(mmm wrote more about this than I intended to so you get SUBHEADINGS for readability lol)
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so my partner and I had brunch with her friend who now works at a small independent bookstore, and she, a janelle monáe fan, mentioned that she read this book without realizing it was speculative fiction (not sure how but I support her) and didn't really enjoy it but chalked it up to her not really being a sci-fi fan. she figured fans of the genre would probably enjoy it and that it was a simple case of genre/reader mismatch.
having now read it, I am here to report that...folks, I just don't think this is very good!! I would love to know more about the co-writing process (but don't care enough to actually do any research) because a number of the authors with whom monáe collaborated have written things that I found much better than this collection.
ON NARRATION
monáe is also, as others have noted, not a very good audiobook narrator (they read the first two stories, and bahni turpin reads the rest), both in terms of tone and in other ways that are frankly bizarre. did no one listen to their audio before going 'okay, yeah, time to put this shit out there'?? it's to the point where it seems like whoever should have been in charge of that vetting process is almost being cruel to monáe for the shit they let get through, like, I know minor mispronunciations here and there are to be expected in audiobooks, but monáe mispronounces the word 'stomach,' saying it with a tch rather than a k at the end, and I was staggered. again, not with monáe, but more with the people who like...let them down by letting those things slip through the cracks. it's okay to not know how to pronounce the word stomach blah blah blah who cares but when you are narrating a book you ostensibly wrote? SOMEBODY LET YOU DOWN. oof. there are other instances, but that was the first one that really shocked me.
ON THEMES
thematically and in terms of its promise and potential, this is great; it has lovely things going on with race and gender and sexuality and dismantling oppressive systems. all but one of the stories are focused on Black queer women and nonbinary people, and I also appreciated one of the work's repeated arguments that the overlap between women and nonbinary people is real and, at the risk of using a word that's been run into the ground, valid; one character talks about their experiences as a 'gender-fucked woman' in ways that rang true not only generally but for me personally (and, I suspect, for monáe).
YEAH BUT
it's just...everything else that's the problem. the writing, the storytelling, the plotting, the pacing, the world, the decisions made, all of it feels flat, muted, hollow, and pedestrian. someone with bigger ideas than the skills specifically as an author (distinct from writers of other texts, like, you know, songs—monáe is a great songwriter!) to do justice by them.
there's also this weird issue where sometimes I would have to double-check to see if I was on the same story still because a couple of them had like, distinct discrete parts to them in ways that didn't gel with my readerly expectations. like, the third story, "nevermind," feels like it has a part one that follows jane 57821 and then a part two that follows neer, the character whose reflections on gender I vibed with so much. (for the record, the best story in the collection is this second half of "nevermind." just the second half, though.)
ON WORLDBUILDING
I also don't really buy all of these stories as existing in the same world. perhaps that's because there's so much of the worldbuilding we're not given or that's just sort of handwaved, but even though the latter three stories, "timebox," "save changes," and "timebox altar(ed)," all exist in obviously repressive societies, they don't seem like the same repressive society as the one set up in the first three stories, "breaking dawn," "the memory librarian," and "nevermind"! tbh!!
TO WRAP UP
the optimistic sweetness of the last story—again, more up to theme than like, storytelling etc etc—had me ready to feel comfortable bumping up 2.5 stars to 3, but I think in writing out my issues with this I'm back to bumping down to 2.
I'm sorry, janelle monáe! I like your music!! I think this is a great concept in theory! I think a number of people involved in this process did you a disservice in allowing this both as a book and as an audiobook to be ushered out the door like this!