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In the Spotlight
Ellery Mayne is a high school girl who makes a disturbing discovery. After a foiled abduction attempt, she realizes that an entire team of security personnel are secretly shadowing her every move. As she works to make sense of this startling development, she secretly transitions from the one who is being observed to the one who carries out observations of her own, testing the limits of a secret service detail who think they are conducting transparent surveillance on a clueless teenager. When the mystery behind the secret security unravels, Ellery is faced with decisions that involve her future and the hopes of two unlikely love a handsome but conflicted security agent who doesn't realize she knows about him, and her first love--a boy that broke her heart--who has returned to explain his actions and his feelings for her. Told from Ellery's perspective, she puzzles over what could interest not one but two handsome suitors and a whole security force. Suddenly this quiet loner realizes that her life is 'In The Spotlight' and she is the 'Mayne Attraction.'
507 pages, Paperback
First published April 17, 2010
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About the author
Ann Mauren
5 books90 followersAnn Mauren splits her time between multiple career paths—not multiple personalities as some have alleged. As Marketing Coordinator for one of the nation’s largest foodservice distributors, she enjoys opportunities to access her inner copywriter and the challenge of creating tantalizing pitches for sometimes pitch resistant items like Gluten Free Fish Sticks, Coffee Thickener and Pureed Spinach, to mention a few.
As Director of Domestic Affairs for her family, she maintains its facilities and supply levels, runs the foodservice operation, ensures availability of ready to wear apparel, and provides tutoring, life coaching and personal hygiene assistance to the two shortest members of the team.
In her spare time Ann Mauren writes fiction for mostly her own amusement and occasionally that of one or two of her author friends—who swear they’re laughing with her…
To see what all the levity is about, check out her free short “Barefoot Heroine” and her slightly taller but equally free debut novel “Mayne Attraction: In The Spotlight.” (Free on the Amazon Kindle Store at http://tinyurl.com/4uermj8) And for goodness sake, please leave a quick review or comment somewhere for her (Contact Ann at http://mayneattraction.com/submit-art... or on Twitter at @AnnMauren). You’ll feel so much better about yourself if you do—and so will she!
As Director of Domestic Affairs for her family, she maintains its facilities and supply levels, runs the foodservice operation, ensures availability of ready to wear apparel, and provides tutoring, life coaching and personal hygiene assistance to the two shortest members of the team.
In her spare time Ann Mauren writes fiction for mostly her own amusement and occasionally that of one or two of her author friends—who swear they’re laughing with her…
To see what all the levity is about, check out her free short “Barefoot Heroine” and her slightly taller but equally free debut novel “Mayne Attraction: In The Spotlight.” (Free on the Amazon Kindle Store at http://tinyurl.com/4uermj8) And for goodness sake, please leave a quick review or comment somewhere for her (Contact Ann at http://mayneattraction.com/submit-art... or on Twitter at @AnnMauren). You’ll feel so much better about yourself if you do—and so will she!
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September 20, 2023DNF. This story just dragged on and on. There were inconsistencies with the characters. A girl is being followed by security, but she doesn't know why. I gave up around 30%. I just couldn't take any more. There was absolutely nothing happening.
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July 25, 2012
Sorry. This was a DNF for me at 35%. There's no overt editing or grammar issues, no homophones or spelling screw ups, either. My problem with the story is that at 35%, there had hardly been any dialogue. The entire story was 'tell, tell, tell,' and very little real story happening.
Just about every character that Ellery, the MC, sees, gets a detailed background. And frequently, when you think something interesting is about to happen, the chapter ends, and the new chapter starts a few days/weeks/months later.
I think what had me finally setting the book down was when I realized that the majority of the conversations in the book went like this:
"I mentioned my parent's last minute decision vacation plans to Lidia, shortly after receiving the news myself, and she seemed oddly concerned. She asked if I wanted her to come and stay with me at night or if I might like to visit her at her place while they were away."
See what I mean? No dialogue. There is no 'showing' in this story. I reiterate, it's all 'tell.'
I was intrigued by the storyline, and had really wanted to read the whole book, but the feeling of, 'when is the story going to start?' got too strong for me to overcome. Others who won't have issues with this type of storytelling may enjoy it. Unfortunately, it was not for me.
Just about every character that Ellery, the MC, sees, gets a detailed background. And frequently, when you think something interesting is about to happen, the chapter ends, and the new chapter starts a few days/weeks/months later.
I think what had me finally setting the book down was when I realized that the majority of the conversations in the book went like this:
"I mentioned my parent's last minute decision vacation plans to Lidia, shortly after receiving the news myself, and she seemed oddly concerned. She asked if I wanted her to come and stay with me at night or if I might like to visit her at her place while they were away."
See what I mean? No dialogue. There is no 'showing' in this story. I reiterate, it's all 'tell.'
I was intrigued by the storyline, and had really wanted to read the whole book, but the feeling of, 'when is the story going to start?' got too strong for me to overcome. Others who won't have issues with this type of storytelling may enjoy it. Unfortunately, it was not for me.
December 15, 2010
I cannot believe this book has gotten 4 1/2 stars. From the book jacket summary, this book sounded great -- girl is being followed by security, doesn't know why......tries to find out, falls in love. Sounded like a perfect combo of mystery and love to me. Wrong. I thought that the writing was poor, I couldn't get in to it, it seemed elementary, the love story had no development, the characters were static.........I could go on. In fact, each night I would lament "why am I still reading this?" but my stubborness wouldn't let me give up. I kept hoping for it to get better, and it never did. I threw it when I was done with it, because it was a waste of my time. Sorry so brutal.
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May 23, 2011
The idea was interesting, but the follow through was lacking. It was like it wasn't edited thoroughly. Sometimes I had to double check that I went to the next chapter because the time jumped so much. There were some character inconsistencies as well.
September 9, 2010
In the Spotlight, Book 1 of the Mayne Attraction series
Ann Mauren
e-book, Smashwords, downloaded in Stanza format
e-ARC provided by author
read July 14 &15
Review on www.fangswandsandfairydust.com
Description of Book (marketing copy)
Ellery Mayne is a high school girl who makes a disturbing discovery. After a foiled abduction attempt, she realizes that an entire team of security personnel are secretly shadowing her every move.
As she works to make sense of this startling development, she secretly transitions from the one who is being observed to the one who carries out observations of her own, testing the limits of a secret service detail who think they are conducting transparent surveillance on a clueless teenager.
When the mystery behind the secret security unravels, Ellery is faced with decisions that involve her future and the hopes of two unlikely love interests: a handsome but conflicted security agent who doesn’t realize she knows about him, and her first love—a boy that broke her heart—who has returned to explain his actions and his feelings for her.
Told from Ellery’s perspective, she puzzles over what could interest not one but two handsome suitors and a whole security force. Suddenly this quiet loner realizes that her life is In the Spotlight and she is the Mayne Attraction.
Earlier this week another book blogger asked if I would like to review an e-book written by a friend of here. The description sounded as if the book had a paranormal element, and it was only when I got to the identity of the antagonist that I realized that the work was a straight piece of literature, by then I was wrapped up in Ms. Mauren’s hypnotic style.
This is a YA book and the author pays attention to vocabulary by defining unfamiliar words in parentheses. However, this is done in the context of a word game Ellery and her mother play, so I was never sure if the device belonged to the author or the character. I think if it were to be identified as the author’s I would find the use of obscure words and definition overly pedantic. If it belongs to the character, it is very much in line with her personality.
The prose in this book is beautiful, elegant even. The female protagonist is very deeply revealed to us and she is certainly likable. I found the plot unrealistic in several details that would act as spoilers. If this were a fantasy piece (possible?) I could make a case for world building, but the foiled abduction spoken of in the marketing copy above and Ellery’s subsequent realization that she was being watched would have been enough to send me to the police even as a teenager.
I found it very hard to believe some of the supporting characters, although they were certainly very pleasant individuals who helped advance the story. But, their existence in Ellery’s world seems improbable. An important question I never found answered is who was trying to abduct Ellery and I never heard a good enough justification for the security detail having been hired in the first place. The blogger who asked me to do the review spoke about that with the writer for a while and apparently the next two books in the series are told as from Gray's point of view and Ash's. And she wanted to leave that and the further explanation of the security detail to be explained from their point of view. I prefer series where the books each stand alone and don't leave major cliff-hangers. People will buy the next book because the first is good. There are lots of ways to learn what happened other than buying.
In summary, this book offers, great character development, very engaging, though unrealistic story, fabulous prose and style. While I had that one issue, I enjoyed the read. I would recommend this book for older teens as it involves the more physical aspects of relationships, and it is literature enough for most adults. With books like this, I think a parent has a great chance to engage with their teenager by also reading the book and discussing it.
Note: The author has a great website upon which you can read 60% of the book, and it even has music embedded in it (not automatic – you get to choose whether it plays). A great feature is photos of locations in the movie. I often find myself thinking I wonder what a location looked like, with this website you get a chance to find out.
http://mayneattraction.com/
Ann Mauren
e-book, Smashwords, downloaded in Stanza format
e-ARC provided by author
read July 14 &15
Review on www.fangswandsandfairydust.com
Description of Book (marketing copy)
Ellery Mayne is a high school girl who makes a disturbing discovery. After a foiled abduction attempt, she realizes that an entire team of security personnel are secretly shadowing her every move.
As she works to make sense of this startling development, she secretly transitions from the one who is being observed to the one who carries out observations of her own, testing the limits of a secret service detail who think they are conducting transparent surveillance on a clueless teenager.
When the mystery behind the secret security unravels, Ellery is faced with decisions that involve her future and the hopes of two unlikely love interests: a handsome but conflicted security agent who doesn’t realize she knows about him, and her first love—a boy that broke her heart—who has returned to explain his actions and his feelings for her.
Told from Ellery’s perspective, she puzzles over what could interest not one but two handsome suitors and a whole security force. Suddenly this quiet loner realizes that her life is In the Spotlight and she is the Mayne Attraction.
Earlier this week another book blogger asked if I would like to review an e-book written by a friend of here. The description sounded as if the book had a paranormal element, and it was only when I got to the identity of the antagonist that I realized that the work was a straight piece of literature, by then I was wrapped up in Ms. Mauren’s hypnotic style.
This is a YA book and the author pays attention to vocabulary by defining unfamiliar words in parentheses. However, this is done in the context of a word game Ellery and her mother play, so I was never sure if the device belonged to the author or the character. I think if it were to be identified as the author’s I would find the use of obscure words and definition overly pedantic. If it belongs to the character, it is very much in line with her personality.
The prose in this book is beautiful, elegant even. The female protagonist is very deeply revealed to us and she is certainly likable. I found the plot unrealistic in several details that would act as spoilers. If this were a fantasy piece (possible?) I could make a case for world building, but the foiled abduction spoken of in the marketing copy above and Ellery’s subsequent realization that she was being watched would have been enough to send me to the police even as a teenager.
I found it very hard to believe some of the supporting characters, although they were certainly very pleasant individuals who helped advance the story. But, their existence in Ellery’s world seems improbable. An important question I never found answered is who was trying to abduct Ellery and I never heard a good enough justification for the security detail having been hired in the first place. The blogger who asked me to do the review spoke about that with the writer for a while and apparently the next two books in the series are told as from Gray's point of view and Ash's. And she wanted to leave that and the further explanation of the security detail to be explained from their point of view. I prefer series where the books each stand alone and don't leave major cliff-hangers. People will buy the next book because the first is good. There are lots of ways to learn what happened other than buying.
In summary, this book offers, great character development, very engaging, though unrealistic story, fabulous prose and style. While I had that one issue, I enjoyed the read. I would recommend this book for older teens as it involves the more physical aspects of relationships, and it is literature enough for most adults. With books like this, I think a parent has a great chance to engage with their teenager by also reading the book and discussing it.
Note: The author has a great website upon which you can read 60% of the book, and it even has music embedded in it (not automatic – you get to choose whether it plays). A great feature is photos of locations in the movie. I often find myself thinking I wonder what a location looked like, with this website you get a chance to find out.
http://mayneattraction.com/
May 15, 2011
Honestly, I think perhaps I'm missing something with this book. Its overall rating on goodreads is over 4 stars. As the book dragged on for me (an oh it dragged!), I kept waiting for the point in the story to turn the tide and justify the rating...and it never came for me. I just could not buy into the fact that a reclusive, depressed teen (who just found out that she is likely a billionaire), who could barely talk to anyone outside of immediate family, could both drag herself out of her solitude and become this beauty that 2 amazing men were desperately in love with. Not only that, she had barely kissed either and yet was asked and considered becoming engaged to both; she even wore both of their rings. While it annoyed me there was such commitment without some measure of physical intimacy, I'll grant this oddity, even if both men were older, since she was just eighteen by the end of the story. She finally found a friend in a goth girl at school, who became her best friend, lifeline and supposed roommate for college, yet at her most trying time in the book (last third of the book) was never contacted for advice even once. I never bought into these men falling for her, in fact, I was waiting for the twist at the end that one was faking it for personal gain. But that didn't happen. Instead, the book ends in a bit of a cliffhanger, and its Book 1 in a trilogy. I even considered torturing myself through at least one additional book to see where they were going to go with the story, however, in reading the Book 2 and 3 summaries, I found that the 2 other books are the point of views of the 2 men in this drama. I assume there has to be some resolution in the books, but I personally can't read through the absurdity again, even from less annoying perspectives than the heroine. This book should be considered young adult romance, and and I personally feel there are much more compelling books in this category that I would rather be reading.
Note: I rated this 3 stars instead of 2, because while I found the story boring myself, the writing itself was of a high enough quality that to give it less than 3 stars would be a disservice to the author and those seeking reviews.
Note: I rated this 3 stars instead of 2, because while I found the story boring myself, the writing itself was of a high enough quality that to give it less than 3 stars would be a disservice to the author and those seeking reviews.
July 14, 2010
In the Spotlight is the first book in a three part series called Mayne Attraction by Ann Mauren.
I want to start by saying that there will not always be positive reviews on this blog. At some point or another there will come a book I just didn't like. I just wanted to get that point across before I tell you how much I LOVED this book!
Romance might not always be my first pick, but a good coming of age novel with a complicated love triangle always gets a top spot on my list. :P
As far as love triangles go this one is pretty complicated and really detailed.
There were a few points there where I was just like will they just kiss already and get it over with??? But it was worth the wait and very amusing. I really liked the overly charming manner in which Ash and Gray speak to Ellery (especially Ash)
The most interesting aspect is also the book's drawl. It almost had me looking over my shoulder thinking ‘I wonder if there is a totally hot and really nice stalker watching my every move, who is consequently in love with me.’ But of course my life isn’t interesting enough for someone to stalk me…or is it? (OK shutting down my inner fantasy now and getting back to the review)
There is this scene in the book where Ellery is describing Bill Bryson’s work. She uses the term ‘It’s like the literary version of carrots in carrot cake.’ Now I don’t actually like carrots in carrot cake so here’s how I’ll describe In the Spotlight by Ann Mauren…
It’s like chocolate cheesecake with extra pieces of chocolate on top. In simpler terms YUM!!!
I was very satisfied with the ending. The ending actually made the whole book. It was somehow exceedingly rewarding to see Ellery stand on her own two feet, and make her own decisions.
I really enjoyed this book and think it’s worth a read.
I want to start by saying that there will not always be positive reviews on this blog. At some point or another there will come a book I just didn't like. I just wanted to get that point across before I tell you how much I LOVED this book!
Romance might not always be my first pick, but a good coming of age novel with a complicated love triangle always gets a top spot on my list. :P
As far as love triangles go this one is pretty complicated and really detailed.
There were a few points there where I was just like will they just kiss already and get it over with??? But it was worth the wait and very amusing. I really liked the overly charming manner in which Ash and Gray speak to Ellery (especially Ash)
The most interesting aspect is also the book's drawl. It almost had me looking over my shoulder thinking ‘I wonder if there is a totally hot and really nice stalker watching my every move, who is consequently in love with me.’ But of course my life isn’t interesting enough for someone to stalk me…or is it? (OK shutting down my inner fantasy now and getting back to the review)
There is this scene in the book where Ellery is describing Bill Bryson’s work. She uses the term ‘It’s like the literary version of carrots in carrot cake.’ Now I don’t actually like carrots in carrot cake so here’s how I’ll describe In the Spotlight by Ann Mauren…
It’s like chocolate cheesecake with extra pieces of chocolate on top. In simpler terms YUM!!!
I was very satisfied with the ending. The ending actually made the whole book. It was somehow exceedingly rewarding to see Ellery stand on her own two feet, and make her own decisions.
I really enjoyed this book and think it’s worth a read.
October 5, 2014
Ellery Mayne discovers a secret security team following her around. Ellery does her own surveillance and experimentation on the team including a very intriguing love interest or two. The book really reminds me of “The Squad” series by Jennifer Lynn Barnes. Ann Mauren weaves interesting gemstone details into the overall plot threads. I like it when an author is able to inform without losing the story or bore the reader. I did feel too rushed on the romance with Ash. Maybe I have read one too many prolonged courtship series (which is also frustrating) but it left me a little uninvolved in the relationship, and didn’t really feel compelled toward either guy. There are some great unanswered questions for the series. Would recommend to anyone who likes Gallagher Girl series or twilight.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 18, 2010
With so many novels targeted to teens marketed as sequels, triologies and never-ending series, I found myself wanting to skip over the very detailed inner-workings of Ellery's thoughts, actions, and existence to uncover the mystery behind the security detail who watches over her, especially since the book is thick regardless. I would have preferred to uncover Ellery's true character over the course of the three books as opposed to how Ellery is in the position she's in at the beginning of the first book. Too much is told up-front about Ellery, which could be weaved seemlessly throughout the triology. But for teens who are straight-forward readers, the book's secrecy, love interests, and main characters will guide them through the series in the different perspectives the sequels offer
June 7, 2011
What seemed like an interesting premise was lost in horrid execution that just dragged on & on. If you absolutely loved the "love story" in Twilight you might like this book. I read a lot of YA & it was too lame for me. Overly plotted (& the plot somehow gets lost!!), wordy, jumping from time point to time point without explanation, and without real character development through 800+ pages. It's an excruciatingly long introduction to the next two books which I am not going to bother with.
September 12, 2011
I will be writing a more detailed review later, but had to get this 5-star rating up immediately! This book is so rich and complex, intelligent and quirky and suspenseful. It fills your heart and makes you want more. I love Ellery, and have to know what happens next!
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December 17, 2011
I loved it! Can't wait to continue with the series, hope the rest come out soon in Kindle version.
October 7, 2019
Shy People Must Read!
I was drawn in by the mystery and intrigue. I was kept captive by the engaging characters. I laughed, I cried, I cheered, and kept reading. My daughter has Selective Mutism, and I see much of the same characteristics in her that were expressed by Ellery. I can relate to many of the same feelings of shyness when I was younger. Oh, to long for the perfect mate! I am looking forward to reading more by Ann Mauren, and getting vocabulary lessons along the way! Thank you!
I was drawn in by the mystery and intrigue. I was kept captive by the engaging characters. I laughed, I cried, I cheered, and kept reading. My daughter has Selective Mutism, and I see much of the same characteristics in her that were expressed by Ellery. I can relate to many of the same feelings of shyness when I was younger. Oh, to long for the perfect mate! I am looking forward to reading more by Ann Mauren, and getting vocabulary lessons along the way! Thank you!
December 16, 2024
Ellery Mayne is a young girl who seemingly has an enriched life with an overprotective mother. She also has a security team who watches her every move for some unknown reason that she cannot fathom at all. She falls for one of her security team and then the person who is responsible for that team comes to claim her as if she is a prize for his keeping. Things do not go well at the end of this first book for two men who seem to think that they should control another's destiny.
February 19, 2020
Was boring at first
It started out boring. Until about a little more than halfway through but then it picked up and I was trying to figure out the plot and who she loved. So it got more interesting glad I didn't put it down
It started out boring. Until about a little more than halfway through but then it picked up and I was trying to figure out the plot and who she loved. So it got more interesting glad I didn't put it down
November 7, 2018
I don't really like the second character in the book and the next book is from his point of view. So I more than likely won't read any more of this series.
June 10, 2011
Ellery Mayne isn't paranoid, she really is being followed--and watched. To a shy, socially awkward seventeen year old girl, who looks closer to twelve than twenty and is struggling to survive a broken heart, being the center of attention is rather uncomfortable--particularly when she has no idea who is watching her or why. Lucky for her they seem benign enough, even helpful on occasion, and when she finally gets a glimpse of one of her watchers, he turns out to be absolutely dreamy. What's a girl to do?
In her debut novel Mayne Attraction - In the Spotlight, the first book in the Mayne Attraction series, author Ann Mauren weaves an intricate story from the naive, though incredibly resourceful and intelligent perspective of young Ellery Mayne. Determined to discover who these people are, and why she is being watched and seemingly protected from harm, our wonderfully self-sufficient heroine devises some rather devious strategies of her own to spot her surveillance team.
What struck me most about this beautifully written work was its intelligence. While many popular books, especially YA romances, seem written to a middle-grade reading level or lower in style and substance, Mayne Attraction assumes much of the reader. The main character is highly intelligent, well read, and has a stellar vocabulary. The narrative reflects that. I have a fairly extensive vocabulary and there were more than a few words I didn't know. But the author, or Ellery herself, graciously explains the hard ones. But their use comes naturally to Ellery, often to the confusion of her friends, and the PhD vocabulary doesn't seem contrived at all. It flows naturally throughout the narrative.
I enjoyed Mayne Attraction - In the Spotlight immensely and cannot wait for In the Smoke and In the Shadow. All three books planned in the series will be written from a different POV. I visited Ann Mauren's website and read excerpts from Main Attraction - In the Shadow to see how that very interesting concept worked (Spoiler Alert - if you read the excerpts, the story is very much the same as In the Spotlight from a different POV). The new POV adds powerfully to the story, revealing events and perspectives unknown to Ellery as well as giving the reader a look at the beloved heroine from other points-of-view. It is a very effective concept both as a literary and a marketing device.
I will hazard to predict Mayne Attraction will be thought of as a groundbreaking piece of modern literature if it can receive enough exposure. I highly recommend it on all levels - story, writing, and style - and for all audiences. This work just topped my 2011 fiction reading list. It will be difficult for anything else to surpass it. I can't give it enough stars. And the author is giving away the eBook version of Mayne Attraction - In the Spotlight on Amazon. So download it and see for yourself. You don't need a Kindle to read Kindle eBooks.
In her debut novel Mayne Attraction - In the Spotlight, the first book in the Mayne Attraction series, author Ann Mauren weaves an intricate story from the naive, though incredibly resourceful and intelligent perspective of young Ellery Mayne. Determined to discover who these people are, and why she is being watched and seemingly protected from harm, our wonderfully self-sufficient heroine devises some rather devious strategies of her own to spot her surveillance team.
What struck me most about this beautifully written work was its intelligence. While many popular books, especially YA romances, seem written to a middle-grade reading level or lower in style and substance, Mayne Attraction assumes much of the reader. The main character is highly intelligent, well read, and has a stellar vocabulary. The narrative reflects that. I have a fairly extensive vocabulary and there were more than a few words I didn't know. But the author, or Ellery herself, graciously explains the hard ones. But their use comes naturally to Ellery, often to the confusion of her friends, and the PhD vocabulary doesn't seem contrived at all. It flows naturally throughout the narrative.
I enjoyed Mayne Attraction - In the Spotlight immensely and cannot wait for In the Smoke and In the Shadow. All three books planned in the series will be written from a different POV. I visited Ann Mauren's website and read excerpts from Main Attraction - In the Shadow to see how that very interesting concept worked (Spoiler Alert - if you read the excerpts, the story is very much the same as In the Spotlight from a different POV). The new POV adds powerfully to the story, revealing events and perspectives unknown to Ellery as well as giving the reader a look at the beloved heroine from other points-of-view. It is a very effective concept both as a literary and a marketing device.
I will hazard to predict Mayne Attraction will be thought of as a groundbreaking piece of modern literature if it can receive enough exposure. I highly recommend it on all levels - story, writing, and style - and for all audiences. This work just topped my 2011 fiction reading list. It will be difficult for anything else to surpass it. I can't give it enough stars. And the author is giving away the eBook version of Mayne Attraction - In the Spotlight on Amazon. So download it and see for yourself. You don't need a Kindle to read Kindle eBooks.
May 31, 2011
I like the idea of this book. I think the plot is unique. The book was well-written, and I especially enjoyed the scenes where she decides to befriend a Goth, and then does so. However, I found a lot of the book quite unbelievable. Ellery's lack of suspicion for the people following her. Yes, they protected her, and she was curious and running experiments, but in real life, she'd have contacted the police. I also found it so difficult to believe that everyone in her life is incredibly gorgeous and FAMOUS. Every single person in the book is completely gorgeous. And why is Ash so concerened about his job? Why doesn't he quit, then go after Ellery? The first part of the book was so angsty and whiney, then she just "snaps out of it." I suppose her depression was more the blues and summer laziness than actual depression.
As the book goes further on, it becomes more and more like Twilight. The details differ, but it began to feel like the same story, especially since she references the Twilight books. Even the writing began to seemed based on Stephenie Meyer's style. One of the most unrealistic lines in the entire book was when Ellery described Twilight as "well-written." I laughed out loud. Ellery seems quite intelligent, as she is always and somewhat annoyingly defining words for the reader. It's one thing for her to be interested in reading Twilight as a guilty pleasure book, but it's hardly literature. And she has Bella on her Wall of Heroines? Other than winning a hot guy, what does Bella have to look up to?
Ways in which Ellery is like Bella:
She has two guys in love with her
She is so depressed she can barely drag herself out of the house
She pretends to make friends to please her parents
Her boyfriend insists on a lack of physical intimacy
She is engaged very young
She pretends not to know how beautiful she is
Everyone in her life is unbelievably gorgeous
Everyone in her life drives fancy cars
She has access to millions of dollars and ignores it
The angst. Oh, the angst.
Other books in the trilogy are written from the perspective of the two males
Ways in which Ellery is unlike Bella:
She has life plans
She has career goals
She drops the stalker/control freak from her life
Very important ways to differ, if you ask me.
As the book goes further on, it becomes more and more like Twilight. The details differ, but it began to feel like the same story, especially since she references the Twilight books. Even the writing began to seemed based on Stephenie Meyer's style. One of the most unrealistic lines in the entire book was when Ellery described Twilight as "well-written." I laughed out loud. Ellery seems quite intelligent, as she is always and somewhat annoyingly defining words for the reader. It's one thing for her to be interested in reading Twilight as a guilty pleasure book, but it's hardly literature. And she has Bella on her Wall of Heroines? Other than winning a hot guy, what does Bella have to look up to?
Ways in which Ellery is like Bella:
She has two guys in love with her
She is so depressed she can barely drag herself out of the house
She pretends to make friends to please her parents
Her boyfriend insists on a lack of physical intimacy
She is engaged very young
She pretends not to know how beautiful she is
Everyone in her life is unbelievably gorgeous
Everyone in her life drives fancy cars
She has access to millions of dollars and ignores it
The angst. Oh, the angst.
Other books in the trilogy are written from the perspective of the two males
Ways in which Ellery is unlike Bella:
She has life plans
She has career goals
She drops the stalker/control freak from her life
Very important ways to differ, if you ask me.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 7, 2012
Book 1 we get to see the main character Ellery develop through the entire book. I would sometimes get frustrated with her. You are being watched by a security detail and really you have no problems with it. No question as to why you are being watched. No anxiety over it. It's just like oh I am being watched okay, on to the next thing. Yet at the same time you can't help but laugh and admire her for being so laid back about it considering she is rather shy, a recluse, and very unsure of herself.
As for the love triangle, I'm let not sure how to feel about it. So Ash and Gray are older than her. I grasp their reasons for wanting to stay away. I understand both of their sides. I just can't help by like Gray more in the end. He is the one that truly knows her. Okay I get that he tends to maybe overstep sometimes with ordering for her or setting out clothes for her at one point. Yet at the same time he has been on expeditions and knows what clothes are right for the conditions so I don't get that as overbearing or not letting her make her own decisions.
Here we are lead to believe that Ash allows her to make her own decisions and will let her do her own thing in order to grow up. I don't think Ellery gives Gray that option. She is so sure he will do everything to stop her without even giving him the opprotunity to listen to what she wants. Yet you can't help cheer for Ash too. He wants to make Ellery happy. He wants to be honorable for her. He shows her emotion over sentimental gifts. I just don't really know how to feel about the whole thing. Maybe with the next 2 books it will help. Since each book is from another character's point of view.
Still overall the book was slow compared to the normal books I read. However I still felt like I had to keep reading it...odd. It's all about Ellery's character development. Perhaps the next book will be filled with more action or drama. Something other than reading about Ellery stepping out of her comfort zone. I will say that when you get a sneak peak at the next book which told from Gray's point of view you can't help but want to read more. I really want to read Gray's book. The ending to this first book is definitely wide open.
As for the love triangle, I'm let not sure how to feel about it. So Ash and Gray are older than her. I grasp their reasons for wanting to stay away. I understand both of their sides. I just can't help by like Gray more in the end. He is the one that truly knows her. Okay I get that he tends to maybe overstep sometimes with ordering for her or setting out clothes for her at one point. Yet at the same time he has been on expeditions and knows what clothes are right for the conditions so I don't get that as overbearing or not letting her make her own decisions.
Here we are lead to believe that Ash allows her to make her own decisions and will let her do her own thing in order to grow up. I don't think Ellery gives Gray that option. She is so sure he will do everything to stop her without even giving him the opprotunity to listen to what she wants. Yet you can't help cheer for Ash too. He wants to make Ellery happy. He wants to be honorable for her. He shows her emotion over sentimental gifts. I just don't really know how to feel about the whole thing. Maybe with the next 2 books it will help. Since each book is from another character's point of view.
Still overall the book was slow compared to the normal books I read. However I still felt like I had to keep reading it...odd. It's all about Ellery's character development. Perhaps the next book will be filled with more action or drama. Something other than reading about Ellery stepping out of her comfort zone. I will say that when you get a sneak peak at the next book which told from Gray's point of view you can't help but want to read more. I really want to read Gray's book. The ending to this first book is definitely wide open.
October 7, 2010
This book took me forever to read. Now, that wasn’t the book or the author’s fault; it was mine. I was so busy that I didn’t have any time to sit down and enjoy this novel. But when I had a night alone, I devoured about half of this humungous book as quick as I could.
Ellery is a really good protagonist. Though she is sometimes too intelligent to believe, she carries the story well and has a quirky personality that was easy to relate to. Her friends she meets along the way were fun and loving, though they kept secrets just like everyone else in this book seemed to do.
The fight for Ellery’s heart is fought between Ash Ryan and Grayson Gregory. While reading, my mind kept fluctuating between the two suitors, trying to pinpoint who would be the better match for Ellery. But just like Ellery, I was at a lost. I think I know who I am rooting for at this point, Ash, but with two more books in this series, one told from Grey’s and the other from Ash’s point of view, my opinion could certainly change.
The writing in this book was definitely a high point. Mauren shows that she has a strong command over the English language with her powerful diction choices, descriptive writing, and the overall ability to keep readers engaged with an interesting story.
The story in this novel was one of the most unique young adult books I have ever read. The complexity of it all shows that Mauren was thinking the plot out well before she dived into writing this book. She had it all planned out and showed it in this groundbreaking debut. I loved following Ellery, Ash, and Grayson on their fun and intense adventures over the course of In the Spotlight. However, the plot did move pretty slowly and I feel a lot of content could have been removed to make this a quicker read.
Ann Mauren is definitely an author to watch. I cannot wait for the sequels to In the Spotlight, In the Shadow and In the Smoke. Though I will miss Ellery’s narration, I am looking forward to seeing into the minds of Ash and Grey.
Ellery is a really good protagonist. Though she is sometimes too intelligent to believe, she carries the story well and has a quirky personality that was easy to relate to. Her friends she meets along the way were fun and loving, though they kept secrets just like everyone else in this book seemed to do.
The fight for Ellery’s heart is fought between Ash Ryan and Grayson Gregory. While reading, my mind kept fluctuating between the two suitors, trying to pinpoint who would be the better match for Ellery. But just like Ellery, I was at a lost. I think I know who I am rooting for at this point, Ash, but with two more books in this series, one told from Grey’s and the other from Ash’s point of view, my opinion could certainly change.
The writing in this book was definitely a high point. Mauren shows that she has a strong command over the English language with her powerful diction choices, descriptive writing, and the overall ability to keep readers engaged with an interesting story.
The story in this novel was one of the most unique young adult books I have ever read. The complexity of it all shows that Mauren was thinking the plot out well before she dived into writing this book. She had it all planned out and showed it in this groundbreaking debut. I loved following Ellery, Ash, and Grayson on their fun and intense adventures over the course of In the Spotlight. However, the plot did move pretty slowly and I feel a lot of content could have been removed to make this a quicker read.
Ann Mauren is definitely an author to watch. I cannot wait for the sequels to In the Spotlight, In the Shadow and In the Smoke. Though I will miss Ellery’s narration, I am looking forward to seeing into the minds of Ash and Grey.
February 9, 2016
The prologue is from the mother's viewpoint and serves to establish that person's character. Ellery is the name of the daughter (and central figure of the book). Monica is the mother and Hoyt the step-father.
The book changes to Ellery's viewpoint. She has been grieving the death of her grandfather and the loss of a potential romantic situation. She begins to feel she is being watched and a couple of guys try to kidnap her. In an excellent move she decides to take a pro-active stance and set up some experiments where she can determine the nature of those following her.
A problem arises in the very next chapter, though, where she is supposed to go and check on a trust fund and does so by herself. I would think that she would have called at least one of her parents to let her know where she was going or, better yet, found someone to go with her, considering her fears of others being interested in her for some reason.
She finds out that her grandfather has left here enough to make her a millionaire. Actually, a multi-millionaire. At school she makes friends with some goth girls, Samantha in particular. As the book proceeds she meets and falls in love with one of her watchers, and falls in love with another person.
The thing to keep in mind with this book is that it is the first in a series of books, so some things that are not cleared up in this book will probably be cleared up in the future ones. For example, the book starts out as a relatively dark, conspiracy-laden book about a young girl who was being watched closely by some unnamed group and an attempted kidnapping by some other group. She becomes pro-active in trying to thwart those watching her, which is good. She proves herself to be resourceful, although not always as careful as she should be.
The vast majority of this book deals with her growing up, with her personal problems, falling in love with two guys, and growing up and maturing in her thinking. The book is successful in this aspect. As far as the conspiracy goes, that's for the future.
The book changes to Ellery's viewpoint. She has been grieving the death of her grandfather and the loss of a potential romantic situation. She begins to feel she is being watched and a couple of guys try to kidnap her. In an excellent move she decides to take a pro-active stance and set up some experiments where she can determine the nature of those following her.
A problem arises in the very next chapter, though, where she is supposed to go and check on a trust fund and does so by herself. I would think that she would have called at least one of her parents to let her know where she was going or, better yet, found someone to go with her, considering her fears of others being interested in her for some reason.
She finds out that her grandfather has left here enough to make her a millionaire. Actually, a multi-millionaire. At school she makes friends with some goth girls, Samantha in particular. As the book proceeds she meets and falls in love with one of her watchers, and falls in love with another person.
The thing to keep in mind with this book is that it is the first in a series of books, so some things that are not cleared up in this book will probably be cleared up in the future ones. For example, the book starts out as a relatively dark, conspiracy-laden book about a young girl who was being watched closely by some unnamed group and an attempted kidnapping by some other group. She becomes pro-active in trying to thwart those watching her, which is good. She proves herself to be resourceful, although not always as careful as she should be.
The vast majority of this book deals with her growing up, with her personal problems, falling in love with two guys, and growing up and maturing in her thinking. The book is successful in this aspect. As far as the conspiracy goes, that's for the future.
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October 6, 2013Dear god. I guess this is a YA novel but that wasn't apparent through the Kindle store front.
This is such a mess and if this is how YA novels are written, I'll gladly gouge out my eyeballs to avoid reading anything like it ever again.
First, we get a murder. Oooh! Then nothing. Just a few chapters about how depressed, antisocial, and OCD Ellery is. Followed by a few chapters on her feeling like she's being followed and watched. Then a few more chapters on her making a new friend. Then even more chapters about being the third wheel to her friend and her friend's boyfriend. And we're at 45% before this dumb bitch even bothers to question WHY she has a secret security team! That is all I would have been worried about from Day One. This book is filled with childish, insecurity-driven wonderings that make me thankful that authors like Nora Roberts can churn out 5 new books a year.
NOTHING HAPPENS! If you thought the blurb was any indication of what happens in this book, I hate to be the bearer of bad news... but it's not. Maybe something happens later? But you have to sit through at least 20 chapters of bullshit before getting there and I refused to do it.
How anyone can stand this insipid drivel is completely beyond me. Fretting about the stupid shit that pales in comparison to the important stuff just makes me angry. And questions that need to be asked never are. And if, by some chance, a question is answered, it is done so in the most vague way possible and people just accept it. Like it's no biggie. And how the fuck do you inherit hundreds of millions of dollars and never think about it again? This bitch has her priorities waaaay out if whack.
Nothing about Ellery made me care for her, identify with her, or cheer for her. I hope to god I wasn't that awkward and clueless when I was 17-18 years old. Heaven help us if the children are our future. Because they're dumb as shit.
This is such a mess and if this is how YA novels are written, I'll gladly gouge out my eyeballs to avoid reading anything like it ever again.
First, we get a murder. Oooh! Then nothing. Just a few chapters about how depressed, antisocial, and OCD Ellery is. Followed by a few chapters on her feeling like she's being followed and watched. Then a few more chapters on her making a new friend. Then even more chapters about being the third wheel to her friend and her friend's boyfriend. And we're at 45% before this dumb bitch even bothers to question WHY she has a secret security team! That is all I would have been worried about from Day One. This book is filled with childish, insecurity-driven wonderings that make me thankful that authors like Nora Roberts can churn out 5 new books a year.
NOTHING HAPPENS! If you thought the blurb was any indication of what happens in this book, I hate to be the bearer of bad news... but it's not. Maybe something happens later? But you have to sit through at least 20 chapters of bullshit before getting there and I refused to do it.
How anyone can stand this insipid drivel is completely beyond me. Fretting about the stupid shit that pales in comparison to the important stuff just makes me angry. And questions that need to be asked never are. And if, by some chance, a question is answered, it is done so in the most vague way possible and people just accept it. Like it's no biggie. And how the fuck do you inherit hundreds of millions of dollars and never think about it again? This bitch has her priorities waaaay out if whack.
Nothing about Ellery made me care for her, identify with her, or cheer for her. I hope to god I wasn't that awkward and clueless when I was 17-18 years old. Heaven help us if the children are our future. Because they're dumb as shit.
January 14, 2012
Very good. Very interesting, a great premise. I loved that she was able to figure things out. She's a really interesting heroine. I'm happy with the ending, I think it was important. I liked Samantha and Trevor and LOVED Ash. It was Gray's own fault, first for leaving her, then for being the way he was. He was kinda annoying and so controlling, I would not have stood for it, but Ellery is shy and she did like him. I'm glad she was able to find her spine at the various points. I really liked the swimming lessons thing and that it was Ash who did them and wanted her to be safe. He really loved her, amazing because he never actually talked to her, but I guess he really didn't need to. But it still just blows me away with how much he loves her, especially with the age difference though I'm so happy it doesn't matter to her and the end scene was a great show case for his love. I liked when they first met with the own my heart thing. :) Very awe worthy, he really was very sweet. I loved how she got that one guy fired, that was epic. That scene was funny, witty and smart, and just plain awesome, he totally deserved it. Also when she first met Ash at the dinner party, he must have been so surprised but happy and I'm glad he didn't get fired and it's amazing they were able to keep it a secret. I really want to read the next books, specifically Ash's and because of that Barefoot Heroine too. I think Gray's book will bug me with his controllingness, but Ash's will be soo filled with love I can't wait, unfortunately neither are at Amazon where I bought this book, so I will have to find them somewhere else. This was a great book, a great job done by the author. It has a different feel from other books, not quite sure what it was, but I think it has something to do with the writing style and the love from afar thing. Definitely worth the read.
April 1, 2012
I really tried giving this book a chance because I wanted to like it. The premise of the book seemed like it'd be an interesting mystery romance for a change. The prologue was able to grab me fairly quickly and made me want to continue reading to see where the storyline would go. Ellery was a likable character and I enjoyed how Mauren wrote her to be an educated word nerd. Though I enjoyed Mayne's quirky personality, this is pretty much where my compliments end for this book.
As I read, I kept waiting patiently for the storyline to get going. The interesting prologue seemed to have very little to do with the rest of the book. Finding out she was being watched, you'd think she'd have more questions about it and be weary, but she just seemed to accept it. When the romantic aspects of the story began, I sat thinking I had missed chapters somehow where she explained about her feelings and relationship for the male characters. For being such an educated and seemingly well-rounded character, I found Ellery to be pretty judgmental and immature.
Though it doesn't usually bother me if there are typos in areas, this book had way too many for me. As I was really bored with the storyline, the typos stood out more and really started annoying me. Overall, I just feel with a little more work this book could be better. There are supposed to be two other books to follow this book in the other points of view, but if it's anything like the first book, I don't see me reading further to see where the storyline goes.
March 30, 2012
Ellery is a painfully shy soon-to-be Senior in high school - so shy in fact, that she has no friends at all. When tragedy strikes, she has nowhere to turn and not a soul to confide in - especially not her overprotective family. As Ellery discovers that she's being tailed by security, she keeps it to herself, rather than being further collared to her home. The summer and following school year provide interesting and hilarious exploits - but how much was naturally occurring and how much was fabricated by the security detail?
In the Spotlight is impressive: Ellery's character is so entirely complete - her sense of humor, sensitivity, her love of using big words and inventing phobias - she's quirky and realistic. The humor used in In the Spotlight is so spot-on that it's as if a (smart & mature) eighteen year old is sitting on the sofa next to you telling you about the past year of her life. The story is engaging- and although it is not fast-paced, readers will not want to put it down.
Ellery's narration brings In the Spotlight to life - and what is interesting about the two consecutive novels of this trilogy is that they are told from other perspectives - each by one of Ellery's two suitors. Mauren doesn't leave a cliffhanger, but there are enough questions unanswered that readers will still be grasping for more.
In the Spotlight is impressive: Ellery's character is so entirely complete - her sense of humor, sensitivity, her love of using big words and inventing phobias - she's quirky and realistic. The humor used in In the Spotlight is so spot-on that it's as if a (smart & mature) eighteen year old is sitting on the sofa next to you telling you about the past year of her life. The story is engaging- and although it is not fast-paced, readers will not want to put it down.
Ellery's narration brings In the Spotlight to life - and what is interesting about the two consecutive novels of this trilogy is that they are told from other perspectives - each by one of Ellery's two suitors. Mauren doesn't leave a cliffhanger, but there are enough questions unanswered that readers will still be grasping for more.
May 27, 2011
I thoroughly enjoyed this book!
The idea of the novel was what drew me to it originally and I am so glad I read it.
Ellery has got to be one of the most real heroines I have read in a YA novel in goodness knows how long. She had her head screwed on the right way all through the novel and although her actions were sometimes questionable she didn't flinch from the possible consequences her actions could lead to. She knew when she was doing something that could loose her the affections of someone and she was willing to deal with that.
Though the relationship status seemed to jump very quickly from 'just seeing' someone to being engaged I didn't mind this one little bit - I was just glad to be able to read a YA without the main characters suddenly being in bed with each other. And seeing a more serious side to a relationship that just dating was pleasant to read about also. And Ellery not allowing herself to be pressured into anything also gives this book another big star in my mind.
The supporting characters were great and just as interesting to read about as Ellery, Gray and Ash.
And really, being stuck between two very sweet and good looking guys who both want to marry you...I think there are worse situations to be in.
I can't wait to read the second and third instalment and see how the story progresses.
Great, fun read.
The idea of the novel was what drew me to it originally and I am so glad I read it.
Ellery has got to be one of the most real heroines I have read in a YA novel in goodness knows how long. She had her head screwed on the right way all through the novel and although her actions were sometimes questionable she didn't flinch from the possible consequences her actions could lead to. She knew when she was doing something that could loose her the affections of someone and she was willing to deal with that.
Though the relationship status seemed to jump very quickly from 'just seeing' someone to being engaged I didn't mind this one little bit - I was just glad to be able to read a YA without the main characters suddenly being in bed with each other. And seeing a more serious side to a relationship that just dating was pleasant to read about also. And Ellery not allowing herself to be pressured into anything also gives this book another big star in my mind.
The supporting characters were great and just as interesting to read about as Ellery, Gray and Ash.
And really, being stuck between two very sweet and good looking guys who both want to marry you...I think there are worse situations to be in.
I can't wait to read the second and third instalment and see how the story progresses.
Great, fun read.
January 3, 2015
I liked "In the Spotlight" book one of "Mayne Attraction" series. I would have given it four stars, really liking it except for a few things. In the beginning, the prologue, we meet a couple of shady characters, they come in early in the first few chapters, never to be heard from again, the story ends (with a cliff hanger) never explaining who, or why they are in the story. I am assuming they come in later in one of the other books, but I found myself asking over and over, what about those guys. The characters are likable, similar to a lot of YA characters. The girl is shy, clumsy and doesn't know she is beautiful, the guys are hot and handsome. I am still not sure where the series is going, I was anticipating a big twist, but was disappointed in the lack of one. Having said all of that, the book is told through the eyes of the 18 year old girl, the writing is good, there was a nice mix of humor, no swearing, the only sexual content is a few insinuations and nothing between the main characters, in fact they begin and end as virgins. So a lot to like about this book, and whenever the remaining books come out, I will read them. I can recommend for ages 14 and up. Definitely a chick book.
November 8, 2010
When I first received In the Spotlight I wasn't sure what to expect. After starting it though it was hard for me to put down! I would have finished this book in a couple of days if I had had the time, but unfortunately I didn't. Fortunately I was able to savor each page of Ellery's story.
The plot of In the Spotlight is one of the most unique that I have read. The whole idea of someone watching her (scopophobia, as she refers to it) may sound odd and a bit creepy, but it makes for a wonderful story. It's full of fun characters and amazing guys. It's also set at a good pace and I didn't find myself bored.
Ellery made a good protagonist, but I am really excited to read from Ash and Gray's point of views. I found myself more interested in them (especially Gray) a lot of the time too. The supporting characters were just as interesting as the three main ones.
Overall this is one of the best books I have read this year. Ann Mauren has written a wonderful first book and I am extremely excited to read the next two books! I recommend this book to those who like a book with mystery, romance (love triangles), swoon worthy guys, great supporting characters, and unique stories!
The plot of In the Spotlight is one of the most unique that I have read. The whole idea of someone watching her (scopophobia, as she refers to it) may sound odd and a bit creepy, but it makes for a wonderful story. It's full of fun characters and amazing guys. It's also set at a good pace and I didn't find myself bored.
Ellery made a good protagonist, but I am really excited to read from Ash and Gray's point of views. I found myself more interested in them (especially Gray) a lot of the time too. The supporting characters were just as interesting as the three main ones.
Overall this is one of the best books I have read this year. Ann Mauren has written a wonderful first book and I am extremely excited to read the next two books! I recommend this book to those who like a book with mystery, romance (love triangles), swoon worthy guys, great supporting characters, and unique stories!
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