For some time now, I have been wanting to read B.B. Alston’s “Amari and the Great Game.” Alston is a really good writer, but there were some problems with this second book in his series.
One huge problem with “Amari and the Great Game” is the timing. Alston’s first book in the series, “Amari and the Night Brothers” was published in January 2021. This second book was published in August 2022—that’s a publishing difference of one year and seven months, for a total of nineteen (19) months. With a series, I don’t want to wait almost two years for a sequel. And the longer the author/publisher waits to publish a sequel does NOT equal an increased anticipation from readers. Quite the opposite.
Alston’s first book in the series was fresh, new, and magical. But by the time I’d reached Chapter 5 in this second book, I had been having steady Harry Potter flashbacks. For example, Amari was ‘disinvited’ to school. However, unlike HP, readers were not given insight into why she was expelled until much later. By leaving this out, Alston did not heighten tension; it wasn’t a cliff hanger. Instead, I was forced to guess why Amari was expelled and it was annoying. This slowed down the motion in the novel.
What I really noticed, however, was how lost I felt when reading this book, especially during the first half of the novel. Although the author included some references to the events in the first book, he didn’t include enough of it. For example, Alston’s reintroduction to Jayden and Quinton in the book needed more references to the previous story. And as I read, I remembered that Magnus wore a cowboy hat and was ‘western’ even though the author really didn’t remind us of who he was. The author needs to include more concrete references to his first book in the series in order to anchor readers back into the story.
The author used the term ‘glamour’ when referring to the magic that others couldn’t see. When I read the first book, it seemed okay, but after having read the sequel, I think the author should use a *different* term because Riordan already used ‘glamour’ in his books. I’m not surprised that he did this, because throughout this book, he excessively borrows a lot from other writers. For example, Alston’s reference to orcs (Tolkien), and etc.
One issue that I really did not like was how the author stereotyped certain characters. For example, the four (4) witches he described had green skin, long noses, and were gap-teethed. It would have been nice to see Alston using alternate descriptions rather than playing along with stereotypes.
My favorite part of the book was the final third of the book, and this is where I got hooked on the story, but I should have been hooked at the beginning. Alston is a good writer, and his skill in writing is impressive. But he really needs to focus on weaving in previous books in the series in order to ensure that readers don’t walk around lost. I would also recommend that both the author and whoever is responsible for the publishing side work on keeping to a tight deadline for publication; for a series, no more than twelve (12) months should elapse before a series book is published. Any amount of time longer than this is equivalent t0 self-sabotage.