Oh Jane... You shouldn't of made it a series...
But you know what? I'm going to be generous. I tend to be overly critical of stuff. As such, 3/5 stars as it's more "slightly unpleasant" but has a few good things. (Unlike RT, Margaret. That book was f**** TERRIBLE!)
Issue #1: It feels like your a preschooler and Jane is one of the care givers lecturing you on %s.
No other book (except RT, Margaret) has this feeling to it. Hell, even shows like "Dora the Explorer" suffer from this, or even some of Jane's other works.
You know, the nice thing about Mrs. Frisby is that it's like Tetris, it can be enjoyed by all ages. If your not an autistic twat obsessed with the Rats of NIMH like me, this alone is a good reason to avoid this book.
Issue #2: Everything is infantile.
Large portions of the book feels like a high school drama, but in elementary school instead. The book literally STARTS with Timothy going to school, many of the characters are childish, there's a LITERAL PLAYGROUND! I could go on.
Issue #3: The characters are flat. And not just flattened from their original selfs, but completely different too.
All the female characters have been reduced to pathetic jokes, Nicodemus is a grouchy old man that chokeholds Racso, Justin is a school teacher and Isabella (one of his STUDENTS!) wants to sleep with him.
One of the strongest characters from the first book, Mrs. Frisby, gets relegated to a sad pathetic excuse. Ngl, her plot from the first book has grown on me as I've matured. Perhaps it's my parental instincts being switched on now that I'm in my early 20's. I now find some of the stuff toddlers do to be, well, adorable! Or maybe I now enjoy the more... Mundane stories? Don't know.
But here? She's a scared, shy background character. Perhaps she's succumbing to dementia, but I very much doubt Jane is smart enough to be writing something like that.
Issue #4: Racso is an infantile disorder.
He gets SOME character development, but he's an analogy to misbehaving young children. Also, he can't keep his dick in his pants.
Issue #5: Some of the comments in here are completely uncalled for.
And this is rich coming from me as I have no filter!
Example: I thought Racso's comment about knowing survival skills from an "Indian Movie" was somewhat funny at first. I was under the impression Racso made a fool of himself and everyone around him thought he was stupid. This... Is probably wrong.
But then, he just does not shut UP about it! On and on he brings this "Indian Movie" crap up! It's f**** annoying!
Issue #6: The decisions are just... WEIRD!
At one point Racso makes a paper hat and makes a "game" where everyone talks backwards (also, exposition about Racso's name). The whole thing, somehow, gets him in trouble with the colony's "high brass". Why? Wish I could answer that!
There also the monument to the fallen rats: A rock with "R" etched on the side.
You know, for super duper smart rats, that seems a bit, you know? CRAP! Why is it so simplistic and pathetic? It should be grandiose!
Issue #7: Jane retroactively changes the plot.
Justin, is somehow not dead! (Or maybe he pulled a Viktor Reznov and is actually a hallucination from the number stations, or he listened to GLADOS's advice regarding neurotoxins) Also, Jenner is a hero now! For some reason...
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Okay, but are there atleast SOME merits here? A few, but yes, yes there are.
Merit #1: Racso's background.
The whole thing where Jenner had Racso back in the city. So, there could be others!
Merit #2: Timothy gets characterization!
It makes him fairly annoying and childish and it makes me not like him, but hey, it IS characterization! Even if it's one dimensional....
Merit #3: The contradiction and arc with Racso's father.
Jenner saves the day by sacrificing himself, and Racso is hesitant to share his true background. This does drive the plot!
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It's... Not the worst book.