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On the Soul of a Vampire
For some it takes a lifetime to discover their raison d'être. Imagine searching for eight centuries. In 1997 Philadelphia, an 800 year old vampire comes face to face with his reason to be when he discovers a young mortal woman whose understanding of immortality is about to change all he's known as truth. Obsessed with the mystery of her knowledge, he embarks on a journey that doesn't only lead him to his childhood home in the Provencal Alps, but into his greatest hopes and dreams, fears and disappointments, and into the strange and frightening past that shaped him. A novel about faltering faith and never-ending hope, On the Soul of a Vampire will not only alter everything you think you know about vampires, it will change the way you see your very soul.
320 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 26, 2010
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Krisi Keley
11 books80 followersKrisi Keley is a writer and artist with a degree in theology from DeSales University, who has also studied foreign and classical languages. In addition to Mareritt and Vingede, the first two books in the supernatural mystery-suspense series, The Friar Tobe Fairy Files, she's also the author of the paranormal speculative fiction novels, On the Soul of a Vampire and Pro Luce Habere and of English translations of three 19th century French stories. She is currently at work on more Friar Tobe fairy tale mysteries as well as on other writing projects. She was born in Philadelphia and currently lives in Chester County, PA with her family and six dogs.
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May 10, 2011
WHOA! I started this novel without really knowing what to expect. (It was a generous gift from the author, who's a Goodreads friend --but that didn't prejudice me in her favor. :-) ) Keley is a first novelist, with no prior track record; and I knew the book was self-published, and hence not vetted. What I experienced absolutely blew me out of the water; I was totally hooked and mesmerized practically from the beginning. The author handles words with an authority and skill almost unheard of in a beginning writer; but more than that, she writes with a genuine spiritual and psychological depth that I've rarely experienced in modern (or any other) fiction. And the emotional intensity of this novel has to be experienced to be believed. I didn't think it likely that another writer could ever match Meyer's stunning Twilight series in that respect, and the two works are very different in their essential vision; but the reader's emotional involvement here is every bit as intense or more so. The emotions aren't necessarily of a warm-fuzzy sort, though; I finished this feeling that my psyche had been run over with a harrow. But neither are we dealing with a vision that leaves you in disgust and despair. (Since this is the opening volume of a projected series, it won't constitute exactly a spoiler to say that the story arc here does not bring you to a place of complete closure; to achieve that, you'll have to read the next volume(s) --and you'll most definitely want to!)
Since vampire fiction is an established tradition in the supernatural genre, it's helpful to "locate" Keley's work, as it were, with some comparisons. She lists Rice as a favorite author and an influence, and her vampires, like Rice's, are not the blood-lusting automatons of the classic tradition; they do have personalities, consciences, and sensibilities, and some control over who and when they bite. Their characteristics are much like those in the Rice novels, as well, and perhaps sort of midway between the traditional model and, say, Meyer's --for instance, they can't shapeshift, and do reflect in mirrors; but they DO have fangs, and sleep through the day (and while sunlight won't kill them, it can debilitate and disfigure them). They also have a psi capability that's not true mind-reading, but comes close (though in a perhaps unconscious similarity to the Twilight books, our male vampire protagonist can't sense anything from the heroine). The really unique aspect of Keley's vampires, though, is this: though they feed physically on blood, their feeding drive, at its deepest level, is to experience complete mental/spiritual oneness with another person in the moment of death, knowing experientially everything that he/she essentially is. (This is based, apparently, partly on their inherent quasi-telepathic capability, and partly on the experience of blood-drinking in this magnitude itself; the Biblical comment that "the blood is the life" comes to mind.) So feeding on animal blood, or blood stored in frozen pouches, or blood from a live human in non-lethal quantities, doesn't satisfy this drive; "vegetarian" vampirism simply isn't an option for them. They have to be killers of humans, even if they don't like it. Keley faces this fact squarely, and then grapples with the question of how vampires can relate to the grace of God; because this is very definitely a Christian exploration of the vampire mythos. And of all the modern Christian treatments of the vampire theme that I've read, I'd say this is the deepest and most profound of any of them, including my own.
Since her narrator is an 800-year-old vampire, his narrative voice is not the breezy, conversational contemporary diction of writers like Meyer or Dent. Rather, his natural voice is much more measured and elegant, with some involved syntax (and his English is influenced in some particulars by French, a nice subtle touch) and vocabulary; he learned English before language instruction was "dumbed down," and it shows. This gives the prose style the flavor of a 19th-century novel. I was actually reminded of Henry James, because of both this factor and the marked emphasis on the character's interior thoughts and intuitions --though the Jamesian quality is reminiscent of that writer at his best rather than his worst, and the plot does have its share of outward event and even violent action. Don't be misled into thinking it's dull; Keley quickly draws you into a page-turning quest for the solution to the mystery that steadily thickens here. Just who --or what-- IS Angelina, really?
If I have one slight criticism here, it's that, as a Roman Catholic author, the Christian content at the warp and woof of Keley's plot is heavily influenced by the Neo-Platonic strand of Catholic thought, with its idea of immortality as the total shucking off of the physical and its almost Eastern concept of the "beatific vision." My own ideas of the afterlife are significantly different. But that's a quibble. Normally, I don't declare myself, here on Goodreads, as a "fan" of an author until I've read and liked at least four of his/her books; I try not to do it lightly. In Keley's case, I became an official fan on the basis of this one book; and that says exactly what it implies. If I'm breathing when the next book of the series comes out, I'll be reading it as soon as I possibly can!
Since vampire fiction is an established tradition in the supernatural genre, it's helpful to "locate" Keley's work, as it were, with some comparisons. She lists Rice as a favorite author and an influence, and her vampires, like Rice's, are not the blood-lusting automatons of the classic tradition; they do have personalities, consciences, and sensibilities, and some control over who and when they bite. Their characteristics are much like those in the Rice novels, as well, and perhaps sort of midway between the traditional model and, say, Meyer's --for instance, they can't shapeshift, and do reflect in mirrors; but they DO have fangs, and sleep through the day (and while sunlight won't kill them, it can debilitate and disfigure them). They also have a psi capability that's not true mind-reading, but comes close (though in a perhaps unconscious similarity to the Twilight books, our male vampire protagonist can't sense anything from the heroine). The really unique aspect of Keley's vampires, though, is this: though they feed physically on blood, their feeding drive, at its deepest level, is to experience complete mental/spiritual oneness with another person in the moment of death, knowing experientially everything that he/she essentially is. (This is based, apparently, partly on their inherent quasi-telepathic capability, and partly on the experience of blood-drinking in this magnitude itself; the Biblical comment that "the blood is the life" comes to mind.) So feeding on animal blood, or blood stored in frozen pouches, or blood from a live human in non-lethal quantities, doesn't satisfy this drive; "vegetarian" vampirism simply isn't an option for them. They have to be killers of humans, even if they don't like it. Keley faces this fact squarely, and then grapples with the question of how vampires can relate to the grace of God; because this is very definitely a Christian exploration of the vampire mythos. And of all the modern Christian treatments of the vampire theme that I've read, I'd say this is the deepest and most profound of any of them, including my own.
Since her narrator is an 800-year-old vampire, his narrative voice is not the breezy, conversational contemporary diction of writers like Meyer or Dent. Rather, his natural voice is much more measured and elegant, with some involved syntax (and his English is influenced in some particulars by French, a nice subtle touch) and vocabulary; he learned English before language instruction was "dumbed down," and it shows. This gives the prose style the flavor of a 19th-century novel. I was actually reminded of Henry James, because of both this factor and the marked emphasis on the character's interior thoughts and intuitions --though the Jamesian quality is reminiscent of that writer at his best rather than his worst, and the plot does have its share of outward event and even violent action. Don't be misled into thinking it's dull; Keley quickly draws you into a page-turning quest for the solution to the mystery that steadily thickens here. Just who --or what-- IS Angelina, really?
If I have one slight criticism here, it's that, as a Roman Catholic author, the Christian content at the warp and woof of Keley's plot is heavily influenced by the Neo-Platonic strand of Catholic thought, with its idea of immortality as the total shucking off of the physical and its almost Eastern concept of the "beatific vision." My own ideas of the afterlife are significantly different. But that's a quibble. Normally, I don't declare myself, here on Goodreads, as a "fan" of an author until I've read and liked at least four of his/her books; I try not to do it lightly. In Keley's case, I became an official fan on the basis of this one book; and that says exactly what it implies. If I'm breathing when the next book of the series comes out, I'll be reading it as soon as I possibly can!
October 30, 2010
[updated review -- scroll to the bottom to read my official Amazon review]
***this review does NOT contain spoilers**
I will post a separate review for Amazon, I just want to get some thoughts down about this terrific novel tonight while it is still fresh in my mind. I read it in one day, it took all day -- it is a good, novel-length book, and I couldn't have put it down if I wanted to.
I give this book a zillion stars. If you could only see the smile on my face. I read a LOT of books, and this one moved me at a cellular level.
I want to be coherent and useful in my review so let me just say that 1) it is the very best vampire perspective I have ever read. Think a PG-rated "Anne Rice" to the 10th power, with a compassion and spiritual insight that Mrs. Rice didn't have in her vampire chronicles... 2) it is written flawlessly, yes, I could find no flaws... so much so, that to my writing friends -- this book should be required reading for all vampire writers. I'm not kidding. 2) Krisi's voice and style touches me very deeply, and draws me right into the story. I was lost in the story today and as you can tell by my gushing, I have barely crawled out an hour after finishing it.
So there you are. I bared my soul to you.
WARNING -- this is not a trite, cliche'-d book...no, sir. It means something...I hope it moves you too!
.........................................
Amazon Review:
On the Soul of a Vampire, by Krisi Keley
Rarely do I pick up a “vampire novel” and find something new, and with On the Soul of a Vampire, this is exactly what happened. Using the vampire’s point of view to tell the majority of the story, author Krisi Keley tapped something deep, satisfying, and spiritually powerful.
The book opens with the centuries-old vampire, Valery, taking notice of a young woman who simultaneously draws and repels him. Immediately, the reader knows that there is something special about this girl, and as the vampire works to understand his infatuation with her from a safe distance, the suspense is killer as we wait for the two to meet.
We learn that the girl, Angelina, has a curious past; memories of centuries she never lived in, and of people and places she could not have possibly known. By the time Valery accidentally exposes himself to Angelina and then approaches her, we are desperate to know the true connection between these two.
I think that is the main mystery to this book—who is Angelina to Valery? I will not even come close to ruining the surprise for you, but trust me, the revelation of who these two are was completely satisfying.
In addition to Valery, we are also allowed access to Michel’s POV, Valery’s younger proselyte. His sensitivity is utterly different from that of his maker, and peeking into his mental processes was pure joy. It is my belief that every reader will find his or herself in one of these main three characters: you will identify with one and that connection will take you on a ride you’ll want to experience repeatedly, even when the novel comes to a conclusion. Keley is planning a sequel, so here I wait, licking my lips and expecting great things.
Lastly, this book can be called “Christian Horror,” a term often applied to my own vampire novels. It contains all of the elements necessary for a best-selling gothic horror tale with the added bonus of “making sense” to the biblically-minded. “This could really happen” fits this novel well, and I had a wonderful time imagining it was real.
Do you have to be a religious person to appreciate and enjoy it? Definitely not. I have never seen a smoother, softer, more delicate use of biblical ideas in a novel. In fact, this book is the opposite of what the general public thinks Christian novels are; it is never preachy or obvious in any way, but utilizes a simple, quiet undertone of spiritual elements that add richness and a 3-dimensional quality to the characters.
Read it, believe it, experience the life of a vampire like you never have before. Recommended. 5-stars.
Ellen C. Maze
Bestselling author of “Rabbit: Chasing Beth Rider” and “The Judging”
***this review does NOT contain spoilers**
I will post a separate review for Amazon, I just want to get some thoughts down about this terrific novel tonight while it is still fresh in my mind. I read it in one day, it took all day -- it is a good, novel-length book, and I couldn't have put it down if I wanted to.
I give this book a zillion stars. If you could only see the smile on my face. I read a LOT of books, and this one moved me at a cellular level.
I want to be coherent and useful in my review so let me just say that 1) it is the very best vampire perspective I have ever read. Think a PG-rated "Anne Rice" to the 10th power, with a compassion and spiritual insight that Mrs. Rice didn't have in her vampire chronicles... 2) it is written flawlessly, yes, I could find no flaws... so much so, that to my writing friends -- this book should be required reading for all vampire writers. I'm not kidding. 2) Krisi's voice and style touches me very deeply, and draws me right into the story. I was lost in the story today and as you can tell by my gushing, I have barely crawled out an hour after finishing it.
So there you are. I bared my soul to you.
WARNING -- this is not a trite, cliche'-d book...no, sir. It means something...I hope it moves you too!
.........................................
Amazon Review:
On the Soul of a Vampire, by Krisi Keley
Rarely do I pick up a “vampire novel” and find something new, and with On the Soul of a Vampire, this is exactly what happened. Using the vampire’s point of view to tell the majority of the story, author Krisi Keley tapped something deep, satisfying, and spiritually powerful.
The book opens with the centuries-old vampire, Valery, taking notice of a young woman who simultaneously draws and repels him. Immediately, the reader knows that there is something special about this girl, and as the vampire works to understand his infatuation with her from a safe distance, the suspense is killer as we wait for the two to meet.
We learn that the girl, Angelina, has a curious past; memories of centuries she never lived in, and of people and places she could not have possibly known. By the time Valery accidentally exposes himself to Angelina and then approaches her, we are desperate to know the true connection between these two.
I think that is the main mystery to this book—who is Angelina to Valery? I will not even come close to ruining the surprise for you, but trust me, the revelation of who these two are was completely satisfying.
In addition to Valery, we are also allowed access to Michel’s POV, Valery’s younger proselyte. His sensitivity is utterly different from that of his maker, and peeking into his mental processes was pure joy. It is my belief that every reader will find his or herself in one of these main three characters: you will identify with one and that connection will take you on a ride you’ll want to experience repeatedly, even when the novel comes to a conclusion. Keley is planning a sequel, so here I wait, licking my lips and expecting great things.
Lastly, this book can be called “Christian Horror,” a term often applied to my own vampire novels. It contains all of the elements necessary for a best-selling gothic horror tale with the added bonus of “making sense” to the biblically-minded. “This could really happen” fits this novel well, and I had a wonderful time imagining it was real.
Do you have to be a religious person to appreciate and enjoy it? Definitely not. I have never seen a smoother, softer, more delicate use of biblical ideas in a novel. In fact, this book is the opposite of what the general public thinks Christian novels are; it is never preachy or obvious in any way, but utilizes a simple, quiet undertone of spiritual elements that add richness and a 3-dimensional quality to the characters.
Read it, believe it, experience the life of a vampire like you never have before. Recommended. 5-stars.
Ellen C. Maze
Bestselling author of “Rabbit: Chasing Beth Rider” and “The Judging”
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January 4, 2011This is a beautiful book that uses the nature of a vampire to explore the nature of life and of our relationship with God. It shows how our desire for a physical relationship with each other is related to our soul's desire to unite with God, and that a vampire's needs are the next step along that route. It shows how the union of two people is necessary for our souls.
I won this book on First-Reads.
I won this book on First-Reads.
February 13, 2011
These fangs sink deep, injecting one's jugular with liberal doses of philosophy, theology, eroticism, and mystery upon each page turned, another chapter investigated, and every line read. Author Krisi Keley scripts in a sublimely unique voice, her words seasoned with a taste reminiscent of Romantic Period Lit while breathing new life into a horrific favorite of ancient lore- namely the vampire.
One would be remiss to think that On the Soul of a Vampire is the typical undead fare; it is not, as the mystery shifts and builds from the burden the creature of the night, Valery Castellane, bears, to the revelation of the beautifully inscrutable Angelina LaCroix. With a tip of the hat to Romeo and Juliet, the mystery bleeds even further as to how the essence of two may become one for all eternity.
Earmarked with historical references and French vocabulary- complete with footnotes- On the Soul of a Vampire is a chalice of spirited crimson to savor across the palate... a refreshing bite out of the undead lore.
One would be remiss to think that On the Soul of a Vampire is the typical undead fare; it is not, as the mystery shifts and builds from the burden the creature of the night, Valery Castellane, bears, to the revelation of the beautifully inscrutable Angelina LaCroix. With a tip of the hat to Romeo and Juliet, the mystery bleeds even further as to how the essence of two may become one for all eternity.
Earmarked with historical references and French vocabulary- complete with footnotes- On the Soul of a Vampire is a chalice of spirited crimson to savor across the palate... a refreshing bite out of the undead lore.
October 15, 2010
"On the Soul of a Vampire" is an impressive debut novel for such a young author; one can almost believe that she was born in her main characters' time period and knows them and their surroundings intimately. That's the depth of writing and characterization that author Krisi Keley manages to convey in this intriguing work.
In Keley's Amazon description, she says: "For some it takes a lifetime to discover their raison d'être. Imagine searching for eight centuries. In 1997 Philadelphia, 800-year-old vampire Valéry Castellane comes face to face with his reason to be, in the person of Angelina Lacroix, a young mortal woman whose understanding of immortality is about to change all he's known as truth and which will take him and his readers on a journey into the human soul..."
This book gripped me from the beginning as Keley describes in a unique, archaic prose how Valery discovers Angelina, stalks her and finally confronts her...and Keley does it in the Vampire Valery's voice, never faltering with her word choices throughout. What a lilting, poetic accomplishment!
I have read many vampire books--from teens lusting after vamps to the original "vamp in bat form visiting the lovely damsel in the dark of night"--but none has impressed me like this one. Those others were rather "campy" and read for entertainment, while this one is unique and definitely food for thought.
In On the Soul of a Vampire, Valery is stunned that a mortal girl knows all about him and he becomes obsessed with learning more about her and how she acquired her knowledge of centuries-old happenings. Through a series of guarded questions and even more guarded answers that continue throughout the book, the reader learns some of the secrets at the same time Valery does.
From their first meeting, Valery desires Angelina more than he's ever desired anyone or anything, and it's obvious she has "loved" him all her life. At first he thinks he'll turn her into a vampire and/or kill her as he has so many others, but soon learns he can't harm her in any way. Valery is frustrated by sensing that he will never be able to...
Angelina does not fear him at all, which further mystifies this complex vampire. She makes it clear that Valery is her life purpose and her trust in him is boundless.
Angelina is such a mystery to him that he has to confide in someone, so goes to his long-time friend, a vampire that he had "turned" and lived to regret it. Valery has "good" and "bad" vampire friends and foes who plan to destroy Angelina for various reasons.
What follows are theological discussions and visions that delve into the souls of the vampires and the humans, their relationship with God and their deepest desires.
Just who is Angelina? What's her connection to Valery and why is she focused on him? How does she know all about vampires and their ancient history? Why can't any of them harm her? And who is the lovely lady (an apparition?) in a corner of Valery's childhood bedroom as his mother ministers to him when he's deathly ill? How does the lady help him then? And does she figure in his current situation?
But most important, what is the internal battle waging inside all these mortals and vampires?
Author Keley answers most of those questions brilliantly in the first book of this series and is currently working on books two and three. She's always been intrigued with supernatural, paranormal and horror fiction and how these myths try to answer humankind's questions about the spiritual, good vs. evil and the nature of man. So expect more new theories about both vampires and the human soul from this well-educated writer and artist who has a degree in Theology and education in foreign and classical languages.
I eagerly anticipate learning more about vampires from Keley's next books. I heartily recommend this intriguing book, even if it did make me think deeper than I normally wish to. In fact, if there's one shortcoming in the book, it's that Angelina and Valery tend to dance around each other when answering questions, taking longer than I think necessary before giving a satisfactory answer...but that's their polite, cautious way and fits the characters' backgrounds and intentions... The fault is mine, not the author's.
Reviewed by Betty Dravis, September 21, 2010
Author of "Dream Reachers" (with Chase Von) and other books
In Keley's Amazon description, she says: "For some it takes a lifetime to discover their raison d'être. Imagine searching for eight centuries. In 1997 Philadelphia, 800-year-old vampire Valéry Castellane comes face to face with his reason to be, in the person of Angelina Lacroix, a young mortal woman whose understanding of immortality is about to change all he's known as truth and which will take him and his readers on a journey into the human soul..."
This book gripped me from the beginning as Keley describes in a unique, archaic prose how Valery discovers Angelina, stalks her and finally confronts her...and Keley does it in the Vampire Valery's voice, never faltering with her word choices throughout. What a lilting, poetic accomplishment!
I have read many vampire books--from teens lusting after vamps to the original "vamp in bat form visiting the lovely damsel in the dark of night"--but none has impressed me like this one. Those others were rather "campy" and read for entertainment, while this one is unique and definitely food for thought.
In On the Soul of a Vampire, Valery is stunned that a mortal girl knows all about him and he becomes obsessed with learning more about her and how she acquired her knowledge of centuries-old happenings. Through a series of guarded questions and even more guarded answers that continue throughout the book, the reader learns some of the secrets at the same time Valery does.
From their first meeting, Valery desires Angelina more than he's ever desired anyone or anything, and it's obvious she has "loved" him all her life. At first he thinks he'll turn her into a vampire and/or kill her as he has so many others, but soon learns he can't harm her in any way. Valery is frustrated by sensing that he will never be able to...
Angelina does not fear him at all, which further mystifies this complex vampire. She makes it clear that Valery is her life purpose and her trust in him is boundless.
Angelina is such a mystery to him that he has to confide in someone, so goes to his long-time friend, a vampire that he had "turned" and lived to regret it. Valery has "good" and "bad" vampire friends and foes who plan to destroy Angelina for various reasons.
What follows are theological discussions and visions that delve into the souls of the vampires and the humans, their relationship with God and their deepest desires.
Just who is Angelina? What's her connection to Valery and why is she focused on him? How does she know all about vampires and their ancient history? Why can't any of them harm her? And who is the lovely lady (an apparition?) in a corner of Valery's childhood bedroom as his mother ministers to him when he's deathly ill? How does the lady help him then? And does she figure in his current situation?
But most important, what is the internal battle waging inside all these mortals and vampires?
Author Keley answers most of those questions brilliantly in the first book of this series and is currently working on books two and three. She's always been intrigued with supernatural, paranormal and horror fiction and how these myths try to answer humankind's questions about the spiritual, good vs. evil and the nature of man. So expect more new theories about both vampires and the human soul from this well-educated writer and artist who has a degree in Theology and education in foreign and classical languages.
I eagerly anticipate learning more about vampires from Keley's next books. I heartily recommend this intriguing book, even if it did make me think deeper than I normally wish to. In fact, if there's one shortcoming in the book, it's that Angelina and Valery tend to dance around each other when answering questions, taking longer than I think necessary before giving a satisfactory answer...but that's their polite, cautious way and fits the characters' backgrounds and intentions... The fault is mine, not the author's.
Reviewed by Betty Dravis, September 21, 2010
Author of "Dream Reachers" (with Chase Von) and other books
November 29, 2010
The story begins with Valéry an 800 year old vampire who notices a young woman named Angelina. He's immediately drawn to her. Valéry tries to figure out his infatuation with her from a safe distance. We learn that these two already have a connection. Angelina knows what and who Valéry is, she has had dreams of a time long ago in which she never lived and the things she dreams about are of a life she couldn't possibly know, Valéry's life. This only makes Valéry more intrigued by her and he wants answers. How does she know all these things?
The chemistry between Valéry and Angelina is wonderful. Valéry is keeping himself in check when he's around her not wanting to hurt her but he also gets pretty annoyed and angry when Angelina is being quite cryptically because he wants answers and she just gives him riddles.
At the end of this novel all the puzzle pieces fall into place and you get these answers questioned.
This is not your typical vampire novel. Theology came to my mind when I read this novel. It makes you think. But not just for Valéry but the things described in this novel make you think about different aspects of life, love and believe. Keley's writing is great, the story gripped me from beginning to end I was just as annoyed and frustrated at times as Valéry was with Angelina. And I love that, I want to feel the same way as the characters are feeling. I'm looking forward to reading more by Krisi Keley.
The chemistry between Valéry and Angelina is wonderful. Valéry is keeping himself in check when he's around her not wanting to hurt her but he also gets pretty annoyed and angry when Angelina is being quite cryptically because he wants answers and she just gives him riddles.
At the end of this novel all the puzzle pieces fall into place and you get these answers questioned.
This is not your typical vampire novel. Theology came to my mind when I read this novel. It makes you think. But not just for Valéry but the things described in this novel make you think about different aspects of life, love and believe. Keley's writing is great, the story gripped me from beginning to end I was just as annoyed and frustrated at times as Valéry was with Angelina. And I love that, I want to feel the same way as the characters are feeling. I'm looking forward to reading more by Krisi Keley.
April 29, 2013
This is a different kind of love story. An in-depth exploration of theology and faith, ultimately leading onto the path of forgiveness and love—only, from the perspective of a confused, embittered, centuries-old vampire who just might not be soulless after all. The destination of reality is brought to light by a mortal who sacrifices everything to show him this path, because of her great love for him.
I was very much engrossed in the reading of this story. From a personal preference, there were points in the novel that seemed to stretch indefinitely, making certain passages longwinded or thoughts rehashed. The end, also, wasn’t what I had hoped as a standalone novel. A reader must continue in the series, I’m sure, to discover the resolution that I had sought at the end of this first installment. However, I had to give On the Soul of a Vampire five stars for the author’s most beautiful and graceful, eloquent manner of writing. In the heart of such an original and lovely literary voice, compassion and divine love are not only felt but run deeply. A poignant novel, this is one I won’t forget.
I was very much engrossed in the reading of this story. From a personal preference, there were points in the novel that seemed to stretch indefinitely, making certain passages longwinded or thoughts rehashed. The end, also, wasn’t what I had hoped as a standalone novel. A reader must continue in the series, I’m sure, to discover the resolution that I had sought at the end of this first installment. However, I had to give On the Soul of a Vampire five stars for the author’s most beautiful and graceful, eloquent manner of writing. In the heart of such an original and lovely literary voice, compassion and divine love are not only felt but run deeply. A poignant novel, this is one I won’t forget.
January 7, 2011
This book is not like any other vampire book I’ve read
It takes the reader to an 800 year journey through crucial events of a vampire’s life, inviting to an emotional and philosophical analysis of them. And even though it’s from a vampire’s point of you, it can very well be applied to any human being (in this story, a vampire is a human being whose priorities have just changed).
Although it was not very easy to read (many times it made me think: analyze myself and beliefs), it was intriguing and kept me interested until the end. An end I must say I didn’t see coming.
Congratulations to Krisi Keley for her first book and I look forward to reading the continuation of this book and see what happens next.
It takes the reader to an 800 year journey through crucial events of a vampire’s life, inviting to an emotional and philosophical analysis of them. And even though it’s from a vampire’s point of you, it can very well be applied to any human being (in this story, a vampire is a human being whose priorities have just changed).
Although it was not very easy to read (many times it made me think: analyze myself and beliefs), it was intriguing and kept me interested until the end. An end I must say I didn’t see coming.
Congratulations to Krisi Keley for her first book and I look forward to reading the continuation of this book and see what happens next.
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October 28, 2010I won Soul of a Vampire on First Reads. I look forward to reading it now that it's arrived.
After reading several pages I can say Ms. Keley has an accomplished writing style. The content looks interesting as well. I'm hoping the book continues in this vein. It's added to my queue.
After reading several pages I can say Ms. Keley has an accomplished writing style. The content looks interesting as well. I'm hoping the book continues in this vein. It's added to my queue.
December 7, 2010
“Love means to love that which is unlovable, or it is no virtue at all; forgiving means to pardon that which is unpardonable, or it is no virtue at all.” This beautiful quote by G.K. Chesterton sets the tone for “On the Soul of the Vampire,” which begins in Philadelphia in 1997. Much of the novel is told in the first person: Valery, an 800-year-old vampire, sees the beautiful Angelina and is immediately enthralled to the point of obsession. He begins to “stalk” her but in vampire-like fashion, remains “in the shadows” at first. Valery eventually discovers that Angelina knows more about him than any other human.
A vampire’s lust is expressed through the desire to consume and feed off the blood of others. For most of the book, Valery is expressing his love for Angelina and, at the same time, trying to control his own desire to do to her what he knows he must not. Instead, he uses/kills others (and he rationalizes that most of his victims are not “innocent.”)
“On the Soul of a Vampire” is a beautifully written novel from start to finish with poetic prose. When Valery takes Angelina on a trip, as he is attempting not to attract attention, he thinks “For what, but the shimmering bloom of the newly in love, could glow so brightly and yet, still seem so perfectly natural.” The characters are well-rounded and interesting, the dialogue is believable (and sometimes in French).
This is not a typical love story because Valery is not the typical man, nor the typical protagonist; he is a vampire with a conscience, however skewed. Keley’s character study of Valery is brilliant, and I found myself drawn to him and bonding with him (despite his lust to consume others) precisely because he does appear to have a conscience. His passion and love for Angelina as well as the story of how he became a vampire make this beautifully written book a page turner.
This is also the story of unconditional love which Angelina has for Valery, despite everything she knows about him. She does not see him as a romanticized/fictional version of a vampire. She knows what he is capable of and yet in her love, she cares deeply about the state of his soul. During one incident where Valery is overwhelmed with desire to “consume” her, she says, “This kind of love you can only have once...but what of love you can have eternally?”
Although the writing is extraordinary, what I enjoyed most about this book were the theological truths: the truth of sacrificial love, good versus evil, free will, temptation, mercy, forgiveness. The ending is very powerful. This is not a light “happily ever after” read, but one which challenges the reader intellectually as well as spiritually.
A warning: this is a novel about a vampire so there are graphic descriptions. As well, there are sensual descriptions and mature themes. For these reasons, I would recommend this book to older teenagers and adults.
I especially recommend “On the Soul of a Vampire” to anyone who appreciates extraordinary writing, a cast of interesting well-defined characters, an engaging plot and theological truths.
May 6, 2012
On the Soul of a Vampire by Krisi Keley was not at all what I expected. It is a deeply emotional and introspective look at one ‘man’s’ search for meaning in life. (Or in this case, one ‘vampire’.) Written primarily in first person from the point of view of Valery Castellene, a vampire of some 800 years, we see and feel his inner pain as he struggles with his existence. Convinced that he is evil incarnate, yet still subconsciously wishing to be good, Valery’s emotional conflict is the center of this novel.
One would think that after that many centuries little could surprise, but even Valery is taken aback when he meets a young mortal woman named Angelina Lacroix. In her he senses sublime goodness and beauty; her very presence brings him to the brink of self control and back again. But even more alarming is the fact that she can sense his presence even when she can’t see him. She knows him by name and seems to know every detail about his existence, both past and present. As the book progresses, Valery is more and more frustrated by his need to find out the truth about this girl, struggling with his overwhelming desire to take her life and his need to protect her at all costs. Woven throughout are flashbacks to Valery’s past which further develop the complexity of his character and the struggles he now faces.
Lest the description so far sound somewhat like another familiar vampire saga, let me assure you that it is not remotely similar. In fact, it isn’t even really a love story in the typical sense. Yes, there are deep emotional passages, but the real crux of the story is about self discovery, forgiveness and hope. The author writes with eloquence and sophistication, in a tone that is reminiscent of an older, more classical style. This fits well with the story since it is primarily told by Valery himself, and he is, after all, 800 years old.
Let me reiterate that this was a very well written book, with complex characters, subtle plot twists, and a strong focus on examining man’s innate capacity for both good and evil. It is also written from a Biblical world view, and tries to (quite successfully I might add) point to a higher grace which is above even the most heinous of sins, although I would not recommend using it as a doctrinal reference. Sometimes the inner musings seemed a bit drawn out, however. I felt at times like a certain point had already been hashed over quite thoroughly and then it would reappear subsequent times. As well, I was sometimes frustrated by the use of foreign languages in the text (usually French) which were often quite lengthy and which forced me to consult the appendix for an explanation.
Aside from that, On the Soul of a Vampire is worth consideration simply because of its uniqueness. As a book with a Christian bent it stands out as totally fearless, especially in its choice of protagonist and his portrayal. From a secular view, it is also unique in its genre since there contains such a profound message of hope not usually found in a novel about vampires. I recommend this book for those who are looking for a meatier read. (No pun intended.) Read it if you dare.
One would think that after that many centuries little could surprise, but even Valery is taken aback when he meets a young mortal woman named Angelina Lacroix. In her he senses sublime goodness and beauty; her very presence brings him to the brink of self control and back again. But even more alarming is the fact that she can sense his presence even when she can’t see him. She knows him by name and seems to know every detail about his existence, both past and present. As the book progresses, Valery is more and more frustrated by his need to find out the truth about this girl, struggling with his overwhelming desire to take her life and his need to protect her at all costs. Woven throughout are flashbacks to Valery’s past which further develop the complexity of his character and the struggles he now faces.
Lest the description so far sound somewhat like another familiar vampire saga, let me assure you that it is not remotely similar. In fact, it isn’t even really a love story in the typical sense. Yes, there are deep emotional passages, but the real crux of the story is about self discovery, forgiveness and hope. The author writes with eloquence and sophistication, in a tone that is reminiscent of an older, more classical style. This fits well with the story since it is primarily told by Valery himself, and he is, after all, 800 years old.
Let me reiterate that this was a very well written book, with complex characters, subtle plot twists, and a strong focus on examining man’s innate capacity for both good and evil. It is also written from a Biblical world view, and tries to (quite successfully I might add) point to a higher grace which is above even the most heinous of sins, although I would not recommend using it as a doctrinal reference. Sometimes the inner musings seemed a bit drawn out, however. I felt at times like a certain point had already been hashed over quite thoroughly and then it would reappear subsequent times. As well, I was sometimes frustrated by the use of foreign languages in the text (usually French) which were often quite lengthy and which forced me to consult the appendix for an explanation.
Aside from that, On the Soul of a Vampire is worth consideration simply because of its uniqueness. As a book with a Christian bent it stands out as totally fearless, especially in its choice of protagonist and his portrayal. From a secular view, it is also unique in its genre since there contains such a profound message of hope not usually found in a novel about vampires. I recommend this book for those who are looking for a meatier read. (No pun intended.) Read it if you dare.
April 10, 2011
I think this book suffers from an identity crisis. At least I had a problem figuring it out. I chose it because one of my groups, Christian Readers, picked it to discuss. So I was under the impression this was a Christian fiction novel. I was late getting the book but I thought it might be something along the lines of SUMMA ELVETICA. Maybe a discussion of how or if a creature like a Vampire could have a soul or reclaim it.
This is not a normal vampire book. It is not a romance. It don't believe it is a theologically sound book even though some of those terms are tossed around.
The hero is not a hero in any sense of the word. He does everything wrong and continues to do so without remorse most of the time. Even when he knows it is wrong and knows he will feel bad later, he still plans to do wrong - thinking that what he wants is worth the consequences. That is not the message any solid Christian book would send. There is no redemption... no message learned or growth in character. He remains the same selfish vampire he was in the beginning.
The whole book is filled with ambiguous language and theology (angels born as people- guardian angels choosing who they are coupled with and loving them as husband and wife - being their soul mates and so on)- as well as strange ideas about love. The hero is almost homosexual in how he cherishes, loves and sees beauty in all these men. Women are rarely mentioned and usually only to bring up the fact that he can't get any physical satisfaction now that he's immortal. That word is used all the time instead of vampire. It's sad since we're all immortal beings - it's just our bodies that die.
Although the idea may have been creative, the execution was more frustrating than entertaining. In the end I was as frustrated with the author as Valery was with Angelina. A little clarity and character development would have helped the book a lot.
This is not a normal vampire book. It is not a romance. It don't believe it is a theologically sound book even though some of those terms are tossed around.
The hero is not a hero in any sense of the word. He does everything wrong and continues to do so without remorse most of the time. Even when he knows it is wrong and knows he will feel bad later, he still plans to do wrong - thinking that what he wants is worth the consequences. That is not the message any solid Christian book would send. There is no redemption... no message learned or growth in character. He remains the same selfish vampire he was in the beginning.
The whole book is filled with ambiguous language and theology (angels born as people- guardian angels choosing who they are coupled with and loving them as husband and wife - being their soul mates and so on)- as well as strange ideas about love. The hero is almost homosexual in how he cherishes, loves and sees beauty in all these men. Women are rarely mentioned and usually only to bring up the fact that he can't get any physical satisfaction now that he's immortal. That word is used all the time instead of vampire. It's sad since we're all immortal beings - it's just our bodies that die.
Although the idea may have been creative, the execution was more frustrating than entertaining. In the end I was as frustrated with the author as Valery was with Angelina. A little clarity and character development would have helped the book a lot.
October 2, 2010
On The Soul of a Vampire is a mesmerizing and often sonorous story that examines the basic concepts of good versus evil, free will versus pre-destination, and a full spectrum of religious dogma, divine mercy and forgiveness. Skipping through 800 years of history the author still managed to make the transitions between different scenes easy to follow and exceedingly interesting. I was fascinated with the way in which the story unfolded bit by bit until toward the end I had that “ah ha” moment when the pieces meshed together beautifully.
A significant portion of the tale is told in the first person as the reader is privy to the tormented Valerien’s thoughts, internal arguments, and indecisiveness as he first stalks then grudgingly befriends Angelina, the first mortal who has ever truly known him. As Angelina attempts to guide Valery toward the discovery and acceptance of the truth he has sought throughout his long centuries she also tests his patience with her almost beyond endurance.
This book is the first in a planned series. For me, it was not a light or easy read and I had to several times put it down and return to it later as I preferred to slowly savor the intellectual journey. This book can be read on several different levels. There were scenes that were quite horrific but they were described in such an understated, unadorned manner that I was even more chilled and disturbed than I would have been otherwise.
The reflective, contemplative tone of the narrative was refreshing. The author did a wonderful job creating an archaic manner of speaking for the oldest vampires and for the strange, beguiling and mysterious Angelina. While it added depth to the overall narrative at times the sentences were difficult to decipher. I believe this was purposely done so that the reader could more easily relate to Valery’s frustration as he journeyed the path to enlightenment. I look forward to the next installment.
A significant portion of the tale is told in the first person as the reader is privy to the tormented Valerien’s thoughts, internal arguments, and indecisiveness as he first stalks then grudgingly befriends Angelina, the first mortal who has ever truly known him. As Angelina attempts to guide Valery toward the discovery and acceptance of the truth he has sought throughout his long centuries she also tests his patience with her almost beyond endurance.
This book is the first in a planned series. For me, it was not a light or easy read and I had to several times put it down and return to it later as I preferred to slowly savor the intellectual journey. This book can be read on several different levels. There were scenes that were quite horrific but they were described in such an understated, unadorned manner that I was even more chilled and disturbed than I would have been otherwise.
The reflective, contemplative tone of the narrative was refreshing. The author did a wonderful job creating an archaic manner of speaking for the oldest vampires and for the strange, beguiling and mysterious Angelina. While it added depth to the overall narrative at times the sentences were difficult to decipher. I believe this was purposely done so that the reader could more easily relate to Valery’s frustration as he journeyed the path to enlightenment. I look forward to the next installment.
October 8, 2011
On the Soul of a Vampire is a very philosophical story. First the story is about the vampire and the young mortal woman who has the knowledge of the life and the afterlife. The story is mainly about what happens between Life and Death and about Faith. Where do the soul go when the physical body die? Is there another plane of existence of where the soul goes next? Do we have enough faith in God and Angels? Do each of us have a guardian to show us the way when we die to the next plane of existence? This make me wonder if we don't have a guardian, how do we know where we go next when our physical body dies? Do we wander forever lost until we find our way? We may never know except to have faith in our belief.
It also goes into a discussion about being a vampire. Do one remains the same after being made a vampire or is one soulless? There are so many movies and books that the vampire is a creature of darkness because it needs blood to sustain its existence. There are also books with stories that one is still the same before and after becoming a vampire. The book even question if one choose to becoming a vampire because we fear Death.
This book tells the story that includes the exploration of how we look into our life and what we knows about the myths of vampire. I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
It also goes into a discussion about being a vampire. Do one remains the same after being made a vampire or is one soulless? There are so many movies and books that the vampire is a creature of darkness because it needs blood to sustain its existence. There are also books with stories that one is still the same before and after becoming a vampire. The book even question if one choose to becoming a vampire because we fear Death.
This book tells the story that includes the exploration of how we look into our life and what we knows about the myths of vampire. I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
November 23, 2010
This novel is an amazing in-depth read into the mind of a immortal vampire and a mortal girl. Thought provoking, stylish and intensely emotional, this novel is not your normal vampire tale. Krisi Keley takes you on a wondrous journey into the mind of a vampire and this journey is a tale that really makes everyone, mortal and immortal take a closer look at what they beleive to be true in life and love.
This intriguing tale was not an easy read but not in a bad way. It made you think and books that can make you do that are few and far between. It was not a quick read because I found myself trying to identify with both of the main characters and was able to see both sides of this tale from their view points. It was fun to analyze their feelings and thoughts. I would recommend this book to those who thought they had read everything about vampires. The ending was eye opening for me when it finally clicked just what this mortal girl was to her vampire. Again very thought provoking. Nice Job Krisi Keley.
This intriguing tale was not an easy read but not in a bad way. It made you think and books that can make you do that are few and far between. It was not a quick read because I found myself trying to identify with both of the main characters and was able to see both sides of this tale from their view points. It was fun to analyze their feelings and thoughts. I would recommend this book to those who thought they had read everything about vampires. The ending was eye opening for me when it finally clicked just what this mortal girl was to her vampire. Again very thought provoking. Nice Job Krisi Keley.
October 8, 2010
An intriguing, albeit uneven, book. . . . This is a vampire novel, containing within it a compelling love story--and much more than that. Angelina, a young woman, and Valery, a vampire, develop a relationship that is filled with riddles. The two speak of their relationship and questions are answered by more questions. Sometimes, this becomes annoying. But, in the end, the technique seems to pull us more deeply into the story.
The uncanny knowledge that Angelina has of Valery clearly points to something larger. As they go to France to visit his ancient home, where he lived before he was "turned," the mystery deepens.
The ending stuns the reader, but the ending also points to more adventures in the future.
The uncanny knowledge that Angelina has of Valery clearly points to something larger. As they go to France to visit his ancient home, where he lived before he was "turned," the mystery deepens.
The ending stuns the reader, but the ending also points to more adventures in the future.
December 28, 2010
It was very well written and had a different plot which I enjoyed although I was confused at certain parts of the story and still feel like I may have missed something but I did enjoy reading this book and will refer it to my friends. I thought the plot was unique! And I will continue to keep my eyes open for more of your writting! Thank You for the book!!
November 3, 2010
I loved this. It was different and gutsy. Krisi kept up a wonderful tension all the way through. I particularly loved the themes she dealt with. This made it a memorable book for me. On the soul of a Vampire gets my very rare M award and 5 stars. For explanation of the M-factor in novels see http://tahlianewland.com/2010/07/31/w...
January 28, 2011
On The Soul Of A Vampire is a truly unique story and perspective through the eyes (and soul) of an 800 year old vampire. It is unlike any vampire novel I have read, therefore, it is not comparable to any other vampire story out there. This undeniably makes it significant! Astoundingly original with indepth characters and storylines. I highly recommend it!
June 22, 2011
I won a copy of this from Goodreads First-reads. Not a traditional Vampire Read but great all the same!! Thanks to goodreads for letting me win and read it.
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November 20, 2010I am moving along in the story. I hope to put in a real review soon! Thanks, Krisi!
April 27, 2023
I found this a difficult tale. It took me ages to read it. I didn't enjoy it. I had to force myself to finish it.
Two stars.
Two stars.
November 10, 2010
On the Soul of a Vampire by Krisi Keley, is an intense, deep and intriguing book. It delves into the life of an 800 year old vampire called Valery. The story is told from his point of view. It reads like his telling from a journal perspective. We get a very in depth description of his thought and feelings; perhaps a little too descriptive for my tastes but it works with this book.
In this book Valery comes across a young woman who is very strongly drawn to. The woman is Angelina. She has dreamed about Valery all her life and knows all about him. She senses when he is near her and eventually that meet face to face. Valery's initial intent is to kill her but he finds that he can't bring himself to do it. It follows him as he tries to discover why she knows so much about him and what she is trying tell him. She answers many of Valery's questions in a way that doesn't make sense to him and seems to circle around and around without giving a direct answer. The riddle talk that so frustrated Valery frustrated me at times as well.
This book kept my attention because I wanted to find out what everything meant. I wanted to know more about Angelina, what she knew and what it meant in relation to Valery. I also wanted to find out what would happen between Angelina and Valery. Would they find happiness together? Would he take her life?
This is not a light hearted story by any means. It is a thought provoking look into the psyche of a vampire and all the moral dilemmas that comes with being one. The author brings to light several points questioning whether or not a vampire killing to survive is evil or wrong. It talks about God and forgiveness.
The reason I didn't give this book a higher rating is because I felt it was lacking emotion. I didn't feel a connection with the characters. I wanted to find out what was going to happen to them but I didn't truly care one way or the other. Feeling a connection to the characters that I read about is important to me. This book doesn't make you feel so much as it makes you think.
While there were some things I didn’t like about this book there were others that I did. It was interesting and intriguing. It was very intelligently written. I really liked the French dialog with the translations at the bottom of the page. It impressed me that this was the author’s first novel. I wasn't surprised to learn that she has a degree in Theology. Her theological discussions showcased that. It was a refreshing change of pace from the usual vampire novels. The innocent deaths didn’t bother me because I felt it fit in with the character of Valery and what he was trying to accomplish. He’s a Vampire, he has to kill to survive and he has been doing so for 800 years. He is far from perfect however he has made an effort in all that time to try and not take innocent lives. I like that his character was flawed and tormented. It fit the story. He had a temper and was a bit unstable but I think many would be that way had they lived in his shoes. His character was very interesting while Angelina’s was very intriguing.
The explanation of things at the end was fantastical; it took me outside the box so to speak. I applaud the author for writing a book that is so different from the norm. Overall I thought this book was well done and I liked it. I think this author shows a lot of promise. I look forward to reading the sequel and finding out what happens next.
In this book Valery comes across a young woman who is very strongly drawn to. The woman is Angelina. She has dreamed about Valery all her life and knows all about him. She senses when he is near her and eventually that meet face to face. Valery's initial intent is to kill her but he finds that he can't bring himself to do it. It follows him as he tries to discover why she knows so much about him and what she is trying tell him. She answers many of Valery's questions in a way that doesn't make sense to him and seems to circle around and around without giving a direct answer. The riddle talk that so frustrated Valery frustrated me at times as well.
This book kept my attention because I wanted to find out what everything meant. I wanted to know more about Angelina, what she knew and what it meant in relation to Valery. I also wanted to find out what would happen between Angelina and Valery. Would they find happiness together? Would he take her life?
This is not a light hearted story by any means. It is a thought provoking look into the psyche of a vampire and all the moral dilemmas that comes with being one. The author brings to light several points questioning whether or not a vampire killing to survive is evil or wrong. It talks about God and forgiveness.
The reason I didn't give this book a higher rating is because I felt it was lacking emotion. I didn't feel a connection with the characters. I wanted to find out what was going to happen to them but I didn't truly care one way or the other. Feeling a connection to the characters that I read about is important to me. This book doesn't make you feel so much as it makes you think.
While there were some things I didn’t like about this book there were others that I did. It was interesting and intriguing. It was very intelligently written. I really liked the French dialog with the translations at the bottom of the page. It impressed me that this was the author’s first novel. I wasn't surprised to learn that she has a degree in Theology. Her theological discussions showcased that. It was a refreshing change of pace from the usual vampire novels. The innocent deaths didn’t bother me because I felt it fit in with the character of Valery and what he was trying to accomplish. He’s a Vampire, he has to kill to survive and he has been doing so for 800 years. He is far from perfect however he has made an effort in all that time to try and not take innocent lives. I like that his character was flawed and tormented. It fit the story. He had a temper and was a bit unstable but I think many would be that way had they lived in his shoes. His character was very interesting while Angelina’s was very intriguing.
The explanation of things at the end was fantastical; it took me outside the box so to speak. I applaud the author for writing a book that is so different from the norm. Overall I thought this book was well done and I liked it. I think this author shows a lot of promise. I look forward to reading the sequel and finding out what happens next.
October 13, 2010
If you want a fun and easy read, this is NOT it. I was expecting a fun and simple entertaiment kind of vampire romance novel, but this book was not any of that. This book will make you “think” more than it will make you “feel”.
It was complex novel that dealt more with a vampire’s struggle to understand his existence and moral/ethical dilemma of his nature as a predator.
I have to admit that I had a really hard time getting into this book. I was well over page 100 before I started to somewhat like the book. This came about as we got to know more about Angelina and her connection to Valery. It was still a slow read.
I thought the author did a good job with keeping Valery an enigma because I felt sorry for him, but then I didn’t. He wanted redemption, but he didn’t. He wasn’t an ideal hero because he wasn’t even trying to be good. The book was full of spiritual messages and to see Valery struggling to make sense of it was interesting.
I kept waiting to feel that passion and love that I associate with PNR, but I came to realize that isn’t that kind of book. So if you are looking for that erotic love/romance and a happy ending, this won’t satisfy that itch. But if you are looking to analyze how a vampire would feel, how he views the world after 800 years, how he views himself in relation to the good v. evil debate, then this book is for you.
It was complex novel that dealt more with a vampire’s struggle to understand his existence and moral/ethical dilemma of his nature as a predator.
I have to admit that I had a really hard time getting into this book. I was well over page 100 before I started to somewhat like the book. This came about as we got to know more about Angelina and her connection to Valery. It was still a slow read.
I thought the author did a good job with keeping Valery an enigma because I felt sorry for him, but then I didn’t. He wanted redemption, but he didn’t. He wasn’t an ideal hero because he wasn’t even trying to be good. The book was full of spiritual messages and to see Valery struggling to make sense of it was interesting.
I kept waiting to feel that passion and love that I associate with PNR, but I came to realize that isn’t that kind of book. So if you are looking for that erotic love/romance and a happy ending, this won’t satisfy that itch. But if you are looking to analyze how a vampire would feel, how he views the world after 800 years, how he views himself in relation to the good v. evil debate, then this book is for you.
May 16, 2015
A novel about faltering faith and neverending hope, On the Soul of a Vampire will not only alter everything you think you know about vampires, it will change the way you see your very soul.
Possibly one of the most well-written and complex self-published debut novels I've read to date. Instead of the plots in most vampire stories, this one explored Valéry Castellane's relationship with himself, with Angelina Lacroix, and with God. I could really feel his struggle with "good" and "evil" and his longing for more. Redemption and forgiveness were the two most prevalent themes, for me. The mystery surrounding Angelina was what really hooked me, though. There was terrific chemistry between Valéry and Angelina, and it was (nearly) void of romance and even sexuality. That was a little strange at first but then I dug into the heart of the story and didn't look back. Throughout On the Soul I could sense Keley's love of languages and theology without a nagging feeling that I was being preached at.
Recommended if you're looking for a unique vampire story and you don't mind it having a religious slant, namely Catholicism.
3.5 stars
Received trade paperback (April 2013 edition) from the author as a gift, which in no way influenced the above review.
Possibly one of the most well-written and complex self-published debut novels I've read to date. Instead of the plots in most vampire stories, this one explored Valéry Castellane's relationship with himself, with Angelina Lacroix, and with God. I could really feel his struggle with "good" and "evil" and his longing for more. Redemption and forgiveness were the two most prevalent themes, for me. The mystery surrounding Angelina was what really hooked me, though. There was terrific chemistry between Valéry and Angelina, and it was (nearly) void of romance and even sexuality. That was a little strange at first but then I dug into the heart of the story and didn't look back. Throughout On the Soul I could sense Keley's love of languages and theology without a nagging feeling that I was being preached at.
Recommended if you're looking for a unique vampire story and you don't mind it having a religious slant, namely Catholicism.
3.5 stars
Received trade paperback (April 2013 edition) from the author as a gift, which in no way influenced the above review.
January 27, 2022
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September 17, 2013i think i'l enjoy this one
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