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Faults of Understanding: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
"I have faults enough, but they are not, I hope, of understanding." --Mr. Darcy, Pride and Prejudice
When Fitzwilliam Darcy makes an impetuous offer of marriage to Miss Elizabeth Bennet, he is convinced they have as good a chance as any for a harmonious life together. That is, until an overheard conversation changes everything, and Darcy realizes he is now joined in perpetuity to a woman who loathes the very sight of him.
Elizabeth Bennet's expectations for matrimonial accord were never very high, having accepted Mr. Darcy's proposal in a fit of pique, not love. Still, she is determined to make the best of her situation, despite having tied herself to such an arrogant, disagreeable man.
But life at Pemberley is not at all what she imagined, and Elizabeth soon finds herself with more questions than answers about the enigmatic gentleman she agreed to wed.
Trapped in a marriage founded on misunderstandings, Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth Darcy struggle with deepening attraction while confronting self-doubt and old betrayals. But is love enough to heal the wounds of the past? What will it take for two people bound by duty to find their way home to one another?
Note: This novel contains mature content dealing with intimacy and loss. While the scenes are not graphic in nature, the subject matter is most suitable for an adult reader.
When Fitzwilliam Darcy makes an impetuous offer of marriage to Miss Elizabeth Bennet, he is convinced they have as good a chance as any for a harmonious life together. That is, until an overheard conversation changes everything, and Darcy realizes he is now joined in perpetuity to a woman who loathes the very sight of him.
Elizabeth Bennet's expectations for matrimonial accord were never very high, having accepted Mr. Darcy's proposal in a fit of pique, not love. Still, she is determined to make the best of her situation, despite having tied herself to such an arrogant, disagreeable man.
But life at Pemberley is not at all what she imagined, and Elizabeth soon finds herself with more questions than answers about the enigmatic gentleman she agreed to wed.
Trapped in a marriage founded on misunderstandings, Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth Darcy struggle with deepening attraction while confronting self-doubt and old betrayals. But is love enough to heal the wounds of the past? What will it take for two people bound by duty to find their way home to one another?
Note: This novel contains mature content dealing with intimacy and loss. While the scenes are not graphic in nature, the subject matter is most suitable for an adult reader.
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First published May 27, 2021
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May 28, 2021
This is a book that's certainly well-named.
At the Netherfield ball, knowledge that Elizabeth Bennet is fated to marry the ridiculous Mr. Collins (who plans to propose to her the following day) prompts Darcy to impulsively leap to her rescue. He meets with her father early the next morning with a proposal of his own. Mr. Bennet encourages Elizabeth to choose between the two men, pointing out the unlikelihood of future suitors if it becomes known that she refused two highly desirable offers for her hand.
Elizabeth certainly intends to refuse Mr. Collins and is leaning towards the same with Mr. Darcy, regardless of the consequences. Instead, she doesn't even get the opportunity to turn Mr. Collins down, and then Lady Catherine de Bourgh shows up to intimidate her, which gets Elizabeth's hackles up and goads her into asserting she WILL marry the harridan's nephew, which Darcy overhears...and Elizabeth finds herself betrothed to a man she loathes. Oops!
Darcy is delighted, believing Elizabeth is happy with her decision, and the two are married quickly so he can bring her to Pemberley before winter weather makes travel too difficult. He shares the truth about Wickham and, seeing a different, more tender side of Darcy, Elizabeth begins to thaw a bit. Unfortunately, at the end of the wedding breakfast, Darcy overhears her and Jane speaking, learns what his wife actually thinks of him, and his pleasant illusion is shattered. The wedding vows have already been spoken, so now he's stuck and bitter about it. This does NOT make for a happy honeymoon period. It also motivates Darcy to make sure his friend Bingley doesn't make the same mistake with Jane Bennet.
While that's the premise that opens the book, the story has additional depth. The young marriage is also tainted by the past - and we're talking more than just Georgiana and Ramsgate. This Darcy is haunted by an incident from his youth that influences many of his decisions and family relationships. As usual, he needs to do some soul-searching, but this time it's not as much to get rid of his snobbishness as it is to expel his personal demons. The "faults of understanding" include Darcy not truly understanding himself.
Just when it seems as though things are settled and the relationship between him and Elizabeth is headed for smooth sailing, the story takes a sudden turn. It leads to a fantastic final act that has echoes of canon and also returns Darcy to the scene of his youthful trauma.
The storytelling is wonderful, balancing enough lightness to keep the underlying dark elements from overwhelming the reader. The story's serious topics are best understood by mature adults, dealing with death and loss, plus there's marital intimacy in the Darcy bedroom. Characters are distinct and believable. The chemistry between Elizabeth and Darcy is hot enough to singe the book's pages without overly explicit content.
Highly recommend.
I received a free copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
At the Netherfield ball, knowledge that Elizabeth Bennet is fated to marry the ridiculous Mr. Collins (who plans to propose to her the following day) prompts Darcy to impulsively leap to her rescue. He meets with her father early the next morning with a proposal of his own. Mr. Bennet encourages Elizabeth to choose between the two men, pointing out the unlikelihood of future suitors if it becomes known that she refused two highly desirable offers for her hand.
Elizabeth certainly intends to refuse Mr. Collins and is leaning towards the same with Mr. Darcy, regardless of the consequences. Instead, she doesn't even get the opportunity to turn Mr. Collins down, and then Lady Catherine de Bourgh shows up to intimidate her, which gets Elizabeth's hackles up and goads her into asserting she WILL marry the harridan's nephew, which Darcy overhears...and Elizabeth finds herself betrothed to a man she loathes. Oops!
Darcy is delighted, believing Elizabeth is happy with her decision, and the two are married quickly so he can bring her to Pemberley before winter weather makes travel too difficult. He shares the truth about Wickham and, seeing a different, more tender side of Darcy, Elizabeth begins to thaw a bit. Unfortunately, at the end of the wedding breakfast, Darcy overhears her and Jane speaking, learns what his wife actually thinks of him, and his pleasant illusion is shattered. The wedding vows have already been spoken, so now he's stuck and bitter about it. This does NOT make for a happy honeymoon period. It also motivates Darcy to make sure his friend Bingley doesn't make the same mistake with Jane Bennet.
While that's the premise that opens the book, the story has additional depth. The young marriage is also tainted by the past - and we're talking more than just Georgiana and Ramsgate. This Darcy is haunted by an incident from his youth that influences many of his decisions and family relationships. As usual, he needs to do some soul-searching, but this time it's not as much to get rid of his snobbishness as it is to expel his personal demons. The "faults of understanding" include Darcy not truly understanding himself.
Just when it seems as though things are settled and the relationship between him and Elizabeth is headed for smooth sailing, the story takes a sudden turn. It leads to a fantastic final act that has echoes of canon and also returns Darcy to the scene of his youthful trauma.
The storytelling is wonderful, balancing enough lightness to keep the underlying dark elements from overwhelming the reader. The story's serious topics are best understood by mature adults, dealing with death and loss, plus there's marital intimacy in the Darcy bedroom. Characters are distinct and believable. The chemistry between Elizabeth and Darcy is hot enough to singe the book's pages without overly explicit content.
Highly recommend.
I received a free copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
June 9, 2024
"Silent" and "listen" are spelled with the same letters. ~ Author unknown
Full disclosure: “Marry for the prudent motive” is one of my favorite JAFF tropes. I love stories where our dear boy is still unapproachable and our dear girl is still headstrong and determined.
This is one of those stories.
Darcy’s motive for marriage is not spelled out — probably because he does not understand it himself. He learns at the Netherfield Ball that Collins will propose to Elizabeth Bennet.
Quote from the book: Darcy stiffened, his heart leaping to his throat. Elizabeth, married to this cretin? It was insupportable.
Elizabeth’s motive for marriage is not spelled out — probably because she does not understand it herself. While Elizabeth is still making a list of the pros and cons of a possible marriage, Lady Catherine arrives and insults her.
Quote from the book: “Yes, I do intend to marry him! And there is nothing you can do to stop me!’’
Darcy overhears. The decision is made.
Eavesdroppers never hear anything good about themselves. ~ Idiom
A short betrothal is followed by a wedding. An open window, a groom on the adjacent balcony, and a conversation between sisters is overheard.
The wedding is followed by a silent carriage ride to Pemberley.
A good listener is not only popular everywhere, but after a while, he gets to know something. ~ Wilson Mizner
This is a “marry for the prudent motive” story but it is something more.
Darcy holds a secret from his childhood: a secret that changed his plans; changed his family, and changed his life. A secret that all the Darcy and Fitzwilliam relations know — except the new bride.
Quote from the book: What must it have been like to grow up surrounded by such opulence? To know, practically from the cradle, that you would someday be master of all you surveyed?
But is that the case? What did Darcy know from the cradle?
“Faults of Understanding” is not a story full of quarrels. Indeed, their marriage is one of politeness. Darcy believes he has made a mistake but he sees his duty to care for his wife. Elizabeth struggles to find her place in her new life and care for her husband and their home.
The story is well-written and free of errata.
I loved it!
The author gave me an ARC of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.
The most important thing in communication is to hear what isn't being said. ~ Peter F. Drucker
Full disclosure: “Marry for the prudent motive” is one of my favorite JAFF tropes. I love stories where our dear boy is still unapproachable and our dear girl is still headstrong and determined.
This is one of those stories.
Darcy’s motive for marriage is not spelled out — probably because he does not understand it himself. He learns at the Netherfield Ball that Collins will propose to Elizabeth Bennet.
Quote from the book: Darcy stiffened, his heart leaping to his throat. Elizabeth, married to this cretin? It was insupportable.
Elizabeth’s motive for marriage is not spelled out — probably because she does not understand it herself. While Elizabeth is still making a list of the pros and cons of a possible marriage, Lady Catherine arrives and insults her.
Quote from the book: “Yes, I do intend to marry him! And there is nothing you can do to stop me!’’
Darcy overhears. The decision is made.
Eavesdroppers never hear anything good about themselves. ~ Idiom
A short betrothal is followed by a wedding. An open window, a groom on the adjacent balcony, and a conversation between sisters is overheard.
The wedding is followed by a silent carriage ride to Pemberley.
A good listener is not only popular everywhere, but after a while, he gets to know something. ~ Wilson Mizner
This is a “marry for the prudent motive” story but it is something more.
Darcy holds a secret from his childhood: a secret that changed his plans; changed his family, and changed his life. A secret that all the Darcy and Fitzwilliam relations know — except the new bride.
Quote from the book: What must it have been like to grow up surrounded by such opulence? To know, practically from the cradle, that you would someday be master of all you surveyed?
But is that the case? What did Darcy know from the cradle?
“Faults of Understanding” is not a story full of quarrels. Indeed, their marriage is one of politeness. Darcy believes he has made a mistake but he sees his duty to care for his wife. Elizabeth struggles to find her place in her new life and care for her husband and their home.
The story is well-written and free of errata.
I loved it!
The author gave me an ARC of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.
The most important thing in communication is to hear what isn't being said. ~ Peter F. Drucker
May 27, 2021
"What she most wanted to know was why her new husband had scarcely said ten words together in the three days they had been in his carriage, and why it seemed to pain him to so much as look in her direction." (quote from the book)
Based on the book description, we know Mr. Darcy overheard a conversation not meant for his ears. But what precipitated his early proposal of marriage and what was the impetus for Elizabeth Bennet to accept him? For this all happens while he is still at Netherfield. With Mr. Bennet, Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine having their fair share of the conversation, and Mr. Bingley and his sisters leaving for London, Elizabeth Bennet, in a state of frustration, accepts Mr. Darcy's proposal.
"And just like that, the die was cast." (quote from the book)
What a start to their marriage! The build up of tension and awkwardness was gradual, and I was anxious as they each kept their hearts shielded from the other. Elizabeth must find her way in becoming the Mistress of Pemberley. But more is going on at Pemberley than she realizes. There is a part of Darcy's past that he is unwilling to reveal, let alone face. A past that has in some ways crippled him.
"It seemed as though she and her husband were like oil and water, each one destined to misunderstand the intentions of the other at every turn." (quote from the book)
Throughout this well written variation, several characters play important roles in helping Elizabeth and Darcy understand each other...Georgiana, Lady Wheaton and Harp. I wanted to hug each of them myself! And just when you think there is a light at the end of the tunnel, the bottom drops out and both Elizabeth and Darcy are left floundering. Nooooo....!
"All living things need nourishment to grow. A flower will not bloom in the darkness." (quote from the book)
I heartily recommend this unique variation. Watching Elizabeth and Darcy find their way to each other was so poignant. And to entice you further to read this novel, there is a 'letter' within that will melt your heart.
I received an ARC of this book, and I am voluntarily providing a fair and honest review.
January 4, 2022
I highly recommend this story. I read this in the space of 24 hours although the dates list 2 days. I have always loved stories in which ODC come together not because of love on both parts but because of a compromise, a manipulation, etc.
In this tale Darcy learns that Elizabeth expects a proposal from Collins the day after the ball and so he is "forced" (in his way of thinking) to either propose to her or forever give her up. So early on the morning after the Netherfield Ball he visits Mr. Bennet and asks for permission to offer for Elizabeth. So it is that Elizabeth has two offers to consider. Then just when she has determined that, although she knows that turning down two "good" offers will condemn her in the eyes of any future suitors, she will reject both and stay a spinster. Lady Catherine arriving with that confrontation, i.e., in canon, has Elizabeth reacting without thinking as she won't allow Lady Catherine the satisfaction of thinking she has won the day.
So, Darcy's offer is accepted. The marriage is quickly arranged so there is no "courting" period. However, shortly after the wedding occurs, at the breakfast, Darcy overhears Jane's comments about Elizabeth's opinions, her feelings about Darcy...and he is stunned...a marriage without affection, Elizabeth's detests him? He keeps this knowledge to himself.
He decides to have as little interaction with Elizabeth as possible...to save his urges and maybe his heart. A silent journey to Pemberley, days spent on business matters and trips away from Pemberley give him some relief from his desires. Elizabeth has mixed feelings when he makes it clear that he does not intend to consummate the marriage.
Elizabeth thinks she knows Darcy...born into wealth, supported by his family, etc. What cares does he carry on his shoulders? What she doesn't know about Darcy's past turns out to be more than any person should suffer. (I won't spoil the story for you by even hinting at some facts in his past here.)
Elizabeth learns much about Darcy as she eventually meets, not only Georgiana, but also Darcy's one aunt who is also his godmother. Yes, her opinions change, but you knew that.
The relationship finally comes to a head when Darcy relates his plans to move to an estate he plans to purchase in Scotland, leaving her at Pemberley, with the excuse that the new estate needs too much work, too much upgrading and repairs to expect her to live there with him. She will serve as Mistress to Pemberley very well (thank you) while he is gone.
Although there is mention of some intimacies there are no graphic details. However, as others have said, this story is best read by mature audiences.
In this tale Darcy learns that Elizabeth expects a proposal from Collins the day after the ball and so he is "forced" (in his way of thinking) to either propose to her or forever give her up. So early on the morning after the Netherfield Ball he visits Mr. Bennet and asks for permission to offer for Elizabeth. So it is that Elizabeth has two offers to consider. Then just when she has determined that, although she knows that turning down two "good" offers will condemn her in the eyes of any future suitors, she will reject both and stay a spinster. Lady Catherine arriving with that confrontation, i.e., in canon, has Elizabeth reacting without thinking as she won't allow Lady Catherine the satisfaction of thinking she has won the day.
So, Darcy's offer is accepted. The marriage is quickly arranged so there is no "courting" period. However, shortly after the wedding occurs, at the breakfast, Darcy overhears Jane's comments about Elizabeth's opinions, her feelings about Darcy...and he is stunned...a marriage without affection, Elizabeth's detests him? He keeps this knowledge to himself.
He decides to have as little interaction with Elizabeth as possible...to save his urges and maybe his heart. A silent journey to Pemberley, days spent on business matters and trips away from Pemberley give him some relief from his desires. Elizabeth has mixed feelings when he makes it clear that he does not intend to consummate the marriage.
Elizabeth thinks she knows Darcy...born into wealth, supported by his family, etc. What cares does he carry on his shoulders? What she doesn't know about Darcy's past turns out to be more than any person should suffer. (I won't spoil the story for you by even hinting at some facts in his past here.)
Elizabeth learns much about Darcy as she eventually meets, not only Georgiana, but also Darcy's one aunt who is also his godmother. Yes, her opinions change, but you knew that.
The relationship finally comes to a head when Darcy relates his plans to move to an estate he plans to purchase in Scotland, leaving her at Pemberley, with the excuse that the new estate needs too much work, too much upgrading and repairs to expect her to live there with him. She will serve as Mistress to Pemberley very well (thank you) while he is gone.
Although there is mention of some intimacies there are no graphic details. However, as others have said, this story is best read by mature audiences.
April 10, 2022
A Pleasure to Read
There have been several wonderful reviews already written for this book, and I definitely can’t do better, so I’ll keep mine short. What I will add is my own opinion that this book is truly excellent. The variation is unique, brilliantly written and a pleasure to read. I started at 4:00 a.m. when I happened to wake up too early and finished it the same evening. I couldn’t put it down. While these two beloved characters will frustrate you to no end at times, you cannot help but love them, and even cry for them.
This book will definitely go in my 2021 favorites stack, and I most highly recommend it. It will also go in my re-read pile, as I know for sure I will be reading it again.
April 9-10, 2022 - Audiobook ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Stevie Zimmerman does it again with yet another outstanding performance. One thing I noted that I don’t recall picking up so much when I read the book is that Elizabeth wasn’t very likable for quite a while in my opinion. She was especially surly and confrontational at times. It’s not a criticism, as this portrayal played exceedingly well with the storyline. Stevie simply brought it more to my attention. Highly recommend both this book and the audiobook.
There have been several wonderful reviews already written for this book, and I definitely can’t do better, so I’ll keep mine short. What I will add is my own opinion that this book is truly excellent. The variation is unique, brilliantly written and a pleasure to read. I started at 4:00 a.m. when I happened to wake up too early and finished it the same evening. I couldn’t put it down. While these two beloved characters will frustrate you to no end at times, you cannot help but love them, and even cry for them.
This book will definitely go in my 2021 favorites stack, and I most highly recommend it. It will also go in my re-read pile, as I know for sure I will be reading it again.
April 9-10, 2022 - Audiobook ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Stevie Zimmerman does it again with yet another outstanding performance. One thing I noted that I don’t recall picking up so much when I read the book is that Elizabeth wasn’t very likable for quite a while in my opinion. She was especially surly and confrontational at times. It’s not a criticism, as this portrayal played exceedingly well with the storyline. Stevie simply brought it more to my attention. Highly recommend both this book and the audiobook.
August 23, 2021
So very sad
Lizzy is not so very different than she is in P&P. She is quick to anger and holds on to her anger very hard. She is also kind, loving, intelligent and independent. She is also naive and thinks she never makes a mistake when she has decided she knows what kind of a person some one is. Lizzy does not share her feeling with anyone but Jane and really she does not share her private thoughts with anyone.
Darcy is a little different than in P&P but it’s because of some childhood trauma he suffered. He is intelligent, kind, introverted, loyal and treats people working for him with kindness and fairness. He is honorable but only in his own way, not to society’s way. He is haughty and arrogant, quick to anger. He shares his thoughts and dreams with no one.
Both Lizzy and Darcy are very proud and very prejudiced.
Darcy marries Lizzy pretty quickly, out of love and loneliness. Lizzy marries Darcy to help get Jane and Bingley together. Darcy overhears Jane and Lizzy talking the day the wedding to Lizzy and finds out Lizzy despises him. He is so very hurt and just shuts down emotionally to Lizzy.
The rest of the book is them trying to figure out what to do about such an awful marriage. The book is terribly sad from this point on. At about 80% into the story they stumble actually communicating and work to the HEA .
But it was to late for me. I quit enjoying the story under the unrelenting misery. They said things to each other to hurt the other. They both willfully took what the other said in the most negative way.
The writing was excellent. It just wasn’t my kind of story.
Lizzy is not so very different than she is in P&P. She is quick to anger and holds on to her anger very hard. She is also kind, loving, intelligent and independent. She is also naive and thinks she never makes a mistake when she has decided she knows what kind of a person some one is. Lizzy does not share her feeling with anyone but Jane and really she does not share her private thoughts with anyone.
Darcy is a little different than in P&P but it’s because of some childhood trauma he suffered. He is intelligent, kind, introverted, loyal and treats people working for him with kindness and fairness. He is honorable but only in his own way, not to society’s way. He is haughty and arrogant, quick to anger. He shares his thoughts and dreams with no one.
Both Lizzy and Darcy are very proud and very prejudiced.
Darcy marries Lizzy pretty quickly, out of love and loneliness. Lizzy marries Darcy to help get Jane and Bingley together. Darcy overhears Jane and Lizzy talking the day the wedding to Lizzy and finds out Lizzy despises him. He is so very hurt and just shuts down emotionally to Lizzy.
The rest of the book is them trying to figure out what to do about such an awful marriage. The book is terribly sad from this point on. At about 80% into the story they stumble actually communicating and work to the HEA .
But it was to late for me. I quit enjoying the story under the unrelenting misery. They said things to each other to hurt the other. They both willfully took what the other said in the most negative way.
The writing was excellent. It just wasn’t my kind of story.
April 16, 2024
After reading the paperback and then listening to the audiobook, I can't believe I haven't written a review yet.
The older I get the less I am a fan of misunderstandings, from any source, being the cause of keeping ODC from finding each others hearts.
When I first read the paperback I had a stomachache through most of the story. However, it was after listening to the audiobook I got a better understanding (haha no pun intended) of the character development. The overheard words and consequent actions of ODC were not as big a part of the story as each characters development by themselves and then together as a couple.
Yes, there is emotional angst, but its worth getting through to the wonderful ending!
The older I get the less I am a fan of misunderstandings, from any source, being the cause of keeping ODC from finding each others hearts.
When I first read the paperback I had a stomachache through most of the story. However, it was after listening to the audiobook I got a better understanding (haha no pun intended) of the character development. The overheard words and consequent actions of ODC were not as big a part of the story as each characters development by themselves and then together as a couple.
Yes, there is emotional angst, but its worth getting through to the wonderful ending!
September 14, 2021
This is a really enjoyable “early marriage” retelling of Pride and Prejudice. When Darcy finds out that Mr. Collins is going to propose to Elizabeth, he meets with Mr. Bennet and makes his own offer first. Mr. Bennet in turns counsels Elizabeth to think carefully about turning down both offers of marriage, so Elizabeth agrees to think it over. Lady Catherine appears—she does so like to be useful—but her visit to Elizabeth has the exact opposite effect than she intended. In short order, Elizabeth and Darcy are married, living at Pemberley, and trying to come to terms with their new situation. There are a lot of misunderstandings to be overcome, new characters and new backstories to explore. I liked the new sides we see of Darcy and I liked seeing Elizabeth’s feelings gradually change.
June 9, 2021
4.5 stars. With a community of good betas and editors, you wonder why I shelved this under get-an-editor, right? Especially given the amount of Regency research that clearly went into the book, showing the author is particularly gifted at finding out tidbits of useful information and adding them in to assist in improving the reading experience. Well, it's because I found many of the same type of beginner errors that I find in so many books that those betas themselves, as seasoned novelists, should know about!
As usual, I won't summarize the plot. Instead, I'll give my comments on the technical aspects of the book.
One thing this novel has going for it is its use of regular language, making it easy to read. A definite lack of big words to distract us from the flow of the novel by forcing us to look them up. Except for mordantly and mousquetaires, both of which my dictionary failed to find! Within the normal words, however, she uses American "I will" for the British "I shall" extensively. Also, the American "cotton batting" was used instead of the British "cotton wool." Misspellings such as distain for disdain and Brighten for Brighton weren't caught. Neither were non-Regency words and phrases such as scanning, "wedding breakfast," "wingback chair," heading, trousseau, staff, "taken aback," outdoors, modiste, outing, check, breathy, and "sheet music." This is a fairly normal number of non-Regency words for a JAFF book, but with the editing team this book had, it's a lot. Only one contraction was found: mustn't. Why on earth that contraction? On a similar subject, there were extra commas and missing quotation marks. Then there's the use of the verb "compromise" as if it meant "to force into marriage," which it did not. That's a myth from Regency romances. In the Regency, it meant "to settle a dispute by mutual concessions" (Johnson's Dictionary, 1806).
Some general Regency errors should have been caught also. There are no inside handles on carriage doors, so Mr. Darcy could not have easily unlatched the carriage door and bolted out. And the bare skin touching thing is only for the movies: ladies and gentlemen of the Regency wore gloves extensively. There were very rare occasions when one of them would have a bare hand, let alone both. Dancing with wives is a no-no as well. A canon error was the list of six servants where there were eleven at Longbourn (Shapard). I'm not sure a Regency character would use an American saying like "an ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure" but it had been around long enough to be used then, so I can't say it isn't possible. Similarly, the phrase "festive season" was used rather than "Christmastide." Regency hair styles did not include a chignon, which is a bun low at the back of the neck, rather, they used a bun up high at the cowlick.
There was a good deal of ON head-hopping or descriptions that just could not happen. E.g., the POV character can't see her eyes go round. He can't see she's flushed scarlet in the dark.
There are a number of redundancies, but the most obvious is Elizabeth missing specifics of Longbourn twice within a short time of one another.
The characterization was well done. Darcy's held on to his implacable resentment a proper length of time and his reveal comes within reason. There's no suspension of disbelief here. In a similar vein, Elizabeth's warmth to Darcy and confusion over his coldness continues at a reasonable pace until she can no longer bear it. The reveal is also timed well. The twist at the reveal is really well done.
Of course, the whole premise and plot are a good one and carried out effectively--until the unnecessary after-the-fact cowboy shoot-em-up at the end. I mean, really? Guns? Do we really need so many guns in a JAFF? The part about a gun accident haunting Darcy worked for characterization, but this end bit got too ridiculous and was worthy of another genre than romance. How may authors have added something unnecessary in the middle of their denouement? Too many. This author should have resisted the temptation to be counted among them. But otherwise, the story line is excellent. It draws you in and keeps you held right to the climax, where you are tense within your seat.
As mentioned before, there are quite a number of details within the novel that contribute to scene-setting that show that the author is a slave to research. Many of them were things I'd never encountered before, so they were a breath of fresh air in these JAFF novels that so often re-use ideas and history in the same ways over and over.
As for the cover of this book, it's stunning. This one will turn heads, and it looks nothing like the blow-dried polyester ones that seem to be the favourites in JAFF these days. Different is good, and this has just that right amount of different to catch the eye and make the reader want to know more. Great job to the designer.
This book is a genuine gift after years of hiatus from Jennifer Altman and it was good to get some of her art back again. She's a brilliant writer and her story line (for the most part) and especially her characterization are winners for me.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF author and some might claim my review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for the benefit of both readers and authors.
As usual, I won't summarize the plot. Instead, I'll give my comments on the technical aspects of the book.
One thing this novel has going for it is its use of regular language, making it easy to read. A definite lack of big words to distract us from the flow of the novel by forcing us to look them up. Except for mordantly and mousquetaires, both of which my dictionary failed to find! Within the normal words, however, she uses American "I will" for the British "I shall" extensively. Also, the American "cotton batting" was used instead of the British "cotton wool." Misspellings such as distain for disdain and Brighten for Brighton weren't caught. Neither were non-Regency words and phrases such as scanning, "wedding breakfast," "wingback chair," heading, trousseau, staff, "taken aback," outdoors, modiste, outing, check, breathy, and "sheet music." This is a fairly normal number of non-Regency words for a JAFF book, but with the editing team this book had, it's a lot. Only one contraction was found: mustn't. Why on earth that contraction? On a similar subject, there were extra commas and missing quotation marks. Then there's the use of the verb "compromise" as if it meant "to force into marriage," which it did not. That's a myth from Regency romances. In the Regency, it meant "to settle a dispute by mutual concessions" (Johnson's Dictionary, 1806).
Some general Regency errors should have been caught also. There are no inside handles on carriage doors, so Mr. Darcy could not have easily unlatched the carriage door and bolted out. And the bare skin touching thing is only for the movies: ladies and gentlemen of the Regency wore gloves extensively. There were very rare occasions when one of them would have a bare hand, let alone both. Dancing with wives is a no-no as well. A canon error was the list of six servants where there were eleven at Longbourn (Shapard). I'm not sure a Regency character would use an American saying like "an ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure" but it had been around long enough to be used then, so I can't say it isn't possible. Similarly, the phrase "festive season" was used rather than "Christmastide." Regency hair styles did not include a chignon, which is a bun low at the back of the neck, rather, they used a bun up high at the cowlick.
There was a good deal of ON head-hopping or descriptions that just could not happen. E.g., the POV character can't see her eyes go round. He can't see she's flushed scarlet in the dark.
There are a number of redundancies, but the most obvious is Elizabeth missing specifics of Longbourn twice within a short time of one another.
The characterization was well done. Darcy's held on to his implacable resentment a proper length of time and his reveal comes within reason. There's no suspension of disbelief here. In a similar vein, Elizabeth's warmth to Darcy and confusion over his coldness continues at a reasonable pace until she can no longer bear it. The reveal is also timed well. The twist at the reveal is really well done.
Of course, the whole premise and plot are a good one and carried out effectively--until the unnecessary after-the-fact cowboy shoot-em-up at the end. I mean, really? Guns? Do we really need so many guns in a JAFF? The part about a gun accident haunting Darcy worked for characterization, but this end bit got too ridiculous and was worthy of another genre than romance. How may authors have added something unnecessary in the middle of their denouement? Too many. This author should have resisted the temptation to be counted among them. But otherwise, the story line is excellent. It draws you in and keeps you held right to the climax, where you are tense within your seat.
As mentioned before, there are quite a number of details within the novel that contribute to scene-setting that show that the author is a slave to research. Many of them were things I'd never encountered before, so they were a breath of fresh air in these JAFF novels that so often re-use ideas and history in the same ways over and over.
As for the cover of this book, it's stunning. This one will turn heads, and it looks nothing like the blow-dried polyester ones that seem to be the favourites in JAFF these days. Different is good, and this has just that right amount of different to catch the eye and make the reader want to know more. Great job to the designer.
This book is a genuine gift after years of hiatus from Jennifer Altman and it was good to get some of her art back again. She's a brilliant writer and her story line (for the most part) and especially her characterization are winners for me.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF author and some might claim my review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for the benefit of both readers and authors.
January 8, 2023
Deep-Rooted Denial and Repressed Feelings
Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: A marriage of convenience situation where Elizabeth accepts Mr. Darcy’s proposal in order to avoid unfair gossip, to further Jane’s chances with Mr. Bingley, and, a little bit, to spite Lady Catherine. Mr. Darcy believes he is saving Elizabeth from the miserable fate of being married to an imbecile, but on his wedding day he discovers by chance what his wife truly thinks of him. How will this marriage move beyond the misunderstandings it was founded on…?
WHAT I LOVED:
- The Marriage of Convenience Scenario: I’m never tired of this scenario/trope, and I thought Jennifer Altman utilized it in a very unique way. Darcy and Elizabeth are both motivated to save others. It is the reason Mr. Darcy proposes, and one of the reasons Elizabeth ultimately accepts. And even though Mr. Darcy acts with surprising tenderness and Elizabeth quickly learns the truth about George Wickham, Ms. Altman adds a new twist to their situation that gives their marriage a most rocky start!
- Cordial and Uncomplicated: Oh, poor Mr. Darcy!! He realizes what he envisioned for his marriage will never be and learns to adjust his expectations. He know he can’t ask for more, and so he doesn’t. He denies himself from his true desires and instead represses all the affection, yearning, and love he feels for Elizabeth. Which makes her believe he does not and will not ever love her. I loved witnessing these two try to find their pace with this marriage – how they both wanted peace, and how they strived to make the other happy in any small ways they could, yet at the same time not revealing any of their deeper emotions.
- Haunted By the Past: There is some sadness in Mr. Darcy’s past that he keeps secret, but it is evident that these events have forever shaped him. I really appreciated this new layer Ms. Altman added to Mr. Darcy’s character and how it explained some of his insecurities and reserve. I also loved how she didn’t reveal it right away, and how the reader was left in the dark wondering, along with Elizabeth. This development added some new vulnerability and deep-seated emotions to Mr. Darcy’s character that I enjoyed witnessing.
- Concern, Compassion, and Deep Consideration: Even though their relationship is defined by cordiality and amity, there were many moments where both Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy revealed that they felt so much more. I loved and lived for these precious moments! How Mr. Darcy tried to give Elizabeth her independence, how he took care of Elizabeth when she is ill, and how he did things that made him uncomfortable just to make her happy. And I loved how Elizabeth discovered all his quiet admirable qualities, how she took so much pleasure in his company, and how she surprised Mr. Darcy with meaningful gestures and gifts. These scenes were beautiful and the deeper emotions behind them were palpable felt.
- Learning to Understand: The journey to love was long and leisurely pace, and I adored every minute of this journey. The sorrow, the tension, the frustration, the wanting, the fear – such a myriad of emotions. I loved how Jennifer Altman portrayed these characters – not only in their thoughts and emotions – but the believable ways they would act or react to situations.
- Lady Wheaton and Harp: Two original characters that I adored! Lady Wheaton, Mr. Darcy’s Godmother, was brilliant. I love how she befriended Elizabeth, how she was acutely perceptive, and how she wasn’t afraid to meddle or ask hard questions. And darling Harp! I loved seeing her actions in the story and how she saved the day. I also love that she is featured on the cover!
WHAT I WASN’T FOND OF:
That I didn’t read this book sooner!
CONCLUSION: Sensitive, poignant, and exquisitely developed – Faults of Understanding is everything I want in a Pride and Prejudice variation. For readers who enjoy forced-marriages/marriage of convenience scenarios, who appreciate introspective and gradual development in Mr. Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship, and who treasure hard-won and ardent romances, this is a MUST READ.
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: A marriage of convenience situation where Elizabeth accepts Mr. Darcy’s proposal in order to avoid unfair gossip, to further Jane’s chances with Mr. Bingley, and, a little bit, to spite Lady Catherine. Mr. Darcy believes he is saving Elizabeth from the miserable fate of being married to an imbecile, but on his wedding day he discovers by chance what his wife truly thinks of him. How will this marriage move beyond the misunderstandings it was founded on…?
WHAT I LOVED:
- The Marriage of Convenience Scenario: I’m never tired of this scenario/trope, and I thought Jennifer Altman utilized it in a very unique way. Darcy and Elizabeth are both motivated to save others. It is the reason Mr. Darcy proposes, and one of the reasons Elizabeth ultimately accepts. And even though Mr. Darcy acts with surprising tenderness and Elizabeth quickly learns the truth about George Wickham, Ms. Altman adds a new twist to their situation that gives their marriage a most rocky start!
- Cordial and Uncomplicated: Oh, poor Mr. Darcy!! He realizes what he envisioned for his marriage will never be and learns to adjust his expectations. He know he can’t ask for more, and so he doesn’t. He denies himself from his true desires and instead represses all the affection, yearning, and love he feels for Elizabeth. Which makes her believe he does not and will not ever love her. I loved witnessing these two try to find their pace with this marriage – how they both wanted peace, and how they strived to make the other happy in any small ways they could, yet at the same time not revealing any of their deeper emotions.
- Haunted By the Past: There is some sadness in Mr. Darcy’s past that he keeps secret, but it is evident that these events have forever shaped him. I really appreciated this new layer Ms. Altman added to Mr. Darcy’s character and how it explained some of his insecurities and reserve. I also loved how she didn’t reveal it right away, and how the reader was left in the dark wondering, along with Elizabeth. This development added some new vulnerability and deep-seated emotions to Mr. Darcy’s character that I enjoyed witnessing.
- Concern, Compassion, and Deep Consideration: Even though their relationship is defined by cordiality and amity, there were many moments where both Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy revealed that they felt so much more. I loved and lived for these precious moments! How Mr. Darcy tried to give Elizabeth her independence, how he took care of Elizabeth when she is ill, and how he did things that made him uncomfortable just to make her happy. And I loved how Elizabeth discovered all his quiet admirable qualities, how she took so much pleasure in his company, and how she surprised Mr. Darcy with meaningful gestures and gifts. These scenes were beautiful and the deeper emotions behind them were palpable felt.
- Learning to Understand: The journey to love was long and leisurely pace, and I adored every minute of this journey. The sorrow, the tension, the frustration, the wanting, the fear – such a myriad of emotions. I loved how Jennifer Altman portrayed these characters – not only in their thoughts and emotions – but the believable ways they would act or react to situations.
- Lady Wheaton and Harp: Two original characters that I adored! Lady Wheaton, Mr. Darcy’s Godmother, was brilliant. I love how she befriended Elizabeth, how she was acutely perceptive, and how she wasn’t afraid to meddle or ask hard questions. And darling Harp! I loved seeing her actions in the story and how she saved the day. I also love that she is featured on the cover!
WHAT I WASN’T FOND OF:
That I didn’t read this book sooner!
CONCLUSION: Sensitive, poignant, and exquisitely developed – Faults of Understanding is everything I want in a Pride and Prejudice variation. For readers who enjoy forced-marriages/marriage of convenience scenarios, who appreciate introspective and gradual development in Mr. Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship, and who treasure hard-won and ardent romances, this is a MUST READ.
Austenesque Reviews
February 19, 2024
2024: 4.5 stars.
Re-read in 2022. I added a star because I actually love this book 😊
Very good variation. I didn’t give it 5 stars because the happy ending was way too long, and full of useless plot twists that didn’t bring anything to the relationship between ODC.
A few Americanisms, for example the necessity to keep a pistol in the phaeton, and the obsession with Christmas, the festive season etc.
Re-read in 2022. I added a star because I actually love this book 😊
Very good variation. I didn’t give it 5 stars because the happy ending was way too long, and full of useless plot twists that didn’t bring anything to the relationship between ODC.
A few Americanisms, for example the necessity to keep a pistol in the phaeton, and the obsession with Christmas, the festive season etc.
May 22, 2021
A beautifully-written examination of the evils of eavesdropping and the perils of pig-headed thinking. When 1/3 of the way through the story, I wanted to smack Darcy. A little later, I pitied him and wanted to smack Lizzy!. Then, I wanted to hug them both. An emotional roller coaster, which, in my opinion, is lots of fun in P&P fan fiction.
Early in the book, the author has Mary discussing the distinction between vanity and pride, “Pride related more to our opinions of ourselves, whereas vanity reflected what we would have others think of us.” An excellent description of our couple. Of course, getting our dear couple past their vanity and pride and of one mind in an alternate universe is never simple. I don’t believe in spoilers, but in this story, we have love, scorn, humiliation, misunderstandings, dislike, passion, romance, anger, compassion, misunderstandings, sorrow, romance, mysteries, grief, villains, vanity, pride, misunderstandings, and one of the best love letters I’ve read. Simplified, Elizabeth learns that actions speak louder than words and Darcy learns to express himself in words.
Lovely, Austenesque writing style and good editing make this book a joy to read as Darcy and Elizabeth find “perfect understanding”. I received an ARC copy of this story with no obligation on my part.
Cheryl K.
CEK on Amazon
Early in the book, the author has Mary discussing the distinction between vanity and pride, “Pride related more to our opinions of ourselves, whereas vanity reflected what we would have others think of us.” An excellent description of our couple. Of course, getting our dear couple past their vanity and pride and of one mind in an alternate universe is never simple. I don’t believe in spoilers, but in this story, we have love, scorn, humiliation, misunderstandings, dislike, passion, romance, anger, compassion, misunderstandings, sorrow, romance, mysteries, grief, villains, vanity, pride, misunderstandings, and one of the best love letters I’ve read. Simplified, Elizabeth learns that actions speak louder than words and Darcy learns to express himself in words.
Lovely, Austenesque writing style and good editing make this book a joy to read as Darcy and Elizabeth find “perfect understanding”. I received an ARC copy of this story with no obligation on my part.
Cheryl K.
CEK on Amazon
June 1, 2021
Good story, Heartfelt and Romantic
There was a great deal of sensibility here, even if, at times it felt a bit lacking in sense. There were overlong periods of misunderstanding, hence the very appropriate title of the book. Even still, and with great expectations of the self-enforced angst, what bothered me most was the immature voice of this Elizabeth, and to a lesser but certain extent, Darcy. But, the plot was creative. Three and a half, raised to four, because some have not read so many with this amount of prolonged angst, and they will enjoy the suffering, no doubt.
There was a great deal of sensibility here, even if, at times it felt a bit lacking in sense. There were overlong periods of misunderstanding, hence the very appropriate title of the book. Even still, and with great expectations of the self-enforced angst, what bothered me most was the immature voice of this Elizabeth, and to a lesser but certain extent, Darcy. But, the plot was creative. Three and a half, raised to four, because some have not read so many with this amount of prolonged angst, and they will enjoy the suffering, no doubt.
December 28, 2021
This Pride and Prejudice variation has Fitzwilliam Darcy proposing to Elizabeth Bennet to rescue her from her cousin, William Collins. He has feelings for her that he doesn't quite understand himself, but believes that she at least likes him until he overhears part of conversation between his bride and her sister on their wedding day. This action creates a snowball of misunderstandings to epic proportions. This story is accurately named. Our dear couple must come to terms with their own thoughts and feelings and they must COMMUNICATE to find their happily ever after.
April 27, 2022
Wonderful story. Beautifully done.
April 1, 2025
reread, maybe 3rd or 4th time now?
I loved this. Your heart will break as Darcy's backstory unfolds. If only he were more communicative and yet Elizabeth would not yet have been mature enough for it to have made a difference at the start of the story. She is one stubborn girl and needs to be hit over the head with a sledgehammer to recognize the truth while Darcy requires only some observation and a little self-reflection. The difference between an indulged, sheltered who still thinks of the world in black and white with an arrogant belief in her own superior judgment girl of 20, versus a man who has lived through many trials, losses, betrayals and heavy responsibility of 28. We do see Elizabeth as she matures and Darcy's emotional damage begin to heal in this story, but my goodness it is not an easy journey for ODC.
I loved this. Your heart will break as Darcy's backstory unfolds. If only he were more communicative and yet Elizabeth would not yet have been mature enough for it to have made a difference at the start of the story. She is one stubborn girl and needs to be hit over the head with a sledgehammer to recognize the truth while Darcy requires only some observation and a little self-reflection. The difference between an indulged, sheltered who still thinks of the world in black and white with an arrogant belief in her own superior judgment girl of 20, versus a man who has lived through many trials, losses, betrayals and heavy responsibility of 28. We do see Elizabeth as she matures and Darcy's emotional damage begin to heal in this story, but my goodness it is not an easy journey for ODC.
June 9, 2021
I have read several hundred versions of Pride and Prejudice over the years and this type of JAFF is probably my favorite. Elizabeth explains it in the book by saying their hearts connected immediately upon their acquaintance, but their minds and pride refused to accept what they were feeling and fought hard against it.
Darcy determines he must rescue Elizabeth from a life as Mr.Collins wife by marrying her himself. Elizabeth is still adamantly opposed to him due to his comments at the initial assembly and treatment of Wickham. However, per Mr. Bennet’s request, she is giving it serious consideration before giving Mr. Darcy her answer. In steps Lady Catherine de Bourgh in her attempt to prevent her accepting Darcy, but this just pushes Elizabeth in a heat of anger to be contrary to Lady Catherine and say she will accept him. Unfortunately or fortunately, Darcy overhears her declaration and they are engaged, even though Elizabeth is still uncertain. After the wedding Darcy overhears a conversation between Elizabeth and Jane where Jane categorically states Elizabeth married him despite her serious dislike of him. His demeanor towards Elizabeth changes, and she now sees he is unhappy in her presence. This sets up the scenario of the forced marriage, both believing the other unwilling and unhappy. But, are they really?
This then is my preference for this type of story - much of what happens then is contained in the thoughts and feelings of our dear couple. They believe their growing feelings for the other are unrequited. They misinterpret the actions and statements of each other, and their insecurities keep them from resolving their differences. At the same time they find their feelings of love and respect continue to grow. Will they ever resolve this? Of course, this is JAFF and Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth always have a happy ending.
The main characters are true to Austen. We get some new, creative ideas of why Darcy is as he appears, stiff, formal and condescending. We see Elizabeth just as spirited, stubborn and outspoken as always. Darcy’s family are kind, Lady Catherine imperious, Wickham greedy, Lydia silly, etc. A couple of added characters give us a way to resolution and a couple help demonstrate the true characters of ODC. There is not a lot of action, as most of the story takes place within the minds of Darcy and Elizabeth, but I love this kind of action. I shed a few tears and shared joy in the resolution of their differences and in the other characters lives.
All in all, my 5 star type of satisfying JAFF. And, no typos or mistakes to distract me. This is definitely one I will read again. I hope it comes out in audiobook format with a good reader so I can enjoy it that way, as well.
Darcy determines he must rescue Elizabeth from a life as Mr.Collins wife by marrying her himself. Elizabeth is still adamantly opposed to him due to his comments at the initial assembly and treatment of Wickham. However, per Mr. Bennet’s request, she is giving it serious consideration before giving Mr. Darcy her answer. In steps Lady Catherine de Bourgh in her attempt to prevent her accepting Darcy, but this just pushes Elizabeth in a heat of anger to be contrary to Lady Catherine and say she will accept him. Unfortunately or fortunately, Darcy overhears her declaration and they are engaged, even though Elizabeth is still uncertain. After the wedding Darcy overhears a conversation between Elizabeth and Jane where Jane categorically states Elizabeth married him despite her serious dislike of him. His demeanor towards Elizabeth changes, and she now sees he is unhappy in her presence. This sets up the scenario of the forced marriage, both believing the other unwilling and unhappy. But, are they really?
This then is my preference for this type of story - much of what happens then is contained in the thoughts and feelings of our dear couple. They believe their growing feelings for the other are unrequited. They misinterpret the actions and statements of each other, and their insecurities keep them from resolving their differences. At the same time they find their feelings of love and respect continue to grow. Will they ever resolve this? Of course, this is JAFF and Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth always have a happy ending.
The main characters are true to Austen. We get some new, creative ideas of why Darcy is as he appears, stiff, formal and condescending. We see Elizabeth just as spirited, stubborn and outspoken as always. Darcy’s family are kind, Lady Catherine imperious, Wickham greedy, Lydia silly, etc. A couple of added characters give us a way to resolution and a couple help demonstrate the true characters of ODC. There is not a lot of action, as most of the story takes place within the minds of Darcy and Elizabeth, but I love this kind of action. I shed a few tears and shared joy in the resolution of their differences and in the other characters lives.
All in all, my 5 star type of satisfying JAFF. And, no typos or mistakes to distract me. This is definitely one I will read again. I hope it comes out in audiobook format with a good reader so I can enjoy it that way, as well.
June 25, 2021
Avid Reader
One of the best P&P variations to date! Darcy was in so much emotional pain, and his relationship with Wickham was so twisted going back to a traumatic incident that occurred when he was 10 years old. His marriage to Elizabeth seemed to drown him in misery when he overheard the conversation between Elizabeth and Jane. He discovered that Elizabeth didn't like him. This on his wedding day. As a result, he didn't consummate his marriage, not did he introduce Elizabeth to any of his relatives! Lady Catherine was the one who had forced Elizabeth 's hand when it came to marrying Darcy. Darcy definitely didn't want Collins to have Elizabeth! Elizabeth gets Darcy to take her to Briarwood, the home of Lord and Lady Matlock and the place where Darcy 's life changed forever. Elizabeth dances the waltz with Darcy twice and gets suck during the dinner because she is allergic to shellfish. Darcy 's godmother tells him that Elizabeth is not indifferent to him, and he realizes that he is in love with her. Elizabeth and Georgina have met become excellent friends, and Georgina has confessed what happened with Wickham. As Darcy goes back and forth about what he wants to do about Elizabeth, she falls in love with him. Bingley and Jane get engaged and plan to marry in June. Lydia goes to Brighton against Darcy and Elizabeth 's wishes. Darcy finally reveals his guilt, shame, and pain to Elizabeth 80% through the book before they have a final showdown with Wickham. They have their HEA, but it's a long fight!
One of the best P&P variations to date! Darcy was in so much emotional pain, and his relationship with Wickham was so twisted going back to a traumatic incident that occurred when he was 10 years old. His marriage to Elizabeth seemed to drown him in misery when he overheard the conversation between Elizabeth and Jane. He discovered that Elizabeth didn't like him. This on his wedding day. As a result, he didn't consummate his marriage, not did he introduce Elizabeth to any of his relatives! Lady Catherine was the one who had forced Elizabeth 's hand when it came to marrying Darcy. Darcy definitely didn't want Collins to have Elizabeth! Elizabeth gets Darcy to take her to Briarwood, the home of Lord and Lady Matlock and the place where Darcy 's life changed forever. Elizabeth dances the waltz with Darcy twice and gets suck during the dinner because she is allergic to shellfish. Darcy 's godmother tells him that Elizabeth is not indifferent to him, and he realizes that he is in love with her. Elizabeth and Georgina have met become excellent friends, and Georgina has confessed what happened with Wickham. As Darcy goes back and forth about what he wants to do about Elizabeth, she falls in love with him. Bingley and Jane get engaged and plan to marry in June. Lydia goes to Brighton against Darcy and Elizabeth 's wishes. Darcy finally reveals his guilt, shame, and pain to Elizabeth 80% through the book before they have a final showdown with Wickham. They have their HEA, but it's a long fight!
April 2, 2025
This is longer than I generally like but I could not put it down.
Rereading: Still love it.
Rereading: Still love it.
August 31, 2024
Status: Read August 13-30, 2024 via audible edition
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐½
Edition Read:
Faults of Understanding: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by Jennifer Altman, Stevie Zimmerman (Narrator)
Audible Audio, Unabridged, 13 pages
Published March 22, 2022 by Tantor Audio (first published March 27, 2021)
ASIN: B09VHZZPG2
[ audible plus catalog ]
"I have faults enough, but they are not, I hope, of understanding." -Mr. Darcy, Pride and Prejudice
When Fitzwilliam Darcy makes an impetuous offer of marriage to Miss Elizabeth Bennet, he is convinced they have as good a chance as any for a harmonious life together. That is, until an overheard conversation changes everything, and Darcy realizes he is now joined in perpetuity to a woman who loathes the very sight of him.
Elizabeth Bennet's expectations for matrimonial accord were never very high, having accepted Mr. Darcy's proposal in a fit of pique, not love. Still, she is determined to make the best of her situation, despite having tied herself to such an arrogant, disagreeable man.
But life at Pemberley is not at all what she imagined, and Elizabeth soon finds herself with more questions than answers about the enigmatic gentleman she agreed to wed.
Trapped in a marriage founded on misunderstandings, Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth Darcy struggle with deepening attraction while confronting self-doubt and old betrayals. But is love enough to heal the wounds of the past? What will it take for two people bound by duty to find their way home to one another?
Listening Length: 12 hours and 55 minutes
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐½
Edition Read:
Faults of Understanding: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by Jennifer Altman, Stevie Zimmerman (Narrator)
Audible Audio, Unabridged, 13 pages
Published March 22, 2022 by Tantor Audio (first published March 27, 2021)
ASIN: B09VHZZPG2
[ audible plus catalog ]
"I have faults enough, but they are not, I hope, of understanding." -Mr. Darcy, Pride and Prejudice
When Fitzwilliam Darcy makes an impetuous offer of marriage to Miss Elizabeth Bennet, he is convinced they have as good a chance as any for a harmonious life together. That is, until an overheard conversation changes everything, and Darcy realizes he is now joined in perpetuity to a woman who loathes the very sight of him.
Elizabeth Bennet's expectations for matrimonial accord were never very high, having accepted Mr. Darcy's proposal in a fit of pique, not love. Still, she is determined to make the best of her situation, despite having tied herself to such an arrogant, disagreeable man.
But life at Pemberley is not at all what she imagined, and Elizabeth soon finds herself with more questions than answers about the enigmatic gentleman she agreed to wed.
Trapped in a marriage founded on misunderstandings, Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth Darcy struggle with deepening attraction while confronting self-doubt and old betrayals. But is love enough to heal the wounds of the past? What will it take for two people bound by duty to find their way home to one another?
Listening Length: 12 hours and 55 minutes
July 23, 2021
4.5 * I approached Jennifer Altman's novel with caution because I am not a fan of variations the main motive of which is misunderstanding between the ODC. Because of this misunderstanding, the heroes of such books often do not look very smart and this is a trait that I cannot accept. A pleasant surprise awaited me. I liked the book. The plot is well built, the actions and behavior of the ODC are believable, and the absence of super-dramatic scenes (except for the last 10% -15% of the book) with loud scandals, tantrums, fights, etc., for me in this book was a big plus. Sometimes it seemed to me that the novel sorts out a little with melodrama, so I removed half of the star. But still, calm, worthy reading
January 21, 2024
A very good 4.5* read
This was a very enjoyable story which successfully relied on the writers skill rather than too many frills to move the plot forward. The cast list is small with the overwhelming majority of the story spent with Elizabeth and Darcy.
So why not 5*?
Firstly the book is a little too long. I very much appreciated the slow journey to understanding of their own feelings and the other party’s but I think it would have been improved by tightening it just a little.
Secondly there is a plot hook based on the consumption of sea food which given the geography and food storage of the time seemed unlikely. The plot point was excellent and well written but it might have been better to use a different vehicle.
There were a few typos and missed words which need correcting but these were minimal.
All told it was an excellent story which I would heartily recommend.
This was a very enjoyable story which successfully relied on the writers skill rather than too many frills to move the plot forward. The cast list is small with the overwhelming majority of the story spent with Elizabeth and Darcy.
So why not 5*?
Firstly the book is a little too long. I very much appreciated the slow journey to understanding of their own feelings and the other party’s but I think it would have been improved by tightening it just a little.
Secondly there is a plot hook based on the consumption of sea food which given the geography and food storage of the time seemed unlikely. The plot point was excellent and well written but it might have been better to use a different vehicle.
There were a few typos and missed words which need correcting but these were minimal.
All told it was an excellent story which I would heartily recommend.
June 4, 2021
A joy to read
It's so satisfying to read a well written book, and to wish, at the end, that it was longer. As in the original P&P, Darcy insults Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly, but then, immediately and reluctantly, starts to develop admiration for her. When he learns that Mr Collins is about to propose marriage to Elizabeth, he's appalled, and makes a rash decision to offer for her himself. Elizabeth, of course, doesn't like either man, but is persuaded by her father to choose one, as her future marital prospects are not that great. She marries Darcy, who is convinced that Elizabeth has some feelings for him, until he overhears her talking to Jane after the ceremony, and discovers that Elizabeth despises him. Darcy is deeply hurt, and decides that theirs will be strictly a marriage of convenience with no intimacy.
I want to make clear that I recommend this book highly. It's quality writing, and the story is skillfully told so as to draw you in and hold your interest. This is a rather sad tale, with a lot of poignancy, heartbreak, and misunderstandings. Both Elizabeth and Darcy are unhappy for a large portion of the story, and their road to recovery is a heartwarming tale that will affect you deeply.
However, I had to deduct a star for the annoyance of people acting like idiots. Elizabeth and Darcy spend the first five months of their marriage without any intimacy, and without once trying to sit down with one another and discussing their issues. I like to think that these two characters have better than average intelligence, that Elizabeth is courageous and forthright, that Darcy is used to being in charge and doesn't shy away from difficulties. Instead, in this version, it never occurs to them, even after living together for that length of time, to demand something better, something more normal. It's disappointing that they're both such blockheads.
Nonetheless, these blockheads are featured in a story that is lovely and compelling. Their road to HEA may be frustrating, but it's so well done that I can't help but encourage you to read it. It's well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
It's so satisfying to read a well written book, and to wish, at the end, that it was longer. As in the original P&P, Darcy insults Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly, but then, immediately and reluctantly, starts to develop admiration for her. When he learns that Mr Collins is about to propose marriage to Elizabeth, he's appalled, and makes a rash decision to offer for her himself. Elizabeth, of course, doesn't like either man, but is persuaded by her father to choose one, as her future marital prospects are not that great. She marries Darcy, who is convinced that Elizabeth has some feelings for him, until he overhears her talking to Jane after the ceremony, and discovers that Elizabeth despises him. Darcy is deeply hurt, and decides that theirs will be strictly a marriage of convenience with no intimacy.
I want to make clear that I recommend this book highly. It's quality writing, and the story is skillfully told so as to draw you in and hold your interest. This is a rather sad tale, with a lot of poignancy, heartbreak, and misunderstandings. Both Elizabeth and Darcy are unhappy for a large portion of the story, and their road to recovery is a heartwarming tale that will affect you deeply.
However, I had to deduct a star for the annoyance of people acting like idiots. Elizabeth and Darcy spend the first five months of their marriage without any intimacy, and without once trying to sit down with one another and discussing their issues. I like to think that these two characters have better than average intelligence, that Elizabeth is courageous and forthright, that Darcy is used to being in charge and doesn't shy away from difficulties. Instead, in this version, it never occurs to them, even after living together for that length of time, to demand something better, something more normal. It's disappointing that they're both such blockheads.
Nonetheless, these blockheads are featured in a story that is lovely and compelling. Their road to HEA may be frustrating, but it's so well done that I can't help but encourage you to read it. It's well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
June 3, 2021
Lady Catherine is to blame
Darcy falls in love with Miss Elizabeth while visiting netherfield and approaches Mr. Bennet to request her hand in marriage fearing Mr. Collins will propose before he can make his offer.
Mr. Bennet expresses his desire that Elizabeth accept Mr. Darcy’s offer as this may be the last offer of marriage she may receive and it will affect all her sister’s prospects. News of the Bingley’s leaving Netherfield, along with her Mother’s nerves and finally Lady Catherine’s awful demands have Elizabeth agreeing to the marriage.
Darcy married Elizabeth and before they can even leave Longbourn he overhears that Elizabeth dislikes him. Darcy takes Elizabeth to Pemberley to begin what he feels will be a horrible existence knowing that the love of his life dislikes him. Elizabeth begins to care for Darcy and learns more about the man she married and fears he will never consummate the marriage. ODC learns more about the person they married and finally break down the walls they have formed around their hearts.
The book held my interest as there was more to Darcy’s story than in canon, and while I did not like that it took so long for ODC to come together we are left with a happy ending. I just wish there would be more story after.
Darcy falls in love with Miss Elizabeth while visiting netherfield and approaches Mr. Bennet to request her hand in marriage fearing Mr. Collins will propose before he can make his offer.
Mr. Bennet expresses his desire that Elizabeth accept Mr. Darcy’s offer as this may be the last offer of marriage she may receive and it will affect all her sister’s prospects. News of the Bingley’s leaving Netherfield, along with her Mother’s nerves and finally Lady Catherine’s awful demands have Elizabeth agreeing to the marriage.
Darcy married Elizabeth and before they can even leave Longbourn he overhears that Elizabeth dislikes him. Darcy takes Elizabeth to Pemberley to begin what he feels will be a horrible existence knowing that the love of his life dislikes him. Elizabeth begins to care for Darcy and learns more about the man she married and fears he will never consummate the marriage. ODC learns more about the person they married and finally break down the walls they have formed around their hearts.
The book held my interest as there was more to Darcy’s story than in canon, and while I did not like that it took so long for ODC to come together we are left with a happy ending. I just wish there would be more story after.
May 28, 2021
A thoroughly enjoyable book - I found it hard to put down from the start and was sorry when I finished it.
The author knows how to draw the reader in and painted a very believable picture of E & D - flawed and sometimes irritating people but in the end very likeable and far more true to the period in behaviour and values than many books of this genre.
I enjoyed Ms Altman’s previous book “To Conquer Pride” and was very pleased to be sent an early copy of this one.
The author knows how to draw the reader in and painted a very believable picture of E & D - flawed and sometimes irritating people but in the end very likeable and far more true to the period in behaviour and values than many books of this genre.
I enjoyed Ms Altman’s previous book “To Conquer Pride” and was very pleased to be sent an early copy of this one.
June 19, 2024
I liked this- fairly traditional. Although, as the title alludes, there are faults in understanding, SO. Many. Misunderstandings. I struggle with misunderstandings in ANY book, when we/the reader, from a 3rd person omniscient perspective know the whole story ... it can be super frustrating. When it's a 1st person, and we only know what that character knows, we feel more like that characters. Knowing what both Darcy and Elizabeth are thinking, how they have both overheard things, misunderstood things, continue on under altered perceptions continuing the strain on the relationship. And this went on for SO long.
I struggled at the start (sometimes happens, especially in audio if I get at all distracted). I had the text through KindleUnlimited, and the audio was available on Hoopla. I had to stop, and restart, and go to the text, as I got a little confused.
There was a prologue ( 9 December 1811) and then we went BACK for chapter 1 (26 Nov 1811) ... Chapter 2 & Chapter 3 follow chronologically, and then as Chapter 4 starts, we're back to the prologue. I often struggle with this little "future peek" and then the "a few weeks earlier" build up to that moment we've already seen. It's a technique used a lot in books and movies ... and I dislike it almost every time. Here also, I wasn't totally sold on Elizabeth agreeing to marry Darcy ... even for Jane's sake (which was a gamble, not even a sure thing). And until I wrote this review, I didn't realize just how quickly it had all happened. From a completely unexpected proposal to a marriage, in 14 days?
While I was listening/reading this book, I was watching the Bridgerton prequel "Queen Charlotte" ... and felt some similarities. In the quick marriage between characters that didn't really know each other. The groom not consummating the marriage, a bit of a relief, but also a question to the poor bride. The new wife being kept in comfort, and in both cases ... might they not be relieved? Wouldn't this actually be more than they could have hoped for? No mistreatment, living in wealth and comfort, not having to deal with a man they don't love/don't really know? Just having some personal thoughts on it ...
It was interesting to get more background on Darcy (different background, being a second son) and a more personal look into his POV. Some shifts to the Bingley/Jane narrative, and the Lydia/Wickham one. Mary was mentioned a few times, Kitty was almost non-existent. There was a dog who played a much larger roll than Kitty ;)
Words - dais was in there three times (pronounced the usual, with long A). Deign once. A couple scowls and smirks. Lots of "pray" (60 times). Mordantly: having or showing a sharp or critical quality; biting.
I struggled at the start (sometimes happens, especially in audio if I get at all distracted). I had the text through KindleUnlimited, and the audio was available on Hoopla. I had to stop, and restart, and go to the text, as I got a little confused.
There was a prologue ( 9 December 1811) and then we went BACK for chapter 1 (26 Nov 1811) ... Chapter 2 & Chapter 3 follow chronologically, and then as Chapter 4 starts, we're back to the prologue. I often struggle with this little "future peek" and then the "a few weeks earlier" build up to that moment we've already seen. It's a technique used a lot in books and movies ... and I dislike it almost every time. Here also, I wasn't totally sold on Elizabeth agreeing to marry Darcy ... even for Jane's sake (which was a gamble, not even a sure thing). And until I wrote this review, I didn't realize just how quickly it had all happened. From a completely unexpected proposal to a marriage, in 14 days?
While I was listening/reading this book, I was watching the Bridgerton prequel "Queen Charlotte" ... and felt some similarities. In the quick marriage between characters that didn't really know each other. The groom not consummating the marriage, a bit of a relief, but also a question to the poor bride. The new wife being kept in comfort, and in both cases ... might they not be relieved? Wouldn't this actually be more than they could have hoped for? No mistreatment, living in wealth and comfort, not having to deal with a man they don't love/don't really know? Just having some personal thoughts on it ...
It was interesting to get more background on Darcy (different background, being a second son) and a more personal look into his POV. Some shifts to the Bingley/Jane narrative, and the Lydia/Wickham one. Mary was mentioned a few times, Kitty was almost non-existent. There was a dog who played a much larger roll than Kitty ;)
Words - dais was in there three times (pronounced the usual, with long A). Deign once. A couple scowls and smirks. Lots of "pray" (60 times). Mordantly: having or showing a sharp or critical quality; biting.
May 29, 2021
Familiar plot was disappointing …
… and the book is still very good.
The whole forced/sudden marriage trope has been done and done again and again, and that was disappointing. Altman covers familiar territory with out anything we haven’t been through with ODC before. However, is a subplot in the story that was new to me.
And. Altman is a good writer and I enjoy the time she takes building the story. She is a patient writer and I appreciate how she adds layers to the story as she builds toward the end. In other words- I’ve read so many horrible books recently I REALLY appreciate that she is a competent writer with a good sense of pace and ability to craft a novel.
And one other thing- *NOT* singular to this book- can we cut back on the food descriptions (made me nauseous); The dress descriptions? (I don’t GAF what anyone is wearing beyond “a lovely white dress.”) The household furniture and interior design descriptions? (Just the bare minimum - I don’t care what the wall paper or furniture looks like, I’d like to focus on the things that are mammals (or other life forms) in the room with wallpaper and furniture.)
** I rate most books three stars. Four or five stars means I felt the book was exceptional within the genre.
… and the book is still very good.
The whole forced/sudden marriage trope has been done and done again and again, and that was disappointing. Altman covers familiar territory with out anything we haven’t been through with ODC before. However, is a subplot in the story that was new to me.
And. Altman is a good writer and I enjoy the time she takes building the story. She is a patient writer and I appreciate how she adds layers to the story as she builds toward the end. In other words- I’ve read so many horrible books recently I REALLY appreciate that she is a competent writer with a good sense of pace and ability to craft a novel.
And one other thing- *NOT* singular to this book- can we cut back on the food descriptions (made me nauseous); The dress descriptions? (I don’t GAF what anyone is wearing beyond “a lovely white dress.”) The household furniture and interior design descriptions? (Just the bare minimum - I don’t care what the wall paper or furniture looks like, I’d like to focus on the things that are mammals (or other life forms) in the room with wallpaper and furniture.)
** I rate most books three stars. Four or five stars means I felt the book was exceptional within the genre.
June 10, 2021
Believable characters.
Just the right mixture of angst, sass, romance, humor and suspense. Nothing over the top except for misunderstandings. Loved Lady Wheaton.
Just the right mixture of angst, sass, romance, humor and suspense. Nothing over the top except for misunderstandings. Loved Lady Wheaton.
May 28, 2021
Darcy definitely needs a good dose of Elizabeth Bennet.
I have been awaiting this book—Jennifer Altman's second Pride and Prejudice variation—since I finished her first, To Conquer Pride, back in 2018.
My wait may have been three years or there about but having just devoured Faults of Understanding—a very long book—I can truthfully say that it was definitely worth the wait.
The novel encompasses the first 9 months following the marriage of Mr Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. We have an unhappy bride, though this is not a forced marriage scenario, and a groom who is very satisfied to have Elizabeth as his wife.
Unfortunately, things unravel before the couple even leave their wedding breakfast and Darcy brings his new bride home to Pemberley and then he proceeds to rather more than less, exclude her from his life.
Jennifer's writing enabled me to actually afeel the tension
that exists between the couple over the first few weeks of their half marriage. Elizabeth eventually settles into a routine and Darcy's anger abates to the point where he begins to thaw and with promptings from Elizabeth—who is beginning to run mad because she cannot bear being idle a moment longer.—he begins to draw her along with him as he goes about the business of running a vast estate.
As the story moves towards its very satisfying conclusion, I became aware that there is much more to Darcy's dislike of interacting with people and his general taciturnity...the master of Pemberley is a man with a terrible burden weighing him down.
Elizabeth, of course comes to realise that her husband should not be defined by one insulting, overheard remark and she eventually finds out what has been preventing him from enjoying his life.
Faults of Understanding is a long journey that starts with two characters mired in sadness and ill feeling and ends with great happiness. This is, of course, a much used and much loved scenario with Pride and Prejudice variations, but Jennifer's Lizzy and Darcy seem to have more depth of feeling than so many other portrayals of them have, especially Darcy.
These two much loved characters are joined by a mostly full cast of other much loved or love to hate persons from P&P along with a few new faces.
I thoroughly recommend this book as a brilliant read. This review is my true opinion and is written following my reading of an advance copy given to me by the author.
I have been awaiting this book—Jennifer Altman's second Pride and Prejudice variation—since I finished her first, To Conquer Pride, back in 2018.
My wait may have been three years or there about but having just devoured Faults of Understanding—a very long book—I can truthfully say that it was definitely worth the wait.
The novel encompasses the first 9 months following the marriage of Mr Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. We have an unhappy bride, though this is not a forced marriage scenario, and a groom who is very satisfied to have Elizabeth as his wife.
Unfortunately, things unravel before the couple even leave their wedding breakfast and Darcy brings his new bride home to Pemberley and then he proceeds to rather more than less, exclude her from his life.
Jennifer's writing enabled me to actually afeel the tension
that exists between the couple over the first few weeks of their half marriage. Elizabeth eventually settles into a routine and Darcy's anger abates to the point where he begins to thaw and with promptings from Elizabeth—who is beginning to run mad because she cannot bear being idle a moment longer.—he begins to draw her along with him as he goes about the business of running a vast estate.
As the story moves towards its very satisfying conclusion, I became aware that there is much more to Darcy's dislike of interacting with people and his general taciturnity...the master of Pemberley is a man with a terrible burden weighing him down.
Elizabeth, of course comes to realise that her husband should not be defined by one insulting, overheard remark and she eventually finds out what has been preventing him from enjoying his life.
Faults of Understanding is a long journey that starts with two characters mired in sadness and ill feeling and ends with great happiness. This is, of course, a much used and much loved scenario with Pride and Prejudice variations, but Jennifer's Lizzy and Darcy seem to have more depth of feeling than so many other portrayals of them have, especially Darcy.
These two much loved characters are joined by a mostly full cast of other much loved or love to hate persons from P&P along with a few new faces.
I thoroughly recommend this book as a brilliant read. This review is my true opinion and is written following my reading of an advance copy given to me by the author.
May 28, 2021
I received an ARC of Faults of Understanding to review in exchange for my honest comments. This book is the second release from Jennifer Altman and is again a variation of Pride and Prejudice.
In this book, we have a brief introduction explaining how the marriage between Elizabeth and Darcy occurs but it is primarily concerned with following the couple on their journey once the marriage has taken place. As usual, our couple must overcome a variety of challenges, and occasionally you do wish that they would just talk to each other however that is a feeling I hold with all Pride and Prejudice variations and not limited to this book.
The author has skillfully woven in a backstory involving Darcy’s childhood to add an element of mystery which helped to keep the book moving. This was supported by the portrayal of the friendship between Elizabeth and Georgiana and I felt that the author captured Georgiana particularly well.
The second book for an author can be tricky, when the first has been successful, however with Faults of Understanding, Jennifer Altman has shown that she is a talented writer of Jane Austen Variations and I look forward to reading her next one (as well as re-reading this one).
In this book, we have a brief introduction explaining how the marriage between Elizabeth and Darcy occurs but it is primarily concerned with following the couple on their journey once the marriage has taken place. As usual, our couple must overcome a variety of challenges, and occasionally you do wish that they would just talk to each other however that is a feeling I hold with all Pride and Prejudice variations and not limited to this book.
The author has skillfully woven in a backstory involving Darcy’s childhood to add an element of mystery which helped to keep the book moving. This was supported by the portrayal of the friendship between Elizabeth and Georgiana and I felt that the author captured Georgiana particularly well.
The second book for an author can be tricky, when the first has been successful, however with Faults of Understanding, Jennifer Altman has shown that she is a talented writer of Jane Austen Variations and I look forward to reading her next one (as well as re-reading this one).
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