Prescient

Delphi Chronicles #1

by D.S. Murphy

The first time I saw the future I lost hope.

It wasn't just that the future sucked; that civilization had gone and ruined itself; that we'd altered our own DNA and devolved into predatory monsters that fed on the few remaining survivors. That was all awful enough, but it was more than that. I remember being young and thinking, when I grow up, I'll have a nice big house. I'll get an exciting, interesting job. I'll meet the man of my dreams and we'll fall in love and stay together forever.

But that all disappeared the first time I tripped 20 years into the future and found the houses burned, the handsome boys dead, and the only jobs were the ones young girls gave hairy old survivors in tents in exchange for a little food and water. Nobody asked little girls what they wanted to be when they grew up anymore. Nobody wanted to draw attention to the fact that most of them wouldn't live that long.

There was no hope, no peace for anyone. At least I had it better than they did. When my trip was over, I would get to go back. Back to the normalcy of 2015. Back to iPhones and Twitter and buying so much food it went bad before you could eat it. Back to laughing over foamy cappuccinos and iced lattes at the mall, window shopping and flirting with hot guys (not that I ever did that, mind you - but I always wanted to). And I still could. That was the point. Unlike everybody else, for whom 2015 was 20 years ago - long before humanity was destroyed - it was my reality. At least, it was some of the time.

But after seeing the future; after struggling to make it to the end of the day; after my first kill - none of those other things were the least bit enjoyable. All I could think when I got back to the real world, is how can I stop what's coming?

Prophet of Doom is a young adult time-travel dystopia. Part one of this book was published earlier, it's been revised to include part two and is now a complete novel. Previously titled Prescient; now titled Prophet of Doom.

Genres: Time Travel, Young Adult, Dystopia, Fantasy, Science Fiction, Romance, Post Apocalyptic

260 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 1, 2016

About the author

See Derek Murphy

Reviews

[John · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is HALF a book. I never complain about cliffhangers and usually I roll my eyes at reviews when people read a series and then whine that the first book ends on a cliffhanger. However, for this book I feel that the criticism is valid. This book does not end on a cliffhanger, it just stops. It literally just stops in the middle of the story. I don't mind when the main story is ongoing and unresolved at the end of book one, I can deal with that, but this book doesn't even resolve any of the subplots. We get resolutions to one or two minor "twists" that any reader could have already predicted 200 pages earlier.

Its been over a year since this book was released and there is still no "part 2," which means there may never be a second book, or if one is released you may have forgotten about this story by then.

The writing is decent, though I spotted numerous editing errors, but it was nothing too distracting. The characters were mostly cliched but the heroine was likable and the plot was good. I don't read too many books in this genre so it was all a breathe of fresh air and I found myself enjoying it. And just when things started to get interesting the book just... ends.

Also I wanted to point out that the author doesn't know the difference between dystopic and post-apocalyptic. Half of this novel takes place in present day and the second half is in a post-apocalyptic setting in the aftermath of what was essentially a zombie outbreak. I'm bored with post apocalyptic zombie novels but this one was fine because it took a unique approach, but don't call it dystopic because that's just false advertising.

The author claims he'll give you the rest of the book for free when it's released if you subscribe to his mailing list. But that was over a year ago and if you subscribe to kindle unlimited then it's already free. More false advertising. Avoid this book and this author since he appears to start lots of series and never finishes them.

[JenBsBooks · Rating 4 out of 5]

I wish I had noticed that this is only book 1 of a series ... this books sets up an interesting storyline that had me quite captivated, and now I have to wait. I don't like waiting. Generally I don't start a series until I know it is complete (yes, this puts me years behind at times, but otherwise I forget too much between books). I accidentally downloaded this during my Kindle Unlimited trial (instead of just putting it on my to read/watch list) and as it was already there, I decided to go ahead.

This had a definite non-GMO agenda. It reminded me of another book I read recently, Hunger - by Jeremiah Knight. In both stories, GMO foods lead to drastic changes in human DNA, making them into monsters (although "Hunger" is even more dramatic in changes to most plant and animal life as well).

This does present as YA (as the title obviously indicates), yet more conservative parents may have issues with some content before recommending it to teens. There is partying, proFanity, and smoking a bong ... which is what leads our protagonist to her first "trip" into the future. Most time travel seems to be going back in time, so jumping forward was interesting.

If the next book was available, I would have continued on immediately ...

I see the author has written several "first" books ... as I reader I guess I wish a single series was actually complete. I did like this, but wonder if I'll remember what was happening by the time the next book comes out (and how many books are planned). I'll note this author and his other books to watch, but don't think I'll read them with cliffhangers instead of conclusions.

[Line Bookaholic · Rating 4 out of 5]

Really interesting plot and great characters (not too typical, but still ordinary at the same time). I wish it was longer though and I was a bit annoyed with the typos and other mistakes (the name of the coorporation that changes basically every two pages...).

Anyway, it was really great and I'm excited about the next part. Although, as it's the case with a lot of free ebooks of the sort that I read, I usually forgot about them so that I start a million different series. It can be annoying.

[Jenny · Rating 4 out of 5]

Overall, I really enjoyed this story. Actually reminded me of Terminator in some ways (just the bare bones, though). And I thought it really funny that there is a Terminator quote used in the book, too! That made me laugh.

I loved the concept, the characters, and thought the future world building well done. I did get rather frustrated with the MC and her lack of regard for some of her "friends" in the present.

Also one thing that I don't think was addressed enough was that she was smoking this drug to time travel. Without really thinking through would this experimental drug could do to her. But I have a feeling that may come up more in the sequel.

Otherwise, a fun ride! I can't wait for the sequel!

[T.H. Hernandez · Rating 4 out of 5]

Young adult time travelling dystopian with a side of romance? Sign me up. This book is every genre I love rolled into one. The premise is fascinating -- a teen girl has the ability to travel to the future where she discovers an earth she doesn't recognize. Something in the very near future brings about devastation of apocalyptic proportions, and Alicia may be the only one who can stop it. While her ability to time travel isn't fully explained, it has to do with experimental drugs that only affect Alicia in a way that allows her to time jump. At first, she believes she's dreaming, except it's far too real and she has lasting physical reminders of her journey. Of course her friends think she's crazy at first, but soon they're on board. However, the more time Alicia spends in the future and the people she meets there, she's less sure disrupting the future and preventing their existence is something she wants to do.

Plot
The story is well-plotted and intriguing. It's a little slow in a couple of spots early on, but more than makes up for it later. As Alicia navigates her two worlds, more than a few twists are thrown her, and the reader's, way, adding complexity and intrigue. My only real complaint is that although this is the first book in the series, it just sort of ends. Not on a cliffhanger, but more like in the middle of the story. I kept trying to swipe my Kindle to see if there were more pages, because surely that couldn't be the end.

Characters
Most of the characters were interesting enough, but this is really a plot-driven story, so they don't have a lot of depth. I don't know if that's all that necessary in this type of book, though. Alicia is well-rounded enough as the protagonist, so I was able to overlook the lack of depth in the supporting characters.

What I Enjoyed About PRESCIENT
1. Premise. Time travel is my favorite genre of all time.

2. Alicia. She's a strong female lead, and although she's written by a male, she comes off completely female.

3. Zombies. While they're not called that, it's what they are and including them in this dystopian adventure was pure genius.

4. World Building. The author does a decent job of setting up the rules for his world. I look forward to exploring more in the next book in the series.

5. Twists. Loved all the twists and turns. Some I saw coming, but most I didn't.

Bottom Line
A fun, unique time travelling dystopian zombie adventure.

[Tracey Madeley · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book is much better than Shearwater, less of an academic explanation of myth and legend and more about the story. The novel essentially plays on the public's fear of genetic mutation, whether that is spread from genetically modified crops to humans, or the manipulation of DNA in order to eradicate disease.

Unfortunately like Shearwater I don’t see much depth to the characters. Alicia is the protagonist and although she is undoubtedly brave in taking on the mods her relationships are superficial. Her crush seems to extend from Brett to Jake with no reason as to what qualities she admires in either of them. Brett’s decision to leave his current girlfriend is understandable as she is being mean, but why he chooses Alicia is totally unknown. Is it just because she has suggested his father may be corrupt? Her relationship with her best friend Crys appears to be based on boyfriends and make up and while this is perfectly acceptable for teenagers, there should be more to their friendship than this. Arguably she is the person she confides in when she starts having the dreams and she is there to help hr solve them, but I don’t see what the basis of their friendship rests on. Perhaps she supported her when her mum died? A little bit of backstory would help the reader.

In the future her relationship with Tracy and Jake is very superficial. There is more chemistry between her and Jake and perhaps a greater bond borne out of fighting together for a common cause, but we know very little about him and how the relationship has developed in the past. The reader does not see Tracy being convinced in the past, or learn the moment when things changed for him.

For me this is a good premise, but the details need fleshing out of how the reader gets from A to B. There are too many unanswered questions and gaps in the narrative. The ending is interesting and leads on well to the next book in the series.

[Renee · Rating 5 out of 5]

Holy hell!!

What a freaking ride! This book was just amazing and I WANT MORE!! You did it again D.S. Murphy! You my friend have sucked me in for a wonderful adventure but now I'm hanging waiting for the next book! Do yourself a favor if you have not read his stuff, READ IT!!

[Roo MacLeod · Rating 4 out of 5]

I'm so dizzy

A good story with a different take on time travel. I enjoyed it. A good female lead and a satisfying ending.

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[Nick · Rating 3 out of 5]

Prescient was an exciting book, and I enjoyed reading it. The characters were engaging and the plot was unique. I'll try to keep this vague to avoid spoilers, but some discussion of the book will involve some spoilers - be warned!

There was an appropriate amount of teenage angst built into the characters; although I personally don't like angst, it wasn't overboard. This could be considered a young adult book, but it didn't strike me as over-simplified or too cutesy (which I hate in young adult books). The plot was deep and dark and exciting, but nothing too intense for a 14-year-old.

The romance angle was done well, and was pretty innocent for the most part. Much more emotional and angsty than physical, which, again, is appropriate for the ages of the characters.

A few decisions by the main character (Alicia) bothered me. First, I feel like she should have told her dad what was going on. He was obviously involved to a certain degree because of the riddled history that unfolds over the course of the book. I feel as though he would have believed Alicia and could have helped. At the very least it would have gotten them on the same page so that he wasn't worried about Alicia getting into drugs or other imaginary dangers. Perhaps I'm being naive, though, being a parent and feeling like he could have helped.

Another irritating decision is that Alicia ignores a couple of her own warnings to herself. If I found a note from myself saying "Don't trust so-and-so" I'd try to get to the bottom of it ASAP, and I certainly wouldn't trust so-and-so! Irritating, but perhaps in-character for Alicia.

Anyway, the book was good, and a quick read. By the time I was about 88% through the book I was irritated about a couple plot points, but I had no problem zipping through the end of the book. As others have said, it is a bit of a cliffhanger. I hope the next one comes out soon, or else the plotline will fade off into memory.

[Jinx:The:Poet {the LiteraryWanderer & WordRoamer} · Rating 4 out of 5]

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Prescient (The Delphi Chronicles, #1)

Prescient (also called, less appealingly, The Prophet of Doom) was an interesting YA, post-apocalyptic read. It all begins with Alicia, a very unique and likable main character, who gets mixed up in experimental drugs at a party, thinking it is simply pot. When she "trips" she literally ends up twenty years in the future after a great calamity has happened. After more similar experiences and getting a group of allies involved, she feels convicted to save the world and warn people of the impending doom.



Like many YA novels set in the near post-apocalyptic future, we have a teen hero angled to save the world from utter destruction. In many books of this genre, the reader has to suspend ones belief a great deal to truly be engaged in the outlandishness of some of these stories. While, Prescient has it’s moments of far-fetched, outlandishness to be sure, it also has some very compelling aspects. Alicia is a very enjoyable, likable main character. Her character gives the story life. She is a strong female lead without coming off as a one-dimensional cheesy commando super-heroine. She has depth and interests, and emotions. She is a quirky character. She is realistically portrayed as an innocent, awkward, and somewhat loner high school student, with her fair share of difficulties. As the story moves along she begins to evolve and mature, and gain more confidence.



There were a few other characters that also stood out to me while reading, such as the Eric and their childhood friendship, Crys and her present relationship with Alicia and the mysterious character of Jake from the future. I felt that there were some characters that really needed more filling out, more depth, such as Brett, the popular crush, Cody, the sidekick friend, Brett’s father Kyle, the scientist, Tracy, the contact from the future, even Alicia’s older sister Tamara, the environmentalist. I wish more went into their backgrounds and their character profiles.

As, I have only read book 1, I can only assume the many loose ends and plot holes will be smoothed over and polished out by the series’ completion, though its continuation seems highly suspect. I now wish I had started a completed series instead...



As for my overall opinion, the writing was fluid and immersive and the storyline itself was very intriguing. The reader is given several relatable characters, an exciting premise with engaging goals, a good amount of twists and turns, a pro-environmentalist/anti-gmo outlook, and a mutant-zombie outbreak (the creatures are called The Modified, or simply The Mods) all wrapped up in a fresh YA time-travel package. It is a pretty fast paced story, concerning some progressive environmental topics without feeling preachy or over-wrought. It was a good read, although ended abruptly in my opinion. I would like to read further installments but was not very happy with such an ending. A cliffhanger is one thing, the ending of this book was another.

Not sure I would recommend Prescient based on that fact alone. The readers I know would surely want a somewhat resolved ending, not an open-ended halt such as this novel provided, sadly. Prescient had great potential, however, and I’m glad to have read it. Also, the cover art is pretty nice.

[CONTENT & TRIGGER WARNING BELOW...]

[OFFICIAL RATING: 4 STARS]



[CONTENT NOTE: This novel contains a fair amount of drug usage as a plot device, (though as it turns out, it is not actually weed, but something else, however it is still used in a bong and to "trip" throughout the book) minor alcohol usage (it is not a plot device or main focus in the story but characters occasionally drink), language (medium to moderate usage of profanity, including F***, Motherf****er, Sh**, B****, and other variant curse words.) Sexuality is sparse but implied. (Crys is said to be "experienced" and she runs off with Cody. There is a scene, in the future where fifteen year old MC Alicia is pinned down and sexually assaulted and/or violated by a much older man, who gropes her and makes her touch his crotch. As he moves into her breast region she is saved, but the scene was a bit harsh for younger readers.) Violence and gore. (There are several scenes depicting skeletal remains of humans, decomposing bodies are described, though not focused on for very long. The Mods are described and might be disturbing to some. They attack humans, and it is implied they eat people. Hunans shoot them and stab them. There are many scenes describing the ruins of the houses though the book is not really dark considering.)]

[Topsues · Rating 4 out of 5]

I don't leave spoilers, so I will be reviewing this totally on the authors style of writing. I really enjoyed this book, it had a well defined beginning middle and end, even though the author says you can get a bonus chapter once finished, which I did, as it was left on a great cliff hanger, the bonus chapter was just the same. I felt this book was in the right genre. The plots described gave you just enough information when the scenes changed that you are able to visualise the time and places the story unfolds. It is written mainly In the first person of the main character which I prefer. The characters were believable, I was able to form each of their descriptions in my minds eye. The most exceptional characters are the most interesting, even so, you are given enough tidbits about the other characters as and when needed as the story progresses. At the beginning some readers may be offended and not like the drug references, to me however it is an integral part of the story, and is in no way described as a drug addict or reference any drug abuse whatsoever, so if you are able to move through that and start grasping the author's intent, you will understand even if you disagree the start of a great story that gives you mystery, suspense, uncertainty, adventure, terror, heartbreak alongside friendship, confidence, exhilarating, bravery acceptance, thrilling all alongside the innocence of first love. There are many other situations on this journey and each page kept me wanting to read until it ended, but some sleep interrupted my flow. The author also instilled in me the emotions running through the characters themselves, which to me is a great quality as this talent makes you able to feel how the characters feel inside and enhances the storyline. This book is thrilling, exciting and has a unique storyline and I would definitely recommend anyone to give it a chance, however like me you might be biting your nails for a while until book 2 is released. Please D.S.Murphy let's hope this is soon

[John Podlaski · Rating 4 out of 5]

I found PRESCIENT by Derek Murphy to be a different kind of Scifi and YA book. Alicia, 15 yrs old, is the protagonist of the story. She tries to smoke a genetically modified herb, passes out, and transports twenty years into the future. The world is at an end and only a small enclave of humans exists. The corporation responsible had modified the food which turned many of the humans into super "MODS" who are intent on killing the remaining humans - even those from the corporation and their city. Most striking is that her older sister is the commander of this enclave of survivors.

Alicia transports into the future 4 different times and relays the information to her three friends and older sister, who uses it to prepare and build her future empire. It is suggested that if the person owning the corporation is killed then the future will be different and the apocalypse prevented. However, when changes are made in the current time, there is no effect in the future. All this takes place amid Alicia's plans to go to the prom with one of the most popular seniors - the son of the corporation owner.

I did come across many typos in both names and other words and was left holding on to find answers in the next book. What happened to all the girls kidnapped over time from the survivors? Will Alicia return to the past and what action will she take? Will she learn how her mother really died?

Otherwise, I did find the book compelling and will look for the next book in the series when it is published.

[MJ · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 (beware, 3 years and no second book)

I was surprised at how quickly this book grabbed me. And it never let go either.

There were a couple of twist that I wish had happened differently, but not because they didn't work or anything of the kind. The whole book kept its thinking hat on. So often these books lose their brains because it's easier to write something in that way, but this one never fell into the trap. The characters kept thinking, the world rules stayed strong, the questions were being asked and answered where they should have been.

We didn't get all the answers, and it left us on a cliffhanger, but one that in my 'I really hate cliffhangers' view was appropriate. The stories not finished, but it had given us a full story and had come to a part that could take a break...

... Now the problem is... that was 3 years ago... and there's still no other book in the series. It was JUST advertised at the top of the iBooks lists, and it's a three year old coma patient :/ That's wrong people's. If the authors stopped writing it, there should be a note on the blurb so that unsuspecting readers know what they are getting into. Here was me... The cheapskate of cheapskates who really struggles to spend money on the next book in the series, ready and willing to buy the next... and the next hasn't been published in over three years :(

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[Angel Leya · Rating 5 out of 5]

Alicia was practically invisible - at least until one night at a party where she tripped into the future. And not to one of those fantastic futures where everything is techy and white and better. No, this future held abandoned skeletons, degenerated humans, and a remnant of humanity driven to destroy each other. Alicia needs to change that future if she ever hopes to have the happily ever after she'd grown up dreaming about. But even if she can change the future, after visiting it, will she want to?

The story is incredible. I've read a few of the author's books, and of all that I read, this is the series I'm hoping he finishes first. There are so many great twists, and the author's take on an apocalyptic future and how it's achieved is wild. Really gripping and gut-wrenching, a true page-turner.

Fair warning, though - the book includes several elements that may not be appreciated - like smoking a pot-like plant, a fair amount of cussing, and a near rape situation (seems to be a common element in the author's writing). It's worth it for the story, though, if you're not easily offended.

**This book used to be called Prescient.

[Liquid Frost · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is 100% YA and splits time between current-day and a dystopian future with monster/zombies and evil scientists. Food science, that is; part anti-GMO and part time travel. Main cast: teenagers. High school drama, girl wants boy, secrets, mystery, drug use and lotto tickets.

And it works.

This was actually pretty fun. The time travel is linear and is fun for the reader to see how you can use the future to set up the past to alter the pending apocalypse. Not mind bending or convoluted, though.

You will get a satisfying story out of this, but of course there is more...so don't expect finality.

A little jarring, but I understand the marketing - immediately after the end, you are directed to get one more chapter (epilogue) for free after you are data-mined and sign up for a newsletter or something. I'd rather have the epilogue as there is a build-up, climax, and boom. Done.

Note to author: Pick a name and stick with it. The flip-flop spelling of Crys and Chrys is annoying as hell. Super easy to fix. I'm shocked this book has been out since 1 April 2016 without this being noted and corrected.

3.6/5 Stars

[Carol Riggs · Rating 4 out of 5]

The book/version I read was called Prescient: A Time Travel Dystopia.

Initially 4 stars, although the last third of the book dwindled to more like 3 stars, with multiplying typos and characters doing eyerolling things. (And seriously, the main character Alicia didn’t remember seeing her own handwriting, warning her not to trust a certain person?—which actually didn’t even come into play in this book…maybe the sequel?) I’m not sure where Alicia got the ability to do what she did at the end; that seemed to come out of nowhere. And why was there so much detail about trying out for volleyball? I thought she was mean to Eric. I also felt odd about her continuing to smoke/use the drug that sent her to the future, especially since she stole those drugs so she could trip again. The romance was a triangle…sort of. It seemed she crushed on whichever guy she was with at the time. Content note: F-bombs, other language. The ending was surprising but abrupt, leaving MUCH in the air.

Good stuff: The overall premise was intriguing, and so was idea of the future dystopian world and Alicia’s struggles to prevent the apocalyptic events from happening.

[Mandy Peterson · Rating 4 out of 5]

Wow! Time travel normally isn't my thing, but I've had the honor of reading a couple of indie authors who are changing that. One is of course Melanie Hoo's Flicker series (which I reviewed also). The other is now Derek Murphy and Prescient!

Alicia discovers her unique ability at a party while trying to impress her crush. What follows is a Netflix series-worthy tale that doesn't let up - even when you reach the end of the book! A cross between Scooby Gang present moments and GMO inspired monster dystopia, I followed Alicia on this crazy ride. It's full of twists and turns while remaining understandable and relatable. I can't wait for book two!

[Lisa · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a pretty intense book! You have time travel to the future, eminent destruction of the world and then throw in GMOs that somehow instantly turn humans into monstrous animals, and you have the basis of this series. There were a few parts where you'll have to suspend your logic, such as young teenagers buying all sorts of military style gear (weapons etc), building a walled city and a huge house in only three or four months,, but if you can overlook some of that, the way the plot flows is fantastic.

The book does end with a cliff hanger but since the first part of the story is established, it didn't seem too bad to stop where it did.

[J.A. McLachlan · Rating 4 out of 5]

I wasn't sure about this one at first - lots of teens-in-high-school angst, fine for its target audience but I'm beyond that - then it got much more interesting and I was kept reading eagerly to the end. The half star off is because 1) it ends on a cliffhanger - not a fan of that, and 2) it's mostly a plot-driven story, not much to think about. You shouldn't judge a book by what it isn't, however, but by whether it does what it set out to do well, and this one set out to tell an interesting story and tell it well, with no deeper meaning than that, and it does it very well. You can't ask more. I enjoyed reading it and recommend it.

[Azinad · Rating 5 out of 5]

Jump in and out of apocalyptic time travel! wow!!!

I gave this book 5 stars for creativity, action, and adventure appropriations story. This is well written, does not contain a ton of typos, and contains almost zombie-like creatures that we make in our current time from our poor decisions. Great theories and the hope is ever-present to fix our mistakes by getting people to listen now before its too late. I look forward to the sequel!

[Justina Perez · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book is soooo good I can’t believe it’s not everywhere I just wish I could read the 2 part it’s such a great story line I’m just obsessed with the post apocalyptic story and the way she travels and some how I just knew when she killed Mr petter in the office after he shot her friend that it was her little boyfriend that was running everything I just want to know why and what would he say to her in the next book after they were face to face goodness gracious

[Cristina Godsey · Rating 4 out of 5]

Frustrating

Frustrating basically sums up the book. I enjoyed reading it but some parts didn’t leave me wanting to turn the page. It just felt like everything the characters were working for never helps. I also thought that maybe there could have been more details or this book could have given the reader more answers to tease us into reading the next one.

[Shailesh Bhaisare · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really like this book

I like how it connects the characters so well and the chemistry between Brett and Alicia. I loved the details because it really brings out the story. The creativity of this story was amazing and I do t even know where this author got such a large place for creativity

[Sarah Reed · Rating 5 out of 5]

Original and unique!

I freaking loved this book! I could not put it down! What an original and unique post-apocolytic story. I'm enthralled by the Oracle Of Delphi, and where that characteristic will leave the main character, Alicia, as time goes by. Be prepared though, the end I g is one big cliffhanger. Waiting for Book 2 iss going to be torture!

[Dana Wood · Rating 1 out of 5]

Interesting take on a zombie apocalypse. Lots of time travel stuff. But it’s really really really awful that the author decides that a teen taking a DRUG that most would get high off of would be the way she “sees” the future and it’s demise. And she takes the drug over and over and even steals for it. That is all I kept thinking about. But it’s fine....she’s saving the world, right??

[Margaret Harp · Rating 5 out of 5]

A surprise delight

I like dystopian books and this one was a really new twist on the genre. The only thing I didn't like is how the MC knew what she had to do but kept acting like a typical teen. But to be fair I think the author used that to show the conflict the MC had with everything going on.

[Rebecca · Rating 3 out of 5]

Not a full book!

This was a very good book and I definitely give it 4.5* if it I could and it was finished. Such a disappointment to be so caught up in a really good story and I'm reading an unfinished book.

[Zoe · Rating 5 out of 5]

A dystopian tale, Alicia is a very believable character and the plot is exciting, with tension and uncertainty about exactly what she is getting into. The creatures are well described, especially the danger they present.

[Janette · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good story

Nice work, I found this quite entertaining - I like the concept and the characters evolved nicely. The settings were realistic and everything moved along well so that I never got bored.