth for his character but not to the degree of Toby's and/or Lily's. This outing did the best portrayal of Rule and Lily as individuals, as a couple and as parents than any other to date (IMO). I'm in love with Rule all over again! (we've been drifting apart since book one.)The FBI agents on loan and the police were the most visible among the new secondary roster and seem to be establishing a presence for something on the horizon.
February 22, 2012
I was a little hesitant to start this book, the premise just didn't seem too interesting, but honestly after reading it, this book has been the strongest in the series so far to me. It goes back to simplicity. It's a crime solving book with a paranormal twist to it. The series started out this way but beginning with the second book they all started getting very much steeped in mythology of demons, lupi, and other species. While I know that all these things are a part of the world that Wilks has created, it tended to get overwhelming. I felt like we were just being thrown a lot of stuff all at once. Here, however, we are back to having Lily and Rule as the center focus which until I started reading this book I didn't know I missed their characters so much. They were only in the beginning and end of Night Season since that book broke off to focus on Cynna and Cullen.
Here we find Lily and Rule in North Carolina for Rule to attend a custody hearing to gain full custody of Toby. What starts out as a seemingly simple family matter to attend to quickl becomes a case of solving mysterious murders with traces of death magic.
I don't think it's so much the story as the characters that really made this book for me. We really get a lot of progress on Lily and Rule's relationship despite the fact that they've been established as a couple since book 1 they still have things to work through. We also deal with a lot of things that happened in previous books such as Rule having two mantles and Lily's soul's trip to Dis. We get a few things wrapped up but are quickly lead into other things that will impact later books.
So far, this has been a series that's been getting better and better with each book and I think coming back to the familiar characters helps a lot too.
Here we find Lily and Rule in North Carolina for Rule to attend a custody hearing to gain full custody of Toby. What starts out as a seemingly simple family matter to attend to quickl becomes a case of solving mysterious murders with traces of death magic.
I don't think it's so much the story as the characters that really made this book for me. We really get a lot of progress on Lily and Rule's relationship despite the fact that they've been established as a couple since book 1 they still have things to work through. We also deal with a lot of things that happened in previous books such as Rule having two mantles and Lily's soul's trip to Dis. We get a few things wrapped up but are quickly lead into other things that will impact later books.
So far, this has been a series that's been getting better and better with each book and I think coming back to the familiar characters helps a lot too.
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