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A Case of Some Delicacy
A secret alliance grows from an unwelcomed olive branch…
When rumours of Jane Bennet’s impending betrothal to Mr. Collins begin spreading at the Meryton Assembly, Elizabeth Bennet vows to save her dearest sister’s happiness from being sacrificed in marriage. She finds an unlikely ally in Mr Darcy, the taciturn man whose heroics on the cricket field have made him the target for Lydia’s affections.
Overhearing a heated exchange between Elizabeth and Mr Bennet, Darcy is stunned not only by her devotion to her sister, but also by her defiant words to her father. An inexplicable desire to help Elizabeth draws Darcy into the match-breaking scheme, despite knowing that he should want nothing to do with a family like the Bennets.
As the new allies work together, they begin to understand and admire each other. But they must navigate a complicated web of sisters, parents, friends, cousins, aunts, and new acquaintances, all of whom seem contrary to being manipulated. A few of them may even be attempting their own manipulations and romantic schemes. Eavesdropping and jealousy abound, cricket balls go astray, and love blooms in spite of Mrs. Bennet’s mismatched matchmaking.
This humorous Pride and Prejudice re-imagining is novel length and pays homage to the wit of Jane Austen.
When rumours of Jane Bennet’s impending betrothal to Mr. Collins begin spreading at the Meryton Assembly, Elizabeth Bennet vows to save her dearest sister’s happiness from being sacrificed in marriage. She finds an unlikely ally in Mr Darcy, the taciturn man whose heroics on the cricket field have made him the target for Lydia’s affections.
Overhearing a heated exchange between Elizabeth and Mr Bennet, Darcy is stunned not only by her devotion to her sister, but also by her defiant words to her father. An inexplicable desire to help Elizabeth draws Darcy into the match-breaking scheme, despite knowing that he should want nothing to do with a family like the Bennets.
As the new allies work together, they begin to understand and admire each other. But they must navigate a complicated web of sisters, parents, friends, cousins, aunts, and new acquaintances, all of whom seem contrary to being manipulated. A few of them may even be attempting their own manipulations and romantic schemes. Eavesdropping and jealousy abound, cricket balls go astray, and love blooms in spite of Mrs. Bennet’s mismatched matchmaking.
This humorous Pride and Prejudice re-imagining is novel length and pays homage to the wit of Jane Austen.
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3 books51 followersKC Kahler lives in northeastern Pennsylvania and works in online education, after having dabbled in sandwich making, bug collecting, and web development. She discovered Jane Austen fan fiction in 2008 and soon began dabbling in writing her own.
KC blogs about Austen and other pop culture topics. In 2015 and 2017 her popular Austen + The Onion Headlines meme was featured in The Atlantic, Flavorwire, and AV Club. In 2017, she made the requisite pilgrimage to Jane Austen country, where she took the waters in Bath, walked the lanes of Steventon, didn’t fall off the cobb in Lyme Regis, and stood awestruck in Chawton.
KC’s first novel, Boots & Backpacks, was published in 2014. Her second, A Case of Some Delicacy, will be released in 2019.
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KC blogs about Austen and other pop culture topics. In 2015 and 2017 her popular Austen + The Onion Headlines meme was featured in The Atlantic, Flavorwire, and AV Club. In 2017, she made the requisite pilgrimage to Jane Austen country, where she took the waters in Bath, walked the lanes of Steventon, didn’t fall off the cobb in Lyme Regis, and stood awestruck in Chawton.
KC’s first novel, Boots & Backpacks, was published in 2014. Her second, A Case of Some Delicacy, will be released in 2019.
K.C. Kahler also writes as K.C. Derby
KC’s social links:
Blog: http://www.kckahler.com/
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May 12, 2021
5+ stars
There are just SO many things about this plot that I adored, it's hard to know where to start. Yes, it's a long book, and there's a lot going on, but I felt the various storylines had enough interdependence to prevent it from feeling like just a series of unrelated events.
First of all, Mr. Collins arrives at Longbourn in time for the Meryton assembly. Without Mr. Bingley being there first to show his preference for Jane, Mrs. Bennet determines that her eldest should be the one to marry Mr. Collins and keep Longbourn in the family. Jane, being more submissive and not being in love with someone else, is willing to make the sacrifice to save her mother and sisters from the hedgerows. The Netherfield party comes to the assembly (as usual), but the unobservant Mrs. Bennet, not realizing that Mr. Bingley is immediately smitten by Jane, believes Elizabeth would be his perfect match. While Jane enjoys his company, she resists getting too close because she is determined to do her duty and marry Mr. Collins. Bingley hears the local gossip of their betrothal (started by Mrs. B, of course), which creates an additional obstacle if he and Jane are to end up together.
That's not the only difference at the Meryton assembly. Although Mr. Darcy makes his usual rude comment dismissing Elizabeth as a potential dance partner, Mr. Bingley LOSES HIS TEMPER(!) and reads his friend the riot act, insisting that he apologize and ask the lady to dance. Mr. Bennet is another additional attendee at the assembly, and he and Elizabeth have a little fun at Mr. Darcy's expense, tactfully making their point and earning his approbation.
The book stays in Hertfordshire with more interesting little tweaks away from canon. Mrs. Bennet plans a picnic to further her matchmaking plans for Jane and Elizabeth. This includes a competitive cricket match. The two teams are captained by Darcy and Bingley, and participants include all the Bennet sisters except Jane. When Mr. Darcy sheds his jacket and rolls up his sleeves, Lydia takes particular notice of his manly physique. Once she announces her determination to marry him, Mrs. Bennet adds him to her list of future grooms for her daughters. So, she's pairing Jane with Mr. Collins, Elizabeth with Mr. Bingley, and Lydia with Mr. Darcy. And she's quite single-minded about it.
Elizabeth is disgusted with her father for his indolence regarding Jane and Mr. Collins, and she enlists Charlotte's help to keep the latter distracted and away from Jane so Mr. Bingley can spend uninterrupted time with her. By this time, Darcy's observations of Elizabeth's behavior has him fascinated. Elizabeth finds that he has overheard her argument with Mr. Bennet, and Darcy becomes another co-conspirator. His payment for assisting her? She must entertain him with stories about her family and neighbors.
Mr. Wickham does show up. As a result of the various alterations in the story before he arrives, his presence has different results.
One other significant character is John Lucas, who doesn't actually appear until well into the book. However, he's a frequent topic of conversation from the onset among the Bennets and Lucases, as he and Elizabeth were childhood playmates and close friends. We learn the two had a falling out when he dropped out of school and decided instead to go to sea. He's proven Elizabeth wrong, because he has been tremendously successful and made a great deal of money. His return is anticipated in a few weeks. The undercurrent is unmistakable - the Lucases hope he and Elizabeth will marry.
The characters are fully developed, taking Jane Austen's basic personalities and adding credible embellishments. Lydia slowly matures and is shown to be somewhat observant - when she's paying attention. Kitty is actually more clueless than her younger sister, often speaking without thinking, and she is obsessed with fashion. Mary's character is probably the farthest from the original; her sisters (including Elizabeth) consider her the most level-headed and fair-minded of them all. She still isn't interested in dancing at balls. Mr. Bennet doesn't come off particularly well here, but it's not that he's evil; he just doesn't want to be bothered. The course he chooses is whatever will mean the least trouble for him. Mrs. Bennet proves to be as stubborn as she is inept at identifying the best husbands for her girls.
Darcy and Elizabeth get a lot of page time together. They meet secretly during her morning walks to plan strategy and for her to tell Darcy her stories. She comes to admire how cleverly he manages to divert Mr. Collins away from Jane. Darcy, believing he must marry a woman with better connections and wealth, sporadically worries he's getting too close to her, leading him to alternately pull away and then come back to her. The romantic tension between them builds beautifully.
The quality of the writing and editing is excellent. The story flows well. At times the same events are recounted more than once to show how a different character perceives them. It is usually an effective device. I have to admit there also are times when the re-telling is just redundant and doesn't add anything of significance, only adding to the length. The high quality of the rest of the book leads me to overlook that, because I truly never found it overly annoying.
Overall, I really loved this and highly recommend it. Be aware that it's a long one and plan your reading time accordingly!
I received an ARC with no promise of a review, favorable or otherwise.
There are just SO many things about this plot that I adored, it's hard to know where to start. Yes, it's a long book, and there's a lot going on, but I felt the various storylines had enough interdependence to prevent it from feeling like just a series of unrelated events.
First of all, Mr. Collins arrives at Longbourn in time for the Meryton assembly. Without Mr. Bingley being there first to show his preference for Jane, Mrs. Bennet determines that her eldest should be the one to marry Mr. Collins and keep Longbourn in the family. Jane, being more submissive and not being in love with someone else, is willing to make the sacrifice to save her mother and sisters from the hedgerows. The Netherfield party comes to the assembly (as usual), but the unobservant Mrs. Bennet, not realizing that Mr. Bingley is immediately smitten by Jane, believes Elizabeth would be his perfect match. While Jane enjoys his company, she resists getting too close because she is determined to do her duty and marry Mr. Collins. Bingley hears the local gossip of their betrothal (started by Mrs. B, of course), which creates an additional obstacle if he and Jane are to end up together.
That's not the only difference at the Meryton assembly. Although Mr. Darcy makes his usual rude comment dismissing Elizabeth as a potential dance partner, Mr. Bingley LOSES HIS TEMPER(!) and reads his friend the riot act, insisting that he apologize and ask the lady to dance. Mr. Bennet is another additional attendee at the assembly, and he and Elizabeth have a little fun at Mr. Darcy's expense, tactfully making their point and earning his approbation.
The book stays in Hertfordshire with more interesting little tweaks away from canon. Mrs. Bennet plans a picnic to further her matchmaking plans for Jane and Elizabeth. This includes a competitive cricket match. The two teams are captained by Darcy and Bingley, and participants include all the Bennet sisters except Jane. When Mr. Darcy sheds his jacket and rolls up his sleeves, Lydia takes particular notice of his manly physique. Once she announces her determination to marry him, Mrs. Bennet adds him to her list of future grooms for her daughters. So, she's pairing Jane with Mr. Collins, Elizabeth with Mr. Bingley, and Lydia with Mr. Darcy. And she's quite single-minded about it.
Elizabeth is disgusted with her father for his indolence regarding Jane and Mr. Collins, and she enlists Charlotte's help to keep the latter distracted and away from Jane so Mr. Bingley can spend uninterrupted time with her. By this time, Darcy's observations of Elizabeth's behavior has him fascinated. Elizabeth finds that he has overheard her argument with Mr. Bennet, and Darcy becomes another co-conspirator. His payment for assisting her? She must entertain him with stories about her family and neighbors.
Mr. Wickham does show up. As a result of the various alterations in the story before he arrives, his presence has different results.
One other significant character is John Lucas, who doesn't actually appear until well into the book. However, he's a frequent topic of conversation from the onset among the Bennets and Lucases, as he and Elizabeth were childhood playmates and close friends. We learn the two had a falling out when he dropped out of school and decided instead to go to sea. He's proven Elizabeth wrong, because he has been tremendously successful and made a great deal of money. His return is anticipated in a few weeks. The undercurrent is unmistakable - the Lucases hope he and Elizabeth will marry.
The characters are fully developed, taking Jane Austen's basic personalities and adding credible embellishments. Lydia slowly matures and is shown to be somewhat observant - when she's paying attention. Kitty is actually more clueless than her younger sister, often speaking without thinking, and she is obsessed with fashion. Mary's character is probably the farthest from the original; her sisters (including Elizabeth) consider her the most level-headed and fair-minded of them all. She still isn't interested in dancing at balls. Mr. Bennet doesn't come off particularly well here, but it's not that he's evil; he just doesn't want to be bothered. The course he chooses is whatever will mean the least trouble for him. Mrs. Bennet proves to be as stubborn as she is inept at identifying the best husbands for her girls.
Darcy and Elizabeth get a lot of page time together. They meet secretly during her morning walks to plan strategy and for her to tell Darcy her stories. She comes to admire how cleverly he manages to divert Mr. Collins away from Jane. Darcy, believing he must marry a woman with better connections and wealth, sporadically worries he's getting too close to her, leading him to alternately pull away and then come back to her. The romantic tension between them builds beautifully.
The quality of the writing and editing is excellent. The story flows well. At times the same events are recounted more than once to show how a different character perceives them. It is usually an effective device. I have to admit there also are times when the re-telling is just redundant and doesn't add anything of significance, only adding to the length. The high quality of the rest of the book leads me to overlook that, because I truly never found it overly annoying.
Overall, I really loved this and highly recommend it. Be aware that it's a long one and plan your reading time accordingly!
I received an ARC with no promise of a review, favorable or otherwise.
September 17, 2019
“Does fate ever play by the rules?” –Jodi Picoult, Perfect Match
Although clean, there is a trigger warning due to an attempted attack.
Our canon timeline is skewed with Mr. Collins arriving prior to the Meryton Assembly. He and Mrs. Bennet were in agreement that Jane was the perfect choice for the companion of his future life. His thoughts centered around her beauty and his joy at pleasing Lady Catherine by following her orders to heal the breach in the family and do his duty by marrying one of the Bennet daughters.
Throughout this story, Mrs. Bennet was in full matchmaking mode. She could just see them as she lined up the couples in her mind: Jane—Mr. Collins, Lizzy—Mr. Bingley, Lydia—Mr. Darcy. Three daughters married. She no longer worried about the hedgerows.
Jane—Mr. Collins: Jane would do her duty to the family. Mrs. Collins, how well that sounded and they looked so well standing together in the dance line at the assembly… even if his grace in the forms was a bit strange. Then Miss Lizzy [that ungrateful child] countered her every scheme with her own ideas.
Lizzy—Mr. Bingley: Lizzy was next in seniority and a somewhat beauty. Of course, she was nothing to Jane or Lydia. Bingley was good enough for her, even if his fortune was from trade. Jane would be mistress of Longbourn and Lizzy would be mistress of Netherfield Park. All seemed right within Mrs. Bennet’s world. But then, Mr. Bingley had other ideas.
Lydia—Mr. Darcy: Lydia admired Mr. Darcy’s tanned, sinewy, arms when they played cricket and had set her sights on him. Whatever Lydia wanted was fine with Mrs. Bennet even if he was droll and taciturn. Lydia was vivacious and would soon liven up his life. Ten thousand a year, such pin money, what jewels, and carriages… oh, the clothes. Her Lydia would be well set. With three daughters married, what more could a mother want? It seems Mr. Darcy had other ideas.
“The best-laid schemes o’ mice an’ men, gang aft a-gley, an’ lea’e us nought but grief an’ pain, for promis’d joy.” –Robert Burns, Collected Poems of Robert Burns
When all her schemes fell in the dirt, and they certainly did, Mrs. Bennet called for her salts and took to her bed. Mr. Bennet, on the other hand, was highly amused and enjoyed the entertainment his family provided with their antics and behavior.
“She had found someone who matched her, a warrior and a shield. A man she could respect; one she could argue with and enjoy. She hadn’t wanted to lose that. Hadn’t wanted to be alone again.” –Lora Leigh, Megan’s Mark
Relationship between D&E: I love it when there is page-time between our dear couple. This was a Darcy in conflict. He was facing emotions and situations he had never experienced before and was struggling as he tried to find his footing. Bingley actually grew a pair in this story… sorry. He knew what he wanted, had full intentions of grabbing it and he defied Darcy or his sisters to stop him. Darcy was amazed and Caroline was spitting mad.
“As it turns out, you can function while your heart is being torn to shreds.” –Jodi Picoult, Perfect Match
Much of the behavior was OOC but I enjoyed those snippets within scenes that were simply golden. Lizzy finally had that opportunity to confront her father and say all those things we’ve wanted her to but propriety would never allow.
Lydia: there was a different dynamic with Lydia. We don’t usually see her displayed in this manner. I rather liked her as she navigated through that awkward age. It was interesting to watch as she interacted with her sisters. The family dynamics were unusual but portrayed in a more natural setting and demeanor. The relationship between the sisters was cute and touching.
A few niggling things that bothered me: this was a LONG story at well over 400 pages. POV: we did a lot of head-hopping and at times, I wasn’t sure whose thoughts I was listening in on. There was a lot of canon that was repurposed and quite a bit of repetition/redundancy with the scenes. Several times I would read a scene and then it would be viewed again from different perspectives so their thoughts and opinions could be expressed. I kept thinking, I just read this.
The author admitted this was dialogue-heavy and it was with a lot of telling and not showing. Lizzy was a consummate storyteller and many of those stories were told in great detail… several times. They could have easily been trimmed or cut completely without hurting the story. This came across like a chronicle and was time-consuming and page-heavy when it was not necessary.
I volunteered to read an ARC [advanced-reader-copy] from the publisher [Quills & Quartos Publishing] and the views expressed are my own thoughts and opinion. I highly recommend this book in spite of the length. [4.5-stars, rounds to 5]
Although clean, there is a trigger warning due to an attempted attack.
Our canon timeline is skewed with Mr. Collins arriving prior to the Meryton Assembly. He and Mrs. Bennet were in agreement that Jane was the perfect choice for the companion of his future life. His thoughts centered around her beauty and his joy at pleasing Lady Catherine by following her orders to heal the breach in the family and do his duty by marrying one of the Bennet daughters.
Throughout this story, Mrs. Bennet was in full matchmaking mode. She could just see them as she lined up the couples in her mind: Jane—Mr. Collins, Lizzy—Mr. Bingley, Lydia—Mr. Darcy. Three daughters married. She no longer worried about the hedgerows.
Jane—Mr. Collins: Jane would do her duty to the family. Mrs. Collins, how well that sounded and they looked so well standing together in the dance line at the assembly… even if his grace in the forms was a bit strange. Then Miss Lizzy [that ungrateful child] countered her every scheme with her own ideas.
Lizzy—Mr. Bingley: Lizzy was next in seniority and a somewhat beauty. Of course, she was nothing to Jane or Lydia. Bingley was good enough for her, even if his fortune was from trade. Jane would be mistress of Longbourn and Lizzy would be mistress of Netherfield Park. All seemed right within Mrs. Bennet’s world. But then, Mr. Bingley had other ideas.
Lydia—Mr. Darcy: Lydia admired Mr. Darcy’s tanned, sinewy, arms when they played cricket and had set her sights on him. Whatever Lydia wanted was fine with Mrs. Bennet even if he was droll and taciturn. Lydia was vivacious and would soon liven up his life. Ten thousand a year, such pin money, what jewels, and carriages… oh, the clothes. Her Lydia would be well set. With three daughters married, what more could a mother want? It seems Mr. Darcy had other ideas.
“The best-laid schemes o’ mice an’ men, gang aft a-gley, an’ lea’e us nought but grief an’ pain, for promis’d joy.” –Robert Burns, Collected Poems of Robert Burns
When all her schemes fell in the dirt, and they certainly did, Mrs. Bennet called for her salts and took to her bed. Mr. Bennet, on the other hand, was highly amused and enjoyed the entertainment his family provided with their antics and behavior.
“She had found someone who matched her, a warrior and a shield. A man she could respect; one she could argue with and enjoy. She hadn’t wanted to lose that. Hadn’t wanted to be alone again.” –Lora Leigh, Megan’s Mark
Relationship between D&E: I love it when there is page-time between our dear couple. This was a Darcy in conflict. He was facing emotions and situations he had never experienced before and was struggling as he tried to find his footing. Bingley actually grew a pair in this story… sorry. He knew what he wanted, had full intentions of grabbing it and he defied Darcy or his sisters to stop him. Darcy was amazed and Caroline was spitting mad.
“As it turns out, you can function while your heart is being torn to shreds.” –Jodi Picoult, Perfect Match
Much of the behavior was OOC but I enjoyed those snippets within scenes that were simply golden. Lizzy finally had that opportunity to confront her father and say all those things we’ve wanted her to but propriety would never allow.
Lydia: there was a different dynamic with Lydia. We don’t usually see her displayed in this manner. I rather liked her as she navigated through that awkward age. It was interesting to watch as she interacted with her sisters. The family dynamics were unusual but portrayed in a more natural setting and demeanor. The relationship between the sisters was cute and touching.
A few niggling things that bothered me: this was a LONG story at well over 400 pages. POV: we did a lot of head-hopping and at times, I wasn’t sure whose thoughts I was listening in on. There was a lot of canon that was repurposed and quite a bit of repetition/redundancy with the scenes. Several times I would read a scene and then it would be viewed again from different perspectives so their thoughts and opinions could be expressed. I kept thinking, I just read this.
The author admitted this was dialogue-heavy and it was with a lot of telling and not showing. Lizzy was a consummate storyteller and many of those stories were told in great detail… several times. They could have easily been trimmed or cut completely without hurting the story. This came across like a chronicle and was time-consuming and page-heavy when it was not necessary.
I volunteered to read an ARC [advanced-reader-copy] from the publisher [Quills & Quartos Publishing] and the views expressed are my own thoughts and opinion. I highly recommend this book in spite of the length. [4.5-stars, rounds to 5]
April 15, 2020
This is everything a P&P variation should be! This is simply a delightful, imaginative and brilliant book. The author takes a bit of risk by changing much of the interactions and timelines during Darcy's and Bingley's initial stay in Hertfordshire.
In doing this there is much less Pride and Prejudice but there is plenty of tension and misunderstandings. The author also takes the bold risk of actually fleshing out the Bennet sisters who are mostly left unformed in other variations. Both Lydia and Mary are removed from their stereotypical wrappings and given voices and opinions that are unique and show growth (the girls are 200+ now after all). Poor Kitty is even given a bit of personality although it isn't a positive one.
When the author uses JA's words she often chances up the participants so first Lady C has part of her tirade with Lydia and then the remainder later with Darcy and Anne. The author also gives Anne a bit of a backbone and a secret admirer.
There is a lot going on in the book but there are no loose ends and only the briefest of all epilogues.
Really one of the best P&P books I have read this year and in my top ten over all.
In doing this there is much less Pride and Prejudice but there is plenty of tension and misunderstandings. The author also takes the bold risk of actually fleshing out the Bennet sisters who are mostly left unformed in other variations. Both Lydia and Mary are removed from their stereotypical wrappings and given voices and opinions that are unique and show growth (the girls are 200+ now after all). Poor Kitty is even given a bit of personality although it isn't a positive one.
When the author uses JA's words she often chances up the participants so first Lady C has part of her tirade with Lydia and then the remainder later with Darcy and Anne. The author also gives Anne a bit of a backbone and a secret admirer.
There is a lot going on in the book but there are no loose ends and only the briefest of all epilogues.
Really one of the best P&P books I have read this year and in my top ten over all.
September 19, 2025
The best-laid schemes o' mice an' men, Gang aft a-gley ~ Robert Burns
What’s a Mother to do when her plans for her many daughters’ marriages are put awry by forces beyond her control?
The visit from the Reverend Collins occurs before the Bingley party arrives. Mama Bennet and Mr. Collins have agreed that Jane is the future Mrs. Collins. When Charles Bingley arrives, Mama assigns Elizabeth as his marital partner. What could be better than two daughters well-settled in the neighborhood? And when Mr. Darcy defends Lydia’s behaviour during a verbal attack from the Bingley shrew (uh, the lovely Caroline), the youngest daughter sets her sights on the best match of all!
But in the midst of her jubilation, some things are not right in Mrs. Bennet’s world.
Quote from the book:
“Mama, your yelping hurts my head,” Lydia said crossly. “In the name of all that is holy, lower your voice.”
“Oh!” Mrs. Bennet cried in an agitated whisper. “She has been knocked senseless!”
“No, my dear, that is the most sensible thing Lydia has ever said,” Mr. Bennet replied.
Elizabeth is determined to free Jane from Mr. Collins. Her Father refuses his support in discouraging Collins and Elizabeth confronts him with his neglect of all the daughters – a very unusual scene in JAFF.
Also unusual: Lydia grows up! In her efforts to secure her beloved Darcy, Lydia begins reading books other than romantic novels. Lydia’s increasing maturity was pleasing, especially her defense of Darcy and Georgiana when Wickham tells his story. Loved it!
Elizabeth and Darcy meet regularly on morning walks to plot methods to divert Collins’ interest. Their feelings for each other develop.
The book is well-written and proofread. It does have some repetition – we sometimes have a scene from the point of view of one character; then the scene is repeated as seen by another character. It confused me the first time it happened.
An unsuccessful sexual assault occurs near the conclusion, raising the rating to mature.
I received an ARC of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.
To see her is to love her,
And love but her forever;
For nature made her what she is,
And never made anither!
~ Robert Burns
What’s a Mother to do when her plans for her many daughters’ marriages are put awry by forces beyond her control?
The visit from the Reverend Collins occurs before the Bingley party arrives. Mama Bennet and Mr. Collins have agreed that Jane is the future Mrs. Collins. When Charles Bingley arrives, Mama assigns Elizabeth as his marital partner. What could be better than two daughters well-settled in the neighborhood? And when Mr. Darcy defends Lydia’s behaviour during a verbal attack from the Bingley shrew (uh, the lovely Caroline), the youngest daughter sets her sights on the best match of all!
But in the midst of her jubilation, some things are not right in Mrs. Bennet’s world.
Quote from the book:
“Mama, your yelping hurts my head,” Lydia said crossly. “In the name of all that is holy, lower your voice.”
“Oh!” Mrs. Bennet cried in an agitated whisper. “She has been knocked senseless!”
“No, my dear, that is the most sensible thing Lydia has ever said,” Mr. Bennet replied.
Elizabeth is determined to free Jane from Mr. Collins. Her Father refuses his support in discouraging Collins and Elizabeth confronts him with his neglect of all the daughters – a very unusual scene in JAFF.
Also unusual: Lydia grows up! In her efforts to secure her beloved Darcy, Lydia begins reading books other than romantic novels. Lydia’s increasing maturity was pleasing, especially her defense of Darcy and Georgiana when Wickham tells his story. Loved it!
Elizabeth and Darcy meet regularly on morning walks to plot methods to divert Collins’ interest. Their feelings for each other develop.
The book is well-written and proofread. It does have some repetition – we sometimes have a scene from the point of view of one character; then the scene is repeated as seen by another character. It confused me the first time it happened.
An unsuccessful sexual assault occurs near the conclusion, raising the rating to mature.
I received an ARC of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.
To see her is to love her,
And love but her forever;
For nature made her what she is,
And never made anither!
~ Robert Burns
September 18, 2019
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
The page count is actually 406 although here as I marked reading progress it stated 486 pages. I have read this three times, twice as an unpublished story and now as I received a copy from the publisher with no strings attached.
Mr. Collins comes to visit at Longbourn before the Bennets meet Bingley and company...even before the Assembly dance. So Jane is not "soon to be engaged" and Collins is encouraged to look upon her as his choice of bride from among the sisters.
I must say that I enjoyed Lydia's character in this variation. She still has some silliness but when the neighbors put together a cricket game she develops a crush on Darcy, after admiring his arms when he discards his jacket and waistcoat. When her distraction causes her to not duck a ball hit at her and she is knocked unconscious he carries her to the sideline to a blanket to recover. So she decides he is her man and Momma Bennet is attentive to arranging seating and encouraging interaction.
Lydia has other moments of enlightenment as the story progresses. Elizabeth has a confrontation with her father which is a new twist. He had it coming. Kitty seems to be the one who puts her foot in her mouth repeatedly. Mary is the observer who remembers details. Jane is as ever determined to put the future welfare of her family before her own happiness.
Backing up...Darcy has noticed how Elizabeth is ever attentive to Mr. Collins and when he realizes she is trying to distract Collins' attention from Jane he decides to join the game and even arranges to meet her on her early morning walks to plan their next move. Elizabeth warms to the man BUT she continues to be aware of their social levels disparities.
She knows he writes his cousin, Anne, and then Mr. Collins is all over Lydia informing her that Mr. Darcy is engaged to his cousin when Lydia is exclaiming about Darcy. So Elizabeth is distressed, even depressed.
This story is long and it is told from different points-of-view. I found Darcy's musing about "a certain young lady" to be rather an odd way of thinking about Elizabeth in his mind. Why not just say "she" was there or "the one he was looking for" was there? But it is not my story. The wording just seemed to stand out.
John Lucas, Elizabeth's childhood friend returns from his stint as a seaman. Darcy is jealous when he sees how close that friendship is...especially when an embrace is their first encounter after years of separation. Her family talks as if an engagement is expected.
We have many of the same pairings as in canon but how they are reached is just a little different. Darcy doesn't have the Hunsford rejection and when he does propose it is so much more romantic.
Wickham tries to spoil the fun but he is foiled in a new twist to the story.
I enjoyed this variation. However as I read it in pdf form I did not have the ability to highlight and make notes like I usually do. The reason I did not read it on my Kindle (and I did receive a copy for my Kindle) is that the print was very tiny and I could not figure out how to enlarge it even though I have enlarged the font size for other stories.
I recommend this story and also this author's first story which was a modern one set partly along the Appalachian Trail which passes through our shared state of Pennsylvania.
The page count is actually 406 although here as I marked reading progress it stated 486 pages. I have read this three times, twice as an unpublished story and now as I received a copy from the publisher with no strings attached.
Mr. Collins comes to visit at Longbourn before the Bennets meet Bingley and company...even before the Assembly dance. So Jane is not "soon to be engaged" and Collins is encouraged to look upon her as his choice of bride from among the sisters.
I must say that I enjoyed Lydia's character in this variation. She still has some silliness but when the neighbors put together a cricket game she develops a crush on Darcy, after admiring his arms when he discards his jacket and waistcoat. When her distraction causes her to not duck a ball hit at her and she is knocked unconscious he carries her to the sideline to a blanket to recover. So she decides he is her man and Momma Bennet is attentive to arranging seating and encouraging interaction.
Lydia has other moments of enlightenment as the story progresses. Elizabeth has a confrontation with her father which is a new twist. He had it coming. Kitty seems to be the one who puts her foot in her mouth repeatedly. Mary is the observer who remembers details. Jane is as ever determined to put the future welfare of her family before her own happiness.
Backing up...Darcy has noticed how Elizabeth is ever attentive to Mr. Collins and when he realizes she is trying to distract Collins' attention from Jane he decides to join the game and even arranges to meet her on her early morning walks to plan their next move. Elizabeth warms to the man BUT she continues to be aware of their social levels disparities.
She knows he writes his cousin, Anne, and then Mr. Collins is all over Lydia informing her that Mr. Darcy is engaged to his cousin when Lydia is exclaiming about Darcy. So Elizabeth is distressed, even depressed.
This story is long and it is told from different points-of-view. I found Darcy's musing about "a certain young lady" to be rather an odd way of thinking about Elizabeth in his mind. Why not just say "she" was there or "the one he was looking for" was there? But it is not my story. The wording just seemed to stand out.
John Lucas, Elizabeth's childhood friend returns from his stint as a seaman. Darcy is jealous when he sees how close that friendship is...especially when an embrace is their first encounter after years of separation. Her family talks as if an engagement is expected.
We have many of the same pairings as in canon but how they are reached is just a little different. Darcy doesn't have the Hunsford rejection and when he does propose it is so much more romantic.
Wickham tries to spoil the fun but he is foiled in a new twist to the story.
I enjoyed this variation. However as I read it in pdf form I did not have the ability to highlight and make notes like I usually do. The reason I did not read it on my Kindle (and I did receive a copy for my Kindle) is that the print was very tiny and I could not figure out how to enlarge it even though I have enlarged the font size for other stories.
I recommend this story and also this author's first story which was a modern one set partly along the Appalachian Trail which passes through our shared state of Pennsylvania.
January 15, 2020
Intoxicating!
Ms. Kahler, in her best JA style, has written a most excellent P&P story with plenty of meat on its bones. It is a well-written variation, but the revisions make a grand and satisfying story. And this is only her second novel!
Mrs. Bennet, in her matchmaking zeal, has a plan. Jane is to marry Mr. Collins, Lizzy is to marry Mr. Bingley, and Lydia is to marry Mr. Darcy. If I had never read Pride and Prejudice, I would not question these arrangements. But we know, don't we, that this is a foolhardy plan.
It is a pleasure to read such a well-proofed book. So I say to Linda D'Orazio, "Well done!"
7
Ms. Kahler, in her best JA style, has written a most excellent P&P story with plenty of meat on its bones. It is a well-written variation, but the revisions make a grand and satisfying story. And this is only her second novel!
Mrs. Bennet, in her matchmaking zeal, has a plan. Jane is to marry Mr. Collins, Lizzy is to marry Mr. Bingley, and Lydia is to marry Mr. Darcy. If I had never read Pride and Prejudice, I would not question these arrangements. But we know, don't we, that this is a foolhardy plan.
It is a pleasure to read such a well-proofed book. So I say to Linda D'Orazio, "Well done!"
7
May 11, 2020
Mrs. Bennet gets an F in Matchmaking 101
Lovely, long romance. I would normally give it 4 stars but a setdown buy Lizzy to her father, which I’m sure many of us had wish to see in print, raises my enjoyment to 5 stars. Not much comes of it but that’s pretty realistic.
I recommend this story.
Lovely, long romance. I would normally give it 4 stars but a setdown buy Lizzy to her father, which I’m sure many of us had wish to see in print, raises my enjoyment to 5 stars. Not much comes of it but that’s pretty realistic.
I recommend this story.
March 15, 2020
What If Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Became Allies To Prevent Mr. Collins’s Marriage Designs?
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: Begins with the Meryton Assembly
SYNOPSIS: What would happen if Mr. Bingley didn’t have a prior claim on Jane Bennet when Mr. Collins extended his “olive branch” to the Bennet family? What would the Bennets do if Mr. Collins set his sights on Jane as his prime matrimonial prospect? Well, you can probably imagine what devoted sister Elizabeth Bennet would do…but what may be surprising is that Elizabeth is assisted in her endeavors by none other than the haughty man who called her “tolerable.” Will this new alliance bring friendship and more amiability to this oft-prejudiced and misunderstanding pair? Or does Mr. Darcy’s duty to his family and place in society effectively keep their feelings and hearts in check…
WHAT I LOVED:
- Co-Conspirators: Such a unique and delightful twist to Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship. I like that Mr. Darcy is observant of the Bennet family’s situation and is prompted to help, whether his motives stem from admiration or a deprivation of entertainment. I loved the clever ways Mr. Darcy diverted Mr. Collins’s attention and I appreciate how he put himself forward and in company with those he dislikes for the sake of helping the Bennet sisters. His strategy sessions with Elizabeth and her reactions to his assistance were all sorts of adorable.
- Love Triangles and Matchmaking Fails: Ha ha! This turns into quite the comedy of errors with couples being paired off incongruously (by Mrs. Bennet) and there being often two people in love with or pursuing the same person! Quite a brilliant mix-up! It was a hoot to see how some erroneous pairings would sort themselves out and how matchmaking schemes were being thwarted!
- Secondary Characters with Personality: I must comment on how much I loved the small details and personality quirks Ms. Kahler craftily inserted for many of the secondary characters of this tale. Even without developing major storylines for all these characters she was able to flesh out their personalities with subtle and memorable attributes, such as: Kitty being socially inept and having no filter, Mary’s enjoyment in observing others, and Mr. Hurst’s letter-writing. Such small additions that truly bring fullness and engagement to this story.
- Sweet Friendship and Romantic Tension: With the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth developing much more amicably it seemed like perhaps there would be less misunderstandings and angst. But I should have known K.C. Kahler would find a way to imbue this story with some romantic tension that stirred my emotions into a frenzy! I loved both the adorable and playful moments between Darcy and Elizabeth where they are falling love and the unexpected moments of heartache and longing.
- Lydia: La! “What a good joke!” Lydia is ever so likable in this story! I don’t want to give away all the delightful surprises in store, but I will say that in addition to being bold and impetuous, this Lydia Bennet gains some awareness and sense. She was an utter delight! (I cannot believe I just said that about Lydia!)
- John Lucas and Anne de Bourgh: I loved these two characters, both for their well-drawn and likable personalities and for their relationships with key characters in this story. I especially enjoyed John Lucas – he is a brother to all the Bennet girls, teasing and protective. I kind of wished saw a little more resolution for him if you know what I mean… 😉
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
Nothing really, except maybe one or two conversations that felt too forward and public for the time period. But that didn’t really mar my pleasure in this diverting tale!
CONCLUSION:
A Case of Some Delicacy is another marvelous, memorable, and well-constructed Pride and Prejudice inspired story by K.C. Kahler. With mismatched pairings, cricket games, secret meetings, humorous stories, and improving relationships this tale will be sure to enthrall and endear fans of Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet!
Austenesque Reviews
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: Begins with the Meryton Assembly
SYNOPSIS: What would happen if Mr. Bingley didn’t have a prior claim on Jane Bennet when Mr. Collins extended his “olive branch” to the Bennet family? What would the Bennets do if Mr. Collins set his sights on Jane as his prime matrimonial prospect? Well, you can probably imagine what devoted sister Elizabeth Bennet would do…but what may be surprising is that Elizabeth is assisted in her endeavors by none other than the haughty man who called her “tolerable.” Will this new alliance bring friendship and more amiability to this oft-prejudiced and misunderstanding pair? Or does Mr. Darcy’s duty to his family and place in society effectively keep their feelings and hearts in check…
WHAT I LOVED:
- Co-Conspirators: Such a unique and delightful twist to Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship. I like that Mr. Darcy is observant of the Bennet family’s situation and is prompted to help, whether his motives stem from admiration or a deprivation of entertainment. I loved the clever ways Mr. Darcy diverted Mr. Collins’s attention and I appreciate how he put himself forward and in company with those he dislikes for the sake of helping the Bennet sisters. His strategy sessions with Elizabeth and her reactions to his assistance were all sorts of adorable.
- Love Triangles and Matchmaking Fails: Ha ha! This turns into quite the comedy of errors with couples being paired off incongruously (by Mrs. Bennet) and there being often two people in love with or pursuing the same person! Quite a brilliant mix-up! It was a hoot to see how some erroneous pairings would sort themselves out and how matchmaking schemes were being thwarted!
- Secondary Characters with Personality: I must comment on how much I loved the small details and personality quirks Ms. Kahler craftily inserted for many of the secondary characters of this tale. Even without developing major storylines for all these characters she was able to flesh out their personalities with subtle and memorable attributes, such as: Kitty being socially inept and having no filter, Mary’s enjoyment in observing others, and Mr. Hurst’s letter-writing. Such small additions that truly bring fullness and engagement to this story.
- Sweet Friendship and Romantic Tension: With the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth developing much more amicably it seemed like perhaps there would be less misunderstandings and angst. But I should have known K.C. Kahler would find a way to imbue this story with some romantic tension that stirred my emotions into a frenzy! I loved both the adorable and playful moments between Darcy and Elizabeth where they are falling love and the unexpected moments of heartache and longing.
- Lydia: La! “What a good joke!” Lydia is ever so likable in this story! I don’t want to give away all the delightful surprises in store, but I will say that in addition to being bold and impetuous, this Lydia Bennet gains some awareness and sense. She was an utter delight! (I cannot believe I just said that about Lydia!)
- John Lucas and Anne de Bourgh: I loved these two characters, both for their well-drawn and likable personalities and for their relationships with key characters in this story. I especially enjoyed John Lucas – he is a brother to all the Bennet girls, teasing and protective. I kind of wished saw a little more resolution for him if you know what I mean… 😉
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
Nothing really, except maybe one or two conversations that felt too forward and public for the time period. But that didn’t really mar my pleasure in this diverting tale!
CONCLUSION:
A Case of Some Delicacy is another marvelous, memorable, and well-constructed Pride and Prejudice inspired story by K.C. Kahler. With mismatched pairings, cricket games, secret meetings, humorous stories, and improving relationships this tale will be sure to enthrall and endear fans of Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet!
Austenesque Reviews
December 8, 2025
Delightfully Entertaining
Reviewed in Canada on September 23, 2019
I loved this dialogue-filled variation. There’s humour, just a tiny touch of angst, and lots of matchmaking by Mrs. Bennet, of which none seems to go her way. I really enjoyed the changes the author gave to some characters, especially Lydia, and the overall relationship among the Bennet sisters. It’s quite a long trip, but getting to the HEA is a pleasant ride. I highly recommend it!
(Note: there is an occurrence of an assault towards the end of the book. The author may want to include a trigger warning in the book’s description.)
I also enjoyed her previous book, Boots and Backpacks, which I also highly recommend.
January 24, 2022 - Audiobook
Excellent narration by Sarah Jane Rose.
Reviewed in Canada on September 23, 2019
I loved this dialogue-filled variation. There’s humour, just a tiny touch of angst, and lots of matchmaking by Mrs. Bennet, of which none seems to go her way. I really enjoyed the changes the author gave to some characters, especially Lydia, and the overall relationship among the Bennet sisters. It’s quite a long trip, but getting to the HEA is a pleasant ride. I highly recommend it!
(Note: there is an occurrence of an assault towards the end of the book. The author may want to include a trigger warning in the book’s description.)
I also enjoyed her previous book, Boots and Backpacks, which I also highly recommend.
January 24, 2022 - Audiobook
Excellent narration by Sarah Jane Rose.
September 22, 2019
I really enjoyed this book - it's difficult to summarise the plot as there are a lot of different threads but.... it starts with an earlier arrival of Collins. With no understanding between Jane and Bingley, Collins sets his sights on Jane. Elizabeth attempts to thwart his plans at every turn, made easier when the Bingley party arrive. She has a co conspirator in Darcy and another in Charlotte which makes for some good fun. It also means the relationship with Darcy gets off on a completely different foot. This book has a great feel about it early on... the reader is privy to so many secrets between all the different characters.
Lydia has a very central role in this book... she is very much taken with Mr Darcy's forearms and so is not susceptible to Wickham's influence. She is still brattish at times but we get a much better sense this is about her youth rather than being spiteful and selfish.
This is a long book with plenty of time spent with Darcy & Elizabeth. Their relationship grows at a slow but steady pace and we get done lovely insight into how Darcy's character makes it difficult for him to accept his feelings and act on them. It is relatively angst free until quite late on on the story when there is a misunderstanding between Darcy and Elizabeth. I just loved how this was resolved and it was 'stupid grin time' for me!
There is no Georgiana or Colonel Fitzwilliam in this book. But we have the addition of John Lucas and two other Lucas boys. We also see a bit more of the Hursts. Bingley has more of a back bone and Anne de Bourgh has a relatively minor but important role.
This book is long and a bit repetitive in places. A couple of times a scene happens and then in the following chapter the same scene plays out but from the perspective of a different character. This is a bit confusing at times and I also thought it was unnecessary. Lizzy also tells quite long stories in her meetings with Darcy... I think I'd have liked to hear them talking more about themselves but understand Darcy liked listening to her and it helped to get to know her better... but overall it didn't detract from my enjoyment. I devoured this book in no time and would definitely recommend.
I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Lydia has a very central role in this book... she is very much taken with Mr Darcy's forearms and so is not susceptible to Wickham's influence. She is still brattish at times but we get a much better sense this is about her youth rather than being spiteful and selfish.
This is a long book with plenty of time spent with Darcy & Elizabeth. Their relationship grows at a slow but steady pace and we get done lovely insight into how Darcy's character makes it difficult for him to accept his feelings and act on them. It is relatively angst free until quite late on on the story when there is a misunderstanding between Darcy and Elizabeth. I just loved how this was resolved and it was 'stupid grin time' for me!
There is no Georgiana or Colonel Fitzwilliam in this book. But we have the addition of John Lucas and two other Lucas boys. We also see a bit more of the Hursts. Bingley has more of a back bone and Anne de Bourgh has a relatively minor but important role.
This book is long and a bit repetitive in places. A couple of times a scene happens and then in the following chapter the same scene plays out but from the perspective of a different character. This is a bit confusing at times and I also thought it was unnecessary. Lizzy also tells quite long stories in her meetings with Darcy... I think I'd have liked to hear them talking more about themselves but understand Darcy liked listening to her and it helped to get to know her better... but overall it didn't detract from my enjoyment. I devoured this book in no time and would definitely recommend.
I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
September 27, 2019
Pride and Prejudice variation.
What if Mr Collins had entered Meryton before the Netherfield party?
With no impending engagement to Mr Bingley, the obidient Bennet daughter must have suffered the advances of Mr Collins if not for her inventive sister Elizabeth. She would do anything to spare her most deserving sister, even conspire with the insufferable Mr Darcy.
A fun read with cleverly written banter that turned deliciously emotional as the misunderstandings took a heart-wrenching twirl. Ending with brilliantly written romance and a swoon-worthy proposal.
Heartily recommend this book!
What if Mr Collins had entered Meryton before the Netherfield party?
With no impending engagement to Mr Bingley, the obidient Bennet daughter must have suffered the advances of Mr Collins if not for her inventive sister Elizabeth. She would do anything to spare her most deserving sister, even conspire with the insufferable Mr Darcy.
A fun read with cleverly written banter that turned deliciously emotional as the misunderstandings took a heart-wrenching twirl. Ending with brilliantly written romance and a swoon-worthy proposal.
Heartily recommend this book!
September 26, 2019
A hilarious and riveting read. I wanted to read this book from the moment I read the excerpt posted with the cover reveal. It promised a world of fun and oh my, did the full story deliver! Lydia’s crush alone richly deserved the five stars. I don’t think I came across that angle before, and yet it’s so credible and so much like the flighty image we have of Lydia. Add some more matchmaking and mismatches and it gets better and better. Loved this story! A great pick-me-up to be often revisited.
October 19, 2019
When a book got so many 5 stars I'm suspicious. But this book is delightful, I enjoyed it all the time and I was sad when it finished.
[It's the second book of this author that I like very much, she's becoming a favourite.]
[It's the second book of this author that I like very much, she's becoming a favourite.]
February 3, 2021
A witty, engaging, soulful and true JAFF.
The writing is flawless, the dialogue is witty, the characters are OC, and the plot is fresh and engaging.
In short it's everything a JAFF ought to be.
I am proud to declare that for some time I have thought A Case of Some Delicacy to be one of the handsomest’s JAFFs of my acquaintance.
Synopsis:
We open with the usual suspects at the meryton assembly where Lizzy after hearing Darcy’s most regretted remark decides, a la Lizzy , to subtly tease him and even execute a slight punishment by introducing him to Mr.Collins and his raptures on his esteemed patroness.
Lizzy and Mr Bennet were the 'father-daughter sassy sardonic dream team' indirectly teasing Darcy over his ill comment at the ball, i.e;
___ Mr Bennet ________________ Lizzy
Collins arrived earlier than the Netherfield party in canon and thus has set his sights on Jane, who yet to meet Bingley, has to suffer his attentions, which leads to a delightful deviation to the canon.
This Lizzy is even more Lizzy than OG Jane Austen Lizzy, she is the Lizziest Lizzy that ever Lizzied! She is wittier, more impertinent and bolder.
Darcy is right away intrigued by her, and puzzled why such a witty girl pays so much attention to that imbecile Mr. Collins.
At a matchmaking picnic, compliments of Mama Bennet, Darcy overhears Lizzy confronting Mr Bennet for not fulfilling his obligations as her and her sisters father and allowing Collins to set his sights on Jane, who would accept the proposal out of her selfless devotion to her family.
Darcy is moved by Lizzy’s devotion to her sister and feels compelled to help her since her family clearly won’t. Thus Lizzy and Darcy become co conspirators, masterfully engineering scenarios to keep Collins from having a chance to propose to Jane.
Darcy and Lizzy when they dissuade Collins from Jane;
They soon become quick friends and that develops to a hesitant secret mutual admiration they aren’t sure is reciprocated and that Darcy fights against, and in true fashion reluctantly surrenders to.
Darcy takes advantage of the clandestine rendezvous in the woods plotting to thwart Collins to spend time with Lizzy, almost imperceptibly courting her.
But alas, the plans of mice and men often go astray, and when Darcy finally decides to fez up his feelings, who should arrive but handsome, newly rich and a tan to boot, Lizzy intimate childhood friend, John Lucas!
There is a lot of chaos on these pages with Mrs. Bennet trying to force the wrong coupling;
Jane & Collins
Lizzy & Bingley
and most shocking,
Lydia & Darcy as she becomes smitten when she catches sight of Darcy's sinewy forearms;
What I liked:
-This is one of the funniest JAFF’s it has ever been my distinct pleasure to read, i.e;
The author has a very satirical eye, and thus so do Darcy and Lizzy!
-Darcy hearing Lizzy lecture her dad over his indifference is amazing and beautifully displays Lizzy's independence, loyalty and fierceness.
-Romantic
-Bingley’s got some backbone and then some! He mans up sooner than Darcy and I loved it!
-Lydia gets a lot of character growth and is endearing.
i.e. After being hit by cricket ball;
-It's got a whole lot of heart, no one is unduly villanized or idealized- like in some poor Mary Sue filled JAFFs- they are written as three dimensional people.
What I detested:
-I cant even wrack my brain to summon a flimsy complaint, it was perfection! Brava K.C. Kahler!
During some angsty parts towards the last quarter (
had me so distraught and absorbed by the story that I admit, though I hope it remains in your trusted confidence, dear reader, that I found my nerves in such a state that I broke out my brandy at a quarter to 12 in the morning!
Now detest me if you dare, but smelling salts would fall short- such was my state-and I was in danger of a prolonged bout of female hysteria and yelling at my novel for ODC to clear up the misunderstanding as if they might be deigned to hear me.
Conclusion:
I loved it! You’ll be on the edge of your seat, loosing sleep and exclaiming how K.C. Kahler has no compassion for your poor nerves! 5 stars! Reread worthy.
I measure the quality of a JAFF by three factors, as follows;
1. Did I feel the characters acted true to Austen's character framework (allowing for changed circumstance and scenario to offer some leeway)? Yes
2. Was I engaged during the reading and not bored? Yes
3. Was the writing compelling/ intelligent and was there sufficient interaction/dialogue between the main characters? Yes
The writing is flawless, the dialogue is witty, the characters are OC, and the plot is fresh and engaging.
In short it's everything a JAFF ought to be.
I am proud to declare that for some time I have thought A Case of Some Delicacy to be one of the handsomest’s JAFFs of my acquaintance.
Synopsis:
We open with the usual suspects at the meryton assembly where Lizzy after hearing Darcy’s most regretted remark decides, a la Lizzy , to subtly tease him and even execute a slight punishment by introducing him to Mr.Collins and his raptures on his esteemed patroness.
Lizzy and Mr Bennet were the 'father-daughter sassy sardonic dream team' indirectly teasing Darcy over his ill comment at the ball, i.e;
“Oh yes, Mr Collins!” Miss Elizabeth interjected. “You must tell Mr Darcy about Lady Catherine’s many helpful ideas regarding the parsonage house, such as the shelves in the upstairs closet. I daresay Mr Darcy is desirous to hear about his aunt’s affability and condescension as he knows so few people here and is in no humour to dance.”
“Dear Cousin Elizabeth! I thank you for the solicitude you show on behalf of myself and Mr Darcy, indeed, of everyone around you. You are most gracious and thoughtful. Is she not, Mr Darcy?”
The corners of Mr Darcy’s mouth turned up slightly as he replied, “Yes, Miss Elizabeth is compassion incarnate.”
Mr Collins bowed over her hand. She then turned to her father, who said, “Come Lizzy, let us see where else your compassion is needed tonight,” before leading her away."
___ Mr Bennet ________________ Lizzy
Collins arrived earlier than the Netherfield party in canon and thus has set his sights on Jane, who yet to meet Bingley, has to suffer his attentions, which leads to a delightful deviation to the canon.
This Lizzy is even more Lizzy than OG Jane Austen Lizzy, she is the Lizziest Lizzy that ever Lizzied! She is wittier, more impertinent and bolder.
Darcy is right away intrigued by her, and puzzled why such a witty girl pays so much attention to that imbecile Mr. Collins.
At a matchmaking picnic, compliments of Mama Bennet, Darcy overhears Lizzy confronting Mr Bennet for not fulfilling his obligations as her and her sisters father and allowing Collins to set his sights on Jane, who would accept the proposal out of her selfless devotion to her family.
Darcy is moved by Lizzy’s devotion to her sister and feels compelled to help her since her family clearly won’t. Thus Lizzy and Darcy become co conspirators, masterfully engineering scenarios to keep Collins from having a chance to propose to Jane.
Darcy and Lizzy when they dissuade Collins from Jane;
They soon become quick friends and that develops to a hesitant secret mutual admiration they aren’t sure is reciprocated and that Darcy fights against, and in true fashion reluctantly surrenders to.
Darcy takes advantage of the clandestine rendezvous in the woods plotting to thwart Collins to spend time with Lizzy, almost imperceptibly courting her.
But alas, the plans of mice and men often go astray, and when Darcy finally decides to fez up his feelings, who should arrive but handsome, newly rich and a tan to boot, Lizzy intimate childhood friend, John Lucas!
There is a lot of chaos on these pages with Mrs. Bennet trying to force the wrong coupling;
Jane & Collins
Lizzy & Bingley
and most shocking,
Lydia & Darcy as she becomes smitten when she catches sight of Darcy's sinewy forearms;
What I liked:
-This is one of the funniest JAFF’s it has ever been my distinct pleasure to read, i.e;
“Ask him yourself, Peter. He is not so very dour as he appears, I promise,” she said.
The youngest Lucas turned to him. “Do you have a pack of foxhounds, Mr Darcy?”
Darcy was taken aback by the odd question. “No. We breed and train land spaniels at Pemberley.”
Peter considered this and then nodded in approval. “And do you drink very much wine?”
The author has a very satirical eye, and thus so do Darcy and Lizzy!
-Darcy hearing Lizzy lecture her dad over his indifference is amazing and beautifully displays Lizzy's independence, loyalty and fierceness.
-Romantic
-Bingley’s got some backbone and then some! He mans up sooner than Darcy and I loved it!
-Lydia gets a lot of character growth and is endearing.
i.e. After being hit by cricket ball;
“Mama, your yelping hurts my head,” Lydia said crossly. “In the name of all that is holy, lower your voice.”
“Oh!” Mrs Bennet cried in an agitated whisper. “She has been knocked senseless!”
“No, my dear, that is the most sensible thing Lydia has ever said,” Mr Bennet replied. “Come, Mrs Bennet, let us summon Mr Jones for the girl. She is in capable hands for now.”
-It's got a whole lot of heart, no one is unduly villanized or idealized- like in some poor Mary Sue filled JAFFs- they are written as three dimensional people.
“I suppose it is a very risky business,” Elizabeth replied to Jane. “But I think in this case you take on all the risk. You see, you are a collection of nothing but virtues.”
What I detested:
-I cant even wrack my brain to summon a flimsy complaint, it was perfection! Brava K.C. Kahler!
During some angsty parts towards the last quarter (
had me so distraught and absorbed by the story that I admit, though I hope it remains in your trusted confidence, dear reader, that I found my nerves in such a state that I broke out my brandy at a quarter to 12 in the morning!
Now detest me if you dare, but smelling salts would fall short- such was my state-and I was in danger of a prolonged bout of female hysteria and yelling at my novel for ODC to clear up the misunderstanding as if they might be deigned to hear me.
Conclusion:
I loved it! You’ll be on the edge of your seat, loosing sleep and exclaiming how K.C. Kahler has no compassion for your poor nerves! 5 stars! Reread worthy.
I measure the quality of a JAFF by three factors, as follows;
1. Did I feel the characters acted true to Austen's character framework (allowing for changed circumstance and scenario to offer some leeway)? Yes
2. Was I engaged during the reading and not bored? Yes
3. Was the writing compelling/ intelligent and was there sufficient interaction/dialogue between the main characters? Yes
July 24, 2022
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, rumours are started about the engagement of Jane Bennet and the Longbourn heir, Mr Collins. Elizabeth does all she can to stop the event, helped by Charlotte Lucas and surprisingly Mr Darcy. Bennet is his usual useless self.
An entertaining variation.
An entertaining variation.
February 5, 2023
4.5/5
Визнаю, це одна з найкращих варіацій, які я прочитала. Захопливий сюжет, гумор, романтика, другорядні персонажі — все ідеально. Особливо я прикіпіла до Лідії, вона така чудова!
Містер Коллінз прибуває трохи раніше за мешканців Незерфілду і зосереджує свою увагу на Джейн. Елізабет прагне врятувати сестру від лихої пари і береться всіляко їх розводити. Тим часом прибувають Бінґлі і Дарсі. Останній підслуховує розмову Елізабет з батьком і вирішує їй допомогти. Разом вони плетуть інтриги, як віднадити містера Коллінза. Проти подвійних зусиль йому точно не встояти!
Визнаю, це одна з найкращих варіацій, які я прочитала. Захопливий сюжет, гумор, романтика, другорядні персонажі — все ідеально. Особливо я прикіпіла до Лідії, вона така чудова!
Містер Коллінз прибуває трохи раніше за мешканців Незерфілду і зосереджує свою увагу на Джейн. Елізабет прагне врятувати сестру від лихої пари і береться всіляко їх розводити. Тим часом прибувають Бінґлі і Дарсі. Останній підслуховує розмову Елізабет з батьком і вирішує їй допомогти. Разом вони плетуть інтриги, як віднадити містера Коллінза. Проти подвійних зусиль йому точно не встояти!
October 14, 2019
Positively Wonderful
I just loved this book. All of the action takes place in Hertfordshire, mostly at either Netherfield or Longbourn and ODC's romance is relatively straightforward. Darcy knows he loves Lizzy but will not act on his love because of perceived family obligations but he has a correspondent who berates him for his foolishness. Lizzy, as with canon, is slower to fall for Darcy but even though it takes longer for her to fully realise she loves him with all her heart, she becomes aware of what sort of man he is early on and she becomes fast friends with him fairly early on.
There is am impediment to Lizzy admitting her own love however, in that one of her sisters stakes a claim on the gentleman early on and she has Mrs Bennet's full approval and help to secure such a desirable catch. Lizzy knows Mr Darcy does not harbour a tendre for said sister, but she still has to tread carefully so as not to hurt her.
Wickham is clear and present but has not the influence on any of the Bennets we are used to seeing but he does try to upset the apple cart towards the end, but he is dealt with swiftly and efficiently. There is no Colonel Fitzwilliam other than in a reference by Darcy. Miss Bingley is quite ineffectual in her machinations towards her brother and Darcy, and Lady C is only present towards the end, but her influence is rendered useless by a surprising source. Mr Collins is...well, he's Mr Collins in all his foolish (and interfering) glory, and we are introduced to Lizzy's best friend from her childhood. The Gardiners do not make an appearance until the very end, nor do they have any influence in how the story plays out.
Perhaps one of the best aspects of the book is that we really get to know more of Mary, Kitty and Lydia. Mrs Bennet is the Mrs Bennet we have come to know but Mr Bennet has a minor epiphany after an episode quite early in the story.
I have not gone into any specifics as I do not want to spoil the delight any reader will obtain by reading this story. I highly recommend it. 5 stars. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I just loved this book. All of the action takes place in Hertfordshire, mostly at either Netherfield or Longbourn and ODC's romance is relatively straightforward. Darcy knows he loves Lizzy but will not act on his love because of perceived family obligations but he has a correspondent who berates him for his foolishness. Lizzy, as with canon, is slower to fall for Darcy but even though it takes longer for her to fully realise she loves him with all her heart, she becomes aware of what sort of man he is early on and she becomes fast friends with him fairly early on.
There is am impediment to Lizzy admitting her own love however, in that one of her sisters stakes a claim on the gentleman early on and she has Mrs Bennet's full approval and help to secure such a desirable catch. Lizzy knows Mr Darcy does not harbour a tendre for said sister, but she still has to tread carefully so as not to hurt her.
Wickham is clear and present but has not the influence on any of the Bennets we are used to seeing but he does try to upset the apple cart towards the end, but he is dealt with swiftly and efficiently. There is no Colonel Fitzwilliam other than in a reference by Darcy. Miss Bingley is quite ineffectual in her machinations towards her brother and Darcy, and Lady C is only present towards the end, but her influence is rendered useless by a surprising source. Mr Collins is...well, he's Mr Collins in all his foolish (and interfering) glory, and we are introduced to Lizzy's best friend from her childhood. The Gardiners do not make an appearance until the very end, nor do they have any influence in how the story plays out.
Perhaps one of the best aspects of the book is that we really get to know more of Mary, Kitty and Lydia. Mrs Bennet is the Mrs Bennet we have come to know but Mr Bennet has a minor epiphany after an episode quite early in the story.
I have not gone into any specifics as I do not want to spoil the delight any reader will obtain by reading this story. I highly recommend it. 5 stars. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
October 10, 2019
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Cricket, that sport that I barely knew anything about until seven years ago. I still do not know much, although I kind of understand the 4s and the 6s but not much. Cricket, that sport that Mr Darcy plays as a pro! but also is played by Elizabeth Bennet, and Mr Bingley, and the Lucases, and Lydia Bennet too. What can a cricket game do to get one of our favourite couples together? It can do a lot of harm, mainly if a ball goes astray!
Let’s start with the idea that “apparently” Mr Darcy abhors any kind of disguise… false! or at least, he should define “disguise” because he is pretty cheeky and a bit naughty in order to help Lizzie to help Jane. Let’s face it: Lizzie is quite oblivious to what she is getting into when she accepts Mr Darcy’s help, she seems a bit naive and he is far too keen to help. She thinks that this will be just something for him to entertain himself as he is not among the ton and the best society.
Things evolve easily, I really like how quick Darcy is and how he “organises” his help. Mr Collins is so obliged to him that he follows almost any advice that Darcy gives him, even if it includes being less time with his dear Cousin Jane.
A few things for you to know: cricket can be dangerous, going upstairs and downstairs with a twisted ankle can be entertaining, having Lydia looking up for a husband may be even beneficial, Anne de Bourgh can be really nice and understanding, Caroline Bingley is, as usual, annoying and Mr Bennet needs a good telling off.
Jealousy is a powerful tool, a very powerful one, it does not matter what way it goes. Misunderstandings are always going to be there for this couple and KC Kahler knows how to write them.
Cricket, that sport that I barely knew anything about until seven years ago. I still do not know much, although I kind of understand the 4s and the 6s but not much. Cricket, that sport that Mr Darcy plays as a pro! but also is played by Elizabeth Bennet, and Mr Bingley, and the Lucases, and Lydia Bennet too. What can a cricket game do to get one of our favourite couples together? It can do a lot of harm, mainly if a ball goes astray!
Let’s start with the idea that “apparently” Mr Darcy abhors any kind of disguise… false! or at least, he should define “disguise” because he is pretty cheeky and a bit naughty in order to help Lizzie to help Jane. Let’s face it: Lizzie is quite oblivious to what she is getting into when she accepts Mr Darcy’s help, she seems a bit naive and he is far too keen to help. She thinks that this will be just something for him to entertain himself as he is not among the ton and the best society.
Things evolve easily, I really like how quick Darcy is and how he “organises” his help. Mr Collins is so obliged to him that he follows almost any advice that Darcy gives him, even if it includes being less time with his dear Cousin Jane.
A few things for you to know: cricket can be dangerous, going upstairs and downstairs with a twisted ankle can be entertaining, having Lydia looking up for a husband may be even beneficial, Anne de Bourgh can be really nice and understanding, Caroline Bingley is, as usual, annoying and Mr Bennet needs a good telling off.
Jealousy is a powerful tool, a very powerful one, it does not matter what way it goes. Misunderstandings are always going to be there for this couple and KC Kahler knows how to write them.
January 1, 2022
4.25 stars
I was splendidly surprised with how much I enjoyed this variation - from the alterations made from the original plot to the absolutely delightful relationship dynamics.
Normally, Elizabeth and Darcy would be at the forefront of this - and don’t get me wrong, they played their roles satisfyingly well.
But the supporting cast is so wonderfully depicted in this variation and I can’t stop fawning over it.
Bingley and Jane are marvellous in expressing their wants. Mr. Bennet starts off on the wrong foot but sees the error of his ways and makes amendments - not large ones, but acknowledging one’s faults is always the hardest part of improving one’s self. Even Mary and Kitty were charming.
But the MVP goes to one rendition of Miss Lydia Bennet who is worthy of such praise because the character growth. She is still immature but also endearing and you want her to flourish because she has so much potential so when she does? The satisfaction is everything.
The sisterhood and sibling dynamics of the Bennet’s were superb. It is hands down my favourite part about this novel because it feels genuine and authentic and as someone who often struggles with relating to sisterly dynamics having none of my own (two younger brothers is more than enough siblings and I wouldn’t trade them for anything), I absolutely adored them.
I can’t stop praising this work enough.
I am impressed, gratified by reading experience and think that anyone who is a fan of JAFF will find something in this version of the story to enjoy.
I was splendidly surprised with how much I enjoyed this variation - from the alterations made from the original plot to the absolutely delightful relationship dynamics.
Normally, Elizabeth and Darcy would be at the forefront of this - and don’t get me wrong, they played their roles satisfyingly well.
But the supporting cast is so wonderfully depicted in this variation and I can’t stop fawning over it.
Bingley and Jane are marvellous in expressing their wants. Mr. Bennet starts off on the wrong foot but sees the error of his ways and makes amendments - not large ones, but acknowledging one’s faults is always the hardest part of improving one’s self. Even Mary and Kitty were charming.
But the MVP goes to one rendition of Miss Lydia Bennet who is worthy of such praise because the character growth. She is still immature but also endearing and you want her to flourish because she has so much potential so when she does? The satisfaction is everything.
The sisterhood and sibling dynamics of the Bennet’s were superb. It is hands down my favourite part about this novel because it feels genuine and authentic and as someone who often struggles with relating to sisterly dynamics having none of my own (two younger brothers is more than enough siblings and I wouldn’t trade them for anything), I absolutely adored them.
I can’t stop praising this work enough.
I am impressed, gratified by reading experience and think that anyone who is a fan of JAFF will find something in this version of the story to enjoy.
June 25, 2023
It’s Thanksgiving week and I’ve decided to reread all my favorite JAFF.
This book has everything I love. Little bit of pride and a lil bit of prejudice. Humor. Details are given to paint the scene so that you feel like you are in the room with the Bennet sisters.
Flirting between the ODC! A firm in his feelings Bingley. We get a new twist on the Lydia story - this is my favorite Lydia! Tricky Wicky is foiled!
This book has everything I love. Little bit of pride and a lil bit of prejudice. Humor. Details are given to paint the scene so that you feel like you are in the room with the Bennet sisters.
Flirting between the ODC! A firm in his feelings Bingley. We get a new twist on the Lydia story - this is my favorite Lydia! Tricky Wicky is foiled!
May 29, 2022
Loved it!
Reread: Still loved it, though I need to add that I love John Lucas.
Reread: I wish we could have a follow-up novel where Lydia grows up and eventually marries John Lucas.
Reread: Still need a sequel! I can wait...
Reread: Still loved it, though I need to add that I love John Lucas.
Reread: I wish we could have a follow-up novel where Lydia grows up and eventually marries John Lucas.
Reread: Still need a sequel! I can wait...
November 4, 2020
This is the first time I ever encountered works by this author. I am quite glad I purchased this book. I really enjoyed it. The storyline is nowhere near cannon nor is the language fully from the regency period but that did not decrease my enjoyment.
December 21, 2022
This was a group recommendation and it was awesome... for some reason I had thought that it's a murder mystery but it's not. Maybe I got it confused with some other book because it mentions a case in the title.
November 10, 2019
This book was a delightful romp with fun, witty dialogue. Everything I've read by this publisher has been original, well-edited, and fun to read. Highly recommend.
August 1, 2025
Fun alternate first line ... It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man distinguished by the patronage of the Right Honourable Lady Catherine de Bourgh must be in want of a wife.
I often feel that the JAFF fans tend to rate generously ... and while this probably wouldn't be a 5* with all my criteria, I feel like this was a favorite of my recent reads. And ironically, while it shared some of the same complaints as a recent 3* read (in the heads of too many of the characters; D&E, Lydia, Anne) and it was all a little too HAE, with everyone/maybe not MrsBennet, coming off better than most variations) ... I really enjoyed it. Very low angst until the final third where there were some miscommunications and complications.
Honestly, despite the high rating, I'm not sure this will stand out in my memory ... some reminders, for me SPOILERS
3rd person - in the heads of several characters, mostly D&E but also Lydia, Bingley, Wickham. Past tense. 42 chapters, with headers, although headers were not super informative, nor included in the Table of Contents. I really liked the narration/Sarah Jane Rose. Audio included in AudiblePlus, text in Kindle Unlimited.
I often feel that the JAFF fans tend to rate generously ... and while this probably wouldn't be a 5* with all my criteria, I feel like this was a favorite of my recent reads. And ironically, while it shared some of the same complaints as a recent 3* read (in the heads of too many of the characters; D&E, Lydia, Anne) and it was all a little too HAE, with everyone/maybe not MrsBennet, coming off better than most variations) ... I really enjoyed it. Very low angst until the final third where there were some miscommunications and complications.
Honestly, despite the high rating, I'm not sure this will stand out in my memory ... some reminders, for me SPOILERS
3rd person - in the heads of several characters, mostly D&E but also Lydia, Bingley, Wickham. Past tense. 42 chapters, with headers, although headers were not super informative, nor included in the Table of Contents. I really liked the narration/Sarah Jane Rose. Audio included in AudiblePlus, text in Kindle Unlimited.
April 17, 2020
A fun Pride and Prejudice variation. It was unique in that all of the events happened in Hertfordshire. I don’t think I’ve read a variation that didn’t involve Pemberley, Kent or London. There is a lot of Darcy and Lizzy time, which is always good. I enjoyed seeing more of the relationships between the Bennet sisters. Even Mary had more going on here than she’s often given credit for. Lydia’s character was a refreshing change, for the most part. And we get to see Charlotte’s scheming mind. I especially liked the addition of John Lucas, Charlotte’s elder brother and Lizzy’s childhood friend. I thought the story was a little too long and could have been tightened up a bit. And there was definitely too much Mr. Colins, though he was necessary to the plot.
February 6, 2021
A good Pride and Prejudice vagary, which is altered quite drastically from the original novel by a few simple changes.
The first deviation from P&P is the early arrival of Mr Collins at Longbourn, before the Bennets have met Mr Bingley. Mrs Bennet offers no objection to his first choice of Jane as a potential wife (as there is no prior attachment between Jane and Bingley), Mr Bennet is more indolent and unwilling to intervene when it does not affect Elizabeth, and Jane is much more dutiful and willing to marry without love, to save her family from penury.
Elizabeth, therefore, becomes increasingly desperate to save her sister from a disastrous marriage with Mr Collins, and in her desperation she accepts Darcy's help to separate the mismatched couple.
The second deviation from P&P is the inclusion of a friendly game of cricket, held at Longbourn. The majority of the neighbourhood are invited to participate, and Darcy, rather than standing about appearing aloof, takes an active part, which encourages people to think better of him. And when he rolls his sleeves up to play and Lydia Bennet catches sight of his forearms, she is instantly besotted. Darcy being her first crush changes her character quite dramatically for the better.
The beginning of the book was good, but it was the changes to Mr Bennet's and Jane's characters that made me a little unsure at first if I would like this adaptation. I need not have worried, as they soon revert back to the more canon, 'Austen' versions of themselves, but not before the course of Darcy and Elizabeth's love story has been significantly altered.
A lot of my favourite scenes in the book were Lydia scenes; where she decides to try and become literary to impress Darcy, or gets impatient that she can't read the end of Robinson Crusoe because her mother is disturbing the peace with her wailing; her change of character was a delight. And when we finally meet Wickham, Lydia's indignant defense of Darcy against his lies had me smiling from ear to ear.
There were a few turns of phrase that sounded out of place for the time, but as I was listening to this on audiobook while driving, I was unable to make a note of these. It is possible that the narrator merely made them sound incorrect, rather than them actually being so, since she does mispronounce a lot of words. For example, simple words like 'awed' were pronounced 'a-wed', 'tome' as 'tom', and she repeatedly called Maria Lucas 'Ma-ree-a' rather than 'Ma-rye-a' (the way it was said in the 1800s). There were a number of other pronunciation errors that pulled me out of the story immersion too, but overall it was a pleasant listen.
The biggest appeal to this vagary was the time spent with Elizabeth and Darcy alone (very scandalous!), or when they conversed together in the company of others, where we actually witness them falling in love. This was very nicely done.
The biggest niggle I had was with the writing style. A scene would play out and then we would keep going back in time and replaying the scene again from a different character's point of view. I dislike that technique as it feels like the forward momentum through the story is lost and I get impatient. It feels like the author is spelling everything out for us, because we couldn't possibly infer a character's actions or thoughts unless we witness them firsthand... it does no credit to the reader's intelligence.
The ending (as regards Wickham) was a little bit melodramatic and out of left field for my tastes, too, but otherwise this was an enjoyable read, and better than a lot of the JAFF out there.
The first deviation from P&P is the early arrival of Mr Collins at Longbourn, before the Bennets have met Mr Bingley. Mrs Bennet offers no objection to his first choice of Jane as a potential wife (as there is no prior attachment between Jane and Bingley), Mr Bennet is more indolent and unwilling to intervene when it does not affect Elizabeth, and Jane is much more dutiful and willing to marry without love, to save her family from penury.
Elizabeth, therefore, becomes increasingly desperate to save her sister from a disastrous marriage with Mr Collins, and in her desperation she accepts Darcy's help to separate the mismatched couple.
The second deviation from P&P is the inclusion of a friendly game of cricket, held at Longbourn. The majority of the neighbourhood are invited to participate, and Darcy, rather than standing about appearing aloof, takes an active part, which encourages people to think better of him. And when he rolls his sleeves up to play and Lydia Bennet catches sight of his forearms, she is instantly besotted. Darcy being her first crush changes her character quite dramatically for the better.
The beginning of the book was good, but it was the changes to Mr Bennet's and Jane's characters that made me a little unsure at first if I would like this adaptation. I need not have worried, as they soon revert back to the more canon, 'Austen' versions of themselves, but not before the course of Darcy and Elizabeth's love story has been significantly altered.
A lot of my favourite scenes in the book were Lydia scenes; where she decides to try and become literary to impress Darcy, or gets impatient that she can't read the end of Robinson Crusoe because her mother is disturbing the peace with her wailing; her change of character was a delight. And when we finally meet Wickham, Lydia's indignant defense of Darcy against his lies had me smiling from ear to ear.
There were a few turns of phrase that sounded out of place for the time, but as I was listening to this on audiobook while driving, I was unable to make a note of these. It is possible that the narrator merely made them sound incorrect, rather than them actually being so, since she does mispronounce a lot of words. For example, simple words like 'awed' were pronounced 'a-wed', 'tome' as 'tom', and she repeatedly called Maria Lucas 'Ma-ree-a' rather than 'Ma-rye-a' (the way it was said in the 1800s). There were a number of other pronunciation errors that pulled me out of the story immersion too, but overall it was a pleasant listen.
The biggest appeal to this vagary was the time spent with Elizabeth and Darcy alone (very scandalous!), or when they conversed together in the company of others, where we actually witness them falling in love. This was very nicely done.
The biggest niggle I had was with the writing style. A scene would play out and then we would keep going back in time and replaying the scene again from a different character's point of view. I dislike that technique as it feels like the forward momentum through the story is lost and I get impatient. It feels like the author is spelling everything out for us, because we couldn't possibly infer a character's actions or thoughts unless we witness them firsthand... it does no credit to the reader's intelligence.
The ending (as regards Wickham) was a little bit melodramatic and out of left field for my tastes, too, but otherwise this was an enjoyable read, and better than a lot of the JAFF out there.
July 30, 2020
A sweet, romantic...
...story. Rich relationship development between several different people.
If I have any criticism it is actually the lack of resolution of a few characters.
I had trouble focusing and keeping my attention on the book, but I suspect that’s due to irregular extenuating circumstances (Covid 19, Federal troops invading my hometown of Portland - quashing the First Amendment.)
This book is very chaste, and there is a brief episode of attempted sexual violence.
...story. Rich relationship development between several different people.
If I have any criticism it is actually the lack of resolution of a few characters.
I had trouble focusing and keeping my attention on the book, but I suspect that’s due to irregular extenuating circumstances (Covid 19, Federal troops invading my hometown of Portland - quashing the First Amendment.)
This book is very chaste, and there is a brief episode of attempted sexual violence.
July 11, 2022
A pleasant variation, quite different, but enjoyably written.
February 27, 2020
Needlessly too long. Paring it down 1/4 would have been helpful in telling the story.
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