Pretty high three stars. This book is where things start to get a little shaky, if you ask me.
For the most part, I think this book was pretty strong and stayed consistent with the previous ones. The pacing was pretty good, every character had at least something interesting in their chapters, and the story finally got somewhere impactful at the end. The writing felt a bit worse than the previous two books, but that could be because I’m now solidly into the arc and it doesn’t feel as fresh.
My biggest plot gripe is that not too much happens in the book beyond building more tension (which, to be fair, I think is done much better in this arc than in almost every previous Warriors arc). RiverClan’s situation hasn’t really changed all book, though thankfully Frostpaw herself goes through interesting developments to keep her chapters engaging. In addition, Sunbeam and Nightheart kind of worry about and experience the same things, and it got pretty repetitive. Also, Sunbeam got scarily close to just being a pair of eyes a few times. But that’s more of a character issue, which I think is where most of my problems are with the book. I don’t really mind the slower pacing that much, though I do see it being a turnoff for some readers.
Ok. Let’s talk characters then.
I LOVED what this book did with Frostpaw. I already mentioned in previous reviews that I’m a bit sick of medicine cats, but when Frostpaw became a warrior apprentice I really didn’t expect it to stick for long. I felt like that plot had been done and that I knew what to expect. But I’m starting to think the Erins might have committed to it, at least for a few books, and that makes me really excited. It’s been so long since we’ve had a regular Warrior who can contact StarClan (literally not since Firestar in arc 1). In addition, seeing a new side of Frostpaw’s personality, and finally getting some confidence from her, is a good change from the last two books. Her scenes were very refreshing, and I’m definitely curious about where she will go next, especially with the ending. (Although I do find it funny that this is the second arc in a row where our medicine cat character gets brutally attacked and possibly killed at the end of the third book. If I had a nickel for every time that happened, I’d have two nickels, which isn’t a lot, but it’s weird that it happened twice:)
Ok. I’ll do Nightheart next. He’s pretty good for the whole book. I like that he doesn’t immediately get with Sunbeam just because he showed up in ShadowClan, and I enjoyed the trial scenes with him. His resourcefulness was fun to read about, and I think highlighting the differences between clans was a good choice. That being said, I’m a bit disappointed that he went back to ThunderClan. I was really looking forward to taking a break from that mess and not dealing with the ‘best clan’ any longer. I also think it makes his leaving scene last book way less powerful. It just doesn’t feel right that he goes back after getting used to ShadowClan. Also, the way he acted towards Sunbeam at the end rubbed me the wrong way. We spent the whole book watching him get closer to her and make up for springing the whole ‘mate’ idea on her, only for him to basically abandon her for a bunch of cats that he couldn’t fit in with for two books. It just felt like a poor writing decision.
Sunbeam was also pretty good for most of the book. There were a few chapters where she just felt like a pair of eyes, which drove me crazy, but other than that she stayed solid. I’m definitely worried about her next book, though. Bring back the sass, please! Don’t let her lose her personality!
We still don’t really know who the villain is (unless you read the description of the next books. . . Or have common sense). It’s Splashtail, if you didn’t guess by the end of this book. I’m very disappointed by that, since I’m sick of blandly motivated antatagonists AND male antagonists. Can we please have a female villain? Or at least a cat with more motivation than power?
Oh well. Maybe next book I’ll grow to like him.
This book fell off a bit in some places, but was overall pretty strong. I’m interested, and a bit nervous, to read the next one.