Caveat: this review is written from the perspective of a "Weird Al" fan for over thirty-five years AND the perspective of a high school English teacher for almost twenty years.
Lily Hirsh's analysis of "Weird Al"'s career presents as a scholarly look at his work, citing numerous sources and digging beneath the surface for a sophistication and depth that most people overlook when listening to a comedy act. Unfortunately, she misses the mark on many occasions. More importantly, she's not analyzing Al's work as much as she's deconstructing it, looking for issues that might be there in her eyes, but were not necessarily intended by Al.
With over ten pages of sources listed, this appears to be a well-researched volume, but her use of those sources is inconsistent. On page xxii of the introduction, Hirsch quotes John Thomerson and Linda Hutcheon (providing endnotes), but who are they? She gives no mention of their credibility. On page 23, she quotes "one fan named John"; the endnote mentions the title of an article she's quoting, but doesn't give any additional information: who's John? Where and when was the article published? When discussing puns, Hirsch literally writes, "Merriam-Webster defines [puns] as...". This is the laziest style of writing possible and one I've worked for years to get my students to avoid. She routinely cites website and forum users such as jilly7902, Kevb01987, Roe Kit, and a "poster called Dude". These sorely lack the necessary logos for this type of work.
Her writing also fails to use her sources effectively while still keeping the focus on her writing. When discussing Al's gig opening for Missing Persons, two-thirds of the paragraph is her quoting Al (10); that's more transcription than authorship. When she does focus on her own writing, she routinely goes off topic. When writing about "Weird Al" Yankovic in 3-D, she spends the last third of the paragraph writing about Al meeting Paul McCartney at a party. If she wanted to tie this in to how "Eat It" made Al famous, that could have worked, but she doesn't do that; it's simply tacked on with no clear purpose. Similar digressions occur throughout the book. When writing about Al's use of language, she spends two-thirds of page 43 discussing Al's relationship with Mad magazine, both as a fan and their first guest editor, but it doesn't relate to the topic at hand. Hirsch writes about the relatively mean-spirited nature of "Achy Breaky Song" in a section discussing how Al occasionally shows a vicious streak; she includes how, in an effort to soften the harshness of his song, Al donates the proceeds to Billy Ray Cyrus's favorite charity. In an attempt to connect that to another song, Hirsch writes an entire paragraph about how Al donated proceeds from "Perform This Way" to the Human Rights Campaign - not a word relevant to the topic of Al's insulting side - before going into the next paragraph about Al's cruelty (if it can be labeled as such) to Billy Joel. These are not isolated incidents. She strays from her message consistently throughout the book.
Hirsch's writing is also inconsistent. When writing about Cee-Lo Green's hit, she refers to it as "F*** You", but when discussing Coolio coming around to what Al did with "Gangsta's Paradise", she quotes him asking "who the fuck" he was to get upset about it. Why edit profanity in some cases but not others? When writing about Al's appearance on 30 Rock, she writes that Jane Krakowski plays Jenna and Tina Fey plays Liz, but when writing about a Funny or Die skit three pages later, she doesn't mention Aaron Paul or Olivia Wilde. This inconsistency is distracting.
I know this book isn't self-published, but it feels like it. It contains numerous diction errors, such as Hirsch's discussion of Al's "first major debut" (how many debuts can he have? it's redundant). She says that Al would "produce" twelve more albums after in 3-D. With the exception of Peter and the Wolf, Rick Derringer produced all of Al's albums until Off the Deep End; she means Al would release twelve more albums. As a musicologist, Hirsch should know the difference. When discussing "Pretty Fly for a Rabbi", Hirsch writes that "Yankovic infers his Jewish membership" via the various references. I'm hoping against hope that this is a subtle reference to "Close But No Cigar", where she uses "the word infer when she obviously meant imply", but I'm pretty sure I'm clutching at straws here. The book also contains factual errors, such as her assertion that the "Word Crimes" line about Prince writing words using numbers is "a reference to the singer's adoption of a symbol in place of his name in 1993" (46). This doesn't make sense, as the symbol is not a number; in addition, Prince's first use of numbers for words dates back to 1984's "I Would Die 4 U". Hirsch writes that, in "TMZ", "his character is megafamous" (164), but the song doesn't have a character; if it does, that character is the listener Al is singing to: "You're sort of famous, a minor celebrity", but even that character is hardly megafamous. Hirsch refers to 1984's "Like a Virgin" as Madonna's "first hit" (148); it was Madonna's first number one single, but "Holiday" was a top twenty hit, while "Lucky Star" and "Borderline" both landed in the top ten in 1983. These are all easily fixed with some quick research.
Hirsch's writing also becomes repetitious. It's as if she wrote each chapter in isolation, forgot what she wrote, and then writes it again later on. She writes about George Harrison's version of "Got My Mind Set on You" on page 67 and writes about it again a hundred pages later (both times omitting the fact that, while Al was parodying Harrison's version, Harrison's song itself was a cover of a James Ray tune over twenty year earlier. She also addresses the Coolio/Al feud no fewer than four times over the course of the book; once is enough.
The book also has moments where Hirsch seems to miss the point of some of Al's work. When discussing "Skipper Dan", she writes that the song is "perhaps drawing on the memory of his early attempts to break into the music industry" (163), but she misses the irony in that, with the exception of Al's ill-advised vanity tour, everything Skipper Dan does is parallel to what Al does every tour; the songs, the jokes, the costumes - "every time it's the same". In her discussion of "Lame Claim to Fame", she references the six degrees of Kevin Bacon game, citing how Al "know[s] a guy who knows a guy who knows a guy... who knows/Kevin Bacon" (164). That ellipsis skips over the entire joke; those two extra "who knows a guy" makes it exactly six degrees. That's the joke. And when delving into "Don't Download This Song", Hirsch says Al "shows concern about fair compensation" (168) before pleading that he needs the money for "another solid gold Humvee/And diamond-studded swimming pools." She implies that the concern is genuine before he "plays up celebrity excess" (168), but that concern is facetious and serves to set up the joke. She also misses the irony in the song when Al begs the listener not to use "sharing sites/Like Morpheus or Grokster or LimeWire or KaZaA"; he goes to great lengths to inspire people not to use file-sharing sites while telling them what sites not to use.
I'll admit most of these issues are problems with presentation rather than content. The problems with content can more easily be summed up with the issue of deconstruction compared to analysis. Hirsch spends her time deconstructing Al's lyrics, putting her own thoughts on what she hears rather than what Al intended. And much of that deconstruction comes across as in-depth, when there isn't much of a case to be made. Hirsch writes that Al's "Trapped in the Drive-Thru", with its mundane subject matter of going out for a burger, "arguably highlighted Kelly's deviance well ahead of the more recent, high-profile news coverage" (26). She's looking for a connection that doesn't exist; the character Kelly sings about, while he may be unfaithful, is not Kelly himself, does not commit the crimes Kelly was convicted of. When writing about Al's political subtexts, she references his appearance in 2016's "Bad Hombres, Nasty Women" and how Al "does not betray his political views" (105), but on the next page she acknowledges that Al "creatively was responsible for basically nothing" (106). If this is case, then this entire discussion of Al's politics is moot. And in Hirsch's look at "Polka Face" in the "Junking Gender" chapter, she writes how Al's inclusion of "Poker Face", "Womanizer", and "I Kissed a Girl" indicates a theme "of female empowerment" (155), meanwhile the polka contains eleven other songs that have nothing to do with it; the song also contains three songs referencing drugs and alcohol, but that doesn't give it a deep connection to substance abuse.
Again, this all comes back to the idea of deconstruction compared to analysis. To be analysis, there has to be intent on Al's part, but as he said to Hirsch in reference to her questions about his take on gender, it's "nothing [he's] consciously doing" (156). One of the many reasons I love Al and his work is how he goes out of his way to accommodate the person talking to him. He has been repeatedly asked about the feud with Coolio, but every time he's asked about it, he answers it as if it's the first time he's heard the question. I think that's his way of putting people at ease around him. I also think he does this by never directly contradicting or correcting people; he lets them have their views even if what they're positing is not what he intended. On some level, I think Hirsch knows all this; she acknowledges the distinct possibility that she is "another author overthinking it" (184). I think that captures this book perfectly.