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The last time we were in this house was the year I did not sleep. We came for a season. (c)
And that reason is not revealed until much later in the story. A ghost journey, a memory trip, a sibling rivalry and connection deeper than anything, a grieving mother, just a touch of mental illness, bullying, social media dependency & a touch of catfishing (maybe?). The plethora of meaningful tidbits is a giant plus.
The giant minus is that someone somewhere was trying too hard to pull off a JC Oates on me. And they didn't succeed at that. All those mid-though, half-sentence premature finished phrases of hers, jumping between different subjects all the time, both too short and too long phrases neighboring on the same page. Attention to all kinds of minuscule details… JC is usually managing to entangle the reader into a web she weaves with all of that. This one - nope. The end result is just inconsistent writing.
Everything else is a lot of giant minuses:
- Jagged delivery, this could not have been any more irritatingly written.
- A lot of meaningless chatter that clouded the text and made it unnecessarily obscure.
- This probably was supposed to be high lit. It wasn't, instead we got a text packed with strange stuff mixed into a giant mess. There wasn't enough structure to enjoy it. Maybe, this was supposed to be a poetic effort. Some of the tidbits I actually enjoyed. But things like these made me want to burn this book.
- The plot was unnecessarily foggy. Are the readers supposed to make up half the meaning for themselves? What we've got here: a ghost possession, a grief internalised, a case where a person deals with loss via reenacting the lost person's life, a schizophrenia onset, some people having hallucinations, etc etc etc? While I can do that, I think, it does not mean that I'd enjoy it.
- The most horrible things about this horror were the ugly cover and the style.
- The style was very much like Joyce Carol Oates' one (an influence?) but this novel did not quite pull it off like she does most of the time.
- Some phrases were unfortunately formulated:
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Her feet tangling in the cord of her dressing gown and nearly felling her, grabbing the glass on her bedside table in case she needed a weapon. (c) Feet wielding her bedside table as a weapon? I'd like to see that.
So, the overall rating: 1 star.
The stuff destined to be burned:
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There are crusts of moths growing and spiders in their wintry sacks. There are the bones of tiny animals in the foundations. There are nettles in the garden, their roots tangling labyrinthine in the dirt. Ursa fights her brother in the house and loses a fingernail beneath the kitchen counter, her teeth stained with blood. Sheela dreams of her unborn children in the house, sees them as tiny smudges of charcoal on the walls. When the house is empty—as it often is—the villagers sometimes break a window and drink in the low-ceilinged living room, drop their beer cans into the fireplace, conceive their own children in the beds, leave their footprints high up on the walls. Peter is a child turning his binoculars toward the sea, looking for drowning boats. Sheela is giving birth in the still bedroom, the house frozen around her, watchful as a child. Sheela and Peter are having sex in the bath, the water soaking the floor, Sheela’s fingers bent at an angle in his mouth. Peter and Ursa’s parents are having sex in the bedroom, the duvet pulled over their heads, the light filtered red. Sheela and Peter are fighting in the kitchen, a glass hits the wall and explodes outward, their eyes are closed, the glass is caught in the moment before breaking, Sheela is holding it in her hand, raising it up to drink. The house is straining to see down to the beach, where September and July are up to their waists in the sea, the fire on their faces. (c)
The bit I almost dismissed as some sort of crazy dream everyone shared (spoiler red alert!):
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She goes into the tennis court and kicks at the deep water, throwing it upward so that it seems to hang frozen for a moment in the fizzing beam from the floodlight and then falls back. There is a noise like wood breaking and I look up.
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The rain is pelting down and the trees are swaying, beaten, around us, and above—
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above there is the shudder of imminent movement. One of the trees on the far side of the court, just beside the fence, is shifting, its roots emerging from the earth as if it might walk away from that place. September is laughing and laughing, her blond head tipped back, her mouth open. I shout her name, September, watch out. She turns toward me. The tree—
★ ★ ★
falls silently, sideways, and into the largest of the floodlights, which is heaved unceremoniously from the ground, the squeal of loosening metal, the tree’s trailing, dying body bringing the floodlight crashing down through the old fence into the water on the court, which for a moment is illuminated, charged with—
light. There is the smell of dampened fire, smoke. Someone is shouting. September’s body is bent backward by some force that only later I will know is electricity. And I am trying to run forward but the shed is buckling around me, the walls caving in, and I am trapped and someone is shouting and shouting and it is—
★ ★ ★
someone is shouting—
★ ★ ★
and it is me.
Bits I loved:
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This the house we have come to. This the house we have left to find. (c)
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How could it be that one moment you knew nothing and the next you knew everything? (c)
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That was the day I promised her everything a person could promise. (c)
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Do you feel like you’ve been in space and only just come down? I say.
Sure, she says; yes. All the time. (c)
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If brains are houses with many rooms then I live in the basement. (c)