What a waste of potential. I started out reading this and was really excited. The first few chapters were phenomenal and I was already thinking that this might surpass World War Z for the best zombie novel. Apparently, this was about the point that George Romero's manuscript ended and the new author took over.
Let's break the book down. Act One covers a little over 400 pages and details the first eleven days of the outbreak. Act Two is about 35 pages and handles the following eleven years. In Act Three, we skip another five years and covers one day.
I don't even have the energy right now to get into this in detail. Act One is about 200 pages longer than it should be. Most of the news and aircraft carrier sections should be cut out. The infestation of the aircraft carrier is comically stupid and implausible. The first bad guy appears in this section. He's a chaplain that goes crazy with lust after reading a pornographic magazine for the first time. Seriously.
I feel like the cable news section was included just so that the Megyn Kelly stand in could get her throat ripped out (not by a zombie, just a producer she was arguing with). The whole section could have been removed and substituted with scenes where other characters are watching or discussing the news (some of which is already there). We also get the most unbelievable escape and survival scene since Glenn surviving "Dumpster-gate" from the Walking Dead tv show.
Act Two spends a little time covering the highlights of each of the 11 years. This part felt like it came from an outline for what George Romero intended the middle of the book to be. Instead, we pretty much just got the outline. This means we missed out on zombie chimpanzees, rats, dogs, chickens, elephants and dolphins. How the hell do you mention these and not even include them in the book other than, a couple throwaway lines talking about them? It never really explains how the animals become infected. Zombies only attack/eat humans and horses, so I guess these animals just revive as zombies whenever they die.
Act Three is the most mind boggling part of the book. After 15 years, most of the zombies are so decomposed they're barely mobile and no longer a threat (unless you stick your hand in one of their mouths. Yes, a main character does this after surviving 15 years). All of our survivors now live in a Buddhist commune in Toronto, Canada. Toronto. Canada. Everyone knows during an end of the world situation with no electricity, you want to move to where the winter temperatures get down to -20 degrees. Apparently, it doesn't affect the escaped zoo giraffes now living there, even though I'm not sure what they're eating during the winter. Everyone has also become vegetarian for reasons. Supposedly, they were worried about new animals having the zombie virus but couldn't wait after a kill to see if the animal revived? Everyone has decided how great the zombie apocalypse was and how horrible humanity is. For some reason, they haven't decided to go full Jim Jones and drink the poisoned Kool-aid, but I don't know why. They all seem to think that people are the worst thing ever, but don't do anything about it. Despite thinking people are the worst thing ever, they've bricked up all of their guns. Maybe they're just waiting for someone to come wipe them out. They even have hospice set up for zombies who are so decayed they can no longer move. Everything is dragged out, and never ends and I don't care at this point. The best characters died in Act One and I feel like we're left with the supporting cast.
Act Three also contains interviews of all the main characters where they talk about what happened in the last 15 years and how they ended up in the settlement. Again, these read like outlines with plot ideas that were never developed. The interviews are fairly short and light on details. Again, if these stories were fleshed out, told live and included with the Act Two highlights, it would have made for a much better novel. As the novel exists now, there is almost no character development from Act One to Act Three. The characters are older and have been thru hell, but act the exact same. Other than they don't eat meat and love zombies, now.
I saved the worst for last. This book is so hit you over the head political that it's really hard to stay focused on the book. Yes, George Romero has always had political aspects to the movies (homelessness, consumerism) but they've been somewhat subtle. This book is about as subtle as a brick to the face. Everyone is racist. Men are the worst. America is evil. San Diegans blame and attack Mexicans for causing the outbreak. Missourians do the same with Syrian refugees in their town. At this point in the novel, it's all over the news that this is a world wide event, so it doesn't really make sense in the context of the story. There's a "cult" that is briefly talked about in an interview called the Patriots. This horrible cult apparently goes around and clears the local area of zombies and places little American flags in the ground where they've wiped out the zombies. That's it. Oh, they also have women in domestic roles, other than when the female character recounting this story goes out with them on zombie killing missions. They don't kill the women or rape them beat them or enslave them. They have them cook. Definitely worse than the zombies. Not convinced on the lack of subtlety? Here's a couple lines from the book:
"What says "U.S.A." like a car? Henry Ford lived right here in the good ol' U.S.A., remember. He was also racist. American to the core, right?"
"We were killing beings who'd invaded our country, who were trying to replace our culture with their own." (yes, they're talking about zombies in that one)
"Trump International Hotel, apparently having been built of the chintziest material, was gone from the skylines."
"The zombies aren't the virus. We are."
"Even before [the zombie apocalypse], Canada had tempted Americans aching for a land where guns weren't handed out like candy and a genetic disease wouldn't bankrupt you."
These were just a few lines I remembered off the top of my head and looked up. There are lots more like them in the book. I'm still not finished yet, because the pages in Act Three multiply quicker than zombies. Every time I think I'm almost done, I realize I still have 100+ pages to go. I haven't wanted to stop reading a book this bad in awhile, but I've gone this far and don't like to review books that I don't finish.
Cont'd. It only gets worse. The final big bad winds up being a Donald Trump stand in. Just in case you don't realize who he's supposed to represent, the author mentions the characters name and Trump International Hotel in the same or adjacent sentences multiple times. Honestly, it would have been easier and almost as subtle to just name the character Ronald Crump. He gets the community riled up because they don't have any kind of defense against other groups and they've sealed away all their weapons. He kind of raises a good point. We know from the flashback interviews that there are plenty of bad groups out there; lots of people know about the community in Canada and some group has been actively scouting the area. Yeah, the guy is an asshole, but he has some valid concerns. He riles the crowd up and they go full mob and kill some prisoners (group members who got high, stole some food and beat two people that caught them nearly to death) before deciding to go after the local zombies. (During this section, the author seems to emphasize the word "American" a lot. I'm not sure what he's trying to say.) The zombies and local, living wildlife (including the giraffe) stage a peace march (seriously), but the mob kills the zombies anyway. The animals were hanging out at the fringe and knew to run away while they had a chance. Oh yeah, the person who stuck her hand in a zombie's mouth. She died and came back as a regular person and no new zombies after that. Honestly, the book just keeps getting dumber. I'm still not even done yet. This might actually be the longest 100 pages I've ever read in my life.
Here's another quote from the book for you:
"She was Black. She carried a weapon. She should not have been surprised to feel a bullet punch into her side..."
She should not have been surprised because ten pages earlier, she used that weapon to kill Ronald Crump. If you kill the leader of the mob, the mob is going to turn against you and skin color has nothing to do with it.
It's finally over. Ultimately, I gave this two stars because the beginning was so good. At the end of the day, this is really two books masquerading as one. I have a feeling the beginning stuff was all George Romero and the end was mostly Daniel Krause. The bloat and stuff that didn't seem to fit in the second half of the beginning I'm going to assume is mostly added by Krause, so he can get to his own story in the third act.
You could kind of see that Romero was going to use the racism at the very beginning to point out how stupid racism is when faced with bigger problems. We all have more in common with each other than with the zombies. Instead, in the end, they acted like zombies were regular people with a different belief system. I kept waiting for someone to refer to them as Zombie-Americans.
In the Romero section at the beginning, they set it up that Ronald Crump was behind the outbreak or in cahoots with who was. Then, when he showed back up, he just happened to be hanging out with some coroners and military higher ups when they started getting phone calls about the dead coming back. He was just in the right place at the right time to get a heads up.