I have to be careful while reviewing this book, because I want to make sure to acknowledge the adaptation for what it is, rather than what I was hoping it would be. After reading "The Secret Garden," there were two main issues that I wanted to see resolved in Cherie Dimanline's adaptation: 1) I didn't want to see uncriticized racism anymore, and 2) I wanted a more satisfying and less ableist storyline for Colin.
Dimaline knocked this first point out of the park, in my opinion. I love her decision to alter the setting from England to Canada, as well as to move Mary's home from India to Toronto. In Dimaline's version, Mary is no longer enticing people with her connection to an exotic country that is often portrayed as less civilized than England. Instead, her character deals with the clash between urban and rural areas within the same general region, which maintains many of the themes of "cultured/civilized" versus "uncultured/uncivilized," without veering into the original novel's Orientalism.
Racism remains a key feature of the story, but it is critically addressed, rather than used as an unexamined embellishment. There is a divide between the white property owners and the Indigenous workers, and characters such as Rebecca who do not treat people of color with respect are villainized for it. Our protagonist Mary is a much better role model and learns to value Sophie, Flora, Jean, and Philomene for who they are, rather than simply the physical labor they can provide. She forms meaningful connections with the Indigenous characters and uses her privilege to stand up for them when she can.
The second point that I was hoping to see addressed—the ableism in the original novel—is a little more complicated. Dimaline changes Colin into Olive and leans heavily into the idea that he/she is not really disabled—at least, not physically. Dimaline implies that Olive has a genuine anxiety disorder, but she introduces a new character—the evil stepmother Rebecca—to poison Olive and cause her lack of physical wellness.
This is certainly one way to adapt "The Secret Garden," and while I think the story stands well on its own (without thinking of it as a remix or an adaptation), I do find it a little disappointing that an entirely new character is added to make sense of the original plot. I was hoping for more exploration of and depth to the preexisting characters rather than sweeping adjustments that change so much.
I do appreciate the characterization that Dimaline adds for recurring characters, such as Mary, Flora/Martha, Colin/Olive, and Dickon/Sophie. I also love how she makes the main trio into three girls, rather than one girl and two boys, and how she doesn't alter their personalities much to do so. Sophie is just as outdoorsy and whimsical as her counterpart Dickon, for instance, and Dimaline explores the ramifications this has for her, in terms of being gender non-conforming in the year 1901.
I do feel the loss of the characters' brattiness, however. In "The Secret Garden," Mary and Colin are both around 10 years old, and I enjoyed their characterization as spoiled and condescending kids, gradually morphing into kinder and more understanding individuals. Perhaps because Dimaline ages up the main cast to be 15 years old, I found them to be more conventionally likeable—and thus a little more bland.
Even when Mary is "mean" at the beginning and shows her temper, I didn't think of her as a brat. (It's hard to think of a 15 year old as a brat, I suppose.) Even her inner monologue shows that she isn't dedicated to her meanness, and her neighbors dislike her largely because of her parents. In other words, Dimaline's version of Mary is harder to find fault with. She doesn't seem to be malicious, even for a split-second, and while this certainly makes her a kinder person, it makes her less interesting to me.
I also have complicated feelings about aging up the main characters, because it paves the way for romance in Dimaline's adaptation. Don't get me wrong, I think that the romance between Mary and Sophie is cute, and I support them. But part of what I enjoyed about the original novel is that there was no romance to speak of—which is fairly common in stories with younger protagonists.
As I said before, "Into the Bright Open" stands very well as a story in its own right, and it's refreshing to see sapphic characters, especially when they're the protagonists in a reimagined classic. But aging up the main trio leads to new plot points that distract from "fixing" what I disliked about the original novel. (Mary has a suitor subplot and discovers her romantic feelings for Sophie, while also setting up Flora with her love interest.) I recognize that it isn't Dimaline's job to "fix" the novel according to my specifications, and I appreciate the story that she put together. But I can't get 100% on board with some of her additions because of how I felt reading the "The Secret Garden." This is my problem, not hers.
Still, I appreciate that Mary's relationship with Olive is given the same amount of importance as her relationship with Sophie. Although "Into the Bright Open" features more romance than "The Secret Garden," it isn't as amatonormative as it could be, and for that, I'm immensely grateful. Yet I feel as though something familial was lost from one book to another, and I think it centers around Mr. Craven, whom I liked much better in "The Secret Garden" than in "Into the Bright Open."
For one thing, we get to see more of Mr. Craven in the original book, and although his interactions with Mary are minimal, they are impactful and endear him to the audience. Dimaline does away with the subplot that Mr. Craven has a slightly hunched back, which I do not miss. (Due in part to my lack of knowledge about kyphosis, I felt wary of how the original novel might have misrepresented and dramatized the condition.)
When Mr. Craven returns at the end of "Into the Bright Open," it didn't have the same emotional impact that the same scene in "The Secret Garden" did. I really enjoyed that sequence in the original novel, switching to Mr. Craven's perspective and tracing his return home. He was a much less influential character in "Into the Bright Open," and I started to think that Dimaline was making a statement about the female characters needing to save themselves, which I appreciated. But in the end, Mr. Craven does return home and resolve most things, which felt anticlimactic and a little rushed.
What's more, I understand Mr. Craven less in "Into the Bright Open" than I do in "The Secret Garden." I never approve of his decision to neglect Colin/Olive and barely spend any time at home, but it makes more sense to me in the original novel, where his wife's death connects directly with Colin's birth. If I'm reading between the lines correctly, in "The Secret Garden," Mrs. Craven falls out of a tree while heavily pregnant, which induces labor, and she dies sometime after or during childbirth. This allows me to sympathize with Mr. Craven, because it must be hard to embrace a child that seems to "replace" their mother, in a sense. (Yes, I am thinking of Crookedstar, Willowbreeze, and Silverstream when I say this.)
Mr. Craven's situation is different in "Into the Bright Open" and involves remarrying (introducing an evil stepmother into the mix), which I don't quite understand. Was it just that we needed someone with motive to poison Olive? We already had the doctor from the original novel as a suitable suitable (who is, aptly, Rebecca's brother in this version of events). I can't imagine the relationship between Mr. Craven and his new wife, and I wish that Dimaline had explored it a little further, so I could. Maybe Rebecca wants to poison Olive to force Mr. Craven to return home more often, so Rebecca can endear herself to him? Maybe she resents Olive for being another woman's child and wants to replace her with a daughter of her own? Maybe there's more than a little racism at play here?
All in all, "Into the Bright Open" is a good story, and I think it "improves" on "The Secret Garden" in many ways. It's just not my cup of tea, and my hangups about the changes that were made are stronger because of how fresh the original novel is in my mind. (I read both "The Secret Garden" and "Into the Bright Open" in the span of two weeks.) Regardless, I appreciate that this remix exists, even though nothing in it was so spectacular that it blew me away. I would recommend this book to those with complicated feelings about "The Secret Garden," as well as those who have no idea what the original novel is about. "Into the Bright Open" stands well on its own and is a fairly solid YA novel.