I'm so glad to be done with this awful, tedious book. Ackroyd's extended, repetitive and at times nonsensical meditation on Venice probably doesn't belong in the nonfiction section, but since he never cites any of his sources, it's really hard to track down where he's wrong or making stuff up.
I read Ackroyd's biography of Thomas More fifteen years ago and quite liked it. My one reservation was that the endnotes were not always sufficient -- sometimes, I wanted a little more information so that I'd have the option to go learn more about the topic he was covering. Now, that book has fifteen pages of notes in about a 6-point font. This book has zero notes, period.
You might think, "Footnotes are irritating pedantry; a skilled writer can make a perfectly good historical argument without them." Sure. There are other ways to acknowledge the sources of your ideas and give sufficient information about historical details to enable your reader to follow your tracks. Long-format magazine writers use these methods all the time. Ackroyd, however, rarely avails himself of any of them. Why, for instance, would you attribute a quotation about the Murano glass industry in 1500 to "one contemporary"? (p. 33) Does it really hurt so much to give the source's name, or the book from which you took the quote? It might matter less if all of his information was accurate, but when he informs us that Piranesi was best known for his images of prisons (p. 79-80) or that pantomime (a word present in both Greek and Latin) takes its name from the commedia dell'arte figure Pantaloon (p. 128) I began to feel that anything and everything in the book could be made up. Reading Ackroyd's account of a picturesque island covered in disinterred bones (p. 330), I explored a bit on Italian websites, only to find that his claim that the island is still used in this way has been inaccurate since the Fascist era.
So, enough about the dodginess of the details. Perhaps the book should be taken as a sort of memoir or appreciation, rather than a work of historical nonfiction. If we are meant to cherish this book on the merits of its writing, it fails again. Ackroyd's prose is repetitive and ornate in a manner that would be much more charming enlivened by the abstruse vocabulary and archaic philosophies of one of the eighteenth-century essayists he often refers to. Though, I should grant him archaic philosophies: references to "Oriental" and "eastern" things in the book belong in a different era. If you mean to say "the Byzantine empire was known for its lurid physical punishments," for instance, don't smear the entire world east of Venice (see e.g. pp. 83, 338-9).
While the organization of the book initially seems promising, each component could have been better written and more concise. The book utterly lacks a conclusion, so the reader ends up just as lost as a tourist in Venice. Let me leave you, in the end, with a couple of particularly meaningless sentences from the last chapter of the book:
"The architecture, or architexture, of the city was conceived harmoniously. [Reviewer's note: contradicts his earlier chapters about how the haphazard styles of Venetian building were falsely made to look uniform by aggressive "restorations."] If it is indeed true that buildings have been raised by the power of music, then the churches and noble houses of Venice have assuredly embodied the melody of the world."(p. 369)
If it is indeed true that Peter Ackroyd wrote the biography I read 15 years ago, then this book assuredly bears the mark of an army of lazy and stoned assistants.