I think my rating for this one is more of a 2.5 stars.
I was excited to get this as a GR giveaway. I was looking forward to a fun Victorian England mystery.
I loved the title.
The cover is gorgeous.
Turns out, those are my only favorite things about this book.
The story starts off with the proverbial bang.
Then slows down.
Maybe speeds up... but doesn't.
Maybe speeds up again... nope.
It's not until about chapters 22 & 23 do things get going... (there are 24 chapters with a prologue & an epilogue).
Ultimately, it's an almost 350 pg book, with around 50 pgs of some action and 300 pgs of (I kid you not) conversations.
The book is in 3rd person with alternating POVs. I didn't count it, but James had the most page time and oddly Beth had the least (or second to least) with the shortest segments of each chapter.
I think we spent more time with James' sister, Caroline, than we did with Beth when the book was supposed to be about her (Beth).
There is a minor love-story between Beth and James that is secondary to the mystery. Which is great and all, but it didn't feel like a natural progression.
I know I said there is about 300 pgs of conversation, but oddly Beth and James don't have enough page time together, getting to know each other, for the reader to see any chemistry between the two.
They had one scene together, where it was just the two of them talking. It was 1pg and nothing personal was shared that a blossoming relationship could bond over.
It kind of came off as an "insta-love" plot device that luckily wasn't heavy-handed. But it was embellished on when James' internal dialog would wax poetic about how great a person Beth is.
- she has a reverence for books
- she is "sunshine"
- she is "laughter"
- strong
- independent
- intelligent
- lively
- enthusiastic
- she is traditional yet outrageous
- confused yet clear-headed
- fascinating... but NOT mysterious (which is funny when she's the one with amnesia so SHE is the MYSTERY of the whole book)
(And the story only spans about 6 weeks, James and Beth are only in each other's presence for about 4 of those.)
Mind you, we don't see any of this. We are just told this.
And this rolls into the next thing.
There is too much tell and not enough show.
Not only are there inflated impressions with nothing on the page to back them up, but there are 2 deaths, a funeral, a break-in, spying, and some investigations that all happen off stage only to end up being the topic of one of the many conversations that happen on stage.
Outside of the villains, all the characters are essentially perfect, impractically so, especially James.
Except for maybe Caroline. It seemed like every time she'd turn around she was purse-ing her lips, reprimanding, chastising, and correcting all in a "frosty" voice.
But not with Beth. If anything, between Caroline and James, the two were almost parental. There's even a scene where Caroline is staying up late waiting to have a conversation with James about what they are going to do about Beth. And another scene where Caroline (I kid you not) tucks Beth into bed like a child. <---described as such in the book.
Which is problematic because it's not the kind of relationship dynamic I would expect or want with my new bff and my new beau.
The end is tied up neatly. This doesn't usually bother me. I feel if a book were to take me on a roller coaster ride of organized chaos, then I earned and deserve the reward of a neat and satisfying ending.
But, this book did none of those things and then it just came off as a little too neat.
Kind of like a sitcom ending. Where everybody's happy and the villain shouts his innocence and blames it on his dead and conveniently silent cohort.
There is even the group laugh at the end of the last chapter when a new character appears asking if they missed anything and Caroline pipes-up with a "nope, not a thing".
It's a little sad when you get to the last page and the word of relief that pops into your head is the same exact word, the last word, in its own sentence, on its own line...
Finally.