To experience the familiar in an unsettling way is the basis of the uncanny. But what if the familiar was already unsettling?
This is the kind of recursive dread Caitlín Kiernan deals with in To Charles Fort, with Love, and they use it to good effect in some, but not all, of its stories. Per Kiernan, this is intentional: the write ups that proceed and and follow each story emphasize that plot takes a back seat to atmosphere in this body of work.
It's a risky move, but Kiernan has the chops to pull it off. Their atmospheres and characters are compelling, their scenarios are creative, and their depiction of interpersonal relationships is on point. Even when stories sprawl without a locus to drive them forward, the sprawl is enjoyable, like floating down the river Styx on an inner tube, sipping absinthe and listening to disconcerting, macabre discourses at every bend.
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There are explicit references to Lovecraft throughout the stories, and Kiernan really does capture the feel of Lovecraft without reverting to antiquarian language. For people who find Lovecraft's prose to be old-fashioned or otherwise exasperating, but can't get enough of his creeping sense of dread, Kiernan is a natural choice.
In To Charles Fort, with Love, Kiernan balances wordcount and pacing by setting the table and inviting readers to serve themselves. They permit their readers a glimpse of the things their characters themselves only see out of the corners of their eyes, which is literally how the protagonist of "Valentia" realizes that an ancient artifact links her recurring dream to a hastily destroyed archeological site.
Mostly traditional in its scope and generous with its clues, "Valentia" eases readers into Kiernan's world of academics, creatives, the lovelorn, and other over-thinkers who, nevertheless, cannot think their way out of the unthinkable. Then they pull the rug out from under readers with "Spindleshanks," where a recently dead woman makes brief, disturbing contact with a grouchy writer in the midst of a strained relationship.
If there's a connection between the two, or a reason why the dead woman wants to make contact, Kiernan is not telling. There is no editorializing in any of Kiernan's stories; it's all just the facts (or fictions, I guess), please and thank you.
Occasionally, I wanted a little more from each story, and even had to disabuse myself of the notion that I was reading a handful of really good stories interspersed with works that hit dead ends before being polished and shipped in order to keep the supply chain moving.
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I listened to "So Runs the World Away" away twice before deciding it was masterclass in world building, but a snub to my proletarian sensibilities about plot. Its depiction of a ghoul society and hierarchy, as well as the misfits that find themselves outside it, is charming in its taking the gothic obsession with death and aversion to the mundane to its extreme. Spoiler: even after death life still involves more pain than pleasure.
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"Standing Water" gets the collection back on track by forcing two recently separated lovers to confront the depths of the unknown when a curious, apparently endless mud puddle appears and disappears in alleyway. It's followed by "La Mer des Reves," a strong, short, violent piece of expressionism that uses an unreliable narrator to evoke a sense of pity and horror from the reader, and its blending real and imaginary circumstances makes for a compelling guessing game with high stakes for the protagonist.
Like "Spindleshanks," the longer, undeniably creepy "The Road of Pins" has Kiernan revisiting troubled relationships and creative types facing writers block, but adds a kind of soft fatalism to the mix by exposing the protagonist to dreary artwork, dreamy dilettantes, and dread-inducing arthouse films, all of which the protagonist would prefer to avoid, and all of which foreshadow an unsettling conclusion. It reads like a more subtle version of The Ring and it was my favorite story from the collection.
"Onion" is my second favorite story. In it, survivors of traumatic, horrific experiences of the Lovecraftian genre relive their trauma for themselves (and perhaps each other) in a misguided form of therapy orchestrated by a sort of twelve-step program. But the therapeutic value of the program to the characters, including the underachieving narrator, is uncertain, because he does not seem to be on the road to recovery. Indeed, the protagonist's girlfriend has decided to reverse course and probe deeper into the terrors that plague her, putting her on a path that the protagonist seems unlikely, although not unwilling, to follow them down.
"La Peau Verte" concerns a strange culmination of childhood trauma. An artist finds herself becoming artwork for an unsettling audience that took an interest in her and her sister when they were younger. The exposition comes from a flashback, dreams, and a counseling session, and makes for a degree of uncertainty that fits well with Kiernan's overall atmosphere, and the mysterious elements at the end of the story are all the more impactful as a result. Kiernan notes that she considers this work to be her most accomplished short story.
"The Dead and the Moonstruck" reads like Young Adult fiction, which is a genre I thought I'd grown out of, but its descriptions and emphasis on the uncertainties of youth are excellent. Like "So Runs the World Away," this story gives humanizing qualities to the inhuman, namely ghouls, who are preparing for graduation rituals.
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The last three stories all center around a woman who appears to be holding back an onslaught of otherworldly horrors. All of the characters are drawn to her, or perhaps the the portal she blocks, and we learn something about the cults and beliefs that it attracts and affects. The stories seems to run in reverse chronological order, and the combination of misinformation and uncertainty around the portal makes from some very realistic fantasy indeed.
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