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Kingdom of Arnhem #1
Woman of Honor
Aislinn of Bairbhe dreams of becoming a lady knight to honor the death of her fallen brother. To her mother's horror, King Patrick grants Aislinn's wish and she begins her long years of training.
Despite the mockery of the other pages, and the disdain of Prince Caelan who also trains to be a knight, Aislinn commits herself to her dreams and embarks on a journey of self-discovery and bravery. Through the years, Aislinn and Caelan grow from sparring classmates to good friends. They both know that someday Caelan will marry for the sake of the kingdom, but even that cannot keep them from falling in love.
Despite the mockery of the other pages, and the disdain of Prince Caelan who also trains to be a knight, Aislinn commits herself to her dreams and embarks on a journey of self-discovery and bravery. Through the years, Aislinn and Caelan grow from sparring classmates to good friends. They both know that someday Caelan will marry for the sake of the kingdom, but even that cannot keep them from falling in love.
137 pages, Paperback
First published March 27, 2009
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April 27, 2009
Not what I expected as it begins from a very little girl's POV but I liked the castles, classes, training, young romances and it really opened up the second half into a darn good adventure. Ends with the promise of a second in a series which I will probably read if I can get my hands on it.
January 16, 2015
I only made it to page 35, so do what you will with that. I just can't make it through the writing.
It is constantly shoved down your throats that Aislinn is a noble "as a noble she..." "I'm noble..." "Being noble..." I GET IT YOU'RE NOBLE (even though you have exactly zero house servants and your mother cooks dinner in a small kitchen). Yes it is 1155, but seven year olds are still seven, there are so many other books that manage to handle children properly for that time period, this one makes Aislinn think and speak like a 20 year old.
There is also a randomness to the order we are told things and even things that happen. We are interchangeably told she's going to the palace or castle, the two words invoke vastly different imagery if you know anything about the time period. She's also apparently been to the palace/castle numerous times (because she's a noble) yet she gawks around like she's never seen it. On her way there for absolutely no reason she hops out of her carriage (which btw if the author had done ANY research she would be aware did not even EXIST at that time, you rode, walked, or if you were wealthy had something that resembled a wagon) and goes to investigate a street-rat who glares at her then she gets back in her carriage. Surprise, surprise that very same street-rat wants to become a female knight too! Did we really need to be introduced to her in such a pointless way? No.
All through the day of her visiting the king and asking to become a knight we imagine her being dressed as a female because we are never told any differently...until the morning she wakes up to get the king's decision THAT'S when the author decides to tell us Aislinn is wearing some of her brothers old clothes, why tell us now? You could have opened the whole travel scene with her putting on her brothers clothes and the unfamiliar feeling of no skirts etc. While at the palace/castle within a matter of paragraphs one man is labeled a guard, a footman, and a knight. Well which is he? At the time period a knight was most certainly NOT a footman (footmen were infantry or simply servants who walked on foot along their masters...they would even have betting races to see who had the fasted foot man). Even simple descriptions of the interiors killed me in their inaccuracies! The palace/castle is described as being covered in hundreds of windows (again not possible for the time but I'll let you do some googling if you care), and the halls are lined with embroidered brocade chairs. A) brocade is a weave that gives a raised effect, there is no embroidery B) brocade started spreading from Byzantium and Italy during the 13th century and then only to most elite.
So yes I sound like a massive nitpick, but with so many random inaccuracies within the first 35 pages that could have been fixed by reading a single history of the time period, I just can't make it any farther. And this is coming from someone who has read maybe less than 4 fiction books set in similar time periods, so it's not some time that is near and dear to my heart. So of you want to read a Disneyed version of history with very pre-2000s Disney characters here ya go! Yes, an author can do whatever they want with their own book but if you aren't going to give me 1155, don't even tell me it's 1155. If you don't want me coming in with an already built in world don't even give me a year, you should be able to build a world without doing that.
Also from the few character interactions I'm not impressed with them either lol. Good book for your very young adult...except other reviews mention some very mature parts so idk.
It is constantly shoved down your throats that Aislinn is a noble "as a noble she..." "I'm noble..." "Being noble..." I GET IT YOU'RE NOBLE (even though you have exactly zero house servants and your mother cooks dinner in a small kitchen). Yes it is 1155, but seven year olds are still seven, there are so many other books that manage to handle children properly for that time period, this one makes Aislinn think and speak like a 20 year old.
There is also a randomness to the order we are told things and even things that happen. We are interchangeably told she's going to the palace or castle, the two words invoke vastly different imagery if you know anything about the time period. She's also apparently been to the palace/castle numerous times (because she's a noble) yet she gawks around like she's never seen it. On her way there for absolutely no reason she hops out of her carriage (which btw if the author had done ANY research she would be aware did not even EXIST at that time, you rode, walked, or if you were wealthy had something that resembled a wagon) and goes to investigate a street-rat who glares at her then she gets back in her carriage. Surprise, surprise that very same street-rat wants to become a female knight too! Did we really need to be introduced to her in such a pointless way? No.
All through the day of her visiting the king and asking to become a knight we imagine her being dressed as a female because we are never told any differently...until the morning she wakes up to get the king's decision THAT'S when the author decides to tell us Aislinn is wearing some of her brothers old clothes, why tell us now? You could have opened the whole travel scene with her putting on her brothers clothes and the unfamiliar feeling of no skirts etc. While at the palace/castle within a matter of paragraphs one man is labeled a guard, a footman, and a knight. Well which is he? At the time period a knight was most certainly NOT a footman (footmen were infantry or simply servants who walked on foot along their masters...they would even have betting races to see who had the fasted foot man). Even simple descriptions of the interiors killed me in their inaccuracies! The palace/castle is described as being covered in hundreds of windows (again not possible for the time but I'll let you do some googling if you care), and the halls are lined with embroidered brocade chairs. A) brocade is a weave that gives a raised effect, there is no embroidery B) brocade started spreading from Byzantium and Italy during the 13th century and then only to most elite.
So yes I sound like a massive nitpick, but with so many random inaccuracies within the first 35 pages that could have been fixed by reading a single history of the time period, I just can't make it any farther. And this is coming from someone who has read maybe less than 4 fiction books set in similar time periods, so it's not some time that is near and dear to my heart. So of you want to read a Disneyed version of history with very pre-2000s Disney characters here ya go! Yes, an author can do whatever they want with their own book but if you aren't going to give me 1155, don't even tell me it's 1155. If you don't want me coming in with an already built in world don't even give me a year, you should be able to build a world without doing that.
Also from the few character interactions I'm not impressed with them either lol. Good book for your very young adult...except other reviews mention some very mature parts so idk.
July 13, 2010
This is only the second fantasy book I have read in my adult years. I am surprised by how much I enjoyed it.
It's medieval days and Aislinn is seven years old but desires to be a knight and take her dead brother's place in the king's "army." Her little seven year old self takes a coach to the kingdom and presents herself to the king. She begins training to be a knight. There is math, reading and writing, horsemanship, archery, weapons, and swimming. Aislinn overcomes every obstacle in her path from a group of bully boys to an ornery horse. She makes friends with two boys, one of them the future king. As they grow up together in this school for knights, Aislinn and Prince Caelan fall in love. But Aislinn must focus on obtaining her knighthood (she is the first woman to attempt it in this kingdom) and Caelan must marry another.
There are a few battles between some group called the Speicans and a lot of good life lessons for Aislinn. There were a few fire breathing dragons doing a flyby or two and my eyebrow did go up when the half lion/half eagle creature "mind talked" to Aislinn. (What was that about anyway?? Nothing came of that at all...)
I really enjoyed it, especially reading about a young girl learning to be a knight, but there were a lot of typos for a published book and a lot of things were left unexplained (There is a sequel tho). Also, Aislinn's dead brother showing up and talking about knights in Heaven was weird.
Otherwise, great book, well written, and about a strong female character.
It's medieval days and Aislinn is seven years old but desires to be a knight and take her dead brother's place in the king's "army." Her little seven year old self takes a coach to the kingdom and presents herself to the king. She begins training to be a knight. There is math, reading and writing, horsemanship, archery, weapons, and swimming. Aislinn overcomes every obstacle in her path from a group of bully boys to an ornery horse. She makes friends with two boys, one of them the future king. As they grow up together in this school for knights, Aislinn and Prince Caelan fall in love. But Aislinn must focus on obtaining her knighthood (she is the first woman to attempt it in this kingdom) and Caelan must marry another.
There are a few battles between some group called the Speicans and a lot of good life lessons for Aislinn. There were a few fire breathing dragons doing a flyby or two and my eyebrow did go up when the half lion/half eagle creature "mind talked" to Aislinn. (What was that about anyway?? Nothing came of that at all...)
I really enjoyed it, especially reading about a young girl learning to be a knight, but there were a lot of typos for a published book and a lot of things were left unexplained (There is a sequel tho). Also, Aislinn's dead brother showing up and talking about knights in Heaven was weird.
Otherwise, great book, well written, and about a strong female character.
October 22, 2013
Update: If you're considering this book as an empowering story of a girl growing up to be a strong, independent woman and Knight of the Realm avoid this book. I think you'll be much happier with Alanna: The First Adventure and the rest of the Song of the Lioness series.
Betrayed is the best word to describe my feelings by the time I was finished with this book. As advertised, the story begins with a great, empowering tone - with the young daughter running away from home to become a knight so she's not a burden on her poor family. But about half-way through, the story started a long, slow slide back to tired old gender stereotypes.
I wanted to throw this book into a bottomless pit several times, but forced myself to finish so that I could be sure to give an accurate review. By the end of this book it had become a "traditional", if subtle, indoctrination of religious gender roles and vilification of the neighboring peoples - who are not only described as dark-skinned but also as "barbarians" intent on kidnapping, killing and raping. There's even the obligatory "why do they hate us [kind, loving folk]?" refrain.
Betrayed is the best word to describe my feelings by the time I was finished with this book. As advertised, the story begins with a great, empowering tone - with the young daughter running away from home to become a knight so she's not a burden on her poor family. But about half-way through, the story started a long, slow slide back to tired old gender stereotypes.
I wanted to throw this book into a bottomless pit several times, but forced myself to finish so that I could be sure to give an accurate review. By the end of this book it had become a "traditional", if subtle, indoctrination of religious gender roles and vilification of the neighboring peoples - who are not only described as dark-skinned but also as "barbarians" intent on kidnapping, killing and raping. There's even the obligatory "why do they hate us [kind, loving folk]?" refrain.
January 28, 2010
This novel was so emotionally moving my heart literally ached. I loved medieval stories that are well told. And this one has a fantasy twist that makes it that much more fun. Reading about knights and castles are always enjoyable novels for me. Bottom line...Woman of Honor is a well-told, emotionally gripping story. I was literally swept away into the battle scenes, the romance, the fierce loyalty and honor even if it went against matters of the heart. I nearly cried several times while reading this story and was so engrossed a bomb could have gone off outside and I would've kept reading. I am eagerly anticipating the next book in the series. And anyone who has a computer can read this book. While it may not be a print book yet and can only be read in e-book format, it's well worth it. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. My heart is still pounding. And don't let that sweet rating fool you. There was some serious passion in this novel, but if you were to compare it to most romances I guess it was sweet since the characters honored each other's purity. But it still sizzled. And talk about an ending that leaves you begging for more. Sheesh! But it was more than satisfying. I'm just glad that April is only a few months away.
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May 24, 2010I'm not sure about this one... the author added me as a friend but the reviews make the story sound almost EXACTLY like the Alanna series by Tamora Pierce. Hmph.
October 24, 2012
I often have to reset my brain during the first chapter or two of books that are new worlds, and this was the same. The story started strong though and was definitely worth the effort. I had to remind myself that in the age and place of Nicole's world, children grow up a lot faster than my four. They have a maturity necessary for the hardships they will face.
Aislinn came off strong and determined from the very beginning. I loved that she knew what she wanted and wasn't afraid to go after it even though it was not the accepted norm for her country. Many times she was so stubbornly focused on her goal that she missed or ignored certain aspects of a child's life. This was one of the things that made her so real to me. I could relate to that stubborn focus.
I also loved how she matured over the years. One of my favorite scenes is when she breaks down in tears over the death of a young girl. It is a great moment when you realize what a caring woman she has grown into on top of her strength as a knight in training. The balance and realism is expertly crafted. A true example of how to show who your character is and not telling.
There is also a sweet romance woven through this book. I didn't feel like it was the main focus, but the back and forth between these characters is so natural you can't help but be swept away by it. When it looks like there is no way they can ever be together, you ache with Aislinn.
All in all, I really enjoyed this read and can't wait for life to slow down so I can read the next two books in the series.
Aislinn came off strong and determined from the very beginning. I loved that she knew what she wanted and wasn't afraid to go after it even though it was not the accepted norm for her country. Many times she was so stubbornly focused on her goal that she missed or ignored certain aspects of a child's life. This was one of the things that made her so real to me. I could relate to that stubborn focus.
I also loved how she matured over the years. One of my favorite scenes is when she breaks down in tears over the death of a young girl. It is a great moment when you realize what a caring woman she has grown into on top of her strength as a knight in training. The balance and realism is expertly crafted. A true example of how to show who your character is and not telling.
There is also a sweet romance woven through this book. I didn't feel like it was the main focus, but the back and forth between these characters is so natural you can't help but be swept away by it. When it looks like there is no way they can ever be together, you ache with Aislinn.
All in all, I really enjoyed this read and can't wait for life to slow down so I can read the next two books in the series.
November 15, 2010
Shopping on my new Kindle, I like to find cheap books. Woman of Honor was one such cheap book boasting an adventurous tale of love and honor. I’m not so sure that it lived up to its synopsis. At many points I remember asking myself, why am I reading this... snooze.... Don’t get me wrong, I’m not bashing this book. It was pretty obvious that this was the author’s first book. It was written well, if a bit cheesy. My first complaint: They are seven year olds. In the book, these seven year olds speak and act as if they were thirty. I can understand that in a different time, children did have to grow up faster, but I think it was stretched a bit too far.
Second: The pacing. I hate it when books don’t have a good flow. Especially if you are following the story of a young girl from age seven to what, twenty-one? The pacing has to allow time periods to shift gracefully into each other. Many times I had to stop and back track because I realized that the characters had just aged four years. Aside from all that, I honestly did enjoy the story. It was original and a different take on a coming of age story. It was a bit bland and boring on the action side, but it carried a believable love story. I’m sure that once Zoltack gets a few more books under her belt, she’ll get the hang of it. I couldn't decide if it deserved 2 or 3 stars, so I'm going with 2 1/2 stars because I was interested enough to get the second book.
Second: The pacing. I hate it when books don’t have a good flow. Especially if you are following the story of a young girl from age seven to what, twenty-one? The pacing has to allow time periods to shift gracefully into each other. Many times I had to stop and back track because I realized that the characters had just aged four years. Aside from all that, I honestly did enjoy the story. It was original and a different take on a coming of age story. It was a bit bland and boring on the action side, but it carried a believable love story. I’m sure that once Zoltack gets a few more books under her belt, she’ll get the hang of it. I couldn't decide if it deserved 2 or 3 stars, so I'm going with 2 1/2 stars because I was interested enough to get the second book.
December 6, 2010
Clare's Review
This story follows Aislinn in her quest to do what no woman in Arnhem has ever done before. Become a knight. Initially doing it to honour her dead brother, it soon becomes a matter of pride — to show the other pages that she is not a puny wench and every bit as capable and strong as they are. If not more so.
Starting when she is seven, the book follows her through her childhood and training. With the King’s son, Crown Prince Caelan and Geoffrey, her mentor and fellow page, their friendship grows and changes over the years as they strive to achieve the goal of knighthood. With war looming and ambition over taking everything, Aislinn is left little time for love, until it hits hard and with someone she can never have.
Full of action and adventure, Ms Zoltak has created a wonderful tale which keeps the pages turning right up until the heart stopping conclusion and leaves the reader wanting more.
4 1/2 Tea Cups!
This story follows Aislinn in her quest to do what no woman in Arnhem has ever done before. Become a knight. Initially doing it to honour her dead brother, it soon becomes a matter of pride — to show the other pages that she is not a puny wench and every bit as capable and strong as they are. If not more so.
Starting when she is seven, the book follows her through her childhood and training. With the King’s son, Crown Prince Caelan and Geoffrey, her mentor and fellow page, their friendship grows and changes over the years as they strive to achieve the goal of knighthood. With war looming and ambition over taking everything, Aislinn is left little time for love, until it hits hard and with someone she can never have.
Full of action and adventure, Ms Zoltak has created a wonderful tale which keeps the pages turning right up until the heart stopping conclusion and leaves the reader wanting more.
4 1/2 Tea Cups!
August 2, 2010
Nicole Zoltack's WOMAN OF HONOR weaves the tale of the first lady knight of Arnhem. Sprinkled with historical facts, bullies, and a good dose of love and honor, WOMAN OF HONOR is a coming of age novel set in the fantastical medieval world of Arnhem Kingdom. Aislinn is brave and truly grows to be a woman of honor. The characters are likeable and realistic. We feel Aislinn's pains while she tries to prove herself. She overcomes tradition and the growing threat of Speica. This novel has history, knights, and mythological creatures and is filled with intrigue, mystery, horror, and, most important of all, love. In this first book of the Kingdom of Arnhem series, I feel like we touch upon their lives and a conflict looming in their future. By the end, I craved more from this fantastical world, and I'm glad Ms. Zoltack supplied it in her next book.
June 2, 2015
Nicole Zoltack's Woman of Honor is the tale of a very determined little girl who fights tradition in her goal to honor her brother's memory. It is fascinating to watch her grow up, learning many life lessons along the way. And sometimes learning them too late.
This is a wonderful, detailed look at the hidden side of palace life, that of the pages, squires and servants. It is also a beautiful look at a child becoming a woman.
The writing style pulled me into Aislinn life, feeling her joy at a job well done, her worry that she won't achieve her goals, her pride which sometimes hinders her but just as often helps her try twice as hard, and her tears when she faces failures.
This is a clean read, without graphic gory images, sex scenes or even swearing, so suitable for all readers including young teens.
This is a wonderful, detailed look at the hidden side of palace life, that of the pages, squires and servants. It is also a beautiful look at a child becoming a woman.
The writing style pulled me into Aislinn life, feeling her joy at a job well done, her worry that she won't achieve her goals, her pride which sometimes hinders her but just as often helps her try twice as hard, and her tears when she faces failures.
This is a clean read, without graphic gory images, sex scenes or even swearing, so suitable for all readers including young teens.
November 28, 2013
Wow! This is a fantastic young adult story that was so emotionally moving, my heart literally ached. I cried at a few places in the story. I could not believe that what was happening! I got very involved with these characters and am totally on the hunt for the next part of the story. This story has romance, adventure, a new way of looking at Knighthood; it has everything you could want in a fantasy adventure story.
This is the first story I have read by this author, and I have to say she going on my must-buy list. She drew me into the story and kept me up way past bedtime when I should have been reading several nights in a row. Thanks so much for letting me read your book, Nicole; you gave me a real treat in this story.
This is the first story I have read by this author, and I have to say she going on my must-buy list. She drew me into the story and kept me up way past bedtime when I should have been reading several nights in a row. Thanks so much for letting me read your book, Nicole; you gave me a real treat in this story.
June 8, 2014
Adventure Romance, Fantasy and More!
I loved this book! It is a story that reminds us all not to give up on our dreams because, yes, they can come true! With hard work and determination this young girl achieved her dream and found love as well. I enjoyed the fact that we could follow her from age seven to adulthood. The characters were endearing and the fantasy side Nicole creates is believable. This book has romance, adventure and more....I look forward to reading the second book in this series.
I loved this book! It is a story that reminds us all not to give up on our dreams because, yes, they can come true! With hard work and determination this young girl achieved her dream and found love as well. I enjoyed the fact that we could follow her from age seven to adulthood. The characters were endearing and the fantasy side Nicole creates is believable. This book has romance, adventure and more....I look forward to reading the second book in this series.
April 26, 2014
I just loved Woman of Honor! A very good coming of age story about a little girl with big dreams of becoming a lady knigh.The story line takes you from Aislinn as a little girl to her as a young woman she struggles with all the hard work it takes to become a knight. Aislinn is a strong character as well as her friends Geoffrey and Caelan.I hope you enjoy this book as much as I did !
March 18, 2014
This book was just lovely. Absolutely loved the characters and their no-hard-feelings sort of vibe. The story itself was very intriguing and had me at a state of content while reading.
November 21, 2017
I love this book. It details Aislinn's journey to become a lady knight, the first of her kind in the Kingdom. Fantastic story that details every aspect of her training and hardships as a female page making her way through the ranks. I just wish the ending wasn't so rushed. It was a nice slow build to learning about Aislinn and loving her character. There's a lot of character development, plenty of action, and little bit of love. Amazing storytelling. I want more!
December 4, 2017
Very good.
Very definitely a terrific read, well worth it's price. While a lot of the plot is quite predictable and seems familiar, it's like going to grandma's house - while the destination is quite predictable, the trip there always yields fresh surprises. 😉
Very definitely a terrific read, well worth it's price. While a lot of the plot is quite predictable and seems familiar, it's like going to grandma's house - while the destination is quite predictable, the trip there always yields fresh surprises. 😉
March 4, 2010
Book Review for "Woman of Honor"
Written by Nicole Zoltack
Desert Breeze Publishing
ISBN: 1-936000-03-2
Ebook Format
4.5 Stars
Zoltack pens a coming-of-age fantasy full of adventure and romance with "Woman of Honor." This is the first novel in "The Kingdom of Arnhem Books" and it's a thrilling introduction to Zoltack's world.
The novel opens with seven-year-old Aislinn of Barbhe leaving her home and seeking out the king. She wants to ask him for permission to become a Lady Knight. Surprisingly, he grants it.
Aislinn becomes a first year page. At first, the boys are reluctant to accept her, but upon the urging of the Crown Prince, Caelan, Geoffrey, another page, takes Aislinn into his confidences and introduces her to her new world.
Aislinn works hard to learn her lessons. Upon Caelan's urging, she takes swimming lessons, despite her fear of it. When it is time for her to become a three year page, the king refuses, making her repeat the first two years. Aislinn runs away, not sure what to do or how to appeal to the king. As she wanders the countryside, she discovers two spies, kills one, and takes the other to the king. The king makes her a three year page upon witnessing her courage and bravery.
Aislinn's closest friends are Caelan and Geoffrey. As they enter puberty, they are challenged their changing bodies and their classes. Geoffrey develops a crush on Aislinn.
Aislinn barely has any time to notice. She's training with a shadow warrior, Ryu, learning new fighting skills. She also makes the acquaintance of a griffin, Alce. Eventually Ryu leaves, and Aislinn has dreams of him being tortured. With Caelan and Geoffrey's help, the trio save Ryu, but not before angering the king.
Aislinn has to deal with her growing feelings for the Crown Prince. After a tender kiss, both Aislinn and Caelan realize they are falling in love with each other. It's an impossible position for both – especially when the king announces Caelan's engagement to a foreign princess. How can Caelan give his heart to another woman when it's Aislinn he wants? The situation tests both. Will love win in the end?
Zoltack's writing is creative and full of adventure. There's never a dull moment in Aislinn's life. The dialogue is authentic to the time and the plot moves at a brisk pace.
The characters are rich and vivid. Aislinn has a challenging task to balance; her heart's desire of becoming a Lady Knight while staying true to the woman in her. In that regard, Zoltack finds the perfect mix, showing Aislinn as a lady attending a ball and showing her in the heat of battle. Aislinn's struggle to be accepted is one many readers can connect with.
Caelan is also a character full of complexies. He's torn between his duty and heart, not an easy place to be. His admiration of Aislinn is subtle at first, and when he reveals his feelings to her, it's very rewarding to the reader. Caelan's nobility shines despite all the challenges he faces.
Zoltack's story is "sweet" for romance readers with several sensual kisses and caresses. Overall, "Woman of Honor" will transport the reader to a fantasy world filled with excitement, adventure, and love.
Written by Nicole Zoltack
Desert Breeze Publishing
ISBN: 1-936000-03-2
Ebook Format
4.5 Stars
Zoltack pens a coming-of-age fantasy full of adventure and romance with "Woman of Honor." This is the first novel in "The Kingdom of Arnhem Books" and it's a thrilling introduction to Zoltack's world.
The novel opens with seven-year-old Aislinn of Barbhe leaving her home and seeking out the king. She wants to ask him for permission to become a Lady Knight. Surprisingly, he grants it.
Aislinn becomes a first year page. At first, the boys are reluctant to accept her, but upon the urging of the Crown Prince, Caelan, Geoffrey, another page, takes Aislinn into his confidences and introduces her to her new world.
Aislinn works hard to learn her lessons. Upon Caelan's urging, she takes swimming lessons, despite her fear of it. When it is time for her to become a three year page, the king refuses, making her repeat the first two years. Aislinn runs away, not sure what to do or how to appeal to the king. As she wanders the countryside, she discovers two spies, kills one, and takes the other to the king. The king makes her a three year page upon witnessing her courage and bravery.
Aislinn's closest friends are Caelan and Geoffrey. As they enter puberty, they are challenged their changing bodies and their classes. Geoffrey develops a crush on Aislinn.
Aislinn barely has any time to notice. She's training with a shadow warrior, Ryu, learning new fighting skills. She also makes the acquaintance of a griffin, Alce. Eventually Ryu leaves, and Aislinn has dreams of him being tortured. With Caelan and Geoffrey's help, the trio save Ryu, but not before angering the king.
Aislinn has to deal with her growing feelings for the Crown Prince. After a tender kiss, both Aislinn and Caelan realize they are falling in love with each other. It's an impossible position for both – especially when the king announces Caelan's engagement to a foreign princess. How can Caelan give his heart to another woman when it's Aislinn he wants? The situation tests both. Will love win in the end?
Zoltack's writing is creative and full of adventure. There's never a dull moment in Aislinn's life. The dialogue is authentic to the time and the plot moves at a brisk pace.
The characters are rich and vivid. Aislinn has a challenging task to balance; her heart's desire of becoming a Lady Knight while staying true to the woman in her. In that regard, Zoltack finds the perfect mix, showing Aislinn as a lady attending a ball and showing her in the heat of battle. Aislinn's struggle to be accepted is one many readers can connect with.
Caelan is also a character full of complexies. He's torn between his duty and heart, not an easy place to be. His admiration of Aislinn is subtle at first, and when he reveals his feelings to her, it's very rewarding to the reader. Caelan's nobility shines despite all the challenges he faces.
Zoltack's story is "sweet" for romance readers with several sensual kisses and caresses. Overall, "Woman of Honor" will transport the reader to a fantasy world filled with excitement, adventure, and love.
March 23, 2014
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*2.5 STARS*
Synopsis: Woman of honor is all about Aislinn, a girl who wants to be a knight to carry on her family's tradition after her brothers tragic death. She goes to the King who accepts her request but on condition that she will have to go through two years of probation after which it will be decided if she is worthy of knighthood or not. During those two years she makes an ally out of the prince, whom she hates for having luxuries she does not have. She finds a friend in a young page, George and an enemy of sorts in, Adamina. Adamina is a street rat who also decided to become a knight when she heard of Aislinn. Aislinn works very hard to prove her worth and gains her peers respect along the way. Along the way she has to prove her self again and again just for being a female. A time will come when she will have to let go of the prince she has come to love...Will she be able to make that sacrifice?
Review:
*I was given a free copy by the author for my honest review*
I am a firm believer in hard work and I liked the way Aislinn worked for her knighthood. What ever her problems be she really was determined to be a knight and that beyond anything made me admire her. She also stood up for what she believed in and was stubborn enough to survive the bullying and constant fear of failing. Initially she is arrogant and I liked how she grew out of it with age but I would have liked it if it had not been at Adamina's death. I actually liked Adamina despite her attitude problem as she had much more to face then Aislinn. I would have liked to see her alive and to find how it all turned out for her.
Woman of honor is an interesting read with many interesting characters but leaves much to be desired. To start with when does a seven year old start thinking like a fourteen year old? Is it because of the era? Younger Aislinns thoughts left me bewildered for the first 20% of the book. The book also lacked depth initially and felt two dimensional. Then there is Aislinn her self. Aislinn is simply used to having what she wants and it surprises me how she got through some of the troubles through sheer luck. There is also how anyone who hated her either died or was kicked out of the program. I get the author wanted a happy ending but something tragic needs to happen and fast to save the story from becoming too predictable. Aislinn and Cealans love story also needed to be a bit more complicated, some times I felt like I was watching a Disney movie.
Despite all the above I actually enjoyed reading Woman of honor and got invested in the characters. I wish to find out how it all ends. Best of luck to Nicole for her future endeavors.
*2.5 STARS*
Synopsis: Woman of honor is all about Aislinn, a girl who wants to be a knight to carry on her family's tradition after her brothers tragic death. She goes to the King who accepts her request but on condition that she will have to go through two years of probation after which it will be decided if she is worthy of knighthood or not. During those two years she makes an ally out of the prince, whom she hates for having luxuries she does not have. She finds a friend in a young page, George and an enemy of sorts in, Adamina. Adamina is a street rat who also decided to become a knight when she heard of Aislinn. Aislinn works very hard to prove her worth and gains her peers respect along the way. Along the way she has to prove her self again and again just for being a female. A time will come when she will have to let go of the prince she has come to love...Will she be able to make that sacrifice?
Review:
*I was given a free copy by the author for my honest review*
I am a firm believer in hard work and I liked the way Aislinn worked for her knighthood. What ever her problems be she really was determined to be a knight and that beyond anything made me admire her. She also stood up for what she believed in and was stubborn enough to survive the bullying and constant fear of failing. Initially she is arrogant and I liked how she grew out of it with age but I would have liked it if it had not been at Adamina's death. I actually liked Adamina despite her attitude problem as she had much more to face then Aislinn. I would have liked to see her alive and to find how it all turned out for her.
Woman of honor is an interesting read with many interesting characters but leaves much to be desired. To start with when does a seven year old start thinking like a fourteen year old? Is it because of the era? Younger Aislinns thoughts left me bewildered for the first 20% of the book. The book also lacked depth initially and felt two dimensional. Then there is Aislinn her self. Aislinn is simply used to having what she wants and it surprises me how she got through some of the troubles through sheer luck. There is also how anyone who hated her either died or was kicked out of the program. I get the author wanted a happy ending but something tragic needs to happen and fast to save the story from becoming too predictable. Aislinn and Cealans love story also needed to be a bit more complicated, some times I felt like I was watching a Disney movie.
Despite all the above I actually enjoyed reading Woman of honor and got invested in the characters. I wish to find out how it all ends. Best of luck to Nicole for her future endeavors.
November 9, 2013
Aislinn is only seven years old when her brother is killed. To uphold the family honor, Aislinn is determined to become a knight in his place. With the blessing of the king and the approval of her father, she begins her training. She makes a few friends and endures some minor bullying, but she does manage to do well in her lessons.
I enjoyed Aislinn’s early years as she struggled to learn and catch up to the other students. She has a determined personality, and she does not give up or give in to self pity. She doesn’t make excuses for herself, she simply tries harder. I feel she sets a wonderful example for all young girls. She proves that you can do anything you want, no matter the opposition.
This is a good story at heart, and it has some memorable characters. It was presented to me as fantasy, but it is lacking in that department. There is some minor magic which appears about two-thirds of the way through, and I would have liked to have had that throughout the story. Perhaps it is more prevalent in future installments of the series. Aislinn does have visions to communicate with her deceased brother, which introduces a paranormal aspect. For me, this story falls more under historical fiction than fantasy. Romance came into play at the end, and it was nice to see a man who preferred a strong woman over a typical obedient wife.
I was quite surprised to see her riding out after bandits at the young age of 9-10. That seems far too young, even for the boys who are training alongside her. I doubt any child would be required to do such a thing until they were closer to 14-15 years old, even in 1155 CE. A typical girl of her era would have been too small to go around slashing at bandits.
There are a few wrong word errors in this book, and it could benefit from a professional proofreader. I doubt her brother was killed by a “rouge band of bandits” (unless they were all wearing red). I suspect the author intended to use the word “rogue”. We all make mistakes, but some typos can change the meaning of a sentence and convey the wrong message to a reader. I found the high number of errors to be distracting.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I enjoyed Aislinn’s early years as she struggled to learn and catch up to the other students. She has a determined personality, and she does not give up or give in to self pity. She doesn’t make excuses for herself, she simply tries harder. I feel she sets a wonderful example for all young girls. She proves that you can do anything you want, no matter the opposition.
This is a good story at heart, and it has some memorable characters. It was presented to me as fantasy, but it is lacking in that department. There is some minor magic which appears about two-thirds of the way through, and I would have liked to have had that throughout the story. Perhaps it is more prevalent in future installments of the series. Aislinn does have visions to communicate with her deceased brother, which introduces a paranormal aspect. For me, this story falls more under historical fiction than fantasy. Romance came into play at the end, and it was nice to see a man who preferred a strong woman over a typical obedient wife.
I was quite surprised to see her riding out after bandits at the young age of 9-10. That seems far too young, even for the boys who are training alongside her. I doubt any child would be required to do such a thing until they were closer to 14-15 years old, even in 1155 CE. A typical girl of her era would have been too small to go around slashing at bandits.
There are a few wrong word errors in this book, and it could benefit from a professional proofreader. I doubt her brother was killed by a “rouge band of bandits” (unless they were all wearing red). I suspect the author intended to use the word “rogue”. We all make mistakes, but some typos can change the meaning of a sentence and convey the wrong message to a reader. I found the high number of errors to be distracting.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
October 3, 2014
This book was pretty good, and I enjoyed it, but it's not one that I would recommend. I really liked how the main character, a girl, was so tough and determined - willing to fight and train at the same level and in the midst of all other boys. I liked her personality, and the personalities of the other characters a whole lot.
In a funny way it struck me at times like a mix of A Stranger to Command and Tangled. An unusual mix that I wouldn't have expected, but it worked out.
That said, a few key things were very disconcerting and threw me off at points. First of all, I had to keep reminding myself that the characters acted years beyond their age, because in the medieval times people's lifespan was much shorter, and so they got married much younger and they probably grew up quicker for the most part, too. So, for example, I felt like the book's seven year old thought and acted more like a fourteen year old, and the book's fourteen year old acted like a high school senior.
Also, the book had some awkwardly mature content. Not enough to make me drop the book entirely, but enough to make me skip pages and wonder "why would the author choose to include that in here?".
In the end, though, I liked the book. The characters were enjoyable, and I really liked seeing how Aislinn overcame the girls-are-weak prejudice and worked hard, accepting nothing but absolute success. I thought that the dynamic between her and all of the other characters was fun to watch as it evolved, as well.
In a funny way it struck me at times like a mix of A Stranger to Command and Tangled. An unusual mix that I wouldn't have expected, but it worked out.
That said, a few key things were very disconcerting and threw me off at points. First of all, I had to keep reminding myself that the characters acted years beyond their age, because in the medieval times people's lifespan was much shorter, and so they got married much younger and they probably grew up quicker for the most part, too. So, for example, I felt like the book's seven year old thought and acted more like a fourteen year old, and the book's fourteen year old acted like a high school senior.
Also, the book had some awkwardly mature content. Not enough to make me drop the book entirely, but enough to make me skip pages and wonder "why would the author choose to include that in here?".
In the end, though, I liked the book. The characters were enjoyable, and I really liked seeing how Aislinn overcame the girls-are-weak prejudice and worked hard, accepting nothing but absolute success. I thought that the dynamic between her and all of the other characters was fun to watch as it evolved, as well.
March 15, 2014
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Thank you to the author for her generosity.
Aislinn is a child of almost eight who wants nothing more than to become a lady knight. We follow her on her journey. I enjoyed the strength and perserverance which is shown through out the story as the girl pursues her goal.
Despite that, I was left feeling that something was missing during the novel. I never fully got a sense that Aislinn’s hardships and troubles on her path to becoming a knight was anything more than minor irritants. The scene, of the young pages going on a bandit raid, stretched the bounds of credulity. The love story had all the usual twists of two people who eventually manage to marry.
A side plot which was started, was left hanging. I can only hope it is further explained in later books. Half-way through the book, the would be lady knight starts to have visions of her brother, whereby it seems the author is trying to bring a stronger religious presence into the novel. She also attempts to add an element of magic, another bit that also doesn’t go very far. The threat of war along with the subsequent battle, and the near loss of Aislinn’s husband, was a let down.
There are also proof-reading mistakes that don’t seem to have been corrected. Mainly, the misuse of certain words that while spelled correctly, change the meaning of the sentence. All in all, I kept expecting more and ended up disappointed.
Aislinn is a child of almost eight who wants nothing more than to become a lady knight. We follow her on her journey. I enjoyed the strength and perserverance which is shown through out the story as the girl pursues her goal.
Despite that, I was left feeling that something was missing during the novel. I never fully got a sense that Aislinn’s hardships and troubles on her path to becoming a knight was anything more than minor irritants. The scene, of the young pages going on a bandit raid, stretched the bounds of credulity. The love story had all the usual twists of two people who eventually manage to marry.
A side plot which was started, was left hanging. I can only hope it is further explained in later books. Half-way through the book, the would be lady knight starts to have visions of her brother, whereby it seems the author is trying to bring a stronger religious presence into the novel. She also attempts to add an element of magic, another bit that also doesn’t go very far. The threat of war along with the subsequent battle, and the near loss of Aislinn’s husband, was a let down.
There are also proof-reading mistakes that don’t seem to have been corrected. Mainly, the misuse of certain words that while spelled correctly, change the meaning of the sentence. All in all, I kept expecting more and ended up disappointed.
April 3, 2013
I’ m having a difficult time reviewing this book. It had so many ups and downs. The first half of this book began as a 4 star rating, going into a 2 star, to end up as a 3 star book.
In Woman of Honor we get to follow Aislinn in her journey to knighthood. When the story begins she is 7/8 years old. Before you know it, she’s a page and then a squire where she reaches adulthood. At the same time the pacing can be confusing; sometimes I had to remember how old the characters were.
I liked the elements that made the book a fantasy but they weren’t used to their fullest. At some point the story focuses too much on the romance part. Although I enjoyed the developing of the relationship between Aislinn and Caelan, I felt it just took the whole story over and in the end many things left unexplained. For example we don’t get a further explanation for the Alce, the Shadow Warriors and the appearances of her brother Christopher. Maybe those will be explained in the next book but I thought the Alce and Christopher were only linked to Aislinn and not Geoffrey (given that book 2 deals with his story). But just to be sure I’m going to read the second book anyway.
So even if I really enjoyed this book, I grew more and more disappointed nearing the end of it. While the plotline was really promising, I just wished some passages were dealt differently.
In Woman of Honor we get to follow Aislinn in her journey to knighthood. When the story begins she is 7/8 years old. Before you know it, she’s a page and then a squire where she reaches adulthood. At the same time the pacing can be confusing; sometimes I had to remember how old the characters were.
I liked the elements that made the book a fantasy but they weren’t used to their fullest. At some point the story focuses too much on the romance part. Although I enjoyed the developing of the relationship between Aislinn and Caelan, I felt it just took the whole story over and in the end many things left unexplained. For example we don’t get a further explanation for the Alce, the Shadow Warriors and the appearances of her brother Christopher. Maybe those will be explained in the next book but I thought the Alce and Christopher were only linked to Aislinn and not Geoffrey (given that book 2 deals with his story). But just to be sure I’m going to read the second book anyway.
So even if I really enjoyed this book, I grew more and more disappointed nearing the end of it. While the plotline was really promising, I just wished some passages were dealt differently.
April 25, 2011
This book came as a surprise. I hadn't read anything else by this author before and bought it because I liked the cover and the blurb. I'm glad I did. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this YA coming of age adventure story.
It wasn't perfect, no book is. There were a couple times I was reading and thought 'now that's not likely to happen' or 'it's that convenient' but those were the only glitches I noticed. Overall this is a well written, fast paced story with believable characters and a good plot. I especially liked the young standoffish prince. And I can still visualize the strong willed Aislinn as a child, facing her King in front of the entire court and telling him why she wants to be the first Lady Knight. (She wants to follow in her dead brother's footsteps.)
I found this one hard to put down, and that doesn't happen often to me. I drop more books than I finish. So I highly recommend any book that holds my attention. LOL.
Overall, a great fun read.
It wasn't perfect, no book is. There were a couple times I was reading and thought 'now that's not likely to happen' or 'it's that convenient' but those were the only glitches I noticed. Overall this is a well written, fast paced story with believable characters and a good plot. I especially liked the young standoffish prince. And I can still visualize the strong willed Aislinn as a child, facing her King in front of the entire court and telling him why she wants to be the first Lady Knight. (She wants to follow in her dead brother's footsteps.)
I found this one hard to put down, and that doesn't happen often to me. I drop more books than I finish. So I highly recommend any book that holds my attention. LOL.
Overall, a great fun read.
May 17, 2016
I liked this book and especially the female protagonist, Aislinn. I loved her from the beginning with what she she wanted to do. Honor her brother's death and become a lady knight. Well that is difficult as in the kingdom there are no lady knight. I liked her journey in becoming one and being stronger than men, fighting shoulder to shoulder along with them.
I liked it all and the romance between Aislinn and Caelan, liked it!
Just it is historical fiction with fantasy. Nothing wrong with that but most of the time fantasy element thrown into the story which threw me off the pace. It just in middle and then there is no mention of it for a while. I guess me, I don't know but I guess it is okay. I liked the book overall and would read the other books in the series.
My fav part was the end, the end I thought was going to anti-climatic but wasn't. Which totally relieved me. Liked and would recommend if you like strong headed females going out of norm set in historical fiction world.
I liked it all and the romance between Aislinn and Caelan, liked it!
Just it is historical fiction with fantasy. Nothing wrong with that but most of the time fantasy element thrown into the story which threw me off the pace. It just in middle and then there is no mention of it for a while. I guess me, I don't know but I guess it is okay. I liked the book overall and would read the other books in the series.
My fav part was the end, the end I thought was going to anti-climatic but wasn't. Which totally relieved me. Liked and would recommend if you like strong headed females going out of norm set in historical fiction world.
November 12, 2012
This is a well crafted fantasy novel set in a world of chivalry and romance. The character of the feisty heroine Aislinn and the fictitious land of Arnhem are well drawn. Her quest to become a noble knight is skilfully explained and tells of the trials which can beset a woman who is determined to succeed in a very masculine profession.
The magic and mystery is believable and fits in well with a historical perspective. There is plenty of conflict and the rivalry between high born Aislinn and the lowly Adamina is sympathetically written and a nice twist. There are many villains and epic battles which make this a story to savour. This is the first book in a trilogy but it also stands well on its own.
The magic and mystery is believable and fits in well with a historical perspective. There is plenty of conflict and the rivalry between high born Aislinn and the lowly Adamina is sympathetically written and a nice twist. There are many villains and epic battles which make this a story to savour. This is the first book in a trilogy but it also stands well on its own.
January 5, 2016
Despite this book covering at least eight years of Aislinn's life she has little personality. We know little about her fears, hopes, or temper let alone that of the other characters. Her obstacles seem to just disappear despite her poor or lack of planning. The romance is poorly written, the prince and Aislinn act like blocks of wood. Zoltack spends just a few pages total on Aislinn's training. The few action scenes read more like summaries with half the words missing. This book reads like Zoltack took parts of Tamora Pierce's Protector of the Small, ripped the soul and characterization out of it, and published it. I am extremely disappointed that this is the first book I read this year. To be honest I would rather stab out my eyes or read Twilight than reread this book.
April 3, 2016
Expect the unexpected. What hasn't been done in writing? I have yet to come across a tale fo a woman training to be a knight, and one so well -written. Yet Nicole Zoltack did just that. This novel, the first in a series, is heroic and deserving in showing what women can do and did, even in the m iddle Ages if they set their mind to.
Certainly this is not a tale of al positives, there are sacrifices to be made for the yearning to be successful, especially in a world dominated my male stereotypes, yet, Zoltack is able to break through any glass ceilings and come out as a knight in shining armor in her writing. Even with the heroine as protagonist, you easily get lost in the mix of developed characters, VERY well written!
Certainly this is not a tale of al positives, there are sacrifices to be made for the yearning to be successful, especially in a world dominated my male stereotypes, yet, Zoltack is able to break through any glass ceilings and come out as a knight in shining armor in her writing. Even with the heroine as protagonist, you easily get lost in the mix of developed characters, VERY well written!
January 1, 2011
I liked the narrative flow of this story. It wasn't quite what I expected, but that was a good thing in this instance. I was expecting an action packed knight story. Instead I got a heartfelt, warm story about a little girl following her dreams and succeeding no matter what obstacles stand in her way...including royalty. I fell in love with the MC and loved watching the childhood friendship with the MC grow into a grown love. The ending was timed very well and opens up perfectly to book two. I'll start reading Book 2 after I finish the book I'm currently reading.
January 12, 2014
3.5 stars. I did enjoy this story, but it lacked... something. There were some things that I didn't like and some I didn't see the point of, but it was a nice read. The climax of the story wasn't as grand as I would have liked it...
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