I can't take the demons, the "boys." They're Bon Jovi fans and were singing and humming his songs. They tucked themselves into unmentionable places on her body. Like wth is this? That is so freaking weird I still can't believe someone thought of this.
She was at the homeless shelter and was looking around at the people and the serving line and said this is why she did it. I don't think a homeless shelter with an old woman addict with track lines all over her arms, growing weed to bake into brownies, is selling a good world, "this is why I do this" message. I hated that shelter with all the demons and lowlifes, like the loser who came stuffing his face with food and talking with his mouth open. The setting sucks.
She cut off another sex scene. 2nd novel in and she will not write sex or any part of it. She was sitting in his lap on his deck and had just went to unbutton his jeans and CUT. Stop right there. Adult material, and I guess we all can't handle that...
It was a nice moment when Grant told her he had a bad feeling about leaving her and Maxine told him she was coming on his trip to China. It was touching when he told her he loved her but it was hard to be around her because the world hurt her bad he couldn't do anything about it. He knew they wouldn't have 50 years together, maybe not even one. She would leave him by choice or death, and she might leave someone behind, someone they made together. But he wants to help her so they have time. He told her he wasn't going to give her up and she wasn't going to be like the other women in her family. He wants her to grow to be old. This needed more moments like that, more emotion, connection, and romance between them.
"All of those disparate pieces belonged together--I could feel it in my gut--but it was like having a box full of fingers, and not knowing which part of the hand I should attach them to." You know, puzzle analogies are oft used but they fit. This is just weird.
It was interesting when she was abducted and got out of the duct tape, figured out that Cribari had been behind the attack and Grant would be alone with him. Something dark inside her and took over and she reveled in their screams, came to after she had viciously attacked them without even realizing it.
It was so weird when Maxine said she doesn't believe in the supernatural; she believe in reality. You have these insane, weird-ass demons living on your body, and you kill demons, and you don't believe in the supernatural? Okay, that makes no sense.
And then Jack told her that there are beings who messed with genetics and made creatures. Vampires, werewolves, banshees, Gorgon, and harpies etc. exist. And that tired, stupid, overused concept occurred as the character's brain hurt and she said she things the myths weren't real, and she could barely contemplate the idea of vampires running around. Can we please be done with that? Those creatures do not belong in this novel. We had enough to deal with with whatever Maxine and Grant are, and Tracker, and her grandpa and all the other players.
I had no idea what the Labyrinth was, nor Avatars, Wardens, the Divine Organic, or anything about her grandpa and Ahsen. I needed a whole refresher at the beginning because I was lost, and she only writes in bits and pieces, fragmented sentences that don't say a whole lot.
Jack said he was a god once. "Deities, discovering beautiful maids and filling their bellies with children gifted with power. Or men blessed by gods with only a single touch, granted abilities that make them legends." He said humans are like dolls to the gods, and they experimented on them. They used to go in human bodies.
I was so sick of her coming up with Bon Jovi songs for them to sing that fit whatever moment she was in. And handing the boys trash and other items to dispose of. Guns. Plastic food containers. And touching them and them touching her all the time. It's just so weird and I can't take it.
Grant told Father Lawrence that the priest didn't used to have a potty mouth. Lawrence pointed out that Grant is the only grown man who says potty.
Jack had come and teleported Maxine away after she attacked all the men, and they went to a place with this dangerous being. He couldn't transport both of them so he pushed her through by herself and he stayed behind with a creature. Maxine ended up in China, where Grant almost killed Cribari with his music. Father Ross, Grant's friend, had willingly been turned into a monstrous creature and Lawrence killed him because that was the only way to get Grant to leave. And then men were coming and Lawrence led them to a secret exit while he stayed behind. So for the second time someone had sacrifice themselves so Maxine could live. Way to repeat a plot device...
Mr. King dipped pretzels in the blood of people he killed and ate them. That is so disgusting.
It was a nice moment when Grant saw her kill for the first time and said she can't make him run.
Maxine was in the car with Grant and Killy and all of a sudden was transported to another place. She saw what she thought was one of her ancestors being buried by the boys. They took the baby left behind, Maxine knowing they wouldn't have let the mom die with a baby so young. Mr. King came to steal the baby but they left, and brought her to feed, who looked sad. The Avatar had tried to control her line by killing her ancestor early and raising a baby, but the boys had raised her with Tracker's help.
I was resentful that Killy chose to stay with them because I didn't like her. I was sick of all these paranormal beings. She knew things about people, and Mary all of a sudden revealed that she had been in charge of the Lightbringer babies and had failed Grant's mom. Maxine knows that Byron isn't human. Jack and the other gods had killed all the other Lightbringer children because they could change and kill the gods.
Grant asked Jack what if he gave himself up to save the world, and Maxine told him no. Maxine realized she could end this and she asked Jack where Mr. King was and Grant said no. She asked the armor to bring her to him and she ended up going to the past and seeing her mom. I had a problem with Maxine getting to meet her grandma and young mom in the first novel, and I was just as derisive of her getting the opportunity again. It makes it way too easy for the character to get to travel time and get advice and info from people who are dead who they're mourning. It's too easy and it's too perfect that she can do that.
I liked when Grant appeared at the club and asked if she really thought he'd let her walk away like that, looking like she was going to the firing squad.
I was so pissed off with all of them when they decided to let everyone in the club live, all of the abominations who had been changed into creatures. These are the same people who bit her neck, clawed her body, and tried to stab her in the vagina as she walked. She knew they would put people at risk with their violence, but for some reason they decide to let them to. How the hell do you let killers loose, just because they had thought their lives would be better? F that.
She wears cowboy boots and I could not connect them with her character at all.
The writing was confusing for confusing's sake. I wondered if she knew what she was talking about, where she was going with it, or if she was just making it up as she went along. I get really irritated when I read weird, random sentences and phrases and words that don't actually say anything and just create more questions. This is definitely an author who likes to drag things out using the device of secretive side characters who never answer direct questions and give evasive, non-answers and speak in riddles.
I was so sick of Maxine endlessly noting how bad or tired Grant and Jack looked. Rest, rest for Pete's sake. Make it a point to recover from your trials while you can before doing something else. It felt like a million times that Maxine catalogued the many physical traits and facial characteristics that showed how bad off the men were. I was thoroughly sick of it.
After Grant had almost killed Cribari, he kept coughing up blood. So when Lawrence was changed into a werewolf at the club, Grant used his flute again to change him back. Except Grant died. Boy was I getting pissed off then. Jack brought him back to life but Grant was still coughing up blood. A power you can't use unless you'll hurt yourself or die. Splendid. And I was so mad at Maxine for going to the club to kill Mr. King but failing because she couldn't command the inner being, and Lawrence was dragged into it because of her.
I kept waiting for the epilogue. Things had been bad enough, but then Cribari came and took Grant with him. Maxine and Mary pursued him, and found that he was okay. In a terrible sequence in which I felt bad for Cribari--and that shouldn't happen--because Grant sang him into a rock, more bad things happened! Cribari had been crying so the rock and the ground were wet. Everyone was happy and laughing about it, except Maxine who wanted the boys to make his death quick. It was bad all around.
Everyone was standing together afterward and I'm like where is that epilogue? And then they're attacked and Grant gets hurt and she goes through time again. It was like déjà vu, except she really had done this before. over and over she kept having the same things happen and it got really old.
Grant was the only man she had slept with. He's 10 years older than her. I wondered what kind of experience he’s had and bet my ass that she isn’t the only one. Never let it be said an author wasn’t sexist towards her own gender. If a heroine sleeps with more than one man she’s a whore.
They finally killed Mr. King. Maxine did something that caused her to be joined with Grant, because Lightbringers don't stand alone and they have to tie themselves to a human to use their energy.
Jack told her he loved her and she couldn't say it back.
I wanted Grant and Maxine to be alone and for her to have that talk with him that she couldn't a while back, after they had come through another scrape and she wanted to say things but needed time and privacy to do so. Except everyone was there. Jack. Killy. Byron. Mary.