Anyone who is interested in criminal profiling knows who John Douglas is. And Mark Olshaker is the author who pulls Douglas’s stories together. But did you know they collaborated on a novel in 1999?
I read Mindhunter (1995) and couldn’t get enough. Then I read Journey Into Darkness (1997), and still was pretty impressed. Then came Obsession (1998) and Anatomy of a Motive (1999). I started thinking, gee, John Douglas had all these adventures in the FBI, but he seems to be telling the same stories over and over again. (Not to mention tooting his rather loud horn…) So when I saw Broken Wings, a novel by the two, I figured I’d read a new story. And granted, it is new, sorta. And sorta not.
If you’ve read any of the nonfiction books, you’ll know that Douglas spent some time in a coma. Hmmm, the lead character in Broken Wings, Jake Donovan was near-death in a hotel room once, earlier in his FBI career, too.
I have to point out here, before I go further, that Mark Olshaker’s author’s note at the beginning of the book says:
I want to stress that except when real names are used, all characters in this novel are completely fictitious and are not based on anyone.
That said, I want to point out that not only is Jake Donovan obviously based on Douglas, some of the cases Donovan worked on were awfully familiar to cased Douglas worked on in his books. Don’t get me wrong; I’ve enjoyed Douglas’s book for the most part.
And I don’t want to say that the novel was bad, because if you haven’t read any John Douglas, it’s pretty good, really. I like the main character, who is forced into retirement from the FBI and serendipitously falls into the hands of a philanthropic widow who offers to fund a private enterprise for him. Neat. There’s something for everyone in this novel: militia groups, suicides, forensics work, organized crime…
And the plotting is really smooth — I would have really enjoyed this book if I hadn’t had that other stuff jumping out at me all the time.
What stuff? Well, let me tell you. How about a partial list?
Donovan is called the Mindhunter. Boy, that’s subtle.
Jake Donovan is in the center of a picture that includes “some of the real legends of the unit before they had retired or moved on to other positions—people such as Jim Wright, Jud Ray, Roy Hazelwood, Jana Monroe, Greg Cooper, Gregg McCrary, Bill Hagmaier, and Steve Mardigan.” What? No John Douglas?!
Nosing around the home of the director of the FBI, Donovan finds a copy of a book called Journey Into Darkness.
Donovan interviewed killers and rapists in prison to develop the current profiling system. He taught profiling classes at Quantico, appeared on numerous television shows, and did a post-offense analysis of James Huberty, the shooter in the 1984 McDonald’s killing spree in San Ysidro, California.
You get the idea.
And there are a few spots the copy editor missed.
I would recommend this novel to someone who has read maybe one of the nonfiction books. For those who have already indulged in the series, maybe it will amuse you to look for the familiar stuff. I just found it annoying and distracting.
By the way, Mark Olshaker has writen four novels on his own. I recently read Unnatural Causes (1986) and wasn’t very impressed. In fact, I haven’t had the inclination to start Einstein’s Brain (1981) because Causes was so cheesy.
But hey, that’s just my opinion…