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The Waitress

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The food is great. The service is deadly.

Dying for a good meal? Come on over to the Dog House, where Paula works after school. It's a great place to meet your friends--if they're still alive.

At the Dog House accidents can happen, and they often do. You could wind up with more than just an upset stomach. You might just wind up dead. Of course, when things go wrong everybody always blames the waitress. Now Paula's first job might be her last.

131 pages, Paperback

First published August 1, 1992

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Profile Image for Kirsty.
Author 84 books1,481 followers
November 26, 2018
When I was 12, this was one of my favourite books. Clearly I was a moron. This book is terrible even by Point Horror standards.

Re-read this for the Teenage Scream podcast (lovingly dissecting the best and worst of 90s teen horror). https://soundcloud.com/teenagescream
Profile Image for ItzSmashley.
149 reviews7 followers
September 24, 2023
3.5 stars
Probably the shortest point horror book iv read at 130 pages. But that meant it was well paced and flew by. Standard stuff for this series, but I was invested enough to find out who was responsible and the end reveal was satisfying.

Paula starts a new job as a part time waitress, but when she starts to receive threatening notes and her customers begin to be messed with. She starts to fear that someone is out to get her, can she find out who is responsible? Is it related to another restaurant who had a customer killed through poison last year?
Profile Image for Grace Chan.
219 reviews63 followers
August 20, 2021
Trixie, the lady who owns the restaurant did it!! She only killed one kid though and that was years ago, so it doesn't really count? 🤷🏻‍♀️

She really pulls from the YA Murderer 101 handbook though. You know, the same ol formula:
Step 1: Leave weird menacing phone calls and notes in the protagonist's locker
Step 2: Leave a knife in her apron at work
Step 3: Stalk her a little and hide out in her car to scare her...who cares!!

This one is a bit of a bore, go read Sinclair Smith's "Dream Date" instead, which at least gets points for originality.

P.S. If you're ever being chased by a lunatic murderer/stalker in a restaurant in the dark, maybe don't run down into the cellar where there's no exit? Just saying!
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Profile Image for Jason Harlow.
Author 9 books20 followers
September 10, 2023
I haven't really enjoyed any of the past several books I recently finished and was hoping this book (from one of my favorite authors) would get me out of my slump. That, however was absolutely not the case. The story follows a high school girl named Paula who gets a job at a restaurant called The Dog House. Because this is a Point Horror book, spooky things start happening, such as lame pranks involving sharp objects and creepy phone calls. This has all the usual Point Horror tropes and honestly was a colossal waste of time. Despite the final reveal making very little sense, it served as a bit of redemption for me (because at least something kinda actually happened, I suppose), but overall, this was really whack.
Profile Image for Alex (The Bookubus).
455 reviews570 followers
June 4, 2020
Paula is the new girl in town, settling in to a new school and starting a part-time job at the local diner. Things don't get off to a good start when she receives the attention of a boy who the popular girl has her sights set on, and she lies to her new boss about her previous waitressing experience. Someone starts to play pranks on her...but who, and why?!

I definitely had this one when I was a kid but I had no recollection of the story now. This actually ended up being a pleasant surprise and quite an enjoyable story. It did lose its way towards the end though which ended up being disappointing, but overall it was a fun read.
Profile Image for Paula Brandon.
1,290 reviews40 followers
December 15, 2016
It's main problem is that it's too short without enough substance! Motivation for the villain was weak sauce, and the boyfriend material was utterly woeful. Otherwise, it's entertaining in a trashy, read-in-one-go sort of way!
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2,613 reviews1,383 followers
September 8, 2021
Having recently moved to the area Paula applies for a job at Dog House restaurant, she’s successful even though she lied about her waitress experience on her resume.
Someone at the restaurant takes a disliking to her and soon starts to play a series of pranks, they become more and more extreme in an effort to scare Paula.
I found this one to be slightly disappointing, the other characters motivations were weak. Even though it was a shorter than normal Point Horror, it really dragged.
Profile Image for Sati Marie Frost.
350 reviews22 followers
September 24, 2021
One-Line Review: Tip yo’ waitress. *Lafayette GIF here*

Full Review:

I don't even know what to say here. I'm so totally meh about this book. I remember never caring for it, even as a preteen, and I wondered if that had changed. Sometimes my opinion on these books does change - I didn't like The Lifeguard much when I was young, and now I think it's great - but as far as The Waitress goes, I still don't care for it at all.

Funnily enough, I can't quite put my finger on the reasons why. It's formulaic, but lots of books are. The characters - including the heroine - are shallow, but again, plenty are. All I can think is that I didn't get any real emotion from it.

Basic plot points (because I don't care enough to give more than the basics): Paula is new in town and has a job waitressing at the Dog House, a restaurant owned by Trixie, an eccentric 50-something who still dresses and talks like a teenager. Trixie's niece is the beautiful and bitchy Coralynn, who for some reason has it in for Paula and tries to make her life hell. I think it's over a dude, whose name I believe was Garth. Coralynn likes him and refers to him as her "boyfriend" but he likes Paula and says he and Coralynn only had one or two dates. Typical teen stuff, with added bitchiness.

Pranks are played, nothing too serious. Nobody dies. The only person who really gets "attacked" turns out not to have been attacked at all, it was just appendicitis or something. Although one person was killed prior to the events of the book - I forgot about that till just now.

The whole thing was just...blah. The reason for the anger and violence (so to speak) was just weak. There's nothing to like about this book, and nothing to hate either - and that almost makes it worse.

YMMV, of course. I know some of my sixth-grade friends liked it, back in the day. Me, I'm wondering if Sinclair Smith actually wrote this book, since he / she (I'm not sure if Smith is a man or a woman, and can't find the information online anywhere) is usually pretty good. I was a big fan of Second Sight and The Diary, thought that Dream Date was very inventive, and even The Boy Next Door which I HATE - it scares the pants off me - at least evoked some kind of feeling in me. The Waitress just left me entirely numb.

And the annoying thing is that, regardless of any notes I make for myself - in a year or two I won't remember how blah it left me feeling, and will likely read it again. *rolls eyes*

Verdict: Meh.

Edit Oct 2020: Odd, I liked this a lot more this time round. Maybe because I was reading it as a satire focusing on the rage of the working classes against the entitled freeloaders who leave bad tips. Who knows? 😂
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125 reviews14 followers
December 12, 2020
This is the second Point Horror story I've read and my first encounter with Sinclair Smith. Whilst not a whole lot happens, it's still a fun read for when the brain wants something light. You could kind of sympathise with the villain at the end. The only real downside was that it left me hungry and desperate for a burger!
Profile Image for Erica Leigh.
705 reviews48 followers
May 5, 2022
Eh this one is light on the terror. Just a few low-tech pranks (a mechanical rat lol) and a chase scene.

I thought the boss was unhinged the moment she locked her in the freezer as a ~joke the first time but I didn’t actually suspect her, whoops. What a dumb reveal tbh.
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Profile Image for Courtney Gruenholz.
Author 13 books23 followers
March 10, 2022
It seems to me that I am going to have a love/hate thing going on with the books written by Sinclair Smith.

I wasn't really a fan of The Boy Next Door but I absolutely loved Dream Date and since this seems to be her first entry in the Point Horror series (from 1992)…I didn't know what to really expect. I know Smith wrote the short story Hacker in the 13 Tales book (and I enjoyed that too) but since these are supposed to be novel length, I guess I expect a little more.

Paula is the new girl in town, starting new in the middle of her junior year after she and her mother moved following her father's death. She already seems to be on the bad side of her English teacher, Mr. Woods, and the Queen Bee of the school, Coralynn, for having a friendly conversation with her boy friend Garth (notice two words...not one.)

Paula also takes on a job waitressing at Trixie's Dog House, a diner with a 50's motif, and has to deal with her boss being a little eccentric. Also, Trixie just happens to be Coralynn's aunt so she decides to give Paula quite a hard time since the girl has clearly never done this kind of work before.

Helping out at the diner are two other girls, Virgilia who goes by Virgil and Angelina who goes by Cookie, and things seem to go from bad to worse when a bunch of pranks ranging from dumb to devious begin happening the moment Paula starts her job.

And so it goes we get a bunch of red herrings, some teenage girl catfighting, some romance, our culprit reveal into an underwhelming climax, a short wrap-up of exposition and an ending that might as well have a freeze frame and a laugh track.

The characters weren't boring and the story had potential but it wasn't as good as it could have been. Showing my age but it was like watching a teen drama version of Alice Doesn't Live Here Anymore mixed with the comedy angle of the TV series it spun off.

When it comes to The Waitress, I'd have it to round out your collection of Point Horror books but if you want to read it and form your own opinion...help yourself.

There are four more Sinclair Smith books I have yet to read so...oh boy.
Profile Image for Sharron Joy Reads.
845 reviews40 followers
May 28, 2026
Paula is new to town, she already has an enemy in Coralynn, the popular girl but she has a new waitressing job so hopefully that will keep her out of trouble. The Dog House is a strange place with an eccentric owner, Trixie, the food is excellent but the service might kill you. This might be Paula’s first and last job!

A really fun PH which, as usual, removes any parents within 5 minutes 😆 the handsome sappy love interest Gareth, the mean girl Coralynn, the studious brainy Virgilia (weird name!), the bad girl Cookie, and the beehived Trixie all make this a rollicking good read. There’s even a fun urban legend thrown in for good measure and so stupid it’s funny reason for all the mayhem.

Paula is justifiably paranoid someone is out to get her as the unsettling phone calls, destroyed locker and creepy messages stack up but everyone else thinks it’s just other teenagers messing about, of course they are wrong.

A fast read that moves at a frantic pace, a very good time!
Profile Image for K.
193 reviews
January 4, 2023
I have no idea what I just read

The plot was all over and I wasn't sure where it was going
Profile Image for Erika.
24 reviews
April 22, 2024
It was an okay read. Not much substance to it really.
Profile Image for Jules Inman.
322 reviews57 followers
April 22, 2026
2.5 ⭐️ Not at all what I expected. Kind of just a girl getting blamed for some not so nice tricks on people while she’s getting some threatening notes and calls. There were a couple of parts that felt kind of like the movies Carrie & Urban Legend, which I love, but overall it was kind of lack luster and the end was disappointing.
117 reviews2 followers
May 27, 2026
I'm not sure anything really happened.....

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Profile Image for April Jade.
236 reviews24 followers
May 24, 2026
Somehow I guessed the "prankster" from the beginning which I never do! But this one was a bit of a slog to get through. I appreciated all the ridiculous names; Cookie, Trixie, Garth, Coralynn, Virgilia... but our main character Paula was pretty oblivious the whole time.
Profile Image for Liam Underwood.
351 reviews9 followers
September 7, 2025
This is my first Sinclair Smith Point Horror book, following the short story featured in Thirteen Tales of Horror which I thought was okay. The Waitress is an easy Point Horror read, not quite matching the same moreish quality of R.L. Stine's better work, but I still found myself enjoying Smith's pacing. A welcome turn of events following The Mall , which wasn't a particularly gripping read.

The Waitress keeps the stakes relatively low, and there's nothing here that hasn't already featured in a number of other Point Horror books I've previously read - girl new to town, parent out of town, threats and pranks and love interests and rivals, etc - but it ticks the boxes efficiently enough. Smith handles set-up, conflict, and resolution fairly well. The main character, Paula, is pretty unremarkable, and out of the ensemble it's probably only co-worker/friend Cookie and nemesis Coralynn who really stand out. I did like Mr Wood too, but he features minimally.

The antagonist isn't particularly surprising, despite Smith's best efforts to throw in red herrings. There are also a couple of lazily poorly written moments, which is a shame and probably stands out more as, for the most part, the writing here is perfectly fine. Honestly this is just standard fare which has already been done better elsewhere in Point Horror, but is still absolutely fine and doesn't feel too much like retreading familiar ground. There's nothing overwhelmingly negative or irritating about this book, just very little to praise also.

2.5/5

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1) The Girlfriend - 4/5
2) Trick or Treat - 3.5/5
3) Fatal Secrets - 3.5/5
4) Teacher's Pet - 3.5/5
5) The Baby-Sitter II - 3.5/5
6) The Cheerleader - 3.5/5
7) The Hitchhiker - 3.5/5
8) April Fools - 3.5/5
9) My Secret Admirer - 3.5/5
10) The Lifeguard - 3.5/5
11) Thirteen Tales of Horror - 3/5
12) The Accident - 3/5
13) Funhouse - 3/5
14) The Invitation - 2.5/5
15) The Waitress - 2.5/5
16) The Snowman - 2.5/5
17) The Mall - 2.5/5
18) The Boyfriend - 2/5
19) Mother's Helper - 2/5
20) The Baby-Sitter - 1.5/5
21) The Return of the Vampire - 1/5
22) Beach Party - 1/5
Profile Image for Trisha.
867 reviews27 followers
December 5, 2017
This is definitely one of the worst Point books out there! For one thing it was only 131 pages long, so I guess there wasn't much room for character development...or even plot development! For another, I didn't really like the main character all that much, so I didn't care much what happened to her. Well, I probably would have cared if she died, 'cause that would have been taking it too far. ;) Still, she was kind of annoying and super bitchy as well, even if she sometimes had good reason to dislike Coralynn, the resident "bitch". When a chick talks about "getting rid of" another girl "...for good" just because she's going out with the guy she likes, I know she's not my kind of chick.

The dialogue was unrealistic for teen fiction, with Paula (the MC) thinking to herself at one point, Drat! I don't know any teenagers who say that word, and I didn't know any back in 1992 either when this book was published. Also, when Garth says, "You were terrific!" to me that didn't sound like a teenaged guy, at least not the teenaged guys I knew. And the one that got me the most was how Virgilia (yep, that's her name...not Virginia...note the ellipses...) and Paula were bitching about Coralynn and they called her...wait for it..."a rat!" Oh wow, what a heinous insult! I know heaps of teens who say, "You're such a rat!" (kidding, I don't and never have)

I think the writing improved as the book went on - at the start there were a LOT of ellipses, and there were quite a few throughout the text in general, too. One thing I found confusing was the huge amount of inner dialogue going on with Paula - one paragraph she'd be thinking to herself, but there was no sign of it from use of italics, etc. Then again if italics had been used for this purpose, most of the book would have been in italics, at least in certain parts!

One part that made me snort was in their dance class, where we're hearing about how the kids all love their teacher because she's "so pretty and trim". That's a great reason to love a teacher! Her looks! Well, she also "always made the class so much fun," so there was that as well I guess. But mostly it was her looks!

After the big reveal of the "bad guy" (Trixie...who I suspected at one point only because I think I remember her being the baddie from the last time I read this book), when she was being super creepy and hiding in Paula's car, and then basically holding Paula hostage before losing her knife and losing all steam too, Paula didn't seem that traumatised. The very next day she was giggling and laughing with her friends about "the rat!" (a fake rat that Trixie put in someone's dinner platter as a joke at her own place of business) Paula remembers to get serious long enough to be sad about the guy that Trixie murdered (before Paula's arrival in town), but after that it's all back to the fun and games and laughter!

All in all...when I compare this book to some of my other favourite Point books, there really is no comparison. I don't think I'll ever have to read this one again. ;) It has earned its single star, however, because it's a Point book, and that automatically gives any book a star in my opinion!
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108 reviews4 followers
December 7, 2020
Full review at: https://www.jackreacts.com.au/post/th...
Snippet: This is a book where not much happens. Even though a guy had been murdered and there was all these pranks going on, for some reason it didn’t feel like anyone was in any danger until the showdown at the end. I didn’t hate the book, but didn’t love it either.

Check out my full review linked up top for an in-depth recap :)

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Author 20 books246 followers
October 26, 2018
Just terrible. No tension, not fun, and the killer doesn't make any sense. A phoned-in book from start to finish—Sinclair, I expect better from you!

I read this for our podcast Teenage Scream, which dissects the best (and worst) of 90s Teen Horror.

https://soundcloud.com/teenagescream
Profile Image for Elaine Mullane || Elaine and the Books.
1,019 reviews370 followers
April 5, 2018
I used to absolutely LOVE the Point Horror books! I would go through each of them in one sitting, for the most part. They definitely tweaked my interested in the horror genre.
Profile Image for Matthew.
1,072 reviews5 followers
October 1, 2021
Last night I finished reading THE WAITRESS, by Sinclair Smith, published in 1992. This novel was one of those in the Point Horror collection of novels that were geared towards young adults/pre-teens back in the day.

This book had a pretty fun premise. Paula is hired at a restaurant called the Dog House, run by Trixie. Soon after, Paula is becoming the butt of many less than appetizing pranks. Someone is out to get her, but who?

While this book had a great premise, it fell flat on its face. The cover was very eye-catching, and it was a very fast read, very elementary school level reading (which there's nothing wrong with that), but it all just didn't build to anything thrilling, which I think was the intent of it.

I will say this, there was a scene where the person is revealed to be the one doing all the pranks and such, and it was one of the worst written scenes I've ever read, but not in a bad way, but in a so bad way that it was actually comical and campy and I loved it. The motive was so stupid it reminded me of a bad 80s horror flick or after-school special. I laughed out loud at its stupidity that I found myself enjoying it.

Maybe if that had been more consistent throughout it would have made for a better story. I'll be reading more of the Point Horror series if I can get my hands on them. Apparently, they're a kind of collector's item these days, especially the ones that were written by R.L. Stine.

All in all, it was a fun premise with a wonderful cover. I could totally see someone taking this novel and turning it into the next summer teen horror film. It just needed that added oomph to make it more engaging. THE WAITRESS by Sinclair Smith. My rating - 2/5
492 reviews13 followers
December 26, 2025
A new start including a new job for Paula and it's just not working out! She's also on her own as her mum's out of town... noticing a theme in these re-read of the point horror books. Teens running amok and the only 'responsible' adults around turn out to be idiots or crazy...

I don't think I could Paula's job and I think Coralynn is exhausting. I wouldn't tolerate her rubbish and I'd be matching that energy!

The odd things that are going on are a little creepy but it's not clear why Paula is being targeted in the way she's being targeted. All very odd and hinting at something a little more sinister going on! The bad guy is a little unexpected and incredibly unhinged so makes for an interesting read...
Profile Image for Khurshid Ali.
883 reviews1 follower
December 10, 2023
If you love Fear Street I would highly recommend reading Point Horror books They are just as creepy and scary.

Imagine having to move schools and starting fresh again

Imagine being pranked by the most popular girl in school

Imagine thinking things cant get any worse until

The threatening calls begin
A message thrown through your window
Being chased by a car
The knife
The dead rat

Someone is out to get you, but who and why


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