Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children #4: A Map of Days happens to be disappointing beyond belief.
Okay, let's get something straight: I am a HUGE fan of this series (well, the trilogy that is)! I loved the first book for its well-placed mysterious and tense feeling. Then the sequel, Hollow City, was astonishing! I experienced reading a perfect adventure novel with non-stop suspense with an incredibly nasty twist towards the end. Soon afterward the third installment, Library of Souls, arrived. Ransom Riggs really nailed that installment home! There were compelling characters, a simple yet still enthralling plot, an intriguing setting, and even a couple of intense moments. After delightfully finishing three books, I considered without hesitation that this series was my favorite book series ever read!
You could only imagine how utterly excited I was when I heard Ransom Riggs was making the fourth book. I got it some days after it was released. Apart from hanging out with friends, exercising at the gym, reading Stephen King's Salem's Lot, and completing a butt load of classwork, I invested much of my time reading A Map of Days.
This book starts right after the 3rd book. I knew there would have to be roughly 50 pages dedicated to clearing the awkwardness between the peculiars and Jacob's parents. Ransom obviously needed to sort out how the peculiars would possibly live at Jacob's house. Jacob's parents were denying the peculiar children exist despite clearly looking at them. Frankly, I'd say Ransom handled these first few chapters quite well. Furthermore, I loved the moment when the century-year-old peculiar "kids" (some are actually over 100-years-old) were having pizza for the first time. Their reactions were hilarious.
Unfortunately, the vast majority of this novel was somehow even more boring than my Statistics class.
Although A Map of Days got somewhat exciting at times, there were too many bland and dull moments littered throughout this dumpster. The general plot of this book is that Jacob gets hired by this man under the pseudonym "H". He knows nothing about H. In fact, Jacob only accepts this job because H used to work with Jacob's grandfather. Jacob must retrieve this peculiar girl who has been hiding from menacing forces (who we readers don't meet until the end of the book). Sounds fairly interesting at first, however...
1. Jacob does not get hired by H until like 40% into the book. There was a non-stop filler between his parents agreeing to live with the peculiar children and Jacob finally meeting H. This is technically where the plot of this book starts after a huge chunk of the pages have been turned.
2. The filler is Miss Peregrine and the ymbrynes hiring the children to do part-time work. Ransom honestly should've taken this whole part out. This nonsense lasts way too long. In the end, all that changes is Jacob gets this clue about the whereabouts of H. This clue should have been discovered when Jacob and his friends locate Abe's (his grandfather) secret bunker instead.
3. Soon the group finds Noor. Every reader just reached the 80% mark of the book (wonderful)! The plan was to bring her to H. The readers must be wondering how this could possibly end with 20% left. Okay, in all seriousness, this might've been fine. However, after some weirdly described events where the group is lured into a bizarre trap, these evil forces capture them. Later in the novel, H "rescues" Noor. Jacob is eventually released and reaches H and Noor. The location is this hazardous zone within New York. You know, this 480-page book features almost nothing significant. Hollow City had roughly 60 pages less than this book yet was able to accomplish much more.
4. How about I rant about this novel's antagonists. First, this novel presented us with these evil "cops" (who wore "green fatigue pants and army boots"). These evil "cops" lasted for like 4 pages until Bronwyn, Emma, and giant poodles killed them. But I'm not done yet! This novel also featured these evil non-peculiars who possessed helicopters and I assume also possessed Stormtrooper accuracy. In addition, this novel presented us with the Five Boroughs clan. The Five Boroughs clan are these notoriously deadly dealers based in New York but their business is stretched across the entire American east coast. Their leader, Leo Burnham, was very charming. Just kidding! Like all gangsters, Leo possessed some of the biggest shitty arrogant doofus asshole characteristics in the history of mankind! He could have been the main villain, but he was only present for like 20 pages tops. Leo and his clan want Noor because she is allegedly quite powerful with her peculiar abilities. Noor is also apparently "1 out of the 7". In the end, these bastards just release Jacob and the peculiars from imprisonment because of this convenient dumb-luck scenario. To summarize, each antagonist had practically no involvement in the plot.
The reason why the scenarios in Hollow City and Library of Soul worked is that those novels had actual weight and tension. This book just feels like all the scenarios are cluttered piles of words on top of one another.
Another serious issue was the insane amount of new characters introduced. Allow me to explain: there are more introduced characters in this book than in both Hollow City and Library of Souls combined! Both those books fit perfectly the ADVENTURE genre! I was dumbfounded. No joke, at one point Jacob and his friends meet three creepy fish-people that emerge from a dirty pond and spout some weird nonsense to our main characters which frighten them off. That is all we readers know about the creepy fish-people. Why, Ransom, why? I honestly was confident that Ransom would stop introducing new characters after the first like 200 pages. Sadly, not all of your wishes turn true. Ransom kept on abusing the use of adding new people who only spout roughly 2-6 sentences of dialogue and last for 1-3 pages. I am completely okay with new characters (in fact I dare say I desire new characters since they might enrich this fantasy world more). But for the love of Jesus Christ, practically none of the new characters were interesting (aside from maybe Noor, H, and Leo).
I have a theory that might be completely misplaced but still believe could be true. Did Ransom make a gigantic list of potential characters prior to finishing the trilogy and only after Library of Souls did he realize the number of characters he never implemented into his novels? Perhaps he did not want all his time to go to waste. Again, this theory could be entirely misplaced but it still felt true.
However, as bad as the overload of new characters was, the worst aspect about the characters was what Ransom did with Jacob. The whole fucking plot of this novel revolves around Jacob implementing zero common sense, acting upon impulse, behaving like a toddler, and seemingly forgetting all he learned from the first 3 novels. He betrays Miss Peregrine by wanting to "follow his grandfather's footsteps". Jacob, along with Emma and a few other peculiars, go off on this stupid road trip adventure with virtually no plan or clear goal. Furthermore, when Jacob is interrogated by Leo, he acts so stubbornly that I honestly felt like burning the book in a fire. Why, Ransom, did you turn charismatic Jacob into pain-in-the-ass Jacob?
How about we analyze how many characters were killed in each novel in this series, shall we?
The first novel saw these lives lost...
-Abe
-Victor
-Martin (the museum curator who watched over that big hollowgast Malthus)
-Malthus himself
-Dr. Golan (that evil wight who disguised himself as Jacob's psychiatrist)
The second novel saw these lives lost...
-Mr. White (that evil wight who I think is third-in-command, and could command his own unit)
-Althea (Russian girl who served under Miss Wren)
-that stupid nonchalant clown guy
The third novel saw these lives lost...
-all the 12 hollowgasts Jacob managed to control and somewhat bond with
-presumably both of Miss Peregrine's brothers, Bentham and Caul (real name is Jack).
Furthermore, both Hollow City and Library of Souls featured many wights being killed in various action scenes.
Now, exactly how many characters meet their end in A Map of Days? The answer: only H who was shot by Leo's goons whilst fleeing with Noor. His death was admittedly fairly tragic to me. Afterall, he had a strong connection to Jacob's grandfather. He also died with a purpose which was to save Noor.
To put all this negative talk to rest, Ransom Riggs showed us to Jacob, Emma, and the peculiar children again. Like the previous books, each peculiar got their moments where their peculiar ability helped them and their friends (albeit not to the extent in the first 3 novels). The story was comprehensible enough with no spelling or grammar errors. And lastly, I appreciated how this novel ended on a cliffhanger.
Do I hate this book? Hell no!
Was I beyond disappointed and bored with this book? Yes.
Is this book worse in every regard when compared to Library of Souls or Hollow City? Yes.
I gave Library of Souls a 5-star rating. I give A Map of Days a 1-star rating. Sad.
Postscript
I am still looking forward to the inevitable fifth book, despite everything I ranted in this review. I dearly hope Mr. Riggs does a better job with the next installment.