The Luminess of Mars

Aoleon The Martian Girl #2

by Brent LeVasseur

Science Fiction Saga - Aoleon The Martian Girl Part 2 - The Luminess of Mars (Part 2 of 5)


Aoléon and Gilbert are entrusted with a mission from PAX, a wanted criminal and leader of the Martian resistance movement. He wants them to investigate the Luminon of Mars, who he suspects is planning an invasion of Earth to steal its milk cows. Gilbert has an encounter with the Luminess (the mate of the Luminon) and discovers something strange about her. The undercover duo is chased by the Royal Paladin Guard.


At Aoléon’s home, Gilbert meets Aoléon’s sister Una, mother Phobos and father Deimos as well as her overzealous pet, Zoot. He is also introduced to Bizwat, a covert operator and Procyon Commando, who uses his Saturn Pizza delivery job as a cover.


Gilbert then gets to visit Aoléon’s school, the Martian Space Academy, where he encounters Aoléon’s nemesis, Charm Lepton, and her friend Quarkina. While there, he attends a history lecture on the Martian people by Plutarch Xenocrates. After class, Gilbert and Aoléon get to do some intense training in zero-G and Gilbert is treated to a Psi-ball match between Martian Space Academy and Martian Science Academy.


Join Gilbert and Aoleon in this exciting middle-grade science fiction book adventure!


This scifi book is part 2 of 5. If you have not read Aoleon The Martian Girl - Science Fiction Book Saga - Part 1 First Contact, please read it first!

Genres: Science Fiction, Fantasy, Fiction, Young Adult, Adventure, Middle Grade, Childrens

114 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 2, 2015

Reviews

[Aditi · Rating 5 out of 5]

“There are places on planet earth, where common sense doesn't apply.”

---- Toba Beta, an Indonesian author


Brent LeVasseur, an American science fiction author, pens his very fist children's science fiction series, Aoleon The Martian Girl, and the second book, in the series, The Luminess of Mars - Aoleon The Martian Girl, follows the adventures of a regular middle-grade farm boy with a Martian girl to her planet, Mars.

Synopsis:

Aoléon and Gilbert receive a special mission from PAX, a wanted criminal and leader of the Martian resistance movement to investigate the Luminon of Mars, who he suspects is planning an invasion of Earth to steal its milk cows. Gilbert has an encounter with the Luminess (the mate of the Luminon) and discovers something strange about her during a procession, and the duo are chased by the Royal Paladin Guard.

At Aoléon’s home, Gilbert meets Aoléon’s family, her sister Una, mother Phobos and father Deimos as well as her overzealous pet Zoot. He is also introduced to Bizwat, a covert operator and Procyon Commando, who uses his Saturn Pizza delivery job as a cover.

Gilbert then gets to visit the Martian Space Academy (Aoléon’s school) where he encounters Aoléon’s nemesis, Charm Lepton and her friend Quarkina, as well as receiving a history lesson on the Martian people by Plutarch Xenocrates. After class, Gilbert and Aoléon get to train in zero-G and Gilbert is treated to a Psi-ball match between Martian Space Academy and Martian Science Academy.


This part begins right off from the portion where the book 1 ends. And this time, Gilbert gets to know Aoléon and all about her family and her city of Luminon, which is a magnificent city and is also very similar to our planet. The crisis that Aoléon's planet is facing is the shortage of milk supply and where Gilbert comes from milk supply is available in huge amount. Yet there are lot of mysteries attached to this city that we get to learn about through Gilbert's adventures.

Once again the author have outdone himself in the department of these illustrations. Since in this book, the author enlightens us about the planet Mars and it's beings residing there, the illustrations are all very intricately crafted. Bright colours and vivid detailing were very evident in those illustrations, which once again allured me and kept me engaged to the story.

The lifestyle on Mars is very similar to ours and that the author shows us through Gilbert's eyes. The narrative is catchy and often funny at times. The pacing is really good since within few hours I finished reading this part. Moreover, the adventures this time might not be that thrilling and edgy, but the vivid portrayal of Mars kept me glued till the very last page.

This time the author have included a myriad cast of bright and lively characters which are quite striking enough to keep me engrossed into the story. Overall, it's another exciting adventure of Gilbert on Mars and how he unravels few of the mysteries.

Verdict: A must-read for the YA and middle-grade fantasy readers. All I can say, there's lot to explore through this series.

Courtesy: I received a copy of this book for a blog tour.

[Jonel · Rating 5 out of 5]

This story is well written with a style that will capture your attention. LeVasseur’s story is so wildly original that I’m completely hooked. I am dying to visit Aoleon on Mars.

The dialogue in the story is priceless. LeVasseur’s characters are so realistic and approachable. The character names had me charmed. I also appreciate the fact that they’re age appropriate. The hints and tidbits about the history and culture of the people of Mars was fascinating. This extra layer really had me immersed in the world that LeVasseur has created for our enjoyment.

The graphics in this story are fantastic. They’re vivid & really help the story come to life, combining seamlessly with LeVasseur’s descriptions. It definitely benefits from being read in colour, so if your ereader is black and white, I’d suggest reading it on your computer.

What a fantastic addition to Aoleon’s series. LeVasseur has created a work that won’t easily be forgotten. It’s perfectly suited to grade school age children but will be loved by all who enjoy science fiction. I will note, however, that this series definitely benefits from being read in order.

Please note that I received a complimentary copy of this work in exchange for an honest review.

[T.W. Brown · Rating 5 out of 5]

The YA market is a genre that I would not begin to know how to address as a writer. Let me make that perfectly clear beforehand. For Brent LeVasseur, that seems to be absolutely no problem. His amazingly illustrated science fiction saga, Aoléon The Martian Girl: A Science Fiction and Fantasy Saga - Part 2: The Luminess of Mars is further proof.

Much like the first part of this delightful saga, Mr. LeVasseur's strength is in the fact that he does not "dumb down" the dialog. If he fosters that amazing degree of curiosity that is eventually beaten out of us as adults, then you will have children scouring resources for the likes of Ayn Rand and investigating the "five" states of matter. I'm not saying that they will better their understanding of science by reading this wonderful story, but they may become more curious.

Besides the "learning" aspect, this story has what it needs most: an entertaining story line that will captivate young readers with its easy-to-relate-to issues like friendship, pizza, and rivalry. Did I say pizza? Yeah, and ice cream as well, but have to read for yourself. There is enough tension strung throughout and, just as you long for another, the next amazing image will appear to pull you into the story even further.

With so much depth for a YA title, some might actually shy away. I suggest that you take the approach of this amazing author and allow the young reader to plunge into this amazing story and discover for themselves what might trigger their amazing minds.

I received this title in advance in exchange for an honest review and I look forward to seeing where the next adventure leads.

[Cheryl · Rating 4 out of 5]

Gilbert and Aoleon are back in part two. This time Gilbert gets to see where Aoleon comes from. City of Luminon. It is a spectacular city. Gilbert is learning that even through he and Aoleon come from two different planets, they do have things in common like on Aoleon's planet, they also eat ice cream and pizza. There is just one problem...low milk supply. The cows have disappeared. Where Gilbert comes from, there is a large supply of cows in Nebraska. For now, Gilbert is just along for the adventure as he learns more about Luminon.

I had have the chance to review this series. I am so glad I did. Yet, the only problem I have is that I am reading the books the way I am is that I only get to read the books in parts. I have read part 1 and now part 2. This is the problem. I like this series so much that I am having a hard time waiting to read the next part. Gilbert and Aoleon are a great pair. I like all of the mis-adventures that they have gotten into so far. Although I was expecting to learn a little more about the great mystery that is plaguing Luminon. I did not learn much other than it involves Luminon's milk supply.

Before I end, I have to talk about the illustrations. I did not think they could get any better than in part 1 but Wow. They are just as good if not better. If this is possible. They really jump off the pages and this is hard to do when you are reading the book on a computer monitor. I feel like I am part of the "experience" and not just reading these books. I can't remember the last time that I have read books not just for the story but for the illustrations as well. I can't wait to get my hands on part 3.

[Beverly McClure · Rating 4 out of 5]

Aoleon, our lovable Martian girl, and Gilbert, our adventuresome Earthling boy, are back. Author Brent LeVasseur’s AOLEON: THE MARTIAN GIRL, PART 2, follows our hero and heroine on another wild adventure as Aoleon introduces Gilbert to life on her planet. The reader learns a lot about Mars. For instance, on Mars, Gilbert has almost super human strength and speed. Nice. We also learn there is an age difference: Aoleon is a teenager on Mars, but according to Earth time she’s around 108 years old. The Martians can read each other’s minds, too, which sounds like fun, but it does have disadvantages. You can’t tell a lie because everyone knows when you do.

Gilbert and Aoleon do a lot of fun things on Mars, like eat pizza, even though it’s quite a bit different to Earth pizza. They also attend school with students from Mars and “exchange students” from other planets, which is pretty interesting. Everything about Mars isn’t fun though. Danger also threatens the kids, and they soon find themselves on a mission to discover exactly what’s going on.

Mr. LeVasseur has invented some very unusual characters. Or has he? Do we really know what’s out there on other planets? Aoleon and the other characters in the story could be real. Who knows? The author also scatters colorful and fascinating illustrations throughout the story that give the reader a visual image of the characters and the planet.

AOLEON: THE MARTIAN GIRL PART 2 is a nice follow up to the first book. I wonder what the daring duo will be up to in book 3.
This is a fun read for middle grade/tween readers. Adults will enjoy it too.

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[Remy G · Rating 4 out of 5]

Introduction

In the previous book, an earthling named Gilbert travels with Aoléon to her homeworld of Mars, the sequel picking up where the first left off. In an interesting but certainly not bad design choice, the author begins the sequel’s first chapter at number six, the original book having five chapters, similar to how J.R.R. Tolkien didn’t reset “Book” numbers with his two sequels to The Fellowship of the Ring.

Luminess

The sixth chapter of the franchise begins with Gilbert testing out his spacesuit that, alongside the lessened gravity of Mars, allows him to leap high. There are occasional references to other media such as the DC Comics hero Superman and Ayn Rand’s Anthem. The story’s first illustration depicts several shiny green-armored Martian soldiers with their commander in the background, and is a good depiction of the alien military. The second picture provides a closer look at the aforementioned commander, who is the Luminess, the leader of Aoléon’s people. The third shows the Luminess from behind, with a view of her diverse audience and the city behind them, which all look magnificent.

The fourth image in the chapter shows the backs of the blue-armored Gilbert and Aoléon as a soldier approaches them, the fifth showing the front of Gilbert and his alien companion, alongside closer looks at the diversely-shaped aliens composing the Luminess’s audience, buildings in the backdrop, both good images, with the leader of the people taking especial notice of the earthling and telepathically beckoning him to come near. The following picture shows a close-up of the Luminess’s face and her tiara, the unique structures of the Martian city rounding out the background along with more diverse Martians.

As the leader beckons Gilbert, he receives visions of being home with his cat Xena, although this quickly turns into a nightmare. Aoléon and Gilbert then find themselves on the run from the Luminess, the former explaining that the leader was using the power of mind control on the latter. Backstory on the inhabitants of Earth follows, along with a visit to the Martian girl’s family, Gilbert receiving introductions to pizza-like Martian cuisine not to mention the family and its pets, with Deimos, Aoléon’s father, providing a few details on his job, after which the chapter ends.

Bizwat the Procyon

This reviewer had a bit of trouble at first determining that the odd third letter in the seventh chapter’s title was a Z, although fortunately, the name Bizwat is mentioned in normal lettering at the beginning of the chapter, which introduces the character, who is a member of the elite military group, the Procyons and works undercover as a pizza deliverer. Following this introduction is a nice view of the skyline of the Martian city and his receiving his next delivery destination as Aoléon’s house, after which is another view of the megalopolis’s gorgeous skyline. The description of Bizwat’s journey to her home is nice, with Aoléon knowing him, at least with regards to his secret identity.

Then comes a closer view of the cityscape, with gorgeous golden buildings and plenty of diversely-colored aliens at the bottom. Aoléon introduces Bizwat to Gilbert, with further mention of the Martians’ milk-like galact, which ends the chapter’s subsection. The next part of the chapter begins at the Martian family’s dinner table, where Gilbert has some trouble accommodating to the unusual seating arrangements. Afterward, Deimos explains the science of things such as traveling faster than the speed of light, mentioning beam as the fifth form of matter and engaging in enjoyable banter with Gilbert, the second subsection ending with his calling it a day.

The third subsection of the seventh chapter commences with Bizwat delivering a pizza to the humorously-named Emo’s Paradise, the section’s first illustration depicting the bluish exterior of the nightclub. The next artwork comes after a couple more sentences, depicting a smiling blue alien and a pizza, although this reviewer couldn’t tell if said Martian was Bizwat delivering the pizza or its intended recipient, Andromeda Supernova, receiving the pie. Then a few burglars confront Bizwat in want of his vehicle, the following illustration depicting him in his violet-lined armor in the middle of a jump.

In the middle of Bizwat’s confrontation comes the depiction of one of his assailants, a red-armored and scarlet bug-eyed alien firing a gun. The following piece of art shows multiple members of the bug-eyed Martian’s brethren, the conflict ultimately concluding, and the chapter reaching a satisfying end.

Martian Space Academy

The eighth chapter of the series commences with Gilbert and Aoléon visiting the Martian Space Academy, its first illustration depicting the two hovering above its many gold buildings riding a hoverboard, a nice piece overall. At the Academy the pair meets with several exchange students from worlds other than Earth, another nice artwork depicting a few of the non-Martian beings. On the way to a class, Aoléon encounters a female bully and her entourage, the next image depicting two of them, the foremost one having a sneer upon her face, following which is a sizeable banter among the characters interrupted by another illustration depicting Aoléon, Gilbert (still in his special spacesuit), and two of the adversaries, with only two of them depicted though the text says Charm, the chief of the bullies, has two accomplices.

The next image shows a back view of Gilbert and Aoléon bantering with Charm and her main companion, who always has a hand to her mouth as in prior pieces, with the conflict ended by a promise of a race after school. The earthling and his Martian friend ultimately go to a classroom, an illustration depicting it gorgeously with a window view of the city’s lovely golden buildings. Whereas the first depiction of the classroom shows the students from behind, the following one shows them with the instructor having his back towards the viewer, the next picture showing a close-up of one of the squid-like pupils.

As the class progresses, another piece of art shows prominently a jellyfish-like student with other nearby students, the astronomy lesson progressing thoroughly afterward, with occasional backstory in the mix. The class eventually ends and both Gilbert and Aoléon travel en route to the latter’s following course, with an illustration concluding the eighth chapter’s first subsection, one depicting both Aoléon in her yellow clothing and Gilbert still in his blue spacesuit in an arched tunnel, windows depicting other academy buildings beyond the one they occupy then.

In the brief section that follows, Aoléon’s next class involves zero gravity maneuvering, the Martian continuing to warn Gilbert not to draw attention to himself. The following subsection begins at the academy’s cafeteria equivalent, and after lunch, Aoléon participates in psi-ball, sort of a cross between dodgeball and capture the flag, with an illustration depicting Gilbert waving at the viewer from a platform alongside what is evidently the arena where the sport occurs. The next illustration depicts Aoléon upon her hoverboard with a sphere of light within her right hand, participating in the sport.

After the match is over, Aoléon and Gilbert participate in the latter’s first phased-matter jump to a pizza place for celebration, the final illustration of the main text depicting the joint, shortly after which the book ends satisfactorily. A glossary of terms for younger readers unfamiliar with the book’s more complex jargon follows, always a welcome feature, even for more experienced readers such as this reviewer, who consequentially became familiar with some of the series’ native terms. The author afterward gives special thanks to various people involved in the production of the novel, a final illustration expressing Aoléon and the author’s love for the Modo software responsible for the CG illustrations.

Conclusion

The Luminess of Mars is, for the most part, an enjoyable sequel with nice colorful CG illustrations, and the stylistic choices that this reviewer felt were odd in the artwork for the original novel aren’t as prevalent, although there are some minor incongruities such as an unusual depiction of the letter Z for the title of the chapter Bizwat the Procyon, which looks more like an L or C, and it’s rarely unclear as to whom a few pieces of art depict exactly, but those who enjoyed the first book will most definitely enjoy its first sequel, especially younger audiences.

[Pop Bop · Rating 4 out of 5]

Inventive, Amusing and Entertaining Middle Grade Space Adventure

The first Book in this series, (the series is now up to at least five books), is a little bit goofy around the edges, but it struck me as so well conceived, well written and well executed that it still caught and held my attention. After some reflection I was curious to see if the author could keep up the cheerfully inventive pace and appeal that was established in Book One, so I downloaded this second volume. I am happy to say that while there is still an engaging air of goofiness to the project, this second book is, if anything, even better than the first.

There are a few aspects of the book that in particular highlight the source of its appeal. First off, in Gilbert the author has created a genuinely engaging, bright, resourceful and high energy hero. This kid has an inviting presence that I suspect would draw a young reader along. Gilbert is relatable and as authentic as you could expect for a kid who is zipping around on Mars. He is complemented very well by the heroine, Aoleon, who is patient, good humored, gracious and competent, but with an endearing playful streak. Neither character is loaded up with cutesy quirks, and either or both of them can hold the center of the book very well.

The second continuing appeal lies in the science behind the books. As is always the case there is a bit of jargony gobbledygook, but here the author has made an honest attempt to make everything sound as plausible as possible. And, where real science and astronomy can be fit it, (names of star systems, effects of low gravity, atmospheric effects and so on), the author does so. This mix of the real and the speculative and fantastic is old school, but very rewarding.

Further, there is a wide range of humor in these books, with different bits tailored to different readers of different abilities and levels of experience. So, you get everything from floating cows to a character named "Charm Lepton". I don't usually come across middle grade fantasy space adventures that feature sub-atomic particle physics jokes.

Finally, I remain surprised and pleased by the quality of the writing. Between the handmade looking graphics, (which remain fun for all that), and the fact that this is a self-published series, the hardened browser could be forgiven for expecting an energetic but poorly edited and probably sort of clunky effort. This book is well edited. Grammar and syntax are proper. Vocabulary is actually fairly advanced, although the overall narrative is perfectly manageable. Adjectives and clauses are in the right places and modify the right nouns. Everything is just sharper and tighter than one would expect.

I guess if there is any weakness it would have to be that the plot wanders around a bit. This is not necessarily a complex, carefully plotted multi-book space opera. Given the intended readership that's probably not a bad thing. This is more along the lines of an episodic adventure series with some series wide story arcs but also lots of shorter mini-adventures, (eating Martian pizza, visiting Aoleon's Space Academy, watching a psi-ball game). I'm O. K. with that and I think it actually might appeal to a younger reader, who could read this series all at once or could dip in and out of it as time and inclination allows.

The main upshot, though, is that this series continues to zip along at a merry and entertaining pace, and continues in my mind as a happy find. There is just a lot of old-fashioned good humored style on display in these books, and I would expect the series to appeal to a wide range of adventurous readers. (Please note that I purchased this book as a Kindle download with my own cash money. I have no connection at all to either the author or the publisher of this book.)

[Teresa Vogt · Rating 4 out of 5]

The Story is a Young Martian Girl Aoleon, comes to Earth and picks up a friend, a Earth male named Gilbert. She takes him to Mars with her so he can meet and learn about her home. They have adventures that seem very normal for tweens or teens in that attending school, there are friends of Aoleon the Martian girl, and there are the snobby set that try things like sabotage of a flying disc so that Aoleon almost gets injured in a game, but wins in the end.

The ages of the Kids Gilbert and Aoleon are not stated, but mentioned to be mid-graders so the Pictures don't really seem to fit cartoon 'ish vs a more advanced type mixed storyline. Physics and Astronomy higher age and yet simple conversations where discussing rooms, and food etc.

There is a possible conflict with the Leader's wife as in they are running from her as she seems to catch on that Gilbert is Human. There is also the robbery of a 'Pizza' delivery boy and he can defeat the robbers easily. Seem to make it seem that all ends the way that is toward the kids and their friends favor. Seems to leave a very mixed message that may clear in future books. The idea that everything is Fine is a worry in that Robberies can harm, that knowing someone is a alien in your school isn't an every day occurrence. The idea that the Leader's wife is a hostile alien is also a conflict, wants to obtain Gilbert yet Aoleon doesn't mention this to her folks?. Or at least as far as the reader is aware of since there is telepathic conversations.

Then there is the story line that they plan on stealing Earth's cows. It seems to be a book of mixed messages and age groupings.. the cartoon 'ish but entertaining pictures, the story line that seems split between younger kids and then the science classes of Physics and Astronomy. The name calling of the Neptune students being from Uranus, that was a joke 40 yrs ago when I was in school and seems that when dealing with space faring species to be crude and inappropriate. All mention of his going home is mentioned as "for a few days" visit..while nice to visit someone for a couple of days leaving the planet with an alien isn't really something that a kid should consider no big deal.. parents wouldn't allow that with a friend without permission..Giving that idea to a kid in tween yrs is not something that should be considered, could there not be a way to get a message to his parents? Because at this point he disappeared in the middle of the night from his room.

Giving it 4 stars I can do because of potential this is still a Rough not Final draft of the book. It's also a Fantasy story for an age group my son hasn't been for 20+ yrs. I am looking at it from the eyes of an older and more sci-fi fantasy background then kids, but they are catching up quickly, sometimes too quickly.. I just want to make sure they are guided along the correct mental steps. I would think twice about turning a kid loose with this book and not sticking around to answer questions because, even with college Physics classes, admittedly 25 + yrs ago I had difficulty putting all the pieces together and separating real and junk science apart.

It still seems to be rudderless as far as the whole story line, and I know that being inside the author's mindset isn't something I can telepathically do.. Just giving my opinion is hard enough, but Open to alien contact be it earth-wise or universal is always something to open minds to. Because it is a serial story and I don't have the full view point I have to give it a chance, and a mild caution because you can't see around the corner. It is something that makes you want to make friends with a Martian, but I'd leave my folks a note or risk being grounding till.. oh wait.. I'm that age now...

[Dhivya Balaji · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book is the second part of the Aoléon The Martian Girl: A Science Fiction and Fantasy Saga. Since I had already been introduced to the basic concepts of Martians and Terrans (yes, earthlings) in part one of the series, I had an idea of what to expect in the story.

Part one ended with Aoléon taking Gilbert home and showing him Mars. She also gets a message from the mysterious PAX who vows to overthrow a plot of stealing all milking cows from Earth. The reason why is explained in abundance in part 2.

Aoléon and Gilbert travel to her home where her parents, though surprised she brought an earthling to Mars, still continue to be polite and extremely hospitable. Aoléon then takes Gilbert with her to school and the adventures they see there are detailed. The real adventure and the meaning behind the title are explained in one scene where the ‘Luminess’ (the mate of Luminon, ruler of Mars) meets Gilbert. The exchange between them happens to give credibility to the title.


Other than this important sequence, the rest of the book has a lot of new characters and seems like scenes strung together in rehearsal for some big event. The new characters that are introduced are then defined (each is given a purpose. Some are friends, some are powerful teachers, some haters and some downright enemies. The detailing is like setting a stage for their individual performance in some big event that we are to expect in the remaining three parts of this saga.

Though initially hesitant to flaunt Gilbert, Aoléon slowly overcomes her inhibitions and nervousness as people start recognising him for the Terran that he is. By the time this book ends, many people are aware of Gilbert’s presence in Mars and his association with Aoléon. This again seems like some sort of ‘nail biting’ anticipation wherein the reader expects someone to object to Gilbert’s presence in Mars.

Overall, a perfect second book to a series that poses more questions and more ways for the plot to develop and offers some serious character development so that the reader has to remember how every character looks and behaves.

PLUSES AND MINUSES:

Good writing, Lots of Graphic images. Once again, a different imagination!

On the other hand:

The whole book seems like a middle act which lays the groundwork for the next major act so no really new story. You could understand where things are going only if you are familiar with Part 1 of this saga.

Too many new characters. But the reader just has to remember them all if there is to be any hope of understanding the subsequent books in the series.

SPECIAL MENTION:

As is expected in the series, whenever a scene is too difficult to visualise, the author has included a lot of graphics that are beautifully rendered so as to give a reader an idea exactly how the Martian city will look. Good if children who are reluctant readers pick up this book!

VERDICT:

If you read part one, understood and enjoyed it, read this and get ready for some more explanation in the rest of the series.

[Sally Melia · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is part 2 of the five part Aoléon the Martian Girl series

This is a new type of book from graphic artist and writer Brent LeVasseur. instead of one book, Brent has put together a series of shorter stories featuring Aoléon The Martian Girl. They are aimed at middle grade readers, and are ideal for reading on a mobile or tablet.

If the first book in the series was relatively short (90 pages), book 2 is longer (140 pages) and so about 35,000 words long. However on the plus side it has about 40 full page illustrations. And this time the illustrations are truly amazing. The picture on p13 of the Paladian Guard is worth the price of the book alone and shows true artistry by the designers.

The book carries on from book 1 and continues to illustrate the concepts of science and fiction, in particular: telepathy, weightlessness, rocket shoes as well as the pitfalls of communicating with different species. What i really like was that in this story telepathy could be a bit of a problem, and sometimes you did not want people to read your thoughts.


With the hero Gerald joining a Martian school towards the end of the book, we seem to be heading towards a Harry Potter like framework, but this book is too action packed to package the story into neat school terms

Towards the end of the book Aoleon says:

"I am nothing but a mere Martian girl, and I should try to stay out of trouble. Who am I to intervene in something as big as this?”

To which as a reader I want to shout, " No of course not, go get them Aoleon."

I can't wait for the next instalment.

Merged review:

This is a new type of book from graphic artist and writer Brent LeVasseur. instead of one book, Brent has put together a series of shorter stories featuring Aoléon The Martian Girl. They are aimed at middle grade readers, and are ideal for reading on a mobile or tablet.

If the first book in the series was relatively short (90 pages), book 2 is longer (140 pages) and so about 35,000 words long. However on the plus side it has about 40 full page illustrations. And this time the illustrations are truly amazing. The picture on p13 of the Paladian Guard is worth the price of the book alone and shows true artistry by the designers.

The book carries on from book 1 and continues to illustrate the concepts of science and fiction, in particular: telepathy, weightlessness, rocket shoes as well as the pitfalls of communicating with different species. What i really like was that in this story telepathy could be a bit of a problem, and sometimes you did not want people to read your thoughts.

With the hero Gerald joining a Martian school towards the end of the book, we seem to be heading towards a Harry Potter like framework, but this book is too action packed to package the story into neat school terms

Towards the end of the book Aoleon says:

“I am nothing but a mere Martian girl, and I should try to stay out of trouble. Who am I to intervene in something as big as this?”

To which as a reader I want to shout, ” No of course not, go get them Aoleon.”

I can’t wait for the next instalment.

[Create With Joy · Rating 4 out of 5]

If your child loves galactic space adventures and you are looking for a unique story to pique your reluctant middle grade reader’s interest, chances are, they’ll be fascinated by Aoléon The Martian Girl – the 5-part science-fiction/fantasy saga that’s both written and illustrated by Brent LeVasseur!

Aoléon The Martian Girl: Part 2 The Luminess Of Mars is a direct continuation of the story we were first introduced to in Aoléon The Martian Girl: Part 1, First Contact. If you have not read Part 1, then you simply must go back and begin your adventure there as this is not a standalone book!

Part 2 of this story answers the age-old question, “What is it like to live on Mars?” All of the action in this book takes place entirely on Mars, with Aoléon introducing her Terran (Earth) friend Gilbert to all aspects of Martian society, including its political, educational and social structure, as well as dining and recreational pursuits.

What Gilbert soon discovers is that Mars is a frightening, friendly, familiar and foreign planet to visit – a place where things aren’t always what you’d expect them to be!

Gilbert makes a number of fascinating discoveries during his time on Mars – but his most exciting and frightening encounter happens when he meets the Luminess. The Luminess Of Mars is the spouse of the Luminon and matriarch – their leader.

A terrifying telepathic encounter with the Luminess gives him a glimpse into the dangers of what lies ahead as they progress on the mission they received in Book 1. First Contact.

Aoléon The Martian Girl: Part 2 The Luminess Of Mars takes us deeper into the unique world and story that Brent has created and provides us with a foundation for the adventures that are still to come. The further we progress into the story, the more Brent’s illustrations illuminate the wonder of what Gilbert is experiencing as he absorbs everything there is to learn about his Martian friend and her world.

If you and your child are ready to partake in one of the most unique science fiction sagas to be found, then pick up your copy of Aoléon The Martian Girl and meet a character who is bound to become this generation’s favorite Martian!

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Disclosure: I received a copy of this book from the publisher for review purposes. However, the opinions expressed in this review are entirely my own.

[Laura Thomas · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is the second book in this series and I won’t reveal anything the blurb doesn’t tell you so there will be no spoilers.

Our young co-conspirators, Gilbert and Aoleon, are becoming fast friends and having a blast on Mars. I wish I could be there. It looks and sounds like such fun.

The space ships flit by overhead and the streets are crowded. To keep his identity from the martians, Aoleon has Gilbert paint his skin blue and cautions him to not draw attention to himself. Her parents are nervous about having a Terran (human) in their home but any friend of Aoleon’s is welcome.

After getting to know these two characters, it came as no surprise they couldn’t stay out of trouble for long.
They are plopped into the middle of a resistance and Gilbert notices something strange going on with the Luminess, the Luminon’s mate. Ah, the plot thickens.

It’s no longer fun and games for these two as they run from the Mars leaders and their Paladin Guards.
As with the first book, this one is filled with exciting illustrations that leap off the pages with spectacular colors. They are almost 3-D and such fun.

Some things are different yet similar on Mars as on Earth.
The pets are odd and I’m still trying to figure out if they are supposed to be dogs and cats.
There are gangs on Mars just waiting for an opportunity to rob you blind. And there are bullies too. Gilbert gets to meet Aoleon’s tormentors up close and personal like.

Spaceships zoom by overhead displaying advertisements., kind of like how New York City uses their buildings.
And there’s pizza! It’s not the same as ours, but not too bad according to Gilbert. They call it a Galact Platter and it looks like pizza to me.

Gilbert gets a surprise when he learns the martians fear us humans. They are mind readers and, as such, can’t tell a lie. When the Luminess reads Gilbert’s mind he also reads hers. I see why they might fear us. No secrets stay secret for long.
Something’s brewing on Mars and the target is Earth and our cows.

Let’s hope Aoleon and Gilbert are up to the task.

I enjoyed this second adventure as much as the first and will continue reading the series to it’s conclusion. A whole lot of fun and such amazing art work. I hope to one day have these as print books so I can really enjoy the illustrations. And while this is a book for young readers, adults will love it too.

I received this book for my honest review.

[David Watson · Rating 5 out of 5]

At the end of book one of Aoléon The Martian Girl, Aoléon had brought Gilbert to Mars and was showing him what Martians do for fun. Gilbert was just getting use to his new space suit and the lighter gravitational pull on Mars when they receive a mission. They are given the task to investigate the Luminon of Mars who is suspected of planning an invasion of Earth to steal its milk cows. This is all in addition to attending Martian school and Gilbert having to learn about Martian culture.

I loved how in Aoléon The Martian Girl: Luminess of Mars, Brent LeVasseur starts to show the difference between Martian culture and Earth culture. I was surprised that a quote from Ayn Rand is used to describe the differences between Martians and Earthlings. Aoléon points out how Martians share thoughts and memories telepathically while people on Earth are more individualistic. She continues to say that this is why beings from other planets fear Earth. I loved this idea and it showed me that despite this book being meant for a middle school audience, adults can get something out of it as well. Another part I enjoyed was hearing what goes on in a Martian school, I’ll tell you that it’s a little different than earth school.

Much like the first book in the series, this book is filled with action, comedy and some great computer art. I think the art in book 2 is better than the art in book 1, because in this book there are more pictures of Martian cities. The detail that goes into showing the physical differences between each martian is unbelievable and I can only imagine how much work goes into each picture. That’s not all though, the buildings that are in some of the art looks like something that you would want to see in a gallery of Science Fiction art. On the cover you get a small sample of what a Martian city looks like, but in the book there are more detailed pictures that are out of this world, literally.

Aoléon The Martian Girl: Luminess of Mars is a book that works on several different levels. It’s a kid’s book that adults will love and includes great art and characters that will make you want to read the next book in the series. Not only has Brent LeVasseur given some breathtaking art in this book, he has also created a Martian mythology that Science Fiction fans will love. I can hardly wait to see where this book series will go next. This is a great book that will get kids to see what new worlds can be explored by reading Science Fiction.

[Christopher Lawson · Rating 5 out of 5]

I thought the graphics in AOLEON PART 1 were good, but these are even better! I am having trouble reading the book--I can't get beyond the eye-popping artwork. I am an engineer type, and I can't help but wonder how Mr. LeVasseur did this. I am not kidding--the artwork is seriously good.

In PART 2 - THE LUMINESS OF MARS, The adventure continues, with Gilbert meeting more dangerous Martians, plus dining with Aoleon. It's a pretty efficient food delivery system on Mars: "Dinner was being dispensed from tentacle tubing that extended from the ceiling above the table, filling bowls with a milky substance." How appetizing! Aoleon's mom explains, "We have postponed daily consumption to await your arrival, but your father and I are growing hungry." Now wait just a minute--this sounds an awful lot like the "Coneheads"!

There are a lot of funny passages in this installment. Recall that in Part 1, Aoleon The Martian Girl: Science Fiction Saga - Part 1 First Contact, the author has a character with knowledge of Greek tragedy (How many humans know what "Deus ex machina means?") In PART 2, I see that Aoleon is familiar with the works of Ayn Rand, and quotes from ANTHEM. What will happen in Part 3--will she quote Dr. Phil? Or perhaps Stephen Hawking?

Probably my favorite chapter is Chapter 8 The "Martian Space Academy." Again, the graphics are incredible, but the writer shows something about his skills here, that I doubt anyone else will notice--but I want to acknowledge. Here's the phrase: "The Martian Space Academy campus comprised a complex of buildings situated on a raised city platform. It was an impressive sight to behold." The key is the word "comprised." The correct usage is the whole comprises the parts. And that's exactly how the writer uses the word. This correct English usage does not happen by accident. Hmmm... I am beginning to think that the author is actually a ghost writer for famous people. This can't possibly be the author's first (or second) work. It is TOO GOOD.

Seriously, the writing is very witty (but a lot is probably going over my head), and I really enjoyed this book. I never was a huge fan of comic books and graphic novels, but this is one excellent product!

Advance copy for review courtesy of the Luminess of Mars

[Elaine · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received a digital arc copy of this book from iRead Book Tours in exchange for my honest and unbiased review. All are my own opinion and is not compensated by any individual, organization, or company. This might contain minor spoilers.

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The second part of the Aoleon the Martian Girl had never let me down. It still got the cool illustrations that I would never get bored of looking! I loved looking at the graphics. It is amazingly looking and very appropriate to the story. Definitely something kids will adore and adults, too.

I love reading it. I felt like I am actually learning our world’s and galaxy’s deepest secrets. It makes me want to fly to Mars right now, go take selfie pictures in there and post it on my social media accounts. I do think it will boost Mars tourism. Amazing! It made me doubt the author’s racial identity. It would not surprise me if one day Mr. LeVasseur admits he is actually a Martian.

Undeniably entertaining it is. I seriously cannot deny that the author is very witty because this book got a well and witty writing. I have been experiencing quite a few jaw drops due to a lot of terms that I feel only came to light after reading this and due to unexpected twists this book had.

Seriously, I can’t get enough. Not only was it entertaining to look at and read, it is also actually very funny. It made me giggled and laughed. The idea of cow milks and pizzas actually caught me off guard but surprisingly, I buy them. I honestly think the idea was weird but it is unique and original and that is good news.

I would definitely recommend it to grade school kids who like reading science stuffs.

[Katie (hiding in the pages) · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really enjoyed Part I and was excited to see what would happen to Gilbert on Mars. This story really sparks the imagination in an adult like me, so I can't imagine what it does in a younger reader.

I thought the illustrations were fantastic in Part I, but the images in this part were absolutely mesmerizing and extremely well done! They were full of detail and color and really captured my attention. I found myself studying them each for awhile before continuing on with the story.

There was a lot more about the mind reading in this book and this sentence really hit home for me: "For a brief moment, Gilbert saw the Luminess for who she really was — all of her history, her insecurities, her flaws, and her deepest, darkest secrets flew through his mind in flashes." It would be really hard to pretend to be someone else when your thoughts are known by all.

This installment also had a lot of history. History of their food, of how they came to be, and of their planet. As I mentioned before, I have a 3rd grader and a 6th grader and I know they'd both be fascinated with the story, as they are very interested in space. However, most of the history lessons, especially while the characters were at school, were full of big words and elaborate descriptions. In fact, I read part of it aloud to my kids and asked if they understood what was being said and it was over their heads. I'm sure this will all play a role in future installments, but I was glad when the story shifted to the Psi-ball match.

Psi-ball reminds me a bit of Quidditch, for you Harry Potter fans. This match is where Part II ended and it was full of intense action, which was a lot of fun. I'm looking forward to what will happen next.

*I received a copy in exchange for an honest review*

[M.M. Hudson · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is the second book in a series that I have read from this author. This is a middle grade book full of sci-fi kinds of adventure. This book does pick up where the last one left off so you would certainly want to read them in succession.

This time the martian girl, Aoleon is taking the Earth boy, Gilbert around her home world. Trouble does seem to find them but they seem to manage to get out of it too. More and more people are learning that Gilbert is not whom he appears which could put him in danger.

As in the first book, the author gives a clear picture of what things look like. You can easily imagine the places and people that the characters meet. The only problem I had this time it was almost too descriptive, if that can even be possible. I actually got weighed down a bit by it. Some descriptions seemed almost too technical for this genre of book. Also, there were a couple of times that I was surprised by what was written in the form of expletives and a few typos but considering this was an ARC copy I can overlook that. Those things did not draw me away from continuing to forge ahead with the adventure.

The most amazing thing about this book, as with the last one, was the photographs. The photos seemed to be in 3D and look like they jump out at you. This makes the book so unique and a stand out from others in the same genre.

Get yourself a copy and then keep on reading the additional books that are to rapidly becoming available.

4 stars!

Disclosure: I received an ARC in exchanged for my open and honest review. The views expressed here are 100% my own and may differ from yours. ~Naila Moon

[Jessica Bronder · Rating 5 out of 5]

The story starts with Aoleon and Gilbert meet Luminess, the mate to the Martian leader Lumion, which leads Gilbert to a strange experience, a vision, and being chased by the Royal Paladin Guards. When they meet Aoleon’s friend Bizwat, Aoleon tells him how they have been asked to check into Lumion. Bizwat tell both of them about the loss of bovars, Martian cows that have disappeared. He then warns both Aoleon and Gilbert to be careful in their investigation.

Aoleon and Gilbert are exploring Mars and what a typical day as a Martian student is like. Although Aoleon tried to disguise Gilbert, with everyone being telepathic it seems that it was pointless. It is also a little challenging for Gilbert to know that others can read his mind but it does take learning to new levels. Gilbert learns more about Aoleon’s friends and the girls that are giving her a hard time just like any school. He also gets to watch the big psi-ball match that Aoelon is about to participate in.

I really love this story. Gilbert is having a great adventure on Mars and learning so much. I am curious about Luminess but we don’t see much of that except from the beginning of the story. I love how even through Aoleon is a Martian she has pretty much the same school experience as anyone on Earth. Plus I love all the illustrations. They really make the story come to life.

I can’t wait to see what is going to happen in the next book. Make sure to add this series to your bookshelf. It’s good for middle grade readers all the way up to adults. I really think anyone will like it.

I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review.

[Claire - The Coffeeholic Bookworm · Rating 5 out of 5]

This second book is even better! Gilbert had finally arrived in Mars, and his adventures began. He got to meet Luminess, the matriarch and leader of the City of Luminon, but somewhere along their meeting, Gilbert, in his mind, saw the Luminess transformed into a lizard. This piqued Aoleon’s interest, making her determined to go on with the mission tasked to her by the fugitive resistance leader, Konx Om Pax.

Then, Gilbert was finally introduced to Aoleon’s family, and had experienced eating Galact Platter, the Mars version of pizza, topped with asteroids! How cool is that? My kids love pizza, too, so they now even love Aoleon more and more. And when they got to the Martian Space Academy where Aoleon studies, he learned of their history, culture, foreign students, and games like psi-ball match. And of course, a school isn’t complete without the bullies; this time in the form of Charm Lepton and her minions, who found ways to irk and even sabotage Aoleon’s skyboard. Not cool!

We really enjoyed reading this book and looking at the crisp illustrations. Now we get a better glimpse of Mars because of the fantastic images. My sons used their laptop to read (on Kindle for Windows) and view the images better and they were mesmerized with the beauty that is Mars. (Actually, they thought my Kindle is quite small, which makes sense!) Brent LeVasseur is really a talented writer and artist! We can’t wait to read what happens next with Aoleon and Gilbert as they continue with their mission in Book 3 – Hollow Moon.

[Trish · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book picks up at the exact point that Part One left off. The reader begins the exciting adventure of Mars with Gilbert and Aoleon.

I really like the details of life on Mars with Aoleon's family. For instance, "Dinner was being dispensed from tentacle tubing that extended from the ceiling above the table, filling bowls with a milky substance." Another example was Aoleon's holographic star map, which shone in bright colors and moved in three dimensions.

Aoleon even has a pet, a lovable little animal who looks like a cross between a cat and a pug. At night she sleeps in a holographic sleep pod that disappears when it is not in use. Details like this were fascinating, especially as they related to similarities and differences to life on earth.

The Martian Space Academy scenes are fun; they introduce a diverse student population like the Harry Potter series. The descriptions of classes on Mars are really interesting

The book is action packed and fast paced, with a mix of dialogue and description that will appeal to young readers. The illustrations are vivid and exciting, and they really enhance the story. The colors are especially great - they almost glow. I would definitely recommend reading this book in color format (not on a black and white reader).

This book has a broad age appeal, but I think middle school students will especially enjoy it. It has the hallmarks of a book that appeal to young readers - action, vivid imagery, and a sense of fun and adventure.

[Meagan Myhren-Bennett · Rating 4 out of 5]

Aoléon the Martian Girl
The Luminess of Mars Part 2
By Brent LeVasseur

Gilbert Sullivan is just an ordinary boy who lives in Nebraska. At least he was until that night. The night he met Aoléon, the night he went to Mars.

Picking up where part 1 left us. We experience Gilbert's first full day on Mars including attending the Martian Space Academy with Aoléon. Martian school is very similar to school here on Earth. Disguised as a Martian all too soon Gilbert's disguise is seen through. But this doesn't interfere in any way with Gilbert and Aoléon's day.

And even more exciting is attending Zero-G training - floating and spinning in a weightless environment is unlike anything Gilbert has ever experienced.

But all is not fun and games (or even school). There is a threat on Mars and something is wrong. Gilbert experiences this when he briefly connects with the Lumimess. And then there is the request that Aoléon received to spy on the Luminon. What's a Martian girl and a farm boy from Nebraska to do?

Aoléon the Martian Girl should appeal to preteens and young teens alike. The illustrations throughout are colorful and fun. The images though are more than colorful - they are vivid! They bring this world to life. Though not a graphic novel the illustrations will be an added plus for those who appreciate illustrations throughout their reading journey.

And the adventure continues...

I was provided a copy of this book through iRead Book Tours in exchange for my honest review

[Christy · Rating 4 out of 5]

This review first appeared on my blog Christy's Cozy Corners.

This book is part two of a five book series featuring Gilbert, a boy from Nebraska, and Aoleon, a Martian Girl. In book one, Gilbert met Aoleon and ended up returning to Mars with her. Now that he is on Mars, he is getting a complete immersion course in all things Martian! He learns that their leaders are probably up to no good. He and Aoleon are asked by a resistance leader to check up on things to see what's going on with the leaders of Mars. This sort of gets put on the back burner though while Aoleon takes Gilbert to school with her.

The majority of the story is pretty "Martiany." Gilbert learns a lot about the history of Mars and that part of the universe. He gets to participate in a field trip and learns that school food is pretty much gross across the board....though pizza is okay. Then he gets to watch a match of their sporting event which is sort of like capture the flag on Earth. The story ends right after the sporting event at the pizza parlor where someone reminds Aoleon that she's supposed to be seeing what's up with the leaders.

This part of the story was a little less exciting than the first part, but it was still good. I love the pop culture references and the humor that is thrown in throughout the book. The illustrations are amazing and really bring this book to life. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the other parts of this story.

[Liquid Frost · Rating 4 out of 5]

In Part Two, The Luminess of Mars, Gilbert finds complexity in the Mars population; not everyone is as fun-loving as Aoleon. In fact, Mars is stealing our cows!! On a Martian planet where telepathy is commonplace, keeping secrets can be daunting and straying from the masses can be quite deadly.

Part two is a transitional piece that allows for a glimpse of normal Mars living. Kids still have to go to school, but history lessons take on a whole new dynamic thanks to immersive holograms. Oh, and some zero-g training is always a fun time. Gilbert is finally able to remove his blue makeup since the Martian Space Academy has numerous 'exchange students' and blending in is easier.

There are similarities with Mars and Earth - School has cliques and snobs, nerds and jocks. And no matter what planet you may be from, a good Uranus joke is still appreciated. As this part concludes, Aeolon and Gilbert firm their friendship and LeVasseur is setting the stage for collusion and pending conflict. Like I said, they are stealing our cows!!

I was critical of the illustrations in Part One, First Contact. I am less critical in Part Two. The city scenes have a great level of detail. There are a wide variety of aliens as well.

Read February 2015; Copy supplied by author/publisher. Opinions, good or bad, are 100% my own.

[Stormi (StormReads) · Rating 3 out of 5]

Part two of this adventure is mostly a scientific lesson. Gilbert is learning a lot of things about Martians and how they are a lot like humans. They eat pizza thought it has Galact on it instead of meat, but it must have been okay since Gilbert ate it. Then he learns about how it’s possible to be faster that the speed of light. Gilbert gets to go with Aoléon to Martian school where we learn more scientific things.

Gilbert gets to meet Aoléon friends and watch her play Psi-ball and we learn that even Mars has mean girls.

Part two was fun but not as fun for me as the first part. It was in Part two that the author breaks out a lot of scientific stuff and that is one reason I am not a sci-fi buff. I am also not sure if most middle graders would be able to follow some of that stuff and there was an extremely long word in there that I had no clue what it was..lol. So I got a little board with that part and then they played Psi-ball and it got fun again.

I guess I was expecting them to start off trying to find out what was going on and start the task that they find out about in Part one. So over all it was okay and I am curious as to see where Part three will take me. Cute alien adventure.

[Lindsay · Rating 5 out of 5]

Aoléon The Martian Girl: A Science Fiction and Fantasy Saga - Part 2: The Luminess of Mars by Brent LeVasseur This another part of the story that just get more fun. We meet Aoléon's family and few of Aoléons classmates. We meet Bizwat. The story get a bit more interesting. Gilbert faces some experience with the Luminess. Somethings up or as I call it going on at the Luminon Palace.I also enjoyed the a few of the pictures. One of my favorite picture is one of the Royal Palain Guard. The picture are down well. They all looked real. We learn about Bizwat and his job. We get more action and adventures. I wonder if Aoléon and Gilbert will seek into the Lauminon Palace.We meet Charm Lepton and her friends Quarkina. Gilbert get a history lesson on the martian people. This after he visiting Aoléon's school. There a Psi-ball match. Gilbert overhears something that Charm and her friends plan to do. Though Gilbert does not know. Some of picture are cool when you see some of the students that are visiting Martian Space Academy. Some over classmates are somewhat strange but nice to see some of them in the pictures.

[Julie · Rating 5 out of 5]

I enjoyed the first part of the series as Gilbert meets Aoleon for the first time. This second book, however, takes the story a step further as Gilbert arrives on Mars and experiences a meeting with Aoleon’s parents and a taste of Mars food. In this episode we quickly become immersed in a different world and the clever blending of theoretical science with some mind blowing jargon somehow makes it all seem feasible – probably more so if you are a middle-grader rather than a middle aged adult!



The characters of Gilbert, an amiable lad who doesn’t particularly like school but who has the odd moment of homesickness is particularly endearing, as is Aoleon who is sensitive, fun and the kind of friend everybody would like to have. As Gilbert goes to Mars Space School we encounter some not very nice ‘friends’ of Aoleon’s, who no doubt teens will relate to. A smattering of Greek, a Mars history lesson and some references that will no doubt go over the heads of most younger readers make this a book for everyone. Once again you must see the illustrations to truly get inside the mind of this brilliant author.

[Leslie aka StoreyBook Reviews · Rating 4 out of 5]

Part 2 of Aoleon's story doesn't fail to delight the reader. In this installment, Gilbert learns more about living on Mars and not everyone there is a Martian, they have exchange students too. The food source is an interesting description but doesn't sound very appetizing. The imagery tied to the graphics really makes the story pop, I was just disappointed that there was no graphic of the pets. That would have been interesting to see how the author visualized the animals.

There were times where the story seemed to drag on and I wonder if middle grade age kids would get confused or if some of it would be over their heads. I am not a scientist so do not know about life outside of our solar system so I do not know how much of the information was correct when discussing space and the planets, but it was very detailed.

The story also covers bullying and shows that it can happen to anyone and anywhere.

Overall I enjoyed the story and wonder how the next chapters will play out for Gilbert and Aoleon.

[Dawn · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received a free ecopy of this book for an honest review.

This is the second book in a series. In the first book, Aoléon and Gilbert meet on Earth and she takes Gilbert to Mars when they are chased by neighbor. In this book, Gilbert learns about Martians and that there are other beings besides Earthlings (or Terrans as Martians call us).

Aoléon #2 is mostly about how Martians eat and live. They go to school just like children on Earth. They also have the capability to read minds and share their thoughts. Because of one such episode, Gilbert knows that there is something strange going on with the Luminess (the spouse of their leader), and he and Aoléon plan on finding out what it is. I'm sure that will be addressed in a future episode.

Brent LeVasseur does a good job at describing Mars, its buildings, and especially the characters. His pictures are also great. They're detailed and colorful.

I think any child would enjoy this story of the friendship between a boy and a Martian girl. I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the series.

[Martin Labonte · Rating 4 out of 5]

I just got done the second installment and here are my thoughts.

This continuation keeps pulling us deeper into this fantastic imaginary realm. By disclosing even more details the author paints an even greater spectrum. Speaking of colors, the illustrations are beautiful. Each picture tells a story and helps us to better understand Aoléon and Gilbert’s adventure. The martian home world is vividly drawn before us to help are limited imaginations. Plus it uses a cartoonish style resembling a video game. Which helps those looking forward to any playable eventuality of the book. This time around we get even more information about the martian history and science. This really helps us to be even more sucked into this fictitious reality. A good book should always helps it’s reader to better abandon itself into the sphere it’s trying to create for them. That is exactly what you will get this time around.

[Dennis Waller · Rating 5 out of 5]

In this installment of the saga, Aolean The Martian Girl, it starts with a big "Whoohoo!" from Gilbert and fittingly so as this episode picks up where part one left off. The incredible journey continues with Gilbert really getting into the Martian scene. A enchanting storyline and plot not to mention the spectacular illustrations. (I love the rock band)

In addition to an excellent syfy tale, I just discovered that the author, Brent LeVasseur has a theme song for this series. It's a cool song and I encourage you to check it out. I like the novel approach to having a "Theme Song," especially when it's as fantastic as the story and graphics. Well done has this is a hypnotic tale that will have me moving on to Part Three to see where this adventure goes.

For fans of quality syfy, this is the total package and one that I recommend!